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2016-05-31 09:50 Euny: btw done
2016-05-31 09:51 Euny: was big work
2016-05-31 09:51 Natsu: already uploaded?
2016-05-31 09:52 Euny: yeah
2016-05-31 09:53 Natsu: let me see kinda curious 
2016-05-31 09:54 Euny: i think its really easy map
2016-05-31 09:55 Natsu: 00:33:598 (1) -  I love this Ahhhhhhhhhhh, make better curve
2016-05-31 09:55 Natsu: 00:53:020 (1,2) -  slider pls
2016-05-31 09:56 Euny: yea
2016-05-31 09:56 Natsu: 01:46:431 - sha :c QAQ
2016-05-31 09:57 Natsu: 01:51:287 (1) -  remove NC?
2016-05-31 09:59 Natsu: 03:11:054 (4) - Unsnapped 
2016-05-31 09:59 Natsu: 03:14:869 (2) -  ^ + clap
2016-05-31 09:59 Natsu: 03:17:297 (1) -  
2016-05-31 09:59 Natsu: 03:18:684 (3) -  NC
2016-05-31 09:59 Euny: fixed all
2016-05-31 09:59 Euny: post it
2016-05-31 09:59 Natsu: there are alot in all diffs
2016-05-31 10:00 Natsu: even in mine, just sha sha safe LOL
2016-05-31 10:00 Euny: okay

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,251 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-06-01T17:04:40+00:00

Oo, kpop. Can't say I'm a particular fan personally but my sister loves the stuff.

~ My end of a m4m ~

[Easy]

Nothing to say about this diff, looks really good.

[Normal]

Same as Easy, looks great.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:21:113 (1) - This slider feels a lot better to me if its moved down a little bit, for flow purposes. As it is now it feels like a slight jerk motion but if it's moved down a bit it feels more natural I guess?

00:24:928 (4) - I think this slider can just be a hitcircle. Fits the music a bit more, and makes this part a bit more interesting to play.

01:14:350 (2) - sounds like it should be a 1/1 slider and not a repeats

01:24:581 (4) - feels better as a hit circle because the sound lasts much longer than the slider

02:22:327 (2) - sounds better as a 1/1 slider and not a repeat

03:19:205 (2) - sounds better as a 1/1 slider and not a repeat

[Natsu's Insane]

SPOILER

01:16:605 (1) - This blanket feels weird since you blanket the starting point of the slider with the previous one but the end just sort of ignores the blanket by doing its own thing? I think you could angle it up or something so the blanket isn't...contested? I have no idea how to word this lol. Picture

02:01:171 (2) - This pattern is cool but would feel a bit better if the diagonal jumps were all the same spacing (like from 02:01:171 (2) to 02:01:344 (1), and from 02:01:518 (2) to 02:01:691 (1). Right now they're a bit off.

[SHASHASHA]

SPOILER

00:36:720 - I think you could map the "woop woop" that happens here? Won't mention this every time it happens but yea just thought I'd mention it once

02:56:402 (2) - I don't think this is a necessary hit circle

Visually this map looks great. Can't comment on spacing or some of the patterns since I can't complete the map x_x sorry.

Blankets look good (although I can say that about that entire mapset lol)

Really good set, good luck! Would love to see more ranked kpop, might be able to get my sister into this game lol.

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-06-02T07:01:41+00:00

M4M

[Easy]

00:08:627 - 01:24:928 - etc. unused green line
00:53:020 (1,1) - consider stacking them? you stack them somewhere after
00:43:310 (1) - why NC?
03:10:188 (3,4) - 03:14:870 (2,3) - blanket

[Normal]

00:24:408 (4,5) - 01:42:096 (2,3) - 01:44:871 (2,3) - 01:54:581 (4,5) -
i think you should stack well
still some inherited points not used..
00:33:598 (1) - looks bad...

[Hard]

00:46:344 - add a circle
01:03:598 (3,1) - blanket
01:16:864 - add a circle as 01:15:217 (1,2,3) -
01:34:639 (1,2,1) - 01:36:199 (2,3) - i think blanket can still improve by curving more.
01:48:772 - 01:54:321 - circle
02:05:159 (1,2) - blanket
some nazi stuff..doesn't matter a lot.

[Insane]

00:12:095 (3,1) - fix blanket
decent

[SHASHASHA]

01:28:743 (4,2) - this overlap looks kinda bad here...
02:09:668 (2,1,2) - blanket is off
02:48:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't think this makes sense...with some big jumps you suddenly use a stream here,and the stream is not even regular cuz 02:48:165 (1,2,3) - are stacked
03:01:690 (3) - the white tick is off the area,dunno if it's ok
03:21:807 (2) - make it 2 circles, or ctrl+G and put it leftward

Looks nice,gl

Down

Featured Artist

643 posts

Joined July 2014

Down 2016-06-02T10:01:42+00:00

안녕하세요!

[General Setting]
■ 02:44:003 - ~02:49:552 - 이 사이의 볼륨을 노래에 맞게 점점 증가하도록 만드시는 것이 어떨까요?
■ 블랭킷 나간것들이 자주 보입니다. 시간내서 한번 전체적으로 다듬어 주세요.

