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Ikaros
8-) 8-)
WATCH OUT! VERY SERIOUS MOD INCOMING!


CLICK ME!
LOL TRICKED YOU
i'm sry, go next


NOW CLICK ME!
God bless your soul(s), a DnB song without the usual spam of 5-note streams. <3

I was going to seriously mod this, but in all honesty, it would probably just be a collection of "fix DS here and there" so i won't do that.
The map plays well, i had fun with it, i passed it on mouse, meaning it's not hard to read. Difficulty settings seem fine, nothing felt off.
I was kinda missing custom hitsounds, but i guess making everything Soft should work too.

I don't see a reason why this map wouldn't be rankable, but hey i'm just a shitmapper, what do i know, right? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

first and only try, lol

I'd like to see this get ranked.

Don't you dare give me kds for that :<
Topic Starter
Zaphkael
Thank you for the testplay and for the kind words!
YellowManul
Hi from my queue owo)b

Farewell

I recommend you to change "AudioLeadIn" from 0 to 2000, because the map starts from the beginnig of the mp3 (You can change it in .osu with your notepad)

00:35:555 (5,5) - You can try to stack these, idk
00:45:555 (4,5) - I think they're just really close. Try to expand distance a bit - http://puu.sh/qIfbs/377bb029eb.jpg
01:04:865 (1) - I'd add a spinner here, but not these weird slider owo
01:11:762 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - In this section try to put new combo every white big tick, otherwise it's just spamming with NC's :<
01:50:727 (2,4) - fix this blanket (and recheck others too, maybe)
01:58:658 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - you dont need too much nc's ;w;
03:17:624 (2) - I'd put NC here
04:22:451 (2) - I'd add a note here, something like this - http://puu.sh/qIg1K/999c5d0989.jpg
05:06:244 (1) - Idk if you should put NC here

Map is pretty neat, jumpy so i wouldn't find a lot here owo'

Good luck with the map! :)
Topic Starter
Zaphkael
Thanks for the mod! I have some problems with accessing my pc so I'll apply the mod and reply when i can.
Topic Starter
Zaphkael

YellowManul wrote:

Hi from my queue owo)b

Farewell

I recommend you to change "AudioLeadIn" from 0 to 2000, because the map starts from the beginnig of the mp3 (You can change it in .osu with your notepad) sure, but normally osu does that itself now

00:35:555 (5,5) - You can try to stack these, idk done
00:45:555 (4,5) - I think they're just really close. Try to expand distance a bit - http://puu.sh/qIfbs/377bb029eb.jpg done
01:04:865 (1) - I'd add a spinner here, but not these weird slider owo nah a spinner doesn't fit here, sorry
01:11:762 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - In this section try to put new combo every white big tick, otherwise it's just spamming with NC's :< i have it every 4 notes because this part kills a lot of players otherwise. 8 note combos are brutal here.
01:50:727 (2,4) - fix this blanket (and recheck others too, maybe) done
01:58:658 (1,2,1,2,1,1) - you dont need too much nc's ;w; here it helps but isn't needed, so removed some.


Map is pretty neat, jumpy so i wouldn't find a lot here owo'

Good luck with the map! :)
Thanks a lot!
I'm so sorry for the delay, I couldn't get my PC
ItashaS13
Hi hi :D


  • add kiai times
    add tags-
    rythm recommendation for the beginning 00:01:072 (6) - move this slider to 00:00:555 - so it fit better with the vocals http://prntscr.com/ceeeea
    00:04:003 - you can do something similar here, just need to change the position of the sliders to fit better with the music but its on you, you don't really need to change this~
    00:05:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why increase the ds here? the music doesnt change
    00:08:313 (1) - make this a blanket with 00:07:796 (6) - http://prntscr.com/ceeflt in the case you do this, make the other shape 00:07:969 (7) - equal to 00:08:313 (1) -
    00:07:710 (5,4) - stack there
    00:29:003 (1) - make this a blanket with 00:28:313 (3) - http://prntscr.com/ceeh17
    00:32:624 - I think you missed a triplet here?
    01:04:865 (1) - move this bit down and make a blanket with 01:04:520 (6) - like http://prntscr.com/ceel0y
    01:14:520 - why not add a stream from here u.u? you will have a lot of jumps with single circles after this ,-;
    01:38:831 - hmm you missed a strong beat here
    01:39:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd say to move all these slider to start at red ticks, so you fit better the vocals, its on you
    01:56:762 (4,2) - stack? <no need to stack since you got a lot of other parts like this, but I think this one needs the stack>
    03:53:141 (1) - suggestion - http://prntscr.com/ceeoqv
hope this helps, gl gl
Topic Starter
Zaphkael

