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David Wise - Main Theme

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Guerra
351 posts
Joined February 2010
Guerra
Hard-
para mim está tudo certo,mas tente fazer toda a musica,mesmo que seja um copy/paste que o op111 sempre faz.

normal-
00:59:243(7)-essa nota ela podia se alinhar a outra(6),ou fica em cima(6),mas não é necessário.
complete a musicá,larga de preguiça xD.

easy Katsu-
Não precisa mudar o spacing no decorrer da música em easy.
00:05:969(3)-não se coloca uma nota em cima da outra em easy,confunde os novos jogadores.
00:10:120(1)-jump?ele não pode ficar tão afastado da nota 00:08:736(3).

gostei do mapa xD.
Noobita
597 posts
Joined June 2009
Noobita
^.~
Slowmotion_old
112 posts
Joined May 2010
Slowmotion_old
Katsuri's Easy

00:03:662 (4) - não deveria continuar a sequência de whistles?
00:20:729 (2) - Acredito que não ficou muito adequado :/
00:29:954 (3) - está feio.. IMO
00:33:183 (6) - Pra que tanto finish num slider D: ?

normal

00:31:799 (6) - Com um pouco menos de whistle fica bom ;)
00:38:718 (2) - não seria melhor um clap ao invés disto? ( é minha opnião >.<
00:40:563 (4) - ^

Hard
não achei nada de errado aqui..


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O mapa está bom em minha opnião >.< Boa sorte, Fab.
Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri

Slowmotion wrote:

Katsuri's Easy

00:03:662 (4) - não deveria continuar a sequência de whistles? Não
00:20:729 (2) - Acredito que não ficou muito adequado :/ Ta sim
00:29:954 (3) - está feio.. IMO Nem tá imo
00:33:183 (6) - Pra que tanto finish num slider D: ? fica bom


_________________________

O mapa está bom em minha opnião >.< Boa sorte, Fab.
NotShinta
1,021 posts
Joined September 2009
NotShinta
General:
Tick rate 2 is recommended, as with most 1/2 songs as the ticks fall on things in the music and aren't too obtrusive.
Katsuri needs to go in tags, on all difficulties.

Hard:
There is little, if any, 1/4 in the second and last sections. In my opinion, your overmapping there feels unnatural and is adding unnecessary difficulty.
00:35:489 - Drag this break to here instead, as it's much nicer to have it start at the start of the bar in this case.
00:53:939 (5,6,7) - Just a minor suggestion, but the pattern could arguably flow better if it was flipped vertically (Ctrl+J), so the pattern doesn't 'go back' on itself. Plus, it's a bit weird to have a slider almost immediately after the exact same one. If that makes sense.
01:19:539 (5) - You don't have to, but you could move this up so it doesn't obscure the tick on 6. I'm getting a bit nitpicky here, am I.
01:20:922 (7,8) - I think this spacing is a bit too intense and hidden by the previous slider, in my opinion.
01:22:767 (1) - I'd rather you end the spinner at 01:25:304. As it is, it just seems to go on too long following nothing.

Normal:
01:10:544 (1) - This new combo feels a bit unnecessary. Remove it?
01:23:690 (1) - Once again, this seems to overshoot its target quite a bit. I suggest you remove the repeat on 01:17:924 (1) and start the spinner on 01:21:614 up until 01:25:304.

Katsuri's Easy:
I suggest you map the second half of the mp3 as well, for consistency for other difficulties. Yes, this requires effort, bt's a bit patronising to Easy players as it is.
00:23:035 (4) - Perhaps remove the clap on the repeat; it feels a bit odd and excessive to have one on an offbeat here.
00:45:636 (2,3) - It feels like you're making up your own rhythms here, unlike the rest of the map. However, oh well.
00:47:481 (1) - The ending of this feels unnatural because of the sudden hitsound change. I recommend you move the inherited section at the end at least 1/4 further.
00:59:474 (1) - Add a finish and/or decrease the volume of the section at the end? It feels a bit loud as it is, that's all.

Lovely map. I'd like to see more from you eventually.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2 is recommended, as with most 1/2 songs as the ticks fall on things in the music and aren't too obtrusive.
Katsuri needs to go in tags, on all difficulties.

