Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!

[heading]EASY

1. 00:59:700 (1,2) - Imo here is too fast direction change. why?
2. 02:42:092 (3) - Make it symmetrical No change
3. 03:12:581 (1) - Too long spinner! Ranking Criteria: "Make sure that your spinners are a reasonable length. Aim for a maximum spinning time of about 5-7 seconds; any longer can cause the player's wrist to get sore. If your spinner must be longer, then check with a BN to see if it's acceptable."
   If there is a limit changed

Dobra, tutaj skończę, ponieważ wypisywanie Overlap co trzeci mod nie jest fajne.
Mapka playable, ale musisz ją dopracować
GOOD LUCK!

FlameLancer wrote:

[General]

1. Your current BG is 758x615 and the recommended size (i.e. rankable) is 1366x768, find a new bg pls, since streching this would be a bad idea Its recommended but that doesn't mean that this must be 1366x768.

1. Zmień tło, może i to jest prześliczne kawaii, ale jest też masa innych w odpowiedniej rozdzielczości (C00l tutaj ma 100% racji) Może to?
2. Masz tu storyboard? Może mi się nie pokazuje, ale jak nie, to wyłącz Widescreen Support tam gdzie włączone jest
3. Normal ma 6.5 AR, max powinien być 5, więc może zmień na 5, choć to jak już chcesz
4. Easy kończy się w innym momencie niż reszta poziomów, które sprawdziłem, przydałoby się skrócić tego slidera

1. 00:16:005 (3,1,2,1) - Make this triangle perfect please! Quality is a quality, and ya have here a very good quality, so make more perfections over and over.
2. 00:19:266 (1) - This slider is a little bit overmapped, I mean, it's too much curved. Maybe milder it a little bit?
3. 00:19:266 (1,3,4) - Another triangle could be done better
4. 00:32:309 (1) - Don't make it straightly vertical ending, better point the end of this slider to the next note, to make the flow better and design looking better
5. 00:41:439 (3) - Ctrl + Shift + R and by selecting point rotate it for 3 degrees. Just a minor thing though it looks better imo
6. 00:47:961 (5) - Copy the previous one I mentioned ^ and paste it here, this one is quite badly made. So delete this one, copy this 00:41:439 (3) and don't change its directions using Ctrl + G (kinda bugging right here) but rotate it using Ctrl + Shift + R = 179 degrees
7. 01:02:309 (5) - The same thing as above, but also there's NC's inconsistency so follow my advices:
8. 01:02:309 (5,1) - 01:14:048 (5,1) - 01:35:244 (5,1) - 02:42:092 (3,1) - 02:45:353 (5,1) - 02:47:961 (5,1) - 02:50:570 (3,1) - Swap NC's and 01:55:461 (4) - Add NC
9. 01:14:048 (5) - The same as in the previous points, just copy 01:08:831 (1) this time
10. 01:21:222 (2) - And this slider problem again, please also fix
11. 01:21:222 (2,1,3) - Imo for better flow use Ctrl + J here
12. 01:34:266 (4) - ^^
13. 02:03:613 (1,3) - Imo making them vertical and parallel to the borders of the screen looks ugly and very old-style mapping. So maybe change it somehow
14. 02:56:439 (3,4) - Make them the same, so copy the first and paste it where the second is and then rotate it
15. Generally a beautiful diff, no more stuff here <3

1. 00:06:840 (5,1) - w porównaniu z 00:03:840 (5,1) - jest o niebo za mały wg mnie,
2. 00:22:526 (2,3) - w porównaniu z 00:19:918 (2,3) - również trochę za mały
3. 00:21:874 (1,2) - rozumiem że tu chcesz mieć ładny pattern, ale w tych poziomach trudności przede wszystkim chodzi o nowych graczy, którym raczej trudno jest odczytać takie zmiany DS, moim zdaniem zamieszczone tu bez powodu. Znów za mały,
4. ... zresztą tak jak i tu: 00:23:016 (3,4,5) i tu 00:23:831 (5,6),
5. 00:24:483 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - zaznaczone nuty mają w miarę stabilny DS, zaś te 00:36:874 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - w pórównaniu ze wcześniejszymi, zaniżony. O ile nie słyszę żadnej większej zmiany w tempie, polecam albo zmniejszyć DS w pierwszym zaznaczeniu, albo zwiększyć w drugim. Tym bardziej, że zaraz później (czyli tu: 00:44:374 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) ) jest znów większy DS, tak jak w pierwszym zaznaczeniu, więc w sumie sugeruję po prostu zwiększyć DS w kawałku gdzie jest zaniżony.
6. 00:47:961 (1,2) - zdecydowanie radzę zwiększyć tutaj i tutaj 00:48:939 (3,4) - w tym drugim przypadku mógłbyś po prostu przesunąć 00:46:983 (4,5,1,2,3) - ten fragment w lewo
7. 01:06:222 (4,5,1) - Tutaj też zmiana DS nieco razi, zwiększ dystans między piątym kółkiem a pierwszym sliderem
8. 01:31:657 (5,6,1) - Między dwoma ostatnimi za duży, bez dwóch zdań, 01:34:918 (1,2) - zresztą tutaj też, jak i tu 01:36:548 (4,5) 01:36:874 (5,1)
9. 01:40:135 (1,2) - Za duży, polecam obrócić dwójkę troszkę w okół tego koszyczka, ale żeby znalazła się bliżej jedynki

1. 00:08:240 (2,3) - Mógłbyś tutaj w sumie zrobić podwójny koszyczek, powinno jeszcze lepiej wyglądać
2. 00:21:548 (5,2) - Bardzo nieładny overlapp, polecam poprawić. Po prostu jakościowo i wizualnie troszkę razi
3. 00:30:679 (3,1) - Generalnie w tym poziomie trudności lepiej unikać overlappów, tu masz kolejny
4. 00:53:179 (3,2) - ^
5. 00:32:635 (2,3,4) - Przepływ z 3 slidera na 4 jest z deka nieintuicyjny i wg mnie się nie sprawdzi. Mógłbyś udoskonalić pattern żeby flow był lepszy
6. 01:03:613 (4,5) - ^
7. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - Wg mnie zdecydowanie za trudne jak na Normala, proponuję zmienić
8. 01:40:135 (1,3) - Drobny, ale też niepotrzebny overlapp, please fix
9. 01:45:353 (1,2,3) - Tutaj też z przepływem problem wyczuwam, może by tak zmienić jak tu?
   
10. 02:34:592 (1,4) - Również drobny, ale widoczny overlapp, please fix again + 02:37:200 (1) - to się też pokrywa
11. 02:37:200 (1,2) - Generalnie tutaj też problem z flowem, też mógłbyś poprawić
12. 02:43:722 (3) - Ctrl + G dla lepszego flowu i jeszcze później przesuń 02:43:722 (3,4) do góry, żeby wyrównać DS z poprzednimi nutami
13. 03:03:287 (1,2) - Znów przepływ nieintuicyjny, a to 03:01:657 (4,5,6) - wygląda trochę amatorsko, ale to tylko moja subiektywna opinia, jednak może spróbuj czegoś innego?
    np

    

1. 00:44:048 (1) - Usuń NC, niepotrzebne
2. 00:54:157 (1,2) - Generalnie zamieniłbym tutaj comba miejscami, w sensie na dwójkę dać NC a z jedynki zdjąć. Chodzi o to, żeby Nowe Comba były w miarę konsekwentnie rozłożone, np. w tych przypadkach 00:57:092 (1) - 01:10:135 (1) - masz NC na downbeacie, a w przypadku, co do którego się czepiam, masz na zwykłym beacie, więc warto byłoby ustabilizować
3. 00:59:374 (1,2) - ^ (jeśl akceptujesz tę poprawkę)
4. 01:01:983 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:04:592 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:06:874 (1,3) - ^
7. 01:12:581 (5) - Dodaj NC!
8. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - Jeśli zmenisz ten pattern (co zacnie polecam), usuń NC też i tu
9. 02:04:918 (1) - Usuń NC
10. 02:32:309 (3) - Dodaj NC
11. 02:34:592 (1,2) - Zamień comba miejscami
12. 02:37:200 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:39:809 (1,2) - ^
14. 02:42:418 (6,1) - TU JEST DOBRZE! lol sry wracam do czepiania się
15. 02:45:026 (1,2) - ^^
16. 02:47:635 (1,2) - ^
17. 02:52:526 (1,3) - ^
18. 02:55:135 (1,2) - ^
19. 02:57:744 (1,3) - ^
20. 03:00:353 (1,3) - ^
21. 03:03:287 (1,2) - ^
22. 03:11:113 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:46:657 (5,1) - Zamień comba
2. 00:47:961 (2) - Dodaj
3. 00:52:037 (6,1) - Zamień
4. 01:11:603 (6) - Dodaj
5. 01:12:418 (1,3) - Zamień
6. 01:18:287 (1,3) - ^
7. 01:16:657 (1,6) - ^
8. 01:22:526 (1,3) - ^
9. 01:41:603 (5) - Dodaj
10. 02:39:972 (4) - Dodaj
11. 02:50:407 (1,2) - Zamień
12. 02:51:059 (1) - Usuń
13. 02:52:037 (4) - Dodaj
14. 03:07:200 (1,3) - Zamień
15. 03:09:483 (1) - Usuń

