dkun wrote:

Hard
When you generally do triples, try to keep them consistent.
Such as: 00:29:598 (5,6,7), and more after it.
01:41:483 (1) - Move the end point down and left a grid. -> http://puu.sh/Vgs
I would recommend grid level 3, so you can do things like this, making this even @ 01:31:021. -> http://puu.sh/Vgu

Normal
00:32:021 (1) - This is a bit eh. Maybe reconstruct?
01:09:406 (1,3) - Perhaps reconstruct these sliders to make them symmetrical to each other? -> http://puu.sh/VgA
Again, grid level 3 makes this easier. ^

Overall
Sweeet map.
Star!

thanks for modding

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Color Legend

Colors Legend
You HAVE to do this
You should do this
You Could do this

[General]
Change Source to "Apollo Justice Ace Attorney"
Add "Gyakuten Saiban 4" to the Tags
Add Trucy comboburst *.*!
[attachment=0:97105]comboburst-0.png[/attachment:97105]

[Normal]
a bit Easy for a Normal... change the name to Easy?
01:03:636 (2,3) - Stack the end of 2 and the start of 3, better

thanks for your mod and for the comboburst *-*

Crop your BG to 800 x 600.

[Normal]
AR is a bit high,reduce it.

00:20:021 (3,4) - Stack under slider properly?
00:21:175 (1) - Fix spacing.
00:27:867 (2) - ^
00:32:021 (1) - ^ Place it closer to previous object.
00:36:175 (1,2) - Also spacing isn't correct.Fix.
00:43:559 (1) - Why spacing increased here? No need to do it in the easiest difficulty.
00:54:636 (1) - 1 grid down please.
00:57:867 (1) - Spacing,too far.
01:01:098 (6) - Spacing,too close.
01:03:636 (2) - Too far.
01:05:252 (3) - ^
01:10:790 (2) - Again 2x spacing..kinda bad for here you know.
01:12:636 (1) - A jump? Huh? Fix.

[Hard]
00:09:290 (3) - Fix distance.
00:10:790 (6) - And here,new combo btw.
00:14:483 (3,4,5) - Distance should be equal between em,fix.
00:18:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing makes no sense again..
00:29:252 (4,5,6,7) - 5,6 should be farther.
01:13:559 (2) - Too close,fix distance.
01:21:406 (4) - Stack better.
01:21:867 (1) - Too close.

Nice music,but too much spacing problems.
Star.

IceBeam wrote:

Crop your BG to 800 x 600.

[Normal]
AR is a bit high,reduce it.

00:20:021 (3,4) - Stack under slider properly?
00:21:175 (1) - Fix spacing.
00:27:867 (2) - ^
00:32:021 (1) - ^ Place it closer to previous object.
00:36:175 (1,2) - Also spacing isn't correct.Fix.
00:43:559 (1) - Why spacing increased here? No need to do it in the easiest difficulty.
00:54:636 (1) - 1 grid down please.
00:57:867 (1) - Spacing,too far.
01:01:098 (6) - Spacing,too close.
01:03:636 (2) - Too far.
01:05:252 (3) - ^
01:10:790 (2) - Again 2x spacing..kinda bad for here you know.
01:12:636 (1) - A jump? Huh? Fix.

[Hard]
00:09:290 (3) - Fix distance.
00:10:790 (6) - And here,new combo btw.
00:14:483 (3,4,5) - Distance should be equal between em,fix.
00:18:175 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing makes no sense again..
00:29:252 (4,5,6,7) - 5,6 should be farther.
01:13:559 (2) - Too close,fix distance.
01:21:406 (4) - Stack better.
01:21:867 (1) - Too close.

Nice music,but too much spacing problems.
Star.

Ok, all fixed~
Thanks for modding

nice BG ^^

General:
It is not allowed to put black circles in any map,so choose the other colour
One advice - you decided to finish your map not in the end of the song,so I think it is better to decrease volume in the end of your map.

Normal:
I have nothing to say about it Nicely done! Just one thing - finish your KIAI mod here - 01:08:944. make the same in Hard difficulty too,because they don't end at the same time.

