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CommandoBlack
Mod from: CommandoBlack's [4k Mania] queue - t/511195

I'll start my mod with saying: These patterns are way too repetitive. (I also don't enjoy the mapping style)

All difficulties
At the begaining most of the notes are not placed to pitch. (You should once its the only sounds present)
I hope you can hear the difference in pitch.


I can't really say much about the patterning because its very alien to me. sry bout that.
Topic Starter
genkicho

No_sync wrote:

hi!

From my NM/M4M queue.

Columns 4K 0|1|2|3



General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: PASS
  1. Not needed!
BPM & Offset: MISS
  1. I think that the correct offset is 1049.
Diff.Spread: MISS
  1. You only can get 5/6 difficulties for yourself, if you need more difficulties, call GDs. Reason
Diff.Name: PASS
HP & OD: MISS
  1. Suggestions:
    1. EZ: OD=6 -> OD=7 | HP=6 -> HP=6.5
    2. NM: Both values to 7.
    3. HD: OD=7.7 -> OD=7.5 | HP=7.4 -> HP=7.5
    4. SC: Both values to 8.5.
    5. SHD: Both values to 9.
    6. Lunatic: OD=9.6 -> OD=9.5 | HP=9.6 -> HP=9
Hitsound: PASS
Hitsound Volume: PASS
Kiai Time: PASS
Metadata: PASS?
  1. Is related to Cytus too...
Widescreen Support: FAIL
  1. If you won't use storyboard, Uncheck Widescreen Support in all diffs.
Preview Point: PASS
AiMod Things: PASS

Mod!
[EZ]
00:57:311 (57311|1,57847|1) - I rather move these notes to |3| or |2|, so you don't overuse so much that hand. fixed, ab it different

01:30:883 (90883|2,91061|3,91419|2) - I don't like this, try move 01:31:061 (91061|3) - to |1| or |0| fixed, a bit different

I don't like to much those 3 LongNotes followed for the notes... you can spread more even... but well it's up to you.

[NM]
00:07:490 (7490|3,7669|3,8026|3,8204|3) - Bad, I think these notes go on |0|. So now, you cover all the columns. fixed, a bit different

00:09:990 (9990|1) - to |3|.

00:10:526 (10526|1) - to |2|.

00:11:061 (11061|1) - to |3|. This part can be less hard...

00:12:669 (12669|2) - to |3|.

00:14:276 (14276|3) - to |0|.

00:14:811 (14811|3) - to |1|.

00:15:347 (15347|3) - to |0|.

00:16:954 (16954|1) - to |0|.

^I think that part is a bit hard for a NM... those note movements can relax a bit the difficulty for both hands. those suggestions make inconsistency of patterns

00:25:169 (25169|0,25347|0,25526|2,25704|2) - And 00:27:311 (27311|0,27490|1,27669|3,27847|3) - are different. Please be consistent. 00:25:347 (25347|0) - to |1| fixed

00:58:383 (58383|0,58740|0) - to |2| or |3|. You are putting unnecessary effort in left/right hand, for using roll patterns...

01:05:704 (65704|1) - like before... to |3|

01:06:240 (66240|1) - to |2|

01:07:847 (67847|2) - to |1|

01:09:990 (69990|3) - to |1|

01:10:526 (70526|3) - to |0|

01:12:133 (72133|1) - to |3|

01:12:669 (72669|1) - to |2|

01:23:383 (83383|1) - to |2|

01:23:919 (83919|1) - to |3|

01:24:097 (84097|0,84454|0) - to |2|.

01:24:990 (84990|2) - to |3|

01:26:061 (86061|2) - to |3|

01:26:240 (86240|1,86597|1) - to |0|

01:27:133 (87133|3) - to |1|

01:27:669 (87669|3) - to |0|

01:28:204 (88204|3) - to |1|

01:28:383 (88383|2,88740|2) - to |0|

01:29:811 (89811|1) - to |0|

01:48:561 (108561|1) - to |2|

01:49:097 (109097|1) - to |3|

01:50:704 (110704|1) - to |0|

01:54:990 (114990|2) - to |1|

01:57:133 (117133|1) - to |3|

01:57:669 (117669|1) - to |2|

01:59:811 (119811|2) - to |3| all denied :( ^ pls don't change my mapping style :(

02:04:454 (124454|0) - to |1| and 02:04:811 (124811|0) - to |2| rearranged a bit

I Repeat: You are putting unnecessary effort in left/right hand, for using roll patterns...some notes moved

[HD]
Now...

00:09:097 (9097|3,11865|3) - There a lot of effort in three fingers... and you left all that column empty. That is bad. In All this section.
My suggestion is to spread more the notes. fixed

00:58:383 (58383|0,58740|0,58919|1,59097|1,59454|1,59633|1,59990|1,60169|1,60526|1,60883|1,61061|2,61240|2,61597|2,61776|2,62133|2,62311|2,62669|2,63026|2) - ... http://i.imgur.com/O6nFKYs.jpg Just a suggestion because after i see this in NM, i don't know if you know some alternative to that really heavy and consecutive pattern. srry denied. too easy I think. I already nerfed it as much as I can, and I think that pattern isn't compatible with the song :( (hard to explain it)
If you like more this pattern please use it in NM too.

01:05:169 (65169|3,66865|3) - Again in all in this section: 00:09:097.

01:22:579 (82579|2) - to |1|... rearranged i Don't like the note right there + again 00:09:097.

01:33:204 (93204|2) - to |0| rearranged, different

01:34:276 (94276|1) - to |0| fixed

01:48:204 - Again... srry I wont change my mapping style .

02:01:061 to the end - This part i really like it comparing the rest tbh.

In general, please spread more the notes.I think those trills are enough to fill columns

[MX]
00:50:704 (50704|1) - It ends in 00:50:704 (50704|1).

00:57:311 (57311|0,57311|1,57490|1,57490|0,57847|0,57847|1,58026|0,58026|1,58383|0,58383|1,58740|0,58740|1) - Suggestion again, http://i.imgur.com/bVTudjP.jpg Try to do more dynamic the patterns, The empty columns still there... fixed hand balance, but that suggestion isn't compatible with the song (again, hard to explain) I map according to the song, not patterns difficulty

01:09:276 (69276|3,69454|3,69633|3,69811|3) - Evade stacks... fixed

01:12:847 (72847|2,73026|2,73204|2,73383|2) - ^fixed

01:13:383 (73383|0,73561|0,73740|0,73919|0) - ^fixed

01:27:936 (87936|1,88115|1,88294|1,88472|1,88651|1,88829|1) - ^fixed

01:30:704 (90704|1,90883|1,91061|1,91240|1) - ^fixed

01:48:204 (108204|3,109811|3) - empty and 01:48:204 (108204|1,108383|1,108561|1,108740|1,108919|1,109097|1,109276|1,109454|1,109633|1) - stack.fixed

01:52:133 (112133|3,112311|3,112490|3,112669|3,112847|3,113026|3,113204|3,113383|3,113561|3,113740|3,113919|3,114097|3) - s t a c k.fixed

02:01:061 to the end - Again here, i like this.

Tbh, there a lot of copypaste patterns? I really thinking this now.whoops srry that's just my mapping habbit

[SC]
00:56:776 (56776|1,56776|3,56776|0,56954|0,56954|1,56954|3,57311|1,57311|0,57311|3,57490|3,57490|1,57490|0,57847|0,57847|3,57847|1,58026|1,58026|0,58026|3,58383|0,58383|3,58383|1,58740|1,58740|3,58740|0) - http://i.imgur.com/UPz8g3V.jpg Third suggestion. denied :(

This diff, has a lot of stacks... and chordtrills. You can use more JumpStreams to be honest... I think we cant map without stack in hard diff

00:56:776 - I expect 4 notes in the next diffs...? I think this will be the most hardest diff of this map. Beyond this difficulty, is just overmapping in my opinion.umm... that's triple, and I think it can be harder than this

[SHD]
Is like SC but without any rest between notes generating jacks.

No suggestions here.

[Lunatic]
00:09:633 (9633|3,9633|0,9633|1,9633|2,9722|2,9722|3,9811|0,9811|2,9811|3,9811|1,9901|1,9901|0,9990|2,9990|3,10169|3,10169|0,10169|2,10169|1,10258|0,10258|1,10347|2,10347|0,10347|3,10347|1,10436|2,10436|3,10526|0,10526|1) - The only thing that i can say, is try to do more variants of those chordtrills. (not only |0|1| or |2|3|) variations are in half map and kiai time ::>>

00:28:919 (28919|1,28919|0,28919|2,28919|3,29008|3,29097|1,29097|0,29186|0,29186|1,29276|0,29276|1) - LongNotes + Doublejacks, is very hard...different hand

00:31:017 (31017|0,31061|0) - Any E.T can do 1/8 jacks? I have all the doubts.pls don't underestimate ppl.if ET cant 1/8 jack, then im a god..

00:39:633 - Those jacks are really beyond my imagination... lol

01:13:859 (73859|1,73919|1) - Even 1/12 jack, i don't think so. that's 1/6

01:31:002 (91002|0,91061|0) - ^^

01:37:133 (97133|3,97133|2,97222|2,97222|3,97311|3,97311|2,97401|3,97401|2,97490|3,97490|2) - Control the amount of doublejacks. Try three. Five or six is too much. its ET diff, no nerf. 3 doublejacks are just too easy to hit

01:39:588 (99588|3,99633|3) - Same as 00:31:017.?? :/

Good Luck! :)
thanks for modsssssss ::>>
Topic Starter
genkicho

CommandoBlack wrote:

Mod from: CommandoBlack's [4k Mania] queue - t/511195

I'll start my mod with saying: These patterns are way too repetitive. (I also don't enjoy the mapping style) srry bout that, but I cant do anything about it

All difficulties
At the begaining most of the notes are not placed to pitch. (You should once its the only sounds present)
I hope you can hear the difference in pitch.could you pls give example? Im pretty sure its placed to pitch


I can't really say much about the patterning because its very alien to me. sry bout that.
Topic Starter
genkicho

deadbill wrote:

dem stars.

ane kelarin modnya sekitar weekend yaa
::>> oke
deadbill
MX

00:30:436 - add a note
00:37:311 (37311|3) - ctrl + left, since there is no piano here
01:13:472 - 1/8 would be nice, since this is MX diff
01:13:919 - why the piano is not mapped here?
01:30:615 - same as before, 1/8 would be nice

add a note at these part, since you are refering to piano
01:35:794 -
01:36:329 -
01:36:865 -
01:37:401 -

01:38:561 - one LN is enough, two are too much since you will make jacks instead. this may not inappropriate, because piano at this part has different tone
also 01:39:454 - 1/8


just a suggestion


01:46:686 (106686|0) - ghost note

01:47:133 - just a suggestion, map the piano (p.s. some notes are 1/3), remove the ln


or if you are a lil bit sadistic


01:48:204 - i dont mind if you are using the same pattern as before, since this part is similar to previous part.
however some players may feel otherwise. just a suggestion, either you refering to piano + synth at this part, or keep the pattern as it is. your call

02:06:419 - umm? piano? also LN for epicness


thats all goodluck m8
deadbill
yha malah pake bahasa bule... lupa ane... maap.. -.-
Topic Starter
genkicho

deadbill wrote:

MX

00:30:436 - add a note added
00:37:311 (37311|3) - ctrl + left, since there is no piano here I understand what you mean. fixed
01:13:472 - 1/8 would be nice, since this is MX diff you mean 1/6? rearranged
01:13:919 - why the piano is not mapped here?I map it in SC and higher diff
01:30:615 - same as before, 1/8 would be nice 1/6 rearranged

add a note at these part, since you are refering to piano
01:35:794 -
01:36:329 -
01:36:865 -
01:37:401 -
^all fixed + rearranged
01:38:561 - one LN is enough, two are too much since you will make jacks instead. this may not inappropriate, because piano at this part has different tone rearranged
also 01:39:454 - 1/8 rearranged


just a suggestion
i deleted those LNs

01:46:686 (106686|0) - ghost note thx. I don't hear piano, but I hear something with 25% play speed, so I changed the hitsound to soft hit

01:47:133 - just a suggestion, map the piano (p.s. some notes are 1/3), remove the ln no its 1/6, and 1/4+1/6 trill Is insane for MX I think


or if you are a lil bit sadistic whoa that pattern looks messy for me :( and too hard


01:48:204 - i dont mind if you are using the same pattern as before, since this part is similar to previous part.
however some players may feel otherwise. just a suggestion, either you refering to piano + synth at this part, or keep the pattern as it is. your call

02:06:419 - umm? piano? also LN for epicness I will rethink the piano, but LN for ending is a no :p


thats all goodluck m8
thx^^ I rearranged so many patterns from this mod ::>>>
Topic Starter
genkicho

- Ly0572 - wrote:

Mark for m4m
Will mod later~
whoa you already mod this map :/
Davin Fortune
Hello genkicho!
Guess my mod gonna be long since Awakened is less modded >_>

Little General
00:09:633 - until 00:18:204 -
01:05:347 - until 01:13:919 -
01:22:490 - until 01:31:061 - aren't these three point has same pattern here? (i see in awakened) so suggest to make them into kiai cause reff/kiai is a part of a song which usually play it repeatly cause reff is a part which usually people gonna love it (own definition :P)
02:05:347 - the last kiai should end here

