1. Easy (1.41 stars, 126 notes)
2. Hard (2.82 stars, 305 notes)
3. Insane (3.65 stars, 387 notes)
4. Moon Snow (3.93 stars, 396 notes)
5. Normal (1.82 stars, 203 notes)

Asahina Momoko wrote:

i think i did some hitsound suggestions xd

2016-07-08 -Nanaka-:これ青線引いてるとこピアノ音ずれてんだけど合うやつもってない？
2016-07-08 Asahina Momoko:あるけどなんか音が伸びてるのしかないからカットしなきゃいけないかも
2016-07-08 -Nanaka-:全然大丈夫！むしろ伸びてるほうがよさそう
2016-07-08 Asahina Momoko:00:33:124 (1,2) - の頭にF# 00:55:155 (4) - にG 00:55:389 (1) - F#
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:01:12:030 (2) - ここSC21にかえてもいいかも、バックの音が22でボーカルが21だから01:11:092 (3,1) - でバックの音拾ってるから統一なら22、音の大きいボーカルに合わせるなら21
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:01:12:499 (1) - 内SC55 01:15:545 (5) - ここもSC55 01:16:483 (1,2,3) - SC56 01:17:186 (1) - SC57 01:17:420 (2) - SC58 01:17:655 (3) - SC57
2016-07-10 -Nanaka-:ここ違和感あるくない？
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:01:36:170 (3,4) - 音は間違ってないんだけど、前後にピアノ音ないからボーカルの音の中で浮いた形で聞こえるのが違和感の原因かな？これためしてみて
http://puu.sh/q3wbO/6891ccd394.png
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:01:41:561 (1) - SC59 01:48:592 (3) - SC29 01:57:499 (1) - SC26 02:06:639 (1) - ここから1オクターブ上がるのは不自然かな、SC60と61使いつつ下のがいいと思う
http://puu.sh/q3wey/75ad91034e.png
http://puu.sh/q3weZ/fc8648e05e.png
2016-07-10 -Nanaka-:隊長～画像の通りにしたら02:07:577 - が変でありまする
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:バックのピアノ音と一致させてるけど主旋律のフルートみたいなのに合わせたければ変えなきゃダメだね～、音はあってるよ
2016-07-10 -Nanaka-:なるほど、フルートだと新しいファイルいる系？
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:多分いらないと思う
2016-07-10 -Nanaka-:02:07:577 - 61　02:08:045 - 60でいい感じになった！ありがとー！
2016-07-10 Asahina Momoko:ほーい！

1. 00:04:999 (1,3) - blanket this
2. 00:59:139 (4) - do i have a feeling that the piano note is kinda wrong on this note?

1. 00:43:202 (3) - same thing about the piano note reason
2. 00:54:452 (2) - ^
3. 00:59:139 (4) - ^
4. 01:19:764 (3) - use the same note as 01:19:295 (1) - due to a same vocal pitch

lit120 wrote:

[yuki]

1. 00:04:999 (1,3) - blanket this
   np
2. 00:59:139 (4) - do i have a feeling that the piano note is kinda wrong on this note?
   We do not think that it is wrong, Can you show a sound?

[insane]

1. 00:43:202 (3) - same thing about the piano note reason ^
2. 00:54:452 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:59:139 (4) - ^ ^
4. 01:19:764 (3) - use the same note as 01:19:295 (1) - due to a same vocal pitch
   Is intentional do not have any problem

yo better check on those piano notes, cuz i have a feeling that sth's not right with the notes :/

nothing much, kinda flawless enough =w=

SPOILER

lit120 wrote:

Tbh, i couldn't find anything that is rly suspicious and somehow it seems rly ok and playable for me, so there's no need to feel a bit dissapoint or sth, ya know...

Will probably look at it again one more time

• 
  [General]
  

1. easy and normal have to many unnecessary greenline i'm not sure it's fine.maybe you should check it out

1. 00:01:249 - and 00:04:999 - add finish sounds better,because only whistle is not enough,imo.
2. 00:08:749 - and 00:12:499 - soft-hitfinish22
3. 00:03:827 (3) - how about 256,192
4. 01:22:694 - add note triplet like 01:20:702 (3,4,5) - ?

1. moon snow means? yuzuki?
2. 00:32:655 (2) - move a bit right
3. 01:16:014 (7) - nc ? consistent with 01:17:889 (1) -

-Yuzuriha wrote:

From game chat ~


Normal


00:03:124 (3) - 00:04:530 (4) - と　00:02:186 (2) - 　の配置場所から考えて
このような形の反り方が妥当だと思います
ちょっとどこの事いってるのか分からなかったです
00:03:124 (3) - 　こういう形にしたかったのは分かります
https://gyazo.com/160c30d6b6b9b8faf6bfd267798bae1c
この形は意図的で画像の曲げ方は頭にありませんでした

00:06:874 (3) - ^^^ 上同様の感想です
^

00:17:186　ここにピアノの音があるので、スライダーでうめるはもったいないと思います
ここはピアノ取るより手前のフルートで伸ばして上げた方が分かりやすいかなって、ピアノ意見が多いようであれば変更します
00:19:764　ここにピアノの音があります。　ここにnoteが必要だと思います
私には聞こえません


Hard


hard はとくにありません


Insane


00:05:936 (3,2,3,1,2) - 　stackするところと　しないところの区別がいまいちよくわからないです
うーん、流れに沿ってるので読みにくいという事は無いと思います


moon snow


01:18:827 (1) - 　ここにNCいるのかなー　って感じです
なくてもいいんですが手前ピアノで3.3.3で最後Jumpなので入れてます
01:22:577 (2,3,4,5,6) - 　同じような音程＆リズムなので、DSもばらけないで等間隔で置いたほうがたたきやすいです
ボーカルのトーン的には問題ないように思います、個人的に叩きやすい配置です
01:38:983 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 　突然ですね。　今までのように配置したほうがいいと思います
ここに関しては絶賛意見募集中なのでもう少し様子見ます

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以上でmod終わります

すごい　いっぱい緑線あって時間かかってそうですね

お疲れ様です

ありがとうございました

Settia wrote:

チャットから！


[Easy]
01:01:249 (1) - Whistle要らないと思います
多分終点ですよね？削除しました
01:29:842 (3) - WhistleよりClapのが合うと思います
これはナイスキャッチです、始点は入っていたので01:30:780 - に全Diff追加しました
02:06:170 (2) - Finish要らないと思います
これはDなので入ります、Backの低音をカバーしてます
[Normal]
00:23:983 - 00:24:217 - 00:24:920 - 00:27:264 (5) - 　Finish要らないと思います
00:23:983 - D　00:24:217 - これはFinishですが音はClapファイルです　00:24:920 - 00:27:264 (5) - Dなので不要ではありません
01:01:952 - ここのWhisle 01:02:186 (2) - こっちに移動させたほうが曲にも合ってると思います
たしかにE同様修正、Hから↑は音の量からして違ったつけ方なのでKeepで！
01:15:545 - Finish要らないと思います
Dなのでいります！
[Hard]
言うことないです～
[Insane]
00:15:545 (5) - ここのサークル 00:14:139 (1,2) - ここと同じようにサークルのDS合わせてはどうでしょう？
00:14:139 - と00:15:077 - で加速速度が違うのでKeepです
01:13:202 (2,3) - サークル2つ置くよりスライダー置いたほうがボーカルにも合ってて良いんじゃないかなと思いました
うーん、01:13:202 - はVocal以外音がない所を始点に持ってき叩かせといて01:13:436 - の強い音を叩かせないのは個人的に違うと思います（気持ちよくない感じ？）低Diffならありだと思いますがKeepで
01:40:389 (5) - ここのサークル消して 01:40:624 - このスライダー持ってきたほうがボーカルに合ってると思いました
これ作ってる時もかなり迷ったとこなんですが01:40:624 - 無視するには大きいかなぁって感じですかね、例えば01:40:389 - からFinish消した（私には浮いて聞こえるため）1/1置いたとしてなにか物足りないというか曲に対して負けてる感じになりませんか？01:38:749 - 01:39:686 -01:40:624 - この3Fnishで1セットというかHard見てもらえると分かりやすいかなと思います

[moon snow]
00:00:780 (1,2) - キックスライダー2つ置くよりInsaneと同じ様に3/4スライダー1つのほうがいいと思いました
ここも迷ってます1/8リピートだと少しOverですしIと同じじゃ弱いというか、もう少し意見亜妻てみます
01:09:452 (3) - Add Whisle?
始点には入ってるので終点にN追加

ピアノの音がすごく良かったです～
ランク頑張ってください！

ヒットサウンドの見逃しや低Diffでの調整助かりました！
ありがとうございました

Pururut wrote:

hi o/

im come to constitute sp 谢谢你啊，我非常爱你

some suggestions

• 
  [General]
  

1. easy and normal have to many unnecessary greenline i'm not sure it's fine.maybe you should check it out
   Because this is not unrankable, I want to leave you unattended, tbh Very troublesome lol

[Insane]

1. 00:01:249 - and 00:04:999 - add finish sounds better,because only whistle is not enough,imo.
   uuu un fit for me;
2. 00:08:749 - and 00:12:499 - soft-hitfinish22
   A sound from a whistle changes
3. 00:03:827 (3) - how about 256,192
   too far,The music really calm, not jump here
4. 01:22:694 - add note triplet like 01:20:702 (3,4,5) - ?
   I do not match a vocal & lyric ふ、か、く、ふ、か、く;;

[moon snow]

1. moon snow means? yuzuki?
   yes!! tbh The good diff name does not hit lol
2. 00:32:655 (2) - move a bit right
   fix
3. 01:16:014 (7) - nc ? consistent with 01:17:889 (1) -
   okay

hitsounds sugoi :>
i can't find anymore

Thanks prururururururururururut chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaann

asumin9 wrote:

Great song and nice map !