1. 00:03:640 (5,1) - Nawet jeśli to zamierzony overlapp, i tak radzę go wyeliminować, wg mnie będzie schludniej wyglądać
2. 00:06:240 (4,6) - A tu naprawdę musisz to naprawić
3. 00:32:635 (2,3,4,5) - Tu możesz zrobić fajny równoboczny trójkąt polecam
4. 00:51:059 (2,3,5) - Za dużo tych overlappów tutaj, plz zrób coś z nimi
5. 01:20:570 (1,3) - Wg mnie to nie wygląda dobrze, mógłbyś jakoś poprawić <znów overlapp ofc>
6. 01:44:700 (3,1) - Bardzo brzydkie nałożenie się na siebie <overlapp...> plz fix
7. 01:52:689 (4,5,1,2) - ^ może i to zamierzone, ale też nie wygląda porządnie
8. 02:03:124 (4,3) - ^
9. 02:04:266 (3,3) - Zestackuj porządniej, żeby były idealnie nałożone na siebie, polecam z estetycznych pobudek
10. 02:05:896 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Przesuń tak, żeby pierwsza nuta oznaczona nr 3 zestackowała się z 02:05:570 (1) , również z estetycznych względów radzę
11. 02:32:309 (1,3) - Znów brzydki overlap i zbędny
12. 02:36:222 (1,3) - ^
13. 02:44:374 (2,3) - Tutaj z kolei flow bardzo potrzebuje poprawki, polecam Ctrl + G 02:44:700 (3) i to 02:45:353 (1) też, a to 02:44:374 (2) najlepiej radzę obrócić o 180 stopni, żeby nie była wygięta w ten sam sposób (w tym samym kierunku) co poprzednik i następca

Loony wrote:

Nie mam pojęcia jak się tu znalazłem, ale jak już jestem to zmoduję, bo fajny set
Btw moda zrobię Ci po polsku, poza Easy'm
[General]

1. Zmień tło, może i to jest prześliczne kawaii, ale jest też masa innych w odpowiedniej rozdzielczości (C00l tutaj ma 100% racji) Może to?
2. Masz tu storyboard? Może mi się nie pokazuje, ale jak nie, to wyłącz Widescreen Support tam gdzie włączone jest

[Yasai's Easy]

1. 00:16:005 (3,1,2,1) - Make this triangle perfect please! Quality is a quality, and ya have here a very good quality, so make more perfections over and over.
2. 00:19:266 (1) - This slider is a little bit overmapped, I mean, it's too much curved. Maybe milder it a little bit?
3. 00:19:266 (1,3,4) - Another triangle could be done better
4. 00:32:309 (1) - Don't make it straightly vertical ending, better point the end of this slider to the next note, to make the flow better and design looking better
5. 00:41:439 (3) - Ctrl + Shift + R and by selecting point rotate it for 3 degrees. Just a minor thing though it looks better imo ok changed
6. 00:47:961 (5) - Copy the previous one I mentioned ^ and paste it here, this one is quite badly made. So delete this one, copy this 00:41:439 (3) and don't change its directions using Ctrl + G (kinda bugging right here) but rotate it using Ctrl + Shift + R = 179 degrees
7. 01:02:309 (5) - The same thing as above, but also there's NC's inconsistency so follow my advices:
8. 01:02:309 (5,1) - 01:14:048 (5,1) - 01:35:244 (5,1) - 02:42:092 (3,1) - 02:45:353 (5,1) - 02:47:961 (5,1) - 02:50:570 (3,1) - Swap NC's and 01:55:461 (4) - Add NC fixed
9. 01:14:048 (5) - The same as in the previous points, just copy 01:08:831 (1) this time
10. 01:21:222 (2) - And this slider problem again, please also fix
11. 01:21:222 (2,1,3) - Imo for better flow use Ctrl + J here
12. 01:34:266 (4) - ^^
13. 02:03:613 (1,3) - Imo making them vertical and parallel to the borders of the screen looks ugly and very old-style mapping. So maybe change it somehow
14. 02:56:439 (3,4) - Make them the same, so copy the first and paste it where the second is and then rotate it
15. Generally a beautiful diff, no more stuff here <3 thank you~~

Dokończę później, szkoła wzywa

Loony wrote:

Nie mam pojęcia jak się tu znalazłem, ale jak już jestem to zmoduję, bo fajny set
Btw moda zrobię Ci po polsku, poza Easy'm
[General]

1. Zmień tło, może i to jest prześliczne kawaii, ale jest też masa innych w odpowiedniej rozdzielczości (C00l tutaj ma 100% racji) Może to?
2. Masz tu storyboard? Może mi się nie pokazuje, ale jak nie, to wyłącz Widescreen Support tam gdzie włączone jest

[Yasai's Easy]

1. 00:16:005 (3,1,2,1) - Make this triangle perfect please! Quality is a quality, and ya have here a very good quality, so make more perfections over and over.
2. 00:19:266 (1) - This slider is a little bit overmapped, I mean, it's too much curved. Maybe milder it a little bit?
3. 00:19:266 (1,3,4) - Another triangle could be done better
4. 00:32:309 (1) - Don't make it straightly vertical ending, better point the end of this slider to the next note, to make the flow better and design looking better
5. 00:41:439 (3) - Ctrl + Shift + R and by selecting point rotate it for 3 degrees. Just a minor thing though it looks better imo ok changed
6. 00:47:961 (5) - Copy the previous one I mentioned ^ and paste it here, this one is quite badly made. So delete this one, copy this 00:41:439 (3) and don't change its directions using Ctrl + G (kinda bugging right here) but rotate it using Ctrl + Shift + R = 179 degrees
7. 01:02:309 (5) - The same thing as above, but also there's NC's inconsistency so follow my advices:
8. 01:02:309 (5,1) - 01:14:048 (5,1) - 01:35:244 (5,1) - 02:42:092 (3,1) - 02:45:353 (5,1) - 02:47:961 (5,1) - 02:50:570 (3,1) - Swap NC's and 01:55:461 (4) - Add NC fixed
9. 01:14:048 (5) - The same as in the previous points, just copy 01:08:831 (1) this time
10. 01:21:222 (2) - And this slider problem again, please also fix
11. 01:21:222 (2,1,3) - Imo for better flow use Ctrl + J here
12. 01:34:266 (4) - ^^
13. 02:03:613 (1,3) - Imo making them vertical and parallel to the borders of the screen looks ugly and very old-style mapping. So maybe change it somehow
14. 02:56:439 (3,4) - Make them the same, so copy the first and paste it where the second is and then rotate it
15. Generally a beautiful diff, no more stuff here <3 thank you~~

Dokończę później, szkoła wzywa

1. i'm just curious,why add red timing here? 00:00:204
2. why add kiai time here 02:32:309 ? i think its unnecessary because the music not showing the particular rhythm
3. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
   soft-slidertick.wav
   soft-slidertick2.wav
   
   Ranking Criteria - Audio
   
   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

Loony wrote:

Nie mam pojęcia jak się tu znalazłem, ale jak już jestem to zmoduję, bo fajny set
Btw moda zrobię Ci po polsku, poza Easy'm
[General]

