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ROUND TABLE feat. Nino - Puzzle (TV Size)

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mardoka
235 posts
Joined May 2013
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mardoka
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by mardoka , edited 2 times in total.
KiririnIchiban
76 posts
Joined June 2013
KiririnIchiban
Update plz
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Artist:ROUND TABLE feat. Nino
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Creator:Mardoka
Version:B.Blast's Hardon
Source:NHK ni Youkoso!
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Renumi
Beatmap Nominator
904 posts
Joined July 2012
Renumi
i came to kill the meme
it's still pending by obligation so there's still hope

[ give me your name's hardon]
  1. 00:00:604 (1,2) - Aarrange these more like the previous two notes; 00:01:146 (1,2) - these two.
    Suggestion
  2. 00:02:049 (4) - Place under 00:02:772 (1) - this note's sliderend. Nitpicky but whatever.
  3. 00:01:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove this note. It sounds fine enough as it is without said note. Or this is just my suggestion, but you could do something like this for this part.
    Suggestion
  4. 00:04:941 (4,1) - These two sliders could be blanketed a bit better.
  5. 00:08:013 (4) - Not to be rude, but move to 00:08:194 or remove it altogether ;w;
  6. 00:12:170 (5) - aaaa end it on a red tick plsplsplspls my eyes ;-;
  7. 00:12:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - dumb suggestion but either way, place it under the previous notes' sliderend.
    Suggestion
  8. 00:13:435 (1) - Remove?
  9. 00:17:230 (4) - Remove the repeat and move 00:17:953 (1,2,3) - this series of notes to where the repeat was.
    Suggestion
  10. 00:28:977 (4,5) - Arrange 00:29:519 (3) - this note's sliderhead to welcome the previous note's sliderend.
    Suggestion
    Now:

    My suggestion:
  11. 00:28:073 - Like from this point on... the pattern is a bit... may I suggest? (changed colour to improve clarity :^))
    Suggestion
  12. 00:30:965 (1) - Sorry for suggesting so many changes on the placement and such but aaa remove repeat and place pink slider where the repeat was (red tick) and have it end on a red tick as well (like, I don't know, change the slider's shape or make it longer ;w; sorry)? I'll include a suggestion because I know you have no idea what I'm talking about :3
    Suggestion
  13. 00:31:507 (1) - You don't really need to start a new combo there, in my opinion ;w;
  14. 00:33:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - May I suggest removing the repeat on 00:34:760 (5) - this slider, moving the slider to where it would originally end if it still had a repeat (00:34:941 - LUL) and placing a note to where the repeat slider begins? (don't worry I'll include a picture uwu)
    Suggestion
    Now:

    My suggestion:
  15. 00:36:387 (3,4,5) - Unrelated but add a drum sampleset for these three notes here lol
  16. 00:42:531 (5) - Dumb, but add a new combo here, and if so, remove the already existant new combo 00:43:073 (1) - on this ;w;
  17. 00:45:423 (1,1) - Um... at least blanket these two ;-;
    Suggestion


    + remove nc on 00:45:423 (1) - huehue
  18. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - Separate/Distance these sliders further from 00:45:784 (1) - this one slider.
    A thing

    just ;;-;;
  19. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - Sliders on top of sliders DansGame Dude like place them side by side or something ;--;
    Suggestion