Hard:
There is little, if any, 1/4 in the second and last sections. In my opinion, your overmapping there feels unnatural and is adding unnecessary difficulty. -> I think it's okay D:
00:35:489 - Drag this break to here instead, as it's much nicer to have it start at the start of the bar in this case. -> Ok
00:53:939 (5,6,7) - Just a minor suggestion, but the pattern could arguably flow better if it was flipped vertically (Ctrl+J), so the pattern doesn't 'go back' on itself. Plus, it's a bit weird to have a slider almost immediately after the exact same one. If that makes sense. -> Fixed
01:19:539 (5) - You don't have to, but you could move this up so it doesn't obscure the tick on 6. I'm getting a bit nitpicky here, am I. -> Fixed, I think hm
01:20:922 (7,8) - I think this spacing is a bit too intense and hidden by the previous slider, in my opinion.-> Maybe hm
01:22:767 (1) - I'd rather you end the spinner at 01:25:304. As it is, it just seems to go on too long following nothing. -> I think it's fine

Normal:
01:10:544 (1) - This new combo feels a bit unnecessary. Remove it? -> Ok
01:23:690 (1) - Once again, this seems to overshoot its target quite a bit. I suggest you remove the repeat on 01:17:924 (1) and start the spinner on 01:21:614 up until 01:25:304. -> I like this way ):

Lovely map. I'd like to see more from you eventually.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2 is recommended, as with most 1/2 songs as the ticks fall on things in the music and aren't too obtrusive.
Katsuri needs to go in tags, on all difficulties.

Katsuri's Easy:
I suggest you map the second half of the mp3 as well, for consistency for other difficulties. Yes, this requires effort, bt's a bit patronising to Easy players as it is.
00:23:035 (4) - Perhaps remove the clap on the repeat; it feels a bit odd and excessive to have one on an offbeat here. Ok
00:45:636 (2,3) - It feels like you're making up your own rhythms here, unlike the rest of the map. However, oh well. It's good hm
00:47:481 (1) - The ending of this feels unnatural because of the sudden hitsound change. I recommend you move the inherited section at the end at least 1/4 further. It's good hm
00:59:474 (1) - Add a finish and/or decrease the volume of the section at the end? It feels a bit loud as it is, that's all. Yeah

Lovely map. I'd like to see more from you eventually.

Sorry for doubleposting
Katsuri
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Joined February 2011
Katsuri
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Behon
Elite Mapper
1,380 posts
Here since the beginning
Behon
All difficulties:
- Why no claps in the opening soft section?

Normal:
- 00:20:729 to 00:32:721 goes heavy on whistling sliders. Add some variety to those.
- 01:10:083 on has no hitsounds.

Hard:
- 00:00:434 to 00:13:349 (the opening soft section) goes overboard on the whistles.
- So does 00:48:404 to 01:03:164.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Behonkiss wrote:

All difficulties:
- Why no claps in the opening soft section? -> idk, i don't think it's necessary

Normal:
- 00:20:729 to 00:32:721 goes heavy on whistling sliders. Add some variety to those. -> i don't think it's so bad
- 01:10:083 on has no hitsounds. -> fixed

Hard:
- 00:00:434 to 00:13:349 (the opening soft section) goes overboard on the whistles. -> maybe
- So does 00:48:404 to 01:03:164. -> i think it's fine
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
>Katsuri's easy
>*foda-se*
bomber34
1,529 posts
Joined February 2011
bomber34
General:
  • Decrease your Volume in the part 0:00:000 - 0:13:349 and 0:48:404 - 1:03:164 to 60 or so because the Soft Notes are too loud
  • I think you could add "Rare" "Snes" and/or "16-bit" to the Tags
Hard:
1:19:769 (6,7,8) - Even though I like the style I think the jumps are a little to long, but that is up to you x)
1:21:384 (9,1) - ... bad spacing, it is just me but I always miss there ^^

Normal:
0:02:048 - add a note it sounds better and it doesn't feels like playing the easy diff.
0:03:893 - ^
0:05:738 - ^
0:07:583 - ^
0:09:428 - ^

Katsuri's Easy
I think it is good :)


I love this song :3 I hope you get it Ranked
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

bomber34 wrote:

General:
  • Decrease your Volume in the part 0:00:000 - 0:13:349 and 0:48:404 - 1:03:164 to 60 or so because the Soft Notes are too loud
  • I think you could add "Rare" "Snes" and/or "16-bit" to the Tags
Hard:
1:19:769 (6,7,8) - Even though I like the style I think the jumps are a little to long, but that is up to you x) -> fixed
1:21:384 (9,1) - ... bad spacing, it is just me but I always miss there ^^ -> ^

