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Egész jó, összeszedem, amiket én bajosnak vélek benne. Ha ezek jobbak lesznek megy a csillag.

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Személyes véleményem

[Easy]
00:49:561 - Inkább 00:49:347-nél kezdődjön a slider.

[Normal]
00:44:901 - Az a 4-es olyan furcsán van ott.
00:56:416-00:57:487 - Ezek meg olyan csálén állnak.
01:11:839 - Az 1-es előtt ütemre is kéne tenni egy hangot, hogy érzékelhető legyen, hogy a többi nem kontrára jön.
01:11:839-01:17:623 - Itt végig távolabb kéne tenni őket, mert így olyan, mintha nyolcadokra jönnének, és a legyen egyenletes a spacing.
01:23:620 - Ebben a comboban túl közel vannak a dolgok, mintha tizenhatodok lennének a hangok közt.
01:29:404 - A 7-es legyen közelebb, így olyan, mintha negyeddel jönne az előző után.
01:30:689 - Ez ne innen kezdődjön, túl közel van az előző sliderhez.
02:12:889 - A 2-es egy kicsit lehet távolabb, mint az előző combo-ban
02:13:317 - Ezek legyenek távolabb.

[Hard]
00:21:981 - A 3-as egy tizenhatoddal később van, 00:22:088-nál.
00:28:835 - ^
00:24:377-00:27:550 - A némítások nekem zavaróak voltak, de ha akarod, hagyhatod.
00:35:262 - Itt valahogy triplát kéne, mert így furcsa.
00:38:475 - Az 1-es túl közel van az előzőhöz.
00:40:188 - ^
00:41:474 - A sliderek közt is legyen meg a távolság, mert így olyan, mintha tizenhatoddal jönne utána.
00:43:187 - Az 5-ös lehetne egy csöppet távolabb.
00:44:044 - Ide kéne még egy, nem?
01:04:342-01:09:268 - Itt legyen pontosabb a spacing, mert így zavaró.
01:09:911 - A 2-es túlságosan közel van.
01:21:907-01:22:228 - Szerintem jobb lenne, ha 01:22:335-ig tartana a slider.
01:25:977 - A 2-es kezdődhetne inkább 01:26:084-től.
02:00:893 - A 2-es nem kell ide szerintem, vagy közelebb kell hozni a következő slider elejéhez
02:35:192 - A 2-esnek 02:35:246-nál kéne lennie.
02:36:853 - A 7-es legyen távolabb, mint az előző combo-ban.
03:11:126-03:16:153 - Legyen pontosabb a spacing.
03:38:510-03:47:078 - Itt a hangokat lehetne valahogy helyezni, mert unalmas, hogy végig középen vannak.
03:49:220-03:51:362 - Itt lehetnének távolabb a dolgok, főleg, hogy utána jön az ugrálós rész.
03:53:933-03:58:860 - Szerintem ez egy kicsit nehéz a Hardhoz képest, lehetne kicsit csökkenteni a távolságokat.
04:12:355 - Ezt jobban szét kéne húzni, mert így triplának tűnik. Először nem is értettem, mi ez.
04:30:991 - Ez legyen távolabb az előzőtől, ha már double speed van.

hi

Easy

Why double bpm ???? is will be erro pleasse remove just one BPM because two 2 bpm are same so remove it pleasse
if you remove one bpm don´t forget Resnap All Note doing this best ever
Go to Song Setup > Audio > put Music track on 2 second pleasse

that all

Nice map

Normal

Same BPM error pleasse remove one bpm and don´t forget Resnap all note
Go to Song Setup > Audio > put Music track on 2 second pleasse too

00:34:619 - Remove New combo
02:01:159 at 02:09:519 - this very hard because this is normal (just me)

nice map

hard

why 4 BPM ?????
Just put put Timing ^and go to audio and can change Volume that all

remove 3 Bpm and put timing ^and change volume you got that all

if you remove 3 bpm don´t forget Resnapp all note


Go to Song Setup > Audio > put Music track on 2 second pleasse too

nice map

Note: not need put more bpm just put timing ^ and you can change volume that all
have questions asked me or in-game

STAR ! because nica map and I like this song *-*

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star ^^

+1 star

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star.

Tonoicutzu's Easy:

Drumroll from sliders are kinda loud in the beginning, perhaps lower volume of the first section by 10%.

00:37:189 (2) - I disagree very much with this kind of slider. As a beginning player I hated short sliders that repeated more than once, because it's hard to tell when to let go and move on to the next note if you have not listened to the music a lot. I think it could be sensibly replaced with a slider like:
and still achieve the same effect. Since this is easy, you don't need to hit every single note anyways.

