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kino77
Nice map~
Can I add a "Hard" diff?
Topic Starter
-maJu

kino77 wrote:

Nice map~
Can I add a "Hard" diff?
of course you can,
really thanks :)
Weez
i feel like making an easy for this :/
may i?

and why not add a video?
Topic Starter
-maJu

Weezy wrote:

i feel like making an easy for this :/
may i?

and why not add a video?
thanks, it would be great :D

I could add a video right ><,
can someone please help me to find a good one? D: i found one myself..
I will upload it when the other diffs are finished ><

Edit: why it shows at description just "thanks to", bug? T_T
artpiggo
Normal
00 27 145 wrong distance snap

Insane is no problem

I'll come here again when this map has other guest diffs, too ><

Star
Weez
All finished :D
Remember to add my name to the tags for all the diffs

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
[Shalon]
[General]

If you don't have special reason, remove the osb file.

[Normal]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly.

00:20:289 (1) - finish?

00:27:145 (4) - spacing

00:48:739 ~ 00:50:111 - break? Why don't you mapped that part?

00:56:966 - clap

[Insane]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly.

00:26:545 (6) - spacing


star.
Topic Starter
-maJu

[Shalon] wrote:

[General]

If you don't have special reason, remove the osb file.

[Normal]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly. fixed

00:20:289 (1) - finish? fixed

00:27:145 (4) - spacing fixed

00:48:739 ~ 00:50:111 - break? Why don't you mapped that part? lazy? xDDDD, but i think this is ok ><

00:56:966 - clap fixed

[Insane]

00:20:118 - about this timing section, volume is too loud to compare with former volume. I think you should up the volume increasely, not suddenly. fixed

00:26:545 (6) - spacing fixed


star.
thanks for modding [Shalon] :D

Weezy wrote:

All finished :D
Remember to add my name to the tags for all the diffs
Thanks, I fixed some smal stuff at your diff, but the diff is good :3
I hope it's ok for you.. ><

I upload later D:
kino77
Ohoh~~Here it comes~
BTW,I feel timing a little off but not for sure,better to call someone good at it to check~
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
-maJu

kino77 wrote:

Ohoh~~Here it comes~
BTW,I feel timing a little off but not for sure,better to call someone good at it to check~
[attachment=0:1aaca]Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu[/attachment:1aaca]
wow, awesome diff :D
I am really glad to have such a diff in my mapset,
really nice job ^^
thank you very much~~

Yes, the timing could be off since i am NOOB at timing :lol:
Mastodonio
Irc modding :)
And star,by the way ;)
Weez
on my diff:

00:44:969 (1) Why is it broken up into 2 spinners? This change wouldn't fit in an easy so keep it as one spinner :/

and please leave any mods to my diff to me, I'll decide whether to put them in our not.

Also add kino77 to all the tags

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
-maJu

Weezy wrote:

on my diff:

00:44:969 (1) Why is it broken up into 2 spinners? This change wouldn't fit in an easy so keep it as one spinner :/

and please leave any mods to my diff to me, I'll decide whether to put them in our not.

Also add kino77 to all the tags
I forgot that that is too hard.. it just fitted the music.. my fault
sorry ><
I hope you aren't too angry D:
Vergence
Overall: Kiai time should be at 00:53:196
Kiai time should end at 01:15:134

Weezy's Easy[/size]
HP Drain -1
00:13:434 (2) - One grid down to match the distance with the next slider and note
00:24:202 (3) - This might be too near from the previous note
00:53:196 (1) - Add finish
I think the spacing is a bit far for an Easy

Normal
HP Drain +2
00:34:000 (1) - Add finish

kino's Hard
00:32:629 (1) - The note is too near the previous note
00:52:105 (1) - ^
01:15:476 (2) - ^
01:16:848 (2) - ^

Insane
HP Drain +2 or 3
00:37:428 (1) - Remove this and add a spinner
00:53:196 (1) - Add a finish here
___________________________________
Havva star ;)
kino77

DragonSparta wrote:

kino's Hard
00:32:629 (1) - The note is too near the previous note Fixed~
00:52:105 (1) - ^ I made that on purpose
01:15:476 (2) - ^ ^
01:16:848 (2) - ^ ^