1. Zmień tło, może i to jest prześliczne kawaii, ale jest też masa innych w odpowiedniej rozdzielczości (C00l tutaj ma 100% racji) Może to? Zmienie Bg ale jeszcze nie teraz.
2. Masz tu storyboard? Może mi się nie pokazuje, ale jak nie, to wyłącz Widescreen Support tam gdzie włączone jest Fixed
3. Normal ma 6.5 AR, max powinien być 5, więc może zmień na 5, choć to jak już chcesz Dam na 5.5
4. Easy kończy się w innym momencie niż reszta poziomów, które sprawdziłem, przydałoby się skrócić tego slidera No ja z tym nic zrobić nie moge... Gd to Gd

[Normal]
Ogólnie to miejscami nie ogarniam zmian DS i choć z tego co się dowiedziałem z zaufanego źródła, nie jest on ściśle wymagany, to jednak w niektórych przypadkach lepiej go zastosować. Podam tu parę z nich (nie wszystkie, ale myślę, że jeśli rozumiesz, dlaczego DS jest taki ważny w poziomach Easy - Normal, to sam poprawisz resztę rażących zmian):

1. 00:06:840 (5,1) - w porównaniu z 00:03:840 (5,1) - jest o niebo za mały wg mnie, Troche to poprawiłem
2. 00:22:526 (2,3) - w porównaniu z 00:19:918 (2,3) - również trochę za mały ^
3. 00:21:874 (1,2) - rozumiem że tu chcesz mieć ładny pattern, ale w tych poziomach trudności przede wszystkim chodzi o nowych graczy, którym raczej trudno jest odczytać takie zmiany DS, moim zdaniem zamieszczone tu bez powodu. Znów za mały, Fixed
4. ... zresztą tak jak i tu: 00:23:016 (3,4,5) i tu 00:23:831 (5,6), Fixed a bit
5. 00:24:483 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - zaznaczone nuty mają w miarę stabilny DS, zaś te 00:36:874 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - w pórównaniu ze wcześniejszymi, zaniżony. O ile nie słyszę żadnej większej zmiany w tempie, polecam albo zmniejszyć DS w pierwszym zaznaczeniu, albo zwiększyć w drugim. Tym bardziej, że zaraz później (czyli tu: 00:44:374 (2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) ) jest znów większy DS, tak jak w pierwszym zaznaczeniu, więc w sumie sugeruję po prostu zwiększyć DS w kawałku gdzie jest zaniżony. Fixed
6. 00:47:961 (1,2) - zdecydowanie radzę zwiększyć tutaj i tutaj 00:48:939 (3,4) - w tym drugim przypadku mógłbyś po prostu przesunąć 00:46:983 (4,5,1,2,3) - ten fragment w lewo Fixed a bit
7. 01:06:222 (4,5,1) - Tutaj też zmiana DS nieco razi, zwiększ dystans między piątym kółkiem a pierwszym sliderem Fixed
8. 01:31:657 (5,6,1) - Między dwoma ostatnimi za duży, bez dwóch zdań, 01:34:918 (1,2) - zresztą tutaj też, jak i tu 01:36:548 (4,5) | 01:36:874 (5,1) hmm... W tym przypadku zastawie tak jak jest teraz. Podoba mi sie to stopniowe zwiekszanie DS od 01:30:353 do 01:37:363 wiec nic nie zmienię.
9. 01:40:135 (1,2) - Za duży, polecam obrócić dwójkę troszkę w okół tego koszyczka, ale żeby znalazła się bliżej jedynki Fixed a bit

Reszty nie wskażę, ale mam nadzieję, że pokazałem mniej więcej czego należy szukać. Rozumiem, że możesz odrzucić wszystkie te uwagi, przez wzgląd na patterny, które są rzeczywiście spoko, ale uwierz, można i zrobić piękne patterny z mapkami z bardziej stabilnym DS - a będą wtedy łatwiejsze do ogarnięcia dla świeżaków.
Teraz czas na overlappy, patterny i flow:

1. 00:08:240 (2,3) - Mógłbyś tutaj w sumie zrobić podwójny koszyczek, powinno jeszcze lepiej wyglądać ok
2. 00:21:548 (5,2) - Bardzo nieładny overlapp, polecam poprawić. Po prostu jakościowo i wizualnie troszkę razi Poprawiony
3. 00:30:679 (3,1) - Generalnie w tym poziomie trudności lepiej unikać overlappów, tu masz kolejny ^
4. 00:53:179 (3,2) - ^ ^
5. 00:32:635 (2,3,4) - Przepływ z 3 slidera na 4 jest z deka nieintuicyjny i wg mnie się nie sprawdzi. Mógłbyś udoskonalić pattern żeby flow był lepszy Chyba jest teraz lepiej
6. 01:03:613 (4,5) - ^^
7. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - Wg mnie zdecydowanie za trudne jak na Normala, proponuję zmienić Nie wszystko musi być łatwe, czasami trzeba sobie coś utrudnić żeby stać sie lepszym.
8. 01:40:135 (1,3) - Drobny, ale też niepotrzebny overlapp, please fix Fixed
9. 01:45:353 (1,2,3) - Tutaj też z przepływem problem wyczuwam, może by tak zmienić jak tu? Ok
   
10. 02:34:592 (1,4) - Również drobny, ale widoczny overlapp, please fix again + 02:37:200 (1) - to się też pokrywa Fixed
11. 02:37:200 (1,2) - Generalnie tutaj też problem z flowem, też mógłbyś poprawić Chyba to poprawiłem, nie jestem pewny
12. 02:43:722 (3) - Ctrl + G dla lepszego flowu i jeszcze później przesuń 02:43:722 (3,4) do góry, żeby wyrównać DS z poprzednimi nutami kk
13. 03:03:287 (1,2) - Znów przepływ nieintuicyjny, a to 03:01:657 (4,5,6) - wygląda trochę amatorsko, ale to tylko moja subiektywna opinia, jednak może spróbuj czegoś innego? Zmieniłem to, może dalej wygląda amatorsko ale napewno ma lepszy flow
    np

    

To teraz przejdziemy do również ważnej sprawy - Nowe Comba! Zauważyłem, że trochę tu jest zamieszania, nie czepiam się niektórych wyjątków ze względu na patterny, ale tam gdzie jest normalny flow, to należy o systematyczności pamiętać i być konsekwentnym w dawaniu NC:

1. 00:44:048 (1) - Usuń NC, niepotrzebne Nie wiem dlaczego ale w tym miejscu musi być NC, jeśli go nie ma to AI mod pokazuje że jest problem z DS
2. 00:54:157 (1,2) - Generalnie zamieniłbym tutaj comba miejscami, w sensie na dwójkę dać NC a z jedynki zdjąć. Chodzi o to, żeby Nowe Comba były w miarę konsekwentnie rozłożone, np. w tych przypadkach 00:57:092 (1) - 01:10:135 (1) - masz NC na downbeacie, a w przypadku, co do którego się czepiam, masz na zwykłym beacie, więc warto byłoby ustabilizować Nah... Moim zdaniem jest ok
3. 00:59:374 (1,2) - ^ (jeśl akceptujesz tę poprawkę) ^
4. 01:01:983 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 01:04:592 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 01:06:874 (1,3) - ^ Tutaj coś zmieniłem
7. 01:12:581 (5) - Dodaj NC!KK
8. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - Jeśli zmenisz ten pattern (co zacnie polecam), usuń NC też i tu Nie zminiłem
9. 02:04:918 (1) - Usuń NC AI mod mówi nie
10. 02:32:309 (3) - Dodaj NC Kk
11. 02:34:592 (1,2) - Zamień comba miejscami Nah..
12. 02:37:200 (1,2) - ^ ^
13. 02:39:809 (1,2) - ^ ^
14. 02:42:418 (6,1) - TU JEST DOBRZE! lol sry wracam do czepiania się
15. 02:45:026 (1,2) - ^^ ^
16. 02:47:635 (1,2) - ^ ok
17. 02:52:526 (1,3) - ^ AI mod
18. 02:55:135 (1,2) - ^ ok
19. 02:57:744 (1,3) - ^ AI mod...
20. 03:00:353 (1,3) - ^ Ok
21. 03:03:287 (1,2) - ^ Nie
22. 03:11:113 (1,2) - ^ Ok

To tyle z Normala, tak to spoko
[Hard]
Teraz zacznę od NC, bo to w sumie ważne jest:

1. 00:46:657 (5,1) - Zamień comba Done
2. 00:47:961 (2) - Dodaj ^
3. 00:52:037 (6,1) - Zamień ^
4. 01:11:603 (6) - Dodaj ^
5. 01:12:418 (1,3) - Zamień ^
6. 01:18:287 (1,3) - ^ ^
7. 01:16:657 (1,6) - ^ ^
8. 01:22:526 (1,3) - ^ ^
9. 01:41:603 (5) - Dodaj ^
10. 02:39:972 (4) - Dodaj ^
11. 02:50:407 (1,2) - Zamień Tym razem nie
12. 02:51:059 (1) - Usuń ^
13. 02:52:037 (4) - Dodaj ^
14. 03:07:200 (1,3) - Zamień ^
15. 03:09:483 (1) - Usuń ^

A teraz reszta:

1. 00:03:640 (5,1) - Nawet jeśli to zamierzony overlapp, i tak radzę go wyeliminować, wg mnie będzie schludniej wyglądać Fixed
2. 00:06:240 (4,6) - A tu naprawdę musisz to naprawić Fixed
3. 00:32:635 (2,3,4,5) - Tu możesz zrobić fajny równoboczny trójkąt polecam Done
4. 00:51:059 (2,3,5) - Za dużo tych overlappów tutaj, plz zrób coś z nimi Podoba mi sie ten pettern. Zwieksze trudność mapy bez zwiekszania gwiazdek
5. 01:20:570 (1,3) - Wg mnie to nie wygląda dobrze, mógłbyś jakoś poprawić <znów overlapp ofc> Fixed
6. 01:44:700 (3,1) - Bardzo brzydkie nałożenie się na siebie <overlapp...> plz fix Nie wiem chyba lepiej raczej nie XD
7. 01:52:689 (4,5,1,2) - ^ może i to zamierzone, ale też nie wygląda porządnie Zamierzone i takie zostanie
8. 02:03:124 (4,3) - ^ ^
9. 02:04:266 (3,3) - Zestackuj porządniej, żeby były idealnie nałożone na siebie, polecam z estetycznych pobudek Fixed
10. 02:05:896 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Przesuń tak, żeby pierwsza nuta oznaczona nr 3 zestackowała się z 02:05:570 (1) , również z estetycznych względów radzę Fixed
11. 02:32:309 (1,3) - Znów brzydki overlap i zbędny Nie zmienie tego
12. 02:36:222 (1,3) - ^ Ani tego
13. 02:44:374 (2,3) - Tutaj z kolei flow bardzo potrzebuje poprawki, polecam Ctrl + G 02:44:700 (3) i to 02:45:353 (1) też, a to 02:44:374 (2) najlepiej radzę obrócić o 180 stopni, żeby nie była wygięta w ten sam sposób (w tym samym kierunku) co poprzednik i następca Ok zrobie tak jak mówisz.

DŻIZAS TO WSZYSTKO (resztę może zmoduję kiedyś, ale na razie to tyle)
Nie zdziwię się jak odrzucisz większość, ale nie byłbym sobą gdybym się nie czepiał szczegółów, sorry np Szczegółowy mod to dobry mod (Nawet jak jest troche Nazi)
Powodzenia z mapą, piosenka mega, podoba mi się - tym bardziej mapa! <3 Powodzonka, good luck, itd Dzięki!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

sorry for late aaaaa
nano.ripe <3

[General]

1. i'm just curious,why add red timing here? 00:00:204 I needed to give it there cuz I start all Diffs at 00:01:640
2. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: It was 1 or 2 ms but sure I will fix it
   soft-slidertick.wav
   soft-slidertick2.wav
   
   Ranking Criteria - Audio
   
   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

sorry i'm just mod one diff becaue i'm busy xd np I will give you Kudos after Yasaija Fixes
and GL ~

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

^ double post lel

sorry for late aaaaa
nano.ripe <3

[General]

1. i'm just curious,why add red timing here? 00:00:204
2. why add kiai time here 02:32:309 ? i think its unnecessary because the music not showing the particular rhythm
3. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
   soft-slidertick.wav
   soft-slidertick2.wav
   
   Ranking Criteria - Audio
   
   Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms, unless there's a special purpose. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

[Easy]
00:33:287 (2) - ctrl h for better flow imo fixed
00:39:483 (4) - ^ for reduce the overlap no problem
00:47:961 (1) - i think here should be nc so it make consistent nc with each other (and also remove nc at 00:49:266 (1) ) fixed
00:51:548 (2) - finish (i hear cymbal here) fixed
00:58:396 (1) - unnecessary clap fixed
01:04:918 - nc here and remove nc at 01:06:222 (1) fixed
01:07:526 - ^ ^
01:10:135 - ^ ^
01:11:439 (1) - remove nc ^
01:23:179 (1) - unnecessary nc imo ^
01:32:309 (1) - what about ctrl j this? so it would make a great flow with circle (2) *if you dont mind you can ctrl j 01:33:613 (3) too ok
01:36:222 (3,4) - this too edgy imo (maybe make one slider curve?) no change
01:55:461 (4) - maybe nc here? fixed
01:58:396 (1) - i think this should be clickable (so it make consistent pattern and also emphatize to down beat) ok changed
02:02:309 (3) - ctrl j? changed
02:04:592 (3) - can you move this to (108,164)? so it make a good flow ~ No!
02:11:113 (1) - maybe set the spinner's sampleset to drum and add whistle? fixed
02:31:005 (1,2) - delete this and add slider instead? it would be better! no change

sorry i'm just mod one diff becaue i'm busy xd
and GL ~

MisterDinner wrote:

nm

[General]
Never use 10% volume with hitsounds so innately quiet. I change them a bit
00:54:157 (3) - you should move the preview to here I will think about it. Maybe I will change it if someone notice it one more time

[Hard]
00:11:240 (3) - put this note directly over the spinner mid A E S T H E T I C S Sure
01:23:994 (4) - this note sounds off beat Rly? Check it again.
01:34:103 (3) - based on patterns, you can probably place this note on the end of 01:34:266 (4) - Nah it plays better right now

Good diff, some errors in there but they pass for a hard diff.

[Light Insane]
So, there are quite a few spacing errors in this but other than that this is well made, i cant find anything.

[Insane]
00:07:640 (7) - place this note on top of 00:07:240 (6) - its a common pattern used for 1/1 notes when the map has jumpsthe same pattern is used 00:06:84 (4,5) - here, even after looking at it a few times i still missed it Ok I will do that...
00:10:840 (5,6) - same for these two, place them on top of 00:10:440 (4) - ...But not here
00:23:668 (4,5,6) - there are no dominant beats to justify these sliders, just use a normal stream I will leave it be. I think slider plays better here
past that I cant find anything wrong with it, its fun to play, the spacing changes are unjustified most of the time, but it works , good job.

[Pipe Dream]
Good diff, nothing wrong with it as far as I can tell, all the diffs have fun styles to them, go for rank.

General

Yasai's Easy

Normal

Venix wrote:

For queue!

Legend

Normal Suggestion
Strong Suggestion
Unrankable

General

1. Meta is good
2. 00:54:157 - Set preview point for this moment, because it looks better Fixed
3. Kiai times is inconsistent, fix it Fixed

Normal

1. 00:38:831 (3,1) - overlap Fixed
2. 00:46:983 (4,5) - blank it Nah...
3. 01:31:168 (4,5) - too close Fixed a bit(AI mod doesn't allow me to spread it further)
4. 01:51:548 (1) - this spinner is not for rythm Changed
5. 01:59:700 (4,1) - stack it Done

~GL!

