Sakura Hana wrote:

Weee sorry for the delay but real life stuff got in the way orz

[Frantic]
Increase approach rate? so many approach circle add unnecessary confusion.maybe too fast,but well,fixed.
03:36:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Due to the kiai flash, light background and this combo color makes approach circles harder to see for a while, i recommend you colorhax here to make it a different color.

[Koko's Taiko]
Preview point is different than the others.
Missing "quo" on tags.
Why is the Taiko diff the only one without kiai? normally it would be the opposite since Taiko usually has Go! Go! Time
01:55:609 (417) - Big Don instead?
02:00:291 (433) - Unsnapped.

[AHard]
Tags are missing.

[quo's Normal]
This difficulty is much too hard to be the easiest diff of the mapset, either this needs to be toned down or a new diff needs to be added, if you decide to not tone this down then... AR+2 XD so that it matches the slider speed.i'll add easy diff.

Nice, good luck with your beatmap!~

Cirno wrote:

hi~

as for your request:

渣mod

Below are just suggestions, feel free to ignore if you don't agree with me.
[General]
The upper part of ntr46cel.jpg should be cleared and set white?
Timing is quite off during the last few seconds (the "hey hey hey" part)

[quo's normal]
Difficulty name should be [quo's Normal], I guess
00:26:384 (3) - maybe remove the last repeat, and add two circles at 00:27:449 and 00:27:662, a slider from 00:28:088 to 00:28:407
00:31:921 - add circle here?
00:40:013 (3) - remove the last repeat, and add circles at 00:41:078, 00:41:291 and 00:41:717 ?
00:48:957 (1) - remove the finish sound at 00:49:170 (the first repeat)
01:03:011 (timing) - lower the volume a bit... it's too loud
01:04:715 (3) - start at 01:04:502
01:14:085 (3,4) - replace with a slider from 01:14:085 to 01:14:297 ?
01:14:936 (5) - replace with a slide from 01:14:723 to 01:15:362 ?
01:16:640 (3) - new combo as before
01:18:343 (5) - start at 01:18:131
01:30:269 (1) - end at 01:33:676
* Many parts after have problems identical or similar to the ones listed before, so I'm not listing all of them
02:06:470 (5) - remove the finish sound at 02:06:683 (the first repeat), well the same as before...
02:12:219 (4) - remove the finish sound on the slider end 02:12:645
02:12:858 (5) - shorten the slider path, so that the first repeat lie here -> 02:13:177 and not 02:13:284, And remove the finish sound on the first repeat
02:16:265 (5) - shorten the slider path, so that the first repeat lie here -> 02:16:585 and not 02:16:691, And remove the finish sound on the first repeat
02:33:727 (7) - remove the last repeat and remove that normal-whistle sound. seriously that sounds bad.
02:47:355 (7) - ^
02:52:892 (1) - end at 02:55:022. also move the next timing section there. kiai should end with the spinner imo
03:41:444 (2) - remove the normal-whistle...
03:49:110 (3) - ^
03:52:091 (7) - ^
04:08:275 (3) - make symmetry with 04:06:998 (1), or you might want to arrange 04:06:998 (1,2,3) in an equilateral triangular fashion

[AHard]
* (If we take "A" as a prefix, "AHard" means "not hard" =w= well just joking
00:55:132 (2,3) - move up a bit?
01:04:502 (3,4) - maybe remove 3 and make 4 start at 01:04:502 ? (keep the end at 01:05:141)
03:05:669 (1,2) - use 0.5x or 0.75x inherited section here? now the sliders are a bit long and doesn't look that good
03:09:502 (2,3,4) - spacing is not even
03:11:205 (7,8,9) - ^

[Frantic]
* Many sliders are imperfect, like 00:23:616 (1) 00:25:533 (1) 00:30:430 (1,3) etc. it doesn't matter much though but if you fixed them the patterns would certainly look better =w=
00:35:754 (1) - imperfect overlap (slider end and 00:34:902 (3))
00:53:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - move right 1 grid ? (well I know nazi is bad
01:16:640 (2) - you should adjust the red anchor so that the slider turns exactly at 01:16:853 . you can navigate to 01:16:853 and drag the anchor point until it's right on the slider ball.
01:30:269 (5) - personally I think it would be better if this slider could be a wave shape
02:27:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - x.x this is a bit hard to read, you win
02:52:040 (5) - same as 01:30:269 (5) ...
04:03:591 (5) - ^

=w= Nice mapset overall~ /me stars
And good luck!

Krisom wrote:

Mystica's-
These difficulty settings are not easy at all. AR at least -3 and OD -2.fix.
00:40:439 (1,1) - The end of the spinner is too close to the start of the slider for an easy @140 BPM
00:45:976 (1) - When making these kind of sliders, you can avoid the sharp curves by adding more sliderpoints. I strongly suggest you to make it look more like this.
01:00:456 (1,1) - Same as 00:40:439, be careful with spinners on the easiest diff.
01:48:582 (1,1) - ^
02:09:025 (1,1) - ^
02:16:265 (1,1) - ^
Why is this not mapped to the end...?mapper will fix.


quo's-
SUch a hell high AR for a normal! Reduce it by 2. HP could use a -1 too
01:32:824 - Make a custom break start at 01:33:676 - Instead of where it starts now
02:55:022 - Make a custom break start at 02:55:447 - Instead of where is starts now
·Up to 00:48:531 - on this diff there are just 2 claps, wich belongs to the start and end of the same slider. Add more hitsounds! there are 64 un-hitsounded objects to this point!
00:56:197 (2,3) - Spacing, (3) is too close to (2)
01:03:011 - up to 01:33:676 - You don't know how monotone was to play this Kiai time. Everything is 1/1, there are absolutely no 1/2 notes, and there are no hitsouunds! I think i heard one normal finish and that'd be it!
*hears the rest of the diff*
If you have problems in making intresting hitsounding patterns, you can always ask someone who is better than you to hitsound your diff for you.
03:27:389 (3,4) - Spacing. (4) is too far away from (3)mapper will fix.

