Camellia & DJ Genki - Feelin Sky

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Kui
hyouri
omg hi big fan

kds lps
Topic Starter
Frostt

Kui wrote:

o am sorry glitch in website

cant give you kds :(
Kui

Frostt wrote:

Kui wrote:

o am sorry glitch in website

cant give you kds :(
reported. enjoyban
Kui
Ok, real 卐 short 卐 mod now..

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General
Check AiMod. Few things unsnapped.


Soaring
02:09:656 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Each set has inconsistent spacing. One is 2.80, next is 2.83 etc.
02:13:794 (1,1) - I assume you were trying to stack these?
02:14:139 (2,1) - You can stack this better too so it is even and looks nice.
02:16:553 (1,2) - ^
02:35:863 (1,2) - You could make this blanket a tiny bit nicer. It isn't symmetrical.
02:36:553 (1,2) - ^
02:52:415 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The intensity is building up so the spacing should be increasing, but I am not sure what you are trying to do with the spacing here. It is so inconsistent and doesn't make any sense imo.
03:36:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Very inconsistent, even on the parts where it is supposed to be consistent.
04:31:208 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
05:15:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

Nice map!

xd
Topic Starter
Frostt

Kui wrote:

Ok, real short mod now..

[*]
General
Check AiMod. Few things unsnapped.


Soaring
02:09:656 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Each set has inconsistent spacing. One is 2.80, next is 2.83 etc.
02:13:794 (1,1) - I assume you were trying to stack these?
02:14:139 (2,1) - You can stack this better too so it is even and looks nice.
02:16:553 (1,2) - ^
02:35:863 (1,2) - You could make this blanket a tiny bit nicer. It isn't symmetrical.
02:36:553 (1,2) - ^
02:52:415 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The intensity is building up so the spacing should be increasing, but I am not sure what you are trying to do with the spacing here. It is so inconsistent and doesn't make any sense imo.
03:36:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Very inconsistent, even on the parts where it is supposed to be consistent.
04:31:208 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
05:15:863 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^



xd
fixed everything xd

thanks for mod :D
Shiratoi
from queueueue

[Soaring]
00:02:070 (5) - why not just a note instead to match 00:01:725 (2,3) -
00:06:122 (4,5) - kinda big jump for beginning? but you can keep it
00:06:553 (6,1) - fix blanket lil bit
00:07:587 (5) - same as above
00:10:691 (7,1) - blanket?
00:11:639 (4,5) - also
00:12:070 (6,1) - can blankett
01:02:932 (7,8) - ^
01:09:829 (7,8) - ^
01:23:967 (8,1) - ^ or fix
01:29:656 (1,2) - kinda awk to play after stream ;(
also
singletap heaven
01:48:967 (1,2,1,2) - spacing might be confusing
02:44:484 (2,3,4) - idk if its just me or these spaced offbeats are weirdd

thats it since nm call me back if you want
Topic Starter
Frostt

Shiratoi wrote:

from queueueue

[Soaring]
00:02:070 (5) - why not just a note instead to match 00:01:725 (2,3) - I made it a kickslider for variation. Idk I can change it but I'll leave it for now
00:06:122 (4,5) - kinda big jump for beginning? but you can keep it
00:06:553 (6,1) - fix blanket lil bit
00:07:587 (5) - same as above
00:10:691 (7,1) - blanket?
00:11:639 (4,5) - also
00:12:070 (6,1) - can blankett
01:02:932 (7,8) - ^
01:09:829 (7,8) - ^
01:23:967 (8,1) - ^ or fix
01:29:656 (1,2) - kinda awk to play after stream ;(
also
singletap heaven Added Sliders
01:48:967 (1,2,1,2) - spacing might be confusing
02:44:484 (2,3,4) - idk if its just me or these spaced offbeats are weirdd

thats it since nm call me back if you want
Fixed everything that wasn't replied to (or was replied to with a blue response obv)

Thanks for mod~
Silicon-Based
Amazing! :)

Why doesn't this map get more attention?
hyouri
quiick mod

[general]
  1. add "camtek" "kamelcamellia" "C86" "comiket 86" in tags


[wub]
  1. 02:47:243 (2) - this is off-screen
  2. 00:02:243 - there is a beat here so it should be clickable for flow in the map. I suggest you make it similar to 00:01:725 (2,3) - and keep the slider at the end
  3. 00:07:760 - same as above
  4. 00:34:484 - I think here you should put more effort and pay more attention into the sliders here and do something like 00:34:484 (1) - 0.80x slider velocity (green tick) and 00:34:829 (2) - 1,20x slider velocity here and do same for all 00:35:174 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so that it gets a better purpose and structure rather than constant and predictable
  5. 01:12:932 (8,1) - 8's distance is kind of overmapped you just need to move it up a little
  6. 01:34:139 (2) - CTRL + G for flow
  7. 02:18:105 (2) - positioning of this is bad, you could do something like
  8. 02:18:622 (1) - same here this is a weird placement
Topic Starter
Frostt

Alveryn wrote:

quiick mod

[general]
  1. add "camtek" "kamelcamellia" "C86" "comiket 86" in tags


[wub]
  1. 02:47:243 (2) - this is off-screen
  2. 00:02:243 - there is a beat here so it should be clickable for flow in the map. I suggest you make it similar to 00:01:725 (2,3) - and keep the slider at the end
  3. 00:07:760 - same as above
  4. 00:34:484 - I think here you should put more effort and pay more attention into the sliders here and do something like 00:34:484 (1) - 0.80x slider velocity (green tick) and 00:34:829 (2) - 1,20x slider velocity here and do same for all 00:35:174 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - so that it gets a better purpose and structure rather than constant and predictable
  5. 01:12:932 (8,1) - 8's distance is kind of overmapped you just need to move it up a little
  6. 01:34:139 (2) - CTRL + G for flow
  7. 02:18:105 (2) - positioning of this is bad, you could do something like idk i dont see anything wrong with it, its supposed to be blanketed with the slider after it
  8. 02:18:622 (1) - same here this is a weird placement same
Thanks for mod! :D
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