1. Yuko's parts still need more bunnies
2. 00:54:510 (1) - object end not snapped
3. 00:55:010 (3) - object end not snapped
4. 01:29:678 useless greenline

1. 00:44:344 (1,2) - should stack these imo, to keep the pattern consistency with the previous rhythms
2. 00:50:678 (1) - ctl+g maybe? I like it better imo
3. 00:53:344 (1) - ^ if you change that
4. 01:00:678 (1) - just make it straight...
5. 01:31:011 (1,1) - fix the blanket -_ -
6. 01:35:844 (1,2,3) - probably shouldn't do this xd, just stack 1 and 2 on 3 tbh
7. 03:13:678 (3,4) - why not just stack these? same with 03:14:011 (5,6) -
8. 03:36:344 (6) - NC
9. 05:45:344 (1) - idk if this is rankable, so should ask more people tbh
10. 06:50:678 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I love pp as much as the next guy but come on, 06:50:678 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - pretty boring pattern imo, should use more variety. 06:53:344 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - anime was a mistake..

Uberzolik wrote:

i like the stolen slider art tbh

Forlornly wrote:

Uberzolik wrote:

i like the stolen slider art tbh

if you're talking about 5:45:344 onward, that's treble, bass, and alto clef, which are musical symbols
the bass clef looks rather sloppy, though

if you're not talking about those sliders then nvm

VINXIS wrote:

hes talking about how ther sTOLEn from anothr map -__

You are not allowed to nominate maps that you can not judge properly.

1. 01:36:511 (4,5,6,7) - triple after extended slider was kind of unexpected to play even after multiple tries. also feels inconsistent with rest of the map because it's the only one on the map. consider making (4) either a 1/2 slider or 1/1 slider. alternatively you could make (5,6,7) a repeat 1/4 slider
2. 01:34:011 (2) - 01:42:011 (2) - 03:43:345 (2) - 03:54:012 (2) - forgot to nc here?
3. 02:03:178 (4,5,6) - 02:04:511 (4,5,6,7) - 02:06:178 (3,4,5,1) - turn on stacking and fix triangles accordingly because some of the notes are overlapping and doesn't look as aesthetically pleasing. same suggestion at last chorus
4. 03:32:678 (2) - 03:34:011 (2) - 03:35:345 (2) - 03:55:345 (2) - i'd consider nc here to match the nc pattern of the first chorus. same with 06:14:011 (2) - 06:15:344 (2) - 06:16:678 (2) - 06:35:344 (2) - 06:36:677 (2) - 06:38:011 (2) - in the last chorus
5. 05:17:011 (1,2) - ctrl + g rhythm here? downbeat has some pretty strong vocal emphasis that would be nice if it was clickable
6. 06:06:511 (2) - move to x276|y256 to put it in the center of 06:05:344 (1) -
7. 06:54:511 (1) - i'd consider changing the shape. end of the slider after the two loops feels slightly faster than the rest of the slider

1. 03:19:178 (3) - is like the only slider tick that has a clap sound can you not thanks. why not try pattern like this?
   
   SPOILER

   i think there's enough vocal distinction at yu-uki that making it clickable should be okay. also fits drums pretty well lol. remember to delete unused hitsounds if you decide to go with this suggestion since that slidertick clap sound will pretty much be useless if you do take this suggestion lol
   
2. 04:51:678 (7) - 1/3 slider in Duet but 1/4 slider in Shooting Star? actually i think 1/3 slider fits nicer here but i'd get snap checked with others in case
3. 05:50:678 (1) - can you try to refine the bass clef slider a bit? the end should be a bit more curved tbh lol
   
   SPOILER

   tbh this example slider could probably be polished up a bit more too lol
   
   
4. 06:25:678 (1,2) - i'd kind of prefer to see this as a longer slider instead of two kick sliders to emphasize the "HI" like in the first chorus but this is probably okay too since last chorus is a bit more intense

Len wrote:

yf:

1. 01:01:178 (8) - stack on 1 is better imo not mine
2. 01:31:844 (1,2,3) - dont overlap with ... http://puu.sh/rVkIC/4562fd7a47.jpg np p
3. 07:38:178 (2,1,2) - ctrl g for flow? not mine

Doormat wrote:

as requested on discord

[Duet]

1. 03:32:678 (2) - 03:34:011 (2) - 03:35:345 (2) - 03:55:345 (2) - i'd consider nc here to match the nc pattern of the first chorus. same with 06:14:011 (2) - 06:15:344 (2) - 06:16:678 (2) - 06:35:344 (2) - 06:36:677 (2) - 06:38:011 (2) - in the last chorus i think it's unnecessary

Depths wrote:

Yukonyan~
[General]

1. Yuko's parts still need more bunnies
2. 00:54:510 (1) - object end not snapped
3. 00:55:010 (3) - object end not snapped
4. 01:29:678 useless greenline

[Amamiya Nathan's Shooting Skystar]

