1. Hard (4,92 stars, 184 notes)
2. Katsuri's Easy (1,97 stars, 65 notes)
3. Normal (3,02 stars, 85 notes)

1. Set preview points on both stages.

1. 00:04:124 (5) - Add new combo.
2. 00:07:814 (9) - ^
3. 00:31:568 (5,6) - Move these notes 1 grid up.
4. Stack Leniency -4.

1. There are some stacked sliders that look wierd. Stack Leniency -2.
2. Place the slider exactly under end of slider 1.

320,152,31799,2,2,B|312:88|256:56|192:72|152:144|184:200|232:232|288:208,1,324.999995157123

Slowmotion wrote:

Katsuri's Easy

00:03:662 (4) - não deveria continuar a sequência de whistles? Não
00:20:729 (2) - Acredito que não ficou muito adequado :/ Ta sim
00:29:954 (3) - está feio.. IMO Nem tá imo
00:33:183 (6) - Pra que tanto finish num slider D: ? fica bom


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O mapa está bom em minha opnião >.< Boa sorte, Fab.

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2 is recommended, as with most 1/2 songs as the ticks fall on things in the music and aren't too obtrusive.
Katsuri needs to go in tags, on all difficulties.

Hard:
There is little, if any, 1/4 in the second and last sections. In my opinion, your overmapping there feels unnatural and is adding unnecessary difficulty. -> I think it's okay D:
00:35:489 - Drag this break to here instead, as it's much nicer to have it start at the start of the bar in this case. -> Ok
00:53:939 (5,6,7) - Just a minor suggestion, but the pattern could arguably flow better if it was flipped vertically (Ctrl+J), so the pattern doesn't 'go back' on itself. Plus, it's a bit weird to have a slider almost immediately after the exact same one. If that makes sense. -> Fixed
01:19:539 (5) - You don't have to, but you could move this up so it doesn't obscure the tick on 6. I'm getting a bit nitpicky here, am I. -> Fixed, I think hm
01:20:922 (7,8) - I think this spacing is a bit too intense and hidden by the previous slider, in my opinion.-> Maybe hm
01:22:767 (1) - I'd rather you end the spinner at 01:25:304. As it is, it just seems to go on too long following nothing. -> I think it's fine

Normal:
01:10:544 (1) - This new combo feels a bit unnecessary. Remove it? -> Ok
01:23:690 (1) - Once again, this seems to overshoot its target quite a bit. I suggest you remove the repeat on 01:17:924 (1) and start the spinner on 01:21:614 up until 01:25:304. -> I like this way ):

Lovely map. I'd like to see more from you eventually.

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2 is recommended, as with most 1/2 songs as the ticks fall on things in the music and aren't too obtrusive.
Katsuri needs to go in tags, on all difficulties.

Katsuri's Easy:
I suggest you map the second half of the mp3 as well, for consistency for other difficulties. Yes, this requires effort, bt's a bit patronising to Easy players as it is.
00:23:035 (4) - Perhaps remove the clap on the repeat; it feels a bit odd and excessive to have one on an offbeat here. Ok
00:45:636 (2,3) - It feels like you're making up your own rhythms here, unlike the rest of the map. However, oh well. It's good hm
00:47:481 (1) - The ending of this feels unnatural because of the sudden hitsound change. I recommend you move the inherited section at the end at least 1/4 further. It's good hm
00:59:474 (1) - Add a finish and/or decrease the volume of the section at the end? It feels a bit loud as it is, that's all. Yeah

Lovely map. I'd like to see more from you eventually.

Behonkiss wrote:

All difficulties:
- Why no claps in the opening soft section? -> idk, i don't think it's necessary

Normal:
- 00:20:729 to 00:32:721 goes heavy on whistling sliders. Add some variety to those. -> i don't think it's so bad
- 01:10:083 on has no hitsounds. -> fixed

Hard:
- 00:00:434 to 00:13:349 (the opening soft section) goes overboard on the whistles. -> maybe
- So does 00:48:404 to 01:03:164. -> i think it's fine

• Decrease your Volume in the part 0:00:000 - 0:13:349 and 0:48:404 - 1:03:164 to 60 or so because the Soft Notes are too loud

• I think you could add "Rare" "Snes" and/or "16-bit" to the Tags

bomber34 wrote:

General:

• Decrease your Volume in the part 0:00:000 - 0:13:349 and 0:48:404 - 1:03:164 to 60 or so because the Soft Notes are too loud