    idk i'm just trying to help out ;-;
  20. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - I know I'm suggesting way too many changes and not actual placement changes of the sorts, but arrange these closer timeline-wise to 00:48:314 (1) - this slider, as it seems it would be easier to follow along to the beat of the song, in my wholehearted opinion, by the way.
    Suggestion
  21. 00:48:857 (1) - Place at x:288;y:200?
  22. 00:49:579 (3,3) - These overlaps please Place the repeat slider like to the right side of 00:50:302 (1,2) - these notes \:3/
    Suggestion
  23. 00:51:567 (4,5,6,7) - Arrange closer (ds or something lul)
    Suggestion
  24. 00:53:555 (2,3) - Just nitpicking here, but separate these two a little bit more.
  25. 00:53:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current pattern here doesn't really fit the song's vocals all that well (how they were supposed to? don't kill me sorry) but that's just my opinion really.
    Suggestion
  26. 00:56:989 (1,2) - Pick a better placement for these twoooo, not just underneath and atop 00:56:085 (2,1) - these two sliders like idk x:216;y:224 for both sliders?
  27. 00:58:977 (1,2,3,4) - This continuous pattern just feels... odd to play somehow ;-; consider spacing some of these sliders out a bit, timeline-wise.
    Suggestion
  28. 01:01:326 (4,1) - A little big jump here? Like I said previously, I just... don't know, from my stance it just doesn't feel... good to have to hit all these in a single continuous pattern. That aside, I just think the gap between these is a bit too much... maybe? Like idk move the slider so that it's a bit easier to hit or something ;w;
  29. 01:06:025 (1,2) - Place x:80;y:80 overlaps ResidentSleeper
  30. 01:07:652 (4,5) - dUDE THIS CAN BE BLANKETED BETTER
    Suggestion
  31. 01:09:278 (1) - Replace for a note and place to where the sliderend would be (goes better with the song, in my opinion).
    Suggestion
  32. 01:11:628 (5) - ?
    Suggestion
  33. 01:14:158 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - are you hollow wings Seems like a bit of a spike in difficulty compared to the rest of the diff ;w;
  34. 01:15:784 (1) - On top of that you place it on top of that ^^ ? Find a better placement to avoid overlapping ;-;
  35. 01:16:146 (2) - Move to x:196;y:88 as it would look nicer with 01:15:784 (1) - this slider (which like uh side tangent but position better like no overlaps pls)
  36. 01:16:869 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Non-Stop? I guess a better question here would be, why'd you leave a blank spot 01:16:688 - here? like... considering that this part doesn't stop, it seems like it would be a better choice if you placed a blank section 01:18:134 - here too.. (like deleting 01:18:134 (2) - this note? that was the whole point of this suggestion to delete that note, but I wanted to give my reasoning as to why you should ;w; ok?)
  37. 01:17:953 (1) - If you actually did the above and want to keep doing that stuff (lul) then move this note to x:308;Y:344 and remove new combo.
  38. 01:18:314 (2) - AGAIN IF YOU DID THE ABOVE LUL REMOVE COMBO HERE
  39. 01:18:676 (1,2,3,4) - Same here sort of, but if you actually went ahead and did the previous thing or just wanna see how it looks like, then like... idk how to explain the suggestion below follows the song a bit better in my opinion if you feel as though this is discriminating against your rights as a mapper feel free to ignore this suggestion ;w;7 (basically replace 01:19:399 (3) - this slider for a note and place the note where the sliderhead would be lul not that hard to explain)
    Suggestion
  40. 01:20:122 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hOLY
  41. 01:22:290 (1,1,1,2) - Kindaaaa why I wrote all that stuff previously about this ending Kiai. Just... inconsistencies with patterns ;-;


+ 00:13:616 - useless dawg
00:21:929 - useless timing point breh

[ mardokidoki]
  1. 00:01:146 (3,4) - Lol, I don't know why but replace for a slider?
  2. 00:02:772 (5) - New combo?
  3. 00:03:314 (2) - Move to: x:196;y:136?
  4. 00:08:555 (6,8) - DansGameDansGameDansGameDansGameDansGame pls ;~;
    Suggestion
  5. 00:11:447 (4) - Move to x:264;y:156 since it would fit in more with the pattern you're going for?
  6. 00:13:796 (1) - No sound warrants for a beat here, in my opinion ;-; remove?
  7. 00:19:399 (6,7) - Make them look more parallel to one another?
    Suggestion
  8. 00:21:206 (6) - Unless this was placed with distance snap, move to x:368;y:228?
  9. 00:21:387 (1) - Why the new combo here? It seems more fitting to start it at 00:22:290 (4) - in my opinion.
  10. 00:27:531 (1) - Remove new combo and start it 00:28:073 (2) - here? Or just ignore and start it 00:28:073 (2) - here regardless.
  11. 00:29:881 (8) - No reason to be curved :/
  12. 00:30:242 (1,2) - ..Lower? (look at the bg and strive towards those placements forgot to include the axis lul)
    Suggestion
  13. 00:43:977 (5,1) - Place note under slider better ;w;
  14. 00:39:640 (5) - NC?
  15. 00:39:640 (5,7) - + blanket a little better
    Suggestion
  16. 00:45:423 (4,5) - First slider is curved bbut other isn't? slider racism i demand equality (make them both straight or curved idek)
  17. 00:48:314 (1) - New combo
  18. 00:51:748 (1,3) - ew they're touching
    Suggestion
  19. 01:10:001 (5) - New combo + arrange a bit better but leave 01:09:640 (4) - this slider alone so that it feels special?
    Suggestion


    or idk arrange however you'd like straight curved reverse selection idc
  20. 01:12:893 (3) - Reverse selection?
  21. 01:20:483 (9) - Every other slider is a curved one but this has a bezier curve? hmm ;-;
  22. 01:24:459 (3) - Move to x:300;y:108?

meme: killed

btw green lines are a bit different for both diffs (like uhm like bukkake blast's [that name i can't] spinner on his diff suppresses it almost completely [down to 5%] whereas in your diff doka, you lower the spinner volume down to 40%.. idk just feels weird make them the same or something <-<)

sorry if the mod seemed mostly catered towards b.blast lmao sorry you're a cool guy don't hurt me ;w;
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Renumi
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Renumi
bukkake i'm sorry man ;w;
mardoka
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Topic Starter
mardoka

