pieguy1372 wrote:

Kantan:

00:27:306 (1,2) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else instead of having them be in the same spot as the previous notes Okay
01:21:306 (2) - Align with (1) Okay

Futsuu:

01:06:973 (4) - Align with (2) Okay
01:07:640 (1) - Too far from (4) Mirrored and not too high jump ;_;
01:08:973 (3) - Align with (1) Okay

Muzukashii:

00:39:973 (7,8,9,10) - Make these into a line Okay

Oni:

00:16:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'd recommend moving these somewhere else (this copy-paste makes it a lot more boring) Some done but ;_;
00:24:639 (1) - Too close to (10) Fixed
01:19:306 (10) - New combo? Okay

Nice map. *stars*

Krisom wrote:

General-
End your kiai at 01:28:639 - ? Since last note might be on Kiai score bonus zone, it would not be on here. Also as authentic, Kiai ends later ;_;

Futsuu-
01:27:806 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit ugly for the ending pattern, why not try this? Okay :3

Muzu-
00:44:973 (6,7,8,9) - Try this for symmetry with (2,3,4)? It also looks nicer.
00:45:806 (1) - This slider looks specially bad for a long slider,try something like this (you'll have to modify the following pattern to make this fit).
00:55:639 (5,6,7,8,1) - These two are the same as I mentioned avobe, just flipped horizontally and vertically. Here,I made another slider.
Here are both slidercodes.

SPOILER

464,228,45806,6,0,B|416:344|284:324|256:288|256:288|228:324|96:344|48:228,1,504,2|0
48,156,56472,6,0,B|184:180|152:44|256:44|256:44|360:44|328:180|464:156,1,504,2|0

Oni-
00:53:473 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really confusing, place it in a diferent way please. Moved to another route :3


Not much to say about this.

1. another 1:1 to 4:3 BG D:

1. 00:58:640 (9) - make the slider's end more visible? in Taiko Skin too difficult to tell that's a slider

1. 01:03:306 (2) - HP touch in HardRock mod

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. another 1:1 to 4:3 BG D: ;_:

[Oni]:

1. 00:58:640 (9) - make the slider's end more visible? in Taiko Skin too difficult to tell that's a slider Re-arranged :3

[Kantan]:

1. 01:03:306 (2) - HP touch in HardRock mod Some adjusted :3

star~

heatwave95 wrote:

[kantan]
00:35:306 (2,3,4,5) - I don't know why , but i think this part isn't that fit to the song Dunno but Taiko-authentic orz
00:51:639 (1) - spacing Not big deal orz
01:03:306 (2) - 1 grid left ? * spacing Not big deal orz
01:11:639 (2) - 2 grid left ? * spacing Not big deal orz

[futsuu]
00:38:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do like this ? make it straight ? http://puu.sh/1afn Some moved
01:01:306 (x) - add a circle ? Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:10:639 (x) - ^ Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:11:973 (4) - ^ Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:13:306 (2) - whistle ? Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:23:973 (2,3) - 1 grid left :3 I think it's fine orz
01:28:473 (x) - add a circle. Sorry, Taiko-authentic

[Muzukashii]
00:40:473 (10) - delete. Sorry, Taiko-authentic
01:04:473 (8) - put other place ? Moved :p

nice :3

[Oni]

nice
But slider usage so little
Use too many circle D:
xD

[Overall]
Star

NoHItter wrote:

General
A different mapping style? Past style is so close orz
Maybe change the BG to something more related to Bleach? I had thought if there's no ranked set I would add BG related with BLEACH on [Kantan],[Futsuu] but there's 1 ranked set so I added album jacket ;_;

Kantan
I already see a problem with this. There has to be a note at 00:43:306, but the time interval between the spinner before is too short for an Easy. Normal is acceptable. Actually, there's 333ms between spinner and next note, I can't deal with this thing with moving since both are authentic but... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71546 It doesn't matter very well imo and some opinion. The user can choose the way to play this I guess orz
01:28:639 (2) - Don't stack this. Moved

Futsuu
Patterns look kind of messy [Like 00:28:973 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4)] Some fixed
00:31:973 (6,7,8) - Repeat slider instead? Okay :3
00:39:973 (4,5,6) - ^ Okay :3
01:15:973 (2,3,4) - ^ Not on here since it's just almost last part orz

