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Arte Refact feat.3L - Spring Clour Door

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[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
来了
[EZ]
  1. 00:02:714 (1) - 不要NC，ez一般是两条大白线一NC
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - 0.72x 挪远
  3. 01:09:077 (5,1) - 不要叠，新手都看不懂的
  4. 01:13:623 (1) - 0.69x，挪远
  5. 01:25:896 (3,4) - 这个1/2忽略掉最好，1/2连续click很危险
  6. 01:28:850 (1,2) - 折返不要超过一次
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:078 (4,1) - 差了1/1拍，但你的间距还是和1/2似的，拉远一些
  2. 00:09:078 (3) - 拉远，不要强行stack
  3. 00:20:896 (1) - 出界啦 unrank
  4. 01:02:487 (3) - 可以删掉，只突出前面的音最好
  5. 01:31:350 (3) - 尾巴出界。
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太近了...Insane完全可以放开更多
  2. 00:08:055 (4,1) - 1/4都和1/2差不多远了，拉近
  3. 00:14:759 (4) - NC 体现重音，顺便拉远一些，把那两个重音孤立出来
  4. 01:02:032 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:05:214 (4,1) - 这个大跳 没什么道理啊...拉近一些
  6. 01:09:077 (4) - 尾巴出界。
  7. 01:13:168 (4) - ^
  8. 01:16:578 - 重音不要用滑条尾巴表达。
排列好极了，有些细节要注意，我就只摸你自己的难度了啊111
GL！
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
[ Easy ]
00:11:805 (1) - 纯粹建议你调整一下，不好看
00:13:168 (3,5) - 这里的遮挡不好
00:14:987 (5,1) - 然后一整段就这一个地方弄了一个重叠，我认为这样不好，没有整体性
00:25:441 (4,1) - 太近了
00:25:441 (4,2,3) - 然后类似这样的，看起来稍微有点混乱，我个人不喜欢QWQ
00:41:805 (2,3) - 咦，看起来怪怪的？都弄成直线滑条或者三点滑条吧？
00:55:441 (1,3) - 重叠不好，我建议你做的时候经常看看前后物件会不会有这种看起来不和谐的遮挡0 0低难度我自己觉得这种遮挡是最好不要出现的
01:04:532 (3,1) - ↑，多的这种类似的我不一一指出了，微调一下就OK
01:09:077 (5,1) - 然后这里重叠感觉是突然来了一个，而且是接着1/2来回这种比较短的滑条，EASY可能读图起来不大舒服吧。可以做成和这组一样的节奏01:15:441 (3,4) -
01:09:532 (1) - 还是不要NC了吧？前面都是两个大白线一个NC，这里显得有点突兀会不会
01:12:714 (5,1) - 太近了
01:28:850 (1) - 这种会被打掉的吧？来回这么多次
01:30:896 (2) - ↑，不过这个在结尾可能可以，前面那一个肯定不行

[ Soda's Normal ]
Soda老司机
00:08:168 (1,2,3) - 会不会太靠近屏幕边缘了一些？
00:09:987 (4,1) - 这两个的组合看起来不是很美观QWQ
可以的

[ Hard ]
00:14:078 (2) - ctrl+g?这里感觉跳的太大了一些
00:28:850 (2) - 这里并不是重音，这里不适合跳，也不适合逆FLOW的方式吧 :( 个人看法
00:45:214 (2) - ↑
01:09:532 (3,1) - blanket(不是特别明显，显得不好看的，我一般不挑blanket问题)
01:12:259 (2) - 跳这么大？
01:07:941 (5) - 这里应该有个跳，重叠首先不好读图，然后你特地在红线这里强调人声放滑条，顺着DS走怎么凸显你要的FEEL呢!
01:09:532 (3) - ctrl+g?
01:09:987 (1,2,3) - 这块的FLOW肯定是比较差的
01:14:532 (3,4) - 跳的真的非常大QWQ

[ Insane ]
00:06:805 (3,4,5) - 三连位置错啦，首先自创的三连不适合白线起头，基本都是红线起头的，然后这里本身就是红线00:07:032 - 这里开始三连的
00:14:759 (4) - 跳跃应该从这里开始
01:02:032 (3) - ↑
00:43:168 (3) - 跳太大啦，没那么强的音

