sorry for late. i didnt notice that he finished so yeah
osu!catch:
AR9.3~4가 적당한거같아요 지금은 너무 빠르네요
00:01:151 (1,2,3,4) - 하고 00:01:492 (1) - 를 강조할려면
http://puu.sh/q4yf1/cfe7bd19a4.jpg ->
http://puu.sh/q4yfw/6abd5f180e.jpg 이런식의 흐름이 되어야 강조를 주기 쉽고 받을때 조금 더 흥미를 가지게 할수있을듯
00:00:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -224,160,470,5,0,3:0:0:0:
80,179,640,2,0,L|96:227,1,47.9999985351563,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
330,202,810,1,0,3:0:0:0:
432,179,981,2,0,L|416:227,1,47.9999985351563,0|2,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
176,256,1151,5,2,3:2:0:0:
208,328,1237,1,0,3:0:0:0:
287,344,1322,1,2,3:2:0:0:
374,328,1408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,1492,6,0,P|41:199|107:178,1,143.999995605469,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:10:015 (1) - 리버스를 없애고 00:10:356 - 여기에 복붙한다음 x415정도에 하나 넣어두면 조금 움직임이 생겨서 계속 조금씩 조금씩 움직이던 그 흐름이 끊기지 않는것같네요. 리버스가 있으니까 머ㅜㄴ가 여기서 중심잡기를 해야하나 움직여야하나 애매한
00:12:060 (1,2,3,4) - 하고 00:12:572 (4,1) - 이거 받기가 조금 힘든감이 있는데 00:12:060 (1,2,3) - 에서 13 거리를 조금 줄여보시는것도 혹은 00:12:572 (4) - 를 줄이거나
00:20:924 (1,2) - 두개를 중심으로 1그리드만 옮겨주시는건 어떤가요 Tiny기준
00:21:606 (1,2) - 애매하게 이 흐름이 잘 받아지지가 않는데
http://puu.sh/q4yzj/1e3816b691.jpg 이렇게 바꾸고 나니 잘 받아지더군요 한번 try해보시는건..?
00:23:310 (1) - 이걸 x316정도로 오른쪽으로 옮기시는것도 좋을것같네요 지금 위치는 그 전의 7을 받고나서 뭔가 애매한 위치라고해야하나 조금 떨어뜨리는게 괜찮아보입니다
00:23:310 (1,1,2,3) - 그리고 이 흐름도 뭔가 받기가 힘든면이 없지않아 있는데 00:23:651 (1,2) - 를 조금 세운다음 00:23:651 (1,2,3) - 거리를 각각 좁혀 조금 더 수월하게 받을수 있게 만드시는것도 좋을것같네요. 대충 이런느낌?
http://puu.sh/q4yHH/c3715ae79f.jpg 바꾸시게된다면 00:24:674 (4) - 도 약간 왼쪽으로 옮기셔야할것같네요
01:06:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - x4정도 오른쪽으로?
02:00:470 (1) - 이거 너무 길게 뻗어져있어서 02:00:810 (2,3) - 받기가 너무 힘든데 조금
http://puu.sh/q4z0L/277fe1b06e.jpg 이정도만 기울여보시는건 어떤가용
02:01:407 (5) - 이건 반대로 x208 정도에 옮겨서 02:01:237 - 여기에 하이퍼가 달리는게 더 받기가 좋아보입니다
02:12:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 점점 가운데가아닌 점점 멀어지는 느낌으로 하는게 더 좋을것같습니다
http://puu.sh/q4z53/4b1df29ba7.jpg 이런느낌?
02:57:231 - 여기하고 02:57:572 - 여기 각각 강조가 있었다면 좋았을텐데 라는 생각
03:39:333 (1,2) - 이걸 받을생각에 미처 03:40:015 (1) - 를 받을 준비를 못한나머지 조금 당황스러운 03:40:015 (1) - 를 x12정도 오른쪽으로 조금만 이동시켜주는건 어떤가여
03:50:754 (4) - 를 03:50:327 (2) - 꼬리에 스택? 지금은 뭔가 칼타이밍같네요
03:56:975 (3) - 이거 받을때 뭔가 어색하고 빈 느낌이 좀 있는데 노트하나하고 1/2 슬라로 나누어주시는것도 좋을것같아요
04:20:072 (3,4,5,6) - 이거 뭔가 오른쪽으로 갔다가 왼쪽으로 돌아오는게 아쉬운데 차라리 이런 흐름을 만드시는건 어떤가요?
http://puu.sh/q4zxZ/0ce31ae884.jpg 04:20:924 (1,2,3,4) - 이거 위치도 약간 손봐서 04:20:753 (6,1) - 에 하이퍼 안생기게하구
04:19:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -32,128,259560,5,0,3:0:0:0:
192,128,259731,2,0,L|208:176,2,47.9999985351563,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,112,260072,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,124,260242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,148,260413,2,0,L|488:196,2,47.9999985351563,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,168,260753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,176,260924,6,0,L|204:176,1,143.999995605469,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,176,261265,2,0,L|236:176,1,95.9999970703126,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,180,261606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,261776,2,0,L|112:256,1,95.9999970703126,2|10,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,224,262117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
05:04:560 (1) - 도 00:10:015 (1) - 와 동일
05:23:310 (1) - 이렇게 끝나는거 뭔가 어색한데 조금 세부적으로 나누시거나 05:23:566 - 또는 05:23:609 - 에 하이퍼넣어서 05:23:651 - 이부분을 강조하고 끝내는 방법도 나쁘지는 않을것같네요
ar이 너무 높지만 않았다면 엄청 좋았을것같은데 꼭 고려해보시길 바랍니다. 오랜만에 캐치맵을 칝님의 맵을 봐서그런지 스트림은 역시 여전히 잘 짜시고 흐름 좋게 만드시네요 나중에 시간이 된다면 배우러가겠습니다 잘만드셨어요!
momoko:
00:00:470 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2) - ctrl H + J
all stuffs are really good tho!
all mods are just opinion so u can reject all of my shit things! no need to fix
good luck xd