1. 00:03:802 (2,3) - a single slider would work better following the vocals, also the music is the same as 00:03:580 -.
2. 00:06:914 (1,2,3) - the spacing is really chaotic there and don't represent the song correctly IMO, since 2 and 3 has similar sounds in the music, why 3 is a jump and 2 is keeping spacing?
3. 00:15:802 - I'm wonder why you decide to end the spinner there, since 00:15:802 - is the start of the new section, not the end of the previous one.
4. 00:16:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really calm music compared to 00:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yet both use similar spacing.
5. I don't get the rhythm, for example I get you're following the claps at 00:19:802 (4) - and ignoring the melody 00:20:025 -, but why you're not consistent, since you are following the melody at 00:20:469 (6) -
6. 00:30:025 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead? they would follow the instruments and vocals better.
7. 00:35:469 - starting streams at blue ticks its really annoying to play, I'd just start the stream at 00:35:358 (1) - were the new music section is starting.
8. 01:26:914 (1,2) - swap NC, since the music changes at 01:27:136 (2) - not in 01:26:914 (1) -

1. 00:24:914 (1,2) - you have a nice rhythm in all the before part, but this isn't that nice, since the sounds at 00:25:136 - 00:25:358 - needs click action and the sounds at 00:25:802 - 00:26:025 (2) - are separate from the rest, my suggestion:
   
2. 00:33:136 (4) - move this a bit down, its actually touching the HP bar and doesn't looks nice at all
3. 01:01:802 (1,1) - something went wrong with the NCs.

1. it is fine, I'm not a fan of the design of this map, I guess you can work on the visual parts and patterning a bit more, sometimes I feel you're just following the distance snap without creating patterns.

Natsu wrote:

GlazeE's Hard

1. 00:24:914 (1,2) - you have a nice rhythm in all the before part, but this isn't that nice, since the sounds at 00:25:136 - 00:25:358 - needs click action and the sounds at 00:25:802 - 00:26:025 (2) - are separate from the rest, my suggestion:
   
2. 00:33:136 (4) - move this a bit down, its actually touching the HP bar and doesn't looks nice at all
3. 01:01:802 (1,1) - something went wrong with the NCs.
   All fixed!

Pata-Mon wrote:

@小激光
我垃圾审美扭不动。最后那里，ez转盘后一小节不能放东西所以不行

@fm
主要你说的那几个地方都不是人声起点……人声基本都是红线音来着所以算啦

thanks for mod

神tm走过场

Ultimate Madoka wrote:

Pata-Mon wrote:

@小激光
我垃圾审美扭不动。最后那里，ez转盘后一小节不能放东西所以不行

@fm
主要你说的那几个地方都不是人声起点……人声基本都是红线音来着所以算啦

thanks for mod

神tm走过场

我给你补个论文如何？

Regraz wrote:

The quality of map is ok but I think it's not a nice idea that the creator only made one difficulty of the map, especially when it is the lowest difficulty.

Natsu wrote:

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Yomi's Broom

1. 00:03:802 (2,3) - a single slider would work better following the vocals, also the music is the same as 00:03:580 -.
   i prefer pattern now
2. 00:06:914 (1,2,3) - the spacing is really chaotic there and don't represent the song correctly IMO, since 2 and 3 has similar sounds in the music, why 3 is a jump and 2 is keeping spacing? changed
3. 00:15:802 - I'm wonder why you decide to end the spinner there, since 00:15:802 - is the start of the new section, not the end of the previous one. fix
4. 00:16:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is really calm music compared to 00:17:580 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yet both use similar spacing.
   i think its not really a big spacing change though
5. I don't get the rhythm, for example I get you're following the claps at 00:19:802 (4) - and ignoring the melody 00:20:025 -, but why you're not consistent, since you are following the melody at 00:20:469 (6) - i didnt donsider about vocal here, idk why but keep my old mind
6. 00:30:025 (1,2) - use two 1/2 sliders instead? they would follow the instruments and vocals better. ^
7. 00:35:469 - starting streams at blue ticks its really annoying to play, I'd just start the stream at 00:35:358 (1) - were the new music section is starting. i think its fine? really common pattern
8. 01:26:914 (1,2) - swap NC, since the music changes at 01:27:136 (2) - not in 01:26:914 (1) -k

sahuang wrote:

[Hard]

1. SV 1.0 is even lower than Normal 1.3... -
   

   sahuang wrote:

   My biggest concern is the sv in Hard, but it's fine to me and i had irc with other bns.

2. 01:00:691 (3,4) - too far away compared to 01:00:914 (4,5,6) - fixed
3. 01:07:358 (1,2,3) - 01:08:247 (1,2,3) - make them consistent with 01:00:247 (1,2,3) - 01:12:247 (5,6,7) - 01:18:025 (1,2,3) - etc.? - fixed
4. 01:18:914 (5,6,2) - the overlap is too random. - fixed
5. 01:26:914 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/qQai7/f1ca00f9de.jpg same for 01:00:691 (3,4,5) - don't point reverse slider to the circle cuz it's really hard to read and will ruin ds. - fixed
6. 00:33:580 (1,2) - very bad overlap. - keep, i dont think so
7. 01:09:580 (1,2) - swap NC? - keep, 人声在这里01:09:580 - 开始
8. 00:10:469 (3) - NC - fixed

Regraz wrote:

The quality of map is ok but I think it's not a nice idea that the creator only made one difficulty of the map, especially when it is the lowest difficulty.

sahuang wrote:

My biggest concern is the sv in Hard, but it's fine to me and i had irc with other bns.

Kencho wrote:

[GlazeE's Hard]

1. 00:25:136 (2,3) - 這個節奏改成這樣放比較好，http://puu.sh/qUZ0F/ba6450133c.jpg ，因為原本2的滑條尾是重音，原本那樣不太好，至於排列的話，建議1疊到2上然後3疊到4上就好了 - fixed
2. 00:20:914 (5) - 和00:21:802 (1) - NC互換 - fixed
3. 按照前面的NC套路，00:37:802 (1) - 和00:38:691 (3) - NC也要互換 - fixed
4. 01:08:247 (1) - 不需要NC - fixed
5. 01:23:247 - 個人建議這裡可以像主難度一樣加個轉盤到01:24:247 - ，當然別忘了幫轉盤尾加綠線降低音量。 - fixed

Kencho wrote:

Bubbled!

sahuang wrote:

Hard
00:40:025 (4) - 音效头上那个normal去掉
00:54:914 - 加个whistle，和主难度一样
01:09:136 (1) - 为什么没音效...
all fixed

sahuang wrote:

Recheck
Hard
00:40:025 (4) - 音效头上那个normal去掉
00:54:914 - 加个whistle，和主难度一样
01:09:136 (1) - 为什么没音效...

Broom
00:41:580 - 00:45:136 - 00:42:469 (1,2) - 滑条头都漏clap
00:47:802 (1,4) - 00:48:691 (4) - 00:52:247 (4) - 也是？