Hard:
01:21:636 - add here a circle

That is all! Nice map and nice song! Star!

Giorgos wrote:

nice BG ^^

General:
It is not allowed to put black circles in any map,so choose the other colour
One advice - you decided to finish your map not in the end of the song,so I think it is better to decrease volume in the end of your map.

Normal:
I have nothing to say about it Nicely done! Just one thing - finish your KIAI mod here - 01:08:944. make the same in Hard difficulty too,because they don't end at the same time.

Hard:
01:21:636 - add here a circle

That is all! Nice map and nice song! Star!

Thank you very much!
Kudos for you xD

hola

~Normal~
00:55:790 (2) : arregla el spacing , bajalo 1 grid
01:05:252 (3) : arregla el spacing , segun yo eso deberia ir mas cerca del (2)

~Hard~
no veo nada malo , es mas me gusta la diffie D:
solo un detalle
trata de no abusar del spacing sabiendo qe la diffie es "Hard"
como aca - 01:01:790 (1,2,3,4) y tambien desde aca 01:23:713 hasta aca 01:29:021
solo eso


me encantaria , crear una diffie insane quizas :3
me avisas por pm si tu respuesta es positiva

te dejo star

mucha suerte adios

General:

- No agregaste correctamente la imagen del fondo. Los archivos dicen que el nombre de la imagen del fondo se llama: "GS4TheTroupeGramaryeWallpaper2_thumb.png" pero dentro de los archivos del map nada mas encuentro "GS4TheTroupeGramaryeWallpaper2.png", re agrega tu fondo, o cambiale el nombre al archivo de tu fondo.

- Además, tendrás que recortar tu fondo para que sea 800x600 o 1024x768. Esto lo tiene sque arreglar ya que causa un SB load innecesario.

- Nazi: tus previews times no son exactamente iguales, en normal dice 21175 y en hard dice 21173. Considera ponerlos exactamente igual. (Los ves abriendo el map con block de notas)

- Los colores de combos tampoco son iguales entre las dos dificultades, aseguráte de que sean iguales.


Hard:

00:50:713 (1) - Se vería mejor si el slider apuntara hacia abajo en mi opinion.
01:15:867 (10,1) - El DS (distance space) de estos dos objetos no son muy intuitivos. Considera alejar el (1) más del (10)
01:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - En definitiva, no es nada intuitivo el espaciado de los objetos. Ves los numeros en amarillo en la esquina superior derecha? Asegurate de que cuando hagas click a unos de esos objetos, el numero del Prev y del Next tengan valores lo mas similar posible. Un margen de error de unos 0,05 maximo es aceptable.

En general, el problema mas grave que posee este mas es en el espaciado que muchas veces no son nada intuitivos. Por ahora, te aconsejo que nada mas uses un mismo valor de DS para todo el map a excepcion de los jumps.

Normal:

El mismo comentario que en hard acerca del espacing, excepto que seré más estricto aquí porque es una normal. Trata de hacer que en todo el map tenga el mismo spacing, asegúrate de que cada vez que hagas click en algún objeto, se pueda leer que el Prev y Next de ese objeto tengan exactamente el mismo valor.

00:55:790 (2) - Un grid más abajo? (Grid lvl 3)
01:08:944 (6) - Para que tengas stacks perfectos, te recomiendo que desactives el grid snap temporalmente y ajustes el distance spacing a x0,00.

Si tienes alguna duda en lo que te dije, o en otra cosa, solo postealo aqui en el thread, siempre reviso los mods que hago (a menos que haya pasado mucho tiempo y se me olvide >_>)

Hello~

[General]

Add BG~

[Normal]

00:08:944 (2,3) - spacing

00:39:867 (3,4) - ^

00:44:944 (4) - new combo

01:18:406 (1,2) - spacing

01:20:021 (2) - new combo

01:20:021 (2,3) - spacing

01:38:482 (4) - delete and spinner start here

[Hard]

00:09:867 (5) - new combo

00:10:790 (1) - delete new combo

00:32:021 (5) - new combo

00:35:483 (1) - delete new combo

00:35:713 (2) - new combo

00:52:559 (2) - new combo

01:18:406 (1,2) - spacing

01:34:559 (4) - new combo

01:35:021 (1) - delete new combo

star~

Ok, all done, thnks for modding~

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

- No agregaste correctamente la imagen del fondo. Los archivos dicen que el nombre de la imagen del fondo se llama: "GS4TheTroupeGramaryeWallpaper2_thumb.png" pero dentro de los archivos del map nada mas encuentro "GS4TheTroupeGramaryeWallpaper2.png", re agrega tu fondo, o cambiale el nombre al archivo de tu fondo.