[ ZCJG‘s Lunatic ]
00:38:850 (2,3,4) - 为何突然跟人声？前面不是都在跟鼓吗？
00:42:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这串节奏我觉得好像有点问题0 0首先三连自创了一个00:43:169 (2,3,4) - 白线起头，然后00:43:851 (6,7,8,9) - 这里是在强调类似那串风铃的音效，我觉得这里不如都跟上风铃那个声音，不然听起来显得有点杂乱
我是这样对的
01:16:123 (3,4,5,6) - 01:01:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这两串貌似都一个节奏来着，你要不要统一下？
01:27:032 (4,5,6,7,1) - 怎么说，就是前面基本单点都是在跳的，这里突然跟着DS走的感觉，打起来怪怪的。


就这样咯，加油=W=射个星给你
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
- Angelia

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ Easy ]
00:11:805 (1) - 纯粹建议你调整一下，不好看 √
00:13:168 (3,5) - 这里的遮挡不好√
00:14:987 (5,1) - 然后一整段就这一个地方弄了一个重叠，我认为这样不好，没有整体性√
00:25:441 (4,1) - 太近了√
00:25:441 (4,2,3) - 然后类似这样的，看起来稍微有点混乱，我个人不喜欢QWQ√
00:41:805 (2,3) - 咦，看起来怪怪的？都弄成直线滑条或者三点滑条吧？这里还算可以 就不改了吧 EZ还算漏音比较多的那种
00:55:441 (1,3) - 重叠不好，我建议你做的时候经常看看前后物件会不会有这种看起来不和谐的遮挡0 0低难度我自己觉得这种遮挡是最好不要出现的√
01:04:532 (3,1) - ↑，多的这种类似的我不一一指出了，微调一下就OK√
01:09:077 (5,1) - 然后这里重叠感觉是突然来了一个，而且是接着1/2来回这种比较短的滑条，EASY可能读图起来不大舒服吧。可以做成和这组一样的节奏01:15:441 (3,4) - √
01:09:532 (1) - 还是不要NC了吧？前面都是两个大白线一个NC，这里显得有点突兀会不会√
01:12:714 (5,1) - 太近了√
01:28:850 (1) - 这种会被打掉的吧？来回这么多次√
01:30:896 (2) - ↑，不过这个在结尾可能可以，前面那一个肯定不行√
基本上改了 玩了一次好像没有重叠现象
[ Soda's Normal ]
Soda老司机
00:08:168 (1,2,3) - 会不会太靠近屏幕边缘了一些？√
00:09:987 (4,1) - 这两个的组合看起来不是很美观QWQ没看懂
可以的

[ Hard ]
00:14:078 (2) - ctrl+g?这里感觉跳的太大了一些其实这地方跳的还算可以吧 并不算难
00:28:850 (2) - 这里并不是重音，这里不适合跳，也不适合逆FLOW的方式吧 :( 个人看法√
00:45:214 (2) - ↑√
01:09:532 (3,1) - blanket(不是特别明显，显得不好看的，我一般不挑blanket问题)这个我不知道怎么放
01:12:259 (2) - 跳这么大？√
01:07:941 (5) - 这里应该有个跳，重叠首先不好读图，然后你特地在红线这里强调人声放滑条，顺着DS走怎么凸显你要的FEEL呢!。。。没有改 我也不知道怎么改 改过来改过去还是这个好 果然太弱了吗。。
01:09:532 (3) - ctrl+g?√
01:09:987 (1,2,3) - 这块的FLOW肯定是比较差的。。
01:14:532 (3,4) - 跳的真的非常大QWQ√

[ Insane ]
00:06:805 (3,4,5) - 三连位置错啦，首先自创的三连不适合白线起头，基本都是红线起头的，然后这里本身就是红线00:07:032 - 这里开始三连的√
00:14:759 (4) - 跳跃应该从这里开始√
01:02:032 (3) - ↑√
00:43:168 (3) - 跳太大啦，没那么强的音√