[Easy]
■ 02:38:454 - ~02:46:431 - 물론 노래에 맞긴 하지만 1/1슬라가 계속 사용되서 지루한 감도 없지 않네요. 서클도 조금 넣어서 표현해보시는 것은 어떨까요?
■ 간격 나간것도 없고 깔끔하네욬

[Normal]
■ 02:47:991 - 노트가 없어서 아쉬운 부분이네요.. 하지만 서클넣기에는 너무 어려워질듯 하니 02:47:471 (3) - 의 리버스를 푸시고 02:47:818 - 이곳에 1/2슬라이더 하나를 추가하셔서 표현하시면 될듯 합니다.

[Hard]
■ 00:13:309 (2,3) - 박자가 조금 어색하게 들렸어요. http://puu.sh/pdMYj/bc16ed78ba.PNG 이런 박자는 어떤가욥?
■ 00:22:500 - ~00:26:488 - 이곳도 살짝 지루한 감이 있네요. 다른 박자도 섞어 사용해주시면 좋겠습니다.
■ 02:49:552 - 다른 난이도들은 이부분에 클리커블을 줬는데 하드에도 넣어주세요.

[Natsu's Insane]
■ 00:17:645 - It need to clickable. 00:19:032 - You made the click in here. Lyric is the same, nevertheless you didn't make that.
■ 01:13:136 (3) - I think that straight slider is better.
■ 02:41:228 (1) - Replace slider with 3 circle like this 02:38:454 (1,2,3,4) - because mood of song is the same here.
■ Looks comfortable..

[SHASHASHA]
■ 이것은 제 주관적인 생각입니다만 노래 전체적으로 3/4슬라이더를 사용하면 좋겠다는 부분이 많았는데 아쉽네요 ㅠㅠ
■ 01:00:824 (1,2,3) - 키아이부분 쯤 에서 이러한 패턴들이 여러번 쓰였는데 의도하신지는 모르겠지만 팔로우 라인을 보면 두개가 일치하는 것도 있고 02:21:806 (1,2,3) - 이것처럼 일치하지 않는 것들도 있습니다. 의도가 아니시면 전체적으로 손좀 봐주세요.

■ 00:25:275 (1,2) - 두 노트 사이의 거리가 너무 가깝다고 생각해요. 조금 벌려주셨으면..
■ 00:35:679 (5) - 이거 블랭킷 더 잘 시켜주시고, 00:36:026 (6) - 이거 대신에 (5)번 슬라를 복붙해서 쓰시면 더 깔끔할 것 같아요. 00:38:454 (5,6) - 이 두개는 모양이 거의 비슷한반면에 앞에 두개는 눈에 보일 정도로 차이가 나서 불안정해 보였습니다.
■ 01:04:639 (1,2) - 떨어져있는 간격이 상대적으로 가까워 보입니다. 01:03:945 (4,1) - 이정도 간격으로 만들면 적당할 것 같아요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294871
■ 02:04:812 (3) - 블랭킷 의도인 슬라이더라면 위로 올려주시는것이 좋아보입니다. 02:05:159 (1,1) - 이것과 비슷한 간격으로.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294895

저번에 두분이서 제 맵셋 도와주신 것을 어떻게 감사드려야 할지 모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ
좋은 맵셋입니다. M4M신청 받아주셔서 감사드리고 랭크 힘내세욥!

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-03T16:17:35+00:00

thanks for mod guys will check when this weekend!

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-06-05T12:37:40+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[Natsu's Insane]
[spoilerbox]01:16:605 (1) - This blanket feels weird since you blanket the starting point of the slider with the previous one but the end just sort of ignores the blanket by doing its own thing? I think you could angle it up or something so the blanket isn't...contested? I have no idea how to word this lol. blanket is fine, check with default skin

02:01:171 (2) - This pattern is cool but would feel a bit better if the diagonal jumps were all the same spacing (like from 02:01:171 (2) to 02:01:344 (1), and from 02:01:518 (2) to 02:01:691 (1). Right now they're a bit off. if someone else complain I'll do something here, atm I think is fine

sahuang wrote:
[Insane]
00:12:095 (3,1) - fix blanket blanket is fine, check in game not in the editor

Down wrote:
[Natsu's Insane]
■ 00:17:645 - It need to clickable. 00:19:032 - You made the click in here. Lyric is the same, nevertheless you didn't make that. Because the song rhythm is different, also if you notice there are some repeat in the vocals, plus there are some extra songs from the instrumental
■ 01:13:136 (3) - I think that straight slider is better. oh man, I love to make my slider aim in the direction of the next object, that's why I use them alot in my maps
■ 02:41:228 (1) - Replace slider with 3 circle like this 02:38:454 (1,2,3,4) - because mood of song is the same here. first have vocals that's why I used the repeat slider to cover the hold sounds, second is following the instrumental

thanks

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-05T13:12:52+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Oo, kpop. Can't say I'm a particular fan personally but my sister loves the stuff.