1. HP could be set lower to 2 imo makes it a bit easier since its 185 bpm already and normal is also hp 3 so diff spread stuff aswell
2. 00:23:179 (3,4) - really harsh flow here basicly full direciton change, maybe try something like you did 02:54:483 (3,4) - or this instead for some more circular flow
   
3. 00:33:287 (2) - control+g+h+j so the curve is outward to improve the flow a bit more
4. 00:39:483 (4) - for some less harsh flow and avoiding the overlaps adjust a bit like rotating -25° or smthign
   
5. 00:41:439 (3,4) - prob best to control + h~ish these so it fixes the ds from 00:41:113 (2,3) -
6. 00:49:266 (3,4) - what do you think about placing first the circle here and then the return, it gives 00:50:570 (1) - more impact and the return follows the vocal aswell since your bound to have drum catched in the return regardless
7. 01:19:266 (3,4) - same as 00:49:266 (3,4) - sounds better with the guitar aswell since the beginning and end of the return will have the same guitar pitch
8. 01:24:157 (1,1) - not enough recovery time for an easy diff unfortunatly, gonna need 1 full measure/1500ish ms so I'd end it 1/2 earlier
9. 02:00:026 (5) - check DS (maybe just control + shift + D (4,5,6) if it was done manually)
10. 02:41:113 - would place a circle here tbh even though your following the vocals so you'll keep playing in constant 1/1 rythm for this section here which makes the next vocals being on the red tick not that noticable when playing
11. 03:11:766 (2) - vocal stopping the the middle while the slider is still exteding doesnt really sound that well imo, I'd suggest chaning this into a 1/1 return instead so you the return on the vocal stopping
12. 03:12:581 (1) - can add a 5% volume right at the end aswell yo completely mute it since the music also completly stops
13. really solid easy really liking the hitsounds usuage!

1. Euhm your DS is kinda all over the place I see 1.2 0.8 1.3 0.9 1.1 1.6 etc.. it fits your emphasizing mostly BUT its still a normal diff so, just like easy, it needs a constant ds unfortunatly :/ Flow and visuals etc prob gonna change a lot so I'll maintain from modding that mainly
2. 00:03:440 (4,5) - circle 1 1/1 slider for the vocals sound better so you a have a sound where the gap is since the vocals extend aswell (or 1/2 return + circle if your gonna follow that guitar thingy)
3. 00:06:240 (4) - kinda weird to start a return here when the instensity of the vocals change in the middle maybe something like 00:05:840 (3,4) - a 1/1 and 1/2 slider would fit better since the first 2 are the same intensity
4. 00:14:700 (2,3) - If your gonna make these overlaps in a normal diff I'd make them overlap in the middel of the slider instead since it'll look nicer since overlapping just the borders at the end is kinda meh visually stuff
   
5. 00:53:179 (3) - just a circle here would fit a lot better since the previous drums are building up to this note, now it kinda looks and plays like an extenstion of the drums
6. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - even though it fits, this is too much of difificulty gap between easy diff which uses solely 1/1 or 2/1 beats, now making 4 fast 1/3 returns is too much. If you wanna keep the returns I'd suggest making something more along the line of this rythm to have a familiar 1/1 gap between the notes
   
7. 02:33:287 (3,4) - swith the rythms here aswell like you did all next times since it also has that vocal in the middle of 3
8. 02:46:005 (3,4) - control + g rythm here, makes downbeat clickable and sounds better with the previous note being a slider since its the same musically as the note before

1. 00:01:640 (1,2,3,4) - 00:04:840 (1,2,3,4) - 00:08:040 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you could a less dense rythm here since its still a really quiet and slow intro. Like make 00:01:840 (2,3) - into one extended slider for the vocal for example
2. 00:10:440 (4) - NC this atleast for better readablity for the rythm gap changing since its really hard to read currentlyl with being the same visual distance
3. 00:23:668 (1,2,3) - doesnt really flow based on how it plays bc of the slider leniency, the angles are really to sharp atm so you don't have circular flow playablity wise would, would move 00:23:831 (2) - a bit more down left
4. 00:45:353 (1) - NC on this one instead
5. 00:47:309 (5,1) - the 1/1 gap could be better indicated here since it kinda looks like a 1/2 when you see the next combos
6. 00:50:244 (5) - the sliderbody whistle seems unintentional here
7. 00:55:461 (5,1) - noticable sv changes here, better to NC them
8. 00:58:396 (1) - kinda missing this stuff sometimes in this diff, its a lot stronger note then all the rest with being the downbeat/increased vocal intensity/new intersumet segemnt start etc yet there isn't really any indicating of it being that different from the rest if you get what I mean, I dunno it just feels like just another note placed there since it happens to fit the flow instead of indication the change in music aswell
9. 01:04:673 (4,6) - claps on these aswell for the stronger drum
10. 01:24:157 (5) - sure you wanna use 3 hitsounds for this? I'd ditch the clap tbh
11. 02:11:439 (2) - ending with somethign non clickable lhere ike your other diffs sounds better since the music stops mostly here
12. 02:25:787 (3,4,5,6) - plays really weird with the density changing all of the sudden while the music remains the same and you have the (6) clickable which is kinda like the reasoning from 02:11:439 (2) - why its better to have it not clickable, would change. I'd just use a simple return here instead so you have a tick for cymbals aswell like you wanted tbh
    
13. A bit too clustered imo which make for some awkward movements like 02:42:744 (5,6,7,8) - for example would benefit from slightly more spacing

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! From my queue

Normal

1. Euhm your DS is kinda all over the place I see 1.2 0.8 1.3 0.9 1.1 1.6 etc.. it fits your emphasizing mostly BUT its still a normal diff so, just like easy, it needs a constant ds unfortunatly :/ Thats sad I will try to fix some later Flow and visuals etc prob gonna change a lot so I'll maintain from modding that mainly
2. 00:03:440 (4,5) - circle 1 1/1 slider for the vocals sound better so you a have a sound where the gap is since the vocals extend aswell (or 1/2 return + circle if your gonna follow that guitar thingy) Changed
3. 00:06:240 (4) - kinda weird to start a return here when the instensity of the vocals change in the middle maybe something like 00:05:840 (3,4) - a 1/1 and 1/2 slider would fit better since the first 2 are the same intensity Changed
4. 00:14:700 (2,3) - If your gonna make these overlaps in a normal diff I'd make them overlap in the middel of the slider instead since it'll look nicer since overlapping just the borders at the end is kinda meh visually stuff Fixed
   
5. 00:53:179 (3) - just a circle here would fit a lot better since the previous drums are building up to this note, now it kinda looks and plays like an extenstion of the drums Changed
6. 01:14:048 (1,2,3,4) - even though it fits, this is too much of difificulty gap between easy diff which uses solely 1/1 or 2/1 beats, now making 4 fast 1/3 returns is too much. If you wanna keep the returns I'd suggest making something more along the line of this rythm to have a familiar 1/1 gap between the notes Changed
   
7. 02:33:287 (3,4) - swith the rythms here aswell like you did all next times since it also has that vocal in the middle of 3 Changed
8. 02:46:005 (3,4) - control + g rythm here, makes downbeat clickable and sounds better with the previous note being a slider since its the same musically as the note before Changed

Pipe Dream

1. 00:01:640 (1,2,3,4) - 00:04:840 (1,2,3,4) - 00:08:040 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you could a less dense rythm here since its still a really quiet and slow intro. Like make 00:01:840 (2,3) - into one extended slider for the vocal for example I remapped whole begining
2. 00:10:440 (4) - NC this atleast for better readablity for the rythm gap changing since its really hard to read currentlyl with being the same visual distance
   ^
3. 00:23:668 (1,2,3) - doesnt really flow based on how it plays bc of the slider leniency, the angles are really to sharp atm so you don't have circular flow playablity wise would, would move 00:23:831 (2) - a bit more down left ... I dont know to make it flow better or how to remapp this so for now I will do what you said. (I will ramap it if I come up with something better)
4. 00:45:353 (1) - NC on this one instead Fixed
5. 00:47:309 (5,1) - the 1/1 gap could be better indicated here since it kinda looks like a 1/2 when you see the next combos Nah.. Its good to me
6. 00:50:244 (5) - the sliderbody whistle seems unintentional here O_O mistakes were made
7. 00:55:461 (5,1) - noticable sv changes here, better to NC them Done
8. 00:58:396 (1) - kinda missing this stuff sometimes in this diff, its a lot stronger note then all the rest with being the downbeat/increased vocal intensity/new intersumet segemnt start etc yet there isn't really any indicating of it being that different from the rest if you get what I mean, I dunno it just feels like just another note placed there since it happens to fit the flow instead of indication the change in music aswell Oh. I will try to remap it.
9. 01:04:673 (4,6) - claps on these aswell for the stronger drum Done
10. 01:24:157 (5) - sure you wanna use 3 hitsounds for this? I'd ditch the clap tbh Fixed
11. 02:11:439 (2) - ending with somethign non clickable lhere ike your other diffs sounds better since the music stops mostly here No change
12. 02:25:787 (3,4,5,6) - plays really weird with the density changing all of the sudden while the music remains the same and you have the (6) clickable which is kinda like the reasoning from 02:11:439 (2) - why its better to have it not clickable, would change. I'd just use a simple return here instead so you have a tick for cymbals aswell like you wanted tbh ^
    
13. A bit too clustered imo which make for some awkward movements like 02:42:744 (5,6,7,8) - for example would benefit from slightly more spacing Maybe I will remap it soon to create more spacing

I only played and looked briefly at ApplePie's diff and got the be honest mate, its a lot more polished in terms of smooth rythm transitions/consistency between similar parts in the song like the structure inside the combos and emphasizing notes. I know about that. And I know my last diff might suck at some parts(Thats why there is ------Mod it on Pipe Dream in description
Which I kinda missed in your last diff sometimes :/ like it felt really abrupt/forced to play on some parts instead of it coming naturally if you know what I mean
The easy and ApplePie's insane already look and play good imo, prob just need some minor modding, but for the other diffs to be in a rankable state for a BN to nominate it, it'll prob need more polishing then these 2 if I'm honest :/

Hope it helped! and sorry if it sounds agressive or something its really not intended its just the way I write :/

Venix wrote:

For queue!

