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Nanahira - Poka poka Shiteru Dake

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Lumin
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Lumin

CookieKivi wrote:

ғroм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe

αѕ ι proмιѕed ovo

ɢeɴerαl
remove hakurei reimu from the tags, just because she's in the bg doesn't means she must be in the tags ovo No -Sherry
And for my part, why couldn't it be there? It's part of the map anyways because it's in the bg of the map. There are some other maps ranked which also has bg related tags in them.

luminsane
00:01:699 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try to rework that, looks all cramped. Hmm, this is really subjective. I agree that it is a BIT more cramped than other jumps, but they don't overlap at all and it plays well, no change.
00:26:244 (6) - fix blanket Irrelevant nazism, doesn't really matter because they are so far away
00:36:153 - could add circle No, I'm following vocals there and that doesn't really have anything important sound there.


coυdɴ'т ғιɴd мore, ѕorry.
cυтe нιтѕoυɴdѕ втw~ Thanks
Namki
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Joined November 2014
Namki
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tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae
нужно звать дашу следопыта, я, кажется, проебал бна
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!

[ HoloOfficial's Beginner]
  1. Increase the value of the OD and the HP to 2 respectively. Having them over 1.5 feel s rather low compared with the actual rhythm you managed in the whole difficulty.
  2. 00:55:517 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I don't think this flows well according to the difficulty level you aimed to do here. The way I see things, the angle of curve creates a very awkward motion between these notes that might exert players to go into a forced transition. Therefore, what about if we tried up something like this instead?
    ^
[ Collab Normal]
  1. 00:06:062 (1,2,3) - These kind of anti-flows make very weird patterns to read and play, and do not fit well specially when they are over easier difficulties. I do believe managing a smoother flow would definitely improve the transition among these objects. Like this for example:
    ^
[ 619's Hard]
  1. 00:11:699 (4,1) - Distance between these should be higher as well as you did in the upcoming patterns
  2. 00:33:517 (6) - Remove this note to keep consistency in the way you mapped the previous patterns leaving a gap of the objects. Like 00:30:062 (5,1) - 00:26:426 (1,2) - Consider doing the same here: 00:39:335 (4) -
  3. 00:56:608 (5,6) - This is really unpredictable and might become uneven to players to 6 being stacked under (4). Consider trying another motion here. How about this?
    ^
  4. 00:58:426 (1) - vs 00:22:062 (1) - Variation is important but not when the rhythm is exactly the same over the two sections. I do believe managing the same rhythm among these segments. I'd go for the slider with the repeat since it fits well here. :3
[ Lumin's Light Insane]
  1. 00:49:335 (6) - This doesn't play bad but I think it wouldn't hurt to make it as a 1/2 slider as well as you did here 00:12:971 (1) - to keep consistency between both segments
  2. 00:11:880 (1,2,3) - Why the distance of this pattern is shorter than the previous ones 00:10:426 (1,2,3) - ? I do think it would be way better if you could keep the same distance over those objects.
  3. 00:27:880 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this jump-pattern style is rather high compared with the low spacing you managed over the whole segment? It doesn't flow bad but I'm not sure handling such as jumpy patterns over a calmer section would fit well here. Thus, I'd suggest lowering the DS to give a proper impact regarding the notes in matter.
  4. 00:27:699 - Consider adding a note here. It feels weird to leave such a a gap of 1/2 objects here when you didn't handle it in the upcoming sections. ;w;
  5. 00:53:335 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'm not sure if this jump-pattern was intentional because the spacing that it manages itself make a bit uglier motion among the objects. Wouldn't it be better if you used a star-jump pattern instead? o:
[ Nattu's Insane]
  1. 00:32:244 (1,2) - These should have higher spacing imo. It feels rather weird to have a lower distance when the overall section manages high density of jumps imo.
[ Baka]
  1. 00:53:335 (3,4,5,6) - This anti-flow creates a very awkward transition. The way I see things, there's no need to call up for variation when this pattern is pretty similar to the one you did here 00:54:789 (3,4,5,6) - I do believe making the same would fit this difficulty the best.
[]
That should be all! Call me at your earliest convenience to recheck. \:D/
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!
smae
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae

Battle wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!
lol :D

All fixed+some patterns
vanucik
484 posts
Joined December 2014
vanucik

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!
Use your Google Translate :D
Lumin
224 posts
Joined July 2014
Lumin

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Lumin's Light Insane]
  1. 00:49:335 (6) - This doesn't play bad but I think it wouldn't hurt to make it as a 1/2 slider as well as you did here 00:12:971 (1) - to keep consistency between both segments Yeah changed it, and it seems to fit a bit better
  2. 00:11:880 (1,2,3) - Why the distance of this pattern is shorter than the previous ones 00:10:426 (1,2,3) - ? I do think it would be way better if you could keep the same distance over those objects. I don't even know why it was unchanged until first bubble, now it's fixed
  3. 00:27:880 (1,2,3,4) - Don't you think this jump-pattern style is rather high compared with the low spacing you managed over the whole segment? It doesn't flow bad but I'm not sure handling such as jumpy patterns over a calmer section would fit well here. Thus, I'd suggest lowering the DS to give a proper impact regarding the notes in matter. Changed spacing to lower distances, now it jumps pretty much the same way than the rest of that slow part does
  4. 00:27:699 - Consider adding a note here. It feels weird to leave such a a gap of 1/2 objects here when you didn't handle it in the upcoming sections. ;w; Okay that's cool, added
  5. 00:53:335 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'm not sure if this jump-pattern was intentional because the spacing that it manages itself make a bit uglier motion among the objects. Wouldn't it be better if you used a star-jump pattern instead? o: Okay
Last update? probably not :D
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wajinshu
1,579 posts
Joined April 2015
wajinshu

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!
:v
Добре хлопці, розмовляемо на українській мові :D
шучу
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae

vanucik5656 wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!
Use your Google Translate :D
promt is better imo
HoloOfficial
34 posts
Joined July 2015
HoloOfficial
[quote="HappyRocket88"]Please, stop talking in Russian! I want to know what you guys say. ;w; No kudosu!

[ HoloOfficial's Beginner]
  1. Increase the value of the OD and the HP to 2 respectively. Having them over 1.5 feel s rather low compared with the actual rhythm you managed in the whole difficulty. -fixed
  2. 00:55:517 (1,2) - I'm sorry but I don't think this flows well according to the difficulty level you aimed to do here. The way I see things, the angle of curve creates a very awkward motion between these notes that might exert players to go into a forced transition. Therefore, what about if we tried up something like this instead?-fixed
    ^
HoloOfficial
34 posts
Joined July 2015
HoloOfficial
Water-melon~
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae

HoloOfficial wrote:

Water-melon~
nom nom nom nom nom nom nom nom nom nom nom
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/106500
Nattu
148 posts
Joined August 2012
Nattu

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Nattu's Insane]
  1. 00:32:244 (1,2) - These should have higher spacing imo. It feels rather weird to have a lower distance when the overall section manages high density of jumps imo.
FIXED

+ I change AR to 8.8 - I think it better then 9 for this diff.
THANKS <3 IM REDY
619
409 posts
Joined May 2015
619

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Collab Normal]
  1. 00:06:062 (1,2,3) - These kind of anti-flows make very weird patterns to read and play, and do not fit well specially when they are over easier difficulties. I do believe managing a smoother flow would definitely improve the transition among these objects. - almost fixed Like this for example:
    ^
[ 619's Hard]
  1. 00:11:699 (4,1) - Distance between these should be higher as well as you did in the upcoming patterns - fixed
  2. 00:33:517 (6) - Remove this note to keep consistency in the way you mapped the previous patterns leaving a gap of the objects. Like 00:30:062 (5,1) - 00:26:426 (1,2) - Consider doing the same here: 00:39:335 (4) - fixed
  3. 00:56:608 (5,6) - This is really unpredictable and might become uneven to players to 6 being stacked under (4). Consider trying another motion here. -fixed How about this?
    ^
  4. 00:58:426 (1) - vs 00:22:062 (1) - Variation is important but not when the rhythm is exactly the same over the two sections. I do believe managing the same rhythm among these segments. I'd go for the slider with the repeat since it fits well here. :3 - fixed
UPDATE

