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Haywyre - Everchanging

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ac8129464363
nice map, osu needs more haywyre
Will Stetson
Placeholder for tomorrow! I will mod as in depth as I can in the morning.

EDIT: At my comp now. There's practically nothing to mod but I'll try my best.

Nature:

I'd increase OD to 8.3, the map is difficult enough to warrant it.

00:13:683 (2,3,4) - Maybe make the spacing the same as 00:09:801 (3,4,5,6) -
00:20:389 (1,2) - same spacing as 00:20:742 (1,2) - ?
00:44:742 (1,1) - idk about anyone else but this sv change really fucked me up on the testplay haha. up to you whether or not to change
01:06:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'd exponentially increase spacing as the music builds up more, but thats just me
01:45:095 (1,2,3) - is there a reason for the triplet? doesn't sound supported by the music to me
01:53:566 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1) - this entire section is awesome 8-)
02:21:095 - maybe a slow slider here, as well as at 02:23:919 -
04:20:389 (1) - i'd ctrl+g this to improve flow.

Can't find anything else. Godlike song, good luck on ranking!! :D
hi-mei
good map!

but are there any real point putting these long sliders at the end?
maybe better make this map shorter?
RyoKazuka

distilled wrote:

good map!

but are there any real point putting these long sliders at the end?
maybe better make this map shorter?
making the map shorter will make the mapper map a full spread of Easy Norm Hard etc

the mapper puts those sliders so that itll make the drain time at least 5 minutes for it to be a marathon map
a marathon map can have a single difficulty
Topic Starter
Beige
@Qapitol : Sorry, I don't want to change your mod, it is weird for me that breaks patterns a lot ;w;...
Anyway, Thank you in advanced.

Also, thanks to explain about sliders at the end :D
Togetic
heyo from modreq!

Nature
00:20:389 (1,2,1,2) - for a beginning so calm, this spacing seems way too high
00:27:977 (3,1) - the spacing is unnecessarily high again, and i would recommend moving the 3 note up vertically more since the current note placement you have has different flow from the notes before, which causes aiming to be unnecessarily awkward
00:45:624 (2,3,1) - i don't hear rhythm for a triple
01:02:566 (2,1,2) - if the 1/8 kickslider was spaced a bit more, i think it would be less weird to aim this pattern
02:25:683 (1,2) - i see no reason for this not to be overlapped
02:27:977 (1,2,3) - i think it would make more sense to ctrl+g 1 and 3 circles
03:00:977 (3,1) - i don't see any reason to not overlap these notes

Really really good map and song! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Beige

Togetic wrote:

heyo from modreq!

Nature
00:20:389 (1,2,1,2) - for a beginning so calm, this spacing seems way too high I want to express it's time to start this song's beat.
00:27:977 (3,1) - the spacing is unnecessarily high again, and i would recommend moving the 3 note up vertically more since the current note placement you have has different flow from the notes before, which causes aiming to be unnecessarily awkward this pattern is so many in this beatmap. I don't want to change this.
00:45:624 (2,3,1) - i don't hear rhythm for a triple either one. ^
01:02:566 (2,1,2) - if the 1/8 kickslider was spaced a bit more, i think it would be less weird to aim this pattern ^
02:25:683 (1,2) - i see no reason for this not to be overlapped Why not ;w;
02:27:977 (1,2,3) - i think it would make more sense to ctrl+g 1 and 3 circles I want to make a square.
03:00:977 (3,1) - i don't see any reason to not overlap these notes It is kind of stack. It doesn't matter and worry about this.

Really really good map and song! Good luck!
Thanks for modding. But I don't want to change, sorry.

