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Marina & The Diamonds - Seventeen

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Larto
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Freitag, 20. Mai 2011 at 16:15:51

Artist: Marina & The Diamonds
Title: Seventeen
Tags: Powerdrone
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4121kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,48 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4,44 stars, 231 notes)
  3. Insane (4,88 stars, 328 notes)
  4. Powerdrone's Normal (3,72 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Marina & The Diamonds - Seventeen
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Lizzehb
This song is so catchy. Guest difficulty lol need one?
Powerdrone
SEEEEVEN... TEEN!

(Unfinished, but I wanted to show you what I've got done so far).

Download: Marina & The Diamonds - Seventeen (Larto) [Drone's Average Life].osu
Lizzehb
Powerdrone
Lizzehb
Mine turned out to be a hard too. Shit.

Download: Marina & The Diamonds - Seventeen (Larto) [Lizzehb's Upper Class].osu
NotShinta
Insane:
01:40:496 (6,7) - poot you (srsmode; I don't like stacks on different stacks)

Hard:
01:03:727 (2) - I'd say move the middle and last points down a midgetgrid for lessoverlapping magic

Powerdroneface's Normal
00:24:035 (4) - I am disappoint (srsmode; why are the sliders in the map except this one linear?)
00:26:342 (1) - I am proud
01:00:496 (3) - What exactly is this to?
01:07:419 (1) - I don't especially like such short spinners in Normal difficulties. (< 01:52:650 (1) - )
01:10:188 (1) - Flip upside down for slightly better spacing magic
01:27:496 (3,4,5,6) - Can you not make this dig into the slider as much?

Easy:
00:16:650 (3,4) - Bah not in line etc.

I love you all
DeadAlready
=w=/
Nharox
Star Hilde!
Danzai_old
I like it.

Star ~*~
Powerdrone

NotShinta wrote:

Insane:
01:40:496 (6,7) - poot you (srsmode; I don't like stacks on different stacks)

Hard:
01:03:727 (2) - I'd say move the middle and last points down a midgetgrid for lessoverlapping magic

Powerdroneface's Normal
00:24:035 (4) - I am disappoint (srsmode; why are the sliders in the map except this one linear?) POOT YOU i changed it lawl
00:26:342 (1) - I am proud Fuck yeah
01:00:496 (3) - What exactly is this to? YOUR MOTHER (in all seriousness, I'm probably keeping that. :P
01:07:419 (1) - I don't especially like such short spinners in Normal difficulties. (< 01:52:650 (1) - ) But it's all stand alone ish and not hard to spin and yeah... :<
01:10:188 (1) - Flip upside down for slightly better spacing magic I don't quite understand... leaving this.
01:27:496 (3,4,5,6) - Can you not make this dig into the slider as much? I don't understand what you mean by "digging into the slider"...

Easy:
00:16:650 (3,4) - Bah not in line etc.

I love you all
Download: Marina & The Diamonds - Seventeen (Larto) [Powerdrone's Normal].osu
Verdisphena
starstar
MathiasXII
I'm 8 years late =(.

General :

- Not usually part of my spectrum of taste in songs, but you mapped that song like pros, which actually makes me like the song!

[Easy]

General : This mapping is my definition of perfection for an Easy as for the flow of the notes. Kudos to you! Though you seem to use 1/2 notes and streams quite often. So it becomes like a half easy/half normal.

01:05:573 (4,1) - I am honestly not fan of sliders overlaying like that. You should try to draw the 1 or 4 slider in a more convenient way. Same goes for 02:08:343 (4,1) - .
01:56:342 (3,4) - Maybe use a slider here instead to restrain the use of 1/2 notes ? + I think it's a great opportunity for the use of a slider here :D.
01:58:188 (1,2,3) - Not sure about the spacing here. I would personally not do any jumps like that in an easy, but it looks fun like that ;_;. So I don't know what to say.

