Joshua Lost wrote:

>w< 神mapset+坑爹SB~

loveFantasy wrote:

我正在想這BG真眼熟啊..原來是胖子前幾天丟給我玩的太鼓

[General]
- enable "display storyboard in front of combo fire" Ok

[Normal]
<00:42:547> (2) spacing nazi Fixed
<00:55:534> (1) 奇怪的finish, 放個finish note在00:55:900然後讓轉盤延後1/2拍開始, 或乾脆別放hitsound了 我覺得OK,不改了~
<01:02:486> (7) spacing error? Fixed
<01:26:998> (1,2,3) 奇怪的節奏並且<01:29:193>讓人想打東西, 這邊改用較一般的下法? Fixed
<01:42:730> (2,3) spacing nazi Fixed
<03:25:169..> (1..) 這形狀沒擺得很好呢, 起碼(1)出去點, 最後的(3,4)y座標相同吧 Fixed
<04:23:156> (4) spacing error? Fixed
<04:32:486> (1) spacing nazi Fixed
<04:40:534> (2) 移到x:148 y:48? Fixed

[Fantasy]
<00:55:534> same as [Normal]
<01:06:510> (1) 不需要new combo吧? Fixed
<01:12:364> (1) new combo改擺(3) Fixed
<01:26:083> (1) new combo改擺(4)或(5) No~
<01:49:955> (T..) 多插了好多0%線 不是啊 ~ 是漸低
<03:19:132> (5) new combo移來這..其實我建議這整段new combo重擺一下啦..都擺在高白線上 No~
<04:55:900> spinner停這裡, 中間map, <04:58:644>或<04:58:827>開始第二個spinner No~

KanaRin wrote:

<01:49:955> (T..) 多插了好多0%線 不是啊 ~ 是漸低

• 110047,-100,4,1,1,39,0,1
  110412,-100,4,1,1,24,0,1
  110778,-100,4,1,1,13,0,1
  111144,-100,4,1,1,0,0,1
  111510,-100,4,1,1,0,0,1
  111876,-100,4,1,1,0,0,1
  112242,-100,4,1,1,0,0,1
  112425,-100,4,1,1,0,0,0

DJPop wrote:

My hitsounds, right?

"Lyrics" not "Lyric", but not a major problem ~_~


~Normal~
00:39:620 (1) - end on 00:40:900
02:55:809 (1) - start on white tick
03:13:461 (7,1) - too close
04:14:925 (1) - remove finish at the end
04:47:120 (1) - start on 04:46:937
TIMING 254,925 - remove

~Delusion~
04:52:973 (1) - end on 04:56:998
04:58:736 (1) - end on red tick
TIMING 111,510 - remove
TIMING 111,876 - remove
TIMING 112,242 - remove

~Fantasy~
01:48:400 (4) - end on the same point as (2)
02:28:004 (1) - start on 02:28:278
04:55:169 - HP drains section x_x
TIMING 111,510 - remove
TIMING 111,876 - remove
TIMING 112,242 - remove


+Star

1. 'letterbox during breaks'取消 或者就把break期间闪闪闪的东西删了 x_x
2. 白色+浅蓝note+KIAI orz 嘛个人喜好(吐槽而已
3. source: Toaru 你懂的
4. 准备找三妖的话就选个背景颜色吧 OTL

1. 01:49:681 (2,3) - 放更远点? 比如和(1)的起点中心对称什么的
2. 01:52:608 (T) - 无用绿线
3. 02:46:388 ~ 02:46:754 (T) - 这里留空拍了 0.0? 这首歌完全跟vocal不是好主意... (果然是Clare部分... 233
4. 02:58:919 (T) - 无用绿线
5. 04:00:199 (T) - ^
6. 04:54:803 (T) - KIAI这里就可以考虑打住了 break带KIAI有点蛋疼...

1. 02:58:919 (T) - 无用绿线
2. 03:45:291 (8) - 换slider到03:45:656结束? 或者到03:45:473加一次折返?
3. 04:00:199 (T) - 无用绿线
4. 04:52:608 (1) - V5

1. 02:28:095 (T) - 无用绿线

1. unsnapped x 32

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. 'letterbox during breaks'取消 或者就把break期间闪闪闪的东西删了 x_x　Ok~
2. 白色+浅蓝note+KIAI orz 嘛个人喜好(吐槽而已
3. source: Toaru 你懂的 Ok~
4. 准备找三妖的话就选个背景颜色吧 OTL

不理了(?)

[Fantasy]:

1. 01:49:681 (2,3) - 放更远点? 比如和(1)的起点中心对称什么的 Fixed~
2. 01:52:608 (T) - 无用绿线 Fixed~
3. 02:46:388 ~ 02:46:754 (T) - 这里留空拍了 0.0? 这首歌完全跟vocal不是好主意... (果然是Clare部分... 233 這個就算吧,還有我都不想太多分><
4. 02:58:919 (T) - 无用绿线 Fixed~
5. 04:00:199 (T) - ^ Fixed~
6. 04:54:803 (T) - KIAI这里就可以考虑打住了 break带KIAI有点蛋疼.. Fixed~

[Delusion]:

1. 02:58:919 (T) - 无用绿线 Fixed~
2. 03:45:291 (8) - 换slider到03:45:656结束? 或者到03:45:473加一次折返? Fixed~
3. 04:00:199 (T) - 无用绿线 Fixed~
4. 04:52:608 (1) - V5

Fixed!

[Normal]:

1. 02:28:095 (T) - 无用绿线

Fixed~

[Taiko]:

1. unsnapped x 32

Fixed~

推荐考虑下osu standard难度KIAI结束时间 好
ieggpain

fartownik wrote:

General:

- SB: 01:35:412 - This shine/blink/white something had to be like a 'splat' while hitting the note, right? Now it looks weird because it starts to light before you hit the note. You should delete the fade-in and let it suddenly appear at 01:35:412 and then fade out. Same goes to 02:41:266 (if there are others, do the same).
If you meant it this way, just ignore this advice. Well~ Sorry but I think that's not a big problem><

- The length... this map is almost 5 minutes long (including breaks), it's really long for a ranking beatmap, but I see you didn't have much place to end the map after second chorus. I'm not sure about this ;_;
The main problem is the start of this song. It has 30s that haven't any note. But the time is stil display it 5mins.
The total play time is about half of 3mins ~ 4mins (Break time). I think it should be no problem for ranking this map.
Also i have asked Alace , He think that it's no problem too.

[Normal]

Too much spinners (17, hell yeah). Reduce their amount a bit, they don't make your map easier (:

01:20:595 (1) - End the spinner at white tick?
01:49:864 (3) - This slider is odd. Doesn't follow anything and has a weird silenced repeat. Place here something else.
02:26:449 (1) - End the spinner at white tick? (also unsilence it?)

Ok that's all fixed

[Delusion]

I have no idea how this get a 4,5 star rating D:

04:58:736 (1) - Place the spinner at white tick like previous one.

All fixed~


[Fantasy]

03:10:169 (1) - Delete clap?
04:03:217 - This part is all like a calm down part in the song, starts well with 0,5x sliders, but then there's suddenly a change to 1,0x. I don't understand it. You choice - or it's a part all 0,5x, or 1,0x. Choosing 1,0x will make you less to work, because most of the part is exactly 1,0x. From the other side, 0,5x would fit the song better.

All fixed~

Didn't touch Taiko, but it's made by taiko expert and a BAT, so I think I can trust it. Don't worry. Many players think that's fun to play. I can say that's really no problem

fartownik wrote:

Re-check, sorry for being late No problem

[Normal]

Noticed that mapping to lyrics in easier difficulties is not the best idea

00:41:449 (1) - Start at white tick (and end at the red tick). Sounds better. Okay , Fixed~
01:22:059 - Add a break time. Fixed~
01:35:412 (1) - Add a Finish? Fixed~
01:38:705 - Missing note. Fixed~
02:26:449 (1) - Unsilence this spinner (like previous similar one). Fixed~
02:41:266 (1) - Add a Finish? Fixed~
03:39:803 (1,2) - I think this will be better if it won't follow the lyrics... it sounds weird with a 'stretched' beat. If you do this, add a note after (at the white tick). Umm>< Sounds no problem for me. I think that's okay.


[Fantasy]

01:35:412 (1) - Add a Finish? Fixed~
02:41:266 (1) - ^ Fixed~
04:26:632 (1) - Add a Finish. Fixed~
04:38:339 (1) - Add a Finish? Fixed~

Don't kudosu (:

osuplayer111 wrote:

IRC Mod.

- There were more than 3 slider speeds on Delusion, but now we fixed it.

Ranked~