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- 00:18:086 (7) - You could give it a +30 rotation so the HDash flows better
- 00:18:257 (1,2,3,4) - This is a relatively harder pattern than 00:19:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - so if you switched their places, having the simpler pattern first and the harder pattern after would be better for this buildup
- 00:21:666 (4) - Not sure why this is NCed, makes the previous 3-note Combo look random
- 00:25:075 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency, should be spaced like 00:23:711 (1,2) -
- 00:38:541 (6,1) - Should be an HDash to be consistent with 00:27:120 (2,1) -
- 00:45:189 (2,1) - You could make this more lenient, feels like a memory jump to me cause of the sudden pause. Personally didnt expect it why playing, so pointing it out just to be safe
- 00:53:371 (4,1) - Should be a Hdash to be consistent with 00:50:814 (5,1) - cause of the strong vocal
- 01:07:859 (3,4) - 01:08:541 (6,1) - One of these or both of these should have been HDash to account for the fact you expressed the same jumpy vocal before with huge spacing here 01:07:177 (7,1) - and also the following HDash on the same vocal here 01:09:905 (6,1) -
- 01:11:098 (5,6,1) - Underwhelming jump that should have been a HDash as well for consistency. Also its the only jump that doesnt have a sharp movement, but a continuous string of circles that doesnt offer much emphasis ( meaning 01:11:098 (5,6) - , while 01:10:416 (2,3,4) - is a sharp jump)
- 01:17:575 (1,2) - You should space them more, kinda like you did with 00:55:757 (1,2) - for example
- 01:20:302 (3,4,5,1) - Hdash density suddenly spikes here, even though more chances arose before this on downbeats like 01:19:450 (6,1). Seems like an inconsistent choice
- 01:37:007 (7,8) - Shouldnt the both of them be HDash, i feel like it will help with flow
- 01:45:870 (2,3) - Vocal pretty strong here, would expect a HDash since you regularly place hypers on vocals
- 01:51:325 (2,3) - Should be hyperdash to be consistent with 01:52:689 (2,3) -
- 01:54:052 (2,3) - Similar point here^
- 01:55:927 (4,5,6) - Kinda offputing that this isnt a 1/4 HDash chain, when all of this section is filled with HDash
- 01:57:632 (6,1) - Could be spaced more. might be overdashable, cause the sound is pretty strong yet the spacing doesnt express that
- 01:58:143 (2,3) - You could try a Hdash here so you can have a 2/1 Hdash structure thats better fitting for the songs intensity
- 02:04:279 (5,6) - Ehh inconsistent HDashing here i would expect both to be hdashes like here 02:05:643 (5,6) -
- 02:12:291 (2,3,4) - Could be spaced more so they are HDashes and the movement is better reflected. Something like this 00:21:836 (5,6,7) - maybe?
- 02:42:120 (3,4,5) - Way more strainful than other 5 notes streams for the drums, I personally wouldnt go for it cause it might be sudden
- 02:55:757 (1,1) - I dont really understand these NCs and their purpose, the wont be any object clutter and this is the STD so the SV is differentiated, on in the end, you are better off not having them
- Second Kiai is really clean actually, nothing that can directly improve it from my perspective
- 03:21:325 (2,3) - Hdash here for consistency
- 03:25:586 (3,4) - HDash here would work nicely as well
- 04:12:802 (3,4) - Pretty sure this is not intended, HDash would be way better here
- 04:16:552 (3,4) - Anticlimactic movement here. It's supposed to be a buildup but even though 04:16:211 (1,2) - is fully horizontal and then 04:16:552 (3,4) - is fully vertical, killing the movement built up. I Would expect more movement here
- 04:30:018 (5,6) - Could be made more lenient, you rarely used antiflow in these patterns so this might be too sudden
- 04:35:643 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - should be spaced more to be consistent with 03:15:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 01:48:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
- Rest pretty clean
Good Luck~
Arthas wrote:
Benny the BN asked me to do a CtB mod
Stop exposing meNokashi wrote:
hello there~! Sent by Benny~ the BN
00:21:666 (4) - It's the new section with synth bass sound not consistency
00:25:075 (1,2) - ??? What do you mean? HDash consistency on big white tick for here
01:37:007 (7,8) - I think its intensity of synth sound doesn't seem better with HDash
01:45:870 (2,3) - Focused more on instruments, and it will kill its difference of HDash on 01:46:893 (1,2) - with its finish sound
01:51:325 (2,3) - This part wasn't made by consistency, it was mapped with focusing on pure sound intensity. So it doesn't need HDash here at all
01:54:052 (2,3) - ^
01:55:927 (4,5,6) - similar reason as above, it doesn't seem good with HDash
01:58:143 (2,3) - I cannot make anything good without killing the flow to the next section, also I think it's not enough to have HDash there
02:04:279 (5,6) - Same reason as 01:51:325 (2,3)
02:42:120 (3,4,5) - It doesn't seem sudden cuz this pattern is more like a general nowadays, if not players should be adapted at this usage not to be 'sudden'. It's more like a difference of a point of view with each others.