[Powerdrone's Normal]

General : Very nicely done. Clean, tidy, and god those choruses are fun !!! On the other hand, some parts needs to flow better with very small changes that makes all the difference! Everything else is awesome and perfect as is in my opinion.

00:14:342 - I'd add a note here.
00:21:727 - ^
00:26:342 - to 00:37:878 - Nothing to mod here, but I just wanted to pointed out what I think has a good flow. I like this a lot!
01:10:188 (1,2) - Nice ^^
02:12:496 - I'd add a note or two here since the following part has that and it sounds nicer.

[Hard]

*Irc mod... I think it solved it all, but will only mod this when I see that they have been applied/updated*

[Insane]

General : When I play this map, it's like I'm drawing something very sexy. Nothing to say about it. Fun clean good spacing good flow. Good job!

Love your work guys! <3
aRiskOfRain
Easy;

00:54:035 (4) - rarrrrrrgh back 1/2
01:35:573 (1) - this is the ugliest slider I've ever seen
01:37:419 (3) - nees reve ev'I redils tseilgu eht si siht
01:59:111 (2,4) - I'm not comfortable with this overlap

Normal;

01:07:419 (1) - this is lazy map through it
01:52:650 (1) - I think this slider is too short and the note after comes too quickly for a Normal.
01:56:342 (4,5) - LOLNO that spacing
Jarby
Note to next person that mods this: Parts of the melody are actually triplets but were mapped with 1/4. It's confusing and hard to follow otherwise, so please don't pop this bubble for not following the melody strictly like that.
A8mew
I secretly feel stupid whenever I miss a note on this map.

Its too well done, so have a star.
Kurosanyan
[General]
  1. 01:54:381 - This part of the map have an audio change only on Normal and Hard diffs. Is it a purpose or did you make a mistake?
  2. Add custom colours? D:
  3. I think offset 28~30 would be better.
  4. Distance spacing is really messed up on the whole map and on all diffs, especially on the Easy. I won't ask you to fix it on Hard and Insane because those diffs should be okay even with a wrong spacing, but at least fix it on Easy and maybe on Normal too please.
[Easy]
  1. 00:24:035 (3) - This slider is really low on the map, I think you should move it some grid up.
  2. 00:51:727 (1,2) - Why this big jump on an Easy?
  3. 00:54:496 (6) - This circle is really low too.
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:035 (4) - Add a repeat on this slider?
  2. 00:34:650 - I think you should add a note here.
  3. 01:27:496 (3,4,5,6) - Move those notes to avoid it to be under the slider?
Also I think this map should be modded more before asking to a MAT or a BAT to check it. I'm sure there's a lot of things that I didn't noticed on my mod which could be improved on the mapset with other mods.
James2250
-Make sure to take a look at all of the suggestions posted above here as well (the jumps on the easier difficulties really aren't too bad though and things being near the bottom of the screen aren't a problem)

Easy:
-I don't know if this is what Jarby was talking about but 00:53:804 (4) seems oddly placed at the moment
02:01:881 (1) - would look nicer if those middle slider ticks were stacked

Powerdrone's Normal:
00:13:881 (6,7,1) - keep spacing like this equal
00:53:573 (4) - these sliders sound odd on every difficulty in my opinion
01:10:188 (1,2) - I know it is for "17" but space out slightly more if possible
01:55:419 (3,4,5) - these shouldn't really be equally spaced, try a different pattern

Kurosanyan I do not see how the spacing is so bad on Easy/Normal. Maybe you want to provide some specific examples?
Everything else looks good to me
Jarby

James2250 wrote:

Easy:
-I don't know if this is what Jarby was talking about but 00:53:804 (4) seems oddly placed at the moment
It currently follows the strings rather than the vocals. That's a good enough justification for not using 1/3 for me. The rest of the post is more up to Larto then. He fixed stuff, so it's bubbled again.
James2250
Ok all looks good then

Ranked~
Claudia_old
I disappear for a day and amazing maps get ranked what
FlyingLettuce
nicely done!!!
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