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Shiro

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Shiro 2011-03-10T12:27:33+00:00

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
I'm ok with the diff names, but please explain to me what sense they make with the song/source. :/
Having monochrome backgrounds would fit the map better, don't you think ? :p
The stack leniency is not the same for all diffs... why ?
The spinner's center isn't very apparent - that can be a problem because many people (including me) spin around the center and need that center to be clearly visible to spin correctly.

Phase I
This is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset in my opinion.
00:19:273 (1) - The sound of this spinner stops suddenly - either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.
00:31:534 (1) - Do not silence beats like this. If you have a beat you need to silenced, just remove it. In this case, you should use a single circle instead of a slider.

Phase II
~~Why does this diff - Normal - have a higher slider velocity than all the others ?...~~ This is an Insane diff.
Having such a low OD for such a high AR makes no sense whatsoever. Raise the OD...
00:01:012 (2) - This slider is hidden by the hitburst.
00:07:795 (6) - Don't silence beats like that. Although I understand why you used a slider here.
00:19:012 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent. Either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.
00:46:143 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - I don't think this new combo spam is needed.
01:23:969 (1) - Confusing slowdown.
01:28:143 (1) - Far from the center of the screen so soon after that short spinner.

Phase III
This is an Insane diff.
00:19:078 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent. Either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.
01:45:883 (1,2) - Confusing slowdown.
02:06:752 (4) - Why a slowdown here ?...

Phase IV
This is an Insane as well.
00:29:186 (3) - Why does this have a whistle sliderslide ?
02:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 anti-jump is extremely confusing.

This map has three Insane diffs, which is unrankable. And all three of them have unnecessarily high spacing, and lots of added beats and jumps that don't fit the song at all. The very irregular spacing on them makes them hard to read, and makes the flow bad.

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-10T14:27:07+00:00

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General
I'm ok with the diff names, but please explain to me what sense they make with the song/source. :/
Having monochrome backgrounds would fit the map better, don't you think ? :p

oh this song is from the anime "star driver", and there's 4 "phase" in the plot of the anime

The stack leniency is not the same for all diffs... why ?
in order to fix some ugly stacks in each diff..I'm not sure if this is unrankable now
The spinner's center isn't very apparent - that can be a problem because many people (including me) spin around the center and need that center to be clearly visible to spin correctly.
sorry my bad...I think it's fixed now

Phase I
This is too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset in my opinion.I think it's OK for EASY, since I have asked some noob players to text it, like lzq6152vicky(http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=profile&u=452514) and he can DT+HR FCed it...I think it's much more easier to FC this without any mods.
00:19:273 (1) - The sound of this spinner stops suddenly - either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.sorry but I do this in order to make an "burst effect" in hitsound to fit the suddenly drumbeat in background music at 00:21:361
00:31:534 (1) - Do not silence beats like this. If you have a beat you need to silenced, just remove it. In this case, you should use a single circle instead of a slider.sorry but it's not slienced. It just has a lower volume for 2 ticks

Phase III
This is an Insane diff.I think it's a Hard...but anyway it can be an easy Insane too;_;
00:19:078 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent. Either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.sorry but same as easy ;_;
01:45:883 (1,2) - Confusing slowdown.since the slowdown have already started at 01:44:839(smaller spacing and), then 01:45:361(smaller custom bpm: 1.0x<1.25x), then 01:45:883(0.75x<1.0x) at last, I think it's OK with the lower background music.
02:06:752 (4) - Why a slowdown here ?...this slowdown is for 02:07:013~02:07:535...OK maybe I sould not start the slider at 02:06:752, so changed.

Phase IV
This is an Insane as well.yeah this is a standard Insane imo too.

