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S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie [OsuMania]

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Adot
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Adot
ngeng ngeng irc

10:52 erlinadewi-: dot
10:52 Adot: apa mba?
10:53 erlinadewi-: sibuk gak?
10:53 erlinadewi-: testplay/mod dong
10:53 erlinadewi-: diff easy normal aja
10:54 Adot: map apa
10:54 Adot: m4m mau?
10:55 *erlinadewi- is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023373 S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie]
10:55 erlinadewi-: mapmu apa?
10:56 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020256 t+pazolite - CENSORED!!]
10:56 erlinadewi-: mod diff easy normal aja
10:56 Adot: ok
10:56 Adot: punya w normal aja
10:56 Adot: aku mod dlu aja...
10:56 erlinadewi-: ok
10:57 erlinadewi-: sip
10:57 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023248 S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie [Beginner]]
10:57 erlinadewi-: owo)b
10:59 Adot: 00:24:193 (24193|3) - LN ini hapus aja. 00:23:959 (23959|0) - jadiin LN sampe 00:23:959 (23959|0) - . ngeskip suara stream kek LN di sini 00:07:553 (7553|3) - 
11:00 erlinadewi-: eh ini mau irc
11:00 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
11:00 Adot: eala
11:00 Adot: irc aja mba
11:00 Adot: mau ga?
11:00 erlinadewi-: mau
11:00 Adot: okeh
11:00 erlinadewi-: gpp
11:00 Adot: 00:29:584 (29584|1) -  ini jadiin LN buat ngeskip pianonya sampe 00:29:584 (29584|1) - 
11:01 erlinadewi-: jadiin ln ampe mana itu?
11:01 erlinadewi-: yg pertama sama
11:01 Adot: 00:29:584 (29584|1) - 
11:01 Adot: eh
11:01 Adot: 00:30:053 - 
11:01 Adot: nah
11:01 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
11:01 erlinadewi-: ok
11:01 Adot: salah pencet copy td
11:01 erlinadewi-: next
11:02 Adot: 00:39:193 - add 1 buat main sound? ngikutin suara tuk tuknya
11:02 erlinadewi-: ok
11:03 Adot: 01:01:928 -  add 1 buat cymbal?
11:03 erlinadewi-: ok
11:04 Adot: 01:09:193 (69193|1) - hapus.. 01:09:193 (69193|1) - jadiin LN sampe 01:09:428 -  buat ngeskip piano? same reason kek sebelumnya
11:04 Adot: LN di 1/2 susah buat beginner juga :o
11:04 erlinadewi-: salah copy tuh
11:04 Adot: ag
11:04 Adot: salah copy lagi
11:05 Adot: ngeng
11:05 Adot: 01:08:959 (68959|0) - jadiin LN sampe 01:09:428 - 
11:05 erlinadewi-: ok
11:05 erlinadewi-: lel
11:06 Adot: 01:16:928 - add 1 buat cymbal?
11:06 Adot: bpm renda sih.. 01:16:224 (76224|3,76224|0,76459|0,76459|3) -  banyak jarak di sini jadi gpp lah
11:07 erlinadewi-: iya
11:07 Adot: 01:23:959 - salah satu jadiin LN buat ngeskip piano sampe 01:24:428 - 
11:08 erlinadewi-: ok
11:08 Adot: 01:28:178 (88178|1) - ini kalo nge layer audio. seharusnya berhenti di 01:29:349 - 
11:08 Adot: dah..
11:08 *Adot is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023373 S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie [Normal]]
11:08 erlinadewi-: iya ya
11:08 erlinadewi-: gimana enak nya
11:09 Adot: dihapus aja kalo aku
11:09 Adot: soalnya LN di kiai fokusnya kan ke piano