緑線すごいっす

2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: 音が違うってこと？？
2016-07-08 15:03 -Nanaka-: うんずれてない？
2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: 緑線やばいなｗ
2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: 確かにちょっと尾と違うね
2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: 音
2016-07-08 15:03 -Nanaka-: だよね
2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: でも声の音にあわせてんのか
2016-07-08 15:03 asumin9: それとも違うのかがなぞ
2016-07-08 15:04 -Nanaka-: ピアノないとこは声に合わせてる
2016-07-08 15:04 asumin9: なるほどね
2016-07-08 15:04 -Nanaka-: 作曲できる人こういうの強そう
2016-07-08 15:05 asumin9: 最初の　そらから～のとこは
2016-07-08 15:05 asumin9: 半音ずれてるな
2016-07-08 15:05 -Nanaka-: 半音低い？
2016-07-08 15:05 asumin9: 高い
2016-07-08 15:05 -Nanaka-: 低くすればいいの？
2016-07-08 15:05 asumin9: 歌のほうがファ＃なんだけど
2016-07-08 15:06 asumin9: ぴあののおとかソ
2016-07-08 15:06 asumin9: たぶんね
2016-07-08 15:06 asumin9: ｗｗｗ
2016-07-08 15:07 -Nanaka-: やっぱこれ音が足りないかなぁ
2016-07-08 15:07 -Nanaka-: どれもあわないｗｗｗ
2016-07-08 15:08 asumin9: ｗｗｗ
2016-07-08 15:08 -Nanaka-: ふぁを拾ってくればいいの？
2016-07-08 15:08 asumin9: ふぁのシャープ
2016-07-08 15:08 asumin9: ファの半音上のおと
2016-07-08 15:08 -Nanaka-: 00:33:124 - ここ？
2016-07-08 15:09 asumin9: うぬ
2016-07-08 15:09 -Nanaka-: なるほそ00:55:389 - ここは？
2016-07-08 15:10 asumin9: ちょいつぎわくとるね
2016-07-08 15:10 asumin9: 音はちがうっぽいな
2016-07-08 15:10 asumin9: 歌はさっきと同じ音っぽい
2016-07-08 15:10 asumin9: ファ＃
2016-07-08 15:12 asumin9: さっきと同じみたいだ
2016-07-08 15:12 asumin9: ピアノの音はソで　歌が半音低いファ＃
2016-07-08 15:13 -Nanaka-: 　おお
2016-07-08 15:13 -Nanaka-: ありがとおお
2016-07-08 15:13 asumin9: いえいえ
2016-07-08 15:13 asumin9: なんかピアノ弾けるソフトみたいなんで確認くらいしかできないんだけどねｗ
2016-07-08 15:13 asumin9: 実際に鳴らしてみないとわからんｗ
2016-07-08 15:14 -Nanaka-: またわかんなかったら聞くのだ
2016-07-08 15:14 asumin9: おｋ
2016-07-08 15:15 -Nanaka-: MP3取ると結構不協和音だよねｗｗｗ
2016-07-08 15:15 asumin9: でもあれでもありなかんじしたけどなｗ
2016-07-08 15:15 -Nanaka-: そうなんだよね
2016-07-08 15:15 -Nanaka-: 取ると結構はずれてる
2016-07-08 15:16 asumin9: なるほど
2016-07-08 15:21 -Nanaka-: もうあすみんにひいてもらってそれ使おう()
2016-07-08 15:21 asumin9: なんでｗｗ
2016-07-08 15:23 asumin9: 自分の使ってるソフト　弾いたやつ録音できるみたいだけど　なんかうまくいかんくて
2016-07-08 15:23 asumin9: しらん
2016-07-08 15:23 -Nanaka-: とかいいつつー？
2016-07-08 15:24 asumin9: ｗ
2016-07-08 15:24 asumin9: うまくいかなかったんです。
2016-07-08 15:24 -Nanaka-: 残念（◞‸◟）
2016-07-09 13:50 -Nanaka-: ふぁ＃びんごだった！
2016-07-09 13:51 asumin9: yeah
2016-07-09 13:51 -Nanaka-: あざっす
2016-07-09 13:51 asumin9: いえいえーー
2016-07-09 13:51 asumin9: またなんかあったらどうぞ(๑◔‿◔๑)
2016-07-09 13:52 -Nanaka-: そのかおかわいい(๑◔‿◔๑)
2016-07-09 13:54 asumin9: (๑◔‿◔๑)いいでしょ
2016-07-09 14:42 -Nanaka-: あすにゃんあすにゃん
2016-07-09 14:43 asumin9: あい
2016-07-09 14:43 -Nanaka-: いまなんかしてるまん？
2016-07-09 14:43 asumin9: なんもしてないまん
2016-07-09 14:43 -Nanaka-: 01:18:827 - ここの音わかんないまん
2016-07-09 14:45 asumin9: ピアノの音？
2016-07-09 14:45 -Nanaka-: うｎ
2016-07-09 14:45 -Nanaka-: 対応する音ないっぽい
2016-07-09 14:46 asumin9: ラ
2016-07-09 14:46 asumin9: かな
2016-07-09 14:46 -Nanaka-: どのら？
2016-07-09 14:46 asumin9: うーん
2016-07-09 14:47 asumin9: 低いとか高いってこと？
2016-07-09 14:48 asumin9: そうだなぁ
2016-07-09 14:50 asumin9: ふぁ
2016-07-09 14:50 asumin9: 音域的には
2016-07-09 14:50 asumin9: 昨日話してたときの　低さより
2016-07-09 14:51 asumin9: 一オクターブ上の音域かな
2016-07-09 14:52 asumin9: その番号がわしちょっとわからんｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 14:53 asumin9: あ
2016-07-09 14:53 asumin9: 発見した
2016-07-09 14:53 asumin9: 00:05:936 (3) -
2016-07-09 14:54 asumin9: たぶんこれと同じおとだとおもうんだけども
2016-07-09 14:54 asumin9: どうだろ
2016-07-09 14:54 asumin9: ああ
2016-07-09 14:54 asumin9: 番号ってあれねｗｗ
2016-07-09 14:55 asumin9: 居間理解したｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 14:55 asumin9: おお
2016-07-09 14:56 asumin9: 32でもありだけども
2016-07-09 15:00 asumin9: 番号ってホイッスルの番号よね・・・・・？？？？
2016-07-09 15:05 asumin9: ここってピアノある？
2016-07-09 15:06 asumin9: 01:18:358 (2) -
2016-07-09 15:06 asumin9: ここならあるけども
2016-07-09 15:06 asumin9: 01:18:592 (3) -
2016-07-09 15:07 asumin9: ありゃ
2016-07-09 15:07 asumin9: ここはスネアの音みたいだけども・・・？
2016-07-09 15:09 asumin9: 01:17:889 (1,2,1) -
2016-07-09 15:09 asumin9: ここがピアノなってるところで
2016-07-09 15:09 asumin9: 01:18:592 (3) -
2016-07-09 15:09 asumin9: ここはベース音とドラム音しかないとおもう
2016-07-09 15:10 asumin9: ｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:10 asumin9: 自分の感覚でつけたいのならそれでもいいとおもうが
2016-07-09 15:11 asumin9: 後ろにあわせるなら　わしが言った感じになるかなぁ
2016-07-09 15:12 asumin9: たーんたーんたーん　ってかんじしかわしは思えないｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:12 asumin9: たたたんにはならない(´･ω･`)
2016-07-09 15:15 asumin9: ３６０？
2016-07-09 15:16 asumin9: おｋｗ
2016-07-09 15:18 asumin9: ありっちゃありだな
2016-07-09 15:18 asumin9: 低めにするなら最初のほうもかえんとな
2016-07-09 15:19 asumin9: そこと
2016-07-09 15:19 asumin9: 01:17:889 (1) -
2016-07-09 15:19 asumin9: ここもね
2016-07-09 15:20 asumin9: んお？
2016-07-09 15:20 asumin9: どういうことじゃ・・
2016-07-09 15:21 asumin9: ああ
2016-07-09 15:21 asumin9: ２５じゃない
2016-07-09 15:22 asumin9: 最後の３２だっけ　にするなら
2016-07-09 15:22 asumin9: 対応する音は全部あるっぽい
2016-07-09 15:22 asumin9: 最初の階段っぽくなるところから
2016-07-09 15:22 asumin9: ななかさんの言ったかんじにするなら
2016-07-09 15:23 asumin9: ３０　　３４　３０　３２
2016-07-09 15:23 asumin9: ってならせばそうなるはず
2016-07-09 15:23 asumin9: 最後７にするなら　その音域にあわせたほうがいいと思ったんだけども
2016-07-09 15:23 asumin9: うまく説明できてるかな・・・
2016-07-09 15:24 asumin9: 01:17:889 (1) - ３０
2016-07-09 15:24 asumin9: 01:18:358 (2) - ３４
2016-07-09 15:24 asumin9: 01:18:592 (3) - ３０
2016-07-09 15:24 asumin9: 01:18:827 (1) - ３２
2016-07-09 15:24 asumin9: ね
2016-07-09 15:26 asumin9: これって一回前の消していれたほうがいいよね？
2016-07-09 15:26 asumin9: おｋ
2016-07-09 15:29 asumin9: ほうほう
2016-07-09 15:30 asumin9: やっとDLおわたｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:33 asumin9: 最初が高いから
2016-07-09 15:33 asumin9: 音はあってるけども
2016-07-09 15:33 asumin9: 最後いきなり音がさがっちゃうかなぁ
2016-07-09 15:33 asumin9: ｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:34 asumin9: なるほどなぁ
2016-07-09 15:35 asumin9: つけちゃえつけちゃえ
2016-07-09 15:35 asumin9: さびまえだし　なんかほしいきもするね
2016-07-09 15:35 asumin9: ｗｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:36 asumin9: ２０番も
2016-07-09 15:36 asumin9: ７とおなじおとかな
2016-07-09 15:36 asumin9: こっちのほうが音が強くなってるけおｄも
2016-07-09 15:36 asumin9: けども
2016-07-09 15:37 asumin9: 余韻かぁ
2016-07-09 15:38 asumin9: うーむ
2016-07-09 15:39 asumin9: ていうか
2016-07-09 15:39 asumin9: 低い音でもできんじゃん！
2016-07-09 15:39 asumin9: あるじゃんおと！ｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:40 asumin9: ５１　２２　５１　７（もしくわ２０
2016-07-09 15:40 asumin9: やな
2016-07-09 15:42 asumin9: うん
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: うん
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: まじか
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: たぶん　なり方が違うからやろな
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: 一番違和感ないのが　高いほうだけども
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: ファイル見ていろいろ探して音見つけただけだから
2016-07-09 15:43 asumin9: なり方まではみてなかったわ
2016-07-09 15:44 asumin9: うーむ
2016-07-09 15:45 asumin9: 高いか低いかは統一したほうがええけどなぁ
2016-07-09 15:46 asumin9: ああ
2016-07-09 15:47 asumin9: ｗｗ
2016-07-09 15:47 asumin9: もう高いほうでいこうｗ

