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KAWAYAH - Backbone [OsuMania]

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jukkaduei
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Joined April 2015
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jukkaduei

koeiprogenitor1 wrote:

Speed Mod
MX
00:10:325 - เพิ่มโน้ตกดที่ช่องที่ 1 อ้าว แต่คนอื่นเขาบอกให้ลบอ่ะ เค้าบอกว่าให้ตามเสียงใดเสียงหนึ่ง พี่ก็เลยตามเสียง synth
00:14:075 - เพิ่มโน้ตกดที่ช่องที่ 2 นี่ด้วย
00:17:825 - ^ นี่ก็เช่นกัน
00:21:575 - ^ นี่ด้วย
00:24:388 - เพิ่มโน้ตกดที่ช่องที่ 3 อันนี้แก้แล้ว
01:00:013 - - 01:00:481 - ตรงนี้มีเสียงรัวนิ ปล่อยว่างทำไม คนอื่นเขาบอกให้เอาออกง่ะ
02:13:841 (133841|1,133958|0) - ลบออก อันนี้พี่ตามเสียง hi-hat ของกลองอ่ะ
02:17:591 (137591|2,137708|3) - ลบออก นี่ด้วย
02:21:341 (141341|2,141458|0) - ลบออก นี่ด้วย
02:25:091 (145091|1,145208|3) - ลบออก ^
GL For Ranking :D
ยังไงก็ขอบคุณที่มาม็อดให้นะครัช :D
-SoraGami-
951 posts
Joined March 2014
-SoraGami-
Hi~

m4m as requested

Column = 1|2|3|4


[MX]
- 00:21:106 (21106|1,21223|0) - the flow here kinda doesnt fit that much in the song, try ctrl + g
- 00:26:263 (26263|2,26497|3,26731|2) - move these notes to 4,3,4 for more comfortable feeling
- 00:30:950 (30950|2,30950|0) - these notes and 00:30:481 these, doesnt have same pitch, 00:30:950 (30950|2,30950|0) move these to right to feel that the pitch rise respectively with the song and 00:31:184 (31184|1) move to 1 to balane the pattern
- 00:39:153 (39153|3,39388|2,39622|3,39622|2) - kinda uncomfortable, too much dense on the right side especially it is the starting pattern of the double chords, 00:38:919 (38919|2,39153|3,39388|2) try moving to 4,3,4 more comfortable these way
- 00:52:513 (52513|2) - end this LN to the white line, because the sound ends there like here 01:07:513 (67513|1) and also for the sake of consistency
- 00:54:739 (54739|0) - move to 3 then 00:55:559 (55559|3) - move to 2 for balance
- 00:56:263 (56263|1) - please hear it in 25% playback the sound ends in the white line xD
- 00:58:606 - should be something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5393176 because the LN changes pitch here 00:58:841
- 01:04:934 (64934|2) - move to 4 for more balance flow
- 01:07:513 (67513|1) - end it in the white line
- 01:11:263 (71263|2) - ^
- 01:13:606 - same with 00:58:606 cut the LN in the middle, it's obvious that the sound chanhges there
- 01:15:013 - add note
- 01:00:013 - ^
- 01:00:247 - 01:00:364 - i hear a sound here, maybe add? this section is actually the same with 01:15:013
- optional: 01:16:888 (76888|2,76888|0) - extend this LNs to 01:20:638 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5393370 or maybe just extend LN on the col 1 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5393373 for some little complexity
- 01:36:575 - you can add a note here to emphasize the kick sounds in every 1/1 and it is an MX diff so it's okay :)
- 01:38:450 - ^
- 01:40:325 - ^
- 01:42:200 - ^
- 01:49:700 (109700|3) - more comfortable in column 1
- 01:53:333 (113333|3,113450|2,113450|1) - move to left for hand balance
- 01:57:083 (117083|0,117200|2,117200|1) - move to the right same reason
- 02:01:184 (121184|3,121302|1) - ctrl + G to remove the jack and for the consistent smooth flow
- 02:03:528 (123528|3) - move to 1 same reason
- 02:10:091 (130091|3) - move to 2 same reason
- 02:15:013 (135013|2) - end in the white line
- 02:19:231 (139231|1) - move to 4 for balance then 02:18:763 (138763|1) - end in the white line
- 02:22:630 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5393418
- 02:24:388 - add note for consistency with 02:16:888
- 02:29:075 (149075|0,149309|0,149544|0) - these are too uncomfortable especially the one with the LN, try this one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5393440
- 02:36:809 (156809|3,157044|0,157278|3) - ctrl + h for hand balance also to remove the jack here 02:36:575 (156575|3,156809|3)
- 02:38:450 (158450|2) - move to 4, different pitch 02:38:450 (158450|0,158450|2,158684|2,158684|0) moving one should be okay
- 02:40:208 (160208|0,160325|0,160677|3,160794|3) - these jacks are too sudden imo, especially it brokes the hand balance here 02:40:325 (160325|2,160677|3,160794|3) ,maybe remove this 02:40:325 (160325|0,160794|3)
- 02:41:263 - add note
- 02:43:606 (163606|3) - move to 3

okay, that's all :D
Good Luck with your map xD

ps: please reply to my mod
Ibrahim
1,191 posts
Joined July 2013
Ibrahim
Hi i'm gonna mod after you apply mod From Sora :D
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
mod back
0 1 2 3
[EZ]
  1. 00:20:638 (20638|1,21575|2) - better to use LN,00:20:638 - I can listen the long rhythm clearly(? ,though it's soft.imo you can make vol lower to show this difference.
  2. 01:00:950 (60950|1,61888|2) - better to change column to keep balance
  3. 01:16:888 (76888|2) - end in 01:19:700 - and 01:20:169 - add a new LN in 3
  4. 01:24:153 - add a note,01:27:903 - 01:31:653 - also,follow your catching these rhythm shouldn't be ignored.
  5. 02:33:294 (153294|2,153763|2) - better not use jack frequently,in easy diff it's hard.hope to rearrange
  6. 02:43:138 - add a note to make a double is better
  7. 02:57:669 (177669|3) - LN
[MX]
  1. 00:31:888 (31888|2,31888|3,31888|1) - double is ok,because there isn't a very strong rhythm,even same as before you put double's place.
  2. 00:43:138 - add a note to make triple.
  3. 00:49:114 (49114|2) - move it to 00:48:997 - now your catching is little confusing,players won't know which rhythm you caught imo.
  4. lots of things is same as 00:49:114 (49114|2) - if you agree this don't forget fix all,and if you don't accept is ok too xD
  5. 01:11:263 (71263|2,71848|2) - 1/4 near between note and LN is confusing and hard,try avoid this pattern.
  6. 01:58:958 - add a note,missed a important rhythm.there are same problem after this time,plz all fix.
  7. 02:12:669 (132669|1,132669|0,132669|3) - double is ok,and try to make a LN there.
  8. 02:54:388 (174388|1,174388|0,174388|2) - double
  9. 02:56:263 - why to use 1/8 to show there?I heard some long rhythm in there,and 1/8 overmap to show there is a bad idea in below 3 stars map.hope to change a way to show there
I'm so busy these days so only mod 2 diffs ;w; if you want to me mod other diffs welcome pm me xD
gl!
Ibrahim
1,191 posts
Joined July 2013
Ibrahim
hi sorry for delay, this m4m with me