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi hi :D


  • add kiai times I don't know where tbh
    add tags- I don't think any tags are needed
    rythm recommendation for the beginning 00:01:072 (6) - move this slider to 00:00:555 - so it fit better with the vocals http://prntscr.com/ceeeea i tried something
    00:04:003 - you can do something similar here, just need to change the position of the sliders to fit better with the music but its on you, you don't really need to change this~ yah i think this fits
    00:05:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why increase the ds here? the music doesnt change to make the pattern more interesting. i reduced it a bit.
    00:08:313 (1) - make this a blanket with 00:07:796 (6) - http://prntscr.com/ceeflt in the case you do this, make the other shape 00:07:969 (7) - equal to 00:08:313 (1) - done
    00:07:710 (5,4) - stack there no, as that would ruin the flow
    00:29:003 (1) - make this a blanket with 00:28:313 (3) - http://prntscr.com/ceeh17 k
    00:32:624 - I think you missed a triplet here? i stopped using them there because the music changes a little bit
    01:04:865 (1) - move this bit down and make a blanket with 01:04:520 (6) - like http://prntscr.com/ceel0y sure
    01:14:520 - why not add a stream from here u.u? you will have a lot of jumps with single circles after this ,-; i know, but i really dislike a stream here. If more people say this, I'll change it.
    01:38:831 - hmm you missed a strong beat here fixed
    01:39:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd say to move all these slider to start at red ticks, so you fit better the vocals, its on you i like it so i added it, but if people complain about playability (it feels odd) i will change it back
    01:56:762 (4,2) - stack? <no need to stack since you got a lot of other parts like this, but I think this one needs the stack> done
    03:53:141 (1) - suggestion - http://prntscr.com/ceeoqv not my part, but ill keep it here so you see that i didnt forget it xd
hope this helps, gl gl
it helped a lot
thanks a lot!
diraimur
uhhhhh
why are you using 128 kbps mp3 when there is FREE download available on soundcloud for higher quality?
here i gotchu fam :^) http://puu.sh/r6lBZ/1cbbc5f8f2.zip
nvm they are esentially almost same quality because reasons

-where are whistles, please use whistles to the rhythm ;w; wait you didnt finish hitsounding. wait this set isnt in pending. wait my mod q had rule that it must be in pending. YOU BETRAYED ME. NO.
-00:01:072 (5) - clap??
-00:05:555 (1,4) - is dis overlap necessary
-00:06:589 (6,1) - ^
-00:06:589 (6,7,1) - explain spacing thx
-00:07:969 - tfw no clap
-00:10:900 (6) - explain clap
-00:14:520 (4,6) - s1 kill me why overlaps
-00:20:210 (5,7) - tbh i want to cry
-00:25:210 (3,6) - ok this is last one im not going to mention overlaps or almost overlaps from now on as i guess you get the idea from now on
-00:45:555 (4,5) - HOLY. what is this spacing. what is it.
-00:58:658 (2,3,4) - i want to cry, literally none of these sliders blanket with eachother. ok i know you never intended them to be blankets, but question is; why?
-01:04:865 (1,1) - I KNOW I TOLD YOU I WOULDNT MENTION OVERLAPS BUT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PLS NO
-01:14:865 - you shouldve used 1/4's after this point i think
-rest of the mod is preeeeetty much the same, get rid of overlaps, fix blankets, improve your sliders bla bla bla
-oh also 01:59:348 - is clickable sound yet you finished with slider end congratz.
Topic Starter
Zaphkael
Hitsounds by sergio and mod reply to come soon™
=monday most likely
zev
oh sweet hitsunds xd, i'll mod this later i'm sleepy.


ps: please be responsible xd
Topic Starter
Zaphkael

diraimur wrote:

uhhhhh
why are you using 128 kbps mp3 when there is FREE download available on soundcloud for higher quality?
here i gotchu fam :^) http://puu.sh/r6lBZ/1cbbc5f8f2.zip
nvm they are esentially almost same quality because reasons lmao yes fml