I couldn't make it without you、あすにゃん達のサポートのおかげ！
ほんとありがとね

1. One more Think, the map exactly need Video?
2. remove unused Greenline like This and This

1. If you know Easy and normal Require End of spinner need 3 or 4 White tick. 00:29:256 (1) - 02:10:506 (1) - Fix it
2. 00:11:092 (4) - 00:24:452 (2) - 00:55:389 (2) - 01:02:186 (2) - 01:06:874 (3) - 01:19:999 (1) - 01:27:499 (1) - 01:44:374 (4) - 01:45:780 (6,1) - 01:57:499 (1) - No Overlap.

1. 00:41:092 (2) - no stack ?

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:

M4M
[First]

1. One more Think, the map exactly need Video?
   Necessary
2. remove unused Greenline like This and This
   Because this is not unrankable, I want to leave you unattended, tbh Very troublesome

[normal]

1. If you know Easy and normal Require End of spinner need 3 or 4 White tick. 00:29:256 (1) - 02:10:506 (1) - Fix it
   I do not know such a Ranking_Criteria rule. Can you show it?
   Easy the distance between spinner and Note least 4 beats, 1500ms, Normal 2beat 750ms, This does not have any problem
2. 00:11:092 (4) - 00:24:452 (2) - 00:55:389 (2) - 01:02:186 (2) - 01:06:874 (3) - 01:19:999 (1) - 01:27:499 (1) - 01:44:374 (4) - 01:45:780 (6,1) - 01:57:499 (1) - No Overlap.
   no problem

[Hard]

1. 00:41:092 (2) - no stack ?
   no, 1/1 beat here stack better

-Maruk- wrote:

やぁ
[General]
ビデオの画質悪くない？一応avi用意しました。ビデオのoffsetこっちで合わせたので弄んなくでも大丈夫です
giniro.avi

[Normal]
00:25:155 (3) - DS気になった

[Hard]
01:22:811 (3) - (4)にStackした方が音的にも合うしやりやすいと思いました。

全部見たけど書くことほんまに無いわw

らんく頑張って

ビデオマジ神、両方直しといた！ありがとう

kunka wrote:

Your req.
General

1. ちょと開始早くない？LeadIn足した方が良さげ
   うーんいるかなぁ？個人的にはいらないからBNにいわれたら入れる！

moon snow

1. 00:14:608 (2) - whでなくfinishの方が合ってそ
   whistle外すとピアノ音がががすくなくともFinishは合ってない気がす
2. 01:16:483 (1) - ncいらなくない？
   ピアノに合わせて3.3.3.！
3. 01:18:827 (1) - ^
   これはどっちでもいいけどJumpするから一応入れた
4. 01:37:811 (1) - ～ 01:42:381 (3) - 必要以上のnc数じゃない？こんなにいらないと思う
   ピアノに合わせてるんご、個人的にCool
5. 02:12:264 - この緑線いる？なんだが5％で終わらせる為に無理矢理1/2にぶっこんだ感。まーあっても問題ないんだろうけどspinne開始を40％ですればいいような気がする
   www個人的にどうでもいいけど02:12:030 - から始まる風の音？ってかヒューーーーンって音に合わせて入れたと思われ

Insane

1. 01:38:749 (1,1,1) - この３つ音似てるので間隔をもう少し揃えた方が良いかも。このフレーズでの他のnotesは結構広い間隔なんで少なくともそれ以上はほしいと思いますた
   この配置すこなのとノーアイデアだからKeepかな