col 1 2 3 4

MX
00:47:356 (47356|3,47825|0) - idk why you not add note here , ii hear kick sound realy clear like you put in here to 00:48:294 (48294|2,48294|3) - please listen carefully for each other note
00:53:450 - missing note for kick
00:46:888 - it's okay to add note since this part is kiai
00:57:200 - add note for kick
01:44:075 (104075|1,104075|0) - add note for consistency pattern like yiou put in here 01:43:606 (103606|2,103606|1,103606|0) -
01:47:825 - this too
01:49:700 - this too
01:51:575 - this too and etc
01:59:427 (119427|3,119778|3,120364|0,120716|0,121302|3,121653|3,122239|2,122591|2,123177|3,123528|0,124114|1,124466|0,125052|2,125403|2,125989|0) - and many more, add one note , listen the sound same with this 02:06:575 (126575|0,126575|3) -
please check again for consistency your pattern :D
i think that's all for me Good luck~!

*and can you reply for the other mod ? since you give they kudosu and you update your map tho
Alsty-
638 posts
Joined March 2016
Alsty-
HELLOOO :D

Sorry for delay , i told u , im actually busy at real life. :3
this is actually M4M , but i think its ok if u not mod my map, bcs my map will dead soon cause i have no time for editing.
but if u still want mod it , just leave it on my map thread.okay now here we go.

COLUMN GUIDE
1|2|3|4


Here a short mod
HD:
00:13:138 (13138|0) - move 4
00:13:606 (13606|2,13723|1,13841|0) - i think u need variation on the pattern , its a bit boring if u keep the start like that i suggested change with this sample
00:16:888 (16888|3) - move to 2
00:18:997 (18997|2,19114|1,19231|0) - i suggested add variation
00:20:638 (20638|1) - move to 4
00:23:684 (23684|1) - move to 3
00:23:802 (23802|2) - move to 2
01:51:458 (111458|1,111575|2,111692|3) - suggested like this
02:41:380 (161380|2,161497|1,161614|0,161731|2,161848|3,161966|1,162083|0,162200|3,162317|2,162434|1,162552|0,162669|2,162786|3,162903|1,163020|0) - i will be happy if u want re-arrange this section , really this section is a bit awkward , try with 25% playback and u will feel it
02:56:263 (176263|0,176341|1,176419|2,176497|1,176575|2,176653|3,176731|0,176809|1,176888|2,176966|1,177044|2,177122|3,177200|0,177278|1,177356|2,177434|1,177513|2,177591|3) - actually this is 1/8 sound.
thats all , and please recheck for your pattern consistency.

Completed

Thanks for requesting and Good Luck for Ranking :3
Chronocide
236 posts
Joined December 2014
Chronocide
Status: Active
M4M Request
Might wanna use a custom hitsounds for your hitsounds, skin hitsounds might sound awkward for some people.
NM
Mod
  1. 00:45:013 (45013|2) - Maybe add a note here? You used the vocal 02:12:669 (132669|2) there as well.
  2. 02:11:263 (131263|0) - ^
Really solid difficulty, seems fine as-is.
HD
Mod
Really fun to play with DT ;)
  1. 00:23:919 (23919|0,24388|0) - Not the same sound, yet same pattern, maybe go for http://puu.sh/pFqtu/547bad30ca.jpg ?
  2. 00:31:888 (31888|3) - Maybe doubles on 00:32:356 (32356|2,32825|1,33294|3) those notes?
  3. 00:45:013 (45013|2) - Add note, same reason as NM
  4. 02:11:263 (131263|1) - ^
  5. 00:46:184 (46184|1) - Maybe add holds to emphasize the quick riser?
Lot's of these are small suggestions, HD is also very solid.
MX
Mod
MX is literally HD with some extra notes, be a bit more creative :) There are still some unused sounds:
  1. 00:09:388 (9388|0) - The claps are uncharted, plus you could easily add some doubles on notes such as 00:10:325 (10325|2) to make it more interesting
  2. 00:25:325 (25325|3) - You're not using all of these sounds, for example here 00:24:388 (24388|3) you could add a 1/2 hold. You could make this section more interesting with hold patterns.
  3. 00:31:888 (31888|1) - Has 1/4's.
  4. 00:39:388 (39388|1) - Also has 1/4's
  5. 00:45:013 (45013|2) - Here you could do something with the vocals
  6. 00:46:184 (46184|2) - Riser hold
The Kiai is a bit more difficult, since you used all the sounds. To make it more interesting, I'd suggest adding triples and maybe more holds?
Tl;dr, don't copy HD and add extra notes. Scrap MX and start over, and try to aim for something that's unique :)
Really good mapset, too bad that MX is a bit lacking. Feel free to apply again when MX is improved! I'd love to see what you'll come up with :D
Hydria
1,229 posts
Joined April 2011
Hydria
1/2/3/4

MX
00:09:856 (9856|3,9973|2,10091|1) - move over one column to the left and possibly move 00:10:325 (10325|2) - to 4 so it fits PR better

00:11:263 (11263|1) - that note seems a lot lower in pitch compared to the one previous, maybe move it to 1

00:12:903 (12903|1,13138|0) - the second note sounds higher than the first, ctrl-G

00:14:544 (14544|0,15013|1) - same applies to these two notes

00:16:888 - I'll presume the next 4 bars are just a repeat of the previous 4 bars to same fixes apply there

00:25:091 - should be a 1/2 LN

00:27:552 (27552|3,27669|2) - ctrl-G for PR

00:31:302 - possible 3/4 LN?

