hello
[Oni]
00:57:059 - I guess you missed this snare sound,please add k to follow the sound.in overall of the map you emphasis them by k
01:15:059 ~ 01:17:392 - as I considered,you should add some 5-plets there to make it consistent 01:04:392 ~ 01:06:726 - you use one 5-plets in the section
01:12:559 - delete to make it consistent 01:23:226 and it can make flow is smoother
01:42:059 ~ 01:47:059 - hmm in the last section you should make those harder by change colors of notes example 01:42:059 - change to k dddkd k kkd
it's ok but it need more some consistently andconsider making some balance of spread
[Ayyri's Muzukashii]
01:31:392 - I feel triplet in the section is feel improper,you just using it in 01:30:059 (349,350,351,352,353,354) ,you could make spacing of triplets is look more balance and spread look more well,I suggest you delete 01:31:726 (358,359) - 01:34:392 (370,371) and make triplets 01:33:059 instead and 01:35:726 you can make triplets as you want
01:41:726 ~ 01:45:392 - same as before^
I'm always see eggs in almost all of map I have modded ._.
[Futsuu]
00:00:393 ~ 00:21:726 - please consider whice sound you following .as I heard 00:01:726 you have emphasized piano sound with low tone and 00:03:059 (5) - 00:04:392 (7) - 00:05:392 (8) - is same, so 00:08:226 (13,14,15) isn't good flow to follow another sound while this section following the piano with low tone
actually you just make d ddk flow is ready smoother and fit the piano
and for 00:11:726 (18,19,20,21) - considering from 00:11:059 change to d ddk k d instead to follow piano same as before (both are in 1/1 snap)
00:46:226 (90) - around there I'm always see you emphasized snare sound and following it so why you don't move to 00:46:392 to follow snare sound?
and 00:47:559 (92) move to 00:47:726 too
00:49:892 (98) - move to 00:50:059 to follow drum sound,as I considered in the diffi and overall,mainly sound you following is drum and snare,please consider making them to follow all of snare and drum sound please.mix all of sound is really unconfortable to play and kinda weird a lot
01:40:392 (229) - I know you just want to make it different but please change to d to emphasize snare sound please.you already made familat/same patterns from there 01:04:392
01:44:059 (239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - don't forgot to format them to follow snare,my suggest is from 01:44:392 change to like this
this diffi is need to improve about flow and whice sound you following
[Kantan]
01:27:059 ~ 01:29:726 - you should make balance of notes is more better and consistent,you should adding more notes same as 01:05:726 because those are same andconsistent can be better a bit
idk why this diffi is well than futsuu a lot lol
gl man,don't forgot to mod mine