Hard

1. 00:44:374 (1,2,3,4) - hardで２回の往復stackはいかがなものかと。01:33:124 (1,2,3,4) - な感じがgood
   いうて音にあってるしBPM低いからそんな難しくないと思う
2. 01:12:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - なんか流れが急ぽい。緩やかな流れがほしい。01:13:670 (4,5,6) - を移動させると良いと思う
   そうかな？よくわかんなかったｗ
3. 01:37:811 (1,2) - 妙に間隔離れてね？っとオモタ
   ないすきゃっちｗ
4. 01:52:576 (3,4,5,6) - 2往復stack
   申し訳

Normal

1. 00:08:749 (1) - (2)への流れが少し微妙。だけどこれは多分好み。気に入らないならスルーで https://puu.sh/qaq09.jpg
   うーん、それだと00:08:280 (4,1) - の流れがぶさいくな気がする
2. 00:36:874 (1,2,3) - これも好みで検討。素直に配置し過ぎなんでちょっとひねくれちゃいなyo! https://puu.sh/qaqc0.jpg 次のntesの00:38:749 (1,2) - に似てる感
   sliderからsliderは遊んでもいいけどそうじゃないからパート的に素直に置きたいかな00:37:811 (3,1) - このシメントリーすこだし
3. 01:45:780 (6,1) - normalでこのoverlapはやばない？ｗ
   やばいかな？ｗこれちょっと保留でｗ
4. 01:51:405 (4) - カーブは谷より山の方が良さげ
   それはないかなぁ01:51:874 (1) - これ強調したいし01:51:405 (4) - でAIM上げて叩き落とす感じのが気持ちいいと思う

Easy

1. 01:15:077 (1,2,3) - うまい事綺麗な配置ししない？例えばこんなのとか
   いいね！01:16:483 (2,3) - かませといた！ https://puu.sh/qaqOC.jpg

sounds多すぎワロタ

☆もModもありがとう！

KuranteMelodii wrote:

So many unused green lines on easier diffs...

Lily Bread wrote:

i don't know why i can't download this map....
http://puu.sh/qfWPi/05c1c4ddad.png
so i will shoot you 2 stars, and i will mod it when my network is good.

mmm,It will be why;
anyway,thanks Lily酱

Lily Bread wrote:

i will try to practice my japanese.

[General]
nothing

[Easy]
od3は高すぎかな。od2はどう？w
たしかにｗナイスキャッチ！HPも2に下げといた！
[Normal]
00:16:952 (2) - 00:17:186 は downbeat なので、こんな感じにすればいいと思うの
http://puu.sh/qggMq/d5d6a7713f.jpg　
これはピアノより伸びる音拾った方が分かりやすいと思うの
01:58:202 (2) - みたいな感じで
00:33:827 (3) - vocalが中断しない上に、この辺りは静かで、- 00:33:827 (3) - を一度reverseしない？
たしかに音的にはそっちが正しいけど音つまりすぎちゃうからね
そこをreverseにすると00:32:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ずっと1/2rhythmになっちゃうから、そんな音詰めるとこじゃないかなって
00:46:952 (2,3) - ここも同じ取り方だし
01:45:780 (6,1) - さすがにこのoverlapがやばない？初心者には難しいと
ｗ言われるの３回目くらいだからさすがに変えた！ｗ
will mod other diffs when i am free.

Lily Bread wrote:

友達に私のsurfaceを病院に連れてと頼んだ www

[Hard]
00:15:780 (4) - これはどう？３連がこちにと思うの
http://puu.sh/qlUGy/d0af408a10.jpg

00:27:030 (4,5,6) - ＾

01:34:530 (5,6,7) - ＾

これは神！よく気が付いてくれた、ありがとう；；
[Insane]
何も見つからないw

[moon snow]
01:11:561 (1,2,1) - 間隔がやばいじゃない？なんだか全部1/2に見えた
ちょっとこれは保留
01:33:827 (4) - いきなりsvを変わったら、ncが必要と思う
直観的だからいらないかなぁ
good luck!

たすかりまんた！
ほんとありがとう

Shad0w1and wrote:

Lovely song.
Ceui my angel.

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/qqt23/8d33025fd2.flv
If you care about video quality Xd

I think that now is quality only a little.
I will use it in future when file size rises

Thank you support Pro encoder

1. 00:04:999 (1,3) - looks like a fishy blanket here
2. 00:07:342 (3) - you can move it to 363|159 as the middle point of the triangle pattern. same thing as 00:08:280 (7) - as a stack
3. 00:59:139 (4,5) - u might wanna tidy the blanket a bit
4. 01:12:030 (2) - for the SV change like this, it's rly confusing cuz since u didn't even NC this, this will lead them thinking that this is a 1/2 slider note :/

1. 00:04:061 (4) - try to copy paste the slider from 00:03:124 (1) - and ctrl+h it for symmetrical play
2. 00:09:452 (2,3,4,1) - try sth like triangle pattern thingy like http://puu.sh/qv55n/328cdca7b7.jpg
3. 01:12:030 (2) - ok, the same reason from the highest diff

lit120 wrote:

ok i'm back again... somehow, it's a "serious mod" that you mentioned .-.

[moon snow]

1. 00:04:999 (1,3) - looks like a fishy blanket here ok
2. 00:07:342 (3) - you can move it to 363|159 as the middle point of the triangle pattern. same thing as 00:08:280 (7) - as a stack It doesn’t matter
3. 00:59:139 (4,5) - u might wanna tidy the blanket a bit u-m fine for me
4. 01:12:030 (2) - for the SV change like this, it's rly confusing cuz since u didn't even NC this, this will lead them thinking that this is a 1/2 slider note :/
   Because I think that intuitive, I do not need it

[insane]

1. 00:04:061 (4) - try to copy paste the slider from 00:03:124 (1) - and ctrl+h it for symmetrical play ok
2. 00:09:452 (2,3,4,1) - try sth like triangle pattern thingy like http://puu.sh/qv55n/328cdca7b7.jpg Done
3. 01:12:030 (2) - ok, the same reason from the highest diff ^

Thank you for modding

1. The soft-hitclap50 is unused.I see that you're using other hitclaps except the soft-hitclap50.If you're not gonna use it, I think you have to get rid of the unused hitsound
2. The metadata appears to be fine if you see the Artist and Title in the official video of the game http://puu.sh/qF0Yx/1dd7b54b52.jpg
3. I know it sounds a bit weird but why don't you enable the Widescreen Support on all diffculties?You have a video as I can see so enabling the Widescreen Support wouldn't hurt.About the video, after I saw it, even if in a scene a girl with a boy are kissing,is fine since it does not have something 'NSFW' ><