• I think you could add "Rare" "Snes" and/or "16-bit" to the Tags

Hard:
1:19:769 (6,7,8) - Even though I like the style I think the jumps are a little to long, but that is up to you x) -> fixed
1:21:384 (9,1) - ... bad spacing, it is just me but I always miss there ^^ -> ^

Normal:
0:02:048 - add a note it sounds better and it doesn't feels like playing the easy diff. -> nah, it's good thanks
0:03:893 - ^
0:05:738 - ^
0:07:583 - ^
0:09:428 - ^

Katsuri's Easy
I think it is good


I love this song :3 I hope you get it Ranked

Takos wrote:

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Hey \>w</

General
Your .mp3 file has 320kbps bit rate. This needs to be between 128~192 to be ranked, so you need to re-encode the mp3. Don't forget to fix offset after you do it.
Add Katsuri to tags
Delete useless .osb files

Hard
01:22:767 (1) - I think you should start this at 01:23:459 - and map until that part -> fixed

Normal
00:09:659 (2) - Touches the HP bar a bit... not really an issue though
00:32:952 (1) - Start at 00:33:644 - ? -> fixed
00:37:334 (1) - Remove Finish at the end of the slider ->fixed
00:39:179 (3) - ^ -> fixed
01:17:924 (1) - I think you should make a star instead of a heart lol -> i'm going to try lol

Katsuri's Easy
Why not map the same length with other diffs?
00:11:042 (3) - Adjust spacing to 0.8x ->fixed
00:48:865 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this pattern is readable for beginners... ->idk
00:56:245 (1,2,3) - ^ ->idk

This reminds me of the good old days when I was little...
I like the slider arts~

Wiinter wrote:

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agradeça o fato de serem 5 da manhã e eu estar sem sono. pq senão não daria mod numa musica chata assim nunca u.u ainda mais com uma diff do katsuri lol

General
blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps-> pregs, quando alguem for dar bubble qm sab
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta? ->^
dafuck esse numero de breaks em cada diff -> afe

[Katsuri's Easy]
00:02:279 (3) - *nazi* já que é pra fazer um slider que "envolva" a beat, ajeita ele ali em baixo (deveria ficar assim http://puu.sh/at2q&#41;-> nazi fixed
00:20:267 (1) - não gostei muito da clap aqui, mas whatever -> deixa ela aí
00:23:035 (4) - soa melhor com a repeat em 00:23:496; se tu mudar isso, ou coloca mais uma repeat ou inventa outra coisa -> soa mesmo, mas to com pregs
00:48:404 - 100% é meio.. alto demais -> isso em todas as diffs?
00:55:323 (5) - esse finish tá de estourar timpanos -> sensivel
deixa de ser preguiçoso e mapeia o resto da diff =w= não é pq as pessoas são noobs que elas não tem direito de aproveitar essa bela melodia como os outros -note uma leve pitada de sarcasmo- -> depois arranjo o resto com ele

[Normal]
aumenta um pouco a HP drain rate Dx tá desproporcional em relação a AR e etc
00:22:574 (6) - uhh, fica melhor se vc deixar a repeat 1/2 mais cedo -> como assim vai ficar indo e voltando
00:23:957 (x) - caso tu tenha reduzido o anterior, add uma beat aqui com nc (e daí tira o que tá em 00:24:419 (9)) -> q q e nc meu deus
00:26:264 (13) - mesma coisa que o 00:22:574 (6) -> mesma coisa que ali em cima
01:17:924 (1) - wtf oq isso te a ver com a musica (mas ficou bonitinho x3) -> obg vc tbm

[Hard]
nada muito específico pra falar... mas achei a diff bem overmapped, principalmente as streams. mas enfim -> nazi

Wiinter wrote:

eu acho que se você for ficar com preguiça de ficar arrumando coisas em mods, nem peça por eles. aliás, nem comece mapsets, pq eles necessitam de bastante paciencia. lembre-se que o beatmap é seu, e não das pessoas que moddam ele, portanto não fique esperando da boa vontade dos outros pra arrumarem coisas pra você sendo que vc pode simplesmente fazê-las sem dificuldade alguma.

fabriciorby wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

eu acho que se você for ficar com preguiça de ficar arrumando coisas em mods, nem peça por eles. aliás, nem comece mapsets, pq eles necessitam de bastante paciencia. lembre-se que o beatmap é seu, e não das pessoas que moddam ele, portanto não fique esperando da boa vontade dos outros pra arrumarem coisas pra você sendo que vc pode simplesmente fazê-las sem dificuldade alguma.