Normal:
0:02:048 - add a note it sounds better and it doesn't feels like playing the easy diff. -> nah, it's good thanks
0:03:893 - ^
0:05:738 - ^
0:07:583 - ^
0:09:428 - ^

Katsuri's Easy
I think it is good :)


I love this song :3 I hope you get it Ranked
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
Hey \>w</

General
Your .mp3 file has 320kbps bit rate. This needs to be between 128~192 to be ranked, so you need to re-encode the mp3. Don't forget to fix offset after you do it.
Add Katsuri to tags
Delete useless .osb files

Hard
01:22:767 (1) - I think you should start this at 01:23:459 - and map until that part

Normal
00:09:659 (2) - Touches the HP bar a bit... not really an issue though
00:32:952 (1) - Start at 00:33:644 - ?
00:37:334 (1) - Remove Finish at the end of the slider
00:39:179 (3) - ^
01:17:924 (1) - I think you should make a star instead of a heart lol

Katsuri's Easy
Why not map the same length with other diffs?
00:11:042 (3) - Adjust spacing to 0.8x
00:48:865 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this pattern is readable for beginners...
00:56:245 (1,2,3) - ^

This reminds me of the good old days when I was little...
I like the slider arts~
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
agradeça o fato de serem 5 da manhã e eu estar sem sono. pq senão não daria mod numa musica chata assim nunca u.u ainda mais com uma diff do katsuri lol

General
blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta?
dafuck esse numero de breaks em cada diff

[Katsuri's Easy]
00:02:279 (3) - *nazi* já que é pra fazer um slider que "envolva" a beat, ajeita ele ali em baixo (deveria ficar assim http://puu.sh/at2q)
00:20:267 (1) - não gostei muito da clap aqui, mas whatever
00:23:035 (4) - soa melhor com a repeat em 00:23:496; se tu mudar isso, ou coloca mais uma repeat ou inventa outra coisa
00:48:404 - 100% é meio.. alto demais
00:55:323 (5) - esse finish tá de estourar timpanos
deixa de ser preguiçoso e mapeia o resto da diff =w= não é pq as pessoas são noobs que elas não tem direito de aproveitar essa bela melodia como os outros -note uma leve pitada de sarcasmo-

[Normal]
aumenta um pouco a HP drain rate Dx tá desproporcional em relação a AR e etc
00:22:574 (6) - uhh, fica melhor se vc deixar a repeat 1/2 mais cedo
00:23:957 (x) - caso tu tenha reduzido o anterior, add uma beat aqui com nc (e daí tira o que tá em 00:24:419 (9))
00:26:264 (13) - mesma coisa que o 00:22:574 (6)
01:17:924 (1) - wtf oq isso te a ver com a musica (mas ficou bonitinho x3)

[Hard]
nada muito específico pra falar... mas achei a diff bem overmapped, principalmente as streams. mas enfim
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Takos wrote:

SPOILER
Hey \>w</

General
Your .mp3 file has 320kbps bit rate. This needs to be between 128~192 to be ranked, so you need to re-encode the mp3. Don't forget to fix offset after you do it.
Add Katsuri to tags
Delete useless .osb files

Hard
01:22:767 (1) - I think you should start this at 01:23:459 - and map until that part -> fixed

Normal
00:09:659 (2) - Touches the HP bar a bit... not really an issue though
00:32:952 (1) - Start at 00:33:644 - ? -> fixed
00:37:334 (1) - Remove Finish at the end of the slider ->fixed
00:39:179 (3) - ^ -> fixed
01:17:924 (1) - I think you should make a star instead of a heart lol -> i'm going to try lol

Katsuri's Easy
Why not map the same length with other diffs?
00:11:042 (3) - Adjust spacing to 0.8x ->fixed
00:48:865 (1,2,3) - Not sure if this pattern is readable for beginners... ->idk
00:56:245 (1,2,3) - ^ ->idk

This reminds me of the good old days when I was little...
I like the slider arts~

Wiinter wrote:

SPOILER
agradeça o fato de serem 5 da manhã e eu estar sem sono. pq senão não daria mod numa musica chata assim nunca u.u ainda mais com uma diff do katsuri lol

General
blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps-> pregs, quando alguem for dar bubble qm sab
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta? ->^
dafuck esse numero de breaks em cada diff -> afe

