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Enyo & Mario Ayuda ft. Gaby Henshaw - Freedom

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CRIZZOMIN
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 29, 2022 at 8:48:21 PM

Artist: Enyo & Mario Ayuda ft. Gaby Henshaw
Title: Freedom
Tags: electro dubstep Freedom vocal EDM enyo mario Na na na na na
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4170kb
Play Time: 03:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.49 stars, 225 notes)
  2. Free (4.15 stars, 614 notes)
  3. Hard (2.89 stars, 447 notes)
  4. Standard (2.41 stars, 354 notes)
  5. Test (4.21 stars, 614 notes)
Download: Enyo & Mario Ayuda ft. Gaby Henshaw - Freedom
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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By: CRIZZOMIN
-Thanks to all your support! :)

-Improve in comming!

  1. Easy
  2. Standard
  3. Hard
  4. Free
napie09
set the AR on the Free map a bit lower
9.4 is just to high for three and a half stars
AR 9.2 or so
but yeah nice map
Senseabel
Free

  1. 00:58:486 (2,3) - u missed a beat
  2. 01:09:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - missed a beat too
  3. 01:07:820 (1,2) - i would make a short slider on a red tick and started the second slider on a white tick
  4. 01:16:153 (5) - it would be better if you mapped a melody
  5. 01:26:320 (6) - missed a beat
  6. 02:05:486 (5,6,7) - increase spacing here, it would look better
  7. 02:15:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - enough to skip white ticks lol
  8. 02:31:486 (5) - i think there should be a slider here
  9. 03:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - it would be better if the spacing was the same
Stop skipping white ticks :oops:
Topic Starter
CRIZZOMIN

SENSEABEL wrote:

Free

  1. 00:58:486 (2,3) - u missed a beat / All white tick puted.
  2. 01:09:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - missed a beat too / -
  3. 01:07:820 (1,2) - i would make a short slider on a red tick and started the second slider on a white tick / Will not do that - cause the map follow the vocal before the instruments. Its will be the only one spot that not follow the vocals.
  4. 01:16:153 (5) - it would be better if you mapped a melody / Will not do that. same thing. ^
  5. 01:26:320 (6) - missed a beat / -
  6. 02:05:486 (5,6,7) - increase spacing here, it would look better / Spacing improve
  7. 02:15:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - enough to skip white ticks lol / -
  8. 02:31:486 (5) - i think there should be a slider here / Slider added
  9. 03:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - it would be better if the spacing was the same / spacing improve
All change puted on difficulty ''Free''
Sergey_Maslov
Colours:
Combo 1: 132.166.255
Combo 2: 176.89.2
Combo 3: 250.219.95
Topic Starter
CRIZZOMIN

PhoenixnerIK wrote:

Colours:
Combo 1: 132.166.255
Combo 2: 176.89.2
Combo 3: 250.219.95
Thanks, i changed the 5 color, now it fit whit the backround.
napie09
Ok so here is my mod (It is my first real mod though, I hope I'm doing it right):
Easy:

00:51:320 (2,3,4,5) - 01:02:153 (3,4,5) - I would map those parts similarly, so either both with slider or both without
00:53:486 (1,2,3) - I would move the third slider a bit upwards and to the right so that it looks the same as the other slider
01:12:153 (1,2) - I wouldn't stack this, most other parts are without stacks (same aplies to other stacks aswell)
01:20:820 (1) - I would point the slider end downwards so it leads into the next note
01:31:153 (1,2,3,4) - This is to densly placed and the stacks don't fit again and be carefull with overlaps
02:10:486 (1,2,3) - same as the first point, try to use the grid as reference
02:34:820 (1,2,3) - same as the last point but a better example. This should be 90° but it is somewhat off. Move it to the right.