NM

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Artist:Nanahira
ArtistUnicode:ななひら
Creator:SherryCherry
Version:619's Hard
Source:
Tags:[Panda619] Nattu HoloOfficial Lumin Chibi Hakurei Reimu
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Myxo
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Myxo
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HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Before qualifying this, I've agreed with other issues that the modders pointed them out but were denied without a valid reason:

[ General]

  1. CookieKivi wrote:

    remove hakurei reimu from the tags, just because she's in the bg doesn't means she must be in the tags ovo
    I totally agree with him here. It's not a matter of describing the girl which's on the background, the main reason is to avoid having misleading information over the tag field since it doesn't make much sense to have the actual description of the characters there.
[ HoloOfficial's Beginner]
Increase the AR to 2 respectively as well as you did with the OD and the HP. :3
00:01:699 - The volume of these two lines MUST be the same. Considering managing 60& over both.

[ 619's Hard]
00:39:335 (4) - This note is still not removed even though you said you fixed it. o:
00:22:062 (1) - Please make this slider be 1/2 with a repeat as well as you did here 00:58:426 (5) -
00:58:426 (5) - NC
00:18:426 (1) - Remove NC

[ Lumin's Light Insane]
I was actually wondering about the difficulty name because this mapset as a whole isn't light: the structure of the notes and the rhythms made it really consistent and hard to not be a "light" insane. Hence, leaving it just as insane wouldn't mislead the labeling of appropriateness of how hard this difficulty is.

rs_fadeaway wrote:

00:59:880 (1,2) - too close,consider this
I'm really sorry but answering "Nope" isn't a valid reason to deny a suggestion. I actually think what he offered suits quite better the patterning to created here since the spacing from 1 to 2 is rather low compared with the distance you used during the whole kiai. For instance, placing 00:59:880 (1) - here 76|228 would make both parties cleared.

[ Nattu's Insane]
  1. 00:41:244 (3) - Overmapped. There's no slight sound here to emphasize with a triplet, hence it ends creating offbeats where the song doesn't really support them. I do think removing would fit this section the best as a whole since it should be consistent.

  2. Bakari wrote:

    00:48:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I see it in the opposite way. Use lower spacing values here, so when the kiai starts it feels a lot more epic. Intense jump you have in that quiet part kinda buff that effect.
    I totally agree here. Having high spacing doesn't really give the proper impact of having the kiai with the same Distance Snap. For it, I heavily suggest to reduce the distance as well as you managed at the beginning of this segment.

  3. Bakari wrote:

    00:46:789 (1) - a spinner would do a lot better. It'd make the players move a lot faster and reflect the long vocals a lot more accurately.
    Again, variation is important but not when the reverses of this slider becomes uneven to players to get when a spinner would highlight this section in a more adequate way. Please, try it. :3
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Voli
811 posts
Joined April 2013
Voli
Before this gets pushed through I wanna discuss some issues in the highest diff, some spacing, aesthetics and rhythm can be improved:

  • [Baka]
  1. I basically disagree with all these sliders used in the starting part, they start on red ticks and have slider ends on strong downbeats for no reason (could you explain this if you don't wanna change them?)
    00:12:426 (4) -
    00:08:062 (4) -
    00:09:517 (4) -
    00:09:880 (5) -
    00:10:971 (4) -
  2. 00:09:517 (4,5) - Symmetrical pattern but it's not centered. Please try to center the pattern in the middle or don't make it symmetrical D:
  3. 00:19:153 (1,2) - these shapes play annoyingly since the slider end overlaps the start and kinda look ugly too, can you separate the slider ends/starts more?
  4. 00:26:789 (3,5) - plz fix this blanket its pretty ugly
  5. 00:35:517 (2,3) - ugly, seperate the sliders or blanket it perfectly
  6. 00:39:699 (2,3) - this jump distance sucks, move 3 further/seperate since this is a pattern of two 2 note jumps on two vocal sequences
  7. 00:41:699 (4) - should be in a different pattern because new vocal sequence (beat pairing)
  8. 00:45:699 (2) - should end on blue tick and 00:46:062 (3) - reverse is overmapped and doesnt sound right, two notes or one slider is enough.
  9. 00:46:699 - missing note
GL
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Different volume on green and red line is not an issue, green line will always override red line. Just saying, you can fix it anyway.
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae

Voli wrote:

Before this gets pushed through I wanna discuss some issues in the highest diff, some spacing, aesthetics and rhythm can be improved:

  • [Baka]
  1. I basically disagree with all these sliders used in the starting part, they start on red ticks and have slider ends on strong downbeats for no reason (could you explain this if you don't wanna change them?)
    00:12:426 (4) -
    00:08:062 (4) -
    00:09:517 (4) -
    00:09:880 (5) -
    00:10:971 (4) -
    I map this sound 00:07:517 (1), it is strange if I not to map it here 00:08:062 (4)
  2. 00:09:517 (4,5) - Symmetrical pattern but it's not centered. Please try to center the pattern in the middle or don't make it symmetrical D: okay
  3. 00:19:153 (1,2) - these shapes play annoyingly since the slider end overlaps the start and kinda look ugly too, can you separate the slider ends/starts more? It is too much usual sliders too boring.I think that it is quite normal form for slider
  4. 00:26:789 (3,5) - plz fix this blanket its pretty ugly fixed
  5. 00:35:517 (2,3) - ugly, seperate the sliders or blanket it perfectly

    Secretpipe wrote:

  6. 00:35:517 (2,3) - You never used this sort of slider-stacking anywhere else in the map, kinda breaks the aesthetic concept for me
You can set an example?00:39:699 (2,3) - this jump distance sucks, move 3 further/seperate since this is a pattern of two 2 note jumps on two vocal sequences I don't agree with such flow.00:41:699 (4) - should be in a different pattern because new vocal sequence (beat pairing)
It is the same part as well as earlier 00:29:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Why you then haven't told about
him? I consider it as one part00:45:699 (2) - should end on blue tick and 00:46:062 (3) - reverse is overmapped and doesnt sound right, two notes or one slider is enough.00:46:699 - missing note added reverse^ GLThanks for the mod
Lumin
224 posts
Joined July 2014
Lumin
You said that you're not done with your mod yet but I guess that you're done with my diff I guess..? But I will answer again if you have something else to say

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Lumin's Light Insane]
I was actually wondering about the difficulty name because this mapset as a whole isn't light: the structure of the notes and the rhythms made it really consistent and hard to not be a "light" insane. Hence, leaving it just as insane wouldn't mislead the labeling of appropriateness of how hard this difficulty is. Well in my opinion it doesn't matter if it's Light Insane because it would be "surprise" only for the first playtime, but I have nothing against it being just an Insane so I changed it

rs_fadeaway wrote:

00:59:880 (1,2) - too close,consider this
I'm really sorry but answering "Nope" isn't a valid reason to deny a suggestion. I actually think what he offered suits quite better the patterning to created here since the spacing from 1 to 2 is rather low compared with the distance you used during the whole kiai. For instance, placing 00:59:880 (1) - here 76|228 would make both parties cleared. I honestly don't even know that why did I deny that back there, but I fixed it now
Last update..?
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tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae
i hate this song :c
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Please. ;w;
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
Topic Starter
tatemae
I have re-read the previous mods and have made some changes
HoloOfficial
34 posts
Joined July 2015
HoloOfficial
[ HoloOfficial's Beginner]
Increase the AR to 2 respectively as well as you did with the OD and the HP. :3 -fixed
00:01:699 - The volume of these two lines MUST be the same. Considering managing 60& over both. -fixed






Thanks!
Nattu
148 posts
Joined August 2012
Nattu

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ Nattu's Insane]
  1. 00:41:244 (3) - Overmapped. There's no slight sound here to emphasize with a triplet, hence it ends creating offbeats where the song doesn't really support them. I do think removing would fit this section the best as a whole since it should be consistent. FIXED