[Katsuri's Easy]
00:02:279 (3) - *nazi* já que é pra fazer um slider que "envolva" a beat, ajeita ele ali em baixo (deveria ficar assim http://puu.sh/at2q&#41;-> nazi fixed
00:20:267 (1) - não gostei muito da clap aqui, mas whatever -> deixa ela aí
00:23:035 (4) - soa melhor com a repeat em 00:23:496; se tu mudar isso, ou coloca mais uma repeat ou inventa outra coisa -> soa mesmo, mas to com pregs
00:48:404 - 100% é meio.. alto demais -> isso em todas as diffs?
00:55:323 (5) - esse finish tá de estourar timpanos -> sensivel
deixa de ser preguiçoso e mapeia o resto da diff =w= não é pq as pessoas são noobs que elas não tem direito de aproveitar essa bela melodia como os outros -note uma leve pitada de sarcasmo- -> depois arranjo o resto com ele

[Normal]
aumenta um pouco a HP drain rate Dx tá desproporcional em relação a AR e etc
00:22:574 (6) - uhh, fica melhor se vc deixar a repeat 1/2 mais cedo -> como assim vai ficar indo e voltando
00:23:957 (x) - caso tu tenha reduzido o anterior, add uma beat aqui com nc (e daí tira o que tá em 00:24:419 (9)) -> q q e nc meu deus
00:26:264 (13) - mesma coisa que o 00:22:574 (6) -> mesma coisa que ali em cima
01:17:924 (1) - wtf oq isso te a ver com a musica (mas ficou bonitinho x3) -> obg vc tbm

[Hard]
nada muito específico pra falar... mas achei a diff bem overmapped, principalmente as streams. mas enfim -> nazi

thank you :D
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
eu acho que se você for ficar com preguiça de ficar arrumando coisas em mods, nem peça por eles. aliás, nem comece mapsets, pq eles necessitam de bastante paciencia. lembre-se que o beatmap é seu, e não das pessoas que moddam ele, portanto não fique esperando da boa vontade dos outros pra arrumarem coisas pra você sendo que vc pode simplesmente fazê-las sem dificuldade alguma.
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Wiinter wrote:

eu acho que se você for ficar com preguiça de ficar arrumando coisas em mods, nem peça por eles. aliás, nem comece mapsets, pq eles necessitam de bastante paciencia. lembre-se que o beatmap é seu, e não das pessoas que moddam ele, portanto não fique esperando da boa vontade dos outros pra arrumarem coisas pra você sendo que vc pode simplesmente fazê-las sem dificuldade alguma.
ué, nunca disse que outras pessoas iriam fazer algo por mim e eu to lgd que precisa de paciencia, essa porra é velha pra caralho
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi

fabriciorby wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

eu acho que se você for ficar com preguiça de ficar arrumando coisas em mods, nem peça por eles. aliás, nem comece mapsets, pq eles necessitam de bastante paciencia. lembre-se que o beatmap é seu, e não das pessoas que moddam ele, portanto não fique esperando da boa vontade dos outros pra arrumarem coisas pra você sendo que vc pode simplesmente fazê-las sem dificuldade alguma.
ué, nunca disse que outras pessoas iriam fazer algo por mim e eu to lgd que precisa de paciencia, essa porra é velha pra caralho
"blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps-> pregs, quando alguem for dar bubble qm sab
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta? ->^ok" aham senta la
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

Wiinter wrote:

fabriciorby wrote:

ué, nunca disse que outras pessoas iriam fazer algo por mim e eu to lgd que precisa de paciencia, essa porra é velha pra caralho
"blablabla a mp3 é 220kbps-> pregs, quando alguem for dar bubble qm sab
já que tu não mapeou o fim da musica em nenhuma diff, pq tu não corta? ->^ok" aham senta la
uai, só disse que vou fazer depois
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Folder
You have three .osbs please delete them and full submit them

Hard
00:43:330 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should find a different pattern because right now it's visually not appealing and you can't really see the approach circle for (4). the positioning of (5) could be better too.
00:55:553 (7,1) - imo, this small spacing is awkward, possible move (1) further away? (you don't have to change this if you don't want to)
01:10:544 (3) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical by moving the middle sliderpoint 8 grids up (Lv 4)
01:14:234 (1) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical
01:17:694 (1) - I think you should stack this on the beginning of (2). At first, I thought (1) was a slider when i was playing it

Normal
01:17:924 (1) - This is a very pretty heart, but is it necessary.