~ My end of a m4m ~

[Easy]

Nothing to say about this diff, looks really good.thankyuuuu

[Normal]

Same as Easy, looks great. thankyuuuu

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:21:113 (1) - This slider feels a lot better to me if its moved down a little bit, for flow purposes. As it is now it feels like a slight jerk motion but if it's moved down a bit it feels more natural I guess?✔fixed

00:24:928 (4) - I think this slider can just be a hitcircle. Fits the music a bit more, and makes this part a bit more interesting to play. hmm then it can be ignore that vocal sound i think better to keep?

01:14:350 (2) - sounds like it should be a 1/1 slider and not a repeatsthere is sound i dont want to skip it

01:24:581 (4) - feels better as a hit circle because the sound lasts much longer than the slider hmm but i did same things when my shashasha..

02:22:327 (2) - sounds better as a 1/1 slider and not a repeatsame as under

03:19:205 (2) - sounds better as a 1/1 slider and not a repeat there is sound i dont want to skip it

[SHASHASHA]
SPOILER
00:36:720 - I think you could map the "woop woop" that happens here? Won't mention this every time it happens but yea just thought I'd mention it once i think its better to keep current one for fit to music instead of extra sounds

02:56:402 (2) - I don't think this is a necessary hit circle listen with 25%Q.Q you can listen it!

Visually this map looks great. Can't comment on spacing or some of the patterns since I can't complete the map x_x sorry.

Blankets look good (although I can say that about that entire mapset lol)

Really good set, good luck! Would love to see more ranked kpop, might be able to get my sister into this game lol.

seems you really want to make join your sis to this game hahahaha hope your sis can play my kpop maps! also thanks for mod!

sahuang wrote:
M4M

[Easy]
00:08:627 - 01:24:928 - etc. unused green lineits not unrankable. o/ but thanks lol
00:53:020 (1,1) - consider stacking them? you stack them somewhere after ✔fixed
00:43:310 (1) - why NC?✔fixed
03:10:188 (3,4) - 03:14:870 (2,3) - blankethmm they not for blanket i just gave them curve for better play c:

[Normal]
00:24:408 (4,5) - 01:42:096 (2,3) - 01:44:871 (2,3) - 01:54:581 (4,5) -
i think you should stack well✔fixed
still some inherited points not used..awwwwww is fine !
00:33:598 (1) - looks bad...hmm tell me what is bad :c

[Hard]
00:46:344 - add a circlejust ignored because vocal feels more strong i did too when i map shashasha
01:03:598 (3,1) - blanketnot for blanket flow sorry!
01:16:864 - add a circle as 01:15:217 (1,2,3) - they are different. listen with 25~50% basically i ignored over 1/4 parts
01:34:639 (1,2,1) - 01:36:199 (2,3) - i think blanket can still improve by curving more.✔fixed
01:48:772 - 01:54:321 - circle same reason as ]00:46:344
02:05:159 (1,2) - blanket✔fixed
some nazi stuff..doesn't matter a lot.

[SHASHASHA]
01:28:743 (4,2) - this overlap looks kinda bad here...i cant feels it annoying when play. so maybe fine?
02:09:668 (2,1,2) - blanket is off✔not for blanket but i fixed bit for looks better thanks!
02:48:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't think this makes sense...with some big jumps you suddenly use a stream here,and the stream is not even regular cuz 02:48:165 (1,2,3) - are stacked✔fixed
03:01:690 (3) - the white tick is off the area,dunno if it's okits fine with 3:4 ratio
03:21:807 (2) - make it 2 circles, or ctrl+G and put it leftwardwant to make same as other same parts

Looks nice,gl

thanks for mod!

Down wrote:
안녕하세요!

[General Setting]
■ 02:44:003 - ~02:49:552 - 이 사이의 볼륨을 노래에 맞게 점점 증가하도록 만드시는 것이 어떨까요?✔fixed 헉 실은 귀찮아서 안하고있었떠요 헿..
■ 블랭킷 나간것들이 자주 보입니다. 시간내서 한번 전체적으로 다듬어 주세요.✔fixed

[Easy]
■ 02:38:454 - ~02:46:431 - 물론 노래에 맞긴 하지만 1/1슬라가 계속 사용되서 지루한 감도 없지 않네요. 서클도 조금 넣어서 표현해보시는 것은 어떨까요?노래에 맞으면 이지 노말은 지루해도되요 뉴비들에겐 계속해서 새로운 패턴이 더 안좋다고 생각해요 적어도 제 주관으로는 ㅎ
■ 간격 나간것도 없고 깔끔하네욬 ❤

[Normal]
■ 02:47:991 - 노트가 없어서 아쉬운 부분이네요.. 하지만 서클넣기에는 너무 어려워질듯 하니 02:47:471 (3) - 의 리버스를 푸시고 02:47:818 - 이곳에 1/2슬라이더 하나를 추가하셔서 표현하시면 될듯 합니다.그렇찮아도 저기 1/2오브젝트로 넘쳐나는데 너무 빡빡해져요 그냥 리버스로 쉬어가게 하는게 더 좋을거같아보여요.

