DragonSparta wrote:

Normal
00:57:045 (1) - Seems better if you add a finish Fix
01:15:891 (1,2,3) - Too far from the previous note, move it nearer :3Fix
01:18:583 (4) - Add a finishFix
01:24:160 (3,4) - Align with 3 and 4Fix

Hard
00:20:188 (1) - Add a finishFix
01:09:352 (1) - ^Fix
01:22:237 (X) - Add a note here?X.No,thank you

Insane
00:17:237 (1,2) - Confusing X.No,thank you
00:20:122 (1) - Add a finishFix
01:11:468 (3) - Not really centered properlyX.No,thank you
01:24:160 (1,2) - Make it further from the previous notes and have the same spacing as the previous notesX.No,thank you

yongtw123 wrote:

By request:


[eveless]
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - a tiny bit offscreen but I guess it's finechanged it
00:42:237 (2) - I thought this is 1/8 beat earlier or a note exists at 00:42:045...i dont think so , and no note in 00:42:045 because of slow down rythem

NatsumeRin wrote:

请在各难度补上eveless的tag

[eveless]
00:18:006 (6,7) - 换下whistle，这个还是顺承不是转折
00:26:083 (6) - 出屏幕了
00:32:333 (10) - 建议删
以下一串的clap
00:40:891 (3) - 头
00:41:660 (1,2) - 尾
00:43:968 (1) - 头

00:47:333 (4) - 加音
00:50:410 (3) - 挪到1/2前效果更好
00:52:814 (2,3) - 这里开始感觉这样的节奏更好
ATTACH[51.png]
01:17:045 (1) - 去whistle
01:23:583 (2) - 头加whistle

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall:
Maybe the hitsound is by its nature a bit subtle. Nothing wrong though.

[Easy]
You can utilize some slidertick hitsounds~

[Normal]
00:13:006 (x) - I expected a note here (fitting the lyrics), but this is totally up to you.Fix

[Hard]
00:18:006 (x) - add a note here? Fix
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Tenshi-nyan wrote:

gah, Ookami Kakushi :<

Hard
00:01:275 (5) - NC?
00:48:775 (4,5) - 1 grid up

Normal
00:46:275 (1) - 1 grid up

Easy
00:40:891 (3,4,5) - 1 grid right
00:51:275 (1,2) - 1 grid left

That's it~

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry= =Don't do the grid modding next time?...

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

gah, Ookami Kakushi :<

eveless
Uhmm.. yeah D:
Impossible for me to mod anything.
Are you sure about this being mapped with 1/8th notes?Dont worry there is no 1/8 notes


That's it~

pieguy1372 wrote:

eveless:

00:19:737 (1) - End it 1/4 earlier?there is no need to change it
01:17:429 (3,4) - Not sure I like this formation, but feel free to keep it

jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
just some small combo suggestions

(suggestion) 00:48:583 (3) - maybe a new combo here, this combo just feels too long to suit Fix
(suggestion) 00:54:737 (4) - maybe here tooFix
01:13:198 (4) - new combo to follow the pattern you used before Fix

Normal
00:13:006 (5) - this note didn't suit to me, by removing it the flow goes better with the map since the next time she sings 3 1/2 notes you don't follow it eitherFix
01:15:506 (5,1) - by putting the new combo on the (5) it flows much better to the vocals, then after that put another newcombo on the new (6)Fix

jericho2442 wrote:

eveless
could you add some kind of diff to this name please, like eveless's Insane, its really hard to know what this map is without a proper namei named it eveless because of in the past so many ppl let me to changed eveless's - eveless' then eveless' back to eveless's , sorry my english is not well i dont know which is right then "eveless" , it's the 1st reason , but okay i changed it since i dont wanna give a trouble in not my mapset

00:03:775 (5,6) - the (6) played really really bad to me, flows MUCH better if you extend the (5) to the (6) and remove the (6)i still think this is not a problem , it's just a feel with mine like what you do more in your maps likes "wo ai ni"'s 00:00:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - in fact i still thought this is not follow my sense but well it's a feel by you , so i respect your thoughts. okay i changed it to because this is not my mapset .
(suggestion) 00:49:929 (5,1) - was not keen on this placeme ent, played abit weird, would of played better if this was spacing properly dont wanna to say a lots again , changed

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just small things, i liked the maps, good job o/

arien666 wrote:

After some modding, I think it's fine :3
Enjoy Bubble <3

nante wrote:

Uh, seems like I'm late, sorry.

The only thing I catched out anyway is that preview time is a bit too late. But it's not biggie so I guess not worth popping the bubble.
+ I don't know why it displays "# eveless (5 stars, 288 notes)" as a diff in the thread, when the difficulty name is eveless's Insane.

whymeman wrote:

Edit: Rechecked more into the source and found out the name is okay as far as I know...

[eveless's Insane]

00:08:198 (2,3,4) - This sounds really awkward and unsyncronized with the music.

I won't pop over this, but if you are able to fix this issue, that would be nice.

Armin wrote:

So, since the only different things from my map are the difficulties, what about to ask the next time if you can take a video or an audio file which was not compressed for your own?
It would compensate my hard work (something like 1-2 hour) to find and compress these files.