02:55:757 (1,1) - Difference of usage of instruments, tense change, intro of kiai, and not to overflow the platter. These are the reason.
03:21:325 (2,3) - Same as 01:51:325 (2,3)
03:25:586 (3,4) - Same as 01:58:143 (2,3)
Rest of them were fixed, thank you!
http://puu.sh/vIJUB/0e560677a6.zip
00:25:075 (1,2) - ??? What do you mean? HDash consistency on big white tick for here
01:37:007 (7,8) - I think its intensity of synth sound doesn't seem better with HDash
01:45:870 (2,3) - Focused more on instruments, and it will kill its difference of HDash on 01:46:893 (1,2) - with its finish sound
01:51:325 (2,3) - This part wasn't made by consistency, it was mapped with focusing on pure sound intensity. So it doesn't need HDash here at all
01:54:052 (2,3) - ^
01:55:927 (4,5,6) - similar reason as above, it doesn't seem good with HDash
01:58:143 (2,3) - I cannot make anything good without killing the flow to the next section, also I think it's not enough to have HDash there
02:04:279 (5,6) - Same reason as 01:51:325 (2,3)
02:42:120 (3,4,5) - It doesn't seem sudden cuz this pattern is more like a general nowadays, if not players should be adapted at this usage not to be 'sudden'. It's more like a difference of a point of view with each others.
02:55:757 (1,1) - Difference of usage of instruments, tense change, intro of kiai, and not to overflow the platter. These are the reason.
03:21:325 (2,3) - Same as 01:51:325 (2,3)
03:25:586 (3,4) - Same as 01:58:143 (2,3)
Rest of them were fixed, thank you!
http://puu.sh/vIJUB/0e560677a6.zip
Topic Starter
done 
when i can see this ranked
ayyy Benny the BN with a recheck, let's revive this
Crystal's Captivation
i told you to go over the hitsounds baka ): call me back
no kds
- 00:17:574 (5,6) - unfitting hyperdash and inconsistent with the rest of this section
- 00:26:439 (1,2) - 00:35:814 (6,1) - i think these jumps should be hypers since all other downbeats have hypers in this section
- 00:28:825 (1) - remove nc
- 00:45:189 (2) - clap
- 01:01:211 (3) - drum sampleset
- 01:25:416 (1) - idk what u wanna use here, but maybe auto sampleset with finisher
- 01:29:166 (1) - finisher
- 01:31:552 (6) - clap
- 01:46:552 (4) - clap
- 02:17:234 (2) - clap
- 02:22:007 (4,1) - hyper since you've kept hypers on every 2nd downbeat so far
- 02:22:689 (2,1) - imo unfitting hyper again, similar to 00:17:574 (5,6) -
- 02:26:098 (4,1) - hyper for vocal resetting
- 02:28:484 (3,4) - again unfitting hyperdash, inconsistent
- 02:29:848 (3) - 02:30:530 (1) - 02:31:211 (3) - finisher
- 02:34:620 - 02:50:984 - the 1/4's in this section is inconsistent, sometimes you have a 5plet starting on red tick, other times it starts on a white tick and one time you have a 7plet; 02:44:677 (3,4,5,6) - I'd fix so either all start on the same tick or make all 7plets
- 02:51:325 (2) - 02:52:007 (2) - nc these for consistency here 01:23:711 (1,1,1,1) -
- 02:53:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounds is inconsistent with 01:26:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
- 03:02:234 (2) - clap
- 03:34:620 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - all these objects aren't hitsounded
- 03:58:825 (6) - clap
- 04:58:484 (3) - drum sampleset
i told you to go over the hitsounds baka ): call me back
no kds
02:22:689 (2,1) - This one is introducing the drum kick and bass so it's a bit special
02:34:620 - 02:50:984 - From 02:34:620 (1) until 02:39:734 (6) - is consistent, and I think the part after 02:40:075 (1) - is different because the consistency of vocal changed into new style so I'd make it reversal usage of rhythm for here. But fixed the 7let on 02:44:677 (3,4,5,6)
Rest were fixed and added, and here are the fixes in my own :
02:27:802 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed this to curved 1/2 pattern
02:31:211 (3,4) - Moved to the end of the right side to keep symmetric
02:38:200 (4,5) - Fixed the flow into straightly
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can hear bass sound on here but not 01:26:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so it's kinda different X)
03:37:348 (1,2,3,4) - Larger scale
And some other HS overhaul
Thank you!!