AWAKEN FROM THE CENTER OF EARTH!!
00:15:615 (15615|1,15615|0) - delete this, this got pause between the 4 notes, cause the flow in here are 00:15:704 (15704|2,15704|3,15794|1,15794|0) - not included with that chords
00:17:758 (17758|3,17758|2) - ^
00:23:204 - 3 note same like 00:22:847 - , they have same sound though, i do agree with 00:24:990 - since i found extra sound beside the other chords' sound taken, but this one not
00:24:633 (24633|3) - move to col 1(see from left), for easier in playing
00:26:776 (26776|3) - move to col 2 for easier in playing
00:27:758 - i figured out there's piano in here, it's up to you want to add because of existing sound or want to keep the consistency of the pattern so the players won't be feel shocked when have to face this little note
00:29:186 (29186|0) - move to col 4, cause these chords don't take similar sound so i can decline about using this jack pattern and ask you to make a thrill patern
00:30:258 (30258|0,30258|1) - apply like ^ for this one too
00:31:151 (31151|2) - move to 00:31:329 - so these notes are synced with the triplets 00:31:419 - also 00:31:151 - got no any beat so i ask you to move it up
00:31:419 - make it 2 note since i listen it carefully and figured out that between three note and two notes are same, pls apply to all of them which has same problem
00:41:329 - make it 1 note, in this part the pattern is 2 1 1 1 2 and repeat again and again
00:41:597 (41597|2,41597|3,41686|1,41686|2) - ^
00:43:472 - ^
00:43:740 (43740|0,43740|3,43829|1,43829|0) - ^, pls apply to all pattern which has same pattern
01:13:264 (73264|1,73323|0) - delete and 01:13:294 - make chords here, as a flow with 01:13:204 (73204|0,73204|3) -
01:35:347 (95347|3,95347|0,95347|1,95347|2,95436|3,95526|0,95526|1,95615|1,95615|0,95704|1,95704|0) - make it same like 00:28:919 (28919|0,28919|3,28919|1,28919|2,29008|3,29097|0,29097|1,29186|0,29186|1,29276|0,29276|1) -
01:37:401 - make it 1 note for consistent pattern
01:37:936 - add ^
01:38:472 - ^
01:40:526 - Add some here
01:41:597 - ^
01:43:919 - ugh for this part pls just make it consistent with other part like the one in 01:35:347 - and 00:28:919 -
01:55:079 (115079|3) - delete this, pls just ignore this sound and give player to rest a bit, a flow in this part is like 01:55:169 (115169|1,115169|3,115169|2,115169|0,115258|3,115258|2,115347|3,115347|2,115347|1,115347|0,115436|1,115436|0,115526|2,115526|3) - sp just make it space between a flow and the other one
01:55:615 (115615|0) - ^
01:57:222 (117222|0) - ^
01:57:758 (117758|2) - ^

Diff awakened dolok, entar diff lain
PaladinKill
ga bisa nyentuh disini T_T
skin ininya mana? VOEZ skin (pas play ada tulisan merah)
Topic Starter
genkicho

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello genkicho!
Guess my mod gonna be long since Awakened is less modded >_>

Little General
00:09:633 - until 00:18:204 -
01:05:347 - until 01:13:919 -
01:22:490 - until 01:31:061 - aren't these three point has same pattern here? (i see in awakened) so suggest to make them into kiai cause reff/kiai is a part of a song which usually play it repeatly cause reff is a part which usually people gonna love it (own definition :P)
02:05:347 - the last kiai should end here

AWAKEN FROM THE CENTER OF EARTH!!
00:15:615 (15615|1,15615|0) - delete this, this got pause between the 4 notes, cause the flow in here are 00:15:704 (15704|2,15704|3,15794|1,15794|0) - not included with that chords
00:17:758 (17758|3,17758|2) - ^
00:23:204 - 3 note same like 00:22:847 - , they have same sound though, i do agree with 00:24:990 - since i found extra sound beside the other chords' sound taken, but this one not
00:24:633 (24633|3) - move to col 1(see from left), for easier in playing
00:26:776 (26776|3) - move to col 2 for easier in playing
00:27:758 - i figured out there's piano in here, it's up to you want to add because of existing sound or want to keep the consistency of the pattern so the players won't be feel shocked when have to face this little note
00:29:186 (29186|0) - move to col 4, cause these chords don't take similar sound so i can decline about using this jack pattern and ask you to make a thrill patern
00:30:258 (30258|0,30258|1) - apply like ^ for this one too
00:31:151 (31151|2) - move to 00:31:329 - so these notes are synced with the triplets 00:31:419 - also 00:31:151 - got no any beat so i ask you to move it up
00:31:419 - make it 2 note since i listen it carefully and figured out that between three note and two notes are same, pls apply to all of them which has same problem
00:41:329 - make it 1 note, in this part the pattern is 2 1 1 1 2 and repeat again and again
00:41:597 (41597|2,41597|3,41686|1,41686|2) - ^
00:43:472 - ^
00:43:740 (43740|0,43740|3,43829|1,43829|0) - ^, pls apply to all pattern which has same pattern
01:13:264 (73264|1,73323|0) - delete and 01:13:294 - make chords here, as a flow with 01:13:204 (73204|0,73204|3) -
01:35:347 (95347|3,95347|0,95347|1,95347|2,95436|3,95526|0,95526|1,95615|1,95615|0,95704|1,95704|0) - make it same like 00:28:919 (28919|0,28919|3,28919|1,28919|2,29008|3,29097|0,29097|1,29186|0,29186|1,29276|0,29276|1) -
01:37:401 - make it 1 note for consistent pattern
01:37:936 - add ^
01:38:472 - ^
01:40:526 - Add some here
01:41:597 - ^
01:43:919 - ugh for this part pls just make it consistent with other part like the one in 01:35:347 - and 00:28:919 -
01:55:079 (115079|3) - delete this, pls just ignore this sound and give player to rest a bit, a flow in this part is like 01:55:169 (115169|1,115169|3,115169|2,115169|0,115258|3,115258|2,115347|3,115347|2,115347|1,115347|0,115436|1,115436|0,115526|2,115526|3) - sp just make it space between a flow and the other one
01:55:615 (115615|0) - ^
01:57:222 (117222|0) - ^
01:57:758 (117758|2) - ^

Diff awakened dolok, entar diff lain

waduu gimana cari ngasi kudos nya.. srry telat... laptop rusak soalnya.. skrg baru bener :(
"this post has been made too long blabla" gabisa kasi kudosu...
Topic Starter
genkicho
map ressurected.... uhh really im trying to rank this like a stupid because its kinda impossible to rank..
Topic Starter
genkicho

Davin Fortune wrote:

Hello genkicho!
Guess my mod gonna be long since Awakened is less modded >_>

Little General
00:09:633 - until 00:18:204 -
01:05:347 - until 01:13:919 -
01:22:490 - until 01:31:061 - aren't these three point has same pattern here? (i see in awakened) so suggest to make them into kiai cause reff/kiai is a part of a song which usually play it repeatly cause reff is a part which usually people gonna love it (own definition :P)
02:05:347 - the last kiai should end here
thanks for suggestion, but i think it doesnt really matter :) i will rearrange some repetitive patterns

AWAKEN FROM THE CENTER OF EARTH!!
00:15:615 (15615|1,15615|0) - delete this, this got pause between the 4 notes, cause the flow in here are its for consistency00:15:704 (15704|2,15704|3,15794|1,15794|0) - not included with that chords
00:17:758 (17758|3,17758|2) - ^
00:23:204 - 3 note same like 00:22:847 - , they have same sound though, i do agree with 00:24:990 - since i found extra sound beside the other chords' sound taken, but this one nothmm srry i dont get it :( 3 notes is for extra sound
00:24:633 (24633|3) - move to col 1(see from left), for easier in playingits on purpose, minijacks everytime that sound appear
00:26:776 (26776|3) - move to col 2 for easier in playing
00:27:758 - i figured out there's piano in here, it's up to you want to add because of existing sound or want to keep the consistency of the pattern so the players won't be feel shocked when have to face this little notehmm piano is on red line
00:29:186 (29186|0) - move to col 4, cause these chords don't take similar sound so i can decline about using this jack pattern and ask you to make a thrill paterni think 12 jack (chord jack if im not mistaken) is easier to hit because its 1 hand, and i dont want to confuse the other hand
00:30:258 (30258|0,30258|1) - apply like ^ for this one too
00:31:151 (31151|2) - move to 00:31:329 - so these notes are synced with the triplets 00:31:419 - also 00:31:151 - got no any beat so i ask you to move it up i can hear beat with 1/4 replay
00:31:419 - make it 2 note since i listen it carefully and figured out that between three note and two notes are same, pls apply to all of them which has same problemactually there are some extra sound, something like clap but not clap
00:41:329 - make it 1 note, in this part the pattern is 2 1 1 1 2 and repeat again and again the sound is telling me to give minijacks, but its volume kinda low so ppl cant really hear it
00:41:597 (41597|2,41597|3,41686|1,41686|2) - ^
00:43:472 - ^
00:43:740 (43740|0,43740|3,43829|1,43829|0) - ^, pls apply to all pattern which has same pattern
01:13:264 (73264|1,73323|0) - delete and 01:13:294 - make chords here, as a flow with 01:13:204 (73204|0,73204|3) -
01:35:347 (95347|3,95347|0,95347|1,95347|2,95436|3,95526|0,95526|1,95615|1,95615|0,95704|1,95704|0) - make it same like 00:28:919 (28919|0,28919|3,28919|1,28919|2,29008|3,29097|0,29097|1,29186|0,29186|1,29276|0,29276|1) - hmm nah i think already good
01:37:401 - make it 1 note for consistent pattern the sound is telling double
01:37:936 - add ^no beat
01:38:472 - ^no beat
01:40:526 - Add some here
01:41:597 - ^uhh i dont want make jumpstream.. its boring
01:43:919 - ugh for this part pls just make it consistent with other part like the one in 01:35:347 - and 00:28:919 -
01:55:079 (115079|3) - delete this, pls just ignore this sound and give player to rest a bit, a flow in this part is like 01:55:169 its a 6* map anyway.. for top tier :/ and for the piano(115169|1,115169|3,115169|2,115169|0,115258|3,115258|2,115347|3,115347|2,115347|1,115347|0,115436|1,115436|0,115526|2,115526|3) - sp just make it space between a flow and the other one
01:55:615 (115615|0) - ^
01:57:222 (117222|0) - ^
01:57:758 (117758|2) - ^

Diff awakened dolok, entar diff lain

thx for mods :D
Asherz007
Hey there! From a modding queue. :)

genkicho wrote:

map ressurected.... uhh really im trying to rank this like a stupid because its kinda impossible to rank..
Yeah... Sadly, there has been a rule change where BNs can only cast their judgement on a mapset in which they can pass all of the diffs... so you may be struggling to find capable people. But don't worry, the map is very promising.

General
I don't know... I'm just not a fan of using the drum sampleset for this. Up to you though, really.

Might I suggest a change to the OD/HP structure?
  1. EZ: OD 6, HP 6 (fine imo from the large number of LNs)
  2. NM: OD 7, HP 7
  3. HD: OD 8, HP 7.5
  4. MX: OD 8.2, HP 7.8
  5. SC: OD 8.5, HP 8
  6. SHD: OD 8.8, HP 8.2
  7. Awakened: OD 9, HP 8.5
Mania maps don't tend to go above OD/HP 9, from what I've seen.

Also, don't double-up on hitsounds... or more. (like at 00:22:133) It's often a little too much. (I reckon for this specific example, a double should be fine, whereas a triple isn't.)

0|1|2|3

EZ
As a general note, EZ diffs should not really have any SV changes in them at all. People need to get used to the notes alone first, never mind them scrolling down at different speeds. I'd suggest removing these.

  1. 00:01:062 (1062|3,1597|3,2133|3,2669|3,3026|3,3204|2,3740|2,4276|2,4811|2,5169|2,5347|1,5883|1,6419|1,6954|1,7311|1,7490|2,8026|2,8561|3,9097|3,9454|2) etc etc etc... - Ok, so at the moment, you're mapping the piano, right? How about mapping to the drum set? (the cymbal-sounding things actually have some sort of pitch, surprisingly.) It would allow you to map like this, instead of putting everything in the same column. Listen closely to the audio to see what I mean. (Looking at the other diffs, this idea could also apply there too.)
  2. 00:47:847 (47847|2) - Change to col 1 for hand balance?
  3. 01:13:919 (73919|0,76061|2,78204|1,80347|0) - Why not make these LNs?
  4. 02:06:419 (126419|3,126419|0) - Switch to cols 1+2? (only because the previous notes were in this column, plus this combo hasn't been used for the entire map.)

HD
Drum following idea still applicable here. Apart from that, there's not much. Hitsounding wise, I think you went a little overboard on using the soft whistle in some areas. Don't forget, hitsounds don't necessarily need to be on every note.
  1. 00:15:436 (15436|0) - On the white tick earlier in col 3 for the pattern?
  2. 00:22:847 - Don't really see any reason to have the minijacks here. What about like this? Many more occasions where the notes can be rearranged to avoid the unnecessary minijacks and improving hand balance at the same time.
  3. 00:39:454 (39454|3,39544|2) - Move one col left?
  4. 01:11:776 (71776|0,71895|2,72014|1,72133|3,72252|2,72371|0,72490|3,72609|1,72728|2) - I know what you're trying to map here, but being the only bar which is mapped to 1/3s, I don't think it's worth it. Consider remapping to the drums instead.
  5. 01:38:561 (98561|2,98829|2,98919|1,99097|1,99276|2,99454|1,99633|2) - Too much finish HS here.
  6. For the LN section at 01:56:776, I know you're trying for variation, but I really don't think this is necessary and thus should all be replaced with normal notes.
  7. 02:01:061 (121061|3,121061|2,121240|3,121240|2,121419|2,121419|1,121597|1,121597|2,121776|0,121776|1,121954|1,121954|0,122133|1,122133|2,122311|1,122311|2,122490|3,122490|2,122669|3,122669|2,122847|1,122847|2,123026|1,123026|2) - This isn't really following anything. You could follow the cymbals, or map the piano stream instead.
  8. 02:03:204 (123204|3,123294|0,123383|3,123472|0,123561|3,123651|0,123740|3,123829|0,123919|3,124008|0,124097|3,124186|0) - Put some notes in different columns. This is extremely hard to read and play when repeated for this long.