Muzukashii
00:47:806 (4,5) - Perhaps you could make the notes not be overlapped by the slider? Okay orz
00:58:473 (4,5) - ^ Okay orz
01:13:306 (2) - Slider stack on another slider looks ugly IMO. Okay orz
01:14:806 (1) - Maybe make spacing here constant for readability? Moved
01:17:806 (1) - Looks ugly IMO. But doesn't matter well imo orz

Oni
01:11:139 (1) - Suggestion: Perhaps you should not anti-jump this? Claiming down part so sorry orz
01:12:473 (1) - ^ Claiming down part so sorry orz
01:21:306 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: Perhaps make them into a square formation instead like in previous patterns? If this is not necessery, I would keep it sorry ;_;
01:22:639 (3,4,5,6) - ^ If this is not necessery, I would keep it sorry ;_;[color=#0000FF]
(On a sidenote, I like 00:48:806 -> 00:52:473, 00:59:473 -> 01:03:139)

kanpakyin wrote:

Yeah..Here my mod.

[General]
I think Lead in 1500 is enough for me. Okay :3
Kiai tme should end at 01:25:973? No, it's authentic orz

[Kantan]
00:08:639(1.2.3)-Vertical this pattern? Okay :3
00:40:639(x)-Remove finish on this spinner..It sounds better to me. Okay :3
00:43:306(1)-Put this note in centre because this note appears too fast after spinner.So newbie can catch it easily. Okay :3
00:51:639(1)-Remove New combo. Okay :3
01:15:973(2.3.4)-A Suggestion here:

Suggestion

Okay :3
01:24:639(4.5.6)-emm...How about let this pattern Horizontal with (1.2.3)? Not big deal sorry ;_;

[Futsuu]
00:12:306(3)-Probably use 2 notes to substitite this.1/2 short slider is weird imo. Also, not big deal since some way to prevent 1/2 clicking ;_;
00:14:973,00:17:639,00:20:306(3)-^
00:26:306(4.5.6.1)-You shou ld make this "square" regularly!Like this Okay orz
01:15:973(2.3.4)-If possible..Could you use a slider to instead of these? Okay :3
01:25:806(5)-How about make the slider like this?It looks better than previous..

Suggestion

O okay orz

[Muzukashii]
HP +1 or 2 +2 desu orz
00:13:973(1)-4 grid up? (LV3). ??? It's fine orz
00:14:973(3)-^ Same. ??? It's fine orz
00:15:973(5)-Fine..but a little bit ugly.
00:52:473(6)-How about make a square with (1.2.3.4.5)-? Not necessery orz
00:52:806(7.8.9.10)-According to your pattern.You should make a New combo here. Okay :3
00:56:473(1)-emm...Probably make this slider same as 00:45:806(1)-. No need to do ;_;
01:08:639(5)-New combo here? if you done it please remove new combo at 01:09:806. Okay...
01:17:806(1)-This slider...Would you draw it more beautiful? ;_; like this? Not necessery orz

[Oni]
00:05:139(8)-Sound here has a accent point so add a New combo here. Okay orz
00:07:639(6)-A new combo here would be nice. Okay orz
00:31:973(8.9)-Use some notes to instead of? Probably some triplet can make more fun Changed :3
00:49:306(3.4.5.6)-Increase spacing of this(Jump)!It's more appropriate to music, also players can get more fun if you do it. Done :3
00:50:639(3.4.5.6)-^ Same.
00:54:139(1.2)-Don't stack here :< Done :3
01:08:639(8)-New combo here? Okay :3

That's all.Not any terrible stuff .Almost nazi and design thing.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Oni]

OD +1 would be better to me. Okay :3

Useless mod here, don't kd me D:

Let me know what you're gonna do and I'll bubble <3

Mafiamaster wrote:

Didn't really see anything wrong...

osuplayer111 wrote:

Sorry for the delay but I was busy lately

Bubbled~

James2250 wrote:

-The ranked set you linked to has the source as "Bleach" instead of "BLEACH". Is there any difference between them or else I would change it for consistency Actually, mapper used 'BLEACH' for this one so no matter ;_;

Oni:
00:48:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you are going to do these kind of patterns I would put a new combo on 00:49:306 (3) to make it easier to read
00:50:640 (3) - new combo ^
00:51:973 (3) - new combo ^
00:59:973 (3) - new combo (same for the 2 patterns after this)
01:21:306 (3) - ^ (same for ones after too) All fixed :3

Everything else checks out but those anti jumps can be pretty hard to read as they are now in my opinion