  2. Bakari wrote:

    00:48:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I see it in the opposite way. Use lower spacing values here, so when the kiai starts it feels a lot more epic. Intense jump you have in that quiet part kinda buff that effect.
    I totally agree here. Having high spacing doesn't really give the proper impact of having the kiai with the same Distance Snap. For it, I heavily suggest to reduce the distance as well as you managed at the beginning of this segment. FIXED


  3. Bakari wrote:

    00:46:789 (1) - a spinner would do a lot better. It'd make the players move a lot faster and reflect the long vocals a lot more accurately.
    Again, variation is important but not when the reverses of this slider becomes uneven to players to get when a spinner would highlight this section in a more adequate way. Please, try it. :3 FIXED
619
409 posts
Joined May 2015
619

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[ 619's Hard]
00:39:335 (4) - This note is still not removed even though you said you fixed it. o:
00:22:062 (1) - Please make this slider be 1/2 with a repeat as well as you did here 00:58:426 (5) -
00:58:426 (5) - NC
00:18:426 (1) - Remove NC

ALL FIXED, THX
UPD

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HappyRocket88
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  1. 00:48:244 - Sample Set-Normal? These whistles are really noisy and don't suit well with the song. ;w; Wouldn't it be better if you changed it to Soft sample-set as well as the other diffs do it? o:
LAST RECHECK AT LAST! >w< Thanks for being so patient! XDdc¡sdcsdjfs
Going to re-bubble since Sherry remapped the last diff accordingly to the mods he had received but denied because reasons.
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HappyRocket88 wrote:

Nattu's Insane
  1. 00:48:244 - Sample Set-Normal? These whistles are really noisy and don't suit well with the song. ;w; Wouldn't it be better if you changed it to Soft sample-set as well as the other diffs do it? o:
LAST RECHECK AT LAST! >w< Thanks for being so patient! XDdc¡sdcsdjfs
Going to re-bubble since Sherry remapped the last diff accordingly to the mods he had received but denied because reasons.
Rehistsounding all map with soft-sample :)
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meii18
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Greetings! Just a quick check of the highest difficulty

