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Byakugan249 wrote:

Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point OK
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Done
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4) No, purposely not aligned
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Kind of looks funny and messed up spacing so keeping this
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point. Yep
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point Moved one grid right
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5) Nah, I kinda like the not alignedness here

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point Looks better as is
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point OK
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point Done
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up I think you have the wrong note / timing here? At any rate, I think this part is fine
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point Sure

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point I think the spacing is better untouched
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point. Did the middle one but keeping the end
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point OK
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point Think this looks better as is
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point It curves around better without changes
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up Gonna keep this since it's not really grid snapped atm (for spacing)
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point I like it better as is

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks a lot! :)
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Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :P


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better.

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more.

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it.

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward.

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here.
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third.
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this.

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
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S h i o n wrote:

Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :PLOL that's fine haha XD


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better. I think the current starting point sounds better, sorry

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more. OK

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it. This looks better straight IMO

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC I think my original combos fit better, sorry
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point Done
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward. Sorry I like having the last note by itself

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here. OK, changed
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third. Er, there is no finish here XD I don't think I will add to the last bit though I think it clashes with the whistle on (1) of the next beat
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this. Yea, sorry I think notes fit better here

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
Thanks a lot for your mod :)
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Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap?


[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1?


Couldn't find more, nice map :)
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Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also:
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags.
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections:
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318

    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.


[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3


Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
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L i d a N wrote:

Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap? Don't really like how it sounds there, sorry


[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1? You mean bigger? No ... I don't like the largest size, sorry


Couldn't find more, nice map :)
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything :P

narakucrimson wrote:

Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~ Hmm OK, I hope the new one is better
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also: Weird ... you must have an old version of the map. This is what you should be getting. I've full submitted just in case, though
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags. OK
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections: I'm not sure about timing either, so I'm not going to change anything for now. I'll try to ask a BAT or someone to check it, since I'm not too good at stuff like this :S
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318

    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.


[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3 Changed


Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
Thanks a lot. I will try to get someone to check the timing :P
Lol and you said you would have to take a while ... XD

EDIT: I asked lolcubes and he said that the timing was great. Will ask around for more opinions but I think the current one is OK :O
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I don't know, 00:55:326 (1) sounds off to me, and 01:26:526 (6) feels too early. Please get someone else to confirm that :O
posted
Was asked for timing help.

Timing very accurately this map would be extremely difficult as the piano goes faster or slower at times, but this timing should be good enough to be played:

offset 136 || BPM 100,010
offset 85978 || BPM 99,000
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Odaril wrote:

Was asked for timing help.

Timing very accurately this map would be extremely difficult as the piano goes faster or slower at times, but this timing should be good enough to be played:

offset 136 || BPM 100,010
offset 85978 || BPM 99,000
Fixed. Ending updated appropriately to avoid sliders awkwardly in the middle of the beat change and stuff :P
Combo colours also updated
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from my que

[General]
video size should be 800x600 or smaller

[Cry]
01:02:529 (1) - end at 01:03:129 ? then circle at 01:03:429 or slider from 01:03:429 to 01:03:729

[Smile]
01:14:978 - this clap sounds kinda odd , remove ?

[Dream]
00:29:833 (2) - I'd like this are circles and 00:30:732 (4,5) is a slider , sound the same but easier to play
01:04:929 (10,1) - change newcombo

no much to say
nice map here
posted
could find none. GJ
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wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
video size should be 800x600 or smaller I'm pretty sure I've gotten someone to do this already ...? X_X

[Cry]
01:02:529 (1) - end at 01:03:129 ? then circle at 01:03:429 or slider from 01:03:429 to 01:03:729 I think it's better to play as is, but it's not a bad suggestion. Will consier :P

[Smile]
01:14:978 - this clap sounds kinda odd , remove ? I will keep it here for consistency, since it's the same in Dream too

[Dream]
00:29:833 (2) - I'd like this are circles and 00:30:732 (4,5) is a slider , sound the same but easier to play Changed, nice suggsetion
01:04:929 (10,1) - change newcombo This is fine

no much to say
nice map here
Thanks for your mod :)

bmin11 wrote:

could find none. GJ
Lol, thanks for looking anyways ^_^
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Requested mod.

[Cry]
Couldn't find anything wrong here.

[Smile]
Nothing here either.

[Dream]
01:04:329 > New combo?

I couldn't find much wrong with this map. You've done a very good job. :D
star'd
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Ok, I like the new timing!

I just have a couple more things to say:
  1. Perhaps you can force a custom cursor too, so that another skin wouldn't make the star file you used look weird. But that's on you :P
  2. As the video has a lot of white, the soft pink and skyblue blend a little with the video occasionally. Maybe it is a good idea to make them sliiiightly stronger, but not too much, because they fit the mood of the song very well.


That should be all Evian! Let me know what you did with those two suggestions, and call me back for you know what ^^

Oh and no kudosu, please :3
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OH YEAH
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Ritaka wrote:

Requested mod.

[Cry]
Couldn't find anything wrong here.

[Smile]
Nothing here either.

[Dream]
01:04:329 > New combo? Sorry I don't think it fits here :(

I couldn't find much wrong with this map. You've done a very good job. :D
star'd
Lol thanks a lot for looking! ;D

narakucrimson wrote:

Ok, I like the new timing!

I just have a couple more things to say:
  1. Perhaps you can force a custom cursor too, so that another skin wouldn't make the star file you used look weird. But that's on you :PDone but with the old one since that's the only one I have XD
  2. As the video has a lot of white, the soft pink and skyblue blend a little with the video occasionally. Maybe it is a good idea to make them sliiiightly stronger, but not too much, because they fit the mood of the song very well. Changed 'em both, hope they look better now


That should be all Evian! Let me know what you did with those two suggestions, and call me back for you know what ^^

Oh and no kudosu, please :3
You know what? Hmm, that sounds like you know who ... AAHHHHHH!!! (Sorry, HP reference LOL XD)

OzzyOzrock wrote:

OH YEAH
Erm, thanks? Lol O_O
posted
Ok you've waited long enough, huh? :P

Some irc fixes and checks and stuff and have your bubble!

Good luck getting this ranked~ :3
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narakucrimson wrote:

Ok you've waited long enough, huh? :P

Some irc fixes and checks and stuff and have your bubble!

Good luck getting this ranked~ :3
XD All my thanks to you ♥
posted

OzzyOzrock wrote:

OH YEAH
I remember when I first modded this is was already awesome.
ABOUT TIE TIME TIEITIEMT EITMEIT IEMT EIM
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OzzyOzrock wrote:

OzzyOzrock wrote:

OH YEAH
I remember when I first modded this is was already awesome.
ABOUT TIE TIME TIEITIEMT EITMEIT IEMT EIM
Oh XD Well thanks so much for your support and checking after all this time haha XD Hopefully I'll find a BAT kind enough to look at it soon :3
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