[ ZCJG‘s Lunatic ]
00:38:850 (2,3,4) - 为何突然跟人声？前面不是都在跟鼓吗？√
00:42:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这串节奏我觉得好像有点问题0 0首先三连自创了一个00:43:169 (2,3,4) - 白线起头，然后00:43:851 (6,7,8,9) - 这里是在强调类似那串风铃的音效，我觉得这里不如都跟上风铃那个声音，不然听起来显得有点杂乱√
我是这样对的
01:16:123 (3,4,5,6) - 01:01:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这两串貌似都一个节奏来着，你要不要统一下？前面换了
01:27:032 (4,5,6,7,1) - 怎么说，就是前面基本单点都是在跳的，这里突然跟着DS走的感觉，打起来怪怪的。√


就这样咯，加油=W=射个星给你
:D 谢谢姥爷给我的呲呲

字的颜色弄错了希望姥爷不要怪我啊……
- Angelia
118 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
- Angelia

[Crz]Sword wrote:

来了
[EZ]
  1. 00:02:714 (1) - 不要NC，ez一般是两条大白线一NC √
  2. 00:26:350 (1) - 0.72x 挪远 远离了 但是没有0.72x
  3. 01:09:077 (5,1) - 不要叠，新手都看不懂的√
  4. 01:13:623 (1) - 0.69x，挪远√ ↑
  5. 01:25:896 (3,4) - 这个1/2忽略掉最好，1/2连续click很危险√
  6. 01:28:850 (1,2) - 折返不要超过一次
√
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:078 (4,1) - 差了1/1拍，但你的间距还是和1/2似的，拉远一些√
  2. 00:09:078 (3) - 拉远，不要强行stack√
  3. 00:20:896 (1) - 出界啦 unrank√
  4. 01:02:487 (3) - 可以删掉，只突出前面的音最好没删 因为这打起来比较顺
  5. 01:31:350 (3) - 尾巴出界。√
    [Insane]
    1. 00:04:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太近了...Insane完全可以放开更多√
    2. 00:08:055 (4,1) - 1/4都和1/2差不多远了，拉近√
    3. 00:14:759 (4) - NC 体现重音，顺便拉远一些，把那两个重音孤立出来√
    4. 01:02:032 (3,4) - ^√
    5. 01:05:214 (4,1) - 这个大跳 没什么道理啊...拉近一些√
    6. 01:09:077 (4) - 尾巴出界。√
    7. 01:13:168 (4) - ^√
    8. 01:16:578 - 重音不要用滑条尾巴表达。
√
排列好极了，有些细节要注意，我就只摸你自己的难度了啊111
GL！
谢谢姥爷! :)
Myazusa
21 posts
Joined August 2015
Myazusa
亲爱的楼主你好，你的摸已经送到，请来签收
song setup
  1. Design栏下的Enable countdown的勾建议去掉，因为此图offset为-922，所以勾了也没什么卵用

timing
  1. 91805,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0 开始 到 94532,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0结束，所有难度此段都为滑条段，所以除了第一根和最后一根绿线，中间的没什么用建议去掉（如果楼主觉得这样好玩可以保留）

Easy
  1. 并没有找出不好的地方

Soda's Normal
  1. 并没有找出不好的地方

Hard
  1. 00:04:078 (4) 与 00:04:532 (1) ，两个离远一些或者把00:04:078 (4)搭在00:04:532 (1)滑条的开头
  2. 00:41:805 (3,4,1) 这三个之间的followpoint建议大于九十度，可以提升你谱面的流畅度
  3. 01:19:078 大白线建议放上点什么。建议改法：把01:18:168 (3) 绕选择中心（selection center）旋转正十八度，01:18:623 (4) 绕选择中心旋转负三十三度，之后在时间轴 01:19:078 坐标（x32 y208）放单点
  4. 其他地方打得很顺手

Insane
  1. 建议吧00:31:805 (1,2) 凑一对，意思就是把00:32:259 (2) 掰弯
  2. 00:37:487 (1) 感觉不顺手，也不是不行。建议把00:36:805 (4) 滑条尾部指向00:38:168 (2) ，再00:37:487 (1) 绕选择中心旋转正两百度后和00:38:168 (2)滑条开头重合。（觉得麻烦不改也行，个人建议而已）
  3. 00:52:487 (4) 感觉不顺手。建议上下翻转一下，不改变原来的位置
  4. 其他地方打得很顺手