- Además, tendrás que recortar tu fondo para que sea 800x600 o 1024x768. Esto lo tiene sque arreglar ya que causa un SB load innecesario.

- Nazi: tus previews times no son exactamente iguales, en normal dice 21175 y en hard dice 21173. Considera ponerlos exactamente igual. (Los ves abriendo el map con block de notas)

- Los colores de combos tampoco son iguales entre las dos dificultades, aseguráte de que sean iguales.


Hard:

00:50:713 (1) - Se vería mejor si el slider apuntara hacia abajo en mi opinion.
01:15:867 (10,1) - El DS (distance space) de estos dos objetos no son muy intuitivos. Considera alejar el (1) más del (10)
01:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - En definitiva, no es nada intuitivo el espaciado de los objetos. Ves los numeros en amarillo en la esquina superior derecha? Asegurate de que cuando hagas click a unos de esos objetos, el numero del Prev y del Next tengan valores lo mas similar posible. Un margen de error de unos 0,05 maximo es aceptable.

En general, el problema mas grave que posee este mas es en el espaciado que muchas veces no son nada intuitivos. Por ahora, te aconsejo que nada mas uses un mismo valor de DS para todo el map a excepcion de los jumps.

Normal:

El mismo comentario que en hard acerca del espacing, excepto que seré más estricto aquí porque es una normal. Trata de hacer que en todo el map tenga el mismo spacing, asegúrate de que cada vez que hagas click en algún objeto, se pueda leer que el Prev y Next de ese objeto tengan exactamente el mismo valor.

00:55:790 (2) - Un grid más abajo? (Grid lvl 3)
01:08:944 (6) - Para que tengas stacks perfectos, te recomiendo que desactives el grid snap temporalmente y ajustes el distance spacing a x0,00.

Si tienes alguna duda en lo que te dije, o en otra cosa, solo postealo aqui en el thread, siempre reviso los mods que hago (a menos que haya pasado mucho tiempo y se me olvide >_>)

Ok, veré lo del spacing, gracias por el mod.

General

Combo 1 is not the same color as in normal
(just pointing out preview time is for some reason 2ms off lol. i really doubt it actually matters tho)

if you don't already know, you can check these things by just opening the .osu files with notepad.
these things aren't important tho.

Hard

I don't like some of the anti-spacing and some other regular spacing stuff that much... but i guess it's fine.
I feel like this difficulty could use some more strict spacing. some notes are closer to the last beat and some are further even though they are the same length apart. (i'm only talking about regular spacing in this section. anti-spacing is fine)

00:13:790(1) - i would move this further away
00:34:790(5,6,7) - i would move the notes a little more further apart. anti-spacing a little hard to read here for the first time, unless u know the song
01:20:483(2) - eh weird spacing

Normal

00:18:636(2) - clap
00:19:559(2) - ^
01:22:329(2) - incorrect spacing


nice map :3

Star~

I love this song and the game.
Star!

:3 :D starr

[Normal]
Good!

[Hard]
00:06:406 (1,2,3) - Separa mas a 1 y 2 con 3. Si no, se ve como que vienen mas prontos.
00:08:252 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Tienes muchos erores de spacing. En algunas partes, cuando una nota aparece cerca, le falta un beat para llegar, y en otras, la nota esta mas lejana, pero se pega de imediato. Luego tambien hay cambios the spacing que confundiria a muchos. Por ejemplo:

00:14:252 (2,3,4,5) - Estos estan spaced iguales, pero los unicos que siguen el mismo rithmo son 3, 4, y 5. No el 2. Deberias acercarlo mas al 3.
00:15:636 (1,2) - Enorme cambio de spacing a comparasion contra el demas spacing.
00:17:021 (4,1,2,3) - Primero el 1 sigue imidiatamente despues del 4, y luego el 2 y el 3 que tienen el spacing igual, vienen mucho despues.

