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Lanttu
[ZLOdeuka's]
Oooh, this is awesome. Only couple of things...
HITSOUNDS ARE SO QUIET ARRRGGHHH it's really, really frustrating to play when you can't hear anything. And I mean anything. D:
I also feel that every single triplet in this diff is kind of unnecessary, as they don't fit in a slow-paced and quiet song like this. But of course, this is only my opinion, heh~
Oh and also, tags are different?

[Hard]
Same thing about the triplets and specially this 5-note stream at 02:19:586.

[Icebeam]
Again so quiet hitsounds.. Not as quiet as in ZLOdeuka's diff, but still. ;_;

I like the storyboard as well. :3 Good job~ And sorry for very useless modding, heh~
Topic Starter
Aleks719

val0108 wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:920 (3) - 1grid up ok
00:08:545 (4) - 1grid up left ok
00:36:670 (1,2) - spacing nope, it made specially
00:45:419 (4) - 1grid left ok
01:40:836 (3,4,5) - 1grid right nope, it made specially
spacing of note of some places does not match D: Oh, I think it's fine, because it's Hard difficulty
Thanks for your mod and star, val0108 !

Lanttu wrote:

Oh and also, tags are different? fix


[Hard]
Same thing about the triplets and specially this 5-note stream at 02:19:586. So, you are right, but
there are people who want to see anything more than 1/2 beats in Hard
Thanks for checking and star, Lanttu (:

Updated with small changes
Kite
Russian song <3

I think acoustic would fit for tags

[Beam's Easy]
01:11:461 (3) - Maybe 1/2 earlier?
02:28:128 (3) - ^

Awesome

[Hard]
02:19:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo that stream doesn't fit at all, it could work if you remove 02:20:211 (6) - and make 02:20:003 (5) - into a slider
I don't think the normal whistle hitsounds go that well with the song :/ soft whistles would fit a lot more imo (but thats just me)

Nice mapset, have a star~
IceBeam

Kite wrote:

[Beam's Easy]
01:11:461 (3) - Maybe 1/2 earlier?
02:28:128 (3) - ^ Yeah,that's pretty tough you noticed it.It's the only pattern that doesn't follow lyrics.So I decided to follow rhytm instead.However,I think I'll keep it as it is..
Btw..

[ZLOdeuka's Rock]
00:50:003 - Kiai :| Отключить надо.

SPOILER
don't kudosu it ~_~
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Kite wrote:

Russian song <3

I think acoustic would fit for tags why not, ok

[Hard]
02:19:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo that stream doesn't fit at all, it could work if you remove 02:20:211 (6) - and make 02:20:003 (5) - into a slider Ok, remade this part
I don't think the normal whistle hitsounds go that well with the song :/ soft whistles would fit a lot more imo (but thats just me) nope, затрахали, хочу нормал-свистки

Nice mapset, have a star~
Thanks for your mod!
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


ZLOdeuka's Rock

00:06:670 - I know the music here is quiet but I'd prefer if you turn up the volume even just a little. the notes can hardly be heard.
02:24:378 (3,4,5,6,7) - I personally don't like this stack, just too many.


Hard

well, I don't think whistle fits this song. if you insist using them it would be better if they are added evenly. the whistles that you have now make me hurried.


Beam's Easy

fine to me


that's all (~ ̄▽ ̄)~☆
wmfchris
[general]
Preview time not unique.
No need to tag "Russian", it will be in genre.

[ZLO's]
00:25:420 (5,6) - make it symmetrical, (5) down 1 grid, (6) left 1 grid
00:39:170 (3) - ^, right 1 grid
01:34:170 (2) - make this ending stays at the center line? (x:256, align with (3)
01:42:920 (4) - left 1 grid

[Hard]
00:25:420 (3) - up 1 grid
00:39:586 (4) - remove finish
00:45:836 (5,6) - try right 1 grid
02:18:961 (5,6,...) - looks better whem (5) right+down 1 grid, change the position of the coming notes too.

star~
ZLOdeuka-

Lanttu wrote:

[ZLOdeuka's]
Oooh, this is awesome. Only couple of things...
HITSOUNDS ARE SO QUIET ARRRGGHHH it's really, really frustrating to play when you can't hear anything. And I mean anything. D:
I also feel that every single triplet in this diff is kind of unnecessary, as they don't fit in a slow-paced and quiet song like this. But of course, this is only my opinion, heh~
Oh and also, tags are different?