1. 00:09:920(2)- I don't think an 1/1 slider fits really well the piano here.I suggest to short the slider to 1/2 slider and then add to it a repeat to fit much better the piano which sounds like pam PAM pam (or whatever ==).Also it wouldn't be problematic to newbie players since the BPM is low (128 BPM) and same for SV I guess
2. 00:41:092(3,1)- Here did you intend to do a blanket?If yes, you should move (3)-'s tail to left to look like in this picture for example http://puu.sh/qF1ZQ/6be9dbc5ff.jpg.After then, you have to move the next slider to the middle of (3)- like this http://puu.sh/qF256/4b09769a34.jpg I guess so the blanket will look much better than before
3. 00:49:999(4)- Seems like you have missed a New Combo here so I think you have to add it since here really represents the restarting of the instruments and vocal plus for the sake of New Combo consistency.By the way, don't forget to remove the New Combo from 00:51:639 (1)- then
4. 00:53:749 (3,1)- Same as I said before ^ but here you have to swap the New Combos I mean the New Combo will be on (3)- and not on (1)- anymore
5. 01:00:311(4)- Maybe extending the tail of the slider until the 1/1 tick (01:00:780 -)? It's really obvious that the piano ends there and having the tail there will give emphasis to the piano which ends on 1/1 tick and not on 1/2 tick as I can see
6. 01:04:096(1)- I don't think you need to have New Combo here because the vocal are getting instensified,not repeating and same for instruments too.You have to remove this New Combo and placing it on 01:04:999 (3)- where the vocal and instruments are repeating and the New Combo will be useful,giving emphasize to the repeating of the vocal and instruments
   01:14:374(3,1,2)- Honestly saying, I would change the rhythm here because it feels weird in my opinion in how way was the rhythm structured here.Firstly,you are ignoring the beats from 01:14:842 - and 01:15:311 - which are really stronger and they are calling for emphasis.Secondly, it would make more sense if you will start 01:15:077 (1)- from 01:15:311 - where is the stronger beat which you slighty ignored it.Starting the respective slider from there,it would emphasize the stronger beat and moreover,it would make it clickable.Also,don't forget to resnap the tail of the slider back to 1/2 tick (01:16:014-) but you have to remove the repeat before resnapping the slider back to 1/2 tick.The rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/qF2Uk/c28712cdcd.jpg you should add a note on 01:14:842 - since there is another stronger beat which calls for some emphasis.If this point makes you confused, you can call me in-game to explain to you much better

1. The first thing which is frustating me is the spacing in Normal on some points for example 00:15:077 (3,4,5)- ; 00:19:999 (1,2,3)- ; 00:20:936 (3,4,1)- and so on.The spacing feels somehow crampy here and weird since their overlapping is really smaller.I think you have to increase the spacing a bit like using 1.3x distance?I don't want to go on a higher spacing like 1.5x or 1.6x to make it an Advanced then
2. 00:16:249(1,2)- Here in the way on how you structured the rhythm feels out of nowhere because the 1/1 slider and 1/2 slider are emphasizing really weird the piano in my opinion so you if you want a rhythm to be really catchy to the piano,it should look like in this picture http://puu.sh/qF4C4/f54a0c8920.jpg 1/1 slider + note + 1/1 slider rhyhtm will catch really well the piano as you did with the next objects to follow the piano
3. 00:36:874 (1,2,3)- The piano sounds a bit different here so using this kind of rhythm like in this photo http://puu.sh/qF4QR/c679c6df64.jpg would fit much better the piano and also it will be really catchy to it too
4. 00:41:327 (1)- The New Combo isn't supposed to be here because the vocal is getting intensified and same for the instruments.The New Combo would be useful on 00:42:264 (2)- since the vocal and the instruments are getting reseted there and the New Combo will give emphasis to their reset so ou have to swap the NCs here
5. 00:53:749(5,1)- Same as above ^
6. 01:00:545(6)- This note can be replaced with a 1/1 slider since the piano is ending on the 1/1 tick from 01:00:780 - so having the tail of the slider there, you will give emphasis to the stronger beat from the ending of the piano,even if it is not clickable
   01:38:749(4)- Why don't you add a New Combo here?The vocal and the instruments are reseting here and a New Combo will give emphasis to their reset.Moreover,the New Combo from 01:39:686 (1)- seems kinda useless so I think you have to remove it and placing it on 01:40:624 (3)- instead
7. 01:57:499 (1,2)- Same thing as I said for 00:16:249 (1,2)-

- [ Silver ] - wrote:

Great Beatmap Hope It Gets Qualified Soon.
Thank you

ByBy13 wrote:

Greetings! M4M request

[General]

1. The soft-hitclap50 is unused.I see that you're using other hitclaps except the soft-hitclap50.If you're not gonna use it, I think you have to get rid of the unused hitsound
   omg, remove it.
2. The metadata appears to be fine if you see the Artist and Title in the official video of the game http://puu.sh/qF0Yx/1dd7b54b52.jpg
3. I know it sounds a bit weird but why don't you enable the Widescreen Support on all diffculties?You have a video as I can see so enabling the Widescreen Support wouldn't hurt.About the video, after I saw it, even if in a scene a girl with a boy are kissing,is fine since it does not have something 'NSFW' ><
   Well, I think that I do not have any problem, but ask alacat later

[Easy]