I hope this helps and good luck! :)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's go
Guide
Black text: Ghost note/Note that even when i put playback rate down to 25%, I still couldn't here a thing
Red text: Missing note
Blue text: Change the pattern
Pink text: Others
Overall
Too many jacks in the last diff that it doesn't even fun any more. Do you want this to be the next AiAe of osu!mania?
Some pattern are the same in 2 or more difficults. Consider changing it to make your beatmap to have more variety of notes arrangement :arrow: more fun
SC
00:11:151 (11151|1) - Remove this
00:13:294 (13294|1) - ^
00:15:436 (15436|3) - ^
00:17:579 (17579|1) - ^
00:40:526 (40526|0,40526|1) - Switch these two notes' placement and make the LN 1/2 long
00:44:811 (44811|0,44811|1) - ^
01:03:204 (63204|3,63383|3,63740|3,63919|3) - Why LNs here, the music didn't change too much that you use LNs here. Consider changing it to NM note
01:11:895 (71895|1,72014|0,72014|0) - These notes make no sense, remove this
01:12:252 (72252|1,72371|2,72609|3,72728|1) - ^
01:39:722 (99722|3) - Add a note here
01:43:561 (103561|0,103561|1) - Remove 1 of these 2 notes. The bass doesn't extremely stressed there to use a triple
01:56:776 (116776|3,116776|1,116865|2,116865|0,116954|1,116954|3,117044|0,117044|2,117133|1,117133|3,117222|2,117311|3,117311|1,117401|2,117401|0,117490|1,117490|3,117579|0,117579|2,117669|1,117669|3,117758|2,117847|3,117847|1,117936|0,117936|2,118026|1,118026|3,118115|2,118115|0,118204|1,118204|3,118294|0,118294|2,118383|3,118383|1,118472|2,118472|0,118561|1,118561|3,118651|0,118651|2,118740|3,118740|1,118829|2,118919|0,118919|3,119008|1,119008|2,119097|3,119097|0,119186|2,119186|1,119276|3,119276|0,119365|1,119454|0,119454|3,119544|1,119544|2,119633|3,119633|0,119722|2,119722|1,119811|0,119811|3,119901|1,119990|3,119990|0,120079|2,120079|1,120169|0,120169|3,120258|2,120258|1,120347|0,120347|3,120436|1,120436|2,120526|3,120526|0,120615|2,120615|1,120704|3,120704|0,120794|1,120794|2) - I dislike this pattern. There is no need to use LNs here. No violin, no long stretching sound, just NM base. Consider remake this part
Advice
Consider delete the last diff because with that diff, it is really hard to get this map ranked and it is not really fun to play with too
GL for ranking, big Voez fan here 8-)
Edit: forgot to color some text
riunosk
decided to mod SHD and Awakened instead since im quite free atm
Supa Hard Deefeeculty
00:20:347 (20347|1) - i suggest moving to 3 and changing to LN instead for playability and follow the extended sound until the next triple
00:28:204 (28204|1,28204|3,28294|2,28383|1) - suggested pattern
00:33:026 (33026|1,33204|1,33383|1,33561|1,33740|1,33919|1) - anchor here
00:45:704 (45704|1,45883|1,46061|1,46240|1,46419|1) - ^
00:52:044 (52044|1,52222|1,52401|1,52579|1,52758|1,52936|1) - ^
00:53:472 (53472|2,53651|2,53829|2,54008|2,54186|2,54365|2) - ^
01:30:704 (90704|3,90704|0,90764|1,90764|2,90823|3,90823|0,90883|1,90883|2,90942|3,90942|0,91002|2,91002|1) - i highly suggest changing this into 12 34 jtrill style for much better playability
02:01:061 - i feel that the SVs are too strong for weak sounds like this, maybe reduce them to 1.3 or something
02:06:419 (126419|2,126419|3,126419|0,126419|1) - maybe change to double and add 2 more notes at 3 4 that follows the piano?
i noticed the HP is 9.2 but awakening and sc is lower than 9, intentional or accidental?
wake me up inside
for this difficulty, i'll be very blunt, i find this overmapped in terms of massively excessive jacking. the quads dont seem to fit with the track although the pattern would make sense for the quads to be around. im unable to mod this due to me not familiar with this kind of mapping so i'll shoot one star as compensation
j a c k g a l o r e
Crumpey
As Requested in Crumpey's mod Queue


MX, HD
cols = 1|2|3|4

MX(Mod
00:18:204 (18204|2) - potential for a nice stream instead of a boring Ln right here.
00:40:526 (40526|1,40704|1) - id avoid things like this, really hard to hit
00:44:811 (44811|1,44990|1) - same as above
00:54:454 (54454|2,54633|2) - Same, it just so easy to mess up on them, although not objectively wrong, imo its better without them
01:12:847 (72847|0,72907|2,72966|0,73026|2,73085|0,73145|2,73204|0,73264|2,73323|0,73383|2,73442|0,73502|2) - try a pattern thats easier on the hands utilizing all 4 columns, thats super hard to hit.
01:13:919 - So much potential for some streams, yet theres no notes here?
01:37:490 (97490|1,98026|2,103919|2,104454|1,104990|2,105526|3,106061|1,106597|2,107133|1) - these lns dont feel like they are adding to the song at all, just have streams in that area imo

HD(Mod)
Feels and looks way too similar to mx, compare the diffs and i suggest changing them up a bit, HD just feels like MX with less notes imo
01:56:776
(116776|0,116865|1,116954|2,117044|3,117133|2,117222|0,117311|1,117401|2,117490|3,117579|2,117669|1,117758|2,117847|3,117936|2,118026|1,118115|0,118204|3,118294|2,118383|1,118472|0,118561|2,118651|1,118740|0,118829|1,118919|2,119008|0,119097|1,119186|3,119276|2,119365|0,119454|1,119544|3,119633|2,119722|0,119811|3,119901|2,119990|0,120079|1,120169|2,120258|3,120347|0,120436|1,120526|2,120615|3,120704|0) - wouldnt suggest this in a 3* song

Awakened Attempt
This feels waaaaaay too overmapped, there are some songs that just arnt meant to be a high starred song as it wont make sense.
Imo to keep this diff it will need an overhaul, the quads in the beginning arnt needed, and there are waaaaay too many jacks, imo, i would probably remove the diff.

Overall solid map
Topic Starter
genkicho

Asherz007 wrote:

Hey there! From a modding queue. :)

genkicho wrote:

map ressurected.... uhh really im trying to rank this like a stupid because its kinda impossible to rank..
Yeah... Sadly, there has been a rule change where BNs can only cast their judgement on a mapset in which they can pass all of the diffs... so you may be struggling to find capable people. But don't worry, the map is very promising. thx :> gonna try rank this to deatth

General
I don't know... I'm just not a fan of using the drum sampleset for this. Up to you though, really.

Might I suggest a change to the OD/HP structure?
  1. EZ: OD 6, HP 6 (fine imo from the large number of LNs)
  2. NM: OD 7, HP 7
  3. HD: OD 8, HP 7.5
  4. MX: OD 8.2, HP 7.8
  5. SC: OD 8.5, HP 8
  6. SHD: OD 8.8, HP 8.2
  7. Awakened: OD 9, HP 8.5 thx for suggestion, gonna fix HP and OD
Mania maps don't tend to go above OD/HP 9, from what I've seen.

Also, don't double-up on hitsounds... or more. (like at 00:22:133) It's often a little too much. (I reckon for this specific example, a double should be fine, whereas a triple isn't.) which diff :o

0|1|2|3

EZ
As a general note, EZ diffs should not really have any SV changes in them at all. People need to get used to the notes alone first, never mind them scrolling down at different speeds. I'd suggest removing these. fixed

  1. 00:01:062 (1062|3,1597|3,2133|3,2669|3,3026|3,3204|2,3740|2,4276|2,4811|2,5169|2,5347|1,5883|1,6419|1,6954|1,7311|1,7490|2,8026|2,8561|3,9097|3,9454|2) etc etc etc... - Ok, so at the moment, you're mapping the piano, right? How about mapping to the drum set? (the cymbal-sounding things actually have some sort of pitch, surprisingly.) It would allow you to map like this, instead of putting everything in the same column. Listen closely to the audio to see what I mean. (Looking at the other diffs, this idea could also apply there too.) aww sorry, i think this pattern already fine[color]
  2. 00:47:847 (47847|2) - Change to col 1 for hand balance?
  3. 01:13:919 (73919|0,76061|2,78204|1,80347|0) - Why not make these LNs? i want to make it easy as possible, cuz the SR succ and i think LN not good for that part
  4. 02:06:419 (126419|3,126419|0) - Switch to cols 1+2? (only because the previous notes were in this column, plus this combo hasn't been used for the entire map.)fixed

HD
Drum following idea still applicable here. Apart from that, there's not much. Hitsounding wise, I think you went a little overboard on using the soft whistle in some areas. Don't forget, hitsounds don't necessarily need to be on every note.loll sorry bout that, this is my first hitsound map xD
  1. 00:15:436 (15436|0) - On the white tick earlier in col 3 for the pattern? fixed
  2. 00:22:847 - Don't really see any reason to have the minijacks here. What about like this? Many more occasions where the notes can be rearranged to avoid the unnecessary minijacks and improving hand balance at the same time. fixed some, and some not. sorry i misheard the piano sound
  3. 00:39:454 (39454|3,39544|2) - Move one col left? moved
  4. 01:11:776 (71776|0,71895|2,72014|1,72133|3,72252|2,72371|0,72490|3,72609|1,72728|2) - I know what you're trying to map here, but being the only bar which is mapped to 1/3s, I don't think it's worth it. Consider remapping to the drums instead. it was drum, but many ppl said need variations, so i decided to change it
  5. 01:38:561 (98561|2,98829|2,98919|1,99097|1,99276|2,99454|1,99633|2) - Too much finish HS here.but the song is liek dat :<
  6. For the LN section at 01:56:776, I know you're trying for variation, but I really don't think this is necessary and thus should all be replaced with normal notes. aww no, i think it's worth it, SHD and SC use same style too
  7. 02:01:061 (121061|3,121061|2,121240|3,121240|2,121419|2,121419|1,121597|1,121597|2,121776|0,121776|1,121954|1,121954|0,122133|1,122133|2,122311|1,122311|2,122490|3,122490|2,122669|3,122669|2,122847|1,122847|2,123026|1,123026|2) - This isn't really following anything. You could follow the cymbals, or map the piano stream instead. rearranged, but not like dat,
  8. 02:03:204 (123204|3,123294|0,123383|3,123472|0,123561|3,123651|0,123740|3,123829|0,123919|3,124008|0,124097|3,124186|0) - Put some notes in different columns. This is extremely hard to read and play when repeated for this longwat... trill is trill... just spam 0 4 0 4 0 4 with correct beat.

I hope this helps and good luck! :)
thanks for mod, rlly helpful :D
Topic Starter
genkicho

[B A D] wrote:

Hi, my name is Jeff
Let's go
Guide
Black text: Ghost note/Note that even when i put playback rate down to 25%, I still couldn't here a thing
Red text: Missing note
Blue text: Change the pattern
Pink text: Others
Overall
Too many jacks in the last diff that it doesn't even fun any more. Do you want this to be the next AiAe of osu!mania? actually, yes
Some pattern are the same in 2 or more difficults. Consider changing it to make your beatmap to have more variety of notes arrangement :arrow: more fun
sory i cant change last diff, cuz it is the main diff, i made that before other diffs, and Awakened is my main reason to continue modding this map
SC
00:11:151 (11151|1) - Remove this
00:13:294 (13294|1) - ^
00:15:436 (15436|3) - ^
00:17:579 (17579|1) - ^actually i can hear the sound but volume rlly low. if someone point it out again i will change it
00:40:526 (40526|0,40526|1) - Switch these two notes' placement and make the LN 1/2 long
00:44:811 (44811|0,44811|1) - ^ aww sorry i think already good
01:03:204 (63204|3,63383|3,63740|3,63919|3) - Why LNs here, the music didn't change too much that you use LNs here. Consider changing it to NM note aww sorry thats for piano. anyway thanks i will add that too in SHD
01:11:895 (71895|1,72014|0,72014|0) - These notes make no sense, remove this
01:12:252 (72252|1,72371|2,72609|3,72728|1) - ^ polyrhythm
01:39:722 (99722|3) - Add a note here fixed
01:43:561 (103561|0,103561|1) - Remove 1 of these 2 notes. The bass doesn't extremely stressed there to use a triple i did that a lot before... thats for something-like-clap sound
01:56:776 (116776|3,116776|1,116865|2,116865|0,116954|1,116954|3,117044|0,117044|2,117133|1,117133|3,117222|2,117311|3,117311|1,117401|2,117401|0,117490|1,117490|3,117579|0,117579|2,117669|1,117669|3,117758|2,117847|3,117847|1,117936|0,117936|2,118026|1,118026|3,118115|2,118115|0,118204|1,118204|3,118294|0,118294|2,118383|3,118383|1,118472|2,118472|0,118561|1,118561|3,118651|0,118651|2,118740|3,118740|1,118829|2,118919|0,118919|3,119008|1,119008|2,119097|3,119097|0,119186|2,119186|1,119276|3,119276|0,119365|1,119454|0,119454|3,119544|1,119544|2,119633|3,119633|0,119722|2,119722|1,119811|0,119811|3,119901|1,119990|3,119990|0,120079|2,120079|1,120169|0,120169|3,120258|2,120258|1,120347|0,120347|3,120436|1,120436|2,120526|3,120526|0,120615|2,120615|1,120704|3,120704|0,120794|1,120794|2) - I dislike this pattern. There is no need to use LNs here. No violin, no long stretching sound, just NM base. Consider remake this partaww sorry thats for piano and variations. i hate common ranked patterns. theyre boring and less challenging to read

Advice
Consider delete the last diff lol no way thx for advice because with that diff, it is really hard to get this map ranked and it is not really fun to play with too
GL for ranking, big Voez fan here 8-)
Edit: forgot to color some text
thanks for mod :>>
Topic Starter
genkicho

riunosk wrote:

decided to mod SHD and Awakened instead since im quite free atm
Supa Hard Deefeeculty
00:20:347 (20347|1) - i suggest moving to 3 and changing to LN instead for playability wat... thats playable for sure and follow the extended sound until the next triple [i will think again bout that
00:28:204 (28204|1,28204|3,28294|2,28383|1) - suggested patternRearranged but different
00:33:026 (33026|1,33204|1,33383|1,33561|1,33740|1,33919|1) - anchor here fixed
00:45:704 (45704|1,45883|1,46061|1,46240|1,46419|1) - ^ fixed
00:52:044 (52044|1,52222|1,52401|1,52579|1,52758|1,52936|1) - ^Fixed
00:53:472 (53472|2,53651|2,53829|2,54008|2,54186|2,54365|2) - ^Fiixed
01:30:704 (90704|3,90704|0,90764|1,90764|2,90823|3,90823|0,90883|1,90883|2,90942|3,90942|0,91002|2,91002|1) - i highly suggest changing this into 12 34 jtrill style for much better playability i will think again bout dat
02:01:061 - i feel that the SVs are too strong for weak sounds like this, maybe reduce them to 1.3 or something thx. gonna fix them :>
02:06:419 (126419|2,126419|3,126419|0,126419|1) - maybe change to double and add 2 more notes at 3 4 that follows the piano?applied, gonna do that to other diff too
i noticed the HP is 9.2 but awakening and sc is lower than 9, intentional or accidental?intentional cuz awakened with 9+ HP is insanely unplayable
wake me up inside
for this difficulty, i'll be very blunt, i find this overmapped in terms of massively excessive jacking sorry thats my mapping style :(. the quads dont seem to fit with the track although the pattern would make sense for the quads to be around. im unable to mod this due to me not familiar with this kind of mapping so i'll shoot one star as compensation
j a c k g a l o r e
thx for the mod ::>>
Topic Starter
genkicho