-where are whistles, please use whistles to the rhythm ;w; wait you didnt finish hitsounding. wait this set isnt in pending. wait my mod q had rule that it must be in pending. YOU BETRAYED ME. NO. I DIDNT BETRAY Y- okay maybe a little
-00:01:072 (5) - clap??
-00:05:555 (1,4) - is dis overlap necessary no
-00:06:589 (6,1) - ^ okay
-00:06:589 (6,7,1) - explain spacing thx itsa pattrn
-00:07:969 - tfw no clap
-00:10:900 (6) - explain clap
-00:14:520 (4,6) - s1 kill me why overlaps PLEASE it fits nice within that slider
-00:20:210 (5,7) - tbh i want to cry oke
-00:25:210 (3,6) - ok this is last one im not going to mention overlaps or almost overlaps from now on as i guess you get the idea from now on THEY DONT EVEN OVERLAP
-00:45:555 (4,5) - HOLY. what is this spacing. what is it. i was told people would love it D: changed a bit
-00:58:658 (2,3,4) - i want to cry, literally none of these sliders blanket with eachother. ok i know you never intended them to be blankets, but question is; why? cuz theyre hard to do it ok but K WHAT YOU WANT
-01:04:865 (1,1) - I KNOW I TOLD YOU I WOULDNT MENTION OVERLAPS BUT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA PLS NO ok blanket it is
-01:14:865 - you shouldve used 1/4's after this point i think OKE
-rest of the mod is preeeeetty much the same, get rid of overlaps, fix blankets, improve your sliders bla bla bla fku my sliders are fine
overlaps are looked at
blankets as well

-oh also 01:59:348 - is clickable sound yet you finished with slider end congratz. but effectssssssssssssss
thanks diri luv u

SERGIO I WANT YOUR BABIES HITSOUNDS
Dznutz
I really like this map. You made it onto my list. Great song choice too. Keep up the good work
Topic Starter
Zaphkael
Thank you for your kind words!
ItashaS13
Hi from my modding Queue
-I already modded this map, I will do a quick recheck so.. NO KUDOSU!


  • Farewell
    add kiai section
    00:12:796 (2,3,4) - why is the spacing different?
    00:07:969 (1,1) - hmm wtf with this NC xD?¡
    00:15:210 (8,3,4,5) - avoid overlap, so move the triplet
    00:16:589 (1) - stack its end with the 2?
    00:18:831 (4,5) - why is this spacing short while the 5 has a strong beat, 00:18:486 (3,4) - the spacing between the end of the slider and the 4 its longer than 4 and 5, but the end of the slider its a quiet sound, and also, the 4 is, but the 5 its a strong beat, so it should have more spacing.. ENPHASIS
    00:29:348 (2,3,4,5) - this part has more spacing than the rest but the song didnt really change or anything.. so why?
    00:30:727 (2,3,4) - se.. again a long spacing on 2 quiet sounds.. please fix and check all the parts like this I may have missed some until here (and you look up for the nexts) what I mean is that you ONLY have to use more spacing in the beats that has a strong beat
    and after this.. 00:27:279 - all the triplets suddenly dissapear..
    01:00:727 (1) - remove the whistle at sliderend (the whistles in this section its.. its not consistent.. its random so, please fix, be consistent)
    01:14:865 (1,2,3,4,3,4,1,2,3) - these parts of the stream looks.. it can be improved come on you can make it perfect
    01:27:279 (2,3,4) - why the spacing here is suddenly shorter than the rest? people usually use more spacing before a triplet :p
    01:22:106 (3,4,5,6) - this is the only back and forth I've seen in the map.. please change it, or add more back and forths around the map
    04:21:244 (2,3,4) - where's the 1/1 slider?
Zerss

Itasha_S13 wrote:

04:21:244 (2,3,4) - where's the 1/1 slider?
Why do you want a 1/1 slider here? haha
Topic Starter
Zaphkael

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi from my modding Queue
-I already modded this map, I will do a quick recheck so.. NO KUDOSU!omg im so sorry, i didnt know >.<
thank you thank you thank you



[list]Farewell
add kiai section okii
00:12:796 (2,3,4) - why is the spacing different? no more
00:07:969 (1,1) - hmm wtf with this NC xD? whoops that was because i copy pasted the next slider for consistency
fixed