ué, nunca disse que outras pessoas iriam fazer algo por mim e eu to lgd que precisa de paciencia, essa porra é velha pra caralho

Wiinter wrote:

fabriciorby wrote:

ué, nunca disse que outras pessoas iriam fazer algo por mim e eu to lgd que precisa de paciencia, essa porra é velha pra caralho

"blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps-> pregs, quando alguem for dar bubble qm sab
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta? ->^ok" aham senta la

ouranhshc wrote:

Folder
You have three .osbs please delete them and full submit them

Hard
00:43:330 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should find a different pattern because right now it's visually not appealing and you can't really see the approach circle for (4). the positioning of (5) could be better too. -> I hope it's better now
00:55:553 (7,1) - imo, this small spacing is awkward, possible move (1) further away? (you don't have to change this if you don't want to)
01:10:544 (3) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical by moving the middle sliderpoint 8 grids up (Lv 4) -> thanks, i haven't seen this
01:14:234 (1) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical -> ^
01:17:694 (1) - I think you should stack this on the beginning of (2). At first, I thought (1) was a slider when i was playing it -> i hope it's better now

Normal
01:17:924 (1) - This is a very pretty heart, but is it necessary. -> D:

Katsuri's - I know this is an easy diff, but atleast map to where fabriciorby mapped to
00:04:124 (1) - how about something like this: -> sure, thanks

SPOILER

216,264,4124,6,0,B|200:352|80:352|60:276,1,200,0|2

00:43:791 (4) - looks bad because the slider touches the end of (2) -> fixed
00:47:481 (1) - remove new combo -> ^

1. MP3 é 220kbps, você já sabe disso então conserta logo essa merda ou ninguém vai bubblear teu mapa af
2. Bota Katsuri nas tags de todas as diffs. Por enquanto só tem no Hard.
3. Breaks inconsistentes entre as dificuldades. Mapeia a mesma coisa pra tudo pô
4. Só uns 75% da MP3 tão mapeados. Mapeia até 01:52:980

1. 00:01:817 (2) - Remove o whistle por consistência com os outros sliders.
2. 00:09:659 (4,1) - Adiciona New Combo no (4) e tira o que tem no (1) por causa da downbeat.
3. 00:23:035 (4) - Faz esse slider ser apenas 1/1 (termina ele no white tick que tem antes desse vermelho). Então tira o finish do final dele e adiciona uma beat no 00:24:419 com finish e new combo.
4. 00:24:880 (1) - Aí remove o new combo aqui.
5. 00:33:183 (6) - Tira finish do início e bota clap. É melhor de ouvir.
6. 00:35:489 (Break) - Qual o motivo dessa break ter sido arrastada?
7. 00:45:636 (2,3,4) - Tenta fazer essa parte mais fácil. 1/2s em Easy são difíceis demais pros newbies D:
8. 00:55:323 (5) - Tira finish e bota clap, fica bem melhor de ouvir.
9. 00:58:090 (3) - Talvez bota a whistle no início ao invés do final?

• Overall Rating: 8.5/10 ~ Eu sei que você faz melhor, Katsuri. D: Enfim, ficou legal anyways, mas not enough symmetry pros seus mapas. Eu estou disappoint.

1. 00:20:267 (1) - Faz assim que fica bem melhor de jogar
2. 00:22:343 (5) - Tira o clap daqui, fica melhor de ouvir.
3. 00:26:033 (4) - ^
4. 00:38:718 (2,3) - jump no normal QISSO faz assim e depois faz o mesmo e dá ctrl+h+j pro (4)
5. 00:51:863 (7) - Tira o whistle, fica melhor de ouvir.
6. 00:53:478 (3,4) - bota whistle no (3) e tira no (4), fica melhor seriao maon//
7. 00:54:631 (6) - tira whistle do fim, tá meio que exagerado
8. 00:55:553 (7) - ^
9. 01:16:079 (1) - tira clap desse slider
10. 01:17:924 (1) - Seleciona o slider. Aperta ctrl+shift+s. Scaleia (?) por 0,668x. Adiciona mais uma repeat. TADAAA

• Overall Rating: 9.2/10 ~ foda d+, altas tretas aqui nessa dificuldade VISH, se eu virar osustreamer eu vou dar um jeito nisso mas tem que me prometer arrumar ok por favor moço