Other places with this kind of slider that should be fixed:

01:13:767 (4,5,6,7) - Kinda hard in easy, replace with sliders instead?
01:35:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Normal:
Many slider lengths are off, my guess is that you did this in 1/3rd timing at first and then corrected it. However, slider lengths were not recalculated. I'd suggest adjusting your beat snap divisor to 1/4th for now, going to Timing> Recalculate Slider Lengths, to fix it, then going back to 1/2 beat snap divisor. The following mod assumes you've done that first.

You've got spacing issues throughout the map, I'd recommend going through the map using distance snapping for almost all notes. Also, I'm not sure jumps fit a normal difficulty.

00:10:628 (4) - Shorten repeat to the white tick.
00:22:623 (2) - Why not just stack this under (1)? Or move it away.
00:30:335 (4) - The two lines are not parallel. Move startpoint left 1 grid.
00:34:619 (2) - Again, stack or move away.
00:52:774 (5) - Extend to the long white tick.
00:54:488 (6) - ^
00:56:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's with this spacing?
01:05:198 (4) - Extend slider so it falls on 1/2 beats.
01:06:484 (6,7) - ^
01:09:911 (1,2) - ^
01:20:621 (1,2,3,4) - Stack these properly.
01:28:119 (4) - Extend to fit on 1/2 beats.
01:29:404 (8) - ^
01:32:403 (1) - ^
01:35:830 (2) - Make this repeat once, or extend.
01:36:687 (4) - Extend to fit on 1/2 beats.
01:37:330 (1) - ^
01:47:398 (1) - Kinda soon after spinner, maybe delete.
01:49:325 (2,3) - Extend
01:51:682 (3) - ^
01:55:752 (2) - Stack properly under (1)
01:55:752 (2) - Extend, while keeping it symmetrical.

Hard:
Adjust your volumes; in the beginning it's too loud, and I think 0% volume is not allowed. Some spacing issues too, for streams of notes you generally want to obey distance snap.

00:38:475 (1,2,3,4) - Equidistant spacing but different rhythm. Consider fixing, even though it's a hard it should still follow distance snap.
00:42:116 (3) - Make it repeat once more
...

Aborted because I think there's a timing issue. Though the map plays fine for the most part, that's because you made it work with 1/8th. A key clue is that you're in 1/8th beat for a song that doesn't need it. I'm not sure how to fix it, but try posting in this thread:

viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Which will find you someone to time it properly. While you're at it, fix the spacing and play through hard a couple times. notes should fall on 1/4th beats instead of 1/8th. Make sure to fix across all maps.

Starred, because the patterns and rhythm were pretty nice even though the timing is off. When you fix it feel free to ask for a recheck.

Timing:
1st timeline:
BPM: 140.100
Offset: 7200

2nd timeline (For correct metronome):
BPM: 140.100
Offset: 47242

In the middle part, the drum is like 10ms off actual beat...but gameplay should be fine

Star for BG, really like this one~

Star!

Star , Nice map .

Hey people..please who can modd my map.star it...THANK you..

sorry for such a delay. *cough*

[Tonoicutzu's Easy]
maybe extend it until 2:30 or such, or just map it until the end?
0:37:189 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - patterns like those are too hard for an easy. especially because you've got a weird jump between (4) and (5).
except of those two things, nothing really.

[Normal]
map it until the end, no one likes to play just one difficulty with the full song mapped, when in meanwhile the rest of them have less than 2 minutes mapped.
0:14:912 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
0:38:475 (4) - placed way off too far
0:45:329 (1,2,3,4) - absolutely inconsistent spacing.
2:01:107 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) (that spinner, one note, spinner part) - i hardly disapprove of this. this is a thing for an insane, but not for a normal difficulty!

[Hard]
0:20:904 (1,2,3,4,5) - really, reaaally innatural spacing you've got there... it's nonsense to set notes close to each other when there's a long distance between them, and then some 1/2 jumps, in a SINGLE pattern. this applies to similar patterns to that one too
0:43:816 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
0:59:876 (2,3,4) - ^
1:21:931 (1) - way too close to the previous note
1:47:252 (x) and so on - what's up with that sudden distance snap change?
3:23:773 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is not even symmetral...


[General]
this mp3 file's quality is unrankable. its bitrate should be between 128 and 192 kb/s, while your mp3 has only 64.



this really needs A LOT of work. sorry, but i can't star this yet. i've pointed out only the most important things, since it would take a lot of time to point out everything. also, remember: selfmodding is the best way to improve your map. you shouldn't bug people to mod it all the time, you should take a look at it by yourself too, to find something you don't like, and fix. it.
well, good luck!

I fixed what i knew and thy for advice...

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