[Hard]
■ 00:13:309 (2,3) - 박자가 조금 어색하게 들렸어요. http://puu.sh/pdMYj/bc16ed78ba.PNG 이런 박자는 어떤가욥?✔fixed
■ 00:22:500 - ~00:26:488 - 이곳도 살짝 지루한 감이 있네요. 다른 박자도 섞어 사용해주시면 좋겠습니다.좋은 타임라인있음 소개시켜줘요ㅋㅋㅋ
■ 02:49:552 - 다른 난이도들은 이부분에 클리커블을 줬는데 하드에도 넣어주세요.

[SHASHASHA]
■ 이것은 제 주관적인 생각입니다만 노래 전체적으로 3/4슬라이더를 사용하면 좋겠다는 부분이 많았는데 아쉽네요 ㅠㅠ답해드린부분이니까 넘어가께용!
■ 01:00:824 (1,2,3) - 키아이부분 쯤 에서 이러한 패턴들이 여러번 쓰였는데 의도하신지는 모르겠지만 팔로우 라인을 보면 두개가 일치하는 것도 있고 02:21:806 (1,2,3) - 이것처럼 일치하지 않는 것들도 있습니다. 의도가 아니시면 전체적으로 손좀 봐주세요.이건 엑라니까 디스턴스마저 같은데 패턴까지 다 같으면 좀 그럴거같아요 ㅋ 지루함을 없애기 위해서죠
■ 00:25:275 (1,2) - 두 노트 사이의 거리가 너무 가깝다고 생각해요. 조금 벌려주셨으면..✔fixed
■ 00:35:679 (5) - 이거 블랭킷 더 잘 시켜주시고, 00:36:026 (6) - 이거 대신에 (5)번 슬라를 복붙해서 쓰시면 더 깔끔할 것 같아요. 00:38:454 (5,6) - 이 두개는 모양이 거의 비슷한반면에 앞에 두개는 눈에 보일 정도로 차이가 나서 불안정해 보였습니다.✔fixed 제가 엑라엔 복붙을 잘 안해서 좀 더 신경써서 고쳐봤어요
■ 01:04:639 (1,2) - 떨어져있는 간격이 상대적으로 가까워 보입니다. 01:03:945 (4,1) - 이정도 간격으로 만들면 적당할 것 같아요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294871✔fixed
■ 02:04:812 (3) - 블랭킷 의도인 슬라이더라면 위로 올려주시는것이 좋아보입니다. 02:05:159 (1,1) - 이것과 비슷한 간격으로.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5294895✔fixed

저번에 두분이서 제 맵셋 도와주신 것을 어떻게 감사드려야 할지 모르겠네요 ㅠㅠ
좋은 맵셋입니다. M4M신청 받아주셔서 감사드리고 랭크 힘내세욥!

저희가 봤을때 랭크가 충분히 가능해 보여서 그런거죠 나츠가 착해요 ㅋㅋ 원래 절대 매핑관련 이야기 안하는데 다운님덕에 그땐 둘이서 여러이야기 나눈듯해요 ㅋㅋ 모딩고마워요

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-06-05T14:28:14+00:00

Hello Euny o/ I'm here to do a mod for Natsu :p

Easy

00:21:113 (3,1) - Blanket fix
00:40:535 (3) - I think this flows weirdly. Maybe try something like this instead?
Example
00:47:471 (1) - Maybe curve this a bit so that it makes a nice curved triangle shape with 00:46:084 (3,1,2) - ?
02:00:997 (1,2) - Lower the (2) to around x:200 y:294 to make a better circle!
02:55:101 (1,3) - This blanket is a tiny bit off
02:57:876 (1) - I think you could improve this shape to have more curve, something like this. After adjusting make sure that 02:57:876 (1,1) - are stacked properly!
Example
03:14:870 (2,3) - I would definetly blanket these because the end of (2) is so deep into the curve of (3) that it looks a bit messy imo
The set was updated after I was done modding the easy so my apologies if some of the problems were already fixed :s

Normal

00:10:014 (2) - Reduce the curve on this a bit to make the blanket better
00:14:176 (1,3) - I think you should add a bit more distance between these two since they look a bit messy when they are almost touching eachother. Same here 00:18:338 (3,5) - These are also the only times this issue pops up in this difficulty so you should definetly change this to be more consistent with the rest of the diff.
01:31:864 (2) - If you add more curve you could blanket this to 01:30:477 (1) - But if you dont want to have the blanket then you can keep it as it is.
02:17:644 (1,2) - This overlap seems a bit random to me since you don't actually use any overlaps except for 1 other in this diff which is here 01:38:800 (1,2) - You could technically remove both overlaps since they feel a bit out of place since there arent any more

Hard

00:23:887 (1) - To follow the vocals better consider extending this to the blue tick.
00:50:939 (3,1) - You can blanket these better if you want
00:55:795 (1,2) - Same here
01:19:379 (1,3,4) - Same for all of these :p
02:03:772 (1,2) - Yeah the diff mostly has blanket fixes as its issue so here is another one (I'm trying my hardest not to turn this into a nazi blanket mod)