Well, This beatmap was bubbled. I don't want to break bubble except important stuff like unrankable.
Len
2016-08-23 16:10 Len: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/989151 Haywyre - Everchanging [Nature]]
2016-08-23 16:11 W h i t e: ㅎㅇ
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: 00:43:683 (1) -
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: 00:42:977 (1,2,3,4) - 이거
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: 처리하고나서
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: 00:43:683 (1) - 이게 약간 어중간한위치에 직선으로 놓아져있는데
2016-08-23 16:11 W h i t e: 아예
2016-08-23 16:11 W h i t e: 직선으로?
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: 약간 커브를 주거나
2016-08-23 16:11 Len: ㄱㄷ
2016-08-23 16:12 W h i t e: 복귀맵이라 고칠게 많긴 할듯
2016-08-23 16:12 Len: 6하고 같이 http://puu.sh/qLdnj/6426fb9482.jpg 이런식으로 놓았으면 더 좋았을듯
2016-08-23 16:12 Len: 근데 저렇게 바꾸게 된다면 00:44:742 (1,1) - 이것도 바꿔야해서
2016-08-23 16:12 Len: 함 생각해보셈
2016-08-23 16:13 W h i t e: 저건 별로인거임?
2016-08-23 16:13 Len: 뭔가 antiflow 같은느낌
2016-08-23 16:13 W h i t e: 안티플로우 정도인가 ㄷ
2016-08-23 16:14 Len: 잘모르겠음
2016-08-23 16:14 Len: ㅋㅋ
2016-08-23 16:15 Len: 01:17:919 (3) - 요기 뉴콤은어떰
2016-08-23 16:16 W h i t e: ㅇㅋ
2016-08-23 16:16 W h i t e: 위에꺼는 뭔가 바꾸기가 힘들다
2016-08-23 16:16 Len: 01:57:095 (9) - 여기도 스트림 모양이 바뀌는곳인데
2016-08-23 16:16 Len: ㄷ다른곳처럼 뉴콤넣어도 상관없을거같음
2016-08-23 16:16 W h i t e: ㅇㅋ
2016-08-23 16:18 Len: 02:34:507 (2) - 하고 02:34:860 (3) - 각각 컨G?
2016-08-23 16:18 Len: 하면 02:35:213 (1,1) - 랑 잘 이어지는듯
2016-08-23 16:19 Len: 03:36:889 -
2016-08-23 16:19 Len: 03:37:242 - 초록선 지워도 상관없는
2016-08-23 16:19 Len: 03:39:713 - 03:40:066 -
2016-08-23 16:19 Len: 03:42:889 -
2016-08-23 16:20 Len: 03:47:036 (3) - 이거 2하고 거리가 좀 가까운 면이 있는데 x126 y177정도로
2016-08-23 16:20 Len: 옮기면 더 좋을듯
2016-08-23 16:21 W h i t e: 굿
2016-08-23 16:21 Len: od 조금만 올려주는게 좋을거같음
2016-08-23 16:21 Len: 8.4?
2016-08-23 16:22 W h i t e: ㅇㅋ
2016-08-23 16:22 Len: 끝