11:09 erlinadewi-: ln nya?
11:09 Adot: kalo tiba2 ada LN di audio agak labil jadina
11:09 Adot: *jadinya
11:09 erlinadewi-: iya sih
11:09 erlinadewi-: ok
11:09 Adot: *mksdku audio vokal
11:09 Adot: okeh
11:09 Adot: lanjut normal
11:10 erlinadewi-: ya
11:11 Adot: 00:17:865 - dari sini sampe lanjut ada bbrp suara snare yg gak di kasih dobel? yakin nih?
11:11 Adot: ah gaapa si
11:12 Adot: btw 00:32:162 (32162|0) - LN nya ngelayer apa?
11:12 erlinadewi-: '-'
11:12 erlinadewi-: bass
11:12 erlinadewi-: eh synth apa bass sih
11:12 erlinadewi-: wkwkwk
11:13 Adot: 00:32:631 (32631|3) -  ini dihapus aja . 00:32:631 - sampe situ bikin pola kek 00:33:568 (33568|2,33803|1) - sama 00:34:037 (34037|0,34271|3) - 
11:13 Adot: hapus aja yg 00:32:162 (32162|0) - . kan pada ngelayer bass toh pas di bagian situ
11:13 Adot: eh gaapa deng
11:13 erlinadewi-: TwT
11:13 Adot: biarin aja... ada bass dikit sih.. 
11:14 erlinadewi-: itu sengaja
11:15 Adot: 00:34:506 - dibentuk kek gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575821 ? ngikutin pola2 sebelumnya.. ama lebih ngefokus ke bass LN nya
11:15 Adot: 00:36:381 - dari sini bentuk kek pola2 yg w mention tadi 
11:16 erlinadewi-: tapi itu panjang loh suaranya
11:16 Adot: yang mna
11:16 erlinadewi-: gpp
11:16 erlinadewi-: lnjut
11:16 Adot: waduh gausa diapply semua kalo emg kurang cocok menurut mba 
11:17 erlinadewi-: i know u.u
11:17 Adot: 00:38:256 - ini saran aja jadiin kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5575828 rearrange lagi aja kalo kurang srek
11:17 Adot: not di 00:39:193 -  ngikutin tuk tuk nya
11:18 erlinadewi-: keep dlu
11:18 Adot: mksdku itu soalnya kan suara tuk tuknya kan diekorin ama suara bass, jadi ya kek gitu 
11:18 erlinadewi-: iya
11:19 Adot: 01:04:974 -  hapus 1.. 01:05:209 - add 1 buat suara snare
11:19 Adot: 01:04:974 (64974|1) -  iini yg dihapus
11:19 Adot: ln nya buat vokal kan? outstanding si.
11:19 erlinadewi-: jdi 1/2 ln kan
11:20 Adot:  hooh
11:20 erlinadewi-: iya vocal
11:20 erlinadewi-: kawaii
11:20 Adot: 01:08:724 (68724|2) -  hapus aja, 01:08:959 - add 1 buat snare
11:21 Adot: 01:19:974 - sama kek ^
11:21 erlinadewi-: ok
11:22 Adot: di rearrange lagi yg kek gitu... 
11:22 Adot: di kiai ke 2 pola nya byk yg kek gitu soalnya
11:22 Adot: menurutku mending kasih 2 note di snare drpd i vokal
11:22 Adot: gatau juga si.. kalo flownya ena dobel di vokal ya keep aja
11:22 erlinadewi-: udah
11:22 Adot: ok done kalo gitu
11:22 Adot: lagunya menenagkan hati
11:22 Adot: <3
11:23 erlinadewi-: iya dumz
11:23 erlinadewi-: korean loli
11:23 Adot: diffku mau irc atau di post aja di thread
11:23 erlinadewi-: oh iya dot
11:23 erlinadewi-: thread aja
11:23 *Adot is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020256 t+pazolite - CENSORED!!]
11:23 Adot: okeh
11:23 Adot: w tunggu
11:23 Adot: thenks mba elin
11:23 erlinadewi-: yg bass tadi
11:24 Adot: hooh?
11:24 erlinadewi-: aku jga thanks
11:24 erlinadewi-: ;D
11:24 Adot: okeoke... noprob...
_Zenith
326 posts
Joined June 2015
_Zenith
MOD ACCEPTED ON IRC

