果然按照Insane做的hard不像hard... 还是去重新做一个hard好啦?...
y u c a wrote:
hihi~
Hard
00:36:843 - try this?
00:59:485 (1) - add finish
01:09:390 (x) - add note here
01:09:674 (T) - need sound here imo T.T
01:32:881 - add whistle
01:33:447 (1) - add finish
01:42:504 (1) - ^
01:51:560 (1) - ^
01:52:834 (6) - start from 01:52:975 like this I remove the next note (7), or there's gonna be a hyper jump..for 7.00x+ O.O
02:01:466 (x) - add note
02:01:749 (1) - here too~need sound imo
02:23:258 (1) - add finish
02:36:843 (7) - try new combo here? so read easy imo O:
02:37:975 (1) - remove new combo
02:36:843 (1) - add finish and remove whistle?
02:37:409 (11) - if you add finish 02:36:843 (1). remove finish here
02:45:900 (1) - add finish and remove whistle
play楽しかったです!がんばれー OvO
[Hard]try to make them start at the same time?
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:862, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:41:938, ends on 02:00:617
[Normal]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:428, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:42:504, ends on 02:00:617
wmfchris wrote:
[General][Hard]try to make them start at the same time?
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:862, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:41:938, ends on 02:00:617
[Normal]
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:428, ends on 01:08:541
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:42:504, ends on 02:00:617
[Hard]
00:10:523 (3) - down 1 grid orz
00:15:334 (3) - flip vertically?
00:27:362 (4,5) - unexpected spacing You can put (2) from left to right, then (3,4,5,6) on the right of the previous red streams
00:36:419 (4,5) - unexpected spacing
00:37:975 (1) - considering that the first spinner's still under normal volume, try to add one timing line here to use normal volume for the spinner, then mute the end of the spinner?
00:51:843 (6) - up 2 grid
00:54:107 (5) - unexpected spacing
01:56:655 (5) - try to make it more symmetrical
01:57:646 (7,8) - remove whistle
02:02:315 - clap like the previous combo, otherwise remove clap at 01:58:919 -
02:13:636 - background claps are obvious. You might want to add some claps here
[Normal]
...
如果回到2年前我覺得這圖fix一點東西之後很不錯 ._.
可惜2012這世代容不下這種圖 orz
1/4的spacing在同一個combo中不要改, 那樣會打死玩家;normal的1/2跳也一樣 (漸變例外 不要突然大跳)
其他歉稍為改一下 不錯
[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
Hi, from my queue
Normal
[list][*]00:10:806 (3) - move the last slider point 2 grids down嗯.好像切线了
Hard
[list][*]00:24:674 (3) -放这里? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot085-7.jpg 嗯.
[*]00:51:560 (5,6) - 1/2 slider? nty
[*]02:18:872 (2,3) - 在这里放两个1/4的slider比较好... nty
[*]02:25:523 (1,2,3,4) - plz use slider...换了个摆法><这地方忘记改了
that's all
Good luck~
Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod for request
General:
- 0KB的.wav文件是不允许的,需要空白sliderslide的话直接找我要把 o.o其实我也不知道这是干嘛的 只是人家叫我加我就加了 于是删掉了。。
- 没用的.osb就干掉好了 done
- 我觉得Preview time可以放在49862会感觉更好一点?虽然感觉差不多不过就改了吧0 0
Normal:
- 怎么说呢……一眼看过去像是09年的图……直来直去的……感觉不是很好看……而曲子本身又不是那种节奏明快的音乐,似乎多用一些弧形slider会感觉更好一点?我会试图加一点 不过还是喜欢直来直去的slider
- 01:33:447 (1) - 感觉停在前面白线上会舒服点? 嗯好0 0
- 01:58:919 - Spinner从这里开始比较好吧? 待定0 0 不知道你从那里开始是为什么..总之我是从提琴开始的..
- 结尾后面的长度太长了,建议截掉吧。超出限制规定了吗?。总之反正我弄不来><所以就没管...