Legend

Normal Suggestion
Strong Suggestion
Unrankable

General

1. Meta is good
2. 00:54:157 - Set preview point for this moment, because it looks better
3. Kiai times is inconsistent, fix it

Yasai's Easy

1. 00:41:113 (2,3) - fix distance snap lol nice changed
2. 01:24:157 (1) - end this spinner here 01:26:766 Easy is useless
3. 01:59:700 (4,5,6) - this is too hard for beginners no change
4. 02:21:874 - end this brake here No!
   Good easy diff! thank you~

~GL!

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! From my queue

Easy

1. HP could be set lower to 2 imo makes it a bit easier since its 185 bpm already and normal is also hp 3 so diff spread stuff aswell I think this may be the
2. 00:23:179 (3,4) - really harsh flow here basicly full direciton change, maybe try something like you did 02:54:483 (3,4) - or this instead for some more circular flow no change
   
3. 00:33:287 (2) - control+g+h+j so the curve is outward to improve the flow a bit moreok changed
4. 00:39:483 (4) - for some less harsh flow and avoiding the overlaps adjust a bit like rotating -25° or smthign no change
   
5. 00:41:439 (3,4) - prob best to control + h~ish these so it fixes the ds from 00:41:113 (2,3) - ok changed
6. 00:49:266 (3,4) - what do you think about placing first the circle here and then the return, it gives 00:50:570 (1) - more impact and the return follows the vocal aswell since your bound to have drum catched in the return regardless no change
7. 01:19:266 (3,4) - same as 00:49:266 (3,4) - sounds better with the guitar aswell since the beginning and end of the return will have the same guitar pitch ^
8. 01:24:157 (1,1) - not enough recovery time for an easy diff unfortunatly, gonna need 1 full measure/1500ish ms so I'd end it 1/2 earlier no problem
9. 02:00:026 (5) - check DS (maybe just control + shift + D (4,5,6) if it was done manually) lol nice!
10. 02:41:113 - would place a circle here tbh even though your following the vocals so you'll keep playing in constant 1/1 rythm for this section here which makes the next vocals being on the red tick not that noticable when playing no!
11. 03:11:766 (2) - vocal stopping the the middle while the slider is still exteding doesnt really sound that well imo, I'd suggest chaning this into a 1/1 return instead so you the return on the vocal stopping is not vocal
12. 03:12:581 (1) - can add a 5% volume right at the end aswell yo completely mute it since the music also completly stops ok changed
13. really solid easy really liking the hitsounds usuage!

I only played and looked briefly at ApplePie's diff and got the be honest mate, its a lot more polished in terms of smooth rythm transitions/consistency between similar parts in the song like the structure inside the combos and emphasizing notes.
Which I kinda missed in your last diff sometimes :/ like it felt really abrupt/forced to play on some parts instead of it coming naturally if you know what I mean
The easy and ApplePie's insane already look and play good imo, prob just need some minor modding, but for the other diffs to be in a rankable state for a BN to nominate it, it'll prob need more polishing then these 2 if I'm honest :/

Hope it helped! and sorry if it sounds agressive or something its really not intended its just the way I write :/

• Consider cutting mp3 file from the last 8-10 sec of emptiness

• 01:43:722 (4,1) - using more space here would be sequential of your previous distance choises
  00:21:385 (2,3,4) - straight triple doesn't fit music. Make it curved or zigzag
  If the change above was not accepted then stack 00:21:548 (3,3) -
  00:31:005 (1) - stack with 00:30:353 (3) - and fix further direction by Ctrl+Shift+R
  00:46:005 (2,3,4) - distance between two sillables is less than between two letters inside one syllable
  00:47:798 (2,3,4,1) - ^
  01:10:624 (2) - there's nothing sharp to emphasize
  01:13:722 (4,5,1,2,3) - use equal DS here
  01:28:885 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing
  
  Flow suggestions:
  00:16:657 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+Shift+R 30 degrees clockwise
  00:19:918 (3,4,5,1) - same things flowing differently. Ctrl+H 00:20:896 (1) - and rotate anticlockwise (or Ctrl+H 00:20:244 (4) - if you wanna make it harder to play)
  00:25:135 (3,4) - make them more curved
  00:41:439 (1) - would sacrifice this blanket, rotate 125 degrees clockwise and move to the top right
  03:01:494 (2,3,4) - rotate 110 degrees clockwise around 03:01:494 (2) -

Worminators wrote:

m4m from _IxApplePie_'s queue

[Pipe Dream]

1. 00:33:613 (1,2,3) - I highly suggest using the same rythm as 00:32:309 (1,2,3) - because it feels weird breaking the rythm especially when there is no voice
   here Well that change of rythm was bcs of guitar but ok I will change it
2. 00:40:135 (1,2,5) - This inconsistancy between sliders looks bad imo Fixed.. a bit?
3. 00:45:353 (1,2,3) - The spacing here looks the same as the previous 1/2 jumps, making it hard to read Never had a problem with reading this. There is even NC there to help player with noticing change of the pace. No Change
   Can I suggest this placement or something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6081228
4. 01:22:526 (7) - Replace this with a long slider Nah..
5. 01:36:059 - Is there a note missing or something? It would be way better if you added one here ... I will change it for now.
6. 01:45:353 (1,2) - Stack (2)'s slidertail with (1)'s slidertail? Maybe it looks better but plays rly bad. I was thinking about remapping this part, maybe later.
7. 02:10:461 (3) - Stack this one perfectly with 02:08:831 (2) - Oh.. Fixed
8. 02:53:179 (1) - Move this slider to x:236 y:312 for a better stream curve? Sure
9. 03:02:309 (5) - Move this slider down a bit so it's clickable area stacks with 03:01:820 (2) - it plays better imo Done
10. 03:08:831 (7) - 1/2 slider here Nope

[Yasai's Easy]

1. Is there something broken with this diff? WUT... yes it is... but how that happen? Fixed

Maelstrrom wrote:

m4m

General

• Consider cutting mp3 file from the last 8-10 sec of emptiness // not sure about this :/ Flame needs to check this himeself

ApplePie's Light Insane

• 00:21:385 (2,3,4) - straight triple doesn't fit music. Make it curved or zigzag // fits perfectly imo
  00:31:005 (1) - stack with 00:30:353 (3) - and fix further direction by Ctrl+Shift+R // the flow here is not a problem btw, but i just changed 00:31:494 (2) - spacings a little as it felt off
  01:10:624 (2) - there's nothing sharp to emphasize // will cahnge if it's a BIG problem, i just wanted to make it flow nice + pick up from 01:10:135 (1)
  01:28:885 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing // don't find it much problem, might change if others mentioned. might.
  
