02:52:416 (1,1,1) - seems like there should be a finish somewhere around here? 02:53:098 (1) - probably
03:04:007 (1) - sounds more like it should be patterned like
http://i.imgur.com/MoEFFTr.jpg to me because of the kick on 03:04:553 -
03:05:644 - could probably be
http://i.imgur.com/qIwHqEm.jpg03:10:280 (2) - wanted to say "
1/6 seems to work better with the guitar", but seems like 1/4 work fine wit hthe rhythm and guitar is probably not even meant to be 1/6 and just off a bit since 03:12:916 - is lol." guess going for drum rhythm is better here after all lol
03:22:553 (1,2,1,2,1) - what happened here? only the first slider bneing 1.1x and the others 1x seems weird. I'd suggest 03:22:553 (1,2) - 1.1x and 03:23:098 (1,2) - 1.2x.// or 1.1x => 1x changing after the first pair
03:25:825 - - could add a long slider until this point, would work so well with the fading guitar (I only saw you denying spinner suggestions for here, which is understandable), up to you. or maybe snap the break start to 03:25:825 - ?
03:40:825 - 03:47:644 - could use like ~35% volume instead, right now it's so loud, at first I thought the 1/6 were overmapped since it overpowers the song so much
if you apply this: 03:58:553 - 40%
regardless if applied or not: 04:09:462 - 50% for better gradual increase in this section
05:10:553 (1) - with all other shapes you used around here, sth like
http://i.imgur.com/IuOIXge.jpg could fir your visuals better?
05:25:825 (1,2,3,4) - seems like you usually didn't use different spacving for overlaps in the same pattern, so why here (even if it's not much it's noticeable)
05:28:007 (1) - move that one red anchor a bit so it overlaps 05:27:462 (2) - perfecty lol
05:28:007 (1) - why wouldn't you mute sliderticks instead and fade out the slide, seems much better fitting
=>
http://i.imgur.com/tIWYdpd.jpg add silenced slidertick4 and 5 and set the timing points like this
yes you need 2 since volume changes on sliderslides/whistles only work when you change sampleset,
also current 5% line on the last part might be too low to get any feedback so these volume settting woulld also work better
okay, do some things and poke me for qualify I guess. last slider one is kinda important though, others are mostly minor