S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie

|1|2|3|4

[General]
Hitsound: NO!
Maybe you should add it later~

[Beginner]
01:30:053 (90053|1,90404|0,90756|2) - Add one notes feels better for me :D

[Normal]
00:30:287 (30287|1,30756|1,31224|1,31693|1) - Actually i don't know why you jack here because there are not any same sound here i guess
00:39:193 add one more note here
00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1,59818|1) - So why jack here? There are not same sound too. :D


;) Good luck!
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

-[Apple]- wrote:

MOD ACCEPTED ON IRC

S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie

|1|2|3|4

[General]
Hitsound: NO!
Maybe you should add it later~

[Beginner]
01:30:053 (90053|1,90404|0,90756|2) - Add one notes feels better for me :D i think single is good enough for beginner diff

[Normal]
00:30:287 (30287|1,30756|1,31224|1,31693|1) - Actually i don't know why you jack here because there are not any same sound here i guess please listen it carefully
00:39:193 add one more note here ok
00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1,59818|1) - So why jack here? There are not same sound too. :D please listen it carefully


;) Good luck!
thanks for mod!
leoudel
leoudel
Superman is dead-Sound - Sweet Brownie


General
  1. Ai mod = please check
  2. hitsound = need
  3. Mp3 = fine
  4. BG = fine
  5. add tags = Electro (genre musik'e)
  6. uncheck widescreen supp

ichi
  1. 01:15:053 - add 1 maneh chi, kick
  2. 01:16:107 - ^
    ichi ET

Normal
  1. 00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1) - mending delete wae, focus ndek suara iki 00:58:178 (58178|0) -
  2. 00:09:428 - add 1 maneh kyk 00:11:303 (11303|1,11303|3) -
  3. 00:16:459 - add 1 maneh? suarane rodo gede
  4. 00:58:178 - tambah 1? ono kick + vocal ndek kene, menurutku seh gpp tambah 1 maneh

Beginner
  1. 00:16:928 - tambah 1 maneh? cymbal
other part is fine, goodluck uwu
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

leoudel wrote:

Superman is dead-Sound - Sweet Brownie


General
  1. Ai mod = please check
  2. hitsound = need
  3. Mp3 = fine
  4. BG = fine
  5. add tags = Electro (genre musik'e)
  6. uncheck widescreen supp

Normal
  1. 00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1) - mending delete wae, focus ndek suara iki 00:58:178 (58178|0) - sengaja iku. ben ora sepi krik krik krik
  2. 00:09:428 - add 1 maneh kyk 00:11:303 (11303|1,11303|3) - wes cukup kayak e
  3. 00:16:459 - add 1 maneh? suarane rodo gede ^
  4. 00:58:178 - tambah 1? ono kick + vocal ndek kene, menurutku seh gpp tambah 1 maneh koyone kangelan '-'

Beginner
  1. 00:16:928 - tambah 1 maneh? cymbal 1 cukup koyone nggo easy
other part is fine, goodluck uwu
TENGKYU MOD e
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Hi there little mod , dunno if that can help or not

dadon
Key=1/2/3/4
[Ichi's Sweet Brownie]
hi ichi
00:03:217 (3217|2) - here you added a note but not here : 00:06:967 (6967|0) - , both are simillar in sound imho
00:10:365 (10365|3,10482|2,10599|1) - thoose section might be more catchy and easy to understand as 1/4 , ^ earlier you used 1/4 then suddenly you leave a blank
I think it's okay to put 1/4 here since it's not that hard to read/ play
00:14:115 (14115|3) - regardless of the previous suggestion , you forget to add a note here (maybe you intended it tho so just sayin in case)
00:21:381 (21381|0) - The double piano notes should be here , the piano sound that you use to make double is here and not here : 00:21:498 (21498|3,21498|1) - (move one note down basically)
00:28:881 (28881|1,28998|2,28998|3) - ^same suggestion
00:30:990 (30990|2) - you could add a note in 3 for a softer piano sound , but since it's barely audible it's up to you :3
01:00:990 (60990|0,60990|1,61224|3,61224|2,61342|1,61342|0) - just a self opinion but this part sounds abit hard to catch up , don't really know how to change that tho so nvm
[Normal]
00:38:490 (38490|2) - move to 1 ?
00:42:943 (42943|3) - add to 4 ? for the voice (i'm not sure there is a drum sound here so going for the vocal thingy )
00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1,59818|1) - I think thoose aren't loud enough to put a note for , leaving it blank is okay imo (basically remove the notes)
01:04:974 (64974|3,65209|2,65209|1) - This is absolutely lovely please don't change that XD <3
[Beginner]
00:23:959 (23959|3) - what do you think about changing this to 1/2 instead, this have a different rythm tham : 00:20:209 (20209|1) - ?
00:29:584 (29584|1) - ^and changing this one LN to a simple note instead ?
01:30:756 (90756|2) - you could add another note to emphasis the end of the song

Catchy song , Good Luck and have a nice day :3/
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there little mod , dunno if that can help or not