Fix~

val0108 wrote:

[ZLOdeuka's rock]
01:43:336 (1) - 1grid down
02:06:670 (4) - New combo and next "02:07:295 (1) - re combo"(I mind this in neither)
02:25:211 (6,7) - stack...lol If I make it such how to put?noob mod sorry...;w;
cool hit sounds>w<"
Fix~

Sandpig wrote:

ZLOdeuka's Rock

00:06:670 - I know the music here is quiet but I'd prefer if you turn up the volume even just a little. the notes can hardly be heard.
02:24:378 (3,4,5,6,7) - I personally don't like this stack, just too many.
Fix~
ZLOdeuka-
Topic Starter
Aleks719

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
Preview time not unique. fix
No need to tag "Russian", it will be in genre. okk

[Hard]
00:25:420 (3) - up 1 grid okk
00:39:586 (4) - remove finish okk
00:45:836 (5,6) - try right 1 grid okk
02:18:961 (5,6,...) - looks better whem (5) right+down 1 grid, change the position of the coming notes too. fix
Wow, I accept all of your suggests, thanks for your mod!
Updated!
Roddie
Hi

General:
  1. ZLOdeuka's Rock has the tick rate set to 2. Just for consistency, keep the tick rate the same for all difficulties.
Beam's Easy:
  1. 02:13:336 (1)-Add a clap on the end. 8-)
Hard:
  1. 00:20:003 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
  2. 00:23:336 (1)-^
  3. 00:33:336 (1)-^
  4. 00:57:086 (2)-Add a clap on the end.
  5. 01:36:670 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
  6. 01:43:336 (1)-^
  7. 01:50:003 (1)-^
  8. 01:53:336 (1)-Add a whistle.
  9. 01:56:670 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
ZLOdeuka's Rock:

Nothing I can point out besides the tick rate issue for this difficulty.

Nice work! :)

I'm sure I modded a Russian song before. If not, then this is the first time I did. :D

Anyway, good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Roddie wrote:

Beam's Easy:
  1. 02:13:336 (1)-Add a clap on the end. 8-) fix
Hard:
  1. 00:20:003 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning. fix
  2. 00:23:336 (1)-^ fix
  3. 00:33:336 (1)-^ fix
  4. 00:57:086 (2)-Add a clap on the end. fix
  5. 01:36:670 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning. fix
  6. 01:43:336 (1)-^ fix
  7. 01:50:003 (1)-^ fix
  8. 01:53:336 (1)-Add a whistle. fix
  9. 01:56:670 (1)-Add a whistle on the beginning.fix
Nice work! :) fix Thanks! x)

I'm sure I modded a Russian song before. If not, then this is the first time I did. :D

Anyway, good luck getting this ranked! ^^ thx

Star!
Good job, Roddie ! Thanks a lot
Updated
IceBeam

wmfchris wrote:

No need to tag "Russian", it will be in genre.
I'm not sure if Russian language exists in genre.Due to the latest ranked russian song - it sorts like "Other",and it was ranked like a week ago.So that's why the rest of ranked russian maps has this tag.

Roddie wrote:

Beam's Easy:
  1. 02:13:336 (1)-Add a clap on the end. 8-)
Sure man,looks like I missed it somehow.
Thank you ::)
Revengexsoyah
nice nice

~Hard~
00:36:670 (1) : ugly slider
try this

00:46:670 (1) : sounds better in soft finish D:


D:
kudos star
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Revengexsoyah wrote:

nice nice

~Hard~
00:36:670 (1) : ugly slider sorry, nope. I like it. I have circle-sliders in other maps.At this time I finding something interesting for me
00:46:670 (1) : sounds better in soft finish D: checking, nope

kudos star Thanks for your cooperation ! x)
Sakura
[ZLODeuka's Rock]
Preview point is different than the other difficulties.
01:21:461 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think (3) and (6) should be moved a bit more away from the other 2 notes in their respective sides.

[Hard]
00:36:670 (1) - Try to not make the slider overlap itself please.