• 
  
  OD -1, HP -1 por favor, isso é coisa de insane

1. 00:01:125 (2) - tira whistle, fica bem melhor sem
2. 00:02:048 (3) - ^
3. 00:02:970 (5,7) - ^ aqui tb
4. 00:04:815 (4) - ^
5. 00:05:738 (3) - ^
6. 00:06:660 (5,7) - ^
7. 00:08:967 (4) - ^
8. 00:08:967 (4,5,1) - e esse spacing aí batman
9. 00:10:812 (3) - whistle do caralho ):
10. 00:20:498 (2) - tira esse finish aí tio
11. 00:20:729 (3) - tira a whistle do final
12. 00:21:421 (4) - ^
13. 00:24:419 (2,3) - ^
14. 00:33:413 (3) - tira whistle
15. 00:35:489 (Break) - pra q arrastar afffff
16. 00:46:559 (1) - adiciona finish aqui por consistência
17. 00:59:013 (7,8) - tira as whistles aqui pra ficar melhor
18. 01:01:088 (4) - ^
19. 01:03:164 (4) - add finish por consistência
20. 01:17:924 (2,3,4,5,6) - AIN SS2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2
21. 01:19:539 (5) - tira whistle daqui, aliás
22. 01:22:767 (6) - new combo pq fica melhor sl
23. 01:23:459 (1) - finish no final

• Overall Rating: 9.4/10 ~ tirando essas whistles aí de morrer, o mapa tá legal d+ rankeia isso pra mim e bota o papai noel na sb por favorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

1. Sério, tira esse "banana" das tags e adiciona "rareware super nintendo" em todas as diffs lol
2. Tira a countdown em todas as dificuldades, ela tá sendo inutilizada no momento
3. Em todas as dificuldades, as timing sections verdes estão unsnapped. Snapeia elas aí.
4. Baixa o volume dos hitsounds na seção de 00:48:464?

1. eu no meu post de antes wrote:

   00:23:035 (4) - Faz esse slider ser apenas 1/1 (termina ele no white tick que tem antes desse vermelho). Então tira o finish do final dele e adiciona uma beat no 00:24:419 com finish e new combo.

2. 00:55:383 (5) - Tira o finish e bota uma whistle aqui, o finish é ruim de escutar.
3. 01:14:294 (1) - adiciona uma finish aqui pra ser consistente com o outro slider
4. 01:23:635 (1) - Move esse spinner aqui 1/4 pra frente e depois termina ele no white tick. no momento ele começa muito cedo pra um easy

• 
  
  as breaks aqui são diferentes das outras dificuldades, mapeia do mesmo jeito que vc mapeou nas outras

1. 01:22:827 (4) - whistle no final? ta parecendo meio vazio agora

1. 00:06:720 (5,6,7,1,2) - o spacing aqui tá meio wtf
2. 00:20:327 (1) - tira esse finish, pfv, doi meus ouvidos ):
3. 00:42:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - sei lá... essa pattern é muito estranha, tenta remapear esse combo
4. 01:01:379 (1) - tira whistle do final, sei lá, fica melhor
5. 01:02:071 (2) - ^
6. 01:16:831 (4) - new combo
7. 01:17:292 (7,8,9) - ctrl+r nessas 3 notas, depois tira o clap do (7) e adiciona no (9)

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- Consider lowering the volumes - of at least the Normal sections - by about 10%. They can seem rather loud and obtrusive now, making returning to the soft sampleset very sudden, but it's up to you whether you want to fix this.
- 01:25:356 - I'd recommend ending the spinner of all difficulties at this point rather than where it currently ends. It runs a bit over and sounds unnatural as it currently is.

Normal:
- 00:46:380 (3) - I think this sounds better if the repeat is removed, and the whole slider is moved 1/2 forward. Like this

Hard:
- Approach rate appears to be grossly disproportionate to the map, almost forcing unnecessary difficulty, and not being very much fun in this case. Decrease it by at least 1 (so it becomes AR7), or 2 (AR6) to be on line with the other difficulty settings.
- I'm also still not sure about the streams, and you could probably tone down the finish usage to about half in the Normal sections.
- 01:11:519 (5) - This particular note stands out to me as being awkward for some reason. I think it's best if you remove it (or at least the whistle), while fixing spacing.
- 01:23:281 (2) - Personally, I'd replace this whistle with a clap, or not use any hitsounds at all. I think it ends the map better that way

Other than the things I've just talked about, cool beans. Sorry if I repeat what I've already said before and forgotten

Gaba wrote:

CADE A BANANA NAS TAGS, NOAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH