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Teddyloid feat. Hatsune Miku - DECORATOR (TeddyLoid remix)

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Troponoop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 14, 2017 at 9:47:41 PM

Artist: Teddyloid feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: DECORATOR (TeddyLoid remix)
Tags: Vocaloid EP remix Project DIVA
BPM: 138
Filesize: 8849kb
Play Time: 05:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Miku is love (4.14 stars, 919 notes)
Download: Teddyloid feat. Hatsune Miku - DECORATOR (TeddyLoid remix)
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Hitsounds are the bane of my existence
PhantomHunt3r
hello, this is my mod from my modreq page

Miku is Love
00:04:681 (3,4,1) - bring 4 closer to 1 and 3 to have equal spacing
00:16:638 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal
00:27:290 - maybe add a note here
01:13:812 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - try and make this a little more creative
01:37:942 - add a slider from there to here:01:39:355
02:03:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this stream
02:25:986 (1,2) - bring this closer to the slider after this
02:33:051 - i hear a beat here maybe add a note?
03:16:855 (1,1,2,3) - make this a full diamond?
03:23:812 (1,2) - maybe space this out to avoid missreading this for a double
04:52:073 (1,2,3,4) - straighten this out
i didnt even know this was a miku song, but i cant believe this hasnt got modded yet
jossieP
#TimingHelp


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297725,-83.3333333333333,4,1,0,49,0,0
I Must Decrease
Quick IRC mod
19:00 Troponoop: so what games have u been playing with ur pimped out computer
19:01 Xexxar: nothing
19:01 Xexxar: i played a bit of GTA
19:08 Troponoop: you gotta make that baby sweat and go play some witcher 3 or something
19:08 Troponoop: or really anything besides osu lol
19:09 Xexxar: ok but
19:09 Xexxar: i gotta get BN
19:09 Xexxar: then i can do that
19:09 Troponoop: oh ur doing that signup stuff?
19:09 Troponoop: is it the first time u tried for it
19:09 Xexxar: I didnt have enough kudosu last time
19:09 Xexxar: the requirement was lowered from 100 to 50 kudosu
19:09 Xexxar: im farming kudosu atm
19:09 Xexxar: to reach min reqs for mod score
19:10 Xexxar: then i will apply
19:10 Xexxar: and take the test
19:10 Xexxar: ace it
19:10 Xexxar: then be BN
19:10 Troponoop: then mod my map u narble lol
19:10 Xexxar: and do nothing but circlejerk xd
19:10 Xexxar: link
19:10 Troponoop: what is the test like?
19:10 *Troponoop is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1010362 Teddyloid feat. Hatsune Miku - Decorator [Miku is love]]
19:10 Xexxar: two sections
19:10 Troponoop: i never clicked the reddit posts
19:10 Xexxar: one is MC, other is open ended modding
19:10 Xexxar: 00:00:334 (1) -
19:10 Xexxar: soft hitosund psl
19:11 Troponoop: just the spinner?
19:11 Xexxar: ye
19:11 Xexxar: actually
19:11 Xexxar: soft htsound the whole map
19:11 Xexxar: this is vomit sounding
19:12 Troponoop: ik lol
19:12 Troponoop: not even normal for the kiai?
19:12 Xexxar: 00:14:247 (3) -
19:12 Xexxar: why you overlapping grossly
19:12 Xexxar: idk the beginign needs to be soft
19:12 Xexxar: im not really trying to do a hitsound mod atm
19:12 Troponoop: then just tell me how the kiai plays at least
19:12 Xexxar: 00:07:073 (1) - these higher pitch noise ones
19:12 Xexxar: should have more spacing
19:12 Troponoop: yeah im awful at hitsounds
19:12 Xexxar: and the rest of the spacing should be lowered
19:12 Xexxar: for the map
19:13 Xexxar: in this seciton
19:13 Xexxar: like its too high spaced
19:13 Troponoop: rly?
19:13 Xexxar: this is liek super calm
19:13 Xexxar: at hte begining
19:13 Xexxar: 00:03:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) -
19:13 Xexxar: like have the intense notes that are more high pitch have the spacing they currently have
19:13 Xexxar: and lower the rest by like .6X
19:13 Xexxar: 00:07:073 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
19:13 Xexxar: these hitsounds and design is ??
19:13 Xexxar: doesnt really make sense
19:13 Troponoop: i was gonna lower the sounds for that
19:13 Xexxar: 00:17:507 (2) -
19:13 Xexxar: fix blanket
19:14 Xexxar: 00:21:203 (2) - stop bieng so ugly
19:14 Xexxar: 00:25:333 (5,3) -
19:14 Troponoop: lol
19:14 Xexxar: if you're gonna overlap slider and hitcircle liek this
19:14 Xexxar: make it so the hitcircle the slider
19:14 Xexxar: they both should have a linearness to them
19:14 Xexxar: so the direction the slider goes, the opposite the direction the other circle shoudl be
19:14 Xexxar: looks more cleant aht way
19:15 Xexxar: 00:31:638 (1,2,3,4) -
19:15 Xexxar: you need to do a better job
19:15 Xexxar: and making this discernable
19:15 Xexxar: as 1/4 spacing
19:15 Xexxar: 00:34:681 (5) -
19:15 Xexxar: you sohuld do anti jumps for these
19:15 Xexxar: to make that feeling of stopping motion more impactful
19:15 Xexxar: since the track sort of stops and starts
19:16 Troponoop: mmmk
19:16 Xexxar: 01:06:420 (1) -
19:17 Xexxar: theres really no reason to vary this much with slider design on simple 1/2 sliders
19:17 Troponoop: i just wanted the variation cuz its louder than the others
19:17 Xexxar: honestly not that bad
19:17 Xexxar: i just don't really agree with aesthetics too much
19:17 Troponoop: my ugly sliders are beautiful ok
19:18 Xexxar: also you should like
19:18 Xexxar: completely
19:18 Xexxar: redo
19:18 Xexxar: NC
19:18 Xexxar: 01:17:290 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,1) -
19:18 Xexxar: wtf
19:18 Troponoop: that weird little strum thingy
19:18 Xexxar: make them like
19:18 Troponoop: so i made em NC's
19:18 Xexxar: gross
19:18 Troponoop: it worked better in my head lol
19:18 Xexxar: make them 4/1
19:18 Xexxar: then reflow your patterns to look more visually appealing with that new NC sturcture
19:19 Xexxar: 01:40:768 (2) -
19:19 Xexxar: why 3/4 when you have 1/2 beat going there
19:19 Xexxar: i get the idea of extended hold but seems like a bad example
19:19 Xexxar: 01:41:203 (1) -
19:19 Xexxar: if you are gonna do
19:19 Xexxar: it
19:19 Xexxar: atleast make the blanket correct
19:19 Troponoop: yes boss!
19:19 Xexxar: 01:49:899 (1,2,3) -
19:19 Xexxar: make your tyriplet more clean
19:20 Xexxar: so that the flow of it works with the sliers that follow etc
19:20 Troponoop: so a lil more curvy?
19:20 Xexxar: do you have something specifically you wnat me to look at
19:20 Xexxar: less*
19:20 Xexxar: less curvy
19:20 Troponoop: uhhh the dubsteppy stuff
19:20 Troponoop: 02:21:096 (2) -
19:20 Troponoop: starts there
19:20 Xexxar: i dont really map dubstep tho but ok
19:21 Troponoop: hey ur opinion is bestest so its k
19:21 Xexxar: 02:26:855 (2) -
19:21 Xexxar: feels awkward
19:21 Xexxar: cause you have the synth or whateve
19:21 Xexxar: r02:26:420 (1) -
19:21 Xexxar: the end of this slider
19:21 Xexxar: should be the start of 2
19:22 Xexxar: 2 is 1/4 too late
19:22 Xexxar: those 2 sliders should be 3 1/2 sliders
19:22 Xexxar: with 1/4 distance between
19:22 Xexxar: that would fit hte synth better
19:22 Troponoop: o
19:23 Xexxar: 02:29:247 (1) -
19:23 Xexxar: for here
19:23 Xexxar: do something maybe like this
19:23 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/qesQy/223b2e877d.jpg
19:23 Xexxar: for better flow than square
19:23 Xexxar: lol
19:23 Xexxar: spacing is huge
19:23 Xexxar: cause i didnt want to restructure shit
19:23 Xexxar: so take that with a grain of salt
19:23 Xexxar: general idea
19:23 Troponoop: but #blue dragon?
19:23 Troponoop: bad idea?
19:23 Xexxar: atleast offset your angle them
19:23 Xexxar: you pretty much
19:23 Xexxar: want toi avoid direct horizontal or verticles
19:24 Xexxar: in modern mapping
19:24 Xexxar: verticals*
19:24 Troponoop: ah
19:24 Xexxar: you wnat +-10 degree angles
19:24 Xexxar: and sliders
19:24 Xexxar: its the more modern style mapping
19:24 Xexxar: and looks alot better
19:24 Xexxar: rest is whatever
19:24 Xexxar: 02:42:073 (1,2,3,4,1) -
19:24 Xexxar: this stream was weird
19:24 Xexxar: obviously NC needs rework
19:24 Xexxar: 02:43:812 (1,2) -
19:24 Xexxar: these should go opposite directions
19:24 Xexxar: since they're different pitch
19:25 Xexxar: would feel more natural to me
19:25 Xexxar: 02:50:333 (3) -
19:25 Xexxar: consider doing 3/4 into clickable end beat
19:25 Xexxar: but this is fine too
19:25 Xexxar: up to you
19:25 Xexxar: Anything else?
19:25 Xexxar: otehrwise i'ma go mod other stuffs
19:25 Troponoop: naw thats gucci mah dude
Topic Starter
Troponoop