ZCJG‘s Lunatic
  1. 节奏很好，排版不是很美观，有种为难而难的感觉，虽然知道作者作图很辛苦但我还是要说，去掉最好或者重做

总体还是很好的，至少我都能DTSS笑，祝楼主能rank~
PhantomHunt3r
118 posts
Joined September 2015
PhantomHunt3r
hello, my end of the M4M from my queue, hope this helps <3

ZCJG‘s Lunatic
00:05:441 (3,4,5) - same spacing please
00:10:441 (2,3,4) - maybe drag this down???
00:38:623 (1,2) - drag 1 to the right to fix blanketing

Insane
00:04:759 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix star please
01:07:487 (4) - drag this up so the blanketing will be fixxed
Mikako
54 posts
Joined May 2013
Mikako
第一次帮别人模图，居然是m4m，激动
以下纯属个人意见

ZCJG's Lunatic
00:11:805 (1,3) - 这边两个笔直的折返滑条，给我感觉很敷衍，应该可以多一些花样
00:17:033 (5) - 这边人声都是三个音，所以只用一个滑条感觉有点浪费，因为00:17:259 - 这里有重音
00:18:623 (5) - 一个建议，可以换成两个连着的短滑条，提升一些难度
00:21:123 - 这里开始有一句kokoro的歌词，为什么要做成滑条尾呢？
00:21:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 连打放的有点牵强
00:30:441 - 我还是觉得像这种在白线上，而且有人声，为什么不做成可点击的呢
00:44:545 - 00:44:645 - 两条绿线没看懂
00:50:668 (3) - 既然要做这种遮盖效果的话，整体难度我觉得都可以提高一点
00:55:441 (1,3) - 这么长的折返滑条，真的好浪费啊
00:59:987 (3) - 这个滑条的结尾可以提前到01:00:328 - ，然后在01:00:441 - 这里下一个note
01:05:896 (6,7) - 这两个note之间的距离怎么和之前的一点也不和谐？而且这一段完全没让我觉得进kiai了
01:28:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一段则是，01:29:532 (4,5) - 这个跳距离迷之长
01:30:214 (1) - 滑条缩短，在结尾加note

总的感觉难度控制有点太不平均了

Insane
00:00:441 - 第一条绿线 是不是多余的？
00:00:896 - 这里我感觉nc一下比较好
00:04:532 - 这么明显的重音为什么要放过呢
00:06:805 (3,5) - 这边音效是还没下完么？这两个finish好突兀啊，当然音效方面我也不是很懂
00:07:714 (3,4) - 这四小拍改成“点空点点”，就是在00:07:714 - 和00:07:941 - 这里下note可能会好一些
00:09:078 (3,4,1) - 这一段感觉节奏跟的有点乱，感觉从00:09:078 - 到00:09:305 - 用滑条，00:09:532 - 00:09:759 - 下note会好一点，之后00:09:987 - 就随意了
00:14:987 (5) - 00:15:441 (1) - 00:15:896 (2) - 时间间隔这么长的三个点不用非得纠结在一个空间位置吧
00:16:350 (3) - 00:18:168 (3) - 也是滑条尾有重音的问题，我的想法是，节奏重音+有人声，放在滑条尾有点不好。后面还有挺多类似的，就不重复了
00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这一段和后面的都感觉滑条用的有点太多太单调了
00:51:805 - 这条绿线也是多余的吧
00:57:032 (1) - 之前别人给我讲过，最好少用红线起红线止的滑条
01:05:214 (4,1) - 这两个间距，和之前的相比，有点大的太突然了
01:24:077 (4) - 这个滑条放过了一条长白线，我觉得有点过分了

Hard Soda's Normal Easy
低难度我不太会摸，主要是不知道有什么注意事项，自己也不会做低难度的图，见谅XD

Others
感觉只能在节奏方面摸点东西出来，物件摆放啊flow啊啥的我都不擅长，这就很尴尬了
Gyro Zeppeli
94 posts
Joined January 2014
Gyro Zeppeli
M4M