Entiendes?

Lo demas esta bien, pero si, solo aregla al spacing. Lo mas separados esten en la linea de arriba, lo mas separados deben estar abajo.


Acabo de notar que yo soy terible para deletrear letras en español orz

All fixed!

Raikar wrote:

:3 :D starr

Kakarotto wrote:

I love this song and the game.
Star!

Thanks~

Uff... 1/6 is only for experienced mappers, why didn't you do 1/4? Also, you doing 1/8 in Normal and 1/6 in Easy, what is that all about lol?
And em,... I am feeling not English today, so I will be modding some of your beatmap with Pictures.

[General]
Set hitsounds volume at 6th thick
Move map to WIP since [Normal] isn't finished(at least I have almost empty diff, only few notes)

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 2
00:28:559 (1) - remove whistle from bounce, and add it to the end of the slider
00:32:021 (1) - you can whistle this slider's end too
01:05:252 (3) - new combo
01:26:021 (4) - ^
01:28:329 (7) - ^

[Hard]
You don't need that high snap divisor. Use 1/4(It's not really a problem, but always easier to read)
00:31:559 (4) - add a note
01:04:790 (4) - ^
01:36:406 (7) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left


sorry for a delay, star

[easy]
ugh, do you realize it's got a 3:5 circle to slider ratio? It seems fine otherwise, just that the hitsounds are a tad bit too lound, and it will be a pretty bad taiko map.

[hard]
there's nothing wrong with it, but it's pretty boring.

You've got some poor spacing, but that's nothing aimod can't tell you about (ctrl shift A to bring it up).

no kd, I didn't tell you anything worthwhile, sorry.

thanks, all fixed!

Hooray, you actually get the mod because the person before used a Touhou song.

By Mod Request:

[Easy]

1. 00:13:098 (2,3) - too close to the (1)
2. 00:14:944 (2) - add clap at the start of the slider
3. 00:15:867 (3,5) - add clap
4. 00:21:636 (2) - make it straight
5. 00:43:559 (1,3) - add clap
6. 00:44:944 (1,2) - clap at the end of the slider
7. 01:01:098 (6) - add whistle
8. 01:31:559 - add some whistles to match the tune

[Hard]

1. 01:15:175 (7,8,9) - too close to the (6)
2. 01:35:944 (5,6,7) - sloppy spacing

Haha, great!!

But I suggest making another diff because 2 just isn't enough...

Star and Kudosu Star!!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Hooray, you actually get the mod because the person before used a Touhou song.

By Mod Request:

[Easy]

1. 00:13:098 (2,3) - too close to the (1)
2. 00:14:944 (2) - add clap at the start of the slider
3. 00:15:867 (3,5) - add clap
4. 00:21:636 (2) - make it straight
5. 00:43:559 (1,3) - add clap
6. 00:44:944 (1,2) - clap at the end of the slider
7. 01:01:098 (6) - add whistle
8. 01:31:559 - add some whistles to match the tune

[Hard]

1. 01:15:175 (7,8,9) - too close to the (6)
2. 01:35:944 (5,6,7) - sloppy spacing

Haha, great!!

But I suggest making another diff because 2 just isn't enough...

Star and Kudosu Star!!