1. 00:09:920(2)- I don't think an 1/1 slider fits really well the piano here.I suggest to short the slider to 1/2 slider and then add to it a repeat to fit much better the piano which sounds like pam PAM pam (or whatever ==).Also it wouldn't be problematic to newbie players since the BPM is low (128 BPM) and same for SV I guess
   sure, but I do not want to use 1/2slider as much as possible in Easy
2. 00:41:092(3,1)- Here did you intend to do a blanket?If yes, you should move (3)-'s tail to left to look like in this picture for example http://puu.sh/qF1ZQ/6be9dbc5ff.jpg.After then, you have to move the next slider to the middle of (3)- like this http://puu.sh/qF256/4b09769a34.jpg I guess so the blanket will look much better than before
   fix
3. 00:49:999(4)- Seems like you have missed a New Combo here so I think you have to add it since here really represents the restarting of the instruments and vocal plus for the sake of New Combo consistency.By the way, don't forget to remove the New Combo from 00:51:639 (1)- then
   wow nice catch!!! thx
4. 00:53:749 (3,1)- Same as I said before ^ but here you have to swap the New Combos I mean the New Combo will be on (3)- and not on (1)- anymore
   ^
5. 01:00:311(4)- Maybe extending the tail of the slider until the 1/1 tick (01:00:780 -)? It's really obvious that the piano ends there and having the tail there will give emphasis to the piano which ends on 1/1 tick and not on 1/2 tick as I can see
   I feel that it is not correct, keep it
6. 01:04:096(1)- I don't think you need to have New Combo here because the vocal are getting instensified,not repeating and same for instruments too.You have to remove this New Combo and placing it on 01:04:999 (3)- where the vocal and instruments are repeating and the New Combo will be useful,giving emphasize to the repeating of the vocal and instruments
   sorry no, I think that balance of the NC is bad, and 01:04:999 - does not have a strong sound so as to add NC
7. 01:14:374(3,1,2)- Honestly saying, I would change the rhythm here because it feels weird in my opinion in how way was the rhythm structured here.Firstly,you are ignoring the beats from 01:14:842 - and 01:15:311 - which are really stronger and they are calling for emphasis.Secondly, it would make more sense if you will start 01:15:077 (1)- from 01:15:311 - where is the stronger beat which you slighty ignored it.Starting the respective slider from there,it would emphasize the stronger beat and moreover,it would make it clickable.Also,don't forget to resnap the tail of the slider back to 1/2 tick (01:16:014-) but you have to remove the repeat before resnapping the slider back to 1/2 tick.The rhythm should be like this http://puu.sh/qF2Uk/c28712cdcd.jpg you should add a note on 01:14:842 - since there is another stronger beat which calls for some emphasis.If this point makes you confused, you can call me in-game to explain to you much better
   Very nice

[Normal]

1. The first thing which is frustating me is the spacing in Normal on some points for example 00:15:077 (3,4,5)- ; 00:19:999 (1,2,3)- ; 00:20:936 (3,4,1)- and so on.The spacing feels somehow crampy here and weird since their overlapping is really smaller.I think you have to increase the spacing a bit like using 1.3x distance?I don't want to go on a higher spacing like 1.5x or 1.6x to make it an Advanced then
   I tried 1.3 before. but I finally SD2.0 became near, and have difficult distance in 1/1rhythm.
   The influence of Stack Leniency is strange, but does not want to surely change it very much because I think that I have nothing to do with a play
   
2. 00:16:249(1,2)- Here in the way on how you structured the rhythm feels out of nowhere because the 1/1 slider and 1/2 slider are emphasizing really weird the piano in my opinion so you if you want a rhythm to be really catchy to the piano,it should look like in this picture http://puu.sh/qF4C4/f54a0c8920.jpg 1/1 slider + note + 1/1 slider rhyhtm will catch really well the piano as you did with the next objects to follow the piano
   sry I think that a flute is outstanding than a piano here.
3. 00:36:874 (1,2,3)- The piano sounds a bit different here so using this kind of rhythm like in this photo http://puu.sh/qF4QR/c679c6df64.jpg would fit much better the piano and also it will be really catchy to it too
   00:34:764 (4,1,2,3,1) - Because 1/2rhythm spreads out, I think that it is not necessary here.
4. 00:41:327 (1)- The New Combo isn't supposed to be here because the vocal is getting intensified and same for the instruments.The New Combo would be useful on 00:42:264 (2)- since the vocal and the instruments are getting reseted there and the New Combo will give emphasis to their reset so ou have to swap the NCs here
   I follow a NC pattern here 00:34:764 (4,1) - 00:46:014 (3,1) - 00:47:889 (3,1) - 00:57:264 (6,1) -
5. 00:53:749(5,1)- Same as above ^
   sure, fix
6. 01:00:545(6)- This note can be replaced with a 1/1 slider since the piano is ending on the 1/1 tick from 01:00:780 - so having the tail of the slider there, you will give emphasis to the stronger beat from the ending of the piano,even if it is not clickable
   Consistency with other Diff & Because it is the section that is new from 01:01:249 - , I want a break
7. 01:38:749(4)- Why don't you add a New Combo here?The vocal and the instruments are reseting here and a New Combo will give emphasis to their reset.Moreover,the New Combo from 01:39:686 (1)- seems kinda useless so I think you have to remove it and placing it on 01:40:624 (3)- instead
   Done
8. 01:57:499 (1,2)- Same thing as I said for 00:16:249 (1,2)-
   ^ It is a flute here in other Diff

The higher difficulties will be modded tomorrow.It's really late here Continue tomorrow

Pro modder

1. 00:17:186 - Remove clap?
2. 00:44:374 (2,3) - Better have a 3/2 spacing than mapping on nothing imo, use this rhythm?
3. 01:04:061 (1,3) - Swap NC? Because downbeat is on 01:04:999 .
4. 01:15:311 - Missing clap?

1. 00:08:749 (1,2) - Can you make the flow better? It feels very uncomfortable but I can't find any good suggestion.
2. 00:18:124 (4) - NC? For consistency with 00:21:874 (1) .
3. 00:27:499 (1,2) - Use a 1/1 repeat slider like 02:08:749 (1) ? 00:28:202 - isn't worth clickable imo.
4. 00:42:967 (3) - Shouldn't skip 00:43:202 so how about this rhythm?
5. 00:43:905 - 01:01:952 - Missing whistle?
6. 01:10:624 - Add Normal-whistle?
7. 02:03:124 (1,2,3) - Should use a different rhythm from 01:59:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because piano played differently.
8. 02:10:389 (3) - NC?

1. 01:39:686 (1,2) - Change to a 1/2 slider to emphasize finish like 01:38:749 (1) ?