-- pattern fix pt.1 (aka all these changes are together) --

move 00:41:263 (41263|0) - to 4
move 00:41:497 (41497|2) - to 1
move 00:42:083 (42083|0) - to 3
move 00:42:200 (42200|2) - to 1
move 00:42:903 (42903|3) - to 1

that should just play better in general now

-- end pattern fix pt.1 --

-- vocal mapping? pt.1 --

if the following notes are actually following the vocals, these are the correct snaps (if they're not, ignore this section):

00:45:013 (45013|3) - goes to 00:45:091 - (1/6)

00:45:247 (45247|2) - goes to 00:45:305 - (1/8)

00:45:481 (45481|1) - should be 7/12 in length

00:45:716 (45716|0) - goes to 00:45:755 - (1/12)

00:46:419 - goes to 00:46:302 - (1/4)

-- end vocal mapping? pt.1 --

00:47:122 (47122|0) - ghost note

00:47:591 (47591|1) - ^

00:49:231 (49231|3) - this LN should be moved up 1/4 to 00:49:348 -

00:49:348 (49348|2) - this should be moved down 1/4 to 00:49:231 - , you'll have to rearrange these 2 notes to fit patterns

00:49:466 (49466|0) - ghost LN

00:49:700 (49700|2) - move this to 1 and make it a 1/2 LN

00:51:341 (51341|0) - make this a 1/2 LN

00:51:458 (51458|2) - ghost note

00:51:575 (51575|3) - move up 1/4 to 00:51:692 -

00:51:575 - add another note here after moving that LN up

00:51:809 (51809|0) - ghost note

00:52:981 (52981|0) - 00:53:216 (53216|3) - I think you get the idea with these LNs

00:53:450 (53450|1) - turn into a 1/2 LN

00:56:731 -

00:59:075 - this should be like

01:01:536 (61536|1,61770|2) - these are technically ghost notes but I like them so w/e

01:04:231 - you'll have to go through the rest of this file and fix all of these LNs up, I won't link to them anymore

01:06:692 - sound but no note

01:09:270 - sound but no note, dunno if you actually wanna put a note there or not though

01:20:169 (80169|1) - move down to 01:19:934 - and extend

01:29:544 (89544|0,89778|1,90013|2,90481|2,90833|1,91184|1,91419|2,91653|1,91888|0) - PR is mirrored in this section, might just be a case of ctrl-H

01:32:356 (92356|0) - I guess move that to 4 as well if you do ^

01:33:294 (93294|0,93528|1,93763|2) - mirroring continues

I feel like 01:37:513 (97513|0,97513|3) - should be a [12] but that requires pattern manipulation with the 2 sets of notes underneath it

01:41:263 (101263|3) - move to 1 for same reason as above

01:58:138 - I feel like this section should be one continuous stream instead of it being broken even though it's quite nice as it is atm

01:58:489 (118489|0,118723|0) - this is a quite rough start into the hardest section of the map, you might need a bit of readjustment here

02:01:653 (121653|3,121770|2,121888|3,122005|2) - might wanna avoid 1h trills like this during this section as well, even though it's technically fine

02:19:583 - can place a note a 3 since there is technically a note there

02:20:052 (140052|2,140110|3) - again, these don't technically exist, but it kinda ruins the patterning so it's up to you

02:29:427 - sound but no note

02:29:778 - ^

02:30:247 - ^

02:30:481 - same LN issue here as before

02:31:770 - sound but no note, dunno if you actually wanna put a note there or not though

02:32:708 (152708|0) - ghost note

02:32:825 - LNs

02:33:997 - sound but no note

02:34:583 - ^

02:35:638 - you know you copypasted here so read through this again to apply fixes to this section as well

sounds but no notes at 02:39:622 - 02:39:739 -

02:40:208 (160208|2) - ghost note

02:40:325 - remember this LN section from before?

02:42:317 (162317|2,162552|1) - same non-existing note issue as before

02:42:786 (162786|1,163020|3) - same goes for here

02:57:669 - that 3 note chord is mean to the player

02:57:903 - 02:58:020 - sound but no note

HD
0:00:000 - until 00:24:388 - follows the same mod as MX

If you're following the main rhythm, move 00:32:122 (32122|1) - up 1/4 to 00:32:239 -

00:33:528 (33528|0) - move up 1/4 to 00:33:645 -

00:34:466 - keep moving them up 1/4

00:35:403 - ^
00:37:278 -
00:37:747 -
00:38:216 -
00:39:153 -

00:51:458 (51458|2) - ghost note

00:51:575 - same LN problems as in MX
00:52:981 -
00:56:731 -
00:59:075 -
01:04:231 -
01:07:981 -
01:11:731 -
01:14:075 -
02:30:481 -
02:34:231 -
02:37:981 -


01:01:067 (61067|2,61302|1,61536|3,61770|2) - debatable if you wanna remove these since it's an easier diff than the MX, same as 01:16:067 (76067|1,76302|2,76536|0,76770|1) - 02:42:317 (162317|3,162552|1,162786|1,163020|3) -

01:06:341 - no 1/2 LN?

01:13:606 (73606|3) - this should be split into 2 1/2 LNs instead of just being a 1/1 LN

01:20:169 (80169|1) - 1/2 earlier, same as MX

01:20:638 - until 01:35:638 - read MX recommendation

02:20:052 (140052|2) - ghost note

02:32:591 - 1/2 LN?

02:56:263 - technically this 1/6 is not allowed since its all incorrect snapping compared to the MX, but I can see why they're there.

NM - 02:56:263 (176263|3,176380|1,176497|2,176614|0,176731|3,176848|1,176966|2,177083|0,177200|3,177317|1,177434|2,177552|0) - these split rolls are a bit of a spike of difficulty for a NM, might wanna just change it into a normal roll or something similiar.