Natsu's Insane

00:12:095 (3,1) - I feel like these need to have a bit more distance since it looks ugly to have them practically touching eachother like that
00:27:009 (2,4,5) - Stack properly
00:51:286 (6,4) - You could stack these aswell
01:00:477 - You miss quite a strong beat here with the long slider you have. I don't see what the long slider is following so I suggest to map this beat.
01:11:402 (3) - Same here
01:38:801 (1,2) - I think this would look prettier if you angled the (2) to be in line with (1) like this
Example
01:48:338 (3,2,3) - Stack
01:56:835 (2) - Consider shortening this to 01:57:009 - And having a circle at 01:57:095 - instead of the slidertail. I know that you are following the vocals but this would practically follow them aswell while also including the drumbeat!
01:58:916 (5,1,2) - Stack :p
02:08:281 (3) - It's good to see that you are consistent with these but still. I really dislike them and thus recommend to change them. Here are the rest 02:19:379 (3) - 03:05:159 (3) - 03:16:257 (3) -
02:46:777 (1,3) - This overlap seems a bit random to me since you don't really have any before this. Same here 02:47:471 (4,6) -
02:59:610 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary since the velocity change is quite minimal to be honest. It would also go well with the 1,2 comboing of the jumps before this.
03:22:154 (1,2) - Maybe swap the NCs around for these? I think it would be benefitial here since the sv change is actually noticeable here.

SHASHASAHSAHASASHASAHSSA

I think that ar 9.3 is too high for this. 9.1 or 9.2 would be better x)
00:55:448 (3) - I think that if you increase the length of this to the blue tick it would emphasize the following circle even better!
To my surprise I didn't find anything else that bothered me gameplaywise. What I did find was a ton of blanket fixes though so I'm going to leave all of them in a box below for you to check out if you want to make them better
Box of Blankets (open at your own risk)
00:13:309 (3,5) - 00:25:275 (1,1) - 00:37:673 (7,1) - 00:42:442 (4,6) - 00:43:830 (4,5) - 00:57:616 (1,1) - 01:02:384 (2,2) - 01:10:534 (2,4) - 01:19:379 (1,2) - 01:22:153 (1,1) - 01:39:494 (1,2) - 01:55:794 (3,1) - 02:02:905 (4,3) - 02:03:945 (2,1) - 02:18:165 (1,4) - 02:22:847 (3,1) - 03:03:945 (1,4) - 03:05:852 (2,1) - 03:13:308 (2,1) -

That's it for the mod! Good luck with the mapset

Beige

Elite Mapper

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Joined February 2011

Beige 2016-06-06T02:30:14+00:00

여좌가 쉽게 마믈 주면 안댛

Euny

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-06T07:22:53+00:00

그래야 니가 날더 춰와하게 될껄

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-06T11:23:16+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Hello Euny o/ I'm here to do a mod for Natsu :p

Easy
00:21:113 (3,1) - Blanket fix✔fixed
00:40:535 (3) - I think this flows weirdly. Maybe try something like this instead?i think its fine to play. if you felt big problem from it, also fix this too 00:34:986 (3,1) - i guess.
Example
00:47:471 (1) - Maybe curve this a bit so that it makes a nice curved triangle shape with 00:46:084 (3,1,2) - ?✔fixed
02:00:997 (1,2) - Lower the (2) to around x:200 y:294 to make a better circle!i think its enough for play
02:55:101 (1,3) - This blanket is a tiny bit off✔fixed
02:57:876 (1) - I think you could improve this shape to have more curve, something like this. After adjusting make sure that 02:57:876 (1,1) - are stacked properly!✔fixed
Example
03:14:870 (2,3) - I would definetly blanket these because the end of (2) is so deep into the curve of (3) that it looks a bit messy imo✔fixed
The set was updated after I was done modding the easy so my apologies if some of the problems were already fixed :sits fine! was helpful! thanks

Normal
00:10:014 (2) - Reduce the curve on this a bit to make the blanket better✔fixed
00:14:176 (1,3) - I think you should add a bit more distance between these two since they look a bit messy when they are almost touching eachother. Same here 00:18:338 (3,5) - These are also the only times this issue pops up in this difficulty so you should definetly change this to be more consistent with the rest of the diff.✔fixed
01:31:864 (2) - If you add more curve you could blanket this to 01:30:477 (1) - But if you dont want to have the blanket then you can keep it as it is.enough for play i guess. if it can be big issue, them tell me how can i fix it better.
02:17:644 (1,2) - This overlap seems a bit random to me since you don't actually use any overlaps except for 1 other in this diff which is here 01:38:800 (1,2) - You could technically remove both overlaps since they feel a bit out of place since there arent any morecan be overlap if its not annoying to play. i think its not big deal

Hard
00:23:887 (1) - To follow the vocals better consider extending this to the blue tick. there is sound. i dont want to make extention with ignore beat sorry
00:50:939 (3,1) - You can blanket these better if you want✔fixed
00:55:795 (1,2) - Same here✔fixed
01:19:379 (1,3,4) - Same for all of these :p✔fixed
02:03:772 (1,2) - Yeah the diff mostly has blanket fixes as its issue so here is another one (I'm trying my hardest not to turn this into a nazi blanket mod)✔fixed