00:29:186 (3) - Why does this have a whistle sliderslide ?for the trill sound in background

02:32:317 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/3 anti-jump is extremely confusing.OK fixed~

SPOILER

[quote=“qinche”]fyi, i used 1.80 SV just becuz i like it, Phase III and Phase IV used 1.6 but with mostly 1.0* and even 1.25* (in III) mine mainly used 0.75*, 0.55*, it is actually much slower than III and IV for most of the part, and i would say no to any mod on decreasing SV.
for new combos, no, they r fine, 00:46:143 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - new combos everywhere due to tiny spacing with 1/2, without new combos i dont think anyone will catch it correctly.
diff spread is ok. althou we dont have a suitable normal, the diff is 1m, 4m, 7m, and 10m (obj numbers are 200, 350, 450, 500), i believe i did well enough to adjust the diff spread. ITS A HARD NOT INSANE. so please dont stress me on changing difficulty [stress][/quote]

wanhyrzh wrote:
Oh you can notice the sudtom SV changing in II is 0.55,0.75,1 but in III is 0.75,1,1.25 and in IV is 0.75,1,1.8

00:01:012 (2) - This slider is hidden by the hitburst. ok fixed
00:07:795 (6) - Don't silence beats like that. Although I understand why you used a slider here. then i think its negociated
00:19:012 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent. Either silence it from the beginning, either make a decrescendo.exactly what i want
01:23:969 (1) - Confusing slowdown.i dont think so, the vocal slows down
01:28:143 (1) - Far from the center of the screen so soon after that short spinner.so i can put the notes as a stream

thank you Odaril(talked in-game)

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2011-03-13T16:35:03+00:00

General
Great use of hitsounds and volume.
Combo colors are similar to each other. (1 and 2 looks very similar with the skin)
A Normal would be nice.

Phase I
02:51:622 (1) - It would really be great if you could just make the slider longer instead of having it repeat.

Phase II
00:13:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not too sure about the 0.5x spacing here.
00:23:337 (x) - Why is there a break here when in the easier diff there isn't? IMO map this part.
00:46:144 (1,1) - IMO just stack them. Looks confusing. Also remove new combo the second note.
00:48:231 (1,1) - ^
00:49:274 (1,1) - ^
01:40:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO slowdowns like this are tough to read as they start of with notes. Starting off with sliders IMO would be better. Like 01:23:970 (1,2,3)

Phase III
00:31:796 (x) - IMO map this part. In [Phase I] this part was mapped.
02:28:665 (1) - Sudden slowdown IMO.

Phase IV
00:14:578 (4,5,1) - IMO just spread them out
00:22:405 (3) - What's with the sudden speed-up >.>
02:32:491 (2) - IDK about this note. It's stacked on the slider implying that it's spaced the same way in the timeline.
02:42:231 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest spreading it out, but I guess it's readable enough.

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-14T01:56:34+00:00

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NoHItter wrote:
General
Great use of hitsounds and volume. thank you
Combo colors are similar to each other. (1 and 2 looks very similar with the skin)sry but I think it's fine~
A Normal would be nice.OK I think I would have one later ;_;

Phase I
02:51:622 (1) - It would really be great if you could just make the slider longer instead of having it repeat.OK~

Phase IIqinche has checked all and done the fixxing
00:13:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not too sure about the 0.5x spacing here.
00:23:337 (x) - Why is there a break here when in the easier diff there isn't? IMO map this part.
00:46:144 (1,1) - IMO just stack them. Looks confusing. Also remove new combo the second note.
00:48:231 (1,1) - ^
00:49:274 (1,1) - ^
01:40:665 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO slowdowns like this are tough to read as they start of with notes. Starting off with sliders IMO would be better. Like 01:23:970 (1,2,3)

Phase III
00:31:796 (x) - IMO map this part. In [Phase I] this part was mapped.OK.
02:28:665 (1) - Sudden slowdown IMO.fot the vocal "gin---ga".

Phase IV
00:14:578 (4,5,1) - IMO just spread them outsry but no changed, for the smaller spacing will make palyers notice the following slower slider imo
00:22:405 (3) - What's with the sudden speed-up >.>for the great drum at 00:22:405
02:32:491 (2) - IDK about this note. It's stacked on the slider implying that it's spaced the same way in the timeline.OK stacked with the following slider.
02:42:231 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest spreading it out, but I guess it's readable enough.OK spacing a little larger.

thank you very much!

kuyukiP

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Joined May 2009

kuyukiP 2011-03-14T01:59:56+00:00

beautiful, simply beautiful. <3

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2011-03-14T12:15:00+00:00

做完啦~

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Download: Tomatsu Haruka - Monochrome (wanhyrzh) [Phase].osu