1. 00:44:344 (1,2) - should stack these imo, to keep the pattern consistency with the previous rhythms
2. 00:50:678 (1) - ctl+g maybe? I like it better imo the part is built with the 'same direction 1/2s' structure, would be ruined if ctrl+g. check 00:45:344 (1,2,3) - and 00:48:011 (1,2,3) -
3. 00:53:344 (1) - ^ if you change that
4. 01:00:678 (1) - just make it straight...
5. 01:31:011 (1,1) - fix the blanket -_ -
6. 01:35:844 (1,2,3) - probably shouldn't do this xd, just stack 1 and 2 on 3 tbh no
7. 03:13:678 (3,4) - why not just stack these? same with 03:14:011 (5,6) - they play the same as stacking
8. 03:36:344 (6) - NC
9. 05:45:344 (1) - idk if this is rankable, so should ask more people tbh
10. 06:50:678 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I love pp as much as the next guy but come on, 06:50:678 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - pretty boring pattern imo, should use more variety. 06:53:344 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - anime was a mistake.. how about ban the pp system and i keep this pattern? thanks

good map tbh

Len wrote:

1:1 req

yf:

1. 01:01:178 (8) - stack on 1 is better imo
2. 01:31:844 (1,2,3) - dont overlap with ... http://puu.sh/rVkIC/4562fd7a47.jpg
3. 02:06:344 (4) - and 02:06:511 (5) - should be emphasize i think
4. 05:26:344 (1) - remove nc? or nc here 05:31:677 (6) -
5. 05:48:011 - unused lines
6. 06:14:011 (2) - move to 164 316
7. 06:23:011 (2,3,4,5,6) - move those notes a bit http://puu.sh/rVlqQ/9b969cbece.jpg
8. 06:28:345 (1) - reduce to 1/2 or add notes on 06:29:011 - and 06:29:178 -
9. 06:49:011 (4) - same as above
10. 06:54:511 (1) - wow really cool
11. 07:38:178 (2,1,2) - ctrl g for flow? i'd like the gradual effect

You are not allowed to nominate maps that you can not judge properly.

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Doormat wrote:

as requested on discord

[Duet]

1. 01:36:511 (4,5,6,7) - triple after extended slider was kind of unexpected to play even after multiple tries. also feels inconsistent with rest of the map because it's the only one on the map. consider making (4) either a 1/2 slider or 1/1 slider. alternatively you could make (5,6,7) a repeat 1/4 slider
2. 01:34:011 (2) - 01:42:011 (2) - 03:43:345 (2) - 03:54:012 (2) - forgot to nc here?
3. 02:03:178 (4,5,6) - 02:04:511 (4,5,6,7) - 02:06:178 (3,4,5,1) - turn on stacking and fix triangles accordingly because some of the notes are overlapping and doesn't look as aesthetically pleasing. same suggestion at last chorus
4. 03:32:678 (2) - 03:34:011 (2) - 03:35:345 (2) - 03:55:345 (2) - i'd consider nc here to match the nc pattern of the first chorus. same with 06:14:011 (2) - 06:15:344 (2) - 06:16:678 (2) - 06:35:344 (2) - 06:36:677 (2) - 06:38:011 (2) - in the last chorus
5. 05:17:011 (1,2) - ctrl + g rhythm here? downbeat has some pretty strong vocal emphasis that would be nice if it was clickable 1/1 slider emphasizes the long guitar sound better
6. 06:06:511 (2) - move to x276|y256 to put it in the center of 06:05:344 (1) -
7. 06:54:511 (1) - i'd consider changing the shape. end of the slider after the two loops feels slightly faster than the rest of the slider

[Shooting (Sky)Star]

1. 03:19:178 (3) - is like the only slider tick that has a clap sound can you not thanks. why not try pattern like this? nah, i really like the way its placed
   
   SPOILER

   i think there's enough vocal distinction at yu-uki that making it clickable should be okay. also fits drums pretty well lol. remember to delete unused hitsounds if you decide to go with this suggestion since that slidertick clap sound will pretty much be useless if you do take this suggestion lol
   
2. 04:51:678 (7) - 1/3 slider in Duet but 1/4 slider in Shooting Star? actually i think 1/3 slider fits nicer here but i'd get snap checked with others in case
3. 05:50:678 (1) - can you try to refine the bass clef slider a bit? the end should be a bit more curved tbh lol
   
   SPOILER

   tbh this example slider could probably be polished up a bit more too lol
   
   
4. 06:25:678 (1,2) - i'd kind of prefer to see this as a longer slider instead of two kick sliders to emphasize the "HI" like in the first chorus but this is probably okay too since last chorus is a bit more intense dunno why but the quintuple hihats sound much clearer so i just used 2 kicks to follow them all instead of a 3/4. it also does a good job at emphasizing

k

koungou-desu wrote:

Bonzi you go to the map you wanna download and you click download, If you use firefox there should be the file at the bottom, you wanna click that twice. Now it should open up in osu and ta da you have your new song ready to play.