20:22 -Tatsuo: hey ^^
20:23 *-Tatsuo is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1038055 Yuki Hayashi - Chimu no Jiriki [Easy]]
20:23 -Tatsuo: on that maü
20:23 -Tatsuo: map*
20:23 -Tatsuo: the sliders starting here 01:18:610 (1) - are boring to play
20:25 -Tatsuo: 02:16:832 (2) - after that slider you could place a note
20:25 Noya: ok
20:27 -Tatsuo: btw u should start using this slider
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621430720:27 -Tatsuo: because it looks like u were running out of slider ideas (not trying to be rude)
20:27 -Tatsuo: xD
20:28 Noya: yeah i was lol x)
20:29 -Tatsuo: 00:48:387 (6) - yeah and the last thing is, after that circle is a pretty long break, if u want to keep it please make the second circle more spaced
20:32 -Tatsuo: on normal:
20:32 -Tatsuo: 00:14:610 (1) - and 00:16:387 (2) - should be 1 white tick longer
20:32 -Tatsuo: fits better the timing
20:33 -Tatsuo: 00:22:165 (2) - after that slider I'd place a note because the break between the 2 sliders is pretty long and they are not really spaced
20:34 -Tatsuo: 00:44:832 (3) - oh, you already used them, im sorry xD
20:36 -Tatsuo: 01:04:387 (1) - in this part are only sliders, maybe put a few circle between them?
20:37 Noya: sure
20:37 -Tatsuo: 01:55:943 (4) - think after that slider a circle would be good
20:37 -Tatsuo: i think*
20:38 -Tatsuo: 02:01:276 (4) - urm, and why is here a break?
20:38 Noya: i mapped that diff first and still need to make the breaks the same through all the diffs
20:38 -Tatsuo: oh okay
20:39 -Tatsuo:
http://prntscr.com/coa0nz you should use bookmarks
20:39 -Tatsuo: to not get confused
20:39 -Tatsuo: 02:03:054 (3) - and you shouldn't lower the slider velocity out of nothing
20:40 -Tatsuo: 02:07:499 (2) - again that random break
20:40 -Tatsuo: 02:13:276 (1) - after that spinner the break is also too long
20:40 -Tatsuo: (and the spinner is unfitting xd)
20:41 -Tatsuo: okay, im afk now. when i come back i'll mod "hard" ^^
20:43 Noya: no rush
20:51 -Tatsuo: hii ^^
20:53 -Tatsuo: 00:21:721 (1) - after that slider I'd place a note or make the spacing bigger
20:54 -Tatsuo: 00:35:054 (1) - not sure if that pattern is readable for a player that plays 2* maps for a challenge
20:55 -Tatsuo: I'd place it like that
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621453120:56 -Tatsuo: 00:42:165 (1) - here maybe like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/621454220:57 -Tatsuo: 00:49:943 (4) - that break is very weird, also the slider kinda kills the flow
20:58 -Tatsuo: 00:55:499 (1) - maybe place a note after the spinner?
20:59 -Tatsuo: the circles after that slider should DEFINETLY be more spaced, this is so misleading
20:59 Noya: alright
21:00 -Tatsuo: 01:13:276 (1) - after that one it's okay, but after these jumps it's pretty hard
21:00 -Tatsuo: just the first one
21:00 Noya: i see
21:01 -Tatsuo: 01:23:943 (1) - the circle after that slider looks somehow ugly xD it touches the slider
21:01 -Tatsuo: 01:39:943 (1) - these pattern are very cool
21:03 -Tatsuo: 02:00:165 (7,8) - i think these 2 circles shouldn't be stacked
21:03 -Tatsuo: 02:02:165 (3,4) - the spacing is too big between those 2 sliders
21:04 -Tatsuo: they should at least touch (dunno how to say it in english)
21:04 -Tatsuo: 02:03:721 (5) - yep, the spacing should be like this
21:05 -Tatsuo: 02:07:943 (5) - i think after that slider a circle would be good because of that little break
21:06 Noya: alright
21:07 -Tatsuo: 02:09:721 (2,3) - not sure if this should be stacked, maybe a bit spacing would be good (but not too big)
21:08 -Tatsuo: 02:10:832 (4) - this circle should be on the white tick and after that one a few end jumps would be a good ending
21:09 -Tatsuo: 02:16:387 (1) - the sliders after that are very unfitting and you could make a triple here
21:10 -Tatsuo: the whole combo doesn't play well
21:10 Noya: alright
21:10 -Tatsuo: 02:21:499 (5,6,7,8,9) - and this shouldn't be stacked a few jumps are always fun
21:14 -Tatsuo: something like this should be fun
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6214702 21:14 -Tatsuo: make sure to higher the spacing
21:15 -Tatsuo: that's it
21:15 -Tatsuo: I hope I helped
21:16 Noya: thank you <3