Easy
00:31:805 (3) - 和下面一个滑条的距离是0.83，最好调整一下以防有问题

00:40:896 (1) - 这里和00:39:987 (5) - 对整应该会美观一些

01:25:896 (3) - 这里我是推荐拉到白线的

01:27:941 (2) - 这里需要DS，我一开始也误读了，或者做一些修改。

Soda's Normal
00:09:987 (4,5) - 这里DS好像不对？应该是1.0吧？

00:19:532 (2,3,4) - 这里也是，DS突然就拉大了。

Hard
01:14:987 (4) - 这个贴的太近了

I的打得都挺顺手，感觉做的挺好的。
其实有摸了点什么但是之前的摸看到有写了就算了

祝rank GL;3
sodarose
607 posts
Joined July 2011
sodarose
诗音你把我的难度改回去最开始我发给你的那里。你把我DS改乱了
Kobayakawa Sae
131 posts
Joined December 2013
Kobayakawa Sae
水摸

[Easy]
01:25:896 (3) - 这个滑条尾没对齐白线
01:25:896 (3,1) - 这里要不就不包 要么就包好一点 如果要包的话可以试试这样
01:27:941 (2) - 这个间距没对好
其他都没什么问题 就是中间有段感觉转来转去有点无聊

[Soda's Normal]
01:01:578 (5,6,7) - 这里我感觉节奏不是很好 我的建议就是在01:01:805 这里放一个1/2折返
其他都很好

[Hard]
00:04:532 (1) - 这里感觉容易读错，建议放远一点
01:01:805 这里有轻微的音，忽略掉可以，不过01:02:487 这里是没有音的 建议还是12好点

[Insane]
00:09:305 (4) - 这个节奏感觉有些奇怪 我认为是改成1/2slider+circle好点
中间只有一小部分用了clap的音效而其他大部分都没有 感觉有点奇怪 还是清楚掉好点？

[ZCJG's Lunatic]
00:36:918 (6) - 这段连打感觉有点勉强 去掉这个note感觉会好点

唔 大概就是这样的
实在是不好意思咕咕了这么久才来摸，这几天一直在做皮肤差点就忘了
图很不错！祝早日起飞
Good Luck :D
- Angelia
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- Angelia

[Charlie Lam] wrote:

水摸

[Easy]
01:25:896 (3) - 这个滑条尾没对齐白线 √
01:25:896 (3,1) - 这里要不就不包 要么就包好一点 如果要包的话可以试试这样 √
01:27:941 (2) - 这个间距没对好√
其他都没什么问题 就是中间有段感觉转来转去有点无聊不会做easy的我瑟瑟发抖 2333

[Soda's Normal]
01:01:578 (5,6,7) - 这里我感觉节奏不是很好 我的建议就是在01:01:805 这里放一个1/2折返 没改 不敢改
其他都很好

[Hard]
00:04:532 (1) - 这里感觉容易读错，建议放远一点√
01:01:805 这里有轻微的音，忽略掉可以，不过01:02:487 这里是没有音的 建议还是12好点增加打击感（

[Insane]
00:09:305 (4) - 这个节奏感觉有些奇怪 我认为是改成1/2slider+circle好点√
中间只有一小部分用了clap的音效而其他大部分都没有 感觉有点奇怪 还是清楚掉好点？ √

[ZCJG's Lunatic]
00:36:918 (6) - 这段连打感觉有点勉强 去掉这个note感觉会好点对面不让我改

唔 大概就是这样的
实在是不好意思咕咕了这么久才来摸，这几天一直在做皮肤差点就忘了
图很不错！祝早日起飞
谢谢
Good Luck :D
- Angelia
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Topic Starter
- Angelia

sodarose wrote:

诗音你把我的难度改回去最开始我发给你的那里。你把我DS改乱了
√ 等我找找

改回来了
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- Angelia
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- Angelia

momo azusa wrote:

亲爱的楼主你好，你的摸已经送到，请来签收
song setup
  1. Design栏下的Enable countdown的勾建议去掉，因为此图offset为-922，所以勾了也没什么卵用

timing
  1. 91805,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0 开始 到 94532,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0结束，所有难度此段都为滑条段，所以除了第一根和最后一根绿线，中间的没什么用建议去掉（如果楼主觉得这样好玩可以保留）

