wanhyrzh wrote:

Hihi~
A nice beatmap imo~
so just some suggestions and you can feel free to follow some or not
now let's go~

SPOILER

[general]
█ = fix
█ = not fix

you'd better make all diffs have the same length since some BATs/MATs may nazi for this...

[skin]
you'd better add an approachcircle.png since it's one skin of the hitcircle skins(that means if you make one of the hitcircle skins, you should make all of the hitcircle skins, since some BATs/MATs may nazi for this).

[normal]
hp+1?
00:52:270(2) delete this note then a slider(00:52:270~00:52:603) instead?
00:55:603(6) delete this note then a slider

(00:55:436~00:55:603) instead?
00:26:270(7) ^?
00:58:103(x) add a note?
01:04:603(x) ^?
01:08:769(1) delete the reverse then make a slider

(01:09:436~01:09:603)?
01:21:269(x) add a note?
01:32:269(5) shorten this slider to 01:32:603, then delete01:33:269(6), then add a slider(01:32:936~01:33:269)?
01:40:603(x) add a note?
01:43:936(4) delete this note then move the following sliderhere and add a reverse?
01:52:936(x) add a note?
01:55:603(8) shorten this slider to 01:55:936 then add a note

at 01:56:269

[hard]
hp+1?
00:29:779(x) add a note here or at 00:30:612?
00:34:779(6,7) make them like this?
[attachment=0:677c8]001.jpg[/attachment:677c8]
00:36:279(2) not to stack with 1 and make a jump?
01:08:612(x) add a note?
01:14:945(3,4) make them into a slider?
01:21:779(x) add a note?
01:22:612(3) new combo?
01:28:279(3) divide this slider into 2 sliders with 2 reverses for each?
01:39:945(x) add a note?
01:45:279(x) ^?
01:55:612(x) add a note here or make the following slider not

to stack with the notes but a jump.

[insane]
seems fine

star~
good luck with ranking it!

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

thank so much. u mod very fast!
i know u from my friend :3

wanhyrzh wrote:

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

thank so much. u mod very fast!
i know u from my friend :3

lol a 2min map with only 3 diffs encourage me to mod it immediately
also the song is good although I love more the vocal by Kagamine Len XD
by the way, would I have my kudosu XP?

• 
  Kiai Time : 01:29:603 - 01:56:269

• 
  00:30:269 (1,2,3): Why spacing increased?
  00:34:269 (5): Return + 1
  00:52:270 (2): Why not add clap at the end
  01:52:936 (3): Delete this circle
  01:33:269 (6,7): Overlap
  01:51:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): Strange spacing

• 
  00:57:279 (9): Add clap here
  01:42:945 (2): Symmetry
  01:51:279 (4,5,6,7,8): Strange spacing

• 
  00:24:270 : Delete all the lines before this red line if you don’t need them
  00:26:936 (6,7,8): Strange spacing
  00:36:353 (1): Spinner starts here like other diffs
  01:39:269 : Add a circle
  01:41:603 (5,6,1): Very strange spacing
  01:43:436 (1,2,3): Strange spacing
  01:55:936 (7,8,9): Add a small spacing like 1,2,3,4,5

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~ >> yeah, hi :3

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  Kiai Time : 01:29:603 - 01:56:269 >> yeah, that's it

[Normal]

• 
  00:30:269 (1,2,3): Why spacing increased?
  00:34:269 (5): Return + 1
  00:52:270 (2): Why not add clap at the end
  01:52:936 (3): Delete this circle
  01:33:269 (6,7): Overlap
  01:51:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8): Strange spacing

[Hard]

• 
  00:57:279 (9): Add clap here
  01:42:945 (2): Symmetry
  01:51:279 (4,5,6,7,8): Strange spacing

[Insane]

• 
  00:24:270 : Delete all the lines before this red line if you don’t need them
  00:26:936 (6,7,8): Strange spacing
  00:36:353 (1): Spinner starts here like other diffs
  01:39:269 : Add a circle
  01:41:603 (5,6,1): Very strange spacing >> that's jump
  01:43:436 (1,2,3): Strange spacing >> ^
  01:55:936 (7,8,9): Add a small spacing like 1,2,3,4,5 >> ^

Pretty good map~ >> thanks ~

EDIT: I wanted to shoot a kudosu star for this great map but I don't know why it doesn't work >> wow, so leider. but never mind

Garven wrote:

[General]
From 01:18:936 - to 01:21:603 - would be neat to have a constant snare hit on each beat like the percussion does in this song. It would give a better feel of the buildup to the chorus'. >> i'll look for it later

[Normal]
01:06:270 (4,5) - Not quite stacked properly
01:40:269 (9) - New combo
01:40:603 (1) - Remove new combo
01:55:603 (7) - Eeh, I really didn't like this .5x slider. Really easy to cause a combo break considering the tick rate.
Nice use of ticksounds here.

[Hard]
Different offset than the other two difficulties.
00:30:279 (4,5) - Check the spacing compared to 2, 3
01:37:612 (6) - New combo
01:39:445 (1) - Remove new combo
01:40:112 (4) - New combo
01:41:945 (1) - Remove new combo

[Insane]
00:25:103 (2) - Stack this properly
00:31:436 (8) - Stack this properly
00:35:769 (5) - Delete this note if you want to go with the drums
00:57:603 (1,2) - I really don't like doing zippy jumps into stacked sliders like this. Doesn't play very smooth to me. There are several in the map though, so I'll just mention this one.
01:24:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would have been neat if this was a 6-pointed star, and possibly have the end points all stacked correctly instead of being slightly offset as they are right now.
01:35:603 (3,1,2,3,1) - Doesn't flow very well

mercury2004 wrote:

[General]
ลองเปลี่ยนสีคอมโบให้ดูเข้ากับ BG หน่อยเป้นไง >> ถ้าสีคล้ายกันมันจะมองไม่ออกไงพี่กุ๊ก มันเป็นแมพโดด
[Hard]
01:08:603 (5) - น่าจะนิวตรงนี้ มันมึนส์สุดๆ
[net45291's Insane]
00:50:936 (5,6) - ทำนองนี้มันไม่มี คนเล่นอาจ งง ลองลบ 00:51:020 (6) - นี่ออกน่าจะเวิค
01:05:270 (1,2,3,4) - น่าจะเปลี่ยนที่หน่อยนะ โดดก็ดี เป้นก้อนนี้มันเล่นปวดหัว
[Insane]
01:17:603 (1,2,3,4) - เอา 01:17:603 (1) - แยกออกที่อื่นได้ใหม จะได้เข้ากันกับโน้ตอี่นที่เคยวางไว้ข้างหน้า ทำโดดๆหน่อยก็ได้ช่วงท่อนนี้อะ

ป.ล. มันเป้น suggestion จะทำตามไม่ทำก็ได้ ไม่ต้องคุโด้ก็ได้ถ้ามันไม่มีประโยชน์

เดี๋ยวดูดิฟของพี่เน็ทก่อนว่าแก้ตามมั้ย :3