Natsu:
・00:00:812 (1) - move the end to x288 y116, so it will be straight line to (2)
・00:02:920 (1) - move the end to x128 y184, make the flow softer
・00:04:704 (4) - ctrl+h and replacing to current start poit imo
・00:06:164 (1,2,3,4,5) repeat this folow here 00:07:461 - or here 00:08:758 - this part actually a repeating beat
・00:11:029 (6) - x228 y84, same ds for (2,4,6) ang blanket it with (1)
・00:11:839 (2) - just in case you do blanket for (1), stack rhis note with last (4)
・00:12:812 (7) - ^
・00:13:299 (2,4) - slight blanket instead, or just make proper one
・00:15:731 (4,5) - inctease those overlap, make it about 1/3 overlap
・00:16:056 (6,2) - blanket indeed
・00:17:839 (8,9) - switch rhytm, this 00:18:002 - is just guitar vibration not really need to clickable instead of this 00:18:164 -
・00:18:812 (4,1) - dont overlap this
・00:19:137 (5,1) - switch rhytm, same reason
・00:24:812 (5,6,7) - prefer to use same ds at least, that (5,6) jump is way too much. move (6) to x312 y48 imo
・00:26:272 (6,7,8,1) - this not flow nice tbh, why do vertical overlap for (6,8) but use horizontal overlap for (7,1)? if you want to make a jump there then just move (8) to x284 y108
・00:26:758 (1,2,3) - c-s-s instead, stack the circle at start of slider
・00:28:056 (1,3) - blanket?
・00:29:191 (6,1) - flow breaker here
・00:31:461 (7) - move NC here
・00:39:083 - clearly strong beat, 1/1 slider imo
・00:41:353 - the piano sound actually start here, so do triplet at blue tick after instead of here 00:41:191 -
・00:42:488 (8,1) - same ds with 00:43:785 (4,1) - w
・00:49:785 - quite strong vocal to map
・00:51:569 (5,6) - perfect that blanket
・00:52:542 - you miss another strong beat here, 1/2 slider and start spinner at blue tick after then end spinner here 00:55:461 -
・01:08:434 (3) - make this one 1/1 slider with cure is more than enough to emph the vocal
・01:13:623 (1,2) - make simmilar thing with 01:09:407 (1,3) -
・01:16:056 (3) - since you put a gap after this slider, reccomed to make simple flow instead of that sharp one
・01:18:650 (3) - ctrl+g
・01:23:434 (8) - miss beat stream, remove it
・01:24:002 (1,2) - givve proper distace so that not touching each other
・01:25:461 (1) - x340 y360? adjust after
・01:26:596 (4,5) - switch rhytm, still for same reason
・01:29:839 (1,2) - move to 1/2 beat to right, because the vocal is actually there
・01:36:650 (1,2) - perfect that (2)
・01:44:758 - this point is kiai entering point, so it would be really nice if it was clickable
・01:48:326 (2) - ctrl+j and adjust
・01:48:812 (4,1) - blanket
・01:51:083 (7,8) - ctrl+g and stack (8) at (1) start
・02:01:461 (4) - improve this placing
・02:02:272 (4,7) - blanket?
・02:04:380 (1) - straight slider instead
・02:09:893 (4) - end that slider at this point and add new timing point with 5% volume