dadon
Key=1/2/3/4
[Normal]
00:38:490 (38490|2) - move to 1 ? OK!
00:42:943 (42943|3) - add to 4 ? for the voice (i'm not sure there is a drum sound here so going for the vocal thingy ) keep for this. i try to follow kick and bass sound
00:58:412 (58412|1,58881|1,59349|1,59818|1) - I think thoose aren't loud enough to put a note for , leaving it blank is okay imo (basically remove the notes) but i think feel empty there :<
01:04:974 (64974|3,65209|2,65209|1) - This is absolutely lovely please don't change that XD <3 u..uuhh~
[Beginner]
00:23:959 (23959|3) - what do you think about changing this to 1/2 instead, this have a different rythm tham : 00:20:209 (20209|1) - ? i'll keep for this. following the synth sound, please hear it carefully xD
00:29:584 (29584|1) - ^and changing this one LN to a simple note instead ? same reason as above
01:30:756 (90756|2) - you could add another note to emphasis the end of the song hmmm.. i think single is good enough
Catchy song , Good Luck and have a nice day :3/
Thanks Etlie <3
Another Lie
Another Lie
IRC
18:33 Another Lie: o/
18:33 Another Lie: ada waktu buat IRC?
18:34 erlinadewi-: boleh
18:34 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023373 S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie [Normal]]
18:34 Another Lie: 00:00:287 (287|3) - kenapa ga dimulai dari 00:00:521 - ?
18:36 erlinadewi-: hmm
18:36 erlinadewi-: emang dari situ kok '-'
18:36 Another Lie: weh? emang dari sini?
18:37 erlinadewi-: coba denger lagi deh
18:37 Another Lie: lebih persisnya disini
18:37 Another Lie: 00:00:365 - 
18:37 Another Lie: serius
18:37 erlinadewi-: suara start di red tick
18:38 erlinadewi-: keep for this one
18:38 Another Lie: ok
18:38 *Another Lie lanjut
18:38 Another Lie: 00:09:428 - add 1 note
18:38 Another Lie: samain kyk 00:11:303 - 
18:40 erlinadewi-: ok
18:40 Another Lie: 00:35:443 - add note, samain kyk 00:39:193 - 
18:40 erlinadewi-: gak ada 'tuk' disana
18:41 Another Lie: :v kirain ngikut vokalnya jg 
18:41 Another Lie: ok skip
18:42 erlinadewi-: wkwkwkwk
18:42 erlinadewi-: owo
18:42 *Another Lie pindah ke Beginner
18:42 *Another Lie is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1023248 S.I.D-Sound - Sweet Brownie [Beginner]]
18:43 erlinadewi-: eh udah
18:43 erlinadewi-: ok
18:44 Another Lie: seems fine Beginner nya
18:44 Another Lie: mod done
Hotaru-
806 posts
Joined March 2015
Hotaru-
OMG OMG OMG aaaaaa
Korean Loliss <3

Shooted '3'
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

OMG OMG OMG aaaaaa
Korean Loliss <3

Shooted '3'
Thanks jakiiii~ o3o)/
Memories-
Memories-
Hi, Elin!
This is little mod from me, btw, nice BG, and WTF that voices?! (/me nosebleeding)
Mod
1|2|3|4

Beginner

01:09:428 (69428|2) - How about move to column 1?
01:27:709 (87709|0) - I think it move to column 3, for pattern before
01:28:178 (88178|2) - How about move into column 1?
01:30:756 (90756|2) - How about move into column 4?

Normal

00:18:803 (18803|0) - How about move to column 4?
00:21:849 (21849|3) - How about move to column 3?
00:22:084 (22084|2) - And this to move to column 4?
00:38:959 (38959|1) - How about adding one notes?
00:42:709 (42709|3) - ^

Ichi's Sweet Brownie

I think it's nothing wrong with this diff
Well, that's the mod, I'm very sure it very bad, I'm sorry about it, I'm still new on modding, btw, I like this song very much :D
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

leoudel wrote:

Superman is dead-Sound - Sweet Brownie


ichi
  1. 01:15:053 - add 1 maneh chi, kick ok
  2. 01:16:107 - ^
    ichi ET

other part is fine, goodluck uwu

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there little mod , dunno if that can help or not

dadon
Key=1/2/3/4
[Ichi's Sweet Brownie]
hi ichi hi Eter
00:03:217 (3217|2) - here you added a note but not here : 00:06:967 (6967|0) - , both are simillar in sound imho I decided to remove it
00:10:365 (10365|3,10482|2,10599|1) - thoose section might be more catchy and easy to understand as 1/4 , ^ earlier you used 1/4 then suddenly you leave a blank
I think it's okay to put 1/4 here since it's not that hard to read/ play I already added it (?)
00:14:115 (14115|3) - regardless of the previous suggestion , you forget to add a note here (maybe you intended it tho so just sayin in case) yes, added
00:21:381 (21381|0) - The double piano notes should be here , the piano sound that you use to make double is here and not here : 00:21:498 (21498|3,21498|1) - (move one note down basically) nope, i'm not following the hi-hat, instead I followed the main rhythm ( i mean the double notes are only for that )
00:28:881 (28881|1,28998|2,28998|3) - ^same suggestion ^
00:30:990 (30990|2) - you could add a note in 3 for a softer piano sound , but since it's barely audible it's up to you :3 added
01:00:990 (60990|0,60990|1,61224|3,61224|2,61342|1,61342|0) - just a self opinion but this part sounds abit hard to catch up , don't really know how to change that tho so nvm I made some changes there and i added a note at 01:01:107 - so it'll more playable

Catchy song , Good Luck and have a nice day :3/
Thank you guys :D

http://puu.sh/pWJTO/62abe4eb9c.osu
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Memories- wrote:

Hi, Elin!
This is little mod from me, btw, nice BG, and WTF that voices?! (/me nosebleeding)
Mod
1|2|3|4

Beginner

01:09:428 (69428|2) - How about move to column 1?
01:27:709 (87709|0) - I think it move to column 3, for pattern before
01:28:178 (88178|2) - How about move into column 1?
01:30:756 (90756|2) - How about move into column 4?

