1. Collab Hard (3.04 stars, 193 notes)
2. Easy (1.06 stars, 70 notes)
3. Insane (4.39 stars, 336 notes)
4. Jumping! (5.86 stars, 398 notes)
5. Normal (1.99 stars, 150 notes)
6. Yasai's Extra (5.25 stars, 395 notes)

Weriko wrote:

hey :p

Mod from queue :p

Jumping!

00:02:177 () - I think you should start mapping from here

00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think that if you ctrl + j this it will be better

00:07:277 () - Maybe a 1/2 slider starting here fits better

00:17:327 (1,2,3,1) - either stack this or move it a bit

00:43:427 (3,5) - weird overlap

01:10:277 (1,1) - same as above

01:18:677 (5,6,1) - check this distance

01:22:277 (5,1) - overlap

Insane

00:17:327 (1,2,3,1) - stack or move a bit

00:25:877 (5,6,1) - maybe you should move the circle so it connects both sliders

00:44:102 (6) - same as above

00:58:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - distances change too much

and there were some overlaps... but im not sure about them :p

normal

00:21:977 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you used a 1/2 rhythm but then you only used 1/1, so i would like you to keep that 1/2 rhythm or make everything 1/1

I think thats all for now

hope this helps!

Good luck :p!!!

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

Passing by, giving a ultra small mod ;3;

Jumping! ;3;

Overall I don't like triple overlaps.. ;_; but it's okay This map is nicely done thou!
00:06:377 (1,2,3,4) - hitsounds too loud. consider lowering it a bit
00:44:102 (6) - It doesn't seems to be needed.
01:29:627 - Sudden kiai?! xD

insane ;3;

4.44 stars... is this planned? xD i have no idea lol
00:02:177 - I suggest putting a spinner here.
(Personal thought) 01:17:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd like a jump part here.
01:29:627- Same as jumping.
(a question) 01:30:527 - What is this timing doing here?

Collabz Hard ;3;

00:44:027 (6) - Too short. (I mean, make it longer so it's better sync with the song) (or maybe it's just the hitsounds)
(I could guess the following is your partners part ;3;)
00:51:827 (2) - , 00:53:027 (2) - - Placing in red tick isn't a problem, the problem is it doesn't sync with the song. Place it on white!
(or maybe you can say it's synced, idk)
00:56:627 (2,) - , 00:57:827 (2) - Same as above, although I think it's not as worse as above.
01:01:427 (2) - could be replaced by 2 short sliders.
01:05:177 (3,4) - make both of it 1 tick shorter.
01:11:027 (2) - , 01:12:227 (4) - , 01:14:627 (4) - , 01:15:827 (2) - , 01:17:027 (2) - there it is, the same problems again ;_;
01:18:377 (3,4,5,6) - Make it a straight line, it looks pretty hard for a hard diff xD
01:18:977 (1) - Could be 1 tick earlier. (On the blue tick)
01:21:227 (1) - , 01:21:527 (2) - Again, 1 tick shorter. I think it's better :3
01:23:777 (3) - Not actually needed. (I think, make your choise)
01:25:577 (3) - (Personal Thought again) The only first time I would like the slider on the red tick.
01:29:702 - 0.1 Second kiai xD

Anyway, clearing up, the map looks quite good (and clean (?)). Especially the jumping diff... or maybe it's just be liking hard maps, whatever.
Good luck!

Kawaii_Mirella wrote:

does u need GD?

1. 00:18:677 (2) - I would place this note on the red tick, and not on this tick, because there is no real beat on the white tick o/
2. 00:21:377 (4) - Place this slider on the previous red tick, as it could flow easier than the beat you did
3. 00:42:827 (3) - Place the red anchor at the mid of the slider, as it could be more beautiful to see :3
4. 00:51:377 (1) - Same here
5. 00:56:177 (1) - Move the red anchor a bit on the low part of this slider
6. 01:04:727 (1) - Here, I would to recommand you to move the note elsewhere, because the stacking here is not very nice.
7. 01:16:577 (3) - Please put the end of the reverse else where, because it's still on the slider itself, and it kinda "cut" the flow of this part.
8. 01:18:977 (1) - This spinner doesn't deserve to be here, there is no reason to place a spinner here.
9. 01:25:577 (2) - Place this slider on the red tick, and not on the white as you did, since this part is an 1/2 rhythm.