00:15:210 (8,3,4,5) - avoid overlap, so move the triplet fixed
00:16:589 (1) - stack its end with the 2? sure
00:18:831 (4,5) - why is this spacing short while the 5 has a strong beat, 00:18:486 (3,4) - the spacing between the end of the slider and the 4 its longer than 4 and 5, but the end of the slider its a quiet sound, and also, the 4 is, but the 5 its a strong beat, so it should have more spacing.. ENPHASIS because the vocals are ten thousand (break) (strong L) lives at it's mercy
its done for the vocal effect

00:29:348 (2,3,4,5) - this part has more spacing than the rest but the song didnt really change or anything.. so why? to avoid overlaps but i did something
00:30:727 (2,3,4) - se.. again a long spacing on 2 quiet sounds.. please fix and check all the parts like this I may have missed some until here (and you look up for the nexts) what I mean is that you ONLY have to use more spacing in the beats that has a strong beat the 4 is definitely a strong beat, lowered spacing on the other 2 though
and after this.. 00:27:279 - all the triplets suddenly dissapear.. ill see about that...i really like that part
01:00:727 (1) - remove the whistle at sliderend (the whistles in this section its.. its not consistent.. its random so, please fix, be consistent) did something
01:14:865 (1,2,3,4,3,4,1,2,3) - these parts of the stream looks.. it can be improved come on you can make it perfect i dont get what you mean lol
01:27:279 (2,3,4) - why the spacing here is suddenly shorter than the rest? people usually use more spacing before a triplet :p ok?
01:22:106 (3,4,5,6) - this is the only back and forth I've seen in the map.. please change it, or add more back and forths around the map
back and forths in this map that people wanted me to remove: 00:29:348 (2,3,4,5) - , 00:05:900 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ,
other back and forths in this map (my part) 01:19:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , 01:27:279 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ,
the second part that wasnt mapped by me has a whole bunch of them to so yah... sorry :p


thanks a lot again. I love you
ItashaS13
Hi again xD

what I mean for the stream shape is.. 01:14:520 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220572 < this is how it looks now, isnt very curvy at all its like straight but curvy and doesnt really looks good imo
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220602 < this is what I man to do

same here
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220609 < this is how it looks now
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220660 < this is what I man to do

So the final stream shape goes like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220670 < before
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6220655 < after

ahhh and regarding to

Zerss wrote:

Itasha_S13 wrote:

04:21:244 (2,3,4) - where's the 1/1 slider?
Why do you want a 1/1 slider here? haha
04:04:175 (1,2) - because I see a lot of 1/1 sliders that follow that sound 04:06:934 (1,2) -

but you neither used it here 04:09:693 (1,2,3,4) - nor, 04:12:451 (1,2,3,4) -
I pointed it out but didnt explain xD ahmm what I mean is, sometimes you use the 1/1 sliders for that sound, but sometimes no, so maybe I didnt noticed if it was used in a consistent way, like.. every 2 1/1 sliders you stop using them for 2 times that sound and then once again you get them 2 times.. If you still don't get me I will try to explain better, but if you got me then.. check it, :p just be sure they're not randomly placed
DahplA
I like.
_Meep_
add ur damn friends into the tags
kds pls
jk
gime if u want
:3
beaw

(00:00:038) Feeling the Flow with Zaph

lmao your titles sound like super edgy 80's teens trying to run their own FM radio station with funky genre music