Normal

00:18:803 (18803|0) - How about move to column 4?
00:21:849 (21849|3) - How about move to column 3?
00:22:084 (22084|2) - And this to move to column 4?
00:38:959 (38959|1) - How about adding one notes?
00:42:709 (42709|3) - ^

Ichi's Sweet Brownie

I think it's nothing wrong with this diff
Well, that's the mod, I'm very sure it very bad, I'm sorry about it, I'm still new on modding, btw, I like this song very much :D
Thanks for mod! i appreciate it! owo)b
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-
Ichi's Sweet Brownie Updated!
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
MOD here~

you already know my column format. right? skipped

General~

Found Nothing

Chart:

Beginner-

Found Nothing.. pretty well made~

Normal-

00:02:279 (2279|0,2279|1,2513|2) - you are following the Guitar on the opening. right? i suggest you pick someting else.. because the instrument you pick atm are barely audible, how about folowing the synth instead? make a simple pattern will do

the rest are good enough

Ichi Sweety Bunny Brownie Loli Let's Sack Him Shall we~? -

00:17:162 (17162|2,17631|2,17631|3) - i don't really get this.. same amount of sound. but different amount of note. care to explain it to me?

00:21:498 (21498|2,21498|3) - a bit inconsisitence here if you ignore this section 00:17:748 - 00:19:623 - 00:25:248 - 00:27:123 - and soo~ you can check it yourself~

00:54:193 (54193|2,54193|1) - i dont hear anything beside Vocal and hi hat. so why you give it 2 note while 00:49:037 - 00:49:506 - 00:49:974 - have a same amount as that only have 1? if it's intended for transition. that wouldn't be necessary since 00:53:959 (53959|2,53959|3,53959|0,54428|0,54428|3) - are enough to represent the transition

00:54:662 (54662|2,54779|0,54779|1,54896|2,54896|3,55131|1,55365|0,55365|2,55482|1,55482|3,55599|2,55834|1,55834|3,55834|0,56068|2,56303|0,56303|3,56537|1,56654|3,56654|2,56771|1,56771|0,57006|0,57240|3,57240|2,57357|0,57357|1,57474|2,57709|3,57709|0,57709|1,57943|1,58178|3,58178|2) - uhh.. can you explain this to me? why you map the synth here while the synth are starting from this point? 00:46:928 -

Mod end ~
Aras
827 posts
Joined September 2014
Aras
S.I.D. and Sid and SID

Normal
* 00:09:428 - gimana kalau gini aja lin ?
berikut beberapa alasannya :
- 00:13:178 - LN disini ga sama dengan yang di 00:09:428 -
- trus notenya aku coba re arrange biar gini

* 00:46:459 (46459|1,46459|0) - note nya pisah di dua tangan seems better
* 01:00:053 (60053|3,60756|2) - swap? re- arrange note sebelumnya kalau acc
* 01:08:959 - LN ke-2 nya gak start sini aja? kalau accept jangan llupa ini 01:23:724 (83724|0) -
*

other diff siap maghrib ya owo Beginner is clean, owo)b
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

Aste- wrote:

MOD here~

you already know my column format. right? skipped

General~

Found Nothing

Chart:

Ichi Sweety Bunny Brownie Loli Let's Sack Him Shall we~? -

00:17:162 (17162|2,17631|2,17631|3) - i don't really get this.. same amount of sound. but different amount of note. care to explain it to me? I changed some layering here, maybe my bad because i don't really hear it well there

00:21:498 (21498|2,21498|3) - a bit inconsisitence here if you ignore this section 00:17:748 - 00:19:623 - 00:25:248 - 00:27:123 - and soo~ you can check it yourself~ ^

00:54:193 (54193|2,54193|1) - i dont hear anything beside Vocal and hi hat. so why you give it 2 note while 00:49:037 - 00:49:506 - 00:49:974 - have a same amount as that only have 1? if it's intended for transition. that wouldn't be necessary since 00:53:959 (53959|2,53959|3,53959|0,54428|0,54428|3) - are enough to represent the transition Pretty obvious that i following the piano and hihat only (and drum)