Renigar wrote:

i came to kill the meme
it's still pending by obligation so there's still hope

[ give me your name's hardon]
  1. 00:00:604 (1,2) - Aarrange these more like the previous two notes; 00:01:146 (1,2) - these two.
    Suggestion
  2. 00:02:049 (4) - Place under 00:02:772 (1) - this note's sliderend. Nitpicky but whatever.
  3. 00:01:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove this note. It sounds fine enough as it is without said note. Or this is just my suggestion, but you could do something like this for this part.
    Suggestion
  4. 00:04:941 (4,1) - These two sliders could be blanketed a bit better.
  5. 00:08:013 (4) - Not to be rude, but move to 00:08:194 or remove it altogether ;w;
  6. 00:12:170 (5) - aaaa end it on a red tick plsplsplspls my eyes ;-;
  7. 00:12:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - dumb suggestion but either way, place it under the previous notes' sliderend.
    Suggestion
  8. 00:13:435 (1) - Remove?
  9. 00:17:230 (4) - Remove the repeat and move 00:17:953 (1,2,3) - this series of notes to where the repeat was.
    Suggestion
  10. 00:28:977 (4,5) - Arrange 00:29:519 (3) - this note's sliderhead to welcome the previous note's sliderend.
    Suggestion
    Now:

    My suggestion:
  11. 00:28:073 - Like from this point on... the pattern is a bit... may I suggest? (changed colour to improve clarity :^))
    Suggestion
  12. 00:30:965 (1) - Sorry for suggesting so many changes on the placement and such but aaa remove repeat and place pink slider where the repeat was (red tick) and have it end on a red tick as well (like, I don't know, change the slider's shape or make it longer ;w; sorry)? I'll include a suggestion because I know you have no idea what I'm talking about :3
    Suggestion
  13. 00:31:507 (1) - You don't really need to start a new combo there, in my opinion ;w;
  14. 00:33:676 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - May I suggest removing the repeat on 00:34:760 (5) - this slider, moving the slider to where it would originally end if it still had a repeat (00:34:941 - LUL) and placing a note to where the repeat slider begins? (don't worry I'll include a picture uwu)
    Suggestion
    Now:

    My suggestion:
  15. 00:36:387 (3,4,5) - Unrelated but add a drum sampleset for these three notes here lol
  16. 00:42:531 (5) - Dumb, but add a new combo here, and if so, remove the already existant new combo 00:43:073 (1) - on this ;w;
  17. 00:45:423 (1,1) - Um... at least blanket these two ;-;
    Suggestion


    + remove nc on 00:45:423 (1) - huehue
  18. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - Separate/Distance these sliders further from 00:45:784 (1) - this one slider.
    A thing

    just ;;-;;
  19. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - Sliders on top of sliders Dude like place them side by side or something ;--;
    Suggestion