Electoz wrote:

Will use easier English for understanding, can you give me metadata?
Thanks
Meta ↓

SPOILER

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JbZUD9ys_lI
also Changed Metadata. add space
[Giniro, Haruka]


[Easy]

1. 00:17:186 - Remove clap? nice catch
2. 00:44:374 (2,3) - Better have a 3/2 spacing than mapping on nothing imo, use this rhythm?
   sure lol thanks
3. 01:04:061 (1,3) - Swap NC? Because downbeat is on 01:04:999
   umm but balance of the NC has bad, I follow the Vocal
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:15:311 - Missing clap? nice~

[Normal]

1. 00:08:749 (1,2) - Can you make the flow better? It feels very uncomfortable but I can't find any good suggestion.
   Okay, change this pattern
2. 00:18:124 (4) - NC? For consistency with 00:21:874 (1)
   Done
3. 00:27:499 (1,2) - Use a 1/1 repeat slider like 02:08:749 (1) ? 00:28:202 - isn't worth clickable imo.
   your right, fix it
4. 00:42:967 (3) - Shouldn't skip 00:43:202 so how about this rhythm?
   u-m, slow section here, I follow vocal
5. 00:43:905 - 01:01:952 - Missing whistle?
   ^ Because I ignored the piano, it is not necessary
6. 01:10:624 - Add Normal-whistle?
   nnnnnice
7. 02:03:124 (1,2,3) - Should use a different rhythm from 01:59:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because piano played differently.
   I'm not sure, Normal thinks that consistency is important, Can you show concrete rhythm?
8. 02:10:389 (3) - NC?
   Remove NC at 00:29:139 -

[Insane]

1. 01:39:686 (1,2) - Change to a 1/2 slider to emphasize finish like 01:38:749 (1) ?
   Because I want to gradually heap up it to music, I use circle

The rest looks good, call me when you're done fixing.

Very Nice Mod
Thanks Electoz

-Nanaka- wrote:

Electoz wrote:

[Normal]

1. 02:03:124 (1,2,3) - Should use a different rhythm from 01:59:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because piano played differently.
   I'm not sure, Normal thinks that consistency is important, Can you show concrete rhythm?

Electoz wrote:

[[Normal]

1. 02:03:124 (1,2,3) - Should use a different rhythm from 01:59:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) because piano played differently.
   I'm not sure, Normal thinks that consistency is important, Can you show concrete rhythm?

How about this rhythm?
Also I need to confirm metadata with other people(will take a few days).

Karen wrote:

Qualified~

2016-10-05 23:39 Karen: 01:19:295 (1,2,3,1) - this is a bit confusing i think
2016-10-05 23:40 Karen: 01:19:764 (3,1) - this jump too kowai 
2016-10-05 23:40 -Nanaka-: www
2016-10-05 23:40 -Nanaka-: Okay try Othar pattern
2016-10-05 23:40 Karen: 01:19:295 (1,2) - because this is kawaii
2016-10-05 23:40 Karen: suddenly kowai is bad bad
2016-10-05 23:41 -Nanaka-: xixi
2016-10-05 23:42 Karen: 02:09:217 (2,3) - this is evil!!
2016-10-05 23:42 Karen: 02:09:452 (3,4,5) - triple is harder then one note and it's a big big jump
2016-10-05 23:44 -Nanaka-: umm,but Because there is not that I made a miss, I want to do Keep;;
2016-10-05 23:44 Karen: ok o.o
2016-10-05 23:45 Karen: do you want to change AR on the highest diff?
2016-10-05 23:45 Karen: insane is ar8
2016-10-05 23:46 Karen: maybe try 8.5 or something else
2016-10-05 23:46 -Nanaka-: 8.2?w
2016-10-05 23:46 Karen: ok ww
2016-10-05 23:47 -Nanaka-: tbh,BPM128=8.5 so fast imo
2016-10-05 23:47 -Nanaka-: www
2016-10-05 23:47 Karen: yes 
2016-10-05 23:47 Karen: ok last thing, where do you get the diffname
2016-10-05 23:47 Karen: in the game? or anywhere else
2016-10-05 23:48 Karen: since the name is kinda strange o.o
2016-10-05 23:49 -Nanaka-: My most favorite character.wwwwwwwww　 雪=Snow 月＝Moon
2016-10-05 23:49 -Nanaka-: http://puu.sh/ryExi/625bd1809a.jpg
2016-10-05 23:50 Karen: wooo 雪月
2016-10-05 23:50 Karen: where is 花
2016-10-05 23:50 Karen: www
2016-10-05 23:50 Karen: ok you can update now

many thanks Renchom!

BeatofIke wrote:

omedetou 7ka ^-^

arigatou Ikechan!

Akitoshi wrote:

おめでとうございﾏｰｽ

ありがとうございます～

Kagetsu wrote:

gratz

Thanks

-Maruk- wrote:

おめでと

Videoほんまありがとな！

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

おめでとう~

谢谢

Garden wrote:

おめでとう！

谢谢 Garden chan!

Kanau wrote:

gratz~

ありがとー

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

gratz(｡◕ˇдˇ​◕｡)/

Pururut wrote:

gratz o/

I love you

KuranteMelodii wrote:

太神了，恭喜七卡大佬~

xixi、谢谢你啊

Lily Bread wrote:

gratz!

Thanks!

alacat wrote:

as mapper's request

Thank you alacat!

1. Add silent sliderslide for S:C2? Because there's a slider sound at 01:57:147 in Normal and Hard.

1. 01:02:186 - Add whistle? Becuase Easy and Normal has it, please add in higher diffs too if you apply this.

1. 01:20:702 - Add whistle? Same applies to Moon Snow.

Electoz wrote:

[General]

1. Add silent sliderslide for S:C2? Because there's a slider sound at 01:57:147 in Normal and Hard.
   !!!Really nice catch,Many thanks to you!

[Hard]

1. 01:02:186 - Add whistle? Becuase Easy and Normal has it, please add in higher diffs too if you apply this.
   Because the balance of the sound worsens, I keep this

[Insane]

1. 01:20:702 - Add whistle? Same applies to Moon Snow.
   Okay,& add 01:21:170 -

Call me back again when you're done.

I’m so grateful for what you’ve done.

sahuang wrote:

gratz~~

Thanks~

hikikuman wrote:

regratz xD

Thank you