Easy
  1. 并没有找出不好的地方

Soda's Normal
  1. 并没有找出不好的地方

Hard
  1. 00:04:078 (4) 与 00:04:532 (1) ，两个离远一些或者把00:04:078 (4)搭在00:04:532 (1)滑条的开头 √
  2. 00:41:805 (3,4,1) 这三个之间的followpoint建议大于九十度，可以提升你谱面的流畅度 ？。。
  3. 01:19:078 大白线建议放上点什么。建议改法：把01:18:168 (3) 绕选择中心（selection center）旋转正十八度，01:18:623 (4) 绕选择中心旋转负三十三度，之后在时间轴 01:19:078 坐标（x32 y208）放单点没看懂……
  4. 其他地方打得很顺手

Insane
  1. 建议吧00:31:805 (1,2) 凑一对，意思就是把00:32:259 (2) 掰弯√
  2. 00:37:487 (1) 感觉不顺手，也不是不行。建议把00:36:805 (4) 滑条尾部指向00:38:168 (2) ，再00:37:487 (1) 绕选择中心旋转正两百度后和00:38:168 (2)滑条开头重合。（觉得麻烦不改也行，个人建议而已）重改了一个
  3. 00:52:487 (4) 感觉不顺手。建议上下翻转一下，不改变原来的位置不好改了 这里衔接前后的…… 然后我就没改
  4. 其他地方打得很顺手

ZCJG‘s Lunatic
  1. 节奏很好，排版不是很美观，有种为难而难的感觉，虽然知道作者作图很辛苦但我还是要说，去掉最好或者重做

总体还是很好的，至少我都能DTSS笑，祝楼主能rank~
谢谢大佬对我的呲呲
- Angelia
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- Angelia

Gyro Zeppeli wrote:

M4M

Easy
00:31:805 (3) - 和下面一个滑条的距离是0.83，最好调整一下以防有问题√

00:40:896 (1) - 这里和00:39:987 (5) - 对整应该会美观一些√

01:25:896 (3) - 这里我是推荐拉到白线的。？

01:27:941 (2) - 这里需要DS，我一开始也误读了，或者做一些修改。
√

Soda's Normal
00:09:987 (4,5) - 这里DS好像不对？应该是1.0吧？

00:19:532 (2,3,4) - 这里也是，DS突然就拉大了。

Hard
01:14:987 (4) - 这个贴的太近了
√

I的打得都挺顺手，感觉做的挺好的。
其实有摸了点什么但是之前的摸看到有写了就算了

祝rank GL;3

谢谢大佬对我的呲呲
- Angelia
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- Angelia

Mikako wrote:

第一次帮别人模图，居然是m4m，激动
以下纯属个人意见

ZCJG's Lunatic
00:11:805 (1,3) - 这边两个笔直的折返滑条，给我感觉很敷衍，应该可以多一些花样
00:17:033 (5) - 这边人声都是三个音，所以只用一个滑条感觉有点浪费，因为00:17:259 - 这里有重音
00:18:623 (5) - 一个建议，可以换成两个连着的短滑条，提升一些难度
00:21:123 - 这里开始有一句kokoro的歌词，为什么要做成滑条尾呢？
00:21:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 连打放的有点牵强
00:30:441 - 我还是觉得像这种在白线上，而且有人声，为什么不做成可点击的呢
00:44:545 - 00:44:645 - 两条绿线没看懂
00:50:668 (3) - 既然要做这种遮盖效果的话，整体难度我觉得都可以提高一点
00:55:441 (1,3) - 这么长的折返滑条，真的好浪费啊
00:59:987 (3) - 这个滑条的结尾可以提前到01:00:328 - ，然后在01:00:441 - 这里下一个note
01:05:896 (6,7) - 这两个note之间的距离怎么和之前的一点也不和谐？而且这一段完全没让我觉得进kiai了
01:28:850 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一段则是，01:29:532 (4,5) - 这个跳距离迷之长
01:30:214 (1) - 滑条缩短，在结尾加note

