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3倍 Ice cream!!!!!
gogo :3
아무 이유 없...는게 아니라 SB가 너무 좋아서 별!
[Another]
점프 다 좋고 히트사운드 다 좋네요
다만 걸린다면 노말 히트사운드파트에서 볼륨이 너무 큰게 아닌가 싶네요
그리고 [Hyper]처럼 커스텀 히트사운드로 드럼파트를 처리하는걸 추천합니다. 간혹 사람들이 엇박으로 쳤을때 어찌되는지는 아시리라 믿어요.
[Hyper]
Looks great
[Standard]
01:38:850 (1) - 다음 노트랑 너무 가까운것 같아요 가장 쉬운 난이도 치고는... Some Body Scream! 에서 Scream! 할때 스피너가 시작하게끔 하는게 어떨까요? 물론 스피너의 길이 그래도 옮기는걸로요. 그다음 원래 스피너가 끝났어야할 부분에 노트 추가. 타이밍 섹션이 노트 위에 있지 않게끔 옮기는것도 잊지 마시구요
후아 새벽 2시에 모딩이라니 @_@
점프 다 좋고 히트사운드 다 좋네요
다만 걸린다면 노말 히트사운드파트에서 볼륨이 너무 큰게 아닌가 싶네요
그리고 [Hyper]처럼 커스텀 히트사운드로 드럼파트를 처리하는걸 추천합니다. 간혹 사람들이 엇박으로 쳤을때 어찌되는지는 아시리라 믿어요.
[Hyper]
Looks great
[Standard]
01:38:850 (1) - 다음 노트랑 너무 가까운것 같아요 가장 쉬운 난이도 치고는... Some Body Scream! 에서 Scream! 할때 스피너가 시작하게끔 하는게 어떨까요? 물론 스피너의 길이 그래도 옮기는걸로요. 그다음 원래 스피너가 끝났어야할 부분에 노트 추가. 타이밍 섹션이 노트 위에 있지 않게끔 옮기는것도 잊지 마시구요
후아 새벽 2시에 모딩이라니 @_@
[general]
preview time not yet set
audio lead-in : 1~1.5 sec
disable countdown
The vocal part should be even more softer...
[SB sound]
00:27:172 - this seems weird to me
[Insane]
01:16:903 (3,4,5,6) - sounds odd to me, delete (4,5) and start (6) 1/2 eariler
[Hyper]
00:46:908 (1~5,1,2,3) - confusing orz
01:18:514 (3) - down 1 grid
01:30:796 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:37:440 - delete break
looks good, star~
preview time not yet set
audio lead-in : 1~1.5 sec
disable countdown
The vocal part should be even more softer...
[SB sound]
00:27:172 - this seems weird to me
[Insane]
01:16:903 (3,4,5,6) - sounds odd to me, delete (4,5) and start (6) 1/2 eariler
[Hyper]
00:46:908 (1~5,1,2,3) - confusing orz
01:18:514 (3) - down 1 grid
01:30:796 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:37:440 - delete break
looks good, star~
SAMBA ICE CREAM!
..
[General]
ADD lead-in at least 2 sec please ;_;
[SB]
About '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' , Check each diff's saying :3
[Standard]
'8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' are covered with notes... Would you consider about this :3?
01:17:910 (1,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
[Hyper]
Make sure that '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' appears on same position ;_; [I mean make same (x,y) position on SB editing :3]
00:46:903 (4,5,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid up?
[Another]
Make sure that '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' appears on same position like [Hyper] ;_;
Meow :3
ADD lead-in at least 2 sec please ;_;
[SB]
About '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' , Check each diff's saying :3
[Standard]
'8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' are covered with notes... Would you consider about this :3?
01:17:910 (1,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid left?
[Hyper]
Make sure that '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' appears on same position ;_; [I mean make same (x,y) position on SB editing :3]
00:46:903 (4,5,2) - [Nazi] How about move 1 grid up?