http://puu.sh/wdsCv/1347084a76.zip
02:34:620 - 02:50:984 - From 02:34:620 (1) until 02:39:734 (6) - is consistent, and I think the part after 02:40:075 (1) - is different because the consistency of vocal changed into new style so I'd make it reversal usage of rhythm for here. But fixed the 7let on 02:44:677 (3,4,5,6)
Rest were fixed and added, and here are the fixes in my own :
02:27:802 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed this to curved 1/2 pattern
02:31:211 (3,4) - Moved to the end of the right side to keep symmetric
02:38:200 (4,5) - Fixed the flow into straightly
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can hear bass sound on here but not 01:26:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so it's kinda different X)
03:37:348 (1,2,3,4) - Larger scale
And some other HS overhaul
Thank you!!
http://puu.sh/wdsCv/1347084a76.zip
Topic Starter
updated!
Benny is love, Benny is bubbleBenny- wrote:
let's go
before qualify this, please update with this one since I've found a consistency error on rhythm usage :
03:12:461 (5,6) - 04:32:916 (5,6) -
Now they were fixed as the usage of 01:45:189 (5,6) .
http://puu.sh/wecGC/f00e1bc496.zip
03:12:461 (5,6) - 04:32:916 (5,6) -
Now they were fixed as the usage of 01:45:189 (5,6) .
http://puu.sh/wecGC/f00e1bc496.zip
05:23:370 (1) - only unbuffered 1/8 slider in the whole map
should be avoided with the guideline changes and you did it the more player friendly way all the time, just remove a repeat
standard diff still looks fine to me and ctb change is pretty minor, so feel free to poke me for qualify after updating
should be avoided with the guideline changes and you did it the more player friendly way all the time, just remove a repeat
standard diff still looks fine to me and ctb change is pretty minor, so feel free to poke me for qualify after updating
Oops I did wrong on that part either, fixed with correct snapping http://puu.sh/wertS/9bcbd79a7b.zipLasse wrote:
05:23:370 (1) - only unbuffered 1/8 slider in the whole map
should be avoided with the guideline changes and you did it the more player friendly way all the time, just remove a repeat
standard diff still looks fine to me and ctb change is pretty minor, so feel free to poke me for qualify after updating
rank chino
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Topic Starter
thank you Benny and Lasse!!
24 hours!!
chino can wait 4 more hours
:joy: :gun:
Topic Starter
i literally love that drama!!Yuii- wrote:
24 hours!!
edit: fixed what Lasse mentioned already
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Please wait 4 more hours before qualify it again.
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Please wait 4 more hours before qualify it again.
Reverted to Bubble
Topic Starter
i completely forgot that rule sorry asdf
don't be hurry lul
lo
Now it will wait for a month kek
osu!catch
Topic Starter
3rd try lets go
thanks again!
thanks again!
omedetoooooooo gozaimasu!!
wat
when you forget to say your set isn't goin for lovedWeber wrote:
wat
Topic Starter
yea also big thanks to Kagetsu for shooting so many starsWeber wrote:
wat
you deserve it!!!