EDIT:Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
-maJu

DragonSparta wrote:

Overall: Kiai time should be at 00:53:196 no fixed
Kiai time should end at 01:15:134 no, sorry ><, I made it end like in kino's diff :)

Normal
HP Drain +2 really no, it would be higher than in "Hard" and that's not very awesome ><
00:34:000 (1) - Add finish fixed

Insane
HP Drain +2 or 3 no
00:37:428 (1) - Remove this and add a spinner no
00:53:196 (1) - Add a finish here fixed
___________________________________
Havva star ;)


thanks for modding :>

kino77 wrote:

EDIT:[attachment=0:c65cf]Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu[/attachment:c65cf]
updated your diff :)

Edit: changed preview point at your diff too i hope it's ok for you >< If not i will change back of course... Just it sounds better now D:
I'm sorry if I'm wrong :/
IceBeam
Countdown on kino's difficulty is disabled.I suggest you to disable it on all other diffs,cause it doesn't fit well with song.

[Weezy]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 - ^
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:44:284 - Finish doesn't fit well,I'd remove.
00:53:196 (1) - Finish.
00:58:680 (1) - ^
01:01:423 (1) - ^
01:04:165 - ^
01:23:018 - Finish doesn't fit here.

[Normal]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 (2) - ^
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:44:969 - Breaks seems unnecessary,anyway,add a note with finish here?
00:50:454 (1) - Remove finish and place it to 00:53:196 (1).
00:58:680 (3) - Finish.
01:01:423 - ^
01:02:622 - ^
01:04:165 (3) - ^
01:09:649 (2) - ^
01:15:134 - ^

[kino]
00:22:174 (5) - Please remove this note,otherwise it breaks whole rhytm.
00:29:716 (6,7,8,9) - I'd point out all these objects in one combo.
00:44:969 (1) - Add finish here?
01:01:765 - Add a note here?
01:12:734 - ^ Same,plays/sounds better.
01:15:134 (1) - Finish.
01:15:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this stuff is technically fine,cause spacing changes after each note,that means you need to put new combo for every single note,but that'd be awkward,so maybe it can be marked as exception.

[Insane]
00:14:633 - I'd add a note.
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 (1) - ^
00:34:000 (5) - ^
00:53:196 - ^
00:58:680 (6) - ^
01:01:423 (4) - ^
01:02:622 (7) - ^
01:04:165 (7) - ^
01:09:649 (3) - ^
01:12:391 (3) - ^
01:13:591 - ^
01:15:134 (4) - ^
01:20:618 (5) - ^
01:23:360 - ^

Otherwise fine to me.
Star~

Before modding last difficulty I noticed new updates,so consider some of my suggestions may repeat and can be already in effect.
wmfchris
-BG exceeds max size (1024*768)
Just resize it (make sure that it's in 3:4

[Insane]
00:16:004 (4) - down 1 grid
00:18:575 (4) - up 1 grid
00:23:546 (2) - make the patterns smooth, place this at x:160 y:96
01:02:622 (7) - 1 beat slider?
01:17:190 (4) - make this symmetrical
01:18:390 (3,4,5) - (3,4) left 1 grid, (5) down 1 grid

[kino's hard]
00:18:747 (5) - down 1 grid
00:28:687 (2) - down 1 grid?
00:32:972 (2,4) - (2) right+up 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid
00:50:968 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - right 1 grid
01:04:508 (2,3,4) - up 1 grid

Spacing in other diffs seems fine.star~
Topic Starter
-maJu

IceBeam wrote:

Countdown on kino's difficulty is disabled.I suggest you to disable it on all other diffs,cause it doesn't fit well with song.
fixed at my diffs, Weezy please do that later too ;)