总的感觉难度控制有点太不平均了

Insane
00:00:441 - 第一条绿线 是不是多余的？
00:00:896 - 这里我感觉nc一下比较好 √
00:04:532 - 这么明显的重音为什么要放过呢√
00:06:805 (3,5) - 这边音效是还没下完么？这两个finish好突兀啊，当然音效方面我也不是很懂√
00:07:714 (3,4) - 这四小拍改成“点空点点”，就是在00:07:714 - 和00:07:941 - 这里下note可能会好一些√
00:09:078 (3,4,1) - 这一段感觉节奏跟的有点乱，感觉从00:09:078 - 到00:09:305 - 用滑条，00:09:532 - 00:09:759 - 下note会好一点，之后00:09:987 - 就随意了√
00:14:987 (5) - 00:15:441 (1) - 00:15:896 (2) - 时间间隔这么长的三个点不用非得纠结在一个空间位置吧√
00:16:350 (3) - 00:18:168 (3) - 也是滑条尾有重音的问题，我的想法是，节奏重音+有人声，放在滑条尾有点不好。后面还有挺多类似的，就不重复了√
00:26:350 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这一段和后面的都感觉滑条用的有点太多太单调了没法这人太鶸鸡
00:51:805 - 这条绿线也是多余的吧√
00:57:032 (1) - 之前别人给我讲过，最好少用红线起红线止的滑条↓↓
01:05:214 (4,1) - 这两个间距，和之前的相比，有点大的太突然了毕竟insane?
01:24:077 (4) - 这个滑条放过了一条长白线，我觉得有点过分了不过这中间这条大白线没音啊 而且这节奏有点怪 音在红线上

Hard Soda's Normal Easy
低难度我不太会摸，主要是不知道有什么注意事项，自己也不会做低难度的图，见谅XD

Others
感觉只能在节奏方面摸点东西出来，物件摆放啊flow啊啥的我都不擅长，这就很尴尬了
Yorita Yoshino
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Yorita Yoshino
排列重摆了所以只回节奏摸= = 前面他没问我直接帮我改了...

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

ZCJG‘s Lunatic

  1. 00:17:714 (6) - 建议在这NC一下，数字到10了
  2. 01:16:805 - 插上绿线，取消kiai，01:17:259 - 插上绿线，设定kiaitiming问题
  3. 00:22:259 (7) - 这个滑条建议结束在红线，不要蓝线√
  4. 01:31:578 - 因为前面跟人声，建议这里放圈，转盘推后√
  5. 00:44:532 - 01:02:259 - 01:31:578 - 绿线插的位置摆正，顺便kiai和前边的滑条变速没有变化，改一下。
√

[ Abhor ] wrote:

[ ZCJG‘s Lunatic ]
00:38:850 (2,3,4) - 为何突然跟人声？前面不是都在跟鼓吗？感觉这里的人声有点特殊...吧，我也说不上来
00:42:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这串节奏我觉得好像有点问题0 0首先三连自创了一个00:43:169 (2,3,4) - 白线起头，然后00:43:851 (6,7,8,9) - 这里是在强调类似那串风铃的音效，我觉得这里不如都跟上风铃那个声音，不然听起来显得有点杂乱前面那个三连我没发现是overmap- -
我是这样对的
01:16:123 (3,4,5,6) - 01:01:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这两串貌似都一个节奏来着，你要不要统一下？好像不是吧....仔细听了几遍
01:27:032 (4,5,6,7,1) - 怎么说，就是前面基本单点都是在跳的，这里突然跟着DS走的感觉，打起来怪怪的。

momo azusa wrote:

ZCJG‘s Lunatic
  1. 节奏很好，排版不是很美观，有种为难而难的感觉，虽然知道作者作图很辛苦但我还是要说，去掉最好或者重做
嘛，本来自己也不满意，就重摆了

[Charlie Lam] wrote:

[ZCJG's Lunatic]
00:36:918 (6) - 这段连打感觉有点勉强 去掉这个note感觉会好点 跟的风铃啊....
没及时回摸，抱歉 :(
Yorita Yoshino
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Yorita Yoshino
最近有点忙ORZ
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Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
as 激光's request