AHard-
·This is one of those reasons on why I like to the the whole diffs myself. This diff is good, and quo's is decent too, but if you look more carefully to they, quo's is supposed to be the easier one and yet the distance between 1/2 notes is bigger than this one, wich is supposed to be harder. Oh, and the sliderspeed is the same :3
00:15:311 (1,2,3,4) - You could possibly unstack this in a more intresting formation.
00:41:717 (4,5) - I'd remove the clap at (5), it makes the pattern sound awkward.
04:06:998 (1,2,3) - You could possibly unstack this in a more intresting formation.mapper will fix.

Frantic-
00:22:551 (3) - Add a whistle at the start
00:32:134 (5,1) - If youre gonna make such a sudden spacing change, I suggest you to switch the new combo from (1) to (5), that way it's mroe intuitive and you avoid a color stack
01:51:776 (1,2,1) - Here, I'd remove the new combo from the first (1), add a new combo at (2) and remove the last note's new combo.
02:26:912 (1,2,3,4) - Out of all the x2 spacings, this is the only one that really made no sense at all, at least make the distances even! (2)(3)'s distance is waaaay bigger than (1)(2)'s and (3)(4)'s!, it'll make anyone think that (2)(3) are one whole beat apart.
02:27:764 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can make a better pattern than an antijump here, it doesn't fits the music at all and, well, it doesnt plays that well neither looks great.sorry,i don'y think so.
03:18:659 - up to 03:30:158 - This part doesnt seems to have the music in mind at all. Sure, it goes soft so you add a x0.5 sliderspeed section, but there are so many 1/2 notes that are so anticlimatic^
03:47:619 (2,3,4) - This spacing goes wrong in-game due to (3) being stacked with 03:48:258 (5,6,7,8,9) - , there are 2 ways to solve this, move 03:48:258 (5,6,7,8,9) - to another place or reduce stack leniency.
04:06:998 (1,2,3) - You could possibly unstack this in a more intresting formation.huh?

Won't mod taiko right now because you have not updated it. But just to make sure, the past file you have is missing "Mystica" in the taiko tags.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking, rechecking
[Frantic]
The constant overlapping + change of direction is really confusing to play, if you want to keep this i'd recommend reducing HP drain by at least 1 tick, although it's still gonna hurt people wanting to FC.
2nd break is too long, shorten it, aim for a max of 15 seconds.
01:16:427 (1,2) - Switch new combo (repeat for any instances it happens).

[Koko's Taiko]
02:00:291 (432) - Unsnapped.

[AHard]
00:34:902 (1,2,3) - This sounds and looks really awkward with the song, maybe adding some finishes might help.
00:52:790 (1,2,3,4) - You could pretty much remove (1) and make (2,3,4) jumps.
01:14:404 (3) - Mapped to silence? instead you could add a note at 01:14:723
01:15:788 (1,2,1,2) - This shape looks really weird, there's a new combo on the 3rd note which goes with the vocal, yet the jumps seem like a pattern on their own, and removing the new combo probably wouldnt make sense either, i dont know, up to you how you fix it.
02:11:154 (1) - Add a finish?
02:25:635 (4) - This slider is ending on nothing?
02:29:042 (4) - ^
02:34:579 (1) - Feels more like 2 notes rather than a slider to me.
Feel free to check for any instances of any i pointed out that repeats, so that i dont have to post a wall of text.
I like maps and combos to make sense with the music, keep the same instrument (or vocal) throughout the same combo or otherwise it will play weird, just remember, this is a game, not an art-project, and the map must be made taking the song in mind.

[quo's Normal]
Needs a looooooot of work with hitsounds.
01:45:388 (3,4,5) - Dont use uneven stacks on a Normal please.
Same comment about the 2nd break.

[Mystica's Easy]
Dont stack notes at the end of sliders on an Easy please.
02:24:783 (1,2,3,4) - Dont use these stacks on an Easy please.
02:30:746 (7) - New combo.
Finish the map

Krisom wrote:

Mystica's-
These difficulty settings are not easy at all. AR at least -3 and OD -2. finall all decrease 2
00:40:439 (1,1) - The end of the spinner is too close to the start of the slider for an easy @140 BPM Well.I think that's fit XD
00:45:976 (1) - When making these kind of sliders, you can avoid the sharp curves by adding more sliderpoints. I strongly suggest you to make it look more like this. ur.....I am too lazy to remake it.I will keep in mind.Thanks.
01:00:456 (1,1) - Same as 00:40:439, be careful with spinners on the easiest diff. ^
01:48:582 (1,1) - ^
02:09:025 (1,1) - ^
02:16:265 (1,1) - ^
Why is this not mapped to the end...? As a easy diff,There is no need to map 4minutes.Because most new players can't play such long time.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Mystica's Easy]
Dont stack notes at the end of sliders on an Easy please.
02:24:783 (1,2,3,4) - Dont use these stacks on an Easy please. fixed
02:30:746 (7) - New combo. k.
Finish the map As a easy diff,There is no need to map 4minutes.Because most new players can't play such long time.

arien666 wrote:

orz, sorry once again orz;;;
[Anyway good luck ;_;]

swish wrote:

quo's Normal ..