Overall: It's a good mapset, just with some minor mistakes and inconsistances that are important to address overall before ranking.
Kruzon
1,023 posts
Joined December 2013
Kruzon
m4m lul



hard
hi, mi key column format is as following 1~2~3~4

01:07:513 (67513|1) - open reference mode and follow your mx ln length
01:08:684 (68684|2,68684|0,68919|3,68919|1,69153|2) - pitch wise it felt lul, try to rearrange accordingly to pitch relevancy
also the ln is cut abruptly, should've put ln here as well 01:08:450 (68450|1) -

01:22:513 (82513|2,82981|1) - align both on same column, inherited same pitch, and perhaps move them to column 1
01:23:684 (83684|3) - move to 3
01:26:263 (86263|1) - move to 1

01:38:919 (98919|1,98919|2,99388|0,99388|2) - ctrl + g
01:40:794 (100794|0,100794|3,101028|2,101263|3,101263|1,101731|0,101731|1,102083|2,102200|3) - mx clone, try to differentiate their pattern, ie:
moving 01:41:263 (101263|3) - to 1 ?

01:42:083 (102083|3) - https://gyazo.com/66bedb6d80fbd47ff695c9fca2acdd81

so now you can make use of the stairs pattern 01:42:669 (102669|2,102669|3,103138|1,103138|2,103606|1,103606|0) - , then try to use it again for consistency. let's see.. you can use ascending version of the stairs, here 01:45:013 (105013|0,105013|1,105481|3,105481|1,105950|2) - tldr, copy the exact stair pattern, but mirror it with ctrl + h https://gyazo.com/a8cc8bc037c9ea93adfd438c943caafe

resume the ln chain, 02:30:950 (150950|3) - unnatural and play weird if cut off abruptly

02:32:825 (152825|0) - move this ln to another column.. somewhere.. don't align it the same with this 02:33:294 (153294|0) - , contradicting sound

02:38:450 (158450|2) -

02:50:169 (170169|0) - move to 3

uh, i stop here LUL

good luck with your map!
jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

Kruzon wrote:

m4m lul



hard
hi, mi key column format is as following 1~2~3~4

01:07:513 (67513|1) - open reference mode and follow your mx ln length
01:08:684 (68684|2,68684|0,68919|3,68919|1,69153|2) - pitch wise it felt lul, try to rearrange accordingly to pitch relevancy
also the ln is cut abruptly, should've put ln here as well 01:08:450 (68450|1) -

01:22:513 (82513|2,82981|1) - align both on same column, inherited same pitch, and perhaps move them to column 1
01:23:684 (83684|3) - move to 3
01:26:263 (86263|1) - move to 1

01:38:919 (98919|1,98919|2,99388|0,99388|2) - ctrl + g
01:40:794 (100794|0,100794|3,101028|2,101263|3,101263|1,101731|0,101731|1,102083|2,102200|3) - mx clone, try to differentiate their pattern, ie:
moving 01:41:263 (101263|3) - to 1 ?

01:42:083 (102083|3) - https://gyazo.com/66bedb6d80fbd47ff695c9fca2acdd81

so now you can make use of the stairs pattern 01:42:669 (102669|2,102669|3,103138|1,103138|2,103606|1,103606|0) - , then try to use it again for consistency. let's see.. you can use ascending version of the stairs, here 01:45:013 (105013|0,105013|1,105481|3,105481|1,105950|2) - tldr, copy the exact stair pattern, but mirror it with ctrl + h https://gyazo.com/a8cc8bc037c9ea93adfd438c943caafe

resume the ln chain, 02:30:950 (150950|3) - unnatural and play weird if cut off abruptly

02:32:825 (152825|0) - move this ln to another column.. somewhere.. don't align it the same with this 02:33:294 (153294|0) - , contradicting sound

02:38:450 (158450|2) -

02:50:169 (170169|0) - move to 3

uh, i stop here LUL

good luck with your map!
ALL ARE BE FIXED

Thank you for your mod :)
- Ly0572 -
1,135 posts
Joined August 2014
- Ly0572 -
hii~
m4m from your queue
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1|2|3|4

EZ
01:11:263 (71263|2,71731|3) - switch col~ more comfortable
01:41:731 (101731|0,102669|1) - ^^
01:45:013 (105013|1,105481|0) - ^^
01:45:950 (105950|1,106419|2) - ^^
02:25:794 (145794|1) - move to |4|
02:27:669 (147669|3,148138|0,148138|2,148606|1,149544|2) - ctrl + h for balance
02:48:294 (168294|1,168763|0) - switch col
02:50:638 (170638|0,170638|1) - ^^
02:52:981 (172981|0,173450|1,173919|2) - ctrl+j
02:54:856 (174856|3) - move this to |1| , then move this 02:54:388 (174388|0,174388|1) - to the right 2x

NM
00:40:325 (40325|2,40559|1) - move to the right
00:40:794 (40794|3) - move to |1|
00:41:263 (41263|0) - move to |2|
01:00:481 - can also add to |2| coz it has different sound
01:27:083 (87083|3,87434|3,87669|2) - maybe switch col. coz i feel empty in |3|
02:19:700 (139700|1,139700|3,139817|2,139934|0,140052|1,140169|3,140403|2,140638|3,140638|0) - a bit hard for this diff rearrange

both mod is more on comfortability
gl~
ChoiJisuuu
135 posts
Joined May 2013
ChoiJisuuu
สวัสดีครับ m4m from queue

[Hard]

00:27:669 (27669|2) - ลบออกครับ ให้เป็นสามพยางค์เหมือนท่อนแรกที่ทำ
00:31:419 (31419|3) - ^ (อันนี้ลองเก็บไปคิดดู มีไว้ก็โอ)
00:46:419 (46419|1,46419|0,46419|3) - ย้ายมา 00:46:302 -
01:16:888 - ลดเหลืออันเดียวก็พอครับ
01:35:638 - 01:58:138 - ตรงนี้ถ้าพอจะ re arrange ได้ก็ดีครับ ถ้าเป็น LN ได้น่าจะดี
genkicho
449 posts
Joined May 2013
genkicho
M4M (if accepted)
(if not accepted) 1 kudosu is okay (if helpful)

MX
01:00:130 (60130|3,60247|1,60364|2,60481|0,60598|2,60716|1,60833|3,60950|0,61067|1,61184|2,61302|1,61419|3,61536|2,61653|1,61770|2) - this might be better
01:01:888 - 01:16:888 make it double every white line (you missed some notes like in 01:03:763)
01:56:263 (116263|3,116263|0,116263|1,116380|2,116497|1,116731|0,116731|2,116731|3,116848|1,116966|2,117083|3,117200|2,117200|1) - this might be better
02:13:138 delete 1
02:26:263 (146263|0,146614|0) - might be better
02:28:138 until end of kiai : please check notes consistency
02:43:372 (163372|1,163489|1,163606|2,163606|0,163841|2,163958|2,164075|1,164075|3,164309|1,164427|1,164544|3,164544|0) - im bad at modding easy diffs, but (if allowed)something like this might be better
02:56:263 (176263|1,176321|0,176380|2,176438|1,176497|3,176555|2,176614|1,176673|0,176731|2,176790|3,176848|1,176907|2,176966|0,177024|1,177083|2,177141|3,177200|1,177259|0,177317|2,177376|1,177434|3,177493|2,177552|1,177610|0,177669|3,177669|2,177669|1,177903|1,178020|1,178138|2,178138|3,178138|0) - this might be better