00:00:382 (2,4) - T R I G G E R E D THEY'RE ALMOST TOUCHING lmao it's not even important this is just a meme please stop
00:00:900 (4,1) - are you blanketing or
00:00:555 (3,2) - maybe put 2 on 3's sliderend so it looks gr8
00:01:934 (3) - I feel like moving this to the right would feel better
00:01:417 (1,7) - Stack =w=
00:03:658 (5,2) - Stack =w=
00:08:831 (3,1) - wynaut stack =w=
00:12:969 (3,1) - Stack =w=
boii these stackthetics are real :^)))) (nice portmanteau @me)
00:14:175 (2,5) - pls move over or down or smth
00:17:624 (6,3) - y ;w; stack or move pls
00:17:969 (1,5) - Stack =w=
00:19:348 (1,4) - Stack =w=
00:19:865 (3,6) - Blanket =w=
00:20:727 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This does not look a e s t h e t i c. The slides curve is very loose whereas the stream is tight. Loosen the stream or nah. 8 is also in the way tbh
00:22:106 (1,5) - prolly stack on one of the ends 00:23:831 (3) - stack this while you're at it
00:22:796 (4,5) - If you move it, blanket 5 to 4
00:25:900 (6,3) - Stack =w=
00:27:106 (4,5,6) - This triple is out of place. There's no triplet in the music ;p
00:27:624 (1,1) - Rip @this stack
00:30:038 (6,3) - Stack =w=
00:31:072 (4,1) - overlap mod kds pls
00:32:796 (5,3) - more kds pls
00:57:279 (3,1) - wyd
01:04:865 (1) - Move the first red node over to the left to enhance the curve
01:06:934 (2,2) - Stack ???
01:20:038 (1,4) - blanket mod kds pls
01:22:106 (3,4,5,6) - I suggest copypasting 3-4's jumps and pasting to 5-6's spot, then moving 5-6 over to stack 5 onto 1's slider
01:23:831 (6,3) - Stack =w=
01:30:727 (5,3) - ugh move these
01:31:072 (1,4,5,1) - stop what are you doing please move or stack
01:32:106 (6,3) - overlap mod kds pls
01:35:210 (1,4) - plsplsplsplsplsplspls
01:48:658 (6,1) - ^
01:53:141 (1,1) - pls stack =w=

bye
Topic Starter
Zaphkael

_Meep_ wrote:

add ur damn friends into the tags
kds pls
jk
gime if u want
:3
done. Thanks!

Stingy wrote:

(00:00:038) Feeling the Flow with Zaph

lmao your titles sound like super edgy 80's teens trying to run their own FM radio station with funky genre music

00:00:382 (2,4) - T R I G G E R E D THEY'RE ALMOST TOUCHING lmao it's not even important this is just a meme please stop ok?
00:00:900 (4,1) - are you blanketing or nop
00:00:555 (3,2) - maybe put 2 on 3's sliderend so it looks gr8 wtf no?
00:01:934 (3) - I feel like moving this to the right would feel better i don't feel the same
00:01:417 (1,7) - Stack =w= ok
00:03:658 (5,2) - Stack =w= ok
00:08:831 (3,1) - wynaut stack =w= ok
00:12:969 (3,1) - Stack =w= no, moved instead
boii these stackthetics are real :^)))) (nice portmanteau @me) ao so pwetty
00:14:175 (2,5) - pls move over or down or smth oge
00:17:624 (6,3) - y ;w; stack or move pls sir yes sir
00:17:969 (1,5) - Stack =w= strongly disagree
00:19:348 (1,4) - Stack =w= they are stacked tho
00:19:865 (3,6) - Blanket =w= moved, but aint no blanket intended
00:20:727 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - This does not look a e s t h e t i c. The slides curve is very loose whereas the stream is tight. Loosen the stream or nah. 8 is also in the way tbh stream is fine, moved 8 tho
00:22:106 (1,5) - prolly stack on one of the ends 00:23:831 (3) - stack this while you're at it ok?
00:22:796 (4,5) - If you move it, blanket 5 to 4 naah
00:25:900 (6,3) - Stack =w= nah
00:27:106 (4,5,6) - This triple is out of place. There's no triplet in the music ;p ok
00:27:624 (1,1) - Rip @this stack thefuck theyre like ages apart
00:30:038 (6,3) - Stack =w= nazi much
00:31:072 (4,1) - overlap mod kds pls ok
00:32:796 (5,3) - more kds pls no more
00:57:279 (3,1) - wyd taht ones fine pls
01:04:865 (1) - Move the first red node over to the left to enhance the curve but blanket
01:06:934 (2,2) - Stack ??? okok
01:20:038 (1,4) - blanket mod kds pls BUT I DONT WANT TOOOOOOO
01:22:106 (3,4,5,6) - I suggest copypasting 3-4's jumps and pasting to 5-6's spot, then moving 5-6 over to stack 5 onto 1's slider did something alike
01:23:831 (6,3) - Stack =w= whatever
01:30:727 (5,3) - ugh move these did stuff
01:31:072 (1,4,5,1) - stop what are you doing please move or stack did stuff
01:32:106 (6,3) - overlap mod kds pls stuff again
01:35:210 (1,4) - plsplsplsplsplsplspls but no u wtf-
01:48:658 (6,1) - ^ let blankets rot in hell
01:53:141 (1,1) - pls stack =w= no u

bye
thanks a lot blah blah
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