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As Requested in Crumpey's mod Queue


MX, HD
cols = 1|2|3|4

MX(Mod
00:18:204 (18204|2) - potential for a nice stream instead of a boring Ln right here. fixed, stream arranged
00:40:526 (40526|1,40704|1) - id avoid things like this, really hard to hit whoa thats the challenge, i will reconsider that
00:44:811 (44811|1,44990|1) - same as above
00:54:454 (54454|2,54633|2) - Same, it just so easy to mess up on them, although not objectively wrong, imo its better without them
01:12:847 (72847|0,72907|2,72966|0,73026|2,73085|0,73145|2,73204|0,73264|2,73323|0,73383|2,73442|0,73502|2) - try a pattern thats easier on the hands utilizing all 4 columns, thats super hard to hit. i will reconsider bout that, if i changed it to use 4 columns it will become boring af
01:13:919 - So much potential for some streams, yet theres no notes here? break after 1/6 trill
01:37:490 (97490|1,98026|2,103919|2,104454|1,104990|2,105526|3,106061|1,106597|2,107133|1) - these lns dont feel like they are adding to the song at all, just have streams in that area imo background sound, cant really hear that but i think thats good

HD(Mod)
Feels and looks way too similar to mx, compare the diffs and i suggest changing them up a bit, HD just feels like MX with less notes imo it is a bit different actally, theres no 1/2 LN Jack
01:56:776
(116776|0,116865|1,116954|2,117044|3,117133|2,117222|0,117311|1,117401|2,117490|3,117579|2,117669|1,117758|2,117847|3,117936|2,118026|1,118115|0,118204|3,118294|2,118383|1,118472|0,118561|2,118651|1,118740|0,118829|1,118919|2,119008|0,119097|1,119186|3,119276|2,119365|0,119454|1,119544|3,119633|2,119722|0,119811|3,119901|2,119990|0,120079|1,120169|2,120258|3,120347|0,120436|1,120526|2,120615|3,120704|0) - wouldnt suggest this in a 3* song gonna reconsider dat, but for now i still choose hard pattern + low HP

Awakened Attempt
This feels waaaaaay too overmapped, there are some songs that just arnt meant to be a high starred song as it wont make sense.
Imo to keep this diff it will need an overhaul, the quads in the beginning arnt needed, and there are waaaaay too many jacks, imo, i would probably remove the diff. aww sorry bout the alien patterns, and sorry for being stubborn, i just want to rank that

Overall solid map
thanks for the mod :D
Leonita

hi owo
[Hitsound Awakened]
  1. 00:01:062 (1062|3,1062|1,1062|0,1240|3,1240|1,1240|0,1597|3,1597|1,1597|0,1776|3,1776|1,1776|0,2133|3,2133|1,2133|0,2311|3,2311|1,2311|0,2669|3,2669|1,2669|0,3026|3,3026|1,3026|2,3204|2,3204|0,3204|1,3383|2,3383|0,3383|1,3740|2,3740|0,3740|1,3919|2,3919|0,3919|1,4276|2,4276|0,4276|1,4454|2,4454|0,4454|1,4811|0,4811|2,4811|1,5169|0,5169|2,5169|1,5347|2,5347|3,5347|1,5526|2,5526|3,5526|1,5883|2,5883|3,5883|1,6061|2,6061|3,6061|1,6419|2,6419|3,6419|1,6597|2,6597|3,6597|1,6954|2,6954|3,6954|1,7311|2,7311|3,7311|1,7490|3,7490|0,7490|2,7669|3,7669|0,7669|2,8026|3,8026|0,8026|2,8204|3,8204|0,8204|2,8561|2,8561|0,8561|1,8740|2,8740|0,8740|1,9097|2,9097|0,9097|1,9454|1,9454|0,9454|2) - 1 note aja yg di hitsound, terlalu keras
  2. 00:09:633 (9633|0,9633|1,9633|3,9633|2,9722|3,9722|2,9811|1,9811|0,9811|3,9811|2,9901|1,9901|0,9990|3,9990|2,10169|0,10169|1,10169|3,10169|2,10258|0,10258|2,10347|1,10347|0,10347|3,10347|2,10436|3,10436|1,10526|0,10526|2,10704|0,10704|1,10704|2,10704|3,10794|3,10794|0,10883|3,10883|1,10883|2,10883|0,10972|1,10972|2,11061|3,11061|0,11240|0,11240|1,11240|2,11240|3,11329|0,11329|1,11419|3,11419|2,11508|1,11508|0,11597|1,11597|0,11597|2,11597|3,11686|3,11686|2,11776|3,11776|1,11776|2,11776|0,11865|0,11865|1,11954|1,11954|3,11954|2,11954|0,12044|3,12044|2,12133|0,12133|1,12311|3,12311|1,12311|0,12311|2,12401|1,12401|3,12490|2,12490|3,12490|0,12490|1,12579|2,12579|0,12669|1,12669|3,12847|3,12847|1,12847|0,12847|2,12936|2,12936|1,13026|1,13026|3,13026|2,13026|0,13115|3,13115|0,13204|2,13204|1,13383|2,13383|0,13383|1,13383|3,13472|3,13472|2,13561|1,13561|0,13651|3,13651|2,13740|0,13740|2,13740|1,13740|3,13829|0,13829|1,13919|3,13919|0,13919|1,13919|2,14008|2,14008|3,14097|0,14097|3,14097|1,14097|2,14186|0,14186|1,14276|2,14276|3,14454|3,14454|0,14454|1,14454|2,14544|3,14544|0,14633|0,14633|3,14633|2,14633|1,14722|1,14722|2,14811|3,14811|0,14990|3,14990|0,14990|1,14990|2,15079|1,15079|3,15169|0,15169|3,15169|2,15169|1,15258|0,15258|2,15347|1,15347|3,15526|3,15526|0,15526|1,15526|2,15615|1,15615|0,15704|3,15704|2,15794|0,15794|1,15883|0,15883|3,15883|2,15883|1,15972|3,15972|2,16061|1,16061|0,16061|2,16061|3,16151|1,16151|0,16240|0,16240|1,16240|2,16240|3,16329|3,16329|2,16419|0,16419|1,16597|1,16597|0,16597|2,16597|3,16686|0,16686|2,16776|1,16776|2,16776|3,16776|0,16865|3,16865|1,16954|2,16954|0,17133|1,17133|0,17133|2,17133|3,17222|1,17222|2,17311|1,17311|0,17311|2,17311|3,17401|3,17401|0,17490|2,17490|1,17669|1,17669|2,17669|3,17669|0,17758|3,17758|2,17847|0,17847|1,17936|3,17936|2,18026|3,18026|2,18026|0,18026|1,18115|1,18115|0,18204|0,18204|3,18204|2,18204|1) - tooooooo wadooo panjang bgt anjay:'u
  3. 00:20:347 (20347|3,20347|0) - ini jg 1 aja
  4. 1 time line 1 aja hitsoundnya. jd gk balapan ama mp3 nya. hmm
  5. yaila irc aja dah, poke me in game. saran, mending pake custom hitsound deh.
kalo kamu mau irc, no kudos ampe aku post irc an nya. tapi kalo kamu gmw irc, sorry cmn segini checking hitsoundnya teserah mau di kudos/ndak. gdluck!
Leonita
double post sorry
Shurelia
Saya kira ini "CintaLu" .
Abraxos
hi i was stalking a friend of mine for their mods and i came across this map and i think i aged 20 years and got 23 more wrinkle lines on my forehead

awakened

genkicho wrote:

riunosk wrote:

for this difficulty, i'll be very blunt, i find this overmapped in terms of massively excessive jacking sorry thats my mapping style :(. the quads dont seem to fit with the track although the pattern would make sense for the quads to be around. im unable to mod this due to me not familiar with this kind of mapping so i'll shoot one star as compensation
i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually

01:48:204 - the chorus is not within the same bounds of intensity as 00:09:633 - the start, which doesnt make a lot of sense because i can very clearly and objectively state that the chorus is in a higher plane of intensity as the beginning, given all the high pitched violins and increased drum/bass volume

01:53:561 - this part is just completely spiteful to everyone in question, why are you just using [12] [34] and [1234]s repeatedly when theres so much going on the music? if you wanted to just chart the drum and bass then go chart metal or something idk you like drums a lot dont you emphasizing every single bass beat sound with a double

01:48:204 (108204|3,108204|2,108383|1,108383|0) - these LNs are horrible to play, dealing with simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them is not something i want to do every day, and not what i want to do in your map

this isnt much of a problem of it being unbalanced, or it being overmapped really - its about you understanding what is actually fun, and what is frustrating to play and nail down(or in plain english not fun) - and personally speaking looking at your sloppy justification for such patterning ("its my mapping style") i can say with 100% certainty you do not have the player in mind at all - is that what you really want to do?

have fun, i dont think i need to reply to you - i just need to hear what you have to say
kds or not i dont really care
Topic Starter
genkicho

Abraxos wrote:

hi i was stalking a friend of mine for their mods and i came across this map and i think i aged 20 years and got 23 more wrinkle lines on my forehead
i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually what are those reasons? my map my pattern, no reason no change

01:48:204 - the chorus is not within the same bounds of intensity as 00:09:633 - the start, which doesnt make a lot of sense because i can very clearly and objectively state that the chorus is in a higher plane of intensity as the beginning, given all the high pitched violins and increased drum/bass volumesorry, so when is the chorus?

01:53:561 - this part is just completely spiteful to everyone in question, why are you just using [12] [34] and [1234]s repeatedly when theres so much going on the music? if you wanted to just chart the drum and bass then go chart metal or something idk you like drums a lot dont you emphasizing every single bass beat sound with a double thx, gonna give another variation, any suggestion? guess no

01:48:204 (108204|3,108204|2,108383|1,108383|0) - these LNs are horrible to play, dealing with simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them is not something i want to do every day, and not what i want to do in your map i didnt ask you to play this map if you dont like it. btw those are on different hands.

this isnt much of a problem of it being unbalanced, or it being overmapped really - its about you understanding what is actually fun, and what is frustrating to play and nail down(or in plain english not fun) - and personally speaking looking at your sloppy justification for such patterning ("its my mapping style") i can say with 100% certainty you do not have the player in mind at all i have, and i always tested it and trying to make it good. - is that what you really want to do?[/notice]

have fun, i dont think i need to reply to you - i just need to hear what you have to say
kds or not i dont really care[/quote]

this is too much offense and not constructive at all. i know i need variations, but give some suggestion. you came here just to attack me,
not modding my map. no kudos


*edit : btw yea thats my mapping style, idk whats wrong with me. can solve this problem?
Topic Starter
genkicho

Leonita wrote:


hi owo
[Hitsound Awakened]
  1. 00:01:062 (1062|3,1062|1,1062|0,1240|3,1240|1,1240|0,1597|3,1597|1,1597|0,1776|3,1776|1,1776|0,2133|3,2133|1,2133|0,2311|3,2311|1,2311|0,2669|3,2669|1,2669|0,3026|3,3026|1,3026|2,3204|2,3204|0,3204|1,3383|2,3383|0,3383|1,3740|2,3740|0,3740|1,3919|2,3919|0,3919|1,4276|2,4276|0,4276|1,4454|2,4454|0,4454|1,4811|0,4811|2,4811|1,5169|0,5169|2,5169|1,5347|2,5347|3,5347|1,5526|2,5526|3,5526|1,5883|2,5883|3,5883|1,6061|2,6061|3,6061|1,6419|2,6419|3,6419|1,6597|2,6597|3,6597|1,6954|2,6954|3,6954|1,7311|2,7311|3,7311|1,7490|3,7490|0,7490|2,7669|3,7669|0,7669|2,8026|3,8026|0,8026|2,8204|3,8204|0,8204|2,8561|2,8561|0,8561|1,8740|2,8740|0,8740|1,9097|2,9097|0,9097|1,9454|1,9454|0,9454|2) - 1 note aja yg di hitsound, terlalu keras
  2. 00:09:633 (9633|0,9633|1,9633|3,9633|2,9722|3,9722|2,9811|1,9811|0,9811|3,9811|2,9901|1,9901|0,9990|3,9990|2,10169|0,10169|1,10169|3,10169|2,10258|0,10258|2,10347|1,10347|0,10347|3,10347|2,10436|3,10436|1,10526|0,10526|2,10704|0,10704|1,10704|2,10704|3,10794|3,10794|0,10883|3,10883|1,10883|2,10883|0,10972|1,10972|2,11061|3,11061|0,11240|0,11240|1,11240|2,11240|3,11329|0,11329|1,11419|3,11419|2,11508|1,11508|0,11597|1,11597|0,11597|2,11597|3,11686|3,11686|2,11776|3,11776|1,11776|2,11776|0,11865|0,11865|1,11954|1,11954|3,11954|2,11954|0,12044|3,12044|2,12133|0,12133|1,12311|3,12311|1,12311|0,12311|2,12401|1,12401|3,12490|2,12490|3,12490|0,12490|1,12579|2,12579|0,12669|1,12669|3,12847|3,12847|1,12847|0,12847|2,12936|2,12936|1,13026|1,13026|3,13026|2,13026|0,13115|3,13115|0,13204|2,13204|1,13383|2,13383|0,13383|1,13383|3,13472|3,13472|2,13561|1,13561|0,13651|3,13651|2,13740|0,13740|2,13740|1,13740|3,13829|0,13829|1,13919|3,13919|0,13919|1,13919|2,14008|2,14008|3,14097|0,14097|3,14097|1,14097|2,14186|0,14186|1,14276|2,14276|3,14454|3,14454|0,14454|1,14454|2,14544|3,14544|0,14633|0,14633|3,14633|2,14633|1,14722|1,14722|2,14811|3,14811|0,14990|3,14990|0,14990|1,14990|2,15079|1,15079|3,15169|0,15169|3,15169|2,15169|1,15258|0,15258|2,15347|1,15347|3,15526|3,15526|0,15526|1,15526|2,15615|1,15615|0,15704|3,15704|2,15794|0,15794|1,15883|0,15883|3,15883|2,15883|1,15972|3,15972|2,16061|1,16061|0,16061|2,16061|3,16151|1,16151|0,16240|0,16240|1,16240|2,16240|3,16329|3,16329|2,16419|0,16419|1,16597|1,16597|0,16597|2,16597|3,16686|0,16686|2,16776|1,16776|2,16776|3,16776|0,16865|3,16865|1,16954|2,16954|0,17133|1,17133|0,17133|2,17133|3,17222|1,17222|2,17311|1,17311|0,17311|2,17311|3,17401|3,17401|0,17490|2,17490|1,17669|1,17669|2,17669|3,17669|0,17758|3,17758|2,17847|0,17847|1,17936|3,17936|2,18026|3,18026|2,18026|0,18026|1,18115|1,18115|0,18204|0,18204|3,18204|2,18204|1) - tooooooo wadooo panjang bgt anjay:'u
  3. 00:20:347 (20347|3,20347|0) - ini jg 1 aja
  4. 1 time line 1 aja hitsoundnya. jd gk balapan ama mp3 nya. hmm
  5. yaila irc aja dah, poke me in game. saran, mending pake custom hitsound deh.
kalo kamu mau irc, no kudos ampe aku post irc an nya. tapi kalo kamu gmw irc, sorry cmn segini checking hitsoundnya teserah mau di kudos/ndak. gdluck!
kita irc aja :3 sempetnya kapan?
Rivals_7

genkicho wrote:

i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually what are those reasons? my map my pattern, no reason no change
you should state your reason about why are you chosing that kind of pattern. If you dont even know what are you doing.... You can say goodbye to the ranked section.


https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Code_of_Conduct ... nd_Mapping
We have a CoC which is must be followed. If not, then BNs have a reason to not push this forward by any means.

genkicho wrote:

i have, and i always tested it and trying to make it good.
Really, give me a pic of yours with an S on awakened
If you think it doesnt play good on yours, then the others wil probably have the same thinking.
Dont say this map is for the top Players. Its not a valid reasoning.