[Normal]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish. fixed
00:32:629 (2) - ^ fixed
00:34:000 (1) - ^ fixed
00:44:969 - Breaks seems unnecessary,anyway,add a note with finish here? I want to leave the break xDD
00:50:454 (1) - Remove finish and place it to 00:53:196 (1). fixed
00:58:680 (3) - Finish. fixed
01:01:423 - ^ fixed
01:02:622 - ^ fixed
01:04:165 (3) - ^ fixed
01:09:649 (2) - ^ fixed
01:15:134 - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:14:633 - I'd add a note. fixed
00:23:031 (1) - Finish. fixed
00:32:629 (1) - ^ fixed
00:34:000 (5) - ^ fixed
00:53:196 - ^ fixed
00:58:680 (6) - ^ fixed
01:01:423 (4) - ^ fixed
01:02:622 (7) - ^ fixed
01:04:165 (7) - ^ fixed
01:09:649 (3) - ^ fixed
01:12:391 (3) - ^ fixed
01:13:591 - ^ fixed
01:15:134 (4) - ^ fixed
01:20:618 (5) - ^ fixed
01:23:360 - ^ fixed

haha hitsounds~~ xDDD

Otherwise fine to me.
Star~ :)

Before modding last difficulty I noticed new updates,so consider some of my suggestions may repeat and can be already in effect.
Just 1 thing xD
Beam~~

thanks for modding :D
Topic Starter
-maJu

wmfchris wrote:

-BG exceeds max size (1024*768)
Just resize it (make sure that it's in 3:4)
fixed. Oh my fault, I put "1204 x 768" without noticing it xDD

[Insane]
00:16:004 (4) - down 1 grid fixed
00:18:575 (4) - up 1 grid fixed
00:23:546 (2) - make the patterns smooth, place this at x:160 y:96 fixed
01:02:622 (7) - 1 beat slider? you mean the whole pattern? >< I will not fix since i don't understand
01:17:190 (4) - make this symmetrical fixed
01:18:390 (3,4,5) - (3,4) left 1 grid, (5) down 1 grid fixed, but a bit different ;)

Spacing in other diffs seems fine.star~
WTF power modding today xDDD
I'm kinda exhausted now ><

thanks wmf anyways :)
kino77

IceBeam wrote:

[kino]
00:22:174 (5) - Please remove this note,otherwise it breaks whole rhytm.
00:29:716 (6,7,8,9) - I'd point out all these objects in one combo.
00:44:969 (1) - Add finish here? Sounds weird to me> <
01:01:765 - Add a note here?
01:12:734 - ^ Same,plays/sounds better.
01:15:134 (1) - Finish.
01:15:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this stuff is technically fine,cause spacing changes after each note,that means you need to put new combo for every single note,but that'd be awkward,so maybe it can be marked as exception. I think its ugly so I change them~don't worry~~
Other fixed~Thanks~~!

wmfchris wrote:

[kino's hard]
00:18:747 (5) - down 1 grid
00:28:687 (2) - down 1 grid?
00:32:972 (2,4) - (2) right+up 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid
00:50:968 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - right 1 grid
01:04:508 (2,3,4) - up 1 grid
Some kind fixed~~ :)

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
Weez

DragonSparta wrote:

Weezy's Easy[/size]
HP Drain -1 Done
00:13:434 (2) - One grid down to match the distance with the next slider and note Done
00:24:202 (3) - This might be too near from the previous note Done
00:53:196 (1) - Add finish Done
I think the spacing is a bit far for an Easy Seems fine to me

IceBeam wrote:

Countdown on kino's difficulty is disabled.I suggest you to disable it on all other diffs,cause it doesn't fit well with song.

[Weezy]
00:23:031 (1) - Finish.
00:32:629 - ^
00:34:000 (1) - ^
00:44:284 - Finish doesn't fit well,I'd remove.
00:53:196 (1) - Finish.
00:58:680 (1) - ^
01:01:423 (1) - ^
01:04:165 - ^
01:23:018 - Finish doesn't fit here.
Done all
Sorry for the long ass wait >.<

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
-maJu
updated both diffs~ :)

EDIT: added new video, the filesize of the old one was... hmm... a bit very big ;)

thanks weezy for the new video :)
Senobe
Buhu~

I really like your beatmap and the song. (:
All difficulties seem to be well done. Keep it up!
Well. You definately deserve a star. ;)
Take care.