Xexxar wrote:

Quick IRC mod
19:00 Troponoop: so what games have u been playing with ur pimped out computer
19:01 Xexxar: nothing
19:01 Xexxar: i played a bit of GTA
19:08 Troponoop: you gotta make that baby sweat and go play some witcher 3 or something
19:08 Troponoop: or really anything besides osu lol
19:09 Xexxar: ok but
19:09 Xexxar: i gotta get BN
19:09 Xexxar: then i can do that
19:09 Troponoop: oh ur doing that signup stuff?
19:09 Troponoop: is it the first time u tried for it
19:09 Xexxar: I didnt have enough kudosu last time
19:09 Xexxar: the requirement was lowered from 100 to 50 kudosu
19:09 Xexxar: im farming kudosu atm
19:09 Xexxar: to reach min reqs for mod score
19:10 Xexxar: then i will apply
19:10 Xexxar: and take the test
19:10 Xexxar: ace it
19:10 Xexxar: then be BN
19:10 Troponoop: then mod my map u narble lol
19:10 Xexxar: and do nothing but circlejerk xd
19:10 Xexxar: link
19:10 Troponoop: what is the test like?
19:10 *Troponoop is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1010362 Teddyloid feat. Hatsune Miku - Decorator [Miku is love]]
19:10 Xexxar: two sections
19:10 Troponoop: i never clicked the reddit posts
19:10 Xexxar: one is MC, other is open ended modding
19:10 Xexxar: 00:00:334 (1) -
19:10 Xexxar: soft hitosund psl
19:11 Troponoop: just the spinner?
19:11 Xexxar: ye
19:11 Xexxar: actually
19:11 Xexxar: soft htsound the whole map
19:11 Xexxar: this is vomit sounding
19:12 Troponoop: ik lol
19:12 Troponoop: not even normal for the kiai?
19:12 Xexxar: 00:14:247 (3) -
19:12 Xexxar: why you overlapping grossly
19:12 Xexxar: idk the beginign needs to be soft
19:12 Xexxar: im not really trying to do a hitsound mod atm
19:12 Troponoop: then just tell me how the kiai plays at least
19:12 Xexxar: 00:07:073 (1) - these higher pitch noise ones
19:12 Xexxar: should have more spacing
19:12 Troponoop: yeah im awful at hitsounds
19:12 Xexxar: and the rest of the spacing should be lowered
19:12 Xexxar: for the map
19:13 Xexxar: in this seciton
19:13 Xexxar: like its too high spaced
19:13 Troponoop: rly?
19:13 Xexxar: this is liek super calm
19:13 Xexxar: at hte begining
19:13 Xexxar: 00:03:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) -
19:13 Xexxar: like have the intense notes that are more high pitch have the spacing they currently have
19:13 Xexxar: and lower the rest by like .6X
19:13 Xexxar: 00:07:073 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
19:13 Xexxar: these hitsounds and design is ??
19:13 Xexxar: doesnt really make sense
19:13 Troponoop: i was gonna lower the sounds for that
19:13 Xexxar: 00:17:507 (2) -
19:13 Xexxar: fix blanket
19:14 Xexxar: 00:21:203 (2) - stop bieng so ugly
19:14 Xexxar: 00:25:333 (5,3) -
19:14 Troponoop: lol
19:14 Xexxar: if you're gonna overlap slider and hitcircle liek this
19:14 Xexxar: make it so the hitcircle the slider
19:14 Xexxar: they both should have a linearness to them
19:14 Xexxar: so the direction the slider goes, the opposite the direction the other circle shoudl be
19:14 Xexxar: looks more cleant aht way
19:15 Xexxar: 00:31:638 (1,2,3,4) -
19:15 Xexxar: you need to do a better job
19:15 Xexxar: and making this discernable
19:15 Xexxar: as 1/4 spacing
19:15 Xexxar: 00:34:681 (5) -
19:15 Xexxar: you sohuld do anti jumps for these
19:15 Xexxar: to make that feeling of stopping motion more impactful
19:15 Xexxar: since the track sort of stops and starts
19:16 Troponoop: mmmk
19:16 Xexxar: 01:06:420 (1) -
19:17 Xexxar: theres really no reason to vary this much with slider design on simple 1/2 sliders
19:17 Troponoop: i just wanted the variation cuz its louder than the others
19:17 Xexxar: honestly not that bad
19:17 Xexxar: i just don't really agree with aesthetics too much
19:17 Troponoop: my ugly sliders are beautiful ok
19:18 Xexxar: also you should like
19:18 Xexxar: completely
19:18 Xexxar: redo
19:18 Xexxar: NC
19:18 Xexxar: 01:17:290 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,1,1) -
19:18 Xexxar: wtf
19:18 Troponoop: that weird little strum thingy
19:18 Xexxar: make them like
19:18 Troponoop: so i made em NC's
19:18 Xexxar: gross
19:18 Troponoop: it worked better in my head lol
19:18 Xexxar: make them 4/1
19:18 Xexxar: then reflow your patterns to look more visually appealing with that new NC sturcture
19:19 Xexxar: 01:40:768 (2) -
19:19 Xexxar: why 3/4 when you have 1/2 beat going there
19:19 Xexxar: i get the idea of extended hold but seems like a bad example
19:19 Xexxar: 01:41:203 (1) -
19:19 Xexxar: if you are gonna do
19:19 Xexxar: it
19:19 Xexxar: atleast make the blanket correct
19:19 Troponoop: yes boss!
19:19 Xexxar: 01:49:899 (1,2,3) -
19:19 Xexxar: make your tyriplet more clean
19:20 Xexxar: so that the flow of it works with the sliers that follow etc
19:20 Troponoop: so a lil more curvy?
19:20 Xexxar: do you have something specifically you wnat me to look at
19:20 Xexxar: less*
19:20 Xexxar: less curvy
19:20 Troponoop: uhhh the dubsteppy stuff
19:20 Troponoop: 02:21:096 (2) -
19:20 Troponoop: starts there
19:20 Xexxar: i dont really map dubstep tho but ok
19:21 Troponoop: hey ur opinion is bestest so its k
19:21 Xexxar: 02:26:855 (2) -
19:21 Xexxar: feels awkward
19:21 Xexxar: cause you have the synth or whateve
19:21 Xexxar: r02:26:420 (1) -
19:21 Xexxar: the end of this slider
19:21 Xexxar: should be the start of 2
19:22 Xexxar: 2 is 1/4 too late
19:22 Xexxar: those 2 sliders should be 3 1/2 sliders
19:22 Xexxar: with 1/4 distance between
19:22 Xexxar: that would fit hte synth better
19:22 Troponoop: o
19:23 Xexxar: 02:29:247 (1) -
19:23 Xexxar: for here
19:23 Xexxar: do something maybe like this
19:23 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/qesQy/223b2e877d.jpg
19:23 Xexxar: for better flow than square
19:23 Xexxar: lol
19:23 Xexxar: spacing is huge
19:23 Xexxar: cause i didnt want to restructure shit
19:23 Xexxar: so take that with a grain of salt
19:23 Xexxar: general idea
19:23 Troponoop: but #blue dragon?
19:23 Troponoop: bad idea?
19:23 Xexxar: atleast offset your angle them
19:23 Xexxar: you pretty much
19:23 Xexxar: want toi avoid direct horizontal or verticles
19:24 Xexxar: in modern mapping
19:24 Xexxar: verticals*
19:24 Troponoop: ah
19:24 Xexxar: you wnat +-10 degree angles
19:24 Xexxar: and sliders
19:24 Xexxar: its the more modern style mapping
19:24 Xexxar: and looks alot better
19:24 Xexxar: rest is whatever
19:24 Xexxar: 02:42:073 (1,2,3,4,1) -
19:24 Xexxar: this stream was weird
19:24 Xexxar: obviously NC needs rework
19:24 Xexxar: 02:43:812 (1,2) -
19:24 Xexxar: these should go opposite directions
19:24 Xexxar: since they're different pitch
19:25 Xexxar: would feel more natural to me
19:25 Xexxar: 02:50:333 (3) -
19:25 Xexxar: consider doing 3/4 into clickable end beat
19:25 Xexxar: but this is fine too
19:25 Xexxar: up to you
19:25 Xexxar: Anything else?
19:25 Xexxar: otehrwise i'ma go mod other stuffs
19:25 Troponoop: naw thats gucci mah dude