Dont take this as an attack, we're the community are helping you to push your map. quit being such a stubborn and think professionally.

peace. ;)
Topic Starter
genkicho

Rivals_7 wrote:

genkicho wrote:

i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually what are those reasons? my map my pattern, no reason no change
you should state your reason about why are you chosing that kind of pattern. If you dont even know what are you doing.... You can say goodbye to the ranked section.


https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Code_of_Conduct ... nd_Mapping
We have a CoC which is must be followed. If not, then BNs have a reason to not push this forward by any means.

genkicho wrote:

i have, and i always tested it and trying to make it good.
Really, give me a pic of yours with an S on awakened well i cant pass it :/
If you think it doesnt play good on yours, then the others wil probably have the same thinking.
Dont say this map is for the top Players. Its not a valid reasoning.

Dont take this as an attack, we're the community are helping you to push your map. quit being such a stubborn and think professionally. aw i really need some help on this problem srsly.. whats wrong with me :/

peace. ;)
oh lol yea i sorry bout that rule, and sorry bout that. i just cant hold it, cuz i just wanted to rank a map for long time, and never happened.

Here the reason for the nonsense patterns , (some reason might sound nonsense) :
- I love that kind of pattern even i cant play it well, idk why
- I want to rank something different and unique, thats why im still working on this map till now :<
- There are only few 5*+ maps, and some of them are overrated, i just want to rank something not overrated
- Many ppl around me say and think that 4K is easy, i just want to prove 4k isnt (this might be nonsense or stoopid)
- Many modders here say that hard patterns dont fit with this song, but idk why i think hard patterns good for this song, maybe cuz first time i tried this song on voez, it was too hard for me, and i made it hard too here.


rlly thx for calming me,
Abraxos
im blue in color btw

genkicho wrote:

Abraxos wrote:

hi i was stalking a friend of mine for their mods and i came across this map and i think i aged 20 years and got 23 more wrinkle lines on my forehead

i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually what are those reasons? my map my pattern, no reason no change the reasons are below!

01:48:204 - the chorus is not within the same bounds of intensity as 00:09:633 - the start, which doesnt make a lot of sense because i can very clearly and objectively state that the chorus is in a higher plane of intensity as the beginning, given all the high pitched violins and increased drum/bass volumesorry, so when is the chorus? please read, "01:48:204 - the chorus is not " this indicates that the chorus is at 1:48, i.e. the kiai time you placed! and im very certain people normally placed kiai time at the chorus, am i wrong on that?

01:53:561 - this part is just completely spiteful to everyone in question, why are you just using [12] [34] and [1234]s repeatedly when theres so much going on the music? if you wanted to just chart the drum and bass then go chart metal or something idk you like drums a lot dont you emphasizing every single bass beat sound with a double thx, gonna give another variation, any suggestion? guess no hmmmmmm
few things you can do
1) declutter the layering, i.e. dont double every single bass beat you see
2) focus more on the violin pulls in the music, i.e. 01:48:204 - 01:48:740 - 01:48:919 - 01:49:097 -
3) focus more on the piano beats in the music, i.e. 01:49:722 - 01:49:811 - 01:49:901 - 01:49:990 -(last one 01:09:276 - is kinda an anomaly, there are two main beats here; the hihats, and the main piano beat, and funnily enough the main piano beats fall on the same tick with the hihats 90% of the time, with the other 10% being unemphasized which is kinda odd dontcha think)

its kinda late now and i can very much give pattern suggestions here and there but i dont really feel like im up for it right now; maybe you can pm me through the forums as a way for a reminder and all so id get back to you; this is if you yourself cant think of a better pattern given whatever i said before so (pretty sure you can)




01:48:204 (108204|3,108204|2,108383|1,108383|0) - these LNs are horrible to play, dealing with simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them is not something i want to do every day, and not what i want to do in your map i didnt ask you to play this map if you dont like it. btw those are on different hands. sure, i didnt have to play it since i dont like it, but the map was offensive enough to me that i decided that i needed to discuss with you your intentions and your processes behind mapping, because it concerns me

they being on different hands does not change the fact that we, as players, are still "simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them"
i can wager with you can on 168 bpm, a patterning that invovles such a quick switch between holding down a button and repeatedly pressing is not very fun to hit at all - of course you can deny this and say its fine, which is actually fine by me since a lot of things on here are somewhat intersubjective anyway


this isnt much of a problem of it being unbalanced, or it being overmapped really - its about you understanding what is actually fun, and what is frustrating to play and nail down(or in plain english not fun) - and personally speaking looking at your sloppy justification for such patterning ("its my mapping style") i can say with 100% certainty you do not have the player in mind at all i have, and i always tested it and trying to make it good. - is that what you really want to do? second hmmmmm

theres always this sense of bias that comes along when you playtest your own map - i mean, its very obvious everyone at least somewhat thinks well of themselves so you might be biased on the point here

i was in a conversation with a rank 450~ player with this chart actually (dont really want to pull names in here), and he himself has a good history of dealing with jack maps - to rephrase what he said,
" ending spikes really badly in difficulty, the LNs in the ending too make it hard to play"
perhaps theres no weight to this since i dont have the transcript but you can take this as you will, i personally cant exactly play the chart (a pass is viable at least) and to me the current patterning, even with the lack of playing ability, seems to ignore the essence of the music itself and carries a ton of artificial-smelling difficulty in it


have fun, i dont think i need to reply to you - i just need to hear what you have to say
kds or not i dont really care
this is too much offense and not constructive at all. i know i need variations, but give some suggestion. you came here just to attack me,
not modding my map. no kudos
alright, forgot that people took things too emotionally on here sometimes wop wop

*edit : btw yea thats my mapping style, idk whats wrong with me. can solve this problem? ye! just dont be so pissy and all because of how i apparently seem to be aggressive (guess its to be expected, everyone likes to be buttered up even in criticism) and ill be willing to discuss further with you on how to approach and deal with the problems i have with the mapset
dont continue replying in the thread, itll clutter things up - reply to me (if needed) through pm

EDIT: just saw the transcript between you and rivals, ill be looking through it too if necessary

genkicho wrote:

Abraxos wrote:

hi i was stalking a friend of mine for their mods and i came across this map and i think i aged 20 years and got 23 more wrinkle lines on my forehead
whaw sorry for taking that as offense, idk what happened to me.

Peace ;>
no need to self deprecate just because of a map, people are much more complex that what they place on the editor in game - i advocate for not involving emotions with something that is considered to be as professional as mapping/modding because it just helps with the streamlining of feedback and discussion in general yafeelme

gekicho wrote:

oh lol yea i sorry bout that rule, and sorry bout that. i just cant hold it, cuz i just wanted to rank a map for long time, and never happened. ranking is a long process, be patient and youll be duly rewarded i promise you

Here the reason for the nonsense patterns , (some reason might sound nonsense) :
- I love that kind of pattern even i cant play it well, idk why
- I want to rank something different and unique, thats why im still working on this map till now :<
- There are only few 5*+ maps, and some of them are overrated, i just want to rank something not overrated
- Many ppl around me say and think that 4K is easy, i just want to prove 4k isnt (this might be nonsense or stoopid)
- Many modders here say that hard patterns dont fit with this song, but idk why i think hard patterns good for this song, maybe cuz first time i tried this song on voez, it was too hard for me, and i made it hard too here.

those are all valid reasons you know, because these are all personal perspectives on this matter and can only be refuted if you realize that the ranked section is for everyone, not only for you

it is your job to intertwine how you feel together with how everyone feels in a balanced way, and i dont think its fair to the people who achieved that same balance by pushing this mapset to rank in its current state because you feel invalidated and have your own personal goal of the ranked section

feel free to continue on with the mapset with the current patterns, but dont be surprised if there is severe backlash because your beliefs clash with the thoughts of the players in ranked
Topic Starter
genkicho

Abraxos wrote:

hi i was stalking a friend of mine for their mods and i came across this map and i think i aged 20 years and got 23 more wrinkle lines on my forehead
whaw sorry for taking that as offense, idk what happened to me.

Peace ;>

edit : wew replied already, wait i gonna mod it
Topic Starter
genkicho

Abraxos wrote:

im blue in color btw


i dont think it being your "mapping style" gives you excuse to do 01:06:419 (66419|0,66419|2,66419|1,66419|3,66508|2,66508|3,66597|3,66597|1,66597|0,66597|2) - patterning like this, because of a few reasons actually what are those reasons? my map my pattern, no reason no change the reasons are below!

01:48:204 - the chorus is not within the same bounds of intensity as 00:09:633 - the start, which doesnt make a lot of sense because i can very clearly and objectively state that the chorus is in a higher plane of intensity as the beginning, given all the high pitched violins and increased drum/bass volumesorry, so when is the chorus? please read, "01:48:204 - the chorus is not " this indicates that the chorus is at 1:48, i.e. the kiai time you placed! and im very certain people normally placed kiai time at the chorus, am i wrong on that? yea i usually do it that way :/

01:53:561 - this part is just completely spiteful to everyone in question, why are you just using [12] [34] and [1234]s repeatedly when theres so much going on the music? if you wanted to just chart the drum and bass then go chart metal or something idk you like drums a lot dont you emphasizing every single bass beat sound with a double thx, gonna give another variation, any suggestion? guess no hmmmmmm
few things you can do
1) declutter the layering, i.e. dont double every single bass beat you see
2) focus more on the violin pulls in the music, i.e. 01:48:204 - 01:48:740 - 01:48:919 - 01:49:097 - [color=#FF00FF]thx for suggestion, i keep the pattern there, but i will map the violin here 01:49:276 - 01:49:633 - 01:49:990

3) focus more on the piano beats in the music, i.e. 01:49:722 - 01:49:811 - 01:49:901 - 01:49:990 -(last one 01:09:276 - is kinda an anomaly, there are two main beats here; the hihats, and the main piano beat, and funnily enough the main piano beats fall on the same tick with the hihats 90% of the time, with the other 10% being unemphasized which is kinda odd dontcha think) yea, thx. i gonna LN violin + note piano

its kinda late now and i can very much give pattern suggestions here and there but i dont really feel like im up for it right now; maybe you can pm me through the forums as a way for a reminder and all so id get back to you; this is if you yourself cant think of a better pattern given whatever i said before so (pretty sure you can)
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01:48:204 (108204|3,108204|2,108383|1,108383|0) - these LNs are horrible to play, dealing with simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them is not something i want to do every day, and not what i want to do in your map i didnt ask you to play this map if you dont like it. btw those are on different hands. sure, i didnt have to play it since i dont like it, but the map was offensive enough to me that i decided that i needed to discuss with you your intentions and your processes behind mapping, because it concerns me

they being on different hands does not change the fact that we, as players, are still "simultaneously repeatedly pressing a button and holding down them"
i can wager with you can on 168 bpm, a patterning that invovles such a quick switch between holding down a button and repeatedly pressing is not very fun to hit at all - of course you can deny this and say its fine, which is actually fine by me since a lot of things on here are somewhat intersubjective anyway
ok then gonna work on it,

this isnt much of a problem of it being unbalanced, or it being overmapped really - its about you understanding what is actually fun, and what is frustrating to play and nail down(or in plain english not fun) - and personally speaking looking at your sloppy justification for such patterning ("its my mapping style") i can say with 100% certainty you do not have the player in mind at all i have, and i always tested it and trying to make it good. - is that what you really want to do? second hmmmmm

theres always this sense of bias that comes along when you playtest your own map - i mean, its very obvious everyone at least somewhat thinks well of themselves so you might be biased on the point here

i was in a conversation with a rank 446 player with this chart actually (dont really want to pull names in here), and he himself has a good history of dealing with jack maps - to rephrase what he said,
" ending spikes really badly in difficulty, the LNs in the ending too make it hard to play"
perhaps theres no weight to this since i dont have the transcript but you can take this as you will, i personally cant exactly play the chart (a pass is viable at least) and to me the current patterning, even with the lack of playing ability, seems to ignore the essence of the music itself and carries a ton of artificial-smelling difficulty in it


have fun, i dont think i need to reply to you - i just need to hear what you have to say
kds or not i dont really care
this is too much offense and not constructive at all. i know i need variations, but give some suggestion. you came here just to attack me,
not modding my map. no kudos
alright, forgot that people took things too emotionally on here sometimes wop wop

*edit : btw yea thats my mapping style, idk whats wrong with me. can solve this problem? ye! just dont be so pissy and all because of how i apparently seem to be aggressive (guess its to be expected, everyone likes to be buttered up even in criticism) and ill be willing to discuss further with you on how to approach and deal with the problems i have with the mapset [/quote]

dont continue replying in the thread, itll clutter things up - reply to me (if needed) through pm