Katsuri's - I know this is an easy diff, but atleast map to where fabriciorby mapped to
00:04:124 (1) - how about something like this:
SPOILER

216,264,4124,6,0,B|200:352|80:352|60:276,1,200,0|2
00:43:791 (4) - looks bad because the slider touches the end of (2)
00:47:481 (1) - remove new combo
fabriciorby
2,211 posts
Joined December 2009
Topic Starter
fabriciorby

ouranhshc wrote:

Folder
You have three .osbs please delete them and full submit them

Hard
00:43:330 (2,3,4,5) - I think you should find a different pattern because right now it's visually not appealing and you can't really see the approach circle for (4). the positioning of (5) could be better too. -> I hope it's better now
00:55:553 (7,1) - imo, this small spacing is awkward, possible move (1) further away? (you don't have to change this if you don't want to)
01:10:544 (3) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical by moving the middle sliderpoint 8 grids up (Lv 4) -> thanks, i haven't seen this
01:14:234 (1) - [nazi] , Make symmetrical -> ^
01:17:694 (1) - I think you should stack this on the beginning of (2). At first, I thought (1) was a slider when i was playing it -> i hope it's better now

Normal
01:17:924 (1) - This is a very pretty heart, but is it necessary. -> D:

Katsuri's - I know this is an easy diff, but atleast map to where fabriciorby mapped to
00:04:124 (1) - how about something like this: -> sure, thanks
SPOILER

216,264,4124,6,0,B|200:352|80:352|60:276,1,200,0|2
00:43:791 (4) - looks bad because the slider touches the end of (2) -> fixed
00:47:481 (1) - remove new combo -> ^
Thank you
Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri
Stop sayin' I'm lazy and this stuff!
I mapped full song and fabriciorby deleted.
Then he mapped more and lost my parts.
Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri
Submit my full version now bitch. double post was intentional br hue.
Mismagius
9,267 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
~General~
  1. MP3 é 220kbps, você já sabe disso então conserta logo essa merda ou ninguém vai bubblear teu mapa af
  2. Bota Katsuri nas tags de todas as diffs. Por enquanto só tem no Hard.
  3. Breaks inconsistentes entre as dificuldades. Mapeia a mesma coisa pra tudo pô
  4. Só uns 75% da MP3 tão mapeados. Mapeia até 01:52:980
[Katsuri's Easy]
  1. 00:01:817 (2) - Remove o whistle por consistência com os outros sliders.
  2. 00:09:659 (4,1) - Adiciona New Combo no (4) e tira o que tem no (1) por causa da downbeat.
  3. 00:23:035 (4) - Faz esse slider ser apenas 1/1 (termina ele no white tick que tem antes desse vermelho). Então tira o finish do final dele e adiciona uma beat no 00:24:419 com finish e new combo.
  4. 00:24:880 (1) - Aí remove o new combo aqui.
  5. 00:33:183 (6) - Tira finish do início e bota clap. É melhor de ouvir.
  6. 00:35:489 (Break) - Qual o motivo dessa break ter sido arrastada?
  7. 00:45:636 (2,3,4) - Tenta fazer essa parte mais fácil. 1/2s em Easy são difíceis demais pros newbies D:
  8. 00:55:323 (5) - Tira finish e bota clap, fica bem melhor de ouvir.
  9. 00:58:090 (3) - Talvez bota a whistle no início ao invés do final?
  • Overall Rating: 8.5/10 ~ Eu sei que você faz melhor, Katsuri. D: Enfim, ficou legal anyways, mas not enough symmetry pros seus mapas. Eu estou disappoint.
[Normal]
  1. 00:20:267 (1) - Faz assim que fica bem melhor de jogar
  2. 00:22:343 (5) - Tira o clap daqui, fica melhor de ouvir.
  3. 00:26:033 (4) - ^
  4. 00:38:718 (2,3) - jump no normal QISSO faz assim e depois faz o mesmo e dá ctrl+h+j pro (4)
  5. 00:51:863 (7) - Tira o whistle, fica melhor de ouvir.
  6. 00:53:478 (3,4) - bota whistle no (3) e tira no (4), fica melhor seriao maon//
  7. 00:54:631 (6) - tira whistle do fim, tá meio que exagerado
  8. 00:55:553 (7) - ^
  9. 01:16:079 (1) - tira clap desse slider
  10. 01:17:924 (1) - Seleciona o slider. Aperta ctrl+shift+s. Scaleia (?) por 0,668x. Adiciona mais uma repeat. TADAAA
  • Overall Rating: 9.2/10 ~ foda d+, altas tretas aqui nessa dificuldade VISH, se eu virar osustreamer eu vou dar um jeito nisso mas tem que me prometer arrumar ok por favor moço
[Hard]