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开头还有结尾那两段太懒了没做

如果需要的话我会补上的~

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-14T15:36:35+00:00

kuyukiP wrote:
beautiful, simply beautiful. <3

glad to here that, thanks~

impossiblexu wrote:
做完啦~

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[attachment=0:1baac]Tomatsu Haruka - Monochrome (wanhyrzh) [Phase].osu[/attachment:1baac]

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开头还有结尾那两段太懒了没做如果需要的话我会补上的~

许哥神速度...谢谢！
第一个break可能没问题，最后一段可能要补……嘛等人挑了再说？

JauiPlaY

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Joined April 2010

JauiPlaY 2011-03-15T15:08:17+00:00

~~只mod前兩個難度?~~嗯……一些建議:

[General]
nice skin!

[Phase I]
倒是沒什麼大問題啦,不過怎麼前后間距貌似不太一樣的感覺...比如:
00:42:752(1,2), 02:16:144(3,4,1) 和02:27:100(1,2,3), 02:43:796(1,2,3,4)
感覺這樣對比起來差別蠻大的...不妨修改一下?
~~此外不map到最后大丈夫嗎?~~

[Phase II]
awesome.

[Phase III]
00:56:838(8) - new combo
01:01:012(7) - ^
01:21:882(6) - ^
01:26:056(3) - 在01:26:448結束
01:30:230(7) - new combo
02:17:448(7) - ^
02:20:317(7) - ^
02:28:664(6) - ^
02:37:012(7) - ^

[Phase IV]
00:09:883(3) - 弄成00:11:969(3,4)那樣不是很好嗎……

[Phase V]
00:07:795(5) - 這個slider的末尾考慮降音量?
00:17:186(1) - 中間的slidertick考慮消音?
00:30:751(6) - 考慮到下一個clap在9秒以后,去掉這個clap?或者在00:34:664(3)的末尾加上clap...我覺得后者好一些
01:13:534(7) - new combo

加油!
so
star~
~~啊已經給過星了~~

Last edited by JauiPlaY 2011-03-16T03:11:10+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bessy

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Joined September 2009

Bessy 2011-03-15T16:35:07+00:00

神前晓

只是建议：
[Phase I]
01:03:100~01:10:926 这里可以加点线逐渐增大音量，同样后面那段也是
01:11:448 - 这里的音量和02:18:231不一致,请统一。个人觉得后者音量更合适，或者还可以加半格
01:44:839 - 音量减少半格?
02:51:622 - ^
01:45:883(1) end加clap?
请把后面补完，和其他diff尽量一致
[Phase II]
Nice.

Dotsu

996 posts

Joined March 2009

Dotsu 2011-03-16T04:40:41+00:00

JauiPlaY wrote:
[Phase I]
倒是沒什麼大問題啦,不過怎麼前后間距貌似不太一樣的感覺...比如:
00:42:752(1,2), 02:16:144(3,4,1) 和02:27:100(1,2,3), 02:43:796(1,2,3,4)
感覺這樣對比起來差別蠻大的...不妨修改一下?~~视觉误差~~
~~此外不map到最后大丈夫嗎?~~好吧

Gabriela Robin wrote:
[Phase I]
01:03:100~01:10:926 这里可以加点线逐渐增大音量，同样后面那段也是这段的音量和Kiai Time的差别不大加了也听不大出来的
01:11:448 - 这里的音量和02:18:231不一致,请统一。个人觉得后者音量更合适，或者还可以加半格严重失误啊已经统一并降了半格音量
01:44:839 - 音量减少半格?我想音量改变还是不要太明显了吧
02:51:622 - ^
01:45:883(1) end加clap?加了
请把后面补完，和其他diff尽量一致OK

Download: Tomatsu Haruka - Monochrome (wanhyrzh) [Phase I].osu

wanhyrzh

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Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-16T05:30:10+00:00

谢谢GR的mod，谢谢许哥神速修复lol

SPOILER

JauiPlaY wrote:
~~只mod前兩個難度?~~嗯……一些建議:

[Phase IV]
00:09:883(3) - 弄成00:11:969(3,4)那樣不是很好嗎…… 这里有一个考虑，就是这里的音是negai-i，最后一个i音和前面一个i音分界不明显，所以带过了。而00:11:969的音是iru-ne，ru和ne的分界很明显，而且ne的音也有所强调，所以就特别强调了。

[Phase V]
00:07:795(5) - 這個slider的末尾考慮降音量?OK
00:17:186(1) - 中間的slidertick考慮消音?因为消了sliderslide，所以不能消slidertick
00:30:751(6) - 考慮到下一個clap在9秒以后,去掉這個clap?或者在00:34:664(3)的末尾加上clap...我覺得后者好一些保持原样？
01:13:534(7) - new comboOK
加油!
so
star~
~~啊已經給過星了~~

谢啦

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2011-03-16T08:26:23+00:00

Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod

[Phase I]

00:18:752 (2) - Put this note under the slider?
03:06:231 (2) - New combo?

[Phase II]

Personally,there are some sliders that i don't like,for example 00:06:752 (5) or 00:28:144 (4),but you don't need to fix them.

[Phase III]

00:56:838 (8) - New combo?
01:01:012 (7) - ^
02:04:404 (6) - Put the central waypoint 2 grids left
02:20:056 (6) - New combo?
02:24:230 (5) - ^
02:28:664 (6) - ^

[Phase IV]

Nothing to say here.

[Phase V]

Great!

Very good map,star!

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-17T11:45:47+00:00

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-kevincela- wrote:
Sorry for the delay,but here's my mod don't care, thanks~

[Phase I]

00:18:752 (2) - Put this note under the slider?sry but no
03:06:231 (2) - New combo?k.

[Phase II]

Personally,there are some sliders that i don't like,for example 00:06:752 (5) or 00:28:144 (4),but you don't need to fix them.do some fixxing

[Phase III]

00:56:838 (8) - New combo?
01:01:012 (7) - ^
02:04:404 (6) - Put the central waypoint 2 grids leftk.
02:20:056 (6) - New combo?
02:24:230 (5) - ^
02:28:664 (6) - ^

[Phase IV]

Nothing to say here.

[Phase V]

Great!

Very good map,star!

thank ypu~

Snowy Dream

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Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2011-03-18T23:57:09+00:00

[Phase IV]
00:33:752 (6,1) - 重叠？
02:17:969 (1) - delete newcombo.

[Phase V]
00:22:795 (4) - 为什么要静音>.>
00:25:534 (1) - spacing?
00:59:838 (3) - 既然前面都是分开的这里也分开。
01:21:230 (7) - ^
01:37:925 (7) - ^
02:10:404 (4) - ^
02:19:795 (6) - ^
02:30:099 (5) - ^
(个人感觉分开好看点>.>)
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没什么问题了。。
Star~☆

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-19T02:27:24+00:00

SPOILER

Snowy Dream wrote:
[Phase IV]
00:33:752 (6,1) - 重叠？ k.
02:17:969 (1) - delete newcombo.sry but no...

[Phase V]
00:22:795 (4) - 为什么要静音>.>没有完全静音……
00:25:534 (1) - spacing?还好...
00:59:838 (3) - 既然前面都是分开的这里也分开。嘛，我觉得不分也可以...
01:21:230 (7) - ^
01:37:925 (7) - ^
02:10:404 (4) - ^
02:19:795 (6) - ^
02:30:099 (5) - ^
(个人感觉分开好看点>.>)
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没什么问题了。。
Star~☆

3Q~

_Kiva

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Joined January 2010

_Kiva 2011-03-19T06:52:45+00:00

这图酷毙了。。

ouranhshc

2,338 posts

Joined July 2009

ouranhshc 2011-03-24T00:19:27+00:00

[Phase I]
suggestion03:09:361 (1) - maybe fade this out like on [Phase II]?

[Phase II]
suggestion00:48:752 (4) - maybe move this from out under(3) or adjust (3) so that (4) isn't under it
suggestion00:56:839 (3) - maybe like this:

[Phase IV]
nazi01:25:534 (4) - 1 grid left
suggestion02:04:404 (3,4,5) - center this between (1,2)?
02:28:665 (1) - this .75x slider should be a 1x slider IMO.