SHASHASAHSAHASASHASAHSSA
I think that ar 9.3 is too high for this. 9.1 or 9.2 would be better x)✔fixed
00:55:448 (3) - I think that if you increase the length of this to the blue tick it would emphasize the following circle even better!✔fixed
To my surprise I didn't find anything else that bothered me gameplaywise. What I did find was a ton of blanket fixes though so I'm going to leave all of them in a box below for you to check out if you want to make them better ✔fixed i did my best!
Box of Blankets (open at your own risk)
00:13:309 (3,5) - 00:25:275 (1,1) - 00:37:673 (7,1) - 00:42:442 (4,6) - 00:43:830 (4,5) - 00:57:616 (1,1) - 01:02:384 (2,2) - 01:10:534 (2,4) - 01:19:379 (1,2) - 01:22:153 (1,1) - 01:39:494 (1,2) - 01:55:794 (3,1) - 02:02:905 (4,3) - 02:03:945 (2,1) - 02:18:165 (1,4) - 02:22:847 (3,1) - 03:03:945 (1,4) - 03:05:852 (2,1) - 03:13:308 (2,1) -

That's it for the mod! Good luck with the mapset

thanks for mod!

@Natsu : update first before you fix mod because i added tags

A r M i N

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Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2016-06-09T22:13:20+00:00

I am usually not listening to kpop but this song and map is awesome :3 thanks for mapping this, one of my favs

+1kd

Euny

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-10T05:59:40+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
I am usually not listening to kpop but this song and map is awesome :3 thanks for mapping this, one of my favs

+1kd

thanks for star and love my map♥

Lokidoki

374 posts

Joined June 2015

Lokidoki 2016-06-11T15:04:28+00:00

Hi, the worst and most pointless m4m here because all the diffs are amazing. Red color in bold means my opinion based on my own experience.
I have a few suggestions:
[ General ]
Why is there no long kiai? There are a few good parts to put a longer kiai.

[ Hard ]
02:13:830 2,3 - Plays kinda weird and preety hard you rarely expect something like this.

02:48:165 - I suggest 2 1/4 sliders there than a reversal.
[ SHASHASHA ]
I like the map but find it very hard with those jumps...

That's all I could find.

P.S: Natsu's Insane and SHASHASHA are my favourite ones.

Euny

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-11T17:15:10+00:00

Lokidoki wrote:
Hi, the worst and most pointless m4m here because all the diffs are amazing. Red color in bold means my opinion based on my own experience.
I have a few suggestions:
[ General ]
Why is there no long kiai? There are a few good parts to put a longer kiai.i think better to keep for emphasize strong vocal parts

[ Hard ]
02:13:830 2,3 - Plays kinda weird and preety hard you rarely expect something like this. ✔fixed moved a bit thanks

02:48:165 - I suggest 2 1/4 sliders there than a reversal.is stream part so maybe better to keep?
[ SHASHASHA ]
I like the map but find it very hard with those jumps...

That's all I could find.

P.S: Natsu's Insane and SHASHASHA are my favourite ones.

thanks for mod c:

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-06-16T06:02:42+00:00

SHASHASHA

00:13:136 (2,3,4,5) - This just sounds off for me if you're following vocals.
00:49:379 (1,2) - I would space this out more normally just cuz the spacing for 00:48:858 (1,2) - makes it seem like this could potentially be 1/4.
00:51:806 (2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps are larger than the ones you use later like 00:54:061 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - etc... You might want to rearrange some circles since the drums kinda double after 00:53:020 - and you kinda reflect that with your hitsounding.
01:14:870 (3,1) - I was really expecting a larger jump here after that huge jump on 01:14:176 (3,1) - .
02:14:697 (6,1) - Larger jump here cuz you put a kiai burst here too xD.
02:47:818 (3,4) - Too big imo. I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. This jump actually makes it really hard to go into that stream, at least imo. I think you can buff places like 02:49:032 (2,3) - and 02:49:379 (4,1) - instead.

Natsu

00:16:431 (5,2) - Stacks are off here.
00:16:951 (1,2,1) - Also, you sure about this spacing here? Looks confusing imo.
00:58:396 - There's beat here if you wanna stack a circle on 00:57:702 (3) - 's slider end.
01:13:136 (3,4) - Can you make the slider-designs symmetrical, I think it fits the song better here, than having two different designs. (But i guess theyre both parallel).

Hard

00:27:182 (2,3,4) - I don't really like how you have a triplet so early on... Since you introduce 1/4 rhythm later in the song when its winding into the chorus.

Try a rhythm like this

Easy

01:02:731 (3,4,1) - Spacing here is a bit too uneven for me.

~

[]

Got metadata? Also Natsu what's your opinion on 00:13:136 (2,3,4,5) snapping here? Anyways you can call me back when you're ready!