EDIT: just saw the transcript between you and rivals, ill be looking through it too if necessary[/quote]

rlly thanks for mod, this is very helpful, i reworked so much on last part. aww sorry i was too emotional. idk whats wrong with me ::<<

*note : gonna submit update after finished reworking some new patterns and hitsounds

edit : wew sorry i didnt read that "dont continue reply"
Abraxos

genkicho wrote:

rlly thanks for mod, this is very helpful, i reworked so much on last part. aww sorry i was too emotional. idk whats wrong with me ::<< thats fine, live and learn

*note : gonna submit update after finished reworking some new patterns and hitsounds

edit : wew sorry i didnt read that "dont continue reply" looo if theres anything you need clarification on the feel free to PM me and ill get back to you as soon as i can
always nice to see people taking feedback and moving forward with it well, good job on that - just keep it up ye
John Doe
From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

SHD
00:05:169 - Change the pattern so it is different as the one before and the one after it
00:07:311 - ^^
00:09:097 (9097|2,9097|1,9097|0,9454|1,9454|2,9454|0) - This tripples bouth sound different then the sound before, i would rearrange them
00:20:347 - LN untill 00:21:776
00:50:526 (50526|2,50615|3,50704|0,50704|1,50704|2,50794|3,50883|2,50972|1,51061|3,51061|2,51151|1,51240|0) - Please rearrange these since they seem pretty unbalanced, you mapped nearly nothing here at 0
00:52:044 (52044|3,52044|0,52133|0,52133|2,52133|1) - Made a mistake here? i think the double shouldn't be here
00:54:454 - Here should be a double, i think
00:55:347 - ^^
01:13:919 - Would map the long piano sound with LN's, but just a suggestion

Really good map, had nearly nothing to critisize. Good Luck!
Topic Starter
genkicho

LordTimeWaste wrote:

From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

SHD
00:05:169 - Change the pattern so it is different as the one before and the one after it
00:07:311 - ^^applied
00:09:097 (9097|2,9097|1,9097|0,9454|1,9454|2,9454|0) - This tripples bouth sound different then the sound before, i would rearrange them wait.. theyre same :/ .. or my speaker?
00:20:347 - LN untill 00:21:776 applied
00:50:526 (50526|2,50615|3,50704|0,50704|1,50704|2,50794|3,50883|2,50972|1,51061|3,51061|2,51151|1,51240|0) - Please rearrange these since they seem pretty unbalanced, you mapped nearly nothing here at 0 fixed
00:52:044 (52044|3,52044|0,52133|0,52133|2,52133|1) - Made a mistake here? i think the double shouldn't be here nah, the double same like here 00:49:901 (49901|1,49901|0) - 00:47:758 (47758|3,47758|1) - etc
00:54:454 - Here should be a double, i think applied
00:55:347 - ^^ fixed
01:13:919 - Would map the long piano sound with LN's, but just a suggestionwutt i mapped the piano

Really good map, had nearly nothing to critisize. Good Luck!
aw thx for mods <3 :>
Rizevim
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17:36 Rizevim: 01:12:907 (72907|2,73026|2,73145|2,73264|2,73383|2,73502|2) - pindah ke col 4 aj
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17:37 Rizevim: 01:16:061 (76061|2) - ga LN aj?
17:37 Rizevim: 01:18:204 (78204|1) - ^
17:38 Rizevim: 01:20:347 (80347|0) - ^
17:38 genkicho: ln nya buat ini
17:38 genkicho: 01:21:419 (81419|0) -
17:38 Rizevim: gue denger sih suarany enakan LN :/
17:38 Rizevim: well it's up to u
17:39 Rizevim: 01:47:669 - missing notes?
17:40 Rizevim: dari suara ny sampe ke 01:48:115 - :/
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17:45 Rizevim: 00:40:526 (40526|1) - pindah ke col1?
17:45 Rizevim: 00:40:526 (40526|0) - pindah ke col4?
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17:45 genkicho: 00:40:526 (40526|1) -
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17:53 Rizevim: 01:58:383 (118383|1) - move to col4?
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17:54 genkicho: 00:11:508 (11508|2,11508|1,11597|2,11597|0,11686|1,11686|3) -
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17:56 Rizevim: 01:04:454 (64454|2) - knp g dganti LN aj?
17:56 Rizevim: biar sama kyk 01:04:276 (64276|2) -
17:57 Rizevim: 01:04:276 (64276|2) - ctrl+j biar ena :V
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17:58 genkicho: 01:04:276 (64276|1,64276|3,64276|2,64454|2,64454|3,64454|1) -
17:58 genkicho: sama kyk 01:03:740 (63740|0,63740|3,63740|1,63919|3,63919|0,63919|1) -
17:58 genkicho: triple same column x2
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17:58 genkicho: 01:04:633 (64633|0,64722|1,64811|2,64811|3,64901|0,64990|1,65079|2,65169|0,65169|3,65258|1) -
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Topic Starter
genkicho

Rizevim wrote:

meonk
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17:27 genkicho: minijacknya dikit
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17:29 Rizevim: mo gue mod sekalian?
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17:30 Rizevim: gtau awkawk
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17:30 *genkicho is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029904 ICE - citanLu [Awakened]] <osu!mania> +Hidden |4K|
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17:34 Rizevim: awkawkkaw
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17:35 genkicho: mod aja wkwokkow
17:35 *Rizevim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029905 ICE - citanLu [MX]]
17:35 Rizevim: rip mx
17:36 Rizevim: 01:12:907 (72907|2,73026|2,73145|2,73264|2,73383|2,73502|2) - pindah ke col 4 aj
17:36 genkicho: gpp sengaja HAHA
17:36 genkicho: soalnya kalo ke col 4
17:36 Rizevim: awkawk parah lu
17:37 genkicho: ntar dikira 1/4 snap
17:37 Rizevim: susah itu awkawk
17:37 Rizevim: abis slider
17:37 genkicho: sama aja siii kwkwkw
17:37 genkicho: yawda ntar slidernya gw pindahin kwkw
17:37 Rizevim: nah :V
17:37 Rizevim: 01:16:061 (76061|2) - ga LN aj?
17:37 Rizevim: 01:18:204 (78204|1) - ^
17:38 Rizevim: 01:20:347 (80347|0) - ^
17:38 genkicho: ln nya buat ini
17:38 genkicho: 01:21:419 (81419|0) -
17:38 Rizevim: gue denger sih suarany enakan LN :/
17:38 Rizevim: well it's up to u
17:39 Rizevim: 01:47:669 - missing notes?
17:40 Rizevim: dari suara ny sampe ke 01:48:115 - :/
17:40 genkicho: wadu KWKWKW
17:40 genkicho: sengaja gak di map itu
17:40 genkicho: 1/6
17:40 Rizevim: oce
17:41 Rizevim: 02:04:186 (124186|1,124276|0,124320|1,124365|2,124410|3,124454|0,124499|1,124544|3,124588|2,124633|1,124678|0,124722|3,124767|2,124811|0,124856|1,124901|2,124945|3,124990|0,125035|1,125079|3,125124|2,125169|1,125213|0,125258|3,125303|2,125347|1) - re arrange?XD
17:41 Rizevim: ntah knp gue miss
17:42 Rizevim: wakwak
17:42 genkicho: mau di nerf tapi
17:42 genkicho: bingung mau diapainn
17:43 Rizevim: jahh
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17:44 genkicho: dah gw nerf wkkwkw
17:44 Rizevim: lanjut :V
17:44 *Rizevim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029907 ICE - citanLu [SC]]
17:44 genkicho: ea HAHA
17:45 genkicho: pusing dah tuu
17:45 Rizevim: 00:40:526 (40526|1) - pindah ke col1?
17:45 Rizevim: 00:40:526 (40526|0) - pindah ke col4?
17:45 Rizevim: ato col 2 jg blh
17:45 genkicho: tydac
17:45 genkicho: 00:40:526 (40526|1) -
17:45 genkicho: sama 00:40:704 (40704|1) -
17:45 genkicho: suaranya sama
17:45 Rizevim: hmm
17:46 Rizevim: agak ribet awkawk
17:46 Rizevim: ato gnti jd notes biasa?
17:46 genkicho: jgn wkkw
17:47 genkicho: uda bagus itu wkwk
17:49 Rizevim: dah
17:49 Rizevim: lanjut
17:49 *Rizevim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1042951 ICE - citanLu [SHD]]
17:49 genkicho: ea haha
17:49 Rizevim: dah bagus sisany
17:49 genkicho: nah mulai galau SHD kwkwkw
17:49 Rizevim: wkwk
17:50 Rizevim: 00:39:276 (39276|2,39276|0,39365|1,39454|0,39454|3,39544|2,39633|0,39633|3) - dafuq XD
17:51 genkicho: fixed wkwkkw
17:51 genkicho: ntah drmana bkn gw yg buat kwkw
17:51 Rizevim: awkwakawk
17:51 Rizevim: parah
17:53 Rizevim: 01:58:383 (118383|1) - move to col4?
17:54 genkicho: sengaja itu di minijack
17:54 Rizevim: hm
17:54 Rizevim: okay
17:54 Rizevim: lanjut
17:54 genkicho: sama kyk gini
17:54 genkicho: 00:11:508 (11508|2,11508|1,11597|2,11597|0,11686|1,11686|3) -
17:54 Rizevim: ya
17:54 *Rizevim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029904 ICE - citanLu [Awakened]]
17:54 Rizevim: bisa mod kgk ya
17:54 Rizevim: awkwak
17:54 genkicho: HAHA
17:54 genkicho: galauu
17:54 Rizevim: mapper nya aja gabisa pass :V
17:54 Rizevim: AWKAWKWAK
17:54 genkicho: liat ja patternnya
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17:55 Rizevim: pake no fail
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17:55 genkicho: gak :v
17:55 Rizevim: kirain
17:56 Rizevim: 01:04:454 (64454|2) - knp g dganti LN aj?
17:56 Rizevim: biar sama kyk 01:04:276 (64276|2) -
17:57 Rizevim: 01:04:276 (64276|2) - ctrl+j biar ena :V
17:57 genkicho: suara pianonya gak kedengeran
17:57 Rizevim: hm
17:57 Rizevim: masa sih
17:58 genkicho: 01:04:276 (64276|1,64276|3,64276|2,64454|2,64454|3,64454|1) -
17:58 genkicho: sama kyk 01:03:740 (63740|0,63740|3,63740|1,63919|3,63919|0,63919|1) -
17:58 genkicho: triple same column x2
17:58 genkicho: triple sisanya kepotong sama
17:58 Rizevim: anjeg wakawk akhir"ny
17:58 genkicho: 01:04:633 (64633|0,64722|1,64811|2,64811|3,64901|0,64990|1,65079|2,65169|0,65169|3,65258|1) -
17:59 genkicho: JGN LIHAT HAHA
17:59 Rizevim: parah awkawkwa
17:59 Rizevim: nyiksa lu
17:59 genkicho: seru nyiksaa
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18:00 Rizevim: oke :V
18:00 Rizevim: ez nm hd mod juga gk?:V
18:00 Rizevim: kemungkinan udh bagus sih :V
18:00 genkicho: gausa uda bener itu mah wkwk
18:00 Rizevim: oke
18:00 genkicho: wkkw ty
18:00 Rizevim: siapp
18:00 genkicho: gw off dl
18:00 Rizevim: post ya
makasi :*
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Hi from my modding queue TheNewBungping's 4Keys O!Mania GD/Modding Queue [OPEN]

1|2|3|4


Awakened
Pls change jack patterns to be more easier, especially 00:09:633 - 00:18:204 and 01:05:347 - 01:12:847 and on 01:22:490 - 01:31:061

00:30:526 - 00:31:061 Like this for it to be more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406606

01:12:847 - 01:13:919 If I were you, I would ignore piano sound here and only play drum

01:39:276 Remove note on 3

02:01:061 - 02:03:026 Pls go according to the heaviness like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406656 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406658

02:03:919 Remove note on 1 and 2

I'm gonna shoot 2 stars for this map, good luck on ranked :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
genkicho

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi from my modding queue TheNewBungping's 4Keys O!Mania GD/Modding Queue [OPEN]

1|2|3|4


Awakened
Pls change jack patterns to be more easier, especially 00:09:633 - 00:18:204 and 01:05:347 - 01:12:847 and on 01:22:490 - 01:31:061 i will think again bout dat

00:30:526 - 00:31:061 Like this for it to be more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406606 applied

01:12:847 - 01:13:919 If I were you, I would ignore piano sound here and only play drum dat polyrhythm part feels good trust me :D

01:39:276 Remove note on 3 01:38:561 (98561|2,98561|3,98561|1,98561|0) - 01:38:919 (98919|2,98919|3,98919|0) - 01:39:276 (99276|0,99276|2,99276|1,99276|3) - 01:39:633 (99633|2,99633|0,99633|1) - are supposed to be quads, but some are triple for some reason, that one is ok i guess cuz 12 1234 34

02:01:061 - 02:03:026 Pls go according to the heaviness like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406656 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8406658 that would make it easier than SHD >.>

02:03:919 Remove note on 1 and 2 for now i will keep it liek dat :D

I'm gonna shoot 2 stars for this map, good luck on ranked :) :) :) :)
thx for mods and stars :D
tatatat
Why do you have two backgrounds files? Don't include unused files in your mapset's folder.
Topic Starter
genkicho

tatatat wrote:

Why do you have two backgrounds files? Don't include unused files in your mapset's folder.
error maybe <?> i used to change the bg so many times
i will delete it later :D thx
-mint-
Hey~ I stumbled across your map probably from your GHOST map and I've just gotten to actually play through it now. Here's a mod :D
--please note that I am not very experienced with modding, and if this post isn't helpful, no kudos. can't guarantee quality, etc.

regarding spread (short comment)
Your SC diff is 4.76, SHD 5.07, and Awakened 5.36. These numbers are extremely close together with about .3 difference between each diff. i noticed a lot of stuff is copypasta (SC and SHD) so the spread really needs to be fixed - I would remove Awakened and buff SHD a bit in certain places but it's your map so you do what you think needs to be done :D

SHD(full mod)
let me just get this out of the way first- overall i'm not sure whether SHD diff should contain so much minijack with such low SR. i understand your intention of creating underrated maps but i thinks this is way too much. also, some of the minijacks are pretty unjustifiable...i know you want to #rankhardermaps but i don't think this is the kind of song to do that with... and the LNs near the end are far from comfortable and readable, too.. :') either remove the LNs completely or lower the HP

anyways, the remainder of this SHD mod will not take the SR into consideration at all~

and are you sure about the default hitsounding? ;-;?