[Phase V]
00:14:838 (5,1) - is 1 grid lower than (4) on purpose?

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-24T05:03:16+00:00

SPOILER

ouranhshc wrote:
[Phase I]
suggestion03:09:361 (1) - maybe fade this out like on [Phase II]? K.

[Phase II]
suggestion00:48:752 (4) - maybe move this from out under(3) or adjust (3) so that (4) isn't under itK.
suggestion00:56:839 (3) - maybe like this:K.

[Phase IV]
nazi01:25:534 (4) - 1 grid leftlol good eyes you have!
suggestion02:04:404 (3,4,5) - center this between (1,2)?^
02:28:665 (1) - this .75x slider should be a 1x slider IMO.K.

[Phase V]
00:14:838 (5,1) - is 1 grid lower than (4) on purpose?I think so....

thank you ouran~

Kite

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2009

Kite 2011-03-25T18:17:23+00:00

Hi! Sorry for the late check....

I've had a look at the whole mapset and couldn't find anything wrong with it!
It's mapped greatly and the difficulty spread is just awesome.

The only thing that I suggest is +4~6 on offset because it feels a bit early for me.

Really great job on this mapset!!! I love it :3

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-26T11:29:57+00:00

Kite wrote:
Hi! Sorry for the late check....

I've had a look at the whole mapset and couldn't find anything wrong with it!
It's mapped greatly and the difficulty spread is just awesome.

The only thing that I suggest is +4~6 on offset because it feels a bit early for me.

Really great job on this mapset!!! I love it :3

thank you very much Kite for your supporting!

altough I feel sorry that I am not going to change the offset atm...

lovhin456

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Joined December 2008

lovhin456 2011-03-27T03:57:53+00:00

Hi ~ Here's my mod >w<

General;
- I just realized I didn't got Phase II when downloading ._. Full sub ? Anyways I'll mod what I got ~

Skin;
- I added some black outer glow to your spinner-metre looks better imo, use it if you want

SPOILER

Phase I;
- 00:08:829 >> End at 00:10:405
- 00:10:926 >> End at 00:12:491
- 00:15:100 >> End at 00:15:622 and add a note at 00:16:144
- 00:41:187 >> End at 00:41:709 and add a note with new combo at 00:42:231
- 00:45:361 >> Remove the repeat and shorten to 00:45:883 then add a slider at 00:46:405 that ends at 00:47:448 with new combo

Phase III;
- My first thought when I tested this: Bigger circle please, +1 please ;w;
- 00:47:187 >> Umm, remove new combo ?
- 00:49:274 >> ^
- 01:21:883 >> New combo ? Not necessary
- 01:29:970 >> New combo here or on the next beat
- 02:20:057 >> ^
- 02:24:231 >> New combo
- 02:28:665 >> ^
- 02:36:752 >> New combo here or on the next beat

Phase IV;
- 00:09:883 >> Remove a repeat and add a note at 00:10:274
- Really nice diff >w<

Phase V;
- 01:46:926 >> Could you lower the volume a bit for these notes (notes that start here until the break) ?

* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

Topic Starter

wanhyrzh 2011-03-27T04:42:51+00:00

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:
Hi ~ Here's my mod >w<

General;
- I just realized I didn't got Phase II when downloading ._. Full sub ? Anyways I'll mod what I got ~oh really O_o...ok I do full submit.

Skin;
- I added some black outer glow to your spinner-metre looks better imo, use it if you wantthank you but I think I'm not going to change this atm...;_;

Phase III;
- My first thought when I tested this: Bigger circle please, +1 please ;w;sry but not atm since qinche doesn't want~
do some new combo fixxing~

Phase IV;
- 00:09:883 >> Remove a repeat and add a note at 00:10:274sry but no
- Really nice diff >w<thanks~

Phase V;
- 01:46:926 >> Could you lower the volume a bit for these notes (notes that start here until the break) ?OK~

* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★

thank you lovhin~

Driou

65 posts

Joined June 2010

Driou 2011-03-27T14:29:43+00:00

Hi, here's my little mod ^^

☆~Phase II~☆

01:01:535 (4) : This sounds better
00:59:709 (2) : Maybe more esthetic with no superpose
01:05:970 (4) : ^
02:26:839 (2) : ^

☆~Phase III~☆

01:08:318 : <3

☆~Phase V~☆

00:22:796 : Why no sound ? Sounds better with ^^
Too many no hit sounds. I don't know if it's rankable.