  • OD -1, HP -1 por favor, isso é coisa de insane
  1. 00:01:125 (2) - tira whistle, fica bem melhor sem
  2. 00:02:048 (3) - ^
  3. 00:02:970 (5,7) - ^ aqui tb
  4. 00:04:815 (4) - ^
  5. 00:05:738 (3) - ^
  6. 00:06:660 (5,7) - ^
  7. 00:08:967 (4) - ^
  8. 00:08:967 (4,5,1) - e esse spacing aí batman
  9. 00:10:812 (3) - whistle do caralho ):
  10. 00:20:498 (2) - tira esse finish aí tio
  11. 00:20:729 (3) - tira a whistle do final
  12. 00:21:421 (4) - ^
  13. 00:24:419 (2,3) - ^
  14. 00:33:413 (3) - tira whistle
  15. 00:35:489 (Break) - pra q arrastar afffff
  16. 00:46:559 (1) - adiciona finish aqui por consistência
  17. 00:59:013 (7,8) - tira as whistles aqui pra ficar melhor
  18. 01:01:088 (4) - ^
  19. 01:03:164 (4) - add finish por consistência
  20. 01:17:924 (2,3,4,5,6) - AIN SS2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2S2
  21. 01:19:539 (5) - tira whistle daqui, aliás
  22. 01:22:767 (6) - new combo pq fica melhor sl
  23. 01:23:459 (1) - finish no final
  • Overall Rating: 9.4/10 ~ tirando essas whistles aí de morrer, o mapa tá legal d+ rankeia isso pra mim e bota o papai noel na sb por favorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Katsuri
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Katsuri
U MAD STAR
Mismagius
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Mismagius
RECHECK DA MATZADA AEW PO EH SO OS MANO NE



~General~
  1. Sério, tira esse "banana" das tags e adiciona "rareware super nintendo" em todas as diffs lol
  2. Tira a countdown em todas as dificuldades, ela tá sendo inutilizada no momento
  3. Em todas as dificuldades, as timing sections verdes estão unsnapped. Snapeia elas aí.
  4. Baixa o volume dos hitsounds na seção de 00:48:464?

[Katsuri's Easy]

  1. eu no meu post de antes wrote:

    00:23:035 (4) - Faz esse slider ser apenas 1/1 (termina ele no white tick que tem antes desse vermelho). Então tira o finish do final dele e adiciona uma beat no 00:24:419 com finish e new combo.
  2. 00:55:383 (5) - Tira o finish e bota uma whistle aqui, o finish é ruim de escutar.
  3. 01:14:294 (1) - adiciona uma finish aqui pra ser consistente com o outro slider
  4. 01:23:635 (1) - Move esse spinner aqui 1/4 pra frente e depois termina ele no white tick. no momento ele começa muito cedo pra um easy

[Normal]


  • as breaks aqui são diferentes das outras dificuldades, mapeia do mesmo jeito que vc mapeou nas outras
  1. 01:22:827 (4) - whistle no final? ta parecendo meio vazio agora
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:720 (5,6,7,1,2) - o spacing aqui tá meio wtf
  2. 00:20:327 (1) - tira esse finish, pfv, doi meus ouvidos ):
  3. 00:42:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - sei lá... essa pattern é muito estranha, tenta remapear esse combo
  4. 01:01:379 (1) - tira whistle do final, sei lá, fica melhor
  5. 01:02:071 (2) - ^
  6. 01:16:831 (4) - new combo
  7. 01:17:292 (7,8,9) - ctrl+r nessas 3 notas, depois tira o clap do (7) e adiciona no (9)

sei lá, a estrutura no hard tem que melhorar um pouco, mas eu acho que tá bom o suficiente pra receber uma star
NotShinta
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NotShinta
General:
- Consider lowering the volumes - of at least the Normal sections - by about 10%. They can seem rather loud and obtrusive now, making returning to the soft sampleset very sudden, but it's up to you whether you want to fix this.
- 01:25:356 - I'd recommend ending the spinner of all difficulties at this point rather than where it currently ends. It runs a bit over and sounds unnatural as it currently is.