*note : pls edit the hitsound volume at some parts
4hri
175 posts
Joined September 2016
4hri
m4m 1 2 3 4
MX
00:25:794 (25794|2) - remove a note you heard only one sound
00:29:544 (29544|0) - ^
00:32:942 - add a note to 2
00:33:411 - add a note to 4
00:33:880 - add a note to 1
00:34:348 - add a note to 3
00:34:817 - add a note to 1
00:35:286 - add a note to 3
00:36:223 - add a note to 2
00:36:692 - ^
00:37:161 - add a note to 3
00:37:630 - add a note to 1
00:38:098 - add a note to 4
00:43:138 - this section is a exiting part so this is a my advice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6586746
00:45:013 - and this part wrong sound http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6586751
00:46:263 - add a LN 3 countinue the next LN http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6586760
02:01:067 - add a note to 1
02:02:942 - ^
02:03:880 - ^
02:04:817 - add a note to 2
02:06:692 - ^
02:10:442 - add a note to 2
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
ExNeko
M4M 4K 1|2|3|4
HD
00:24:856 (24856|2,25325|2,25794|2,26263|2,26614|2) - ????、I suggest you put this 00:25:794 (25794|2) - to 1Then this 00:26:028 (26028|2) - moves to 4
00:27:669 (27669|2) - Delete、There is no sound at this point in time
00:30:247 (30247|3,30481|0) - Ctrl+H
00:49:231 (49231|2,49466|2,49934|2,50403|2) - Separate them
01:00:716 (60716|2,60833|1) - Move to 3|4
01:00:950 (60950|3) - Move to 2
01:09:739 (69739|2) - Move to 4
02:30:013 (150013|2,150364|1,150481|2,150716|1) - Ctrl+H
02:38:684 (158684|3,158684|2,158919|3,159153|2,159388|3) - This is very crowded, they are evenly distributed to four orbits
02:57:903 And 02:58:020 Add something
Mentholzzz
449 posts
Joined October 2015
Mentholzzz
SPOILER
MX
OD should change to 8.5 In my opinion.
00:09:388 (9388|0,10325|2,11263|1,12200|2,13138|0,14075|3,15013|1,15950|3,16888|3,17825|3,18763|3,19700|2,20638|1,21575|3,22513|0,23450|0) - Make it double.
00:50:638 (50638|1,54388|1,58138|1,65638|1,69388|2,73138|0) - Remove it.
02:00:247 - Try this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6597144
02:01:653 - Try this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6597156
02:04:934 - Try this pattern : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6597171
02:10:559 - Try this pattern : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6597180
02:57:903 - Add a note here.
02:58:020 - Add a note here.

HD
00:32:239 (32239|1,32708|1,33177|3,33645|0,34114|3,34583|1,35052|2,35520|2,35989|2,36458|0,36927|1,37395|2,37864|0,38333|3,38802|2,39270|1) - Move it down by 1/4 beat.
00:38:216 (38216|3,38684|2,39153|1,39622|3,40091|2,40559|1,41028|1,41497|3,41966|0,42434|3,42903|2) - Make it double (If you're accepted above.)
riunosk
1,116 posts
Joined January 2015
riunosk
my mot 4 mot
ez game
01:20:638 - sudden difficulty curve, compared to previous sections, maybe you could nerf this or buff the previous sections
02:12:669 (132669|1,133138|2) - flip for playability
02:13:606 (133606|3,134075|2,134544|1) - move 1 column to the left for pitch
02:28:138 (148138|1,148606|2) - flip for playability
normally interesting
01:36:458 (96458|1) - maybe make this LN considering you made the previous similar sounds LNs as well, ending 01:36:692 -
01:38:333 (98333|2) - ^
01:57:200 (117200|3,117200|0) - previously you mapped this kind of sound with only 1 note, either add a note for the previous sounds or remove a note to be consistent with your patterning
HD? hidden?
00:13:606 (13606|0,13723|1,13841|2) - flip these for pitch
01:47:825 (107825|3,108294|3,108763|3,109231|3,109700|3) - maybe you could reduce the focus on 4?
MaXimum hack mode!
00:32:473 - missing note?
00:38:567 - ^
00:39:973 - ^
00:40:439 - ^
00:40:911 - ^
00:41:380 - ^
00:41:848 - ^
00:42:317 - ^
00:42:786 - ^
01:03:763 - quite a bit of focus on 2 and 3, maybe rearrange?
02:07:630 - missing note?
02:08:567 - ^
02:54:388 - maybe add a note to continue pattern?
this is rather hard for a 3*...
PANDAAAAAAAA
745 posts
Joined September 2012
PANDAAAAAAAA
M4M
ผมเน้นระดับเสียง เสียงสูงอยู่ช่องขวา เสียงต่ำอยู่ช่องซ้าย
|1|2|3|4|
[MX]
00:09:388 (9388|3) - ย้ายไป 2
00:10:325 (10325|2) - ย้ายไป 4
00:10:794 (10794|3,11028|2,11263|1) - ย้ายไปซ้าย 1 ช่อง
00:11:263 (11263|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:11:497 (11497|2,11614|1) - ย้ายไปขวา 1 ช่อง
00:14:544 (14544|0) - ย้ายไป 2
00:14:778 (14778|2) - ย้ายไป 1
00:16:888 (16888|2) - ย้ายไป 1 เสียงเดียวกับ 00:16:653 (16653|0) -
00:18:763 (18763|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:18:997 (18997|1) - ย้ายไป 4
00:20:403 (20403|1,20638|0) - ctrl + j
00:20:638 (20638|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:21:106 (21106|0,21223|1,21341|2) - ctrl + h
00:21:575 (21575|1) - ย้ายไป 1
00:22:044 (22044|1,22278|2) - ctrl + j
00:22:513 (22513|1) - ย้ายไป 4
00:22:747 (22747|3,22864|2,22981|1) - ย้ายไปซ้าย 1 ช่อง
00:23:450 (23450|0) - ย้ายไป 4
หลังจากตรงนี้ไม่ต้องตามระดับเสียงก็ได้ คนละท่อนกันแล้ว
00:45:013 (45013|0,45091|1,45325|2,45481|3,45716|0,46067|2,46263|2) - ลองลบให้หมดเลย แล้วใส่ SV ไปแทน ถ้าจะใส่ SV ลองตามนี้
00:45:013 - 0.2x
00:45:481 - 0.7x
00:45:716 - 0.2x
00:46:419 - 3x
00:46:536 - 0.5x
00:46:888 - 1x
00:49:231 (49231|3,49466|0) - เสียงอะไรหว่า กีตาร์ก็ไม่ใช่
00:51:106 (51106|1,51575|3) - ^
00:52:981 (52981|0,53216|3) - ^
00:54:856 (54856|1,55325|2) - ^
00:56:731 (56731|2,56966|0) - ^
01:02:356 (62356|0,62825|2) - ^
01:04:231 (64231|0,64466|3) - ^
01:06:106 (66106|2,66575|0) - ^
01:07:981 (67981|0,68216|3) - ^
01:09:856 (69856|1,70325|3) - ^
01:11:731 (71731|1,71966|0) - ^
02:11:263 (131263|2,131497|3,131731|1,131966|0,132200|3,132434|2) - ลบออกแล้วใส่ SV แทน ลองตามนี้
02:11:321 - 0.1x
02:11:497 - 1x
02:11:555 - 0.1x
02:11:731 - 1x
02:11:790 - 0.1x
02:11:966 - 1x
02:12:024 - 0.1x
02:12:200 - 1x
02:12:259 - 0.1x
02:12:434 - 1x
02:12:493 - 0.1x
02:12:669 - 3x
02:12:786 - 0.5x
02:13:138 - 1x
jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

