Hi
I think i just posted/suggested all what it seemed to me could improve in my point of view/consideration
Goodluck Mr PG
General suggestions
- Increase AR by 0.5 ( it seems i could read the jumpy patterns better when its 8.5 )
- What about changing BG to something higher quality i think its not necessary to have same BG as xhero's map ( anyway i like this one fitting music style and somehow similiar to the BG u are using now image
I Would add these words in Tags to give more reachability to map (it seems that xhero instead of adding some of these in tags he put them only in map description ) - "C80" why because of the song was performed in the event which is called comic Market 80 and its known as Comiket80 or C80 ( lately the comiket version/number its used in tags in all touhou related works performed in comikets)
- "フォールオブフォール" its just the title of the original theme of stage 4 in japanese (katakana)
- "pztr-0002" the catalogue number (reference: this and this )
- "安保さゆり" real name of 3L (reference: this )
Marathon
- 00:02:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - why to not maintain the same alignment in this pattern i mean like this and 02:53:544 (1,2,3,4) -
- 00:12:636 - insert a break here since it makes more sense when playing and limits the confusion, as when it wasnt a break added i was like when and where the next object will appear but when i added the break it informed me that there will be no note and then "get ready arrows" helps me to focus at the exact time
- 00:27:181 - here its fine since there will be a break anyway
- 00:58:317 (2) - and 01:00:135 (2) - they seem to represent the melody better if they stacked in next slider's heads imo ( i mean the sound this sound 00:58:317 - could be represented more efficiently when the flow stops then it flows again at 00:58:544 -
- 01:02:863 (4) - what about to make this symmetrical with previous slider feels better imo
- 01:08:317 (4,1) - what about to rotate (4) anti-clockwise and stack it with 01:07:635 (2) - something like this
01:13:544 (7,1) - i think u need to increase the distance here because the blank here 01:13:658 - would be illusory or trap that the stream mapped to that sound so increasing a little bit distance may help (after i tested it) - 01:16:953 (1,2,3) - 01:38:772 (1,2) - in general the distance snap used in most 1/4 consecutive patterns (not streams or when circle followed by circle/slider)
only when a slider followed by an object ) is way cramped for the used SV thus when playing it feels like you force the cursor to slow down to hit the next circle/slider so i suggest to increase it to something like 01:30:022 (8) - (1.1x) ( common snapping through the diff ) ( 04:50:590 (1,2,3) - exception this one plays good because its followed by another slider) - 01:27:408 (6) - unstack i dont see reason for stack here its just similiar to rest of unstacked 1/4 patterns
- 01:30:590 (1) - this one is suitable for stack
- 01:41:499 (1) - full stack ?
- 01:59:113 (3,4) - Ctrl+G since here 02:13:658 (3,4) - u followed the same angle and direction of the slider 02:12:863 (6) - so i thought of that or another suggestion like this and somehow same as 02:13:317 (1,2,3,4) -
- 01:59:681 (1) - make it symmetrical to 02:00:363 (3) - looks better
- 02:46:158 (4) - unstack (i would Ctrl+g and unstack)
- 03:16:953 (3,4) - the way is overlapped isnt good but as i suggested about distance snap (when i apply it to this it looked better)
- 03:32:863 (7) - hmm i just dont feel comfortable with this it doesnt play as complement to the rest of pattern maybe something like this could look better
- 03:55:817 (3) - move it a little bit to right so 03:55:363 (1,2,3) - form that square shape
- 04:19:226 (4) - it plays better when its stacked to 04:17:863 (3) - 's head
- 04:56:044 (1,2,3,4) - to this maybe ?
- 05:07:635 (2) - would sound better if replaced with circles 1 on the head and the other on the tail (red and blue ticks)
- 05:13:090 (3,5) - move them above where they are linear with 05:12:863 (2) -
- 05:17:863 (2) - move it below to form an equilateral shape between 05:16:044 (1,1,2) -
- 05:46:840 (4) - stack with (5)
- 05:55:135 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G individually to characterize the second set of flute differently
- 06:17:067 - why this is a blank fill it pls or remap
I think i just posted/suggested all what it seemed to me could improve in my point of view/consideration
Goodluck Mr PG