Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Kana

00:36:312 (1,2) - 这里感觉距离加大太突然了，前边一直是0.5。建议这里距离缩小，后面的两组slider可以逐渐加大距离。 Fixed


KPYs

00:28:272 (6,1) - 这里加new combo的方法和别的统一一下。（其实我个人感觉这种下法更好，new combo在白线上） Fixed
01:06:507 - clap Fixed



Easy

00:29:252 (4,1) - spacing 近了 Fixed
00:31:605 - clap放到下一拍 (可以考虑在00:31:213 (2) 和00:32:782也加上clap) Fixed

Sandpig wrote:

Koko's Normal

00:20:625 - 00:32:782 这一段不建议把clap加到第一拍上，原曲的重音是在2,4拍，第一拍上的重音感觉特别硬。如果特别想加的话试试两个小节加一次ooox|ooox|xoox|ooox|xoox|ooox|xoox|ooox| 这样Fixed(?)

好像后边还有好多，试着去掉一些第一拍上的clap

Sakura Hana wrote:

[b[KPYs]
00:11:213 (2) - This slider is invisible due to the spinner's circle color and the hitbursts. Change the slider to notes.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
If muted hitsound files are usually 44 bytes, i dont get why soft-sliderslide is 8 kbs?
That white combo color hurts the eyes during kiai, tone it down.
Set slider tick rate to 2 on all difficulties.
Stop the silent slider-slide on kiai, since ithe song's stronger in that section all hitsounds should be hearable.

[Kana]
00:08:076 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner or change it into a slider.
00:14:351 (1) - This spinner would sound better fading-out if you're following the vocal
00:29:449 (10) - I think this slider would feel better if slowed down a bit
01:07:684 (1,2,3,4,5) - These jumps are unpredictible, can you tone them down?

[KPYs]
00:11:213 (2) - This slider is invisible due to the spinner's circle color and the hitbursts.

[Koko's Normal]
00:33:174 (1,1) - These double spinners could be avoided, since it seems you're following the vocals you could use some slower sliders that go into a pretty arc around, less tiring to follow and sound much better imo.

SPOILER

107,92,33174,6,0,B|140:216|207:261|303:261|409:194|417:73,1,449.999986588955
496,108,36115,2,0,B|479:186|418:321|291:353|183:346|79:294|35:182|31:104,1,664.999976217748

First slider is 0.75x and second is 0.95x

[Easy]
00:33:174 (1,1) - Just like on Normal, i recommend you dont use double spinner, use sliders instead however you would have to try something different since you shouldnt use slider speed changes in the easiest difficulty.

That's about it, Good Luck with the map, looks pretty nice to me!

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:076 (1) - remove finish Fixed
00:11:213 (2) - 第二点左一格第三点左下一格 Fixed
00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最好换个排法。5 whistle Fixed
00:22:194 (3) - 这里开始clap混乱。我建议直接统一都扔第三白线上。 Fixed
00:33:174 (1,1) - 这slider画的实在不敢恭维，找张Krisom或者谁的图学习下。 分明是隨便做的(哈哈哈) Fixed
00:55:135 (4) - 后面的break去掉 Fixed
kiai重复感略强。 謝謝(?)

[Koko's Normal]金精火眼
00:13:566 (6,7) - 6左一格7左下一格 NR有金精火眼 Fixed
00:22:978 (5,1) - 没叠好 NR有金精火眼 Fixed
00:32:782 (7,1) - 拉开一点。slider降速不意味着这个spacing也降。捎带一提比Kana的slider画好多了啊（啊哈哈哈哈） 分別不是他拉的, Fixed
00:57:096 (1) - 右一格 NR有金精火眼 Fixed
00:58:272 (4,5) - 这种真的最好用折返就好。。不过你都用这么多了我不好再说什么。orz
嗯,算了吧
[Kana]
00:29:449 (10,11,12) - 个人不喜欢这个排列。 (哈哈哈哈哈不懂改哈哈哈哈哈)
00:31:017 (1,2) - slider长度错了吧。都是一拍，忘了时间线？ Fixed
01:02:978 (2) - remove whistle Fixed
01:15:527 (3) - 头whistle去掉 Fixed

NatsumeRin wrote:

[KPY's]
00:09:056 (1) - spinner bonus声大了，降一点。Fix
00:13:370 (2,4) - 可以考虑2尾和4clapFix
00:26:900 (2) - 拉到25~30吧。这样小反而没有finish感。Fix
01:20:233 (3) - 我建议把折返whistle去了Fix

1. offset: 00:00:233 以解决重叠section和第一offset前有note的问题
2. mp3音量有点小 ._.