nowsmart wrote:

M4M
ผมเน้นระดับเสียง เสียงสูงอยู่ช่องขวา เสียงต่ำอยู่ช่องซ้าย
|1|2|3|4|
[MX]
00:09:388 (9388|3) - ย้ายไป 2
00:10:325 (10325|2) - ย้ายไป 4
00:10:794 (10794|3,11028|2,11263|1) - ย้ายไปซ้าย 1 ช่อง
00:11:263 (11263|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:11:497 (11497|2,11614|1) - ย้ายไปขวา 1 ช่อง
00:14:544 (14544|0) - ย้ายไป 2
00:14:778 (14778|2) - ย้ายไป 1
00:16:888 (16888|2) - ย้ายไป 1 เสียงเดียวกับ 00:16:653 (16653|0) -
00:18:763 (18763|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:18:997 (18997|1) - ย้ายไป 4
00:20:403 (20403|1,20638|0) - ctrl + j
00:20:638 (20638|3) - ย้ายไป 3
00:21:106 (21106|0,21223|1,21341|2) - ctrl + h
00:21:575 (21575|1) - ย้ายไป 1
00:22:044 (22044|1,22278|2) - ctrl + j
00:22:513 (22513|1) - ย้ายไป 4
00:22:747 (22747|3,22864|2,22981|1) - ย้ายไปซ้าย 1 ช่อง
00:23:450 (23450|0) - ย้ายไป 4
แก้เรียบร้อยครับ
หลังจากตรงนี้ไม่ต้องตามระดับเสียงก็ได้ คนละท่อนกันแล้ว
00:45:013 (45013|0,45091|1,45325|2,45481|3,45716|0,46067|2,46263|2) - ลองลบให้หมดเลย แล้วใส่ SV ไปแทน ถ้าจะใส่ SV ลองตามนี้
00:45:013 - 0.2x
00:45:481 - 0.7x
00:45:716 - 0.2x
00:46:419 - 3x
00:46:536 - 0.5x
00:46:888 - 1x
แก้เรียบร้อยครับ
00:49:231 (49231|3,49466|0) - เสียงอะไรหว่า กีตาร์ก็ไม่ใช่
00:51:106 (51106|1,51575|3) - ^
00:52:981 (52981|0,53216|3) - ^
00:54:856 (54856|1,55325|2) - ^
00:56:731 (56731|2,56966|0) - ^
01:02:356 (62356|0,62825|2) - ^
01:04:231 (64231|0,64466|3) - ^
01:06:106 (66106|2,66575|0) - ^
01:07:981 (67981|0,68216|3) - ^
01:09:856 (69856|1,70325|3) - ^
01:11:731 (71731|1,71966|0) - ^
เสียง Synth ครับ
02:11:263 (131263|2,131497|3,131731|1,131966|0,132200|3,132434|2) - ลบออกแล้วใส่ SV แทน ลองตามนี้
02:11:321 - 0.1x
02:11:497 - 1x
02:11:555 - 0.1x
02:11:731 - 1x
02:11:790 - 0.1x
02:11:966 - 1x
02:12:024 - 0.1x
02:12:200 - 1x
02:12:259 - 0.1x
02:12:434 - 1x
02:12:493 - 0.1x
02:12:669 - 3x
02:12:786 - 0.5x
02:13:138 - 1x
แก้เรียบร้อยครับ
ขอบคุณที่มาม็อดให้นะครับ
LinkTaylord
241 posts
Joined February 2015
LinkTaylord
Holaaa, M4M!
1~1000

Your beatmap is pretty well mapped and is a simple song, so, there's not so much to say...

EZ
00:31:888 - Here, I don't know what are you mapping here safely, maybe you're simplifying the clap sound, but I know that the clap sound in 1/1 (I'm bad at naming sounds) is louder than whatever that you're mapping. You can put a note on each beat and double right here 00:35:638 -, 00:39:388 -. It would look like what you did in 02:31:888 -.

02:57:669 - Try something like this to differentiate the strong sound at 02:57:669 - from others.

NM
At the beginning, those notes are bored, static and much easier than in HD(HD=1/4, NM=1/1). Let's intensify it making it more consistent with the melody and using the 1/2 scale pls. I recommend the basic pattern for the melody in 1/2 and 1/4 for snapping.

00:46:888 - We definitely need to buff this, recommend the same, add 1/2 notes and a few jumps.

01:36:575 (96575|3,98450|0,100325|2,102200|2,102434|1) - This type of pattern stinks, long notes that are not so long with a note in the middle, it's confusing for novice players. Delete the already marked notes.