Hard:
- 00:22:126 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这儿应该做成一个5连+slider ok试了
- 00:27:221 (3,4,5,6,1) - 这种1/4突然变间距就太坑人了…… 我拉近><虽然没感觉 记得说同一个combo里面一样就行了的..
- 00:35:145 (3,4) - 改slider吧 O O之前都slider了所以这里不用
- 00:51:419 (4,5) - 坑人的1/4跳 拉近了
- 00:51:560 (5) - 另外我觉得这里用note比较好,然后删掉00:51:419 (4) - 和00:52:409 (8) - 保留意见
- 01:35:853 (2) - 感觉可以删掉 删了没啥违和嗯
- 01:57:928 (8) - ^ 我觉得既然上面是2个这里应该对称 0 0 另外你的理由?
- 01:59:060 - Spinner从这里开始? 同上我是从提琴音开始的
- 排版的问题……呃……和Normal一样怎么能说呢……感觉可以再好好调整一下什么的,整体的排版感觉不太好所以没法一处一处的说清楚……
差不多就这样了加油的说!
Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Lambda Delta ~
Mod time for my Queue ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions[General]
- Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.
[Hard]
- AR-1 Maybe much better with play.
- 00:58:339 (1,1,1,1) - Remove this too short new combo,really confused.
- 01:08:527 - Unsnaped KIAI time end line.
- 02:54:376 (3) - Try move to center.
[Normal]
- 00:09:662 (1) - Unsnaped note.
- 01:31:169 (1,2) - Maybe change volume 15-20%,I'm not sure 5% is unrankble.
That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~
Good luck ~
Ain053 wrote:
Hard
00:50:988 (3) - This jump is unexpected
Other that that, i cant find a problem, star!
popner wrote:
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.
Just suggestions:
[General]
Fine~
[Normal]
00:25:517 (3) - ds
00:25:800 (1) - ^
02:22:686 (3) - 尾部finish
[Hard]
00:26:932 (2) - ds
00:33:724 (5) - 有点跳了
00:37:842 - 绿线没有snap
00:45:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - 让它们在Y方向上等距
GL~
DarknessAngel wrote:
request from ★(o゚∀`从'∀゚o)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue ~
對不起非常晚來 ><Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to noticeHard
- 00:27:356 (4) - 我覺得刪掉whistle會比較好
- 00:49:998 (2) - 這whistle刪掉感覺好一點,這樣就變成了「漸強」的效果
- 01:23:535 (3) - 頭上的whistle用得不好,把這個刪掉,然後放whistle在相鄰的2個藍線上,這樣好聽很多
- 01:30:611 (3,4,5,6) - 4個whistle放一起讓我耳朵癢癢的,留下(4,6)的whistle就足夠了
- 01:42:073 (2) - 刪whistle,理由同[00:49:998 (2)]
- 02:27:497 (4) - 刪whistle試試,3連的whistle聽起來稍怪,有起伏會更好 ~
- 02:35:139 (1) - 這個note最好放遠點(到x = 80,y = 152),要不然會讓人以為點擊的速率一樣,結果miss了
- 02:36:979 (2) - 你懂的
- 有些跳的時機感覺不太對呢...
Normal
- 00:20:139 (3) - whistle刪掉會更好 ~
- 00:22:120 (2) - 距離很明顯不對,用正確的distance snap改好它吧
- 00:48:158 (3,1) - 這之間的距離太誇張了,你把[00:48:158 (3,1)]改成3個note是最便利的改法
- 01:00:611 (4,1) - 這之間的距離坑爹...
- 01:02:026 (2,3) - -.- ... 這之間間距很大喔
- 01:05:139 (3,4) - 兩個note都要調整
- 01:28:913 (1,2,3,4,1) - normal不要隨便亂跳好麼...乖乖地按照distance snap做啦-.-
很好,這一段很隨意地給他做個對稱呢orz...
要改的東西很多
你改完之後如果你需要的我能給予recheck
這首歌超好聽 !
加油 ~