Ad astra~ ヾ(>ω< ヾ)
vincerio
hi hi
here my suggestions~

[General]
It would be nice if you mute the video'a audio to reduce file size
( don't forget to change BG name next time xD )
tag : opening tears of the blue sky
why kiai time in Kino's Hard end at 01:14:10?? make it all the same..

[Normal]
00:10:863 - 0.5x here? 0.75 is enough....( 0.5x is fine but you need to manage its spacing it's too near =w='' )
00:24:745 - add clap
00:25:431 - add clap
00:28:859 - add clap
00:44;969 - add finish
01:00:394 - add clap
01:19:590 - add clap
01:21:989 - end spinner at 01:26:103

[Kino's Hard]
00:21:489(1,2,3,4) - follow distnace snap is better... make it too near and didn't follow to the drum is a bit hard to predict...
01:21:989(1,2,3,4) - this is not fit at all...

[Insane]
00:22:003 - the drum end here.... if you follow the drum, delete slider before the points and extend short repeat slider here
00:25:431 - add clap
00:26:116 - add clap
00:26:802 - add clap
02:28:173 - add clap

Nice map
good luck~
senaya
[Normal]
Claps between 0:20 and 0:31 are kinda random, but it goes fine before and after this segment =/
Also, I see that someone before me already mentioned it.

Didn't notice anything else that needs to be fixed. Hard and Insane are fine D:
So jsut a star..
ZLOdeuka-
[Weezy's Easy]

01:21:647 (3) - new combo

01:22:332 (1) - delete new combo

[Normal]

00:42:570 (5) - new combo

00:59:366 (4,2) - horrible sliders. so it better?



[kino's Hard]

fine~

[Insane]

00:27:145 (1) - delete new combo

S T A R ~
Weez
Done:
and I noticed that there's 2 video files...
nvm im seeing things @_@

Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [Weezy's Easy].osu
kino77

vincerio wrote:

[Kino's Hard]
00:21:489(1,2,3,4) - follow distnace snap is better... make it too near and didn't follow to the drum is a bit hard to predict...
So how could I follow the drum?anyway fixed~
01:21:989(1,2,3,4) - this is not fit at all...
Plz don't tell me you don't know I'm following the 1/3 drum...
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
Kamure
By Mod Request:

[Weezy]
00:29:201 (2) - clap
00:29:887 (3) - remove claps and add a clap in the 3rd repeat

[Normal]
00:26:459 (2,3,4) - spacing is a bit too tight... Consider this formation?


00:28:859 - and for here, follow this?


00:34:343 (2) - add clap
00:55:595 (1) - ^
01:00:051 (5) - ^ at the end of the slider
Topic Starter
-maJu

vincerio wrote:

hi hi
here my suggestions~

[General]
It would be nice if you mute the video'a audio to reduce file size
( don't forget to change BG name next time xD ) I will think about it ><
tag : opening tears of the blue sky fixed
why kiai time in Kino's Hard end at 01:14:10?? make it all the same.. ok 2 people said..fixed

[Normal]
00:10:863 - 0.5x here? 0.75 is enough....( 0.5x is fine but you need to manage its spacing it's too near =w='' ) no change for now ><
00:24:745 - add clap fixed
00:25:431 - add clap fixed
00:28:859 - add clap fixed
00:44;969 - add finish fixed
01:00:394 - add clap fixed
01:19:590 - add clap fixed
01:21:989 - end spinner at 01:26:103 fixed

[Insane]
00:22:003 - the drum end here.... if you follow the drum, delete slider before the points and extend short repeat slider here no change ><
00:25:431 - add clap fixed
00:26:116 - add clap fixed
00:26:802 - add clap fixed
02:28:173 00:28:173? lol - add clap fixed

Nice map
good luck~ Thanks~
[Normal]

senaya wrote:

Claps between 0:20 and 0:31 are kinda random, but it goes fine before and after this segment =/
Also, I see that someone before me already mentioned it.

Didn't notice anything else that needs to be fixed. Hard and Insane are fine D:
So jsut a star.. sorry no kudos, not helpful >< But thanks for the star :>

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Normal]

00:42:570 (5) - new combo fixed

00:59:366 (4,2) - horrible sliders. so it better? fixed




[Insane]

00:27:145 (1) - delete new combo fixed

S T A R ~

thanks :D

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

[Normal]
00:26:459 (2,3,4) - spacing is a bit too tight... Consider this formation?
no change ><

00:28:859 - and for here, follow this?