[Beam's Easy]
What happened to the rest of the map? o.o
00:40:003 (1,2,3) - 1.5 beat spacing can be quite confusing for newbies, i recommend you make these into a repeat slider instead.
01:45:003 (2,3) - Again 1.5 beat spacing is not recommended on the easiest difficulty, so i think it's better off if you link these 2 notes with a slider.
Considering how often this issue repeats on your map, i recommend you check it for these 1.5 beat spacing situations

Nice map, i wish you Good Luck!~
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Sakura Hana wrote:

[ZLODeuka's Rock]
Preview point is different than the other difficulties. fix

[Hard]
00:36:670 (1) - Try to not make the slider overlap itself please. nope. imo, it's no overlap

Nice map, i wish you Good Luck!~ Thanks, Sakura ! Orz
Rukario
General:
- The preview time on ZL's diff is different. Please make them all the same.

Why is Beam's Easy not mapped until the end like the other diffs? Why not map it to the end?

*Noticed Sakura was quicker than him* Yeah I won't reapeat myself :P. I have the same opinion about the Easy diff.

Hard:
01:03:128 (2,3,4) - This little 1/4 stream feels a bit out of place being the only one in the diff. And it's a bit hard to read because of the small spacing.

Cool mapset^^
IceBeam

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Beam's Easy]
Oh come on,I'm using 1.5 spacing so many times.I simply cannot use reverse sliders everywhere.
If you are telling about "beginners" - they cannot pass any map perfectly,no matter how easy is it.

For advanced beginners - it won't cause much troubles.Both low spacing and approach rate give a lot of time to analyse distance.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
- The preview time on ZL's diff is different. Please make them all the same. fix already

Why is Beam's Easy not mapped until the end like the other diffs? Why not map it to the end? Don't know)

*Noticed Sakura was quicker than him* Yeah I won't reapeat myself :P. I have the same opinion about the Easy diff. *ninja's*

Hard:
01:03:128 (2,3,4) - This little 1/4 stream feels a bit out of place being the only one in the diff. And it's a bit hard to read because of the small spacing. ok... I fixed this... But "Hard" is too easy atm...

Cool mapset^^
Thanks for your checking and star, Rukario!
Updated
NotShinta
General:
Tick rate 2, all diffs.

Hard:
I'd go easier on those whistles.
01:40:420 (2,3,4) - This feels quite weird, as the rest of the combo is to the vocals, but this isn't.
01:43:336 (1,2,3) - I'm also not quite sure what justifies these repeats.

Otherwise, good job on this.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Tick rate 2, all diffs. Hm, nope

Hard:
I'd go easier on those whistles.
01:40:420 (2,3,4) - This feels quite weird, as the rest of the combo is to the vocals, but this isn't. nope
01:43:336 (1,2,3) - I'm also not quite sure what justifies these repeats. nope

Otherwise, good job on this.
Thanks for checking, NotShinta !
theowest
Maaaaaaan. It's too perfect for me. And you didn't MY beatmap... xD
What I don't like is that there's whistles in this beatmap.. It doesn't suit the song very well. Reconsider them please.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

theowest wrote:

Maaaaaaan. It's too perfect for me. And you didn't MY beatmap... xD Your map is perfect for me too ^^
What I don't like is that there's whistles in this beatmap.. It doesn't suit the song very well. Reconsider them please. Sorry, but I want to leave it
Thanks for your checking, theowest !
Andrea
[ZLOdeuka's Rock]

00:06:670 (1) ~ 00:19:378 (5) - Hitsounds volume is way too low, I can't even hear them.

Also, the timing sounds a bit off to me at the end... Can you get someone to double check it?
Topic Starter
Aleks719

osuplayer111 wrote:

[ZLOdeuka's Rock]

00:06:670 (1) ~ 00:19:378 (5) - Hitsounds volume is way too low, I can't even hear them.
done


Also, the timing sounds a bit off to me at the end... Can you get someone to double check it? I'll try it
orioncomet
about timing, BPM sound fine to me but offset try 6,662 and don't forget to resnap all notes stuff.