Very nice beatmap and song !
Hope to see in ranked beatmap soon ^_^
☆~Star~☆

wanhyrzh

376 posts

Joined December 2009

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wanhyrzh 2011-03-27T16:50:31+00:00

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Driou wrote:
☆~Phase II~☆
01:01:535 (4) : This sounds better sry but no since it's normal...
00:59:709 (2) : Maybe more esthetic with no superposeOK do some change
01:05:970 (4) : ^~
02:26:839 (2) : ^~

☆~Phase III~☆
01:08:318 : <3lol

☆~Phase V~☆
00:22:796 : Why no sound ? Sounds better with ^^OK louder...
Too many no hit sounds. I don't know if it's rankable.

Very nice beatmap and song !
Hope to see in ranked beatmap soon ^_^
☆~Star~☆

thanks~

Nixnez

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Nixnez 2011-03-29T12:37:51+00:00

(<ゝω·) KiraBoshi!~☆
<3 Sakana-chan~

没什么好mod的，很好的图。只是。。
- ~~我也觉得PhaseIII的圈大一号比较好，但~~qinche拒绝了就算了。
- Spinner的Clear是空白，大丈夫？我本人有看Spinner clear的习惯(Clear了就可以放慢速度迎接之后的beat)。~~不然放个Apprivoise!或綺羅星！也不错。。。(被拖走~~

废话太多了，就加油把这rank了吧！

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-03-29T15:58:43+00:00

Soul-less wrote:
(<ゝω·) KiraBoshi!~☆
<3 Sakana-chan~

没什么好mod的，很好的图。只是。。
- ~~我也觉得PhaseIII的圈大一号比较好，但~~qinche拒绝了就算了。
- Spinner的Clear是空白，大丈夫？我本人有看Spinner clear的习惯(Clear了就可以放慢速度迎接之后的beat)。~~不然放个Apprivoise!或綺羅星！也不错。。。(被拖走~~

废话太多了，就加油把这rank了吧！

lol我一向习惯那几个放空白...
谢谢啦~

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2011-04-01T05:01:05+00:00

General
What's with the offset....Change it to 491. This won't change any of the other timing sections at all.

Easy
Nothing.

Normal
LOL TIMING SECTIONS
AR +1
00:06:752 (5) - looks strange, and it's not just the nodes.
00:28:144 (4) - wut.
To spare myself more work, most of the non-simple sliders need just a bit of work.
01:26:057 (5) -

qinche's
Nada

Insane
Your star/pentagon patterns could use some perfecting.
00:16:143 (3,4,5,6,7) - you can star this up better.
00:57:883 (1,2,3,4,1) - better pentagon
The strange sliders were much less prominent here.

Crazy Jay's
00:22:405 (3) - 1.8 slider out of nowhere.

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-01T06:14:18+00:00

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Shiirn wrote:
General
What's with the offset....Change it to 491. This won't change any of the other timing sections at all.lol I do this cuz I change the BPM (like 0.75X) at the beginning of most diffs(exclude Easy), and I asked two GMTs(Beuchi and Derekku), they sad that I should not put the offet line at the same place with th BPM changing line...

Normal
LOL TIMING SECTIONS
AR +1I think both +1 or +0 are OK and I'd like to mke it easier lol
00:06:752 (5) - looks strange, and it's not just the nodes.OK I will think of redesigning these sliders
00:28:144 (4) - wut.
To spare myself more work, most of the non-simple sliders need just a bit of work.
01:26:057 (5) -

Insane
Your star/pentagon patterns could use some perfecting.k.
00:16:143 (3,4,5,6,7) - you can star this up better.
00:57:883 (1,2,3,4,1) - better pentagon
The strange sliders were much less prominent here.