00:54:662 (54662|2,54779|0,54779|1,54896|2,54896|3,55131|1,55365|0,55365|2,55482|1,55482|3,55599|2,55834|1,55834|3,55834|0,56068|2,56303|0,56303|3,56537|1,56654|3,56654|2,56771|1,56771|0,57006|0,57240|3,57240|2,57357|0,57357|1,57474|2,57709|3,57709|0,57709|1,57943|1,58178|3,58178|2) - uhh.. can you explain this to me? why you map the synth here while the synth are starting from this point? 00:46:928 - i still keep it, but and made the previous part (which have same melody) to be same as the timing you have mentioned there (and yes, some slightly changes)

Mod end ~
Thanks

http://puu.sh/pXUdz/9487a8f9f1.osu
erlinadewi-
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Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Aras25 wrote:

S.I.D. and Sid and SID

Normal
* 00:09:428 - gimana kalau gini aja lin ? Ok!
berikut beberapa alasannya :
- 00:13:178 - LN disini ga sama dengan yang di 00:09:428 -
- trus notenya aku coba re arrange biar gini

* 00:46:459 (46459|1,46459|0) - note nya pisah di dua tangan seems better keep aja, hehehe. kayaknya udah pass
* 01:00:053 (60053|3,60756|2) - swap? re- arrange note sebelumnya kalau acc ^
* 01:08:959 - LN ke-2 nya gak start sini aja? kalau accept jangan llupa ini 01:23:724 (83724|0) - itu ln pertama ikut vokal, ln yg ke 2 ngelayer 1/4 nya

other diff siap maghrib ya owo Beginner is clean, owo)b
Makasehhh Aras >w<)/

Ichi's Sweet Brownie UPDATED!
NVAN
268 posts
Joined November 2013
NVAN
I was thinking to re-map my standard set. Would you mind if I join your set?
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

XeroiZi HD wrote:

I was thinking to re-map my standard set. Would you mind if I join your set?
maap bgt zik, tapi udah planning bkin mania mapset aja.. hehehehe
Gomuryuu
375 posts
Joined January 2014
Gomuryuu
Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4

Beginner
Nothing particularly had to be changed, overall a good beginner diff, but i'm going to be a bit nitpicky about this part 01:16:224 (76224|3,76224|0,76459|0,76459|3,76693|1) - which might be a little bit too hard for a beginner diff and it really sticks out on the diff curve http://puu.sh/q03Fm/bafb72b671.jpg
i know that it is intended because the music suggest so and yeah it is nice to have one or two element of surprise along the map, but you might want to consider nerfing it down to something like this http://puu.sh/q04qv/2387cdb07d.jpg or something similar as it also provide consistency to 01:08:959 (68959|1) - here you used 1/1 LN to cover the 1/4 drum sound

01:23:959 (83959|0) - still related to my previous point, also a small consistency issue here, i'm not sure if you are mapping this LN to the vocal or to supposedly cover a nonexistent 1/4 drum sound (unlike 01:08:959 (68959|1) - which actually have 1/4 sound), if it is intended for the vocal then you should do the same to the other part that have similar vocal, else just make it a normal note
Normal
01:17:162 (77162|2,77396|3) - swap column, unnecessary jack also for comfortability & better play i guess
nice flow, good job ;)
Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:32:162 ~ 00:45:053 - in this section, i noticed that the jack LN pattern should have changed one beat earlier for each key change, for instance 00:35:443 (35443|3) - this LN should be moved to column 2, following the next key for the jack pattern and so on for each key change. and i also noticed that there's another synth sound in the transition between each key change that could make some interesting pattern, such as http://puu.sh/q07Ze/4b837e617d.jpg or any similar pattern

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4

Beginner
Nothing particularly had to be changed, overall a good beginner diff, but i'm going to be a bit nitpicky about this part 01:16:224 (76224|3,76224|0,76459|0,76459|3,76693|1) - which might be a little bit too hard for a beginner diff and it really sticks out on the diff curve http://puu.sh/q03Fm/bafb72b671.jpg
i know that it is intended because the music suggest so and yeah it is nice to have one or two element of surprise along the map, but you might want to consider nerfing it down to something like this http://puu.sh/q04qv/2387cdb07d.jpg or something similar as it also provide consistency to 01:08:959 (68959|1) - here you used 1/1 LN to cover the 1/4 drum sound