In general, this sudden change of difficulty, from being an EZ to being a HD. Either nerf the HD or buff the EZ to make a stable NM. Remember that if you feel your spread very weak, you can boost the NM and HD and eliminate the EZ.

HD & MX
00:46:419 - This can be a very big problem in the future. Fix it up!
There's a sound in 00:46:184 -. But I ignore it completely and start on the beat.
01:20:169 - Again.
01:35:638 - This is strange. In the HD you use long notes to complicate matters and in the MX simply disappear. It should be the other way around, it is assumed that the most technical and difficult should be the MX, not the HD
02:56:263 - You simply can not do this. If the song says the burst is 1/8 is 1/8 and not where you want it, you can not "change" the song for yourself in this case. Besides that for the diff, it is something exaggerated. I highly recommend placing a small stream with a long note, like this or something like that.

Good luck with your map, mijo. :D
njoy
98 posts
Joined January 2016
njoy
Eyyy

M4M

Not much to say here about mapping, it seemed fine. Just some timings and the SV's need some work.

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |
MX
Timing stuff

Start by checking AiMod for snapping --

Offset works much better at 9396. If thats not the one for you, I still recommend adding a little bit since it seems to be hitting too early.

First SV suggestion:
45021,-500,4,1,0,50,0,0
45489,-142.857142857143,4,1,0,50,0,0
45724,-500,4,1,0,50,0,0
46075,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
46485,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,50,0,0
46778,-200,4,1,0,50,0,0
46896,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
Copy paste-
This makes it more intuitive and less clunky imho

The second drop SV was good ^_*

As for noting, only the choruses feel like they are missing stuff, which they are. Some kick's missing here for example- 00:49:708 -, add on 3 here.
You've been mapping the kicks so far on every beat so it's appropriate to keep mapping them, even if its gets denser.
00:57:208 - here is another missing kick.
01:03:302 - , 01:03:771 - --- Recheck the first chorus for these. The second one was fine. Make sure you add preferably a non-jack note to each white tick with a kick drum sound. Plenty missing in both.

01:35:646 - For this part, you can extend the long notes starting every full beat to an extra one fourth to constantly form 1/4th gaps between the long notes Like this. There are also some others like 01:35:646 (95646|0) - that can and should be extended since the sound is 3/4th's of a beat and not half.--> 01:35:646 (95646|0) - -- Check over it all and make sure there are no notes too short.-

Pretty cool song with nice patterns. Just go over the song again with care.
Illya X Ram Li
Illya X Ram Li
Hello
This your M4M

I just do Short Mod

1|2|3|4

MX
1. 00:10:794 (10794|3) add note at 4
2. 00:12:552 (12552|2,12552|3,12903|0,12903|1,13138|2,13138|1) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593961
3. 00:14:544 (14544|0) add note at 1
4. 00:14:778 (14778|0) move to 3
5. 00:18:294 (18294|3) add note at 4
6. 00:20:052 (20052|0) add note at 1
7. 00:20:403 (20403|0) move to 2
8. 00:20:638 (20638|1) move to 4
9. 00:21:106 (21106|3,21223|2,21341|1) CTRL+H
10. 00:22:044 (22044|1,22044|2,22278|0,22278|3,22513|1,22513|2,22747|3,22864|0,22981|1) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593998
11. 00:44:895 (44895|3,44895|2) remove
12. 02:19:700 (139700|0,139759|1,139817|2,139876|3,139934|0,139993|1,140052|2,140110|3) what is this ? >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594032 better ?

Don't Forget Mod my Map TRUE - Soundscape

KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN

jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
jukkaduei
HITSOUNDS UPDATED

I'm sorry for mods that I didn't give a kudos.... :(
I have a problem with this game
after this I'll mod to every map that I've request as M4M

I'm really sorry for that... :?
jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

LinkTaylord wrote:

Holaaa, M4M!
1~1000

Your beatmap is pretty well mapped and is a simple song, so, there's not so much to say...

EZ
00:31:888 - Here, I don't know what are you mapping here safely, maybe you're simplifying the clap sound, but I know that the clap sound in 1/1 (I'm bad at naming sounds) is louder than whatever that you're mapping. You can put a note on each beat and double right here 00:35:638 -, 00:39:388 -. It would look like what you did in 02:31:888 -.

02:57:669 - Try something like this to differentiate the strong sound at 02:57:669 - from others.

NM
At the beginning, those notes are bored, static and much easier than in HD(HD=1/4, NM=1/1). Let's intensify it making it more consistent with the melody and using the 1/2 scale pls. I recommend the basic pattern for the melody in 1/2 and 1/4 for snapping.

00:46:888 - We definitely need to buff this, recommend the same, add 1/2 notes and a few jumps.

01:36:575 (96575|3,98450|0,100325|2,102200|2,102434|1) - This type of pattern stinks, long notes that are not so long with a note in the middle, it's confusing for novice players. Delete the already marked notes.

In general, this sudden change of difficulty, from being an EZ to being a HD. Either nerf the HD or buff the EZ to make a stable NM. Remember that if you feel your spread very weak, you can boost the NM and HD and eliminate the EZ.

HD & MX
00:46:419 - This can be a very big problem in the future. Fix it up!
There's a sound in 00:46:184 -. But I ignore it completely and start on the beat.
01:20:169 - Again.
01:35:638 - This is strange. In the HD you use long notes to complicate matters and in the MX simply disappear. It should be the other way around, it is assumed that the most technical and difficult should be the MX, not the HD
02:56:263 - You simply can not do this. If the song says the burst is 1/8 is 1/8 and not where you want it, you can not "change" the song for yourself in this case. Besides that for the diff, it is something exaggerated. I highly recommend placing a small stream with a long note, like this or something like that.

Good luck with your map, mijo. :D
ALL FIXED
Thank you very much
But I'm really sorry that I've disappear for (very) long time and didn't give you a kudos cuz ripple.moe :(
jukkaduei
393 posts
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Topic Starter
jukkaduei

od3x wrote:

Eyyy

M4M

Not much to say here about mapping, it seemed fine. Just some timings and the SV's need some work.

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |
MX
Timing stuff

Start by checking AiMod for snapping --

Offset works much better at 9396. If thats not the one for you, I still recommend adding a little bit since it seems to be hitting too early.