00:02:669 (2669|1,2669|0) - why the LN placement here? there's no other sound that distinguishes this chord from the other ones
00:09:633 (9633|2,9633|3,9811|2,9811|3,9990|3,9990|2,10169|2,10169|3,10347|2,10347|3,10526|3,10526|2,10704|3,10704|2,10883|3,10883|2,11061|3,11061|2) - this is really uncomfortable for the right hand, consider switching the patterns up
00:11:508 (11508|2,11597|2) - i understand there is nothing else you can do here but this is extremely awkward, you could just do something like what you did here 00:13:383 (13383|3,13383|0,13472|1,13472|2,13561|0,13561|3,13651|1,13651|0,13740|3,13740|2,13829|1,13829|0)
00:11:597 (11597|0,11597|2,11776|2,11776|0,11954|2,11954|0,12133|2,12133|0,12311|0,12311|2,12490|2,12490|0,12669|2,12669|0,12847|0,12847|2,13026|2,13026|0,13204|0,13204|2) - the same as above except uncomfortable for both hands now
00:13:919 (13919|2,13919|1,14097|2,14097|1,14276|1,14276|2,14454|2,14454|1,14633|1,14633|2,14811|2,14811|1,14990|2,14990|1,15169|1,15169|2,15347|2,15347|1) - same problem
00:15:704 (15704|0,15794|0,15972|0,16061|0) - switch up the columns in which the minijacks occur
00:16:061 (16061|0,16061|1,16240|0,16240|1,16419|0,16419|1,16597|0,16597|1,16776|0,16776|1,16954|0,16954|1,17133|0,17133|1,17311|0,17311|1,17490|0,17490|1) - same problem as earlier
00:18:115 (18115|0,18204|0,18294|0) - very, very uncomfortable especially because of this 00:18:115 (18115|1,18204|1) consider moving this note 00:18:294 (18294|0) - to another column preferably on the right hand so that it's more comfortable for both hands to play
00:20:347 (20347|1,20347|3) - why the LNs let go at different times but in Awakened diff let go at the same time? consistency, you should only have one or the other
00:22:133 (22133|0,22133|3,22133|1) - in my opinion the hand clap sound should not be mapped with a triple/hand chord
understand the triple/hand at 00:22:490, but why a triple at 00:22:847? the rest of them are all doubles/jumps so i dont really understand the triple there or what sound its mapping that is not heard in the other chords.
00:24:186 (24186|1,24276|0,24365|1,24454|0,24544|1,24633|0,24722|1,24811|0) - uncomfortable for the left hand while the right hand doesnt do as much, Ctrl+H these two notes 00:24:722 (24722|1,24811|0) or change the pattern to be like at 00:26:776 but reflected
another triple at 00:24:990 that i dont understand =w=
and 00:27:133 as well =w=
00:27:133 (27133|1,27311|1,27490|1,27669|1) - this is awkward, change this - 00:27:490 (27490|1,27490|2,27579|0,27669|1) - to something like this 00:25:704 (25704|3,25704|2,25794|1,25883|2)
00:29:990 (29990|1,29990|3,29990|2,30079|0,30169|1,30258|3,30347|1,30436|3,30526|0,30526|1,30526|2,30615|3,30704|2,30794|0) - this part is uncomfortable for me especially due to the LNs that arent on the outside column, here is a pattern i think is more comfortable, for me at least https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591869
00:32:133 (32133|1) - move right one column
00:39:276 (39276|2,39365|1,39454|2,39544|1) - D:::: here's my solution for it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591901
00:39:722 (39722|2,39811|3,39901|2,39990|3,40079|2,40169|3) - right hand uncomfort! D: here's my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591918 but again, a triple at 00:39:990 that doesnt have any additional sound mapped to it
00:47:490 (47490|0,47579|1,47669|0,47758|1,47847|0,47936|1) - another uncomfort here
00:52:490 the LN section here is awkward. doable but awkward. maybe move the first LN to the right one column and it will be more comfortable
00:56:240 (56240|1,56240|0,56419|0,56419|1,56597|0,56597|1,56776|0,56776|1,56954|1,56954|0) - it's, i dont know, for lack of a better word- "lame" patterning here, switch it up a bit, like maybe the trill can be [14][23] instead of [12][34]
again, why the LN here 00:58:383 (58383|0,58383|1) and here 01:00:526 (60526|2,60526|3) and here 01:02:669 (62669|0,62669|1)
you can clearly hear the piano starting at 01:04:276, why is that sound not mapped?
the section at 01:05:347, see my earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:12:847 (72847|0,72907|1,72966|0,73026|1,73085|0,73145|1,73204|0,73264|1,73323|0,73383|1,73442|0,73502|1,73561|0,73621|1) - are you a piano player? XD i know that trills are common like this but please don't do this especially in 4K and at this speed, just remap this section with same layering but different pattern
01:22:490 same thing here, earlier comments regarding similar pattern
just to get this out of the way this section is very good patterning 01:30:704 (90704|0,90704|3,90764|1,90823|2,90883|1,90942|0,90942|3,91002|2,91061|1,91061|0,91061|3) :D
now this next section at 01:31:061 i dont understand why you are mapping those sounds with LN. you can barely hear it. you can hear other sounds much clearer, like the hi-hat, and the kick at 01:33:115, please remap this section without mapping the quiet string sounds
01:35:794 (95794|1,95883|0,95972|1,96061|0,96151|1,96240|0,96329|1,96419|0,96508|1,96597|0,96686|1,96776|0,96865|1,96954|0,97044|1,97133|0,97222|1,97311|0,97401|1,97490|0,97579|1,97669|0,97758|1,97847|0) - are you a monster XD (here is my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592066&#41;
01:39:454 (99454|3,99454|0,99499|2,99544|1,99588|2,99633|0,99633|1,99633|3) - hi tidek!! by the way i like this pattern a lot please do not change
01:44:990 (104990|0,105079|1,105169|0,105258|1,105347|0,105436|1,105526|0,105615|1) - please remap, see above comments
01:47:669 (107669|0) - im assuming you are mapping the violin/string sound, but it continues longer than the LN maps
01:48:204 earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:56:776 this part is completely undoable, change the LNs to regular notes
02:04:276 (124276|3,124276|0,124320|1,124365|2,124410|3,124454|0,124454|1,124499|2,124544|3,124588|0,124633|1,124678|3,124722|2,124767|1,124811|0,124811|3,124856|2,124901|1,124945|0,124990|2,125035|3,125079|1,125124|2,125169|1,125169|3,125213|0,125258|2,125303|1,125347|0) - who hurt you? D: this is super messy and cri and dan 9 material (here's my jumptrilly solution but i know you are not going to do this lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592167&#41;
maybe add an LN at the end to map the whooshy sound?

Awakened (short comment)
not really a full mod just a comment, im not going to lie here this diff is really messy and i dont think this is rankable at all. again as i said in the beginning of the SHD diff, this isnt the song to make #harder4kmaps with. based on what ive seen of your mapping style (this map and GHOST), if you really want a map ranked, choose an extremely dense (music-wise) song thats around 140bpm kind of like planet shaper. it would really fit your mapping style.i wish you luck :D
Topic Starter
genkicho

qqqant wrote:

Hey~ I stumbled across your map probably from your GHOST map and I've just gotten to actually play through it now. Here's a mod :D
--please note that I am not very experienced with modding, and if this post isn't helpful, no kudos. can't guarantee quality, etc.

regarding spread (short comment)
Your SC diff is 4.76, SHD 5.07, and Awakened 5.36. These numbers are extremely close together with about .3 difference between each diff. i noticed a lot of stuff is copypasta (SC and SHD) so the spread really needs to be fixed - I would remove Awakened and buff SHD a bit in certain places but it's your map so you do what you think needs to be done :D

SHD(full mod)
let me just get this out of the way first- overall i'm not sure whether SHD diff should contain so much minijack with such low SR. i understand your intention of creating underrated maps but i thinks this is way too much. also, some of the minijacks are pretty unjustifiable...i know you want to #rankhardermaps but i don't think this is the kind of song to do that with... and the LNs near the end are far from comfortable and readable, too.. :') either remove the LNs completely or lower the HP

anyways, the remainder of this SHD mod will not take the SR into consideration at all~

and are you sure about the default hitsounding? ;-;?


00:02:669 (2669|1,2669|0) - why the LN placement here? there's no other sound that distinguishes this chord from the other ones
00:09:633 (9633|2,9633|3,9811|2,9811|3,9990|3,9990|2,10169|2,10169|3,10347|2,10347|3,10526|3,10526|2,10704|3,10704|2,10883|3,10883|2,11061|3,11061|2) - this is really uncomfortable for the right hand, consider switching the patterns up
00:11:508 (11508|2,11597|2) - i understand there is nothing else you can do here but this is extremely awkward, you could just do something like what you did here 00:13:383 (13383|3,13383|0,13472|1,13472|2,13561|0,13561|3,13651|1,13651|0,13740|3,13740|2,13829|1,13829|0)
00:11:597 (11597|0,11597|2,11776|2,11776|0,11954|2,11954|0,12133|2,12133|0,12311|0,12311|2,12490|2,12490|0,12669|2,12669|0,12847|0,12847|2,13026|2,13026|0,13204|0,13204|2) - the same as above except uncomfortable for both hands now
00:13:919 (13919|2,13919|1,14097|2,14097|1,14276|1,14276|2,14454|2,14454|1,14633|1,14633|2,14811|2,14811|1,14990|2,14990|1,15169|1,15169|2,15347|2,15347|1) - same problem
00:15:704 (15704|0,15794|0,15972|0,16061|0) - switch up the columns in which the minijacks occur
00:16:061 (16061|0,16061|1,16240|0,16240|1,16419|0,16419|1,16597|0,16597|1,16776|0,16776|1,16954|0,16954|1,17133|0,17133|1,17311|0,17311|1,17490|0,17490|1) - same problem as earlier
00:18:115 (18115|0,18204|0,18294|0) - very, very uncomfortable especially because of this 00:18:115 (18115|1,18204|1) consider moving this note 00:18:294 (18294|0) - to another column preferably on the right hand so that it's more comfortable for both hands to play
00:20:347 (20347|1,20347|3) - why the LNs let go at different times but in Awakened diff let go at the same time? consistency, you should only have one or the other
00:22:133 (22133|0,22133|3,22133|1) - in my opinion the hand clap sound should not be mapped with a triple/hand chord
understand the triple/hand at 00:22:490, but why a triple at 00:22:847? the rest of them are all doubles/jumps so i dont really understand the triple there or what sound its mapping that is not heard in the other chords.
00:24:186 (24186|1,24276|0,24365|1,24454|0,24544|1,24633|0,24722|1,24811|0) - uncomfortable for the left hand while the right hand doesnt do as much, Ctrl+H these two notes 00:24:722 (24722|1,24811|0) or change the pattern to be like at 00:26:776 but reflected
another triple at 00:24:990 that i dont understand =w=
and 00:27:133 as well =w=
00:27:133 (27133|1,27311|1,27490|1,27669|1) - this is awkward, change this - 00:27:490 (27490|1,27490|2,27579|0,27669|1) - to something like this 00:25:704 (25704|3,25704|2,25794|1,25883|2)
00:29:990 (29990|1,29990|3,29990|2,30079|0,30169|1,30258|3,30347|1,30436|3,30526|0,30526|1,30526|2,30615|3,30704|2,30794|0) - this part is uncomfortable for me especially due to the LNs that arent on the outside column, here is a pattern i think is more comfortable, for me at least https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591869
00:32:133 (32133|1) - move right one column
00:39:276 (39276|2,39365|1,39454|2,39544|1) - D:::: here's my solution for it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591901
00:39:722 (39722|2,39811|3,39901|2,39990|3,40079|2,40169|3) - right hand uncomfort! D: here's my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591918 but again, a triple at 00:39:990 that doesnt have any additional sound mapped to it
00:47:490 (47490|0,47579|1,47669|0,47758|1,47847|0,47936|1) - another uncomfort here
00:52:490 the LN section here is awkward. doable but awkward. maybe move the first LN to the right one column and it will be more comfortable
00:56:240 (56240|1,56240|0,56419|0,56419|1,56597|0,56597|1,56776|0,56776|1,56954|1,56954|0) - it's, i dont know, for lack of a better word- "lame" patterning here, switch it up a bit, like maybe the trill can be [14][23] instead of [12][34]
again, why the LN here 00:58:383 (58383|0,58383|1) and here 01:00:526 (60526|2,60526|3) and here 01:02:669 (62669|0,62669|1)
you can clearly hear the piano starting at 01:04:276, why is that sound not mapped?
the section at 01:05:347, see my earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:12:847 (72847|0,72907|1,72966|0,73026|1,73085|0,73145|1,73204|0,73264|1,73323|0,73383|1,73442|0,73502|1,73561|0,73621|1) - are you a piano player? XD i know that trills are common like this but please don't do this especially in 4K and at this speed, just remap this section with same layering but different pattern
01:22:490 same thing here, earlier comments regarding similar pattern
just to get this out of the way this section is very good patterning 01:30:704 (90704|0,90704|3,90764|1,90823|2,90883|1,90942|0,90942|3,91002|2,91061|1,91061|0,91061|3) :D
now this next section at 01:31:061 i dont understand why you are mapping those sounds with LN. you can barely hear it. you can hear other sounds much clearer, like the hi-hat, and the kick at 01:33:115, please remap this section without mapping the quiet string sounds
01:35:794 (95794|1,95883|0,95972|1,96061|0,96151|1,96240|0,96329|1,96419|0,96508|1,96597|0,96686|1,96776|0,96865|1,96954|0,97044|1,97133|0,97222|1,97311|0,97401|1,97490|0,97579|1,97669|0,97758|1,97847|0) - are you a monster XD (here is my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592066&#41;
01:39:454 (99454|3,99454|0,99499|2,99544|1,99588|2,99633|0,99633|1,99633|3) - hi tidek!! by the way i like this pattern a lot please do not change
01:44:990 (104990|0,105079|1,105169|0,105258|1,105347|0,105436|1,105526|0,105615|1) - please remap, see above comments
01:47:669 (107669|0) - im assuming you are mapping the violin/string sound, but it continues longer than the LN maps
01:48:204 earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:56:776 this part is completely undoable, change the LNs to regular notes
02:04:276 (124276|3,124276|0,124320|1,124365|2,124410|3,124454|0,124454|1,124499|2,124544|3,124588|0,124633|1,124678|3,124722|2,124767|1,124811|0,124811|3,124856|2,124901|1,124945|0,124990|2,125035|3,125079|1,125124|2,125169|1,125169|3,125213|0,125258|2,125303|1,125347|0) - who hurt you? D: this is super messy and cri and dan 9 material (here's my jumptrilly solution but i know you are not going to do this lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592167&#41;
maybe add an LN at the end to map the whooshy sound?