[Baka]
  1. 00:08:062 (4,5)- Here the flow looks quite weird because after you are aiming (4)-, looks like that the cursor goes slighty to 00:08:608 (6)- and not to (5)-.To make a better flow, you can blanket the slider with 00:07:517 (1)- like this http://puu.sh/qFBQN/1c48630307.jpg but then you have to re-arrange 00:08:426 (5,6,7)- pattern like this http://puu.sh/qFBVx/b83e6d31b3.jpg
  2. 00:09:880 (5)- Instead of using only an 1/2 slider with repeat, why don't you remove the repeat and adding a note on 00:10:244 - ? It will give more sense to the 8Bit instruments in my point of view
  3. 00:11:335 (5,6,7)- Seems like here you wanted to higlight (7)- where the 8Bit instruments are getting a bit lower so higlighting (7)- doesn't make any sense in my opinion.You can highlight the previous note, (6)- instead since there's a stronger beat and highlighting (6)- would give more emphasis to the stronger beat rather than on where the instruments are getting lower.The pattern would be like this https://puu.sh/qFCiU/94c59d464f.jpg
  4. 00:16:244 (1,2)- Seems like you mapped this pattern randomly.It looks awkward and also 'unlikeable' let's say :| Morever, I don't think it will offer a good gameplaying here.You can fix the pattern like in this picture http://puu.sh/qFCGX/c2cb3a4415.jpg just for the sake of improvement and also it will offer a better gameplaying and the pattern won't look randomly mapped anymore :D
  5. 00:16:971(3)- Clap intentionally placed? If not, you may remove it since on other notes like this one you didn't put any clap
  6. 00:18:789 (5)- Here I think the clap is supposed to be normal-hitclap.Same for 00:20:244 (5)- ; 00:21:699 (5)- ; 00:22:426 (2)- (on slider's head) ; 00:23:153 (5)-
  7. 00:23:880 (3)- Missing normal-hitclap? o_o
  8. 00:24:062 (4,1)- I don't know why the spacing got decreased by sudden, exactly when the instruments and vocal are really intensified and also the beat from (1)- sounds like a final cymbal sound which is stronger.You may increase the spacing here just to give emphasis to the stonger beat from (1)- like in this image http://puu.sh/qFCZy/88ac113316.jpg for example
  9. 00:29:699 (3,4,5,6)- From there you slighty started to decrease the spacing exactly when the vocal is really intensified and same for instruments.I would suggest to increase the spacing here like this http://puu.sh/qFD8X/225586c816.jpg for example.You have to highlight (5)- here since the beat is way more stronger than the beat from (4)-.Also, instead of having a repeat at (6)-, you can delete the repeat and adding a note on 00:30:608 - because on 00:30:426 - the instruments are stopping a bit, but there is a little noticeable sound on 1/2 tick (00:30:608-) so a note would fit there in my opinion
  10. 00:32:608 (3,4)- Maybe CTRL+G them? I feel like (3)- needs some highlighting since (3)- have the beat more stronger that the beat from (4)-
  11. 00:32:971 (5,6)- Again a randomly mapped pattern.I don't like how you structured the pattern in a 'unlikeable' way so why don't you move the tail of (5)- like this http://puu.sh/qFDqh/d47d770059.jpg and then re-arranging the pattern like this http://puu.sh/qFDoU/8f39b2f383.jpg? It will looks much better and mapped in a 'likeable' way
  12. 00:33:699 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)- Honestly saying, I don't really like in which way did you structure the pattern because firstly, on 00:33:699 (1,2,3)- , you used small spacing distance and the vocal is stronger and intensified so the decreased spacing doesn't make any sense here.But then from 00:34:244 (1,2,3,1,2)- you are starting to increase the spacing which they give emphasis to the intensified vocal.The main problem is 00:33:699 (1,2,3)- so why don't you increase the spacing there too to give emphasis to the intensified vocal?It would make more sense rather than having a small spacing distance between the triplets .Moreover, seems like you messed up the New Combos here.The New Combo is supposed to be on 00:34:426 (2)- and not on 00:34:244 (1)- and the New Combo from 00:34:789 (1)- must be removed.About the pattern, it could be like this http://puu.sh/qFDUO/8d157be7e0.jpg let's say
  13. 00:41:153 (2,3,4)- Why don't you highlight (3)- instead of highlighting (4)-? It is pretty obvious that (3)- have the beat more stronger than (4)-'s beat so I guess the (3)- 's beat is calling for some emphasis
  14. 00:41:880 (6)- The instruments are a bit different here so a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/qFE9B/0be95fbec0.jpg note+1/2 slider would make more sense and it will be more catchy to the instruments
  15. 00:45:699 (2,3,4)-Since it is an Extra, why don't you map a 'few notes' stream instead of using 1/4 sliders with few repeats? It wouldn't hurt to have a stream since the Extra difficulty contains only many 1/2 sliders and jumps everywhere =_=
  16. 00:59:517 (1)- I don't think you need this New Combo because it's like you are repeating the New Combos in row in my opinion so I think you have to remove the New Combo.Same for 01:00:244 (1)-
That's all for now!I'm sorry for the long modding post but if you don't understand some points, feel free to catch me in-game! Moreover, there's something which needs to be fixed.Nattu's Insane have the note density higher than your Extra.Nattu's Insane contains few streams, more circles and few slider while your Extra is filled only with many 1/2 sliders and many notes and jumps and, of course, it does not have any streams.I noticed it while the first part of Nattu's Insane looks a bit harder than the first part of your Extra.Before to push it forward, I think you need to increase the note density of your Extra (don't you think? :P) and decreasing the note density of Nattu's Insane so the Extra would be more harder than the Insane difficulty.

Good Luck!

EDIT: Popping the bubble since the set needs more improvement.Mostly the highest difficulty.
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HoloOfficial wrote:

SherryCherry wrote:

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