  Flow suggestions:
  00:16:657 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+Shift+R 30 degrees clockwise //er no, but i changed something else
  00:19:918 (3,4,5,1) - same things flowing differently. Ctrl+H 00:20:896 (1) - and rotate anticlockwise (or Ctrl+H 00:20:244 (4) - if you wanna make it harder to play) // nope.
  00:25:135 (3,4) - make them more curved // no
  00:41:439 (1) - would sacrifice this blanket, rotate 125 degrees clockwise and move to the top right //nope
  03:01:494 (2,3,4) - rotate 110 degrees clockwise around 03:01:494 (2) // will consider about thiss <#

Worminators wrote:

m4m from _IxApplePie_'s queue

[ApplePie's Light Insane]

1. 03:02:472 (2) - ^same here // 03:02:472 (2) - keeping this sound as it's really prominent here anddd i have no idea how to change this too

I literally found nothing else to mention //thx

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Hobbes2 wrote:

oki nm from queue

Normal

00:01:840 (2) - NC, downbeat + the background music starts here to it's worth distinguishing from the previous note. Sure I changed my mind

00:05:040 (2) - Similar to above, move the NC to this note. It's the downbeat so it should be combo'd, not the previous note. I guess you could chalk this off as "personal preference", but it technically makes more sense to NC the downbeat here. This goes for anywhere else in the map you NC like this. "personal preference" I guess? xD

00:14:700 (2,3,4) - This placement is way too complicated for a normal. Stacking object's on or behind other objects' heads is already hard, because it's not easy to read when you're new, but also the flow from 2 into 3 isn't very natural making this entire pattern not appropriate for this difficulty. I will keep it for now, maybe will change it later

00:25:135 (2) - curve the second half of this shape to blanket 1? like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6096133 Done

00:52:526 (1,2,3) - This flow is not intuitive, make it flatter (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6096141 not exactly this but this gives you an idea) I change it a bit

00:57:092 (1,3) - Move 3 a bit further away from 1 so it's not like they're almost touching Done

00:59:374 (1) - Spacing for this note is much smaller than usual in this area Fixed?

01:04:592 (1) - ^ ^

01:13:559 (3,2) - This overlap does not look good. Fixed

01:14:048 (1) - huge jump to this slider suddenly Changed

01:16:657 (3,4) - I think these cover each other too much, make it less so? So it's easier to read Fixed?

01:27:092 (2) - Reminder about the NC thing I said earlier Sure^

01:36:385 - Powerful ignored sound :v Not anymore. Changed

01:36:548 (4,5,1,2) - The spacing here is way bigger than usual (a whopping 1.7x average) Changed

01:40:135 (1,3) - These almost overlap, doesn't look nice Fixed

01:47:961 (1,2,3) - Cool pattern but because of the overlap there's no way a Normal player is gonna read this Changed

01:51:059 (8) - NC should be here for consistency Fixed

01:51:059 (8,2) - hard to read overlap thing Changed

02:00:679 (1,2,3,4) - This placement is meh, a combination of the overlaps and lack of any real structure here. I'd just redo this pattern entirely. Changed

02:04:266 (2,2) - 2muchoverlap Nah.. I think it is good like it is now

02:06:874 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Jumps in a normal? well I guess it's allowed but when you're doing it with a single tap pattern I think it's a bit excessive. :X ^

02:23:831 (5,6,1,2,1,2) - again like, jumps in a normal is technically allowed but it's too much when you're just having circles, also this isn't very clear to read for a newer player. ^

This diff needs work, the spacing just feels random at times and the overlaps / patterning are a bit too complex for a normal. With more mods I'm sure the problems can be worked out, though. I think that I fixed most of those random spacing

Edit:

Hard

00:01:840 (2) - NC same reason as the normal ^

00:02:640 (3) - The gap between 2 and 3 is 1/1 but you space this small, and the gap between 3 and 4 is 1/4 but you space it huge. This can be frustrating to read. No change. For now, maybe I will look at it later

00:04:840 (1,2) - blanket Fixed?

00:10:440 (1,2,3) - Might be neat to just make an equilateral triangle out of these since the vocals are all pretty much equal in intensity. Changed

00:15:026 (4,5) - You use the exact spacing for 1/4 and then 00:15:516 (5,1) - 1/2 right after, which can be misleading. No change

00:14:537 (2,3,4) - Not good flow imo, the flow from 2 to 3 is short, but then suddenly you make a big jump to 4 almost in a line but then have to switch directions because of the slider. ^

00:23:668 (7) - the 1/4 drums dont start until 00:23:831 - Maybe... but that slider goes for Guitar

00:24:483 (3) - NC should be here Why would I place NC on the Downbeat, No one does it Am I right? XD No but srsly Not every NC needs to be there. (Visauls)

00:29:048 (4,5) - This overlap is not very appealing. Fixed?

00:42:744 (1,2,3) - I think this should have the same spacing, there's no change in the music to justify a spacing change. It would also make the pattern look nicer, imo. Changed

00:51:222 (3,4,5) - ow, this pattern is kinda hard to read because of the way you did the overlaps. Yes It is hard to read and whats wrong about it?

00:55:461 (4,2) - Did you mean to stack the tails of these? Oh.. Fixed

01:45:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing much smaller than usual but the music isn't less intense or anything to justify it No change.

01:49:266 (1) - Not a perfect solution to this, but a way you could make this nicer is to fully overlap 1's head with 3's body Done

01:51:548 (1,3) - neater if these dont overlap Fixed

01:53:179 (1,2) - Same here...just these small overlaps don't look nice while playing, it makes the map look messy, especially when they don't need to be there. Changed
02:00:353 (7,1) - space 1 out more so it's more obvious this is a 1/1 gap Done

02:26:113 (2,3) - really soft part of the song the SV should be lower Changed

Hobbes2 wrote:

oki nm from queue

ApplePie

00:01:840 (2) - I suggest NCing here, one the downbeat is here and it's also where the background music kicks in so it's worth distinguishing this measure from the previous note. // i know downbeats are meant for NC's but in this case, i don't find a NC necessary as 00:01:640 (1) - the vocals starts here.

00:05:040 (2) - NC should be on the downbeat //^

Uh, could you explain your NC pattern? It looks kinda random to me, I suggest just doing a NC every downbeat or every other downbeat. // every (okay maybe not every) downbeat, except for some emphasis / consistent combos. Soo, I'll talk about the "inconsistent ones at the front only since the back are literally every downbeat
-00:15:516 (4) - this note is too soft for the change in NC so I delayed it and put it on 00:15:679 (1) - which has more sounds and better note to NC
but if any modders/BN are finding this a problem i'll ya know.

01:19:265 (5) - NC should be here if you're comboing on downbeats//want to complete a full length beat at 01:17:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:19:429 (1) - indicates a new beat pattern.

01:19:265 (5) - drum here that is worth mapping to //huh?? what do you mean .-. this is already mapped.

01:24:238 (1) - You can end the spinner on 01:26:766 - and then map starting on the downbeat //following the upbeat at 00:14:374 (1) - and i don't really like having only 1/2 beats till the next note after a spinner...

02:31:005 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read this, distances are the same visually but not on the timeline. // i really like the fact that at 02:31:005 (1,2,3,4) - 1>2>3 are slow speed while 3>4 is a faster beat with same spacing, it gives you that kind of feel when you play it

oki so I'll finish this in like a few hours, got a league game to do C:

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Pandano wrote:

Weeee! NM as requested (Sorry for the super belated mod Work, y'know)

Normal

"Normal" diffs don't usually have cross jumps. This one does so should it be "Light Hard"? lol
Well Its 2.24 so its more like medium but I will keep it as Normal for now

Playable content
00:01:640 - Why NC? Fixed
00:09:840 - Why not stacking onto each other like others before? It flows better
01:07:853 - Blanket (1)'s slider end with (2). Rearrange (3) and (4) afterwards to avoid spacing problem. Done
01:26:929 - Remove NC? Fixed
01:30:679 - Place (3)'s slider start onto (1)'s slider end before. Pattern changed completly
01:31:168 - Blanket this one's slider start with (3) before. Rearrange if there's spacing problems. ^
01:37:363 - Too close to (6) before and (2) after. Fixed
01:54:483 - Mirror this one to look like (6) after and also to make double blanket Done
02:31:657 - Blanket this one with (1) before. Done

Hitsounding
00:29:700 - "Finish" at (1)'s slider start Nope, for all of those. Maybe I will change them if I find sample that fits better to the music in those places u mentioned
00:34:918 - ^ (But I think it's optional for this one)
01:16:657 - "Finish" at (3)'s slider start
01:21:874 - ^
01:37:526 - Replace "Whistle" with "Finish". I don't know about you but when I used default skin, I barely heard the "Whistle" sound
02:54:483 - "Finish" sound at (5)'s slider start.
02:58:396 - "Finish" here
02:59:700 - ^

I see a lot of cross jumps here so it may be a bit frustrating for "Normal" players. Really suggest you should consider this problem: Either rearrange them or rename this difficulty xD.