Awakened (short comment)
not really a full mod just a comment, im not going to lie here this diff is really messy and i dont think this is rankable at all. again as i said in the beginning of the SHD diff, this isnt the song to make #harder4kmaps with. based on what ive seen of your mapping style (this map and GHOST), if you really want a map ranked, choose an extremely dense (music-wise) song thats around 140bpm kind of like planet shaper. it would really fit your mapping style.i wish you luck :D
uhmm wait i gonna reply.. but i havent checked this thread for 1 week, how did i give kudosu to you :(??? btw something is haunting me recently
Topic Starter
genkicho

qqqant wrote:

Hey~ I stumbled across your map probably from your GHOST map and I've just gotten to actually play through it now. Here's a mod :D
--please note that I am not very experienced with modding, and if this post isn't helpful, no kudos. can't guarantee quality, etc.

regarding spread (short comment)
Your SC diff is 4.76, SHD 5.07, and Awakened 5.36. These numbers are extremely close together with about .3 difference between each diff. i noticed a lot of stuff is copypasta (SC and SHD) so the spread really needs to be fixed - I would remove Awakened and buff SHD a bit in certain places but it's your map so you do what you think needs to be done :D okii :D i will try to buff SHD, but i wont remove awakened :(

SHD(full mod)
let me just get this out of the way first- overall i'm not sure whether SHD diff should contain so much minijack with such low SR. i understand your intention of creating underrated maps but i thinks this is way too much. also, some of the minijacks are pretty unjustifiable...i know you want to #rankhardermaps but i don't think this is the kind of song to do that with... and the LNs near the end are far from comfortable and readable, too.. :') either remove the LNs completely or lower the HP thx :> i think i gonna rework on HP and OD for all diffs, but i dont mean to rank hardest map as possible, i remapped many parts after abrax' mod, and i think the patterns are ok, and idk about that broken star rating :( i tried to make higher star, but i dont want to put weird pattterns

anyways, the remainder of this SHD mod will not take the SR into consideration at all~

and are you sure about the default hitsounding? ;-;? i need help at this one ;;;_;


00:02:669 (2669|1,2669|0) - why the LN placement here? there's no other sound that distinguishes this chord from the other ones same sound like 00:02:311 (2311|3,2311|0,2311|1) - but it's longer so i placed mini LN
00:09:633 (9633|2,9633|3,9811|2,9811|3,9990|3,9990|2,10169|2,10169|3,10347|2,10347|3,10526|3,10526|2,10704|3,10704|2,10883|3,10883|2,11061|3,11061|2) - this is really uncomfortable for the right hand, consider switching the patterns up so many ppl pointed that out xD okii i gonna fix that
00:11:508 (11508|2,11597|2) - i understand there is nothing else you can do here but this is extremely awkward, you could just do something like what you did here 00:13:383 (13383|3,13383|0,13472|1,13472|2,13561|0,13561|3,13651|1,13651|0,13740|3,13740|2,13829|1,13829|0) oh some pattern error there >.>
00:11:597 (11597|0,11597|2,11776|2,11776|0,11954|2,11954|0,12133|2,12133|0,12311|0,12311|2,12490|2,12490|0,12669|2,12669|0,12847|0,12847|2,13026|2,13026|0,13204|0,13204|2) - the same as above except uncomfortable for both hands now
00:13:919 (13919|2,13919|1,14097|2,14097|1,14276|1,14276|2,14454|2,14454|1,14633|1,14633|2,14811|2,14811|1,14990|2,14990|1,15169|1,15169|2,15347|2,15347|1) - same problem
00:15:704 (15704|0,15794|0,15972|0,16061|0) - switch up the columns in which the minijacks occur fixed :D applied for similar issues too
00:16:061 (16061|0,16061|1,16240|0,16240|1,16419|0,16419|1,16597|0,16597|1,16776|0,16776|1,16954|0,16954|1,17133|0,17133|1,17311|0,17311|1,17490|0,17490|1) - same problem as earlier
00:18:115 (18115|0,18204|0,18294|0) - very, very uncomfortable especially because of this 00:18:115 (18115|1,18204|1) consider moving this note 00:18:294 (18294|0) - to another column preferably on the right hand so that it's more comfortable for both hands to play i didnt realized datt :: fixed
00:20:347 (20347|1,20347|3) - why the LNs let go at different times but in Awakened diff let go at the same time? consistency, you should only have one or the other fixed
00:22:133 (22133|0,22133|3,22133|1) - in my opinion the hand clap sound should not be mapped with a triple/hand chord
understand the triple/hand at 00:22:490, but why a triple at 00:22:847? the rest of them are all doubles/jumps so i dont really understand the triple there or what sound its mapping that is not heard in the other chords. actually the sound is louder, theres something like clap (?) but not rlly audible,
if i map all double and single i think it would be boring and repetitive

00:24:186 (24186|1,24276|0,24365|1,24454|0,24544|1,24633|0,24722|1,24811|0) - uncomfortable for the left hand while the right hand doesnt do as much, Ctrl+H these two notes 00:24:722 (24722|1,24811|0) or change the pattern to be like at 00:26:776 but reflectedfixed
another triple at 00:24:990 that i dont understand =w=
and 00:27:133 as well =w=
00:27:133 (27133|1,27311|1,27490|1,27669|1) - this is awkward, change this - 00:27:490 (27490|1,27490|2,27579|0,27669|1) - to something like this 00:25:704 (25704|3,25704|2,25794|1,25883|2)
00:29:990 (29990|1,29990|3,29990|2,30079|0,30169|1,30258|3,30347|1,30436|3,30526|0,30526|1,30526|2,30615|3,30704|2,30794|0) - this part is uncomfortable for me especially due to the LNs that arent on the outside column, here is a pattern i think is more comfortable, for me at least https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591869 i moved them to 2 and 3 cuz they sound different from 2 previous LN sound,
00:32:133 (32133|1) - move right one column rearranged that part but different :>
00:39:276 (39276|2,39365|1,39454|2,39544|1) - D:::: here's my solution for it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591901 rearranged but a bit different
00:39:722 (39722|2,39811|3,39901|2,39990|3,40079|2,40169|3) - right hand uncomfort! D: here's my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8591918 but again, a triple at 00:39:990 that doesnt have any additional sound mapped to it fixed it ^
00:47:490 (47490|0,47579|1,47669|0,47758|1,47847|0,47936|1) - another uncomfort here fixed
00:52:490 the LN section here is awkward. doable but awkward. maybe move the first LN to the right one column and it will be more comfortable rearranged + anchors fixed
00:56:240 (56240|1,56240|0,56419|0,56419|1,56597|0,56597|1,56776|0,56776|1,56954|1,56954|0) - it's, i dont know, for lack of a better word- "lame" patterning here, switch it up a bit, like maybe the trill can be [14][23] instead of [12][34] rearranged but different
again, why the LN here 00:58:383 (58383|0,58383|1) and here 01:00:526 (60526|2,60526|3) and here 01:02:669 (62669|0,62669|1)
you can clearly hear the piano starting at 01:04:276, why is that sound not mapped?i cant map many sounds in 4k :<
the section at 01:05:347, see my earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:12:847 (72847|0,72907|1,72966|0,73026|1,73085|0,73145|1,73204|0,73264|1,73323|0,73383|1,73442|0,73502|1,73561|0,73621|1) - are you a piano player? XD i know that trills are common like this but please don't do this especially in 4K and at this speed, just remap this section with same layering but different pattern dont worry i testplayed it, feels good xD
01:22:490 same thing here, earlier comments regarding similar pattern
just to get this out of the way this section is very good patterning 01:30:704 (90704|0,90704|3,90764|1,90823|2,90883|1,90942|0,90942|3,91002|2,91061|1,91061|0,91061|3) :D thx :>
now this next section at 01:31:061 i dont understand why you are mapping those sounds with LN. you can barely hear it. you can hear other sounds much clearer, like the hi-hat, and the kick at 01:33:115, please remap this section without mapping the quiet string sounds i think it's ok cuz and ii love LN :>
01:35:794 (95794|1,95883|0,95972|1,96061|0,96151|1,96240|0,96329|1,96419|0,96508|1,96597|0,96686|1,96776|0,96865|1,96954|0,97044|1,97133|0,97222|1,97311|0,97401|1,97490|0,97579|1,97669|0,97758|1,97847|0) - are you a monster XD (here is my solution https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592066&#41; fixed, btw i couldnt open the pictt
01:39:454 (99454|3,99454|0,99499|2,99544|1,99588|2,99633|0,99633|1,99633|3) - hi tidek!! by the way i like this pattern a lot please do not change haha thats how i kill ppl
01:44:990 (104990|0,105079|1,105169|0,105258|1,105347|0,105436|1,105526|0,105615|1) - please remap, see above comments rearranged :> but i think anchors cant be fixed .. :(
01:47:669 (107669|0) - im assuming you are mapping the violin/string sound, but it continues longer than the LN maps i map the "ssshh"
sound, and i think the timing is right >.>

01:48:204 earlier comments regarding similar pattern
01:56:776 this part is completely undoable, change the LNs to regular notes some patterns fixed there, added noodles to buff SHD. actually those mini LNs hav pattern, but i messed up the pattern somehow, and i just fixed it :>
02:04:276 (124276|3,124276|0,124320|1,124365|2,124410|3,124454|0,124454|1,124499|2,124544|3,124588|0,124633|1,124678|3,124722|2,124767|1,124811|0,124811|3,124856|2,124901|1,124945|0,124990|2,125035|3,125079|1,125124|2,125169|1,125169|3,125213|0,125258|2,125303|1,125347|0) - who hurt you? D: this is super messy and cri and dan 9 material (here's my jumptrilly solution but i know you are not going to do this lol https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8592167&#41; nahh i hate jumptrill :(
maybe add an LN at the end to map the whooshy sound? i will reconsider it >

Awakened (short comment)
not really a full mod just a comment, im not going to lie here this diff is really messy and i dont think this is rankable at all. again as i said in the beginning of the SHD diff, this isnt the song to make #harder4kmaps with. based on what ive seen of your mapping style (this map and GHOST), if you really want a map ranked, choose an extremely dense (music-wise) song thats around 140bpm kind of like planet shaper. it would really fit your mapping style.i wish you luck :D thx, but i will try to rank something different and looks messy (actually they all hav patterns)
edit : harder4kmaps doesnt mean i map for sake of hard, but avoiding overrated map and avoiding mainstream map difficulty like 4* - 5* (underrated maps dont count..), cuz maps like P//S are rare >.> and about the song, i think it's ok now, the old awakened is.... satan's special gift
thx for mod :>>
eyes
sorry I forgot about M4M

I think offset is 1056 (apply this after mod)
Using scroll speed changes in Easy/Normal diff is unrakable

|1-4|
[EZ]
00:09:633 - change pattern for emphasizing the 1/4 kicks

00:18:204 - double

00:24:276 (24276|0,24990|0) - avoid

[NM]
00:34:097 (34097|2,34276|2,36240|2,36419|2) - these are different pitch, move second jack to another column

01:34:097 - maybe note here

01:38:561 - hmm triple in Normal is very questionable thing, also I don't see a reason for sudden triple, remove 1 note

00:55:883 (55883|2,56061|2) - move to 1 for balance

[MX]
00:20:347 - LN?

00:33:740 (33740|1,33919|0,33919|3) - should be a jack I guess

01:00:883 (60883|2,61061|2) - it should be a jack because you didn't jack these notes 00:58:740 (58740|0,58740|2,58919|1,58919|3) - 01:03:026 (63026|0,63026|3,63204|2,63204|1)

01:12:847 - wrong snap, it should be like this

Other diffs are fine but I think last diff is overmapped a little bit
-mint-
i think a BN gave the kudosu lol

also, SHD is a lot more playable now, nice :0 (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8706128)
Topic Starter
genkicho

eyes wrote:

sorry I forgot about M4M

I think offset is 1056 (apply this after mod) i think little difference doesnt matter, cuz other citanlu (7k ver) is 1050, not 1056 >.>
Using scroll speed changes in Easy/Normal diff is unrakable theres only 1 section with sv and i think the slowdown sv is ok as long as not some weird teleports >.>

|1-4|
[EZ]
00:09:633 - change pattern for emphasizing the 1/4 kicks for now i will stick to the LN =D

00:18:204 - double fixed

00:24:276 (24276|0,24990|0) - avoid fixed

[NM]
00:34:097 (34097|2,34276|2,36240|2,36419|2) - these are different pitch, move second jack to another column i will change it if other ppl say that again >.> the first two are different 00:33:740 (33740|0,33919|1) - but idk with other two 00:34:097 (34097|2,34276|2) -

01:34:097 - maybe note here nah >.>

01:38:561 - hmm triple in Normal is very questionable thing, also I don't see a reason for sudden triple, remove 1 note fixed

00:55:883 (55883|2,56061|2) - move to 1 for balance i think it's ok cuz theres also something like that here 00:56:419 (56419|3,56597|3) -

[MX]
00:20:347 - LN? yeaa

00:33:740 (33740|1,33919|0,33919|3) - should be a jack I guess thats the different pitch note i mentioned above

01:00:883 (60883|2,61061|2) - it should be a jack because you didn't jack these notes 00:58:740 (58740|0,58740|2,58919|1,58919|3) - 01:03:026 (63026|0,63026|3,63204|2,63204|1) i will reconsider it, but i think it doesnt matter >.>

01:12:847 - wrong snap, it should be like this i will stick to consistency here, cuz easier to read

Other diffs are fine but I think last diff is overmapped a little bit
okk thx for mod =D
Topic Starter
genkicho

qqqant wrote:

i think a BN gave the kudosu lol

also, SHD is a lot more playable now, nice :0 (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8706128)
haha yea i remapped some weird parts xD
HXJ_Crafter
wow the level spread changed quite a lot..... where is 6.5* I forgot
Topic Starter
genkicho

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

wow the level spread changed quite a lot..... where is 6.5* I forgot
Oo nerfedd (Awakened)
but still hard i want to diee
-mint-
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9012683

still can't pass the LN wall at the end of awakened lol
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