jossieP wrote:

#TimingHelp


Code
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PhantomHunt3r wrote:

hello, this is my mod from my modreq page

Miku is Love
00:04:681 (3,4,1) - bring 4 closer to 1 and 3 to have equal spacing Yep good call
00:16:638 (1,2,3) - keep spacing equal I think i'll keep it as is because i do the same sorta spacing with other back and forths in the map[
00:27:290 - maybe add a note here imo, i think that pause puts more emphasis on the next slider 00:27:498 (1) - , which i really like
01:13:812 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - try and make this a little more creative I'll consider changing it up, but i dont think its thaaaaat boring
01:37:942 - add a slider from there to here:01:39:355 idk, im a fan of the emphasis the pause does for the next set of notes
02:03:377 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix this stream not sure if its a valid thing to do this in mapping, but i sorta made that stream odd because i wanted it to be a precursor for the dubby stuff thats coming up (and it sorta matches the sound), but i did change it to be a little more clean
02:25:986 (1,2) - bring this closer to the slider after this i did it because i think it melds in with the dubby stuff just fine, but i'll change it if other people point it out
02:33:051 - i hear a beat here maybe add a note? Gotcha, put a note there
03:16:855 (1,1,2,3) - make this a full diamond?
03:23:812 (1,2) - maybe space this out to avoid missreading this for a double Sounds good
04:52:073 (1,2,3,4) - straighten this out
i didnt even know this was a miku song, but i cant believe this hasnt got modded yet

Thanks a ton for the mods and the timing check!
Ashton
mod

00:05:324 (4) - 00:06:194 (2) - 00:07:064 (1) - I feel like u can stack these ntoes
03:53:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the second triangle should have more energy than the first, so maybe make it harder?
04:31:197 (7,1,1) - maybe centre 7 into the middle the both sliders.