01:23:959 (83959|0) - still related to my previous point, also a small consistency issue here, i'm not sure if you are mapping this LN to the vocal or to supposedly cover a nonexistent 1/4 drum sound (unlike 01:08:959 (68959|1) - which actually have 1/4 sound), if it is intended for the vocal then you should do the same to the other part that have similar vocal, else just make it a normal note
Normal
01:17:162 (77162|2,77396|3) - swap column, unnecessary jack also for comfortability & better play i guess
nice flow, good job ;)

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
All Acc, Thanks for MOD >w<
lenpai
Beatmap Nominator
1,772 posts
Joined December 2014
lenpai
"ps. loli song"

was expecting nanahira. Disappointed </3

some really easy stuff so dont expect a good mod

got nothing for sweet brownie

cant believe im modding a normal diff huhuhuhu
00:30:053 - i think the section should be mapped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5612098
00:45:990 (45990|0) - idk this could work better at 2
00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - these stuff are really not audible on 100% thus the previous screenshot stongly suggesting to drop these notes

well that was a crappy mod from me /me throws star

Good luck!
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

Gomuryuu wrote:

Hi Elin & Ichi~

Here's my mod as requested via in-game chat

Column 1|2|3|4


Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:32:162 ~ 00:45:053 - in this section, i noticed that the jack LN pattern should have changed one beat earlier for each key change, for instance 00:35:443 (35443|3) - this LN should be moved to column 2, following the next key for the jack pattern and so on for each key change. and i also noticed that there's another synth sound in the transition between each key change that could make some interesting pattern, such as http://puu.sh/q07Ze/4b837e617d.jpg or any similar pattern pretty nice catch here :)

that's all i found, great rhythm choice as always, loved it :)

Nice map and Lovely song, sorry if i can't be of much help, good luck

GO RANK!~ :)
Thanks!
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Lenfried- wrote:

"ps. loli song"

was expecting nanahira. Disappointed </3

some really easy stuff so dont expect a good mod

got nothing for sweet brownie

cant believe im modding a normal diff huhuhuhu
00:30:053 - i think the section should be mapped like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5612098 hmm.. but i think that part have loud sound in red tick, so keep for this one
00:45:990 (45990|0) - idk this could work better at 2 oki
00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - these stuff are really not audible on 100% thus the previous screenshot stongly suggesting to drop these notessame as ^^

well that was a crappy mod from me /me throws star

Good luck!
Thanks len for mod and for star <3
Virtue-
Beatmap Nominator
1,112 posts
Joined March 2015
Virtue-


Virtue's Mania Modding Queue


Things that you need to know :
  1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
  2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General
Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : OK!

Beginner
00:01:928 (1928|3,3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - dst, itu stop di biru... mundurin 1 garis :v
00:08:724 (8724|3) - move to 2
00:47:396 (47396|3,47396|0) - why double? padahal di depan gk double :/

Normal
no comment

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
no comment, add some SVs(?)

-END OF MOD-


SCORES
92/100

sorry for very very short mod :( (ni map kek g gua apa"in =w=) klo g guna jgn give kudos

CAN'T WAIT THIS SIMPLE AND FUN MAP RANKED OMG >w<)
Amids
322 posts
Joined February 2016
Amids
Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Beginner
* 00:16:928 - add 1 lagi buat simbal
* 01:16:459 (76459|0,76459|1,76928|3,76928|2) - ini CTRL + H aja biar gak awkward

Normal
* 01:15:053 - http://puu.sh/q6nor/da0aa35285.png

Ichi's Coklat Manis Kayak Aku
* 00:20:912 - miss, add 1 note
* 00:45:053 - agak sreg liatnya, mungkin kayak gini lebih enak http://puu.sh/q6omG/756364b1b6.png
* 01:30:404 - sampai 01:31:928 - teriak "ikkeh ~ ikkeh" :v

Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
erlinadewi-

Virtue- wrote:



Virtue's Mania Modding Queue


Things that you need to know :
  1. this mod contains of suggestions, something that need to be fixed, and my opinions
  2. if your map still need to be fixed, just req in my queue

General
Title/Artist : OK!
Song : OK!
BPM/Offset : OK!
BG/Video : OK!
Hitsounds : OK!

Beginner
00:01:928 (1928|3,3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - dst, itu stop di biru... mundurin 1 garis :v jadi ane ntar
00:08:724 (8724|3) - move to 2 nope
00:47:396 (47396|3,47396|0) - why double? padahal di depan gk double :/ my bad, oke added

Normal
no comment

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
no comment, add some SVs(?)