1. 00:22:194, 00:23:566, 00:25:135, 00:32:782, 00:38:860, 00:39:056, 00:39:252 AND SO ON (T) - 空拍感觉很堵 部分没有vocal的地方空着有较大移动音乐比较缓的时候可以留空 但是比较多的情况比如以上就感觉很囧 特别是已经到比较快速的感觉后还是留有很多空拍OTL
2. 00:55:135 (1) - 这里放个Note+finshi spinner 00:55:233起 结末点不变
3. 01:17:096 (1) - KIAI部分还有这样长的spinner很泄气的 换其他note吧

1. 00:14:939 (1) - 结束点和其他难度一致吧
2. 00:35:723 (7) - 50音量足够了
3. 00:55:331 (1) - 感觉很猎奇, 00:56:703结束 00:57:096 00:57:488 00:57:880这三个时间点放个三角跳 +_+
4. 01:08:468 (1) - ^

1. 00:39:449 (150) - 大圈?

1. 音效方面还是老实点第二/四白线放clap好了 ._. 现在很乱
2. 01:21:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对称做一下 以及spacing

1. 00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 取消掉2,4的whistle
2. 00:28:468 (3) - 末尾clap
3. 00:29:252 (4) - 起始clap取消
4. 00:41:017 (3) - 起始clap移到中间
5. 00:47:292 (3) - ^
6. 00:48:860 (1) - clap换finish
7. 00:50:429 (3) - 起始clap移到中间
8. 01:00:625 (1,2) - 交换音效
9. 01:03:762 (1) - 取消clap
10. 01:09:645 (1,3) - clap
11. 01:13:566 (2) - ^
12. 01:16:703 (2) - ^
13. 01:19:841 (2) - ^

Colin Hou wrote:

[KPYs]:

1. 00:14:939 (1) - 结束点和其他难度一致吧 Fix
2. 00:35:723 (7) - 50音量足够了Fix
3. 00:55:331 (1) - 感觉很猎奇, 00:56:703结束 00:57:096 00:57:488 00:57:880这三个时间点放个三角跳 +_+Fix真的很獵奇嗎*_*
4. 01:08:468 (1) - ^^同上.

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. offset: 00:00:233 以解决重叠section和第一offset前有note的问题 Fixed
2. mp3音量有点小 ._. 算了吧

[Kara]:

1. 00:22:194, 00:23:566, 00:25:135, 00:32:782, 00:38:860, 00:39:056, 00:39:252 AND SO ON (T) - 空拍感觉很堵 部分没有vocal的地方空着有较大移动音乐比较缓的时候可以留空 但是比较多的情况比如以上就感觉很囧 特别是已经到比较快速的感觉后还是留有很多空拍OTL
   我覺得還ok,sorry><不改這個了
2. 00:55:135 (1) - 这里放个Note+finshi spinner 00:55:233起 结末点不变 Fixed
3. 01:17:096 (1) - KIAI部分还有这样长的spinner很泄气的 换其他note吧 Fixed

[爬B's Taiko]:

1. 00:39:449 (150) - 大圈? Fixed

[Normal]:

1. 音效方面还是老实点第二/四白线放clap好了 ._. 现在很乱 Fixed
2. 01:21:409 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对称做一下 以及spacing Fixed

[Easy]:

1. 00:12:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - 取消掉2,4的whistle Fixed
2. 00:28:468 (3) - 末尾clap Fixed
3. 00:29:252 (4) - 起始clap取消 Fixed
4. 00:41:017 (3) - 起始clap移到中间 Fixed
5. 00:47:292 (3) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:48:860 (1) - clap换finish Fixed
7. 00:50:429 (3) - 起始clap移到中间 Fixed
8. 01:00:625 (1,2) - 交换音效 Fixed
9. 01:03:762 (1) - 取消clap Fixed
10. 01:09:645 (1,3) - clap Fixed
11. 01:13:566 (2) - ^ Fixed
12. 01:16:703 (2) - ^ Fixed
13. 01:19:841 (2) - ^ Fixed

Sakura Hana wrote:

00:33:174 (1,2) - Nice, however considering you're using curved sliders most of the time, wouldnt it be awkward to use these linear ones here?
00:51:998 (1) - Same for this
00:54:351 (2,3,4) - You could center these below the slider more? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/55680

Besides the last one, i dont mind if you dont change the first two, they are just concerns, just call me back after you check these

SamiPale wrote:

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你们要泡的速度总是那么快