DaPiePiece wrote:
m4mGENERALPretty good mapset. Overall what needs fixing is flow and overlaps, as well as the difficulty of MASTER+DEBUT01:14:312 (2,3) - overlap?
01:40:430 (3,4) - maybe unstack and make this flow betterREGULAR00:12:548 (3,4) - make this flow better
00:15:371 (1,2) - overlap
01:15:371 (2,3) - stack these
01:18:901 (4,5,1) - stack these
01:19:959 (3,1,2) - make this flow better
01:25:959 (6,1) - overlap unneeded
This diff flows the bestPRO00:29:489 (7,8,1) - pattern a bit too hard for that difficulty
01:23:842 (3,4) - overlap unneeded
Great diff. Flows really well, mapped really well.MASTER00:11:312 (1) - Move this to the left a bit for better spacing and flow. Maybe make it curve into the 2 after
00:15:724 (1) - ctrl+g this? Flows better.
00:17:136 (1,2,1,2) - This doesn't flow that well, I'd change the pattern a bit
00:20:489 (3,4) - space this better
00:21:371 (1,2) - move this more down and to the right
00:29:489 (3) - curve this into the next circle
00:42:371 (8,1) - overlap
00:42:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix the spacing
00:43:959 (7,1) - overlap
00:50:665 (3,1,2) - same
01:17:136 (5) - curve this
01:24:195 (4) - I'd curve this
01:32:489 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this look nicer
01:34:342 (6,1,2) - same
This diff is well mapped, the only problem is spacing and flow. Improve those 2 and the map will be great.
MASTER+00:18:459 (4,1) - move this up for better flow
00:23:665 (2,1) - overlap
00:25:430 (4,5,1) - stack
00:28:254 (4,5,1) - same
00:41:489 (4,5,6,1) - this flow badly
00:49:959 (3,4,1) - imo, unplayable. Change this pattern
00:54:548 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - make this look nicer
01:42:548 (1,3) - overlap unneeded
01:44:489 (4,5,1) - there is no triple in the song at this point. Make it a low slider velocity slider if you want a cursor stop there
01:45:018 (3,1,4) - overlap
01:48:724 (4,5,1) - stack
01:51:548 (4,5,1) - same
01:52:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice idea, but plays not so well, just stack them
01:54:371 (4,5,1) - stack
I see that you wanted to make a harder difficulty. It's nicely mapped, but turns out to be unplayable and overmapped. This is, in comparison to the other diffs, is the worst difficulty. It's not bad, but it needs fixing. For example, patterns like these 01:54:371 (4,5,1) - tend to be unplayable, and are better of stacked at this difficulty. If you compare this diff to other 5.7 stars, you see a clear difference in difficulty. So as I said before, make the patterns more playable, and maybe reduce the spacing on some of the jumps or sliders.
GL on the rank. Also god damn the song is catchy!
sorry pie ;3;
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