Disclaimer: This is no by in any way a professioinal mod, I just did a quick run through




Nice Map.
MetalSl8
Hello, there are a mod for your map ;)
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  1. __ 00:03:594 - inherited timing point unreasonably is here. I think it should be on tick, on 00:03:585 . Look also at 04:50:768 and 04:57:725. But it doesn't matter. What is more important: I think there is only one timing section. I tested offset on 00:59:466 and found it incorrect. On 04:29:893 the difference is less than 5 ms, this is ridiculous. But on 00:00:325 the offset is very accurate.
  2. I suggest to use the stacks instead of short streams, for example
  3. It's not my business, but I advise you to use more circles. Sometimes too many sliders...
  4. Don't you think you often make new combos? Probably less often.
  5. 02:26:096 (2) - snap
  6. 02:48:162 (1,2) - it is better not to obscure slider (Look at 03:32:292 (1,2) and 04:05:118 (1,2,3,4)
  7. 04:07:944 (1) - pls make stream with the same spacing :o
  8. 05:22:175 (1) - spinner's end should be here
Oh, it's very good song and really cool map with nice jumps, like it :D
Topic Starter
Troponoop

MetalSl8 wrote:

Hello, there are a mod for your map ;)
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  1. __ 00:03:594 - inherited timing point unreasonably is here. I think it should be on tick, on 00:03:585 . Look also at 04:50:768 and 04:57:725. But it doesn't matter. What is more important: I think there is only one timing section. I tested offset on 00:59:466 and found it incorrect. On 04:29:893 the difference is less than 5 ms, this is ridiculous. But on 00:00:325 the offset is very accurate. Thanks a ton for checking the timing, im no expert so i'm using what JossieP gave me and both offsets ( yours and JossieP's) seem the same to me :o so i think i'll keep it as is for now
  2. I suggest to use the stacks instead of short streams, for example
  3. It's not my business, but I advise you to use more circles. Sometimes too many sliders... Well, i was going for simplicity and flow, and to me, that means lots of sliders, but i will keep that in mind for future maps
  4. Don't you think you often make new combos? Probably less often. yeah i have no idea what im doing with NC's lol
  5. 02:26:096 (2) - snap Changed it since lots of people so far have not liked it :(
  6. 02:48:162 (1,2) - it is better not to obscure slider (Look at 03:32:292 (1,2) and 04:05:118 (1,2,3,4) hmmm not sure what you mean here, but i feel that each overlap fits alright with the different rhythms
  7. 04:07:944 (1) - pls make stream with the same spacing :o The sound that im matching the stream for changes a few times in there, thats why i space it like that, and i think it plays fine
  8. 05:22:175 (1) - spinner's end should be here Uh not sure about that

Oh, it's very good song and really cool map with nice jumps, like it :D
Much appreciated for the advice! thanks for playing my map! :)


Whirl wrote:

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00:05:324 (4) - 00:06:194 (2) - 00:07:064 (1) - I feel like u can stack these ntoes i sorta prefer slowly moving those notes with the sliders :)

03:53:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the second triangle should have more energy than the first, so maybe make it harder? idk, im not really seeing a drastic change for one triangle to be harder than the other, i was just sorta shooting for a relaxing pattern

04:31:197 (7,1,1) - maybe centre 7 into the middle the both sliders. Done!




Disclaimer: This is no by in any way a professioinal mod, I just did a quick run through






Nice Map.
Regardless of it being a pro mod or not, thanks a bunch for even looking at my map!
-Roz
Heyyyy! M4M Mod

Miku is love
00:07:281 (9,1,2,3,4) - Usually you want the start of a new pattern to be on the white tick if the song supports it, maybe http://puu.sh/uHJLP/8cc7679dc2.png like that instead.

00:15:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern could be placed differently to be more comfortable to play. It feels awkward to me, with nothing in the song making it justified. Just slightly though.