Euny

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Topic Starter

Euny 2016-06-16T12:35:43+00:00

thanks for mod monstrata♥ gonna check tomorrow because i cant on pc today.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-06-16T13:09:24+00:00

peach peach apeach

Natsu

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Natsu 2016-06-18T20:05:52+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Natsu's Insane
00:12:095 (3,1) - I feel like these need to have a bit more distance since it looks ugly to have them practically touching eachother like thatthey aren't in game
00:27:009 (2,4,5) - Stack properly also this is stacked in game
00:51:286 (6,4) - You could stack these aswell ^
01:00:477 - You miss quite a strong beat here with the long slider you have. I don't see what the long slider is following so I suggest to map this beat. is to follow the hold sound instead
01:11:402 (3) - Same here ^
01:48:338 (3,2,3) - Stack its perfectly stacked in game
01:56:835 (2) - Consider shortening this to 01:57:009 - And having a circle at 01:57:095 - instead of the slidertail. I know that you are following the vocals but this would practically follow them aswell while also including the drumbeat! I think my current way is more simple and fit my map better
01:58:916 (5,1,2) - Stack :p its perfectly stacked in game
02:08:281 (3) - It's good to see that you are consistent with these but still. I really dislike them and thus recommend to change them. Here are the rest 02:19:379 (3) - 03:05:159 (3) - 03:16:257 (3) - same as before
02:59:610 (1) - I don't think this NC is necessary since the velocity change is quite minimal to be honest. It would also go well with the 1,2 comboing of the jumps before this. but it also fit the music
03:22:154 (1,2) - Maybe swap the NCs around for these? I think it would be benefitial here since the sv change is actually noticeable here. I'm covering cheerup ;c

Monstrata wrote:
Natsu

00:58:396 - There's beat here if you wanna stack a circle on 00:57:702 (3) - 's slider end. I really don't want to map that beat, i guess its fine to ignore it

Got metadata? Also Natsu what's your opinion on 00:13:136 (2,3,4,5) snapping here? Anyways you can call me back when you're ready! this is the best way for this part:

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Euny

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Euny 2016-06-18T20:43:15+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
SHASHASHA

00:13:136 (2,3,4,5) - This just sounds off for me if you're following vocals. ✔fixed
00:49:379 (1,2) - I would space this out more normally just cuz the spacing for 00:48:858 (1,2) - makes it seem like this could potentially be 1/4.✔fixed
00:51:806 (2,3,4,1,2) - These jumps are larger than the ones you use later like 00:54:061 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - etc... You might want to rearrange some circles since the drums kinda double after 00:53:020 - and you kinda reflect that with your hitsounding.✔fixed
01:14:870 (3,1) - I was really expecting a larger jump here after that huge jump on 01:14:176 (3,1) - .i try to make same as other same parts like 02:22:673 (2,3) - /03:19:551 (2,3) -
02:14:697 (6,1) - Larger jump here cuz you put a kiai burst here too xD.✔fixed
02:47:818 (3,4) - Too big imo. I don't see a need for such a large jump here, especially compared to the distance you use on other jumps. This jump actually makes it really hard to go into that stream, at least imo. I think you can buff places like 02:49:032 (2,3) - and 02:49:379 (4,1) - instead.✔fixed

Hard

00:27:182 (2,3,4) - I don't really like how you have a triplet so early on... Since you introduce 1/4 rhythm later in the song when its winding into the chorus. Q.Q then will too much same patterns again and again. i want to keep for 00:33:598 (1,2,3) - *6
Try a rhythm like this

Easy

01:02:731 (3,4,1) - Spacing here is a bit too uneven for me.✔fixed
~

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this is official links >> http://twice.jype.com/profile.asp
http://www.melon.com/album/detail.htm?albumId=2681333

Also Natsu what's your opinion on 00:13:136 (2,3,4,5) snapping here? we fixed. thanks for advice!
Anyways you can call me back when you're ready!oking > < thanks for mod!

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Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2016-06-20T22:36:34+00:00

순간 나쯔로 봄

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-20T22:37:33+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:

순간 나쯔로 봄

애잇 눈치채셨어.. 노린겁니다

Aerous

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Aerous 2016-06-22T04:09:03+00:00

<3

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-22T12:43:49+00:00

Aerous wrote:
<3

♥.♥

VTC

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VTC 2016-06-23T05:01:58+00:00

쌰 쌰 쌰

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-23T15:11:39+00:00

VTC wrote:
쌰 쌰 쌰

싸싸싸로봤잖아요 ㅜ!! 음.. 난 마귀.

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-06-24T02:38:55+00:00

Sorry for delay~ doublechecked the changes, and I'm fine with them. No other unrankable issues to be addressed, so heres your bubble! Good luck~

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-24T02:39:44+00:00

♥ tankyuuuu

Gero

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Gero 2016-06-24T17:31:34+00:00

Hello~

Changes/Fixes

Snapped some greenlines that were unsnapped.
Added a couple of jumps to improve the flow and playability of the last difficulty.
Fixed NCs in SHASHASHA.
Added/changed some hitsounds.