00:34:343 (2) - add clap fixed
00:55:595 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:051 (5) - ^ at the end of the slider [fixed]

Thanks :>

Weezy wrote:

Done:
and I noticed that there's 2 video files...
nvm im seeing things @_@
LOL Weezy xDDD

Thanks all for modding.. :>

updated both diffs~
KanaRin
Yeah>w< Here some mod~

[Weezy's Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Suggestion:
00:45:312 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:47:026
Then
00:47:711 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:49:768
After that *w*
00:50:454 (x) - Try this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53863
Yeah, other is good>w<

[kino's Hard]
00:25:088 (1) - New combo?
00:25:774 (3) - Remove new combo
01:21:989 (1,2,3,4) - Huh.. I think it doesn't fit this part. Well.. Just my opinion

[Insane]
00:14:462 (6) - New combo
00:14:805 (1) - Remove new combo
Not bad~

That's all *w*
Good luck for you>w<
Star
Topic Starter
-maJu

KanaRin wrote:

Yeah>w< Here some mod~

[Normal]
Suggestion:
00:45:312 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:47:026 fixed
Then
00:47:711 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:49:768 fixed
After that *w*
00:50:454 (x) - Try this fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53863
Yeah, other is good>w<

[Insane]
00:14:462 (6) - New combo fixed
00:14:805 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
Not bad~

That's all *w*
Good luck for you>w<
Star
Thanks Baka loli KanaRin :D

Edit: updated Weezy's diff :3
Weez
Luvdic
Insane:

00:15:147 (4) - This slider definitely should be 1/2 shorter.
00:37:428 (1) - Mind moving this away? Althought it technically is a jump, it doesn't looks like a jump, but more like an antijump.
00:48:911 (1) - The whistle is out of place imo.
01:02:622 (7) - Consider extending this slider by a 1/2. Although doing this, will require you to repattern this part.

Kino's Hard:

00:20:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I really recommend you to tone down the jumps in this part. This part is easily the hardest part in the whole mapset, and there is already an insane to fill that.
01:23:360 - Consider adding a circle + finish here, and start spinner 1/4 later.

The rest is good for me!
Topic Starter
-maJu

ErufenRito wrote:

Insane:

00:15:147 (4) - This slider definitely should be 1/2 shorter. I tried to follow ther rythimn at this slider, so no change ><
00:37:428 (1) - Mind moving this away? Althought it technically is a jump, it doesn't looks like a jump, but more like an antijump. for me no jump necassary, no change
00:48:911 (1) - The whistle is out of place imo. fixed
01:02:622 (7) - Consider extending this slider by a 1/2. Although doing this, will require you to repattern this part.
I don't know yet how to redo this pattern... so i will not change yet ><
The rest is good for me!
Thanks for modding :D
kino77

KanaRin wrote:

[kino's Hard]
00:25:088 (1) - New combo?
00:25:774 (3) - Remove new combo
01:21:989 (1,2,3,4) - Huh.. I think it doesn't fit this part. Well.. Just my opinion
Sorry but no...

ErufenRito wrote:

Kino's Hard:

00:20:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I really recommend you to tone down the jumps in this part. This part is easily the hardest part in the whole mapset, and there is already an insane to fill that. Sure~
01:23:360 - Consider adding a circle + finish here, and start spinner 1/4 later. Oh..I'll just let it go.
Thanks for modding~
Download: Takahashi Hitomi - Aozora no Namida (TV size) (-maJu) [kino's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
-maJu
updated :>

And btw... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR! >w<
kino77

-maJu wrote:

updated :>

And btw... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR! >w<
Oh what a surprise~Thank you very much~ Happy chinese new year to you too~~ :)
Topic Starter
-maJu

kino77 wrote:

-maJu wrote:

updated :>

And btw... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR! >w<
Oh what a surprise~Thank you very much~ Happy chinese new year to you too~~ :)
Thank you too :D
(even if we don't celebrate it xD)
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