00:27:498 (1) - Maybe move this to here http://puu.sh/uHK2s/53caf44d5a.png

00:31:629 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make the extended sliders here, and in the rest of the section placed closer together? Might help reading better, but your call

00:37:498 (3) - This slider seems out of place, switch to another curved one like 00:36:846 (1) -

00:38:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm personally not a fan of these double notes throughout the map. I would've replaced them with more extended sliders. It's just preference though, so it's all good :)

00:59:020 (1) - Turn SV down, fits with the sound it represents

00:59:466 - Though this kiai is nice, you used sliders that aren't either straight lines or curved sometimes. Since there's no change in the sounds I would keep them basic like the others. ( Example: 01:06:422 (6) ) This is stylistic though, so feel free to ignore this.

01:12:944 (1,2,3) - Angle counter-clockwise 5 degrees?

01:18:379 (1) - Give this a better angle, it messes with the flow imo

01:42:075 (1,2,3) - When there's triplets like this through the map, I'd overlap them more.

01:51:640 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is cooool

02:03:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - Smoother stream would look better. I know it's been said already, but I was going to say make it a straight line with the spacing a lot higher to match the sound. Maybe end it with the start of the slider too? The slider on the red tick after doesn't follow the rhythm

02:32:509 (4) - Change to 1/4 sliders instead of a repeating one? Then make 02:33:162 (1) have a higher SV to match the sound in the song

02:34:357 - There's a bass note here. It's small so it shouldn't matter much.

03:05:988 (5) - Turn this 90 degrees clockwise? Might flow better

03:15:118 (1,2,1,2) - These don't fit to me, replace with jumps

03:37:292 (5,6) - Since there was just a stream, it might be better to space these out instead of having them overlap.

04:07:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The spacing in this stream goes from close to spread out and back to close, but 04:14:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) goes from spread out to close back to spread out. The first stream felt odd playing for that reason.

04:54:240 (1) - Maybe replace with something like http://puu.sh/uHMd7/c1ddd1f874.png

05:06:414 (1,2,4,5) - Not a fan of these, I'd do jumps instead

05:15:545 (1) - The jumps leading to here are cool, though this is spaced too closely to the last hitcircle.

Overall a nice map, I think it goes well with the feeling of the song. The pauses between the drops were good. Try adjusting the hitsound volume for each section, might help make it sound better!
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This is the first mod im making so if there is anything you really disagree on, ignore it.

00:15:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The music gets louder and the spacing gets bigger which fits but then the music gets quiet again and the spacing stays the same, i would make the spacing smaller from 00:16:846 (5,6,7,8).

00:23:368 (3,4,5) - the spacing between these 3 notes gets larger but it alsmost sounds the same as 00:22:933 (1,2) where the jump is much smaller.

00:54:672 (3) - I would let the slider that is now 00:54:781 (4) start here as it is almost the full "wa" sound and only misses the start

01:26:422 (2) - The jumps here are alot more comfortable if you swap the amount of spacing between 01:26:205 (1,2) and 01:26:640 (3,4)

02:00:770 (7) - Coming from the top of the map this slider goes from down to up, maybe make it more horizontal

I really like the wubwub part from 2:20 to 2:50 :)

The refain Chorus and the slow parts were also good. :)

(M4M maybe?)
Topic Starter
Troponoop

gottagof4ast wrote:

This is the first mod im making so if there is anything you really disagree on, ignore it.

00:15:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The music gets louder and the spacing gets bigger which fits but then the music gets quiet again and the spacing stays the same, i would make the spacing smaller from 00:16:846 (5,6,7,8). i think the chaotic weird sounds deserved to be mapped with weird flow, so instead of reducing spacing, i just made em into jumps

00:23:368 (3,4,5) - the spacing between these 3 notes gets larger but it alsmost sounds the same as 00:22:933 (1,2) where the jump is much smaller. i thought it'd be tedious to coordinate the low sounds, so i just threw in jumps

00:54:672 (3) - I would let the slider that is now 00:54:781 (4) start here as it is almost the full "wa" sound and only misses the start done

01:26:422 (2) - The jumps here are alot more comfortable if you swap the amount of spacing between 01:26:205 (1,2) and 01:26:640 (3,4) i changed it up

02:00:770 (7) - Coming from the top of the map this slider goes from down to up, maybe make it more horizontal curved it a bit to smooth it out


I really like the wubwub part from 2:20 to 2:50 :)

The refain Chorus and the slow parts were also good. :)

(M4M maybe?)