Log

12:06 Euny: natsu told me you want to mod to my map lol
12:06 Gero: yeah
12:06 Gero: could you np it?
12:06 Euny: yeah
12:07 Euny: ofc fren
12:07 *Euny is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/984516 TWICE - CHEER UP]
12:07 Gero: okay give me 20 minutes, I'm checking something right now
12:07 Euny: okay c:
12:14 Gero: okay I'm ready for it
12:14 Euny: oh great
12:15 Euny: haha
12:15 Gero: dling atm
12:15 Gero: I'm glad that I have support once again xD
12:16 Euny: i'm glad because you help me 😍
12:16 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/978382 TWICE - CHEER UP [SHASHASHA]]
12:16 Euny: 😍
12:16 Gero: okay let's do it
12:16 Euny: okay
12:17 Gero: 00:07:240 (5) - You forgot to add an new combo at here
12:17 Euny: fixed
12:17 Euny: thanks
12:17 Gero: 00:07:760 (3) - How about to use whistle at the head of this slider? it sounds way too better than without it
12:17 Gero: you should try it
12:18 Euny: oh nice suggestion accept it
12:18 Gero: 00:16:517 - I think you could add something clickable at this part, like a triple or something like that
12:19 Euny: sure
12:19 Euny: i'll make this to triple
12:19 Gero: 00:33:598 - Ayyy I just noticed that this song sounds like "reggaeton" it's a kind of genre of music here xD
12:20 Gero: hahahaha
12:20 Gero: 00:56:142 (3) - Clap?
12:20 Euny: okay fixed both LOL
12:21 Gero: 00:57:355 (2,3) - Hmmmm... this is not that bad, but could be improved just a little bit, move 3 at X:244 Y:203 to make it more consistent each others
12:21 Gero: 01:00:217 - Triple again, maybe
12:22 Gero: 01:04:119 (5) - New combo
12:22 Euny: nice fixed
12:22 Gero: 01:22:153 (1,2) - How about to stack 2 with 1?
12:22 Euny: fixed
12:23 Gero: 01:46:257 (4) - Ops, you forgot a clap here
12:23 Gero: 02:04:119 - This green line seems unsnapped, fix it at 1/4
12:23 Gero: 02:10:015 (3) - NC?
12:23 Euny: ooooooooooops
12:23 Euny: okie
12:24 Gero: 02:40:882 (3,2) - To make a nice pattern, what do you think to stack 2 in 3?
12:24 Euny: thanks
12:25 Euny: i'll put 2 on 3's tail
12:25 Gero: 02:59:957 (2) - Whistle at the head of the slider, due the sound at the background music
12:25 Euny: added
12:25 Gero: okay that's all, you can update it and poke me when you're ready <3
12:25 Euny: okie!! thanks gero
12:26 Euny: 😍

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-24T17:33:00+00:00

헤로헤로헤로❤

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Gero 2016-06-24T17:33:21+00:00

~ Qualified ~

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Euny 2016-06-24T17:34:12+00:00

muchas gracias !!

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Congraduation

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-24T17:41:34+00:00

should i thanks for bully? LOL

P o M u T a

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P o M u T a 2016-06-24T18:16:36+00:00

graduation!

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-24T18:23:46+00:00

it become change to change weird words lol

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Aminance 2016-06-25T02:52:50+00:00

Excelent map!

Norman

Norman 2016-06-25T13:21:06+00:00

하트 축하드려요 샤샤샤

Euny

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Euny 2016-06-25T13:28:31+00:00

thanks aminance!

노만님고마어용 샤샤샤♥

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VTC 2016-07-01T15:40:29+00:00

휴가때제일먼저 플레이할곡으로 찜

군바리 엉엉

축하드립니다 ^^!^^!

Euny

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Euny 2016-07-01T19:53:15+00:00

VTC wrote:
휴가때제일먼저 플레이할곡으로 찜

군바리 엉엉

축하드립니다 ^^!^^!

ㅠㅠ 감사합니다. 지켜주시는 덕분에 잘 지내고있을게요 조심히 다녀와요!..

Natsu

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gratz bobi!

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Euny 2016-07-02T22:43:27+00:00

사랑을 담아서 디바!

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Sonnyc 2016-07-03T11:42:17+00:00

00:24:147 - 00:25:188 - 00:29:003 - 00:29:350 - 00:30:043 - 00:31:431 - 00:31:431 - 00:32:124 - 00:32:124 - 등등 하드에서 보컬은 다채롭게 노래부르고 있는데 정작 박자는 죄다 1/2 뿐이라서 사실 좀 음악이 잘 표현됐다기 보단 너무 반복적으로 느껴졌어요.. 그 여파로 결국 00:38:107 (3,4) - 여기의 샤샤샤도 별로 다르게 안느껴지고 그냥 흘러가버린듯,, 키아이는 1/2박 위주로 노래가 흘러가서 비교적 자연스러웠는데, 키아이 아닌곳들이 좀 그랬네요. 비유하자면, 이지에서 박자 상관없이 죄다 1/1로 도배한 느낌이었달까요. 나중에 참고 되셨으면 좋겠습니다.

랭크 축하드리고 수고하셨습니다.

Euny

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Euny 2016-07-03T11:46:36+00:00

조언감사해요! 나중에 컴터할수있을때 체크해보구 앞으론 더 잘 만들어볼게요!

Dominus

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Dominus 2016-09-05T10:09:20+00:00

mina <3

My Angel Raphi