-END OF MOD-


SCORES
92/100

sorry for very very short mod :( (ni map kek g gua apa"in =w=) klo g guna jgn give kudos

CAN'T WAIT THIS SIMPLE AND FUN MAP RANKED OMG >w<)

Hamids- wrote:

Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Beginner
* 00:16:928 - add 1 lagi buat simbal added
* 01:16:459 (76459|0,76459|1,76928|3,76928|2) - ini CTRL + H aja biar gak awkward ok

Normal
* 01:15:053 - http://puu.sh/q6nor/da0aa35285.png nice


Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
thanks modnya gaesss >w<)b
Ichigaki
1,767 posts
Joined February 2013
Ichigaki

Hamids- wrote:

Request NM ><

Maaf di PHP-in terus :(

1 | 2 | 3 | 4


Ichi's Coklat Manis Kayak Aku
* 00:20:912 - miss, add 1 note nice catch
* 00:45:053 - agak sreg liatnya, mungkin kayak gini lebih enak http://puu.sh/q6omG/756364b1b6.png aku ganti tapi versiku sendiri ww
* 01:30:404 - sampai 01:31:928 - teriak "ikkeh ~ ikkeh" :v instrumennya udah berhenti

Overall dah Bagos~ apalagi lagu Fine Lady >///< goodluck buat mapnya elin owo)/
thanks

http://puu.sh/qcAv1/3d24c724cf.osu
Cursetyl
20 posts
Joined February 2015
Cursetyl
Fun map :)

Beginner
Can't find anything wrong with this dif, good stuff

Normal
00:53:256 (53256|0) - Maybe start at the beginning of the word rather than the "ba" part

Ichi's Sweet Brownie
00:46:224 (46224|1) - Try placing an SV from this to 00:46:928 (46928|0,46928|2,46928|3)
01:01:342 (61342|3) - And another SV from this to 01:01:928 (61928|0,61928|3,61928|2)

Good luck with rank :D
Rivals_7
Beatmap Nominator
2,978 posts
Joined July 2014
Rivals_7
yo o/
sorry mager buat modding wkwkw
1|2|3|4

[General]

you might want to raise the HS volume to 40%. they're not rly audible

[Ichi's]

00:01:928 (1928|1) - W

00:02:279 (2279|0) - dunno if this W are worth to be added, this section is mainly a piano so i guess its more convenient to delete it (you could check "normal" for reference, there's more like this)

00:10:834 (10834|0) - I believe this should be C, well claps is literally louder here. you do that at - 00:11:771 (11771|3) - too

00:12:709 (12709|0) - ^

00:14:584 (14584|3) - ^

00:18:334 (18334|1) - C?

00:20:209 (20209|2) - ^

00:22:084 (22084|1) - ^

00:27:709 (27709|2) - ^

00:30:404 (30404|0,30756|0,31224|0) - delete W? also make it SN since there's no kick apparently

00:45:990 (45990|0) - should be C

00:46:928 (46928|3) - W?

00:55:834 (55834|0) - C?

00:57:709 (57709|0) - ^

01:00:756 (60756|0,60756|3) - delete w? also make it SN cuz it seems really faint here

01:01:928 (61928|3) - maybe C? loud crash tho

01:02:396 (62396|3) - to C? you could see normal for the reference since there's more

01:27:592 (87592|2,87709|3) - swap? juct to minimalize the triple stacking - 01:27:123 (87123|2,87357|2,87592|2) -

01:30:053 - Guess you could make it more interesting? try to follow pitch http://puu.sh/qptim/ab36643c7e.jpg

[Normal]

00:34:740 (34740|0) - move this to 4 maybe? just to make it a lil' bit look more hand balanced

01:01:928 (61928|2) - C maybe? loud crash

01:05:209 (65209|2,65443|0) - ctrl+g. so people could hit the double more convenient since there's an LN there

[Beginner]

01:16:459 (76459|1) - delete C, there's already C there

01:16:224 (76224|1,76224|0) - move to 3|4, its quite overkill for an EZ player. they probably will lose balance since they have to hold the LN after it

Good Luck :D
Ortlinde
255 posts
Joined January 2015
Ortlinde
Hi, Elinnnnnn...

all diffs are lust too good for me so maybe this one is a shitmod uwu

as usual feel free to reject

somehow i hear "uwu"sound at 01:08:724 -

moddar
[Beginner]
  1. 00:01:928 (1928|3) - End LN and add at 00:02:279 (the chord sound is clear) (00:03:803 (3803|1,5678|1,7553|3) - this too)
  2. 01:23:959 - Change 1 note into LN for consistency (see 01:08:959 (68959|1) - )
[Normal]
  1. 00:58:412 (58412|2,58881|2,59349|2,59818|2) - This note is unnecessary since it's for "normal" players imo
[Ichi]
00:58:178 - Add LN or change 1/2 note into LN

#kthxbye
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