Crazy Jay's
00:22:405 (3) - 1.8 slider out of nowhere.lol it just adds a bit fun for playing and it's not so hard to follow imo

Thank you~

Shiirn

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Shiirn 2011-04-01T15:29:21+00:00

wanhyrzh wrote:
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Shiirn wrote:
General
What's with the offset....Change it to 491. This won't change any of the other timing sections at all.lol I do this cuz I change the BPM (like 0.75X) at the beginning of most diffs(exclude Easy), and I asked two GMTs(Beuchi and Derekku), they sad that I should not put the offet line at the same place with th BPM changing line...

I personally think that's a load of crap, but if they say so, sure.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-04-01T16:57:29+00:00

[General]:

source: Star Driver: Kagayaki no Takuto wiki: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Drive ... _no_Takuto
tags: Monokuroumu Sakana-chan
enable 'display storyboard in front of combo fire'

[qinche's Hard]:

OD+2

[impossiblexu's Easy]:

01:11:187 (T) - unused section, ones like this is no longer necessary
02:17:970 (T) - unused section

nazi things only, let me know when fixed

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-01T17:28:09+00:00

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Colin Hou wrote:
[General]:
source: Star Driver: Kagayaki no Takuto wiki: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Drive ... _no_Takuto OK
tags: Monokuroumu Sakana-chanOK
enable 'display storyboard in front of combo fire'
Oh I hadn't known this....

[qinche's Hard]:
OD+2
OK

[impossiblexu's Easy]:
01:11:187 (T) - unused section, ones like this is no longer necessaryOK sry for my carelessness
02:17:970 (T) - unused section
^

nazi things only, let me know when fixed

thanks Colin~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-04-01T17:34:30+00:00

Bubbled~

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-01T17:52:26+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
Bubbled~

Many thanks to you Colin!

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2011-04-02T13:03:00+00:00

yay, I can't wait to see this ranked

Alace

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Alace 2011-04-02T13:35:18+00:00

<Easy>
把clap換成finish會不會好聽一些,感覺clap沒有finish合曲子
如果finish下去的地方也不好聽的話就移掉??

All diffs are all good
i like how insane sounds

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-02T13:51:01+00:00

Alace wrote:
<Easy>
把clap換成finish會不會好聽一些,感覺clap沒有finish合曲子
如果finish下去的地方也不好聽的話就移掉??

All diffs are all good
i like how insane sounds

谢谢支持~
Thanks for supporting lol
我自己也觉得这歌不大适合clap，不过每个人有自己的风格，所以我还是把你的建议PM了许哥，征求他的看法~
I have let impossiblexu know your advise, let's just waiting his response~
如果要改，到时可能还要麻烦老师recheck了...
If we do the change, may I have your recheck? XD

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Dotsu

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Dotsu 2011-04-02T14:23:24+00:00

Alace wrote:
<Easy>
把clap換成finish會不會好聽一些,感覺clap沒有finish合曲子
如果finish下去的地方也不好聽的話就移掉??

都换成Finish了非常感谢

只是貌似现在电脑里的版本很旧了不知道有没有问题（渣网下图每秒3KB

Download: Tomatsu Haruka - Monochrome (wanhyrzh) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu

wanhyrzh

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wanhyrzh 2011-04-02T15:06:08+00:00

impossiblexu wrote:
Alace wrote:
<Easy>
把clap換成finish會不會好聽一些,感覺clap沒有finish合曲子
如果finish下去的地方也不好聽的話就移掉??
都换成Finish了非常感谢只是貌似现在电脑里的版本很旧了不知道有没有问题（渣网下图每秒3KB

[attachment=0:6a06d]Tomatsu Haruka - Monochrome (wanhyrzh) [impossiblexu's Easy].osu[/attachment:6a06d]

加上了，谢谢许哥~
另外
我还对insane的一个地方的排列稍微改了下
01:44:578(4,1,2,3,4)~

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2011-04-03T07:28:11+00:00

OK looks good, sweet map, very soothing :s good hitsounds too

rebub~

Alace

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Alace 2011-04-03T09:26:43+00:00