[Hard]
02:58:743 (3) - new combo?
Topic Starter
Aleks719

orioncomet wrote:

[Hard]02:58:743 (3) - new combo? fixed
Thanks, orioncomet !

sorry, but offset is fine, I leave it
ShaggoN
Soooo... the song have 5 timing sections with very little changes of BPM

1. Offset: 6 670, BPM: 144,10
2. Offset: 19 994, BPM: 144
3: Offset: 89 994, BPM: 144,10
4: Offset: 96 656, BPM: 144
5: Offset: 178 332, BPM: 144,40

Little weird, but works well i guess. :3
Btw star for good map. o
Topic Starter
Aleks719

ShaggoN wrote:

Soooo... the song have 5 timing sections with very little changes of BPM

1. Offset: 6 670, BPM: 144,10
2. Offset: 19 994, BPM: 144
3: Offset: 89 994, BPM: 144,10
4: Offset: 96 656, BPM: 144
5: Offset: 178 332, BPM: 144,40

Little weird, but works well i guess. :3
Btw star for good map. o
Oh man, it's perfect. Thanks a lot
Updated!
aquabluu
[Beam's Easy]
Suggestion: The spacing looks a bit too close. Try increasing distance spacing to 0.9, or increase AR

[Hard]
00.22.285 (3) Make this symmetrical
00.25.410 (3) Suggestion: Put this to the left of (2) instead of to the right

[ZLOdeuka's Rock]
02.32.906 (1) Remove new combo
02.33.322 (3) New combo here
02.33.947 (1) Remove new combo

Not much else I could find~ Star
Topic Starter
Aleks719

aquabluu wrote:

[Beam's Easy]
Suggestion: The spacing looks a bit too close. Try increasing distance spacing to 0.9, or increase AR nope

[Hard]
00.22.285 (3) Make this symmetrical nope
00.25.410 (3) Suggestion: Put this to the left of (2) instead of to the right hm, fixed

[ZLOdeuka's Rock]
02.32.906 (1) Remove new combo sorry, nope. new combos follow russian speech
02.33.322 (3) New combo here
02.33.947 (1) Remove new combo

Not much else I could find~ Star
Thanks for your mod and star, aquabluu !
Zekira
Someone buy that drummer a metronome! D:

Download: Agata Kristi - A my ne angely, paren' (Aleks719) [Zek's Red Lines].osu
Topic Starter
Aleks719
Oh, Zekira, thanks a lot x)
new timing. Updated. + little fix hitsounds.
Andrea
Timing seems better now!

Bubbled~
Jaffar
Лови звезду
Krisom
General-
· In Hard you have a Red Line in 86.664 while in the other 2 diffs is at 86.644. I checked all the other timing sections and they all semmed to be the same, but double check just to be sure.

ZLO's rock-
01:06:669 (1,2,3) - This stacks in a wierd way in-game, you might want to fix.
01:10:211 (2,3) - These sliders are kinda hard to not sliderbreak, the curves are really straight, so you might want to curve them more.
01:30:833 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh, is (2)/(3) spacing intentional? You should try giving it more space, they both appear in game at the same time alongside with (4) and the timeline distance is completely different.
01:39:999 (1,2) - 01:10:211
02:48:521 (2,3) - Why are these 2 not stacked?

That'd be all. I personally think the normal whistles in Hard do not fit this kind of song at all, but I won't force you to change them.
Popped over the bolded stuff, but I advise you to do the other mods too, specially 01:30:833. Call me back when fixed stuff and I'll rebubble.
Topic Starter
Aleks719

Krisom wrote:

General-
· In Hard you have a Red Line in 86.664 while in the other 2 diffs is at 86.644. I checked all the other timing sections and they all semmed to be the same, but double check just to be sure. How it can be? D: Fixed of course

ZLO's rock- Wait Zlodeuka's responce...


That'd be all. I personally think the normal whistles in Hard do not fit this kind of song at all, but I won't force you to change them.
So, hitsounds fixed in Hard normal-whistes present here, but they are few atm
ZLOdeuka-
Krisom
Why didn't you curve more those sliders ;_;

Oh well u_u, here, enjoy your bubble back.
Mafiamaster
Никаких Проблем! Ранкд!
val0108
wow!
Congratulations :3
h3k1ru
:)
Mastodonio
поздравляю)
Megaparadox
гц больше русских треков ;)
Topic Starter
Aleks719
thanks for congratz Orz
I'll keep working hardly! =Ъ
Reiji-RJ
Поздравляю :3
ZaRish
Спасибо большое за карту! Она чудесна) - теперь лучшая карта под российскую музыку =^_^=
Deformal
Песня вообще-то не Агаты Кристи, а Алексея Пономарева. Ее вечно присваивают не тем <_<
Nubitto
Звездаа!
rockNsoul
Автор-исполнитель данной песни не Агата Кристи,а Алексей Пономарёв. Исправьте пожалуйста
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