Normal:
- 00:46:380 (3) - I think this sounds better if the repeat is removed, and the whole slider is moved 1/2 forward. Like this

Hard:
- Approach rate appears to be grossly disproportionate to the map, almost forcing unnecessary difficulty, and not being very much fun in this case. Decrease it by at least 1 (so it becomes AR7), or 2 (AR6) to be on line with the other difficulty settings.
- I'm also still not sure about the streams, and you could probably tone down the finish usage to about half in the Normal sections.
- 01:11:519 (5) - This particular note stands out to me as being awkward for some reason. I think it's best if you remove it (or at least the whistle), while fixing spacing.
- 01:23:281 (2) - Personally, I'd replace this whistle with a clap, or not use any hitsounds at all. I think it ends the map better that way

Other than the things I've just talked about, cool beans. Sorry if I repeat what I've already said before and forgotten
fabriciorby
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Topic Starter
fabriciorby

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- Consider lowering the volumes - of at least the Normal sections - by about 10%. They can seem rather loud and obtrusive now, making returning to the soft sampleset very sudden, but it's up to you whether you want to fix this.
- 01:25:356 - I'd recommend ending the spinner of all difficulties at this point rather than where it currently ends. It runs a bit over and sounds unnatural as it currently is.

Normal:
- 00:46:380 (3) - I think this sounds better if the repeat is removed, and the whole slider is moved 1/2 forward. Like this

Hard:
- Approach rate appears to be grossly disproportionate to the map, almost forcing unnecessary difficulty, and not being very much fun in this case. Decrease it by at least 1 (so it becomes AR7), or 2 (AR6) to be on line with the other difficulty settings.
- I'm also still not sure about the streams, and you could probably tone down the finish usage to about half in the Normal sections.
- 01:11:519 (5) - This particular note stands out to me as being awkward for some reason. I think it's best if you remove it (or at least the whistle), while fixing spacing.
- 01:23:281 (2) - Personally, I'd replace this whistle with a clap, or not use any hitsounds at all. I think it ends the map better that way

Other than the things I've just talked about, cool beans. Sorry if I repeat what I've already said before and forgotten
Everything fixed
Katsuri
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Katsuri
af o BD tacou uma estrelinha
taca uma nuvenzinha, é mais lindo
Katsuri
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Katsuri
cade a bubble? Double post because I'm mean like shiirn
NotShinta
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NotShinta
Here is a bubble. Take care of it as long as necessary.
fabriciorby
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fabriciorby
Thank you NotShinta (((((((((((((((((((((:
Mismagius
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Mismagius
popped pq eu n gostei do mapa

-n

aeee finalmente, rankeia logo isso e bota o papai noel na sb af
Katsuri
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Katsuri
Finalmente pinto isso foi pinto bubble espero pinto que isso seja pinto ranked logo pinto.
Katsuri
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Katsuri


Coloque 'banana' nas tags e chame o MAT para te dar rebolha.
Gaba
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Gaba
E então o negro pegou o negro e começou a negrar. Coloca de volta a banana nas tags porra.
Sakura
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Sakura
Mismagius
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aeeeee

BANANA
Gaba
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Gaba
CADE A BANANA NAS TAGS, NOAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Sakura
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Gaba wrote:

CADE A BANANA NAS TAGS, NOAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Nope, banana is not a word people will use to find this song/map so sorry, but it's pointless
Gaba
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Gaba

Sakura Hana wrote:

Gaba wrote:

CADE A BANANA NAS TAGS, NOAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Nope, banana is not a word people will use to find this song/map so sorry, but it's pointless
:(
fabriciorby
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fabriciorby
HUEAHUEAHUEAHUEA enois
MoodyRPG
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Because i love this game and this is nostalgic for me <3333

Congrats !
hkj0501
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hkj0501
:cry: wwewefrf
MrKarotiko
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MrKarotiko
This Beatmap is great!
but I think the song needs more volume :)
Btw......keep it up! ;)
I hope see more of your works
[Luanny]
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[Luanny]
ADD BANANA TO TAGS
KUDOSU PLS
Mismagius
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Mismagius

Blue Dragon wrote:

~General~
  1. Sério, tira esse "banana" das tags e adiciona "rareware super nintendo" em todas as diffs lol
R.I.P. banana 2011-2012
fabriciorby
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fabriciorby
banana i miss you
Mismagius
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Mismagius
add banana to tags plz
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