1. 00:05:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should rework a bit the shape of this stream since it's kinda strange for an Insane diff.
2. 00:14:627 (6) - Please, place the red anchor elsewhere, because it's quite strange if you keep it like that, plus there is no reason to put the red anchor on the very starting part of the slider! >w<
3. 00:17:777 (1) - Move this slider elsewhere, because if the player fail his combo, he will have a shitmiss here because of this slider.
4. 00:45:227 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, this part is not very good, since those sliders doesn't stacks very well themselves. I mean, there is no blanket shape, and it's like they are cutting themselves, so try to change the shape of the third slider, I think it can be cooler
5. 00:59:627 (1,3) - The slider cross is pretty bad here, you should change it to doesn't leap on the starting button of the third slider.
6. 01:23:327 (4) - This slider is not on the center of this slider → 01:23:627 (5) - , you should replace it a bit.
7. 01:27:452 (1) - Please end this spinner here, and then, place notes here → 01:28:877 - as it could follow the rhythm.

Pachiru wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:18:677 (2) - I would place this note on the red tick, and not on this tick, because there is no real beat on the white tick o/
2. 00:21:377 (4) - Place this slider on the previous red tick, as it could flow easier than the beat you did
3. 00:42:827 (3) - Place the red anchor at the mid of the slider, as it could be more beautiful to see :3
4. 00:51:377 (1) - Same here
5. 00:56:177 (1) - Move the red anchor a bit on the low part of this slider
6. 01:04:727 (1) - Here, I would to recommand you to move the note elsewhere, because the stacking here is not very nice.
7. 01:16:577 (3) - Please put the end of the reverse else where, because it's still on the slider itself, and it kinda "cut" the flow of this part.
8. 01:18:977 (1) - This spinner doesn't deserve to be here, there is no reason to place a spinner here.
9. 01:25:577 (2) - Place this slider on the red tick, and not on the white as you did, since this part is an 1/2 rhythm.

[Insane]

1. 00:05:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should rework a bit the shape of this stream since it's kinda strange for an Insane diff.
2. 00:14:627 (6) - Please, place the red anchor elsewhere, because it's quite strange if you keep it like that, plus there is no reason to put the red anchor on the very starting part of the slider! >w<
3. 00:17:777 (1) - Move this slider elsewhere, because if the player fail his combo, he will have a shitmiss here because of this slider.
4. 00:45:227 (1,2,3) - In my opinion, this part is not very good, since those sliders doesn't stacks very well themselves. I mean, there is no blanket shape, and it's like they are cutting themselves, so try to change the shape of the third slider, I think it can be cooler
5. 00:59:627 (1,3) - The slider cross is pretty bad here, you should change it to doesn't leap on the starting button of the third slider.
6. 01:23:327 (4) - This slider is not on the center of this slider → 01:23:627 (5) - , you should replace it a bit.
7. 01:27:452 (1) - Please end this spinner here, and then, place notes here → 01:28:877 - as it could follow the rhythm.

That's all for me, since I can't mod this 5.9*, I don't want to say anything wrong, so I prefer to let other player doing this !
Hope it will help you !
Good luck for rank !

1. I think this needs a 5.0* diff, the gap from Insane (4.4) to Jumping (5.9) is really big and the patterns get way trickier, so a 5.0* diff would even it out more
2. The black combo color is not recommended for any map because lots of players play with background dim 100% and then you can't see the approach circle because it blends in. It also looks weird with the other colors

1. I mentioned this a bit later in the mod, but the small DS makes the 3/2 overlaps look weird in comparison to the rest. Try to make the DS bigger for that
2. 00:09:377 (2,3) - This angle looks really sharp to play tbh for beginners
3. 00:18:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this patterns makes the player click less important beats. Say for example 00:22:577 - is a strong vocal yet it isn't clickable. I usually don't like doing this, but I recommend doing something like this to make the vocals clickable (00:25:577 (3,4) - I just noticed I didn't want to change this in the suggestion picture, leave this)
4. 00:27:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't see a reason why this suddenly has 3/2 gaps instead of the usual 2/1. Besides, the overlaps don't look too good. You could make 3/2 repeaters at some point but this seems weird and unconsistent
5. 00:36:377 (1,1) - I had this in my previous map where somebody suggested to remove one NC because it could get confusing for beginners, I also would recommend doing that here
6. 00:37:577 (2,3,4) - Again, why are these sliders on not so strong vocals? The stronger vocals on the big white tick are what should be clickable, so why are they on slider tails?
7. 01:00:377 (1,2) - 01:09:977 (1,2) - I would ctrl + g the rhythm here to make the vocals be clicked correctly
8. 01:06:977 (2,3,4) - This could get really confusing for new players because of the stack and 3/2 gap, I recommend doing a different pattern here
9. 01:24:977 (1,2) - Again, this angle looks really sharp for beginners to play

1. 00:10:577 (1,2,3) - I don't see why this is with a 1/2 hitcircle and 00:08:177 (1,2) - not
2. 00:11:777 (4,5) - What about two 1/1 sliders instead? That makes the sounds in the background clickable
3. 00:16:277 (2,3) - This stack could get confusing for a newer player because there wasn't a stack before and thus he doesn't know when to click here
4. 00:20:777 (2,3,4) - If you want to use 1/2, this could be the spot to do this at because the vocals suggest it
5. 00:26:177 (3,4) - Same here, this also feels like the vocal here 00:26:777 (4) - should be clickable
6. 00:27:977 (2,3) - See, you did a 1/2 here but not in the previous ones, why?
7. 00:30:227 (2,3) - I usually wouldn't complain, but what about blanketting these?
8. 00:43:427 (4) - You could move this to the next red tick because the vocals are there and this right now feels like it's ignoring the vocals
9. 00:50:777 (3,1) - This isn't a big problem cause they are both sliders, but since your previous stacks were all 1/2, a player could think this is a 1/2 stack by the looks of it
10. 00:52:877 (4,5) - This is a real challenge for new players because they haven't had 3 1/2 in a row, try using a 1/2 slider like before
11. 00:55:877 (4,5) - ^
12. 01:09:977 (5,1) - And like above, the stack could be misread
13. 01:15:077 (4,5) - The 3 1/2s in a row again, even if this was intentional, this is a rather unfitting diff spike because there are more intense parts that could deserve this more
14. 01:27:527 (1,1) - Why are these vocals not mapped? If the spinner recovery is the reason, I recommend that you turn the spinner into a slider because these vocals are really strong

_DT3 wrote:

Ookay, here for M4M
You asked me to mod Insane and Jumping, but I'll mod the easier diffs cause those need modding imo
I am sorry btw if I don't reason correctly, I am a bit tired >.<

[General]

1. I think this needs a 5.0* diff, the gap from Insane (4.4) to Jumping (5.9) is really big and the patterns get way trickier, so a 5.0* diff would even it out more
2. The black combo color is not recommended for any map because lots of players play with background dim 100% and then you can't see the approach circle because it blends in. It also looks weird with the other colors

[Easy]

1. I mentioned this a bit later in the mod, but the small DS makes the 3/2 overlaps look weird in comparison to the rest. Try to make the DS bigger for that
2. 00:09:377 (2,3) - This angle looks really sharp to play tbh for beginners
3. 00:18:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this patterns makes the player click less important beats. Say for example 00:22:577 - is a strong vocal yet it isn't clickable. I usually don't like doing this, but I recommend doing something like this to make the vocals clickable (00:25:577 (3,4) - I just noticed I didn't want to change this in the suggestion picture, leave this)
4. 00:27:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't see a reason why this suddenly has 3/2 gaps instead of the usual 2/1. Besides, the overlaps don't look too good. You could make 3/2 repeaters at some point but this seems weird and unconsistent
5. 00:36:377 (1,1) - I had this in my previous map where somebody suggested to remove one NC because it could get confusing for beginners, I also would recommend doing that here
6. 00:37:577 (2,3,4) - Again, why are these sliders on not so strong vocals? The stronger vocals on the big white tick are what should be clickable, so why are they on slider tails?
7. 01:00:377 (1,2) - 01:09:977 (1,2) - I would ctrl + g the rhythm here to make the vocals be clicked correctly
8. 01:06:977 (2,3,4) - This could get really confusing for new players because of the stack and 3/2 gap, I recommend doing a different pattern here
9. 01:24:977 (1,2) - Again, this angle looks really sharp for beginners to play

[Normal]

1. 00:10:577 (1,2,3) - I don't see why this is with a 1/2 hitcircle and 00:08:177 (1,2) - not
2. 00:11:777 (4,5) - What about two 1/1 sliders instead? That makes the sounds in the background clickable
3. 00:16:277 (2,3) - This stack could get confusing for a newer player because there wasn't a stack before and thus he doesn't know when to click here
4. 00:20:777 (2,3,4) - If you want to use 1/2, this could be the spot to do this at because the vocals suggest it
5. 00:26:177 (3,4) - Same here, this also feels like the vocal here 00:26:777 (4) - should be clickable
6. 00:27:977 (2,3) - See, you did a 1/2 here but not in the previous ones, why?
7. 00:30:227 (2,3) - I usually wouldn't complain, but what about blanketting these?
8. 00:43:427 (4) - You could move this to the next red tick because the vocals are there and this right now feels like it's ignoring the vocals
9. 00:50:777 (3,1) - This isn't a big problem cause they are both sliders, but since your previous stacks were all 1/2, a player could think this is a 1/2 stack by the looks of it
10. 00:52:877 (4,5) - This is a real challenge for new players because they haven't had 3 1/2 in a row, try using a 1/2 slider like before
11. 00:55:877 (4,5) - ^
12. 01:09:977 (5,1) - And like above, the stack could be misread
13. 01:15:077 (4,5) - The 3 1/2s in a row again, even if this was intentional, this is a rather unfitting diff spike because there are more intense parts that could deserve this more
14. 01:27:527 (1,1) - Why are these vocals not mapped? If the spinner recovery is the reason, I recommend that you turn the spinner into a slider because these vocals are really strong

Since you asked me to only mod two diffs for M4M, here they are, feel free to call me back for more after you modded my map
I hope this mod was helpful and didn't look like it was rude >.<
GL!

Term Akatski wrote:

your mod is here:


delete mapset

Term Akatski wrote:

Eshit
00:41:777 (1) - curve this des
00:46:577 (1,2,3) - yes http://puu.sh/rhA6k/76e4f81c42.png

Nomal
00:03:377 (1) - y not blanket 2 with 1??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????//that'd make em blanket each other
00:17:777 (1) - sliders are not ninjas http://puu.sh/rhApz/d0d91c6697.png
00:58:577 (1) - add finish at the start(it lacks impact)
01:10:577 (1) - ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? http://puu.sh/rhAEt/e4533635e6.png


corabbu(eww) Hard(yes)
01:10:277 (4) - ????????????????not too sure bout this one tho, might confuse players
i does not know how to mod and map hard )

insen
fuck you

jamping
fuck you

i know

Yasaija 714 wrote:

Hi~

finished GD request

SD 5.27

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1. 00:36:977 (6) - NC tapos remove NC mo yung 00:39:977 (1) -
2. 00:46:577 (1,2) - try mo ganitong pattern, wala naman kasi instru dun sa reverse mo sa 00:47:177 - http://puu.sh/rmUUA/ba5251ea0a.jpg
3. 00:57:377 (2) - touching HP bar (nagagalit yung BN dito) try mo nalang yung ganito https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174531
4. 01:02:177 (3) - this isn't should start on 01:02:027 - since you since that 01:04:427 (5) - started on red ticks based on vocals?

1. I suggest to use more 1/2 and some circles (like you can convert two circles for this 00:20:777 (2) - 00:21:977 (4) - )
2. 00:11:777 (4) - convert to two 1/1 slider please you skipped too much beats lul
3. 00:14:177 (3,4) - try mo ganitong pattern tutal normal na din to eh http://puu.sh/rmVeL/85642bd816.jpg
4. 00:16:427 (3,1) - still rankable but not a good idea, try to unstack them tbh
5. 00:40:877 (4,5) - ^ 1/1 stack is no-no iguess
6. 00:50:777 (3,1) - 01:09:977 (5,1) - ^

1. 00:09:827 (3,4) - リバースに違和感、00:09:377 (1) - からの音取りを考えると多分こっちの方がいいかも http://puu.sh/rmVz0/413e9c8ea4.jpg
2. 00:11:552 (6,8) - Overmap,鳴ってません（鳴ってても取る事は必要ないと思う）
3. 00:24:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 本当に1/4でいいの？00:25:052 (2,4,2,4) - になにも聞こえないのだが...
4. 00:35:327 (3) - 見た目としてアウト。00:34:577 (1,2) - 少し直せばいいんじゃね？あと00:35:327 (3) - を無理やり曲げなくてもこういうトリック可能だよ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174629
5. 00:41:177 (3,4,5,6) - Overmap. Testplayで無理やり連打されてると思いました
6. 00:50:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 特にここは弱いパートなのでかなり違和感があります
7. 01:00:377 (1,2,3,4) - しっぽにWhistle外してください。なにも鳴ってないのでうるさく見えます
8. 01:10:052 (4,2,4) - Overmap
9. 01:19:577 (5,6,7,8) - これもさっきのようにしっぽのWhistle外してください
10. 01:21:227 (1,2,3) - これはExtraとして違和感があります。あと01:21:902 - Tripleやる必要ないと思いますのでこういうのどう？ http://puu.sh/rmWiB/97b518e8b9.jpg
11. 01:26:777 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - うるさい ( 01:26:852 (4,6,8,10) - に25% playback rateやっても何も鳴ってませんので外したほうがいいと思いませ)

1. 00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - overmap tbh, paki nerf nalang. Wala akong naririnig sa blue ticks
2. 00:12:677 (5) - try move to 315|318 for emphasis
3. 00:16:427 (6) - pwede mo pa itaas to tutal may finish naman
4. 00:55:877 (3,4) - overdone, ilapit mo tong dalawa tapos 00:56:177 (1) - nalang paliparin mo para may sense sa kanta. Try mo CTRL + G ung 00:56:177 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174754
5. 01:10:277 - reduce volume? Ingay nung clap lmao
6. 01:17:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmap dess no need to stream tbh (jumps are 101x better on this part)

Akitoshi wrote:

Easy

1. 00:36:977 (6) - NC tapos remove NC mo yung 00:39:977 (1) -
2. 00:46:577 (1,2) - try mo ganitong pattern, wala naman kasi instru dun sa reverse mo sa 00:47:177 - http://puu.sh/rmUUA/ba5251ea0a.jpg
3. 00:57:377 (2) - touching HP bar (nagagalit yung BN dito) try mo nalang yung ganito https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174531
4. 01:02:177 (3) - this isn't should start on 01:02:027 - since you since that 01:04:427 (5) - started on red ticks based on vocals?

Normal

1. I suggest to use more 1/2 and some circles (like you can convert two circles for this 00:20:777 (2) - 00:21:977 (4) - )
2. 00:11:777 (4) - convert to two 1/1 slider please you skipped too much beats lul
3. 00:14:177 (3,4) - try mo ganitong pattern tutal normal na din to eh http://puu.sh/rmVeL/85642bd816.jpg
4. 00:16:427 (3,1) - still rankable but not a good idea, try to unstack them tbh
5. 00:40:877 (4,5) - ^ 1/1 stack is no-no iguess
6. 00:50:777 (3,1) - 01:09:977 (5,1) - ^

Jumping!

1. 00:05:177 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - overmap tbh, paki nerf nalang. Wala akong naririnig sa blue ticks
2. 00:12:677 (5) - try move to 315|318 for emphasis
3. 00:16:427 (6) - pwede mo pa itaas to tutal may finish naman
4. 00:55:877 (3,4) - overdone, ilapit mo tong dalawa tapos 00:56:177 (1) - nalang paliparin mo para may sense sa kanta. Try mo CTRL + G ung 00:56:177 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174754
5. 01:10:277 - reduce volume? Ingay nung clap lmao
6. 01:17:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overmap dess no need to stream tbh (jumps are 101x better on this part)

welp goodluck o7

Akitoshi wrote:

Yasai's X

1. 00:09:827 (3,4) - リバースに違和感、00:09:377 (1) - からの音取りを考えると多分こっちの方がいいかも http://puu.sh/rmVz0/413e9c8ea4.jpg
2. 00:11:552 (6,8) - Overmap,鳴ってません（鳴ってても取る事は必要ないと思う）
3. 00:24:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 本当に1/4でいいの？00:25:052 (2,4,2,4) - になにも聞こえないのだが...
4. 00:35:327 (3) - 見た目としてアウト。00:34:577 (1,2) - 少し直せばいいんじゃね？あと00:35:327 (3) - を無理やり曲げなくてもこういうトリック可能だよ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6174629
5. 00:41:177 (3,4,5,6) - Overmap. Testplayで無理やり連打されてると思いました
6. 00:50:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ 特にここは弱いパートなのでかなり違和感があります
7. 01:00:377 (1,2,3,4) - しっぽにWhistle外してください。なにも鳴ってないのでうるさく見えます
8. 01:10:052 (4,2,4) - Overmap
9. 01:19:577 (5,6,7,8) - これもさっきのようにしっぽのWhistle外してください
10. 01:21:227 (1,2,3) - これはExtraとして違和感があります。あと01:21:902 - Tripleやる必要ないと思いますのでこういうのどう？ ここの音変えると配置がしづらいので変えませんhttp://puu.sh/rmWiB/97b518e8b9.jpg
11. 01:26:777 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - うるさい ( 01:26:852 (4,6,8,10) - に25% playback rateやっても何も鳴ってませんので外したほうがいいと思いませ)

welp goodluck o7

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KuroNeko1509 wrote:

Hai hai o/ NM from the queue.
Nice mapset GL ranking!


[Jumping!]

1. 00:16:502 (1) - I suggest removing this spinner because its just too short, you dont need to necessarily map like every single second. keeping this part blank or replacing it with a slider would be much better.
   
   
2. 01:18:077 (3,2,3,4) - I feel like this looks a bit too messy, so fix this maybe
   
   
3. 00:55:577 (1,2,3,4) - I think this jump is not as good as it could be,.. I would suggest to make jump from 1 to 2 under a certain angle because right now its just straight line. Making jumps under angle will increase playability and also will look better in terms of aesthetics & wont harm the flow at all, so make them like under a certain angle lol
   
   
4. 00:56:177 (1) - I think the end of this slider covers a pretty large sound, so wouldn't it be better to make it clickable?
   
   
5. 01:29:477 (1,2) - So i think these 2 notes all by themselves feel a little awkward.., I think to reduce the awkwardness you could end spinner over here 01:28:577 - and do s-c-s until these 2 notes. http://puu.sh/rqaPL/2e2fa9c340.jpg But idk, its up to you~ lol spinner is fine as well