I really had to search for things to critizice so pretty decent map

Standard:

00:51:320 (2,3,4) - 00:53:320 (1,2,3) - again why not similarly mapped?
01:29:486 (4,5,6) - this overlap is not that good I would change it
01:42:820 (5) - this slider is weird
01:58:986 (4,5,6,1) - similar to the other overlap I would change it
02:01:486 (5,1) - place them in line. Similar to the 90° in the easy diff
02:27:653 (2,3) - again

I feel a bit like nitpicking because I overall really like your mapset :D
Topic Starter
CRIZZOMIN

napie09 wrote:

Ok so here is my mod (It is my first real mod though, I hope I'm doing it right):
Easy:

00:51:320 (2,3,4,5) - 01:02:153 (3,4,5) - I would map those parts similarly, so either both with slider or both without / changed
00:53:486 (1,2,3) - I would move the third slider a bit upwards and to the right so that it looks the same as the other slider / did nothing
01:12:153 (1,2) - I wouldn't stack this, most other parts are without stacks (same aplies to other stacks aswell) / unstacked
01:20:820 (1) - I would point the slider end downwards so it leads into the next note / Changed
01:31:153 (1,2,3,4) - This is to densly placed and the stacks don't fit again and be carefull with overlaps / unstacked
02:10:486 (1,2,3) - same as the first point, try to use the grid as reference / ?
02:34:820 (1,2,3) - same as the last point but a better example. This should be 90° but it is somewhat off. Move it to the right. / 90˚

I really had to search for things to critizice so pretty decent map

Standard:


00:51:320 (2,3,4) - 00:53:320 (1,2,3) - again why not similarly mapped? / changed
01:29:486 (4,5,6) - this overlap is not that good I would change it / changed
01:42:820 (5) - this slider is weird / changed
01:58:986 (4,5,6,1) - similar to the other overlap I would change it / changed
02:01:486 (5,1) - place them in line. Similar to the 90° in the easy diff / ?
02:27:653 (2,3) - again / ?
Realy thank for your help Napie09 ;)
milenna
Hey,

Nice map,but, there is some mistakes i wanna show you...


FREE

01:03:320 (5,7) - its called ''overlap'', this is very boring, I know, but you have to take care when are you mapping to dont take a note below the other, it makes the map look dirty, you know?
01:05:653 (2,1) - overlap. You could take this ''2'' and put under ''1''
01:27:653 (2,2) - same
01:53:486 (8,9,10,11) - take care with this distance snap, the jump from 8 to 9 is more long than the others
02:11:986 (5) - this slider is not cool, I think is better if you put a note in the blue tick and start this slider in the white tick

Well, thats it, I know, its a short mod, but I hope i've helped you ♥

Good Luck ~~ :)
Topic Starter
CRIZZOMIN

soretun wrote:

Hey,

Nice map,but, there is some mistakes i wanna show you...


FREE

01:03:320 (5,7) - its called ''overlap'', this is very boring, I know, but you have to take care when are you mapping to dont take a note below the other, it makes the map look dirty, you know? / replaced
01:05:653 (2,1) - overlap. You could take this ''2'' and put under ''1'' / replaced
01:27:653 (2,2) - same / replaced
01:53:486 (8,9,10,11) - take care with this distance snap, the jump from 8 to 9 is more long than the others / replaced
02:11:986 (5) - this slider is not cool, I think is better if you put a note in the blue tick and start this slider in the white tick / keep to follow the vocal

Well, thats it, I know, its a short mod, but I hope i've helped you ♥

Good Luck ~~ :)
Yeah that help, i lot of smalls mod can help much more than one big. ;)
eliancapox9
#ModReqs

Hello! its my second mod in this game, i see the modders help you in standard easy and free, so then i will mod the hard diff (Sorry for bad english)
Note: I will only suggest, its your desicion to change it or not

Hard
[*] 00:54:153 (4,5) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108654 /
01:07:820 (1,2) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108678
02:21:820 (4,5,6,7) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108705 because the prev possition it overlaps a bit
02:50:820 (1) - Move that starter spinner possition like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108717 because that doesnt fit with the music

Nice map!
Topic Starter
CRIZZOMIN

eliancapox9 wrote:

#ModReqs

Hello! its my second mod in this game, i see the modders help you in standard easy and free, so then i will mod the hard diff (Sorry for bad english)
Note: I will only suggest, its your desicion to change it or not

Hard
00:54:153 (4,5) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108654 / Moved
01:07:820 (1,2) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108678 / stacked
02:21:820 (4,5,6,7) - Move these notes like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108705 because the prev possition it overlaps a bit / changed a bit
02:50:820 (1) - Move that starter spinner possition like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9108717 because that doesnt fit with the music / changed

Nice map!
Thanks to you, eliancapox9! :)
My english is bad too, so don't worry! :P
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