[Another]
Make sure that '8.png','7.png' ~ '1.png' appears on same position like [Hyper] ;_;
Meow :3
S T A R
» Beatmap Graveyard
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三倍 ice cream~~
[Overall]
The files "all that i want now.png, feeling like.png, heaven.jpg and SB.jpg" are too big. They should be at a maximum of 800x600 if used for SB and of 1024x768 if used as a Background Image.
[Difficulties]
[31's Taiko]
Add the same Audio Lead-In and Preview Point of the other difficulties, since they're missing.
[NTK Taiko Oni]
You have 6 unsnapped notes, check AIMod. Resnap them manually would be better here.
That's all, I think... pretty good.
The files "all that i want now.png, feeling like.png, heaven.jpg and SB.jpg" are too big. They should be at a maximum of 800x600 if used for SB and of 1024x768 if used as a Background Image.
[Difficulties]
[31's Taiko]
Add the same Audio Lead-In and Preview Point of the other difficulties, since they're missing.
[NTK Taiko Oni]
You have 6 unsnapped notes, check AIMod. Resnap them manually would be better here.
That's all, I think... pretty good.
Sorry for double post but yeah, have to make you fix something still before bubble.
Your Background Image (heaven.jpg) have a size of 1151x767, which is unacceptable. Reduce it to a maximum of 1024x768.
That's it
Your Background Image (heaven.jpg) have a size of 1151x767, which is unacceptable. Reduce it to a maximum of 1024x768.
That's it
Topic Starter
oh I forgot itosuplayer111 wrote:
Sorry for double post but yeah, have to make you fix something still before bubble.
Your Background Image (heaven.jpg) have a size of 1151x767, which is unacceptable. Reduce it to a maximum of 1024x768.
That's it
Finally seems ready
Bubbled~
Bubbled~
-The two maps I have seen like this both have Ryu as the artist without the star next to it, might need to look into that more to try and get everything consistent
-You could make another lyric sb for the "in heaven" part that is repeated after it is said the first time but not too important
-You should cut some of the unnecessary transparency off of almost every storyboarded thing you are using in the folder
-By today's standards your source should just be 'beatmania IIDX'. Everything else can go in the tags
-For the lyrics are you sure it isn't simply "Somebody Scream!" instead of what you have now?
-Keep the kiai the same on all of the standard difficulties if possible
Standard:
-I suggest at least AR -1 for the easiest difficulty
Hyper:
00:18:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you might as well add some whistles to the entire section after this like the other difficulties have
01:36:232 (3,1) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden by the previous hit bursts
Another:
00:39:856 (4,5) - kind of odd place for a jump
Some parts could sound slightly better with some more hitsounds if you wanted to go through and add a few in places
Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble
-You could make another lyric sb for the "in heaven" part that is repeated after it is said the first time but not too important
-You should cut some of the unnecessary transparency off of almost every storyboarded thing you are using in the folder
-By today's standards your source should just be 'beatmania IIDX'. Everything else can go in the tags
-For the lyrics are you sure it isn't simply "Somebody Scream!" instead of what you have now?
-Keep the kiai the same on all of the standard difficulties if possible
Standard:
-I suggest at least AR -1 for the easiest difficulty
Hyper:
00:18:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you might as well add some whistles to the entire section after this like the other difficulties have
01:36:232 (3,1) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden by the previous hit bursts
Another:
00:39:856 (4,5) - kind of odd place for a jump
Some parts could sound slightly better with some more hitsounds if you wanted to go through and add a few in places
Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble
Second Heaven 
Another beatmap graveyarded with a popped bubble... Do BATs ever bother to recheck?
^This + star.
Ijah_old
Because BATs don't bother to recheck.
Revived~
+ I am busy, sorry for not having an unlimited amount of time. Will try and recheck tomorrow if I can get on osu
EDIT:
You didn't need to delete the entire storyboard but ok up to you
You can keep the kiai like that on hyper seeing as it is a guest difficulty I guess
Rebubbled~
+ I am busy, sorry for not having an unlimited amount of time. Will try and recheck tomorrow if I can get on osu
EDIT:
You didn't need to delete the entire storyboard but ok up to you
You can keep the kiai like that on hyper seeing as it is a guest difficulty I guess
Rebubbled~
I like it but personally I would keep the stack leniency to 0 but that's up to you.