    idk i'm just trying to help out ;-;
  20. 00:47:049 (2,3,4) - I know I'm suggesting way too many changes and not actual placement changes of the sorts, but arrange these closer timeline-wise to 00:48:314 (1) - this slider, as it seems it would be easier to follow along to the beat of the song, in my wholehearted opinion, by the way.
    Suggestion
  21. 00:48:857 (1) - Place at x:288;y:200?
  22. 00:49:579 (3,3) - These overlaps please Place the repeat slider like to the right side of 00:50:302 (1,2) - these notes \:3/
    Suggestion
  23. 00:51:567 (4,5,6,7) - Arrange closer (ds or something lul)
    Suggestion
  24. 00:53:555 (2,3) - Just nitpicking here, but separate these two a little bit more.
  25. 00:53:013 (1,2,3,4,5) - The current pattern here doesn't really fit the song's vocals all that well (how they were supposed to? don't kill me sorry) but that's just my opinion really.
    Suggestion
  26. 00:56:989 (1,2) - Pick a better placement for these twoooo, not just underneath and atop 00:56:085 (2,1) - these two sliders like idk x:216;y:224 for both sliders?
  27. 00:58:977 (1,2,3,4) - This continuous pattern just feels... odd to play somehow ;-; consider spacing some of these sliders out a bit, timeline-wise.
    Suggestion
  28. 01:01:326 (4,1) - A little big jump here? Like I said previously, I just... don't know, from my stance it just doesn't feel... good to have to hit all these in a single continuous pattern. That aside, I just think the gap between these is a bit too much... maybe? Like idk move the slider so that it's a bit easier to hit or something ;w;
  29. 01:06:025 (1,2) - Place x:80;y:80 overlaps
  30. 01:07:652 (4,5) - dUDE THIS CAN BE BLANKETED BETTER
    Suggestion
  31. 01:09:278 (1) - Replace for a note and place to where the sliderend would be (goes better with the song, in my opinion).
    Suggestion
  32. 01:11:628 (5) - ?
    Suggestion
  33. 01:14:158 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - are you hollow wings Seems like a bit of a spike in difficulty compared to the rest of the diff ;w;
  34. 01:15:784 (1) - On top of that you place it on top of that ^^ ? Find a better placement to avoid overlapping ;-;
  35. 01:16:146 (2) - Move to x:196;y:88 as it would look nicer with 01:15:784 (1) - this slider (which like uh side tangent but position better like no overlaps pls)
  36. 01:16:869 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Non-Stop? I guess a better question here would be, why'd you leave a blank spot 01:16:688 - here? like... considering that this part doesn't stop, it seems like it would be a better choice if you placed a blank section 01:18:134 - here too.. (like deleting 01:18:134 (2) - this note? that was the whole point of this suggestion to delete that note, but I wanted to give my reasoning as to why you should ;w; ok?)
  37. 01:17:953 (1) - If you actually did the above and want to keep doing that stuff (lul) then move this note to x:308;Y:344 and remove new combo.
  38. 01:18:314 (2) - AGAIN IF YOU DID THE ABOVE LUL REMOVE COMBO HERE
  39. 01:18:676 (1,2,3,4) - Same here sort of, but if you actually went ahead and did the previous thing or just wanna see how it looks like, then like... idk how to explain the suggestion below follows the song a bit better in my opinion if you feel as though this is discriminating against your rights as a mapper feel free to ignore this suggestion ;w;7 (basically replace 01:19:399 (3) - this slider for a note and place the note where the sliderhead would be lul not that hard to explain)
    Suggestion
  40. 01:20:122 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hOLY
  41. 01:22:290 (1,1,1,2) - Kindaaaa why I wrote all that stuff previously about this ending Kiai. Just... inconsistencies with patterns ;-;


+ 00:13:616 - useless dawg
00:21:929 - useless timing point breh

[ mardokidoki *cringe*]
  1. 00:01:146 (3,4) - Lol, I don't know why but replace for a slider? ok
  2. 00:02:772 (5) - New combo? ok
  3. 00:03:314 (2) - Move to: x:196;y:136? ummm ok
  4. 00:08:555 (6,8) - DansGameDansGameDansGameDansGameDansGame pls ;~; ill try to figure out a way to change it >_>
    Suggestion
  5. 00:11:447 (4) - Move to x:264;y:156 since it would fit in more with the pattern you're going for? redesigned the section
  6. 00:13:796 (1) - No sound warrants for a beat here, in my opinion ;-; remove? replaced with slider replaced with slider
  7. 00:19:399 (6,7) - Make them look more parallel to one another? ok
    Suggestion
  8. 00:21:206 (6) - Unless this was placed with distance snap, move to x:368;y:228? sure
  9. 00:21:387 (1) - Why the new combo here? It seems more fitting to start it at 00:22:290 (4) - in my opinion. i agree
  10. 00:27:531 (1) - Remove new combo and start it 00:28:073 (2) - here? Or just ignore and start it 00:28:073 (2) - here regardless. went with the latter
  11. 00:29:881 (8) - No reason to be curved :/ fixed
  12. 00:30:242 (1,2) - ..Lower? (look at the bg and strive towards those placements forgot to include the axis lul) nah
    Suggestion
  13. 00:43:977 (5,1) - Place note under slider better ;w; fixed
  14. 00:39:640 (5) - NC? ok
  15. 00:39:640 (5,7) - + blanket a little better yep
    Suggestion
  16. 00:45:423 (4,5) - First slider is curved bbut other isn't? slider racism i demand equality (make them both straight or curved idek) wow fine
  17. 00:48:314 (1) - New combo yep
  18. 00:51:748 (1,3) - ew they're touching :v(
    Suggestion
  19. 01:10:001 (5) - New combo + arrange a bit better but leave 01:09:640 (4) - this slider alone so that it feels special? new pattern
    Suggestion


    or idk arrange however you'd like straight curved reverse selection idc
  20. 01:12:893 (3) - Reverse selection? nah
  21. 01:20:483 (9) - Every other slider is a curved one but this has a bezier curve? hmm ;-; fixed ;-;
  22. 01:24:459 (3) - Move to x:300;y:108?
ok

meme: killed rip meme, you were so fresh ;w;

btw green lines are a bit different for both diffs (like uhm like bukkake blast's [that name i can't] spinner on his diff suppresses it almost completely [down to 5%] whereas in your diff doka, you lower the spinner volume down to 40%.. idk just feels weird make them the same or something <-<)

sorry if the mod seemed mostly catered towards b.blast lmao sorry you're a cool guy don't hurt me ;w;
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