Thanks for modding and for kudosu star, and yes, im going to do another difficulty ^^

BPM:129.98

aaaa... neko-mod! :3

Easy
00:23:021 (1): Borra el nuevo combo
01:18:406 (1): Borra el nuevo combo y quitale una repeticion, esta muy cerca con el slider para un easy
01:31:559 (1): Te recomomiendo copiarlo y reemplazarlo en 01:33:406 (3), obvio que lo giras, por que se ven diferente y algo "feito" jeje

Hard
00:34:906 (X): Agregale un circle

Eso es todo, y bueno si puedes haz esos Sliders Largos al mas circulares, buena cancion. :3

Neko_Ray wrote:

aaaa... neko-mod! :3

Easy
00:23:021 (1): Borra el nuevo combo
01:18:406 (1): Borra el nuevo combo y quitale una repeticion, esta muy cerca con el slider para un easy
01:31:559 (1): Te recomomiendo copiarlo y reemplazarlo en 01:33:406 (3), obvio que lo giras, por que se ven diferente y algo "feito" jeje

Hard
00:34:906 (X): Agregale un circle

Eso es todo, y bueno si puedes haz esos Sliders Largos al mas circulares, buena cancion. :3

Gracias por tu mod ^^

Hi

General
Second combo color is white so don't use it, all are curse this color, do it grey

Easy
HP = 3, OD = 4 Don't change it and call this diff Normal, because it's normal
CS = 2

Hard
00:48:406 (4) - place it over the slider
01:15:175 (7,8,9) - stack it with the end of the slider

Good work, star

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi

General
Second combo color is white so don't use it, all are curse this color, do it grey

Easy
HP = 3, OD = 4 Don't change it and call this diff Normal, because it's normal
CS = 2

Hard
00:48:406 (4) - place it over the slider
01:15:175 (7,8,9) - stack it with the end of the slider

Good work, star

Thanks for your mod!

star></~❤

hihi~ :3

namazun wrote:

star></~❤

scarlethana wrote:

hihi~ :3

Thanks!

star~

[Audio]

Very soft mp3, hitsounds are to loud, I'd suggest you lower them a tick or two more in general. Also attached is silent slider slide to mute that ugly sound and make the song more appealing to play/listen too.

Remember to enable custom hitsound override 1 as in picture below


[General]
Both difficulty are perfectly fine and spaced kinda (acceptable) correctly, but in all honestly a little boring to play. I'd suggest you try some new patterns, to many straight forward sliders/patterns at the moment.

A very standard beatmap. I've seen worse, so good job!

Can I make a suggestion? Try just don't read the following link. It can teach you how to make some really nice sliders and spice up your maps a little more. And not make it look so bland/boring

Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.

Download: blank-sliderslide.zip

Sorry delay due exam XD
So here's my mod.
[General]
Make easy diff ?
So , new player who like this song , can play this song :3 ?
[Normal]
00:10:330 (4) - add 1 more repeat then make this circle 00:11:253 (5) closer
00:38:028 (2) - spacing
01:12:651 (4,5,6) - make it like this http://puu.sh/168H * I think it's sound better.
01:18:422 (2) - doesn't fit for this part.
[Hard]
Fine for me.
but seriously try make it hard * jump but not stream , this song doesn't fit for stream.
make it jumping :3
if you're gonna stay like this , people gonna bored by this song.

Star from me ~ *
Go Go LuPiiTa

[General]
Set the lead-in to 1.5 seconds, or if you're having trouble with the slider, open the .osu in Notepad and type in 1500.

[Normal]
00.14.946 (2) Make this straight
00.16.331 (4,5) Nazi: One grid down
00.32.027 (1) Make this symmetrical
00.44.953 (1) One grid down
01.32.963 (2) Suggestion: Untidy- place in the exact center between (1) and (3)

[Hard]
Hitcircle number 2 has a different color from Normal. Is this intentional?
01.24.636 (5,6) Suggestion: One grid down and left?
01.37.329 (1) Spacing
There are a lot of streams in this difficulty that look like jumps but aren't spaced far enough away to be jumps, making them seem like just bad spacing. Fix them.

Star~

Thanks, im going to edit all later~

Every beats and slides needs spacing or you can use change the inherit section.

Let me know you fixed them all and I'll check it.

Thank you.

hi

normal

Wooow this is very fine for me ^^

hard

omg very good ^^

ho wait you need read too much danger pleasse read this

lol just kidding

Because I like this song and very cool map

well done

goood!!
star~

jnkinsu wrote:

goood!!
star~

Thanks! and LOL with your avatar xDDD

Edit: People, stop starring and modding this, i´ll finish it later. Thanks~

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