Hard

Actually this diff is out of my modding range but I'd like to have some suggestions on this one. Lol
* Some notes get stacked on each other so many times throughout. I still managed to pass this one but sometimes I got confused by the jumps with multiple stacked-on notes.
* That's it xD

Still it's a great mapset so looking forward to seeing it get ranked and played worldwide ^x^

Zyl wrote:

Wait for my hard diff ;9

Hobbes2 wrote:

oki nm from queue

Yasai's Easy

00:25:461 (2,3) - You can definitely improve this blanket to make this pattern neater. fixed

00:30:679 (2,4) - Not the biggest deal, but perhaps this pattern would look neater if 2 and 4 had the same x value, and then you adjusted 3 to complete the perfect triangle. no change

00:42:418 (4,1) - Consider blanketing these two? Would make this look nicer. fixed

00:45:679 - This pause makes sense, but I'm not really sure about 00:50:896 - as there's definitely more going in the music (such as vocals) for this this part not good

00:55:787 (3,4,1) - Make an equilateral triangle out of these? The placement now I'm not a big fan of. no change

01:23:179 (5) - NC for consistency ok changed

01:24:157 (1) - Did you mean to silence the spinner's end? Looks like you made a volume point to increase it to 50 for the hitsound on the end of the spinner lol I was mistake

01:34:266 (4) - Not a fan of his being a 2/1 slider, 01:34:918 - should be clickable imo; because of the strong guitar(?) that plays then. no change

01:37:526 (1,2) - blanket fixed

01:42:744 (1,2) - Definitely blanket, this one is rather noticeable. ^

01:49:592 (3,1) - This would look much better as a blanket, here's a screenshot of what it could look like - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6096083 (this slider's head is on 400:44, with the shape I have the DS is not broken) ok! nice choice

02:05:896 (1) - You can start the volume of this spinner lower and then increase the volume on each downbeat to match the song; might be cool ok changed

02:43:396 (4) - Should be a NC if you're to be consistent, then remove the NC on 02:44:048 (1) - no change

After doing the above, restart the NC pattern on 02:45:353 (3), and redo your combos after. You accidently made the one combo above 3 downbeats instead of 2 and it messed up the pattern.

03:04:918 (2) - finish on tail, I don't think that's intentional. fixed

03:12:581 (1) - I think a 14 second spinner is too long for an easy. Consider ending this at a shorter time. okey... changed


oki so I'll finish this in like a few hours, got a league game to do C:

Pandano wrote:

Weeee! NM as requested (Sorry for the super belated mod Work, y'know)

Yasai's Easy

I don't know if this diff should be called "Easy". It looks more like "Light Normal" to me imo

Hitsounding
00:23:179 (3,4) - Imo, could make these hitsound "finish".
00:44:048 (3,4) - ^
01:16:005 - Hitsound "Finish" in (2)'s slider end. May sound better
01:21:222 - ^
02:37:526 - Hitsound "Finish" (1)'s slider start
02:57:744 - Remove "Clap" in (5)'s slider end and use "Finish" instead
02:59:700 - ^ but with (3)'s slider start

Playable content
00:26:766 - Move it closer to (4) so as to remove the directing line (DL). Many other notes don't have DL between them, so the space must be consistent.
00:38:505- ^
00:53:179 - Remove NC
01:03:287 - Do it like this to remove DL:

01:12:092 - Remove DL
01:23:505 - ^
01:36:874 - ^
01:42:418 - ^
(There are more so you know what to do for the rest of the song)

The rest of the diff is okay!

sorry Hitsound only fix

Still it's a great mapset so looking forward to seeing it get ranked and played worldwide ^x^

Zyl wrote:

GD
Requested from my Queue

Zyl's Hard

Just few things:

General

1. Unused hitsounds. Oh.. I forgot to delete them
   
   Unused hitsounds.

   Unused hitsounds:
   normal-hitclap.wav
   normal-hitnormal.wav
   normal-hitwhistle.wav
2. Difficulties end time is not consistent. So I will make them end at: 03:16:657 I guess?
   
   Ending Times

   03:25:787 - Yasai's Easy
   03:16:657 - Normal
   03:24:483 - Zyl's Hard
   03:16:657 - ApplePie's Light Insane
   03:16:657 - Hard
   03:16:657 - Insane
   03:16:657 - Pipe Dream
   
   
   Your difficulties should all end at the same spot. Having a fully-mapped Normal/Hard and a half-mapped Easy just looks sloppy/lazy. A full Easy may look boring to you, but not to a player that can't handle the harder difficulties.
   
   ~Ranking Criteria.
3. 1st Kiai time must start here 00:54:483 (1) - .OK
4. Please ask to experienced modders/mappers what diffs are pretty rankable, remember that you are new in this so don't try to extend yourself too much.

That's all ~+1 Star

Mein Gauche wrote:

hi from my q.

this song. I like it.

[Pipe Dream]
00:01:640 to 00:11:240 - use slower sv please. make it 0.5 - 0.65. why? because no drums. That would be too slow
00:19:592 (2) - you use circles on the other. why a slider here? I used slider bcs Its not exactly the same as the others. It has that weird guitar(I guess) sound.
00:36:222 (1,2) - too far. no significant cue of larger spacing. Fixed but just a bit cuz there is vocal that I want to be emphasised
01:45:026 (4,5) - too far. Changed
02:03:939 (2) - this slider going upward is very confusing. I will not change it
02:05:896 (1) - should put this under 02:05:570 (3) imo. Nope
02:31:005 (1,2) - turn this to a slider as it's too confusing. I will just change placement
02:53:179 - this is your chance to map the famous pp wrecking fullscreen 1-2 jumps but whatever. (i'm only saying this because it's satisfying to watch the movement C:) Maybe. But I dont want to make it too hard (I will think about it and try it but I will change it only if it will be playable and enjoyable)

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Not bad. Good luck!

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Version:Yasai's Easy
Source:さんかれあ
Tags:op Sankarea Undying Love Zombie girl Yasaija 714 _IxApplePie_
BeatmapID:1066949
BeatmapSetID:450136


[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1


[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples


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Yasaija 714 wrote:

sorry... update please Sure np but I will change your last spinner end to 03:16:657 cuz all diffs in a set needs to end at the same point.

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Lilyanna wrote:

i didnt mod this before from my queue because its fast lol but since u post again i try~

General :
-i dont see why need green color combo
-hyper /light insane / insane has same sv 1.60 zzz

Easy :

check aimod tags issues fixed
01:34:266 (4,1) - can make 2 1/1 sliders and add nc here 01:34:918 - fixed
01:44:048 (3,4) - paralelle maybe Not paralelle
01:50:570 - feels like u can add note here It does not change because the pick up too


did what i could i hope i helped Good luck!

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120,248,170244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Lilyanna wrote:

i didnt mod this before from my queue because its fast lol but since u post again i try~

General :
-i dont see why need green color combo Then watch Sankarea :3
-hyper /light insane / insane has same sv 1.60 zzz Yup but they are mapped in a diffrent way so whats a problem?

Normal :

maybe avoid the sv change Why tho? It's allowed in Normal
00:03:640 (5) - u can revers this slider so u dont feel that gap also it flow bette imo I'm not sure what u mean but changed
00:14:700 (2,3) - not so appealing also they overlapi recomand remap this pattern and what follow it Changed
00:15:679 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - u starting of spacing them by 1.1 and then 1.0 and end to 0.9 u have to stay consistent Fixed a bit
00:26:113 (4,5,1) - ok now its 1.2 ds consistency in normal is needed
01:12:581 (1,3) - avoid overlap on rever arrow doesnt look clean also ds problem Ds fixed A bit
02:31:005 (1,2) - fix blanket Done
02:49:918 (5) - maybe place this note somewhere else doesnt flow right there also doesnt look appealing Changed
02:57:744 (1) - remove nc Nope
02:58:396 (3) - add nc Nope
02:59:700 (1) - remove nc like u did to what came after Nope

did what i could i hope i helped Good luck!