First SV suggestion:
45021,-500,4,1,0,50,0,0
45489,-142.857142857143,4,1,0,50,0,0
45724,-500,4,1,0,50,0,0
46075,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
46485,-66.6666666666667,4,1,0,50,0,0
46778,-200,4,1,0,50,0,0
46896,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
Copy paste-
This makes it more intuitive and less clunky imho

The second drop SV was good ^_*

As for noting, only the choruses feel like they are missing stuff, which they are. Some kick's missing here for example- 00:49:708 -, add on 3 here.
You've been mapping the kicks so far on every beat so it's appropriate to keep mapping them, even if its gets denser.
00:57:208 - here is another missing kick.
01:03:302 - , 01:03:771 - --- Recheck the first chorus for these. The second one was fine. Make sure you add preferably a non-jack note to each white tick with a kick drum sound. Plenty missing in both.

01:35:646 - For this part, you can extend the long notes starting every full beat to an extra one fourth to constantly form 1/4th gaps between the long notes Like this. There are also some others like 01:35:646 (95646|0) - that can and should be extended since the sound is 3/4th's of a beat and not half.--> 01:35:646 (95646|0) - -- Check over it all and make sure there are no notes too short.-

Pretty cool song with nice patterns. Just go over the song again with care.
ALL FIXED
Thank you very much
But I'm really sorry that I've disappear for (very) long time and didn't give you a kudos cuz ripple.moe :(
jukkaduei
393 posts
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Topic Starter
jukkaduei

Illya X Ram Li wrote:

Hello
This your M4M

I just do Short Mod

1|2|3|4

MX
1. 00:10:794 (10794|3) add note at 4
2. 00:12:552 (12552|2,12552|3,12903|0,12903|1,13138|2,13138|1) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593961
3. 00:14:544 (14544|0) add note at 1
4. 00:14:778 (14778|0) move to 3
5. 00:18:294 (18294|3) add note at 4
6. 00:20:052 (20052|0) add note at 1
7. 00:20:403 (20403|0) move to 2
8. 00:20:638 (20638|1) move to 4
9. 00:21:106 (21106|3,21223|2,21341|1) CTRL+H
10. 00:22:044 (22044|1,22044|2,22278|0,22278|3,22513|1,22513|2,22747|3,22864|0,22981|1) >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593998
11. 00:44:895 (44895|3,44895|2) remove
12. 02:19:700 (139700|0,139759|1,139817|2,139876|3,139934|0,139993|1,140052|2,140110|3) what is this ? >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7594032 better ?

Don't Forget Mod my Map TRUE - Soundscape

KEEP LOVE ILLYASVIEL VON EINZBERN

ALL FIXED
Thank you very much
But I'm really sorry that I've disappear for (very) long time and didn't give you a kudos cuz ripple.moe :(
Litharrale
705 posts
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Litharrale
Hi!

don't forget to kudosu those other mods

1|2|3|4

I dont know what's up with your skin, it just doesnt work for me at all

80% vol is really high and it's kinda weird how it just randomly drops to 50% quickly for the first set of SVs and then never again

Some hitsound inconsistencies, for example 01:01:653 (61653|3) - on the MX has a clap but on the HD it has a whistle, the whole first section of the HD has no hitsounds etc. go through and fix them all

MX

00:09:388 (9388|0) - notes on the bars should be whistles, not claps imo

Some inconsistency in your mapping, for example you mapped this sound here 00:16:419 (16419|3) - but not the identical sound here 00:20:052 (20052|2) -

00:33:763 (33763|1) - https://i.imgur.com/7ja52v6.png stream is very left hand dominant

00:32:122 (32122|0) - bit of a difficulty spike from the lower diff as well, 1-2-1 1/2 rhythms to 1/1 jumpstreams is a fairly big gap imo, could just do simple streams for the HD

00:37:278 (37278|0) - Should remove all like this for the gap in the music or maybe use an LN

00:43:138 (43138|1) - Jumptrill to normal trill when there's no significant difference in the music feels like the wrong choice, could replace the jumptrill with a 1/4 trill like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9216176

00:46:184 (46184|2) - SVs in this section aren't snapped and play kind of weird

01:00:716 (60716|3,60950|0,61067|3,61184|1,61302|2,61419|0,61770|2) - Some of these notes are very questionable

02:17:356 (137356|1,137591|2,137708|3,137825|2,137825|0,137942|3,138001|2,138059|1,138177|2) - Is this just copy pasted from the first pattern?

02:20:052 (140052|2,140110|3) - Ghost notes


Sorry for the short mod!
jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
Topic Starter
jukkaduei

Litharrale wrote:

Hi!

don't forget to kudosu those other mods

1|2|3|4

I dont know what's up with your skin, it just doesnt work for me at all

80% vol is really high and it's kinda weird how it just randomly drops to 50% quickly for the first set of SVs and then never again

Some hitsound inconsistencies, for example 01:01:653 (61653|3) - on the MX has a clap but on the HD it has a whistle, the whole first section of the HD has no hitsounds etc. go through and fix them all ALL FIXED
MX

00:09:388 (9388|0) - notes on the bars should be whistles, not claps imo

Some inconsistency in your mapping, for example you mapped this sound here 00:16:419 (16419|3) - but not the identical sound here 00:20:052 (20052|2) -

00:33:763 (33763|1) - https://i.imgur.com/7ja52v6.png stream is very left hand dominant

00:32:122 (32122|0) - bit of a difficulty spike from the lower diff as well, 1-2-1 1/2 rhythms to 1/1 jumpstreams is a fairly big gap imo, could just do simple streams for the HD

00:37:278 (37278|0) - Should remove all like this for the gap in the music or maybe use an LN

00:43:138 (43138|1) - Jumptrill to normal trill when there's no significant difference in the music feels like the wrong choice, could replace the jumptrill with a 1/4 trill like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9216176

00:46:184 (46184|2) - SVs in this section aren't snapped and play kind of weird

ALL FIXED

01:00:716 (60716|3,60950|0,61067|3,61184|1,61302|2,61419|0,61770|2) - Some of these notes are very questionable

FIXED But I didn't delete notes that I hear the sound

02:17:356 (137356|1,137591|2,137708|3,137825|2,137825|0,137942|3,138001|2,138059|1,138177|2) - Is this just copy pasted from the first pattern?

02:20:052 (140052|2,140110|3) - Ghost notes

ALL FIXED


Sorry for the short mod!
Thank you very much for your modding ;)
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