and changed some patterns via irc
Len
01:17:919 (3) - 뉴콤빠진거같지만 다음기회에

#2 bubbled
Mint
Modded via IRC
2016-08-24 16:14 appleeaterx: 00:11:566 (6,1) - I expected the sound here to be mapped to be honest, especially since you did map 00:17:477 (5) -
2016-08-24 16:16 W h i t e: humm, ok
2016-08-24 16:16 W h i t e: how about stack
2016-08-24 16:16 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMJel/18c84837f4.png
2016-08-24 16:17 appleeaterx: oh i meant it rhythm-wise: http://puu.sh/qMJfV/19cf0e7572.jpg
2016-08-24 16:18 W h i t e: well, i think 1/2 rhythm is better
2016-08-24 16:18 appleeaterx: oops osu tends to crash sometimes
2016-08-24 16:19 W h i t e: lol
2016-08-24 16:20 W h i t e: anyway, i want to use 1/2 rhythm
2016-08-24 16:20 W h i t e: that rhythm-wise is difficult to change
2016-08-24 16:20 appleeaterx: k then
2016-08-24 16:21 appleeaterx: 00:13:683 (2,3,4,5) - Since even most sounds in the intro of the song are spaced pretty widely, having these distance snapped feels a bit strange? If you want to keep DS, I'd change it to something like 2.25x instead, for consistency with 00:09:801 (3,4,5,6,1) - , else just some freestyle would feel more appropriate.
2016-08-24 16:24 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMJBG/633ad28fc1.png
2016-08-24 16:24 appleeaterx: still looks pretty close, but if its better i guess xd
2016-08-24 16:25 appleeaterx: 00:51:095 (1,2) - 01:02:036 (5,1,2) - This could be moved a bit closer to (5)'s end to be honest. Spacing is a bit deceiving here, especially with the 1/8 sliders.
2016-08-24 16:29 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMJSv/e38ca47464.png
2016-08-24 16:29 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMJU4/621173dddf.png
2016-08-24 16:29 appleeaterx: ye that works!
2016-08-24 16:29 appleeaterx: 00:55:242 (4) - Things like these are mostly overmapped. While they seem to work fine, I just want to ask you to reconsider them. If you feel you really want to keep them, I can allow that.
2016-08-24 16:30 W h i t e: this map has a lot of overmapped lol...
2016-08-24 16:31 appleeaterx: ye thats the problem lol
2016-08-24 16:31 appleeaterx: but it works for emphasis
2016-08-24 16:31 appleeaterx: so i assume you want to keep it xd?
2016-08-24 16:31 W h i t e: yes i wanna keep that
2016-08-24 16:31 appleeaterx: good
2016-08-24 16:31 appleeaterx: 01:42:624 (3,4) - Not really sure why the spacing suddenly got so low? (4)'s sound is pretty dominant really, especially when compared to (2)
2016-08-24 16:33 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMK7a/3cafb73a74.png
2016-08-24 16:33 appleeaterx: yea good
2016-08-24 16:34 appleeaterx: 02:13:860 (2) - This is fine to keep, but since the synth isn't too loud here, following the clap might be better instead.
2016-08-24 16:34 appleeaterx: (aka making clap clickable instead)
2016-08-24 16:34 appleeaterx: but that might interfere with your concept of overall only following the wubs
2016-08-24 16:35 W h i t e: i wanna keep that becuz of Synthesizer sound little bit loud
2016-08-24 16:35 appleeaterx: ok
2016-08-24 16:36 appleeaterx: 02:46:507 (4) - Shouldn't there be an SV decrease here when compared to stuff like 01:16:154 (4) -?
2016-08-24 16:36 W h i t e: so same with 1:16:154 (4) -?
2016-08-24 16:36 appleeaterx: yea, found it a bit weird, same sound, also in kiai, but one has sv decrease and one has normal sv?
2016-08-24 16:38 W h i t e: ok
2016-08-24 16:40 appleeaterx: 02:54:624 (2,3) - Woah, that's really sudden to have sudden 1/8 taps. I don't think anyone would expected that. Would really prefer if you'd incorporate a kickslider instead..especially since is the only 1/8 tapping in the map?
2016-08-24 16:41 W h i t e: 1/6 sounds in here so i add it
2016-08-24 16:41 appleeaterx: 1/6 oops sorry lol
2016-08-24 16:41 appleeaterx: well
2016-08-24 16:41 appleeaterx: hmm
2016-08-24 16:41 appleeaterx: ok then, the sliders before worked well enough so
2016-08-24 16:42 appleeaterx: 03:23:830 (5) - Not really sure how you feel about hitsounding the 1/4 ticks as well, but the blue tick can actually use a clap here too.
2016-08-24 16:42 W h i t e: oh i forgot
2016-08-24 16:42 W h i t e: why nobody mods there
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: ww
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: 04:54:492 (1) - The spinner end sounds a bit noisy, mind lowering the volume?
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: oh wait lol
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: nvm
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: song is too silent and u cant go down anymore lol
2016-08-24 16:43 appleeaterx: welp
2016-08-24 16:44 appleeaterx: thats all
2016-08-24 16:44 appleeaterx: please update ^^
2016-08-24 16:44 W h i t e: good :D
2016-08-24 16:44 W h i t e: can i add sliderborder and something stuff?
2016-08-24 16:45 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMKIi/0fe5e76292.png
2016-08-24 16:45 W h i t e: like thsi
2016-08-24 16:45 appleeaterx: if you want to ww
2016-08-24 16:47 W h i t e: ok, done
2016-08-24 16:49 W h i t e: oh wait
2016-08-24 16:49 appleeaterx: unsnap
2016-08-24 16:49 appleeaterx: check aimod xd
2016-08-24 16:50 W h i t e: yes i found it
2016-08-24 16:51 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qML40/68bd4adc6a.png
2016-08-24 16:51 W h i t e: why ;w;
2016-08-24 16:53 W h i t e: i changed cs 4.5
2016-08-24 16:54 appleeaterx: did u update already
2016-08-24 16:54 appleeaterx: cuz i still get 4.4
2016-08-24 16:54 W h i t e: not yet
2016-08-24 16:55 W h i t e: i found unsnap, so i said "wait" lol
2016-08-24 16:56 W h i t e: done
2016-08-24 16:59 appleeaterx: soft-sliderslide7.wav & soft-slidertick7.wav both silent
2016-08-24 16:59 appleeaterx: not allowed
2016-08-24 17:01 W h i t e: tick silent doesn't allowed?
2016-08-24 17:01 W h i t e: omg
2016-08-24 17:01 appleeaterx: not that
2016-08-24 17:01 appleeaterx: but you cant silent sliderslide AND slidertick at the same time
2016-08-24 17:01 W h i t e: oh
2016-08-24 17:01 W h i t e: ok
2016-08-24 17:02 W h i t e: i'll delete 7th files
2016-08-24 17:02 W h i t e: and reduce tick sound
2016-08-24 17:03 W h i t e: so i can use only silent tick or silent slide
2016-08-24 17:03 appleeaterx: yes
2016-08-24 17:03 appleeaterx: so remove one of them (sliderslide7 or slidertick7)
2016-08-24 17:03 appleeaterx: or remove both
2016-08-24 17:04 appleeaterx: or replace one of them with audible sound (audible-sliderslide7 and/or audible-slidertick7)
2016-08-24 17:06 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMLRl/0e8b2daabc.png
2016-08-24 17:06 W h i t e: https://puu.sh/qMLTm/48487f63a1.png
2016-08-24 17:06 appleeaterx: thats fine
2016-08-24 17:07 appleeaterx: tell me when updated !
2016-08-24 17:08 W h i t e: done :D
2016-08-24 17:09 appleeaterx: the files are still in new .osz
2016-08-24 17:10 appleeaterx: hmm
2016-08-24 17:10 appleeaterx: wait this might be bug on my side
2016-08-24 17:10 appleeaterx: brb

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Topic Starter
Beige
Thank you very much!

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RyoKazuka
congrats
ac8129464363
grats :0
Enon
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Beomsan
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xStillo
I love this song! Thanks for making a beatmap of it! :D
DingGGu
gratz
quiz-chan_DELETED
great map!!
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