-Roz wrote:

Heyyyy! M4M Mod

Miku is love
00:07:281 (9,1,2,3,4) - Usually you want the start of a new pattern to be on the white tick if the song supports it, maybe http://puu.sh/uHJLP/8cc7679dc2.png like that instead. done

00:15:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern could be placed differently to be more comfortable to play. It feels awkward to me, with nothing in the song making it justified. Just slightly though. nerfed it a bit and tried making flow a bit more

00:27:498 (1) - Maybe move this to here http://puu.sh/uHK2s/53caf44d5a.png done

00:31:629 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make the extended sliders here, and in the rest of the section placed closer together? Might help reading better, but your call i think i'll keep it, flows fine imo

00:37:498 (3) - This slider seems out of place, switch to another curved one like 00:36:846 (1) - done

00:38:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm personally not a fan of these double notes throughout the map. I would've replaced them with more extended sliders. It's just preference though, so it's all good :) I was mainly looking to switch up the boring rhythm, i'll change em if more people mention it

00:59:020 (1) - Turn SV down, fits with the sound it represents i think it flows fine without an SV change

00:59:466 - Though this kiai is nice, you used sliders that aren't either straight lines or curved sometimes. Since there's no change in the sounds I would keep them basic like the others. ( Example: 01:06:422 (6) ) This is stylistic though, so feel free to ignore this. those funky sliders were mainly my attempt to convey them cute vocals so i'll keep them for now

01:12:944 (1,2,3) - Angle counter-clockwise 5 degrees? done

01:18:379 (1) - Give this a better angle, it messes with the flow imo done

01:42:075 (1,2,3) - When there's triplets like this through the map, I'd overlap them more. done. just nerfed most of em

01:51:640 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - This pattern is cooool

02:03:379 (1,2,3,4,5) - Smoother stream would look better. I know it's been said already, but I was going to say make it a straight line with the spacing a lot higher to match the sound. Maybe end it with the start of the slider too? The slider on the red tick after doesn't follow the rhythm damn you got me good on that, didnt notice that bad rhythm. fixed

02:32:509 (4) - Change to 1/4 sliders instead of a repeating one? Then make 02:33:162 (1) have a higher SV to match the sound in the song i like the reverse :D. im also too scared to change the SV on this 4 star map for that small part, so i tried spacing it to emphasize the beep sound

02:34:357 - There's a bass note here. It's small so it shouldn't matter much. ehh yeah i'll just let that be a peaceful blue tick and not put stuff on it

03:05:988 (5) - Turn this 90 degrees clockwise? Might flow better changed it up

03:15:118 (1,2,1,2) - These don't fit to me, replace with jumps done

03:37:292 (5,6) - Since there was just a stream, it might be better to space these out instead of having them overlap. done

04:07:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - The spacing in this stream goes from close to spread out and back to close, but 04:14:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) goes from spread out to close back to spread out. The first stream felt odd playing for that reason. gotta keep it spicy 8-) , i'll conform and change it up if more people pester me about it

04:54:240 (1) - Maybe replace with something like http://puu.sh/uHMd7/c1ddd1f874.png i dig my ugly reverse sliders

05:06:414 (1,2,4,5) - Not a fan of these, I'd do jumps instead done

05:15:545 (1) - The jumps leading to here are cool, though this is spaced too closely to the last hitcircle.ctrl-g'd that sucker, i think that works good


Overall a nice map, I think it goes well with the feeling of the song. The pauses between the drops were good. Try adjusting the hitsound volume for each section, might help make it sound better!
Thanks a ton for the mod guys, i appreciate it ;)
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