[ZGJG's insane]
http://puu.sh/qWjNI/7494afa75f.jpg
玩起来还不错。

00:36:351 (3) - 这附近这样好一点，这长串怪怪的
http://puu.sh/qWjWr/038706038f.jpg

00:55:441 (1,2) - 强迫症要疯啦

01:24:078 (6) - 1/2滑条？后面那个钢琴还是不太想漏掉的呢

不错
Yorita Yoshino
370 posts
Joined April 2014
Yorita Yoshino

Lily Bread wrote:

as 激光's request

[ZGJG's insane]
http://puu.sh/qWjNI/7494afa75f.jpg
玩起来还不错。

00:36:351 (3) - 这附近这样好一点，这长串怪怪的跟的风铃，不太想动.....
http://puu.sh/qWjWr/038706038f.jpg

00:55:441 (1,2) - 强迫症要疯啦指overlap吗，已修正

01:24:078 (6) - 1/2滑条？后面那个钢琴还是不太想漏掉的呢怎么说呢.....我觉得这里需要一个停顿

不错 thx~
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neonat
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neonat
你好。我对英文比较熟，所以我用英文mod.

General

For now just some general stuff I think you need to go through the errors, clean things up.

I think you need to check all the difficulties for the inconsistencies. Look at the AiMod, there are inconsistent tags, unsnapped kiai timings, inconsistent audio preview point as well.

Generally, I think there is some work to do on the hitsounding. Using Easy as an example, the use of the whistle is odd and doesn't really follow a certain pattern it seems, especially when suddenly everything is using whistles, like 00:12:714 (2,3,4) - As of now, the claps are consistent throughout the whole song, which is good for consistency, but you could diversify the effects in the song. Furthermore, I think using claps on the 2nd and 4th beat of each 4/4 phrasing would be better? It would be on the snare drum in the song (eg. 00:05:896 and 00:06:805 - ) Use some finishes as well, for stronger emphasis, for places such as 00:15:441 - 00:44:532 and 01:02:714 to name a few places.

Not sure if it's more common in other places or difficulties, but in Easy 00:26:350 (1) - is not snapped right

In general for Easy, almost the whole thing is in 1/1 beats, which is pretty monotone, and there isn't much variety, I think you can make the rhythm more suitable for the song while keeping it simple. Also the ending compared to the rest is a really big difference in difficulty, it's the only place with the 1/2 beats in the difficulty.


For now, I think try and clear up the errors between the difficulties, as well as work on the hitsounds.

加油！
- Angelia
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Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
- Angelia

neonat wrote:

你好。我对英文比较熟，所以我用英文mod. ok,my english very good :D

General

For now just some general stuff I think you need to go through the errors, clean things up.

I think you need to check all the difficulties for the inconsistencies. Look at the AiMod, there are inconsistent tags, unsnapped kiai timings, inconsistent audio preview point as well. Thank you very much This is the place where I didn't pay attention

Generally, I think there is some work to do on the hitsounding. Using Easy as an example, the use of the whistle is odd and doesn't really follow a certain pattern it seems, especially when suddenly everything is using whistles, like 00:12:714 (2,3,4) - As of now, the claps are consistent throughout the whole song, which is good for consistency, but you could diversify the effects in the song. Furthermore, I think using claps on the 2nd and 4th beat of each 4/4 phrasing would be better? It would be on the snare drum in the song (eg. 00:05:896 and 00:06:805 - ) Use some finishes as well, for stronger emphasis, for places such as 00:15:441 - 00:44:532 and 01:02:714 to name a few places. oh..This point I have to change again :)

Not sure if it's more common in other places or difficulties, but in Easy 00:26:350 (1) - is not snapped right 咦!这里我还真没注意到谢谢谢谢谢谢谢 :o

In general for Easy, almost the whole thing is in 1/1 beats, which is pretty monotone, and there isn't much variety, I think you can make the rhythm more suitable for the song while keeping it simple. Also the ending compared to the rest is a really big difference in difficulty, it's the only place with the 1/2 beats in the difficulty. ok


For now, I think try and clear up the errors between the difficulties, as well as work on the hitsounds. 行,我下去再努力一下

加油！

炒鸡特别感谢!super thx! :P
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