In case you don't know, the only way (that I know of) to do this is to go to "file" in the editor and click "Open .osu in notepad". Then exit the editor and go back to the page you should have just opened. Look under [General] there should be one that says "StackLeniency: " change whatever number you had there to 0, then save the file and exit out. BUT if you go back to "song setup" and click "OK" at the bottom of the setup page, it will go back to 0.2 so be careful... if you even decide to change the stack leniency. And you may have already known how to do this... maybe even an easier way, so I might have posted this long paragraph for nothing but oh well. XD
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked!
In case you don't know, the only way (that I know of) to do this is to go to "file" in the editor and click "Open .osu in notepad". Then exit the editor and go back to the page you should have just opened. Look under [General] there should be one that says "StackLeniency: " change whatever number you had there to 0, then save the file and exit out. BUT if you go back to "song setup" and click "OK" at the bottom of the setup page, it will go back to 0.2 so be careful... if you even decide to change the stack leniency. And you may have already known how to do this... maybe even an easier way, so I might have posted this long paragraph for nothing but oh well. XD
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked!
Stack leniency 0 is unrankablejc476 wrote:
I like it but personally I would keep the stack leniency to 0 but that's up to you.
In case you don't know, the only way (that I know of) to do this is to go to "file" in the editor and click "Open .osu in notepad". Then exit the editor and go back to the page you should have just opened. Look under [General] there should be one that says "StackLeniency: " change whatever number you had there to 0, then save the file and exit out. BUT if you go back to "song setup" and click "OK" at the bottom of the setup page, it will go back to 0.2 so be careful... if you even decide to change the stack leniency. And you may have already known how to do this... maybe even an easier way, so I might have posted this long paragraph for nothing but oh well. XD
Good Luck! Hope this gets ranked!
I have some reminder.
- Another
01:15:091 (2,4) - Not a perfect cover.
01:39:655 (X,X,X) I think you can put note on 01:39:756, 01:39:856.
- Hyper
00:48:313 (4,5,6) - Not the same spacing.
- Another
01:15:091 (2,4) - Not a perfect cover.
01:39:655 (X,X,X) I think you can put note on 01:39:756, 01:39:856.
- Hyper
00:48:313 (4,5,6) - Not the same spacing.
Not the best spread I see... but oh well, what can we do about it. Also, the above is pretty picky, so it isn't really necessary to change (it wasn't noticeable while playing for me)
Ranks.
Ranks.
>w</
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
ಠ_ಠ
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
Somebody's scream!!!!!!
ಠ_ಠ
SAMBA ICE CREAM
SOME BADDIE'S CREAM
I LOVE ICE CREAM
三倍冰淇淋!
Topic Starter
SOMEBODY SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAM!!!!!!!!!
A tiny thing in NTK Taiko Oni:
01:23:548 (1) - It's bad to extend the spinner to the 1st beat of then next measure cause unlike osu standard the spinner usually ends before the point that you set.
Other than this it's quite nice one.
01:23:548 (1) - It's bad to extend the spinner to the 1st beat of then next measure cause unlike osu standard the spinner usually ends before the point that you set.
Other than this it's quite nice one.
E I I I I yay
To think that just half a year ago this map wouldn't even have been considered for ranking because of the diff spread...o.o
To think that just half a year ago this map wouldn't even have been considered for ranking because of the diff spread...o.o
it's like 1,5 years old lollepidopodus wrote:
A tiny thing in NTK Taiko Oni:
01:23:548 (1) - It's bad to extend the spinner to the 1st beat of then next measure cause unlike osu standard the spinner usually ends before the point that you set.
Other than this it's quite nice one.
Just saying lol
yangzd88 wrote:
:DOh shit I triple posted..RailgunXsama teach me how to star more than 3 times?
lol can BAT delete the other 2 stars
Congratz~
Topic Starter
thx all XD
Why isn't this (bga) in here Dx http://www.4shared.com/file/eJ_z2MKL/Be ... Heaven.htm