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Ariabl'eyeS - Kegare naki Bara Juuji

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naliem
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 12 de febrero de 2017 at 16:47:58

Artist: Ariabl'eyeS
Title: Kegare naki Bara Juuji
Source: 瑠璃色のローゼンクロイツ
BPM: 90
Filesize: 10058kb
Play Time: 05:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Memory (7,69 stars, 1730 notes)


Download: Ariabl'eyeS - Kegare naki Bara Juuji
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Remap just for testing, lots of mistakes everywhere

Play with custom hitsounds!
-sandAI
M4M Queue, thanks for modding my map!

00:05:844 (7,1) - blanket could be cleaner
00:08:844 (7,8) - maybe make a blanket here?
00:10:510 (1,2,3) - The way each circle overlaps the next doesn't match
00:16:510 (3,5) - stack the slider end to the start circle
00:22:677 (3,4,5) - make blanket cleaner
00:26:010 (11,1) - I think you can make the blanket cleaner? My eyes might be wrong
00:30:844 (1) - Maybe just two circles here instead of a slider, since the lyric starts on the red tick
00:32:844 (4,1) - Maybe make the spinner closer to the 4? It's the same note
00:37:210 (9) - maybe curve this more up so it flows with 00:36:633 (4,5,6,7,8) more
00:37:787 (1,3) - Stack this
00:44:364 (6,7) - doesn't have the same angle as 00:44:133 (4,5)
00:48:403 (1,2) - maybe make the blanket more apparent?
00:49:903 (1,2) - This could be cleaner maybe.. also stack the 2 with 00:49:441 (7)
00:54:287 (2,3) - blanket fix
01:01:095 (5,6) - Maybe move these two down so they stack with 01:00:749 (2,7)
01:11:249 (4) - Maybe ctrl+g this? So it can flow better, up to you.
01:14:249 (1,2,3,4) - Equal space
01:14:018 (8,4) - maybe stack these two?
01:21:980 (2,3,4) - Equal space
01:22:210 (3,6) - stack these?
01:27:633 (2,3,4) - Make it so the 2 is the same distance to 3 and 4, like this maybe ---
01:39:691 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Stack
01:41:480 (3,4,5) - Equal space
01:41:999 (6) - Starts at white tick
01:47:076 (8,9,10,11) - Wrong ticks
02:06:403 (5,3) - Stack
02:08:364 (6,7) - Maybe spread these apart?
02:10:210 (4,6) - Try to maybe blanket these?
02:10:210 (4,8) - If you blanket ^, then stack these
02:21:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nice flow! Maybe put 02:21:864 (3) lower and more tucked in, so maybe that the space between 2 and 3 is the same as 3 and 4.
02:27:056 (1,2,3) - Starts half a beat later
02:39:172 (1) - Ends on red tick
02:39:461 (2) - Starts at red tick
02:46:845 (2) - Starts on red tick
02:57:403 (2,1,2) - Fix blanket
02:57:980 (2,1) - Stack this or stack 02:58:556 (1,4)
03:10:903 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Maybe make this more of a jump pattern than a 'spaced stream'
03:13:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure what you can do with this, it doesn't make sense to me
03:31:326 move the break to start at this white tick
03:34:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Do Ctrl+D and make a 5 point polygon, then Ctrl+G the points until you make a star
04:20:018 (3,5) - Maybe stack this, or stack 3 with 6
04:22:903 (7,2) - Maybe stack?
04:29:133 (7,1) - Stack
04:32:133 (2,3) - Stack
04:40:326 (3,4) - I think these two should be farther apart
04:40:672 (6) - Maybe lower this, so it makes a right angle with 7 and 8
04:52:672 (3,5) - Stack
04:55:787 (1,3) - Maybe stack?
05:05:249 (2,5) - stack the 2 on the 5, so you can get double the blanket >:D
05:07:903 (5,9) - STack
05:08:480 (8,4) - maybe stack?
05:11:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would kinda redo this jump pattern, the other jump patterns had a continuous flow, rather if it was clockwise motion or counterclockwise. Maybe if you want to change it up, you can do back and forths
05:21:633 (1) - Stack
05:28:903 (6,3) - Stack
05:29:364 (2,2) - Stack
05:32:364 (3,2) - Stack
05:43:326 (3,1,2,3,4) - Stack
There are a lot of blankets I left out, make sure to go through your map and fix each one! :D
If you fix any of the stack changes, make sure to redo all the distance snapping around those notes!
Nice map :D Kreygasm Song :O
Topic Starter
naliem

-Vanilla wrote:

M4M Queue, thanks for modding my map!

00:05:844 (7,1) - blanket could be cleaner
00:08:844 (7,8) - maybe make a blanket here?
00:10:510 (1,2,3) - The way each circle overlaps the next doesn't match
00:16:510 (3,5) - stack the slider end to the start circle
00:22:677 (3,4,5) - make blanket cleaner
00:26:010 (11,1) - I think you can make the blanket cleaner? My eyes might be wrong
00:30:844 (1) - Maybe just two circles here instead of a slider, since the lyric starts on the red tick
00:32:844 (4,1) - Maybe make the spinner closer to the 4? It's the same note
00:37:210 (9) - maybe curve this more up so it flows with 00:36:633 (4,5,6,7,8) more
00:37:787 (1,3) - Stack this
00:44:364 (6,7) - doesn't have the same angle as 00:44:133 (4,5)
00:48:403 (1,2) - maybe make the blanket more apparent?
00:49:903 (1,2) - This could be cleaner maybe.. also stack the 2 with 00:49:441 (7)
00:54:287 (2,3) - blanket fix
01:01:095 (5,6) - Maybe move these two down so they stack with 01:00:749 (2,7)
01:11:249 (4) - Maybe ctrl+g this? So it can flow better, up to you.
01:14:249 (1,2,3,4) - Equal space
01:14:018 (8,4) - maybe stack these two?
01:21:980 (2,3,4) - Equal space
01:22:210 (3,6) - stack these?
01:27:633 (2,3,4) - Make it so the 2 is the same distance to 3 and 4, like this maybe ---
01:39:691 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Stack
01:41:480 (3,4,5) - Equal space
01:41:999 (6) - Starts at white tick
01:47:076 (8,9,10,11) - Wrong ticks
02:06:403 (5,3) - Stack
02:08:364 (6,7) - Maybe spread these apart?
02:10:210 (4,6) - Try to maybe blanket these?
02:10:210 (4,8) - If you blanket ^, then stack these
02:21:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nice flow! Maybe put 02:21:864 (3) lower and more tucked in, so maybe that the space between 2 and 3 is the same as 3 and 4.
02:27:056 (1,2,3) - Starts half a beat later
02:39:172 (1) - Ends on red tick
02:39:461 (2) - Starts at red tick
02:46:845 (2) - Starts on red tick
02:57:403 (2,1,2) - Fix blanket
02:57:980 (2,1) - Stack this or stack 02:58:556 (1,4)
03:10:903 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Maybe make this more of a jump pattern than a 'spaced stream'
03:13:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure what you can do with this, it doesn't make sense to me
03:31:326 move the break to start at this white tick
03:34:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Do Ctrl+D and make a 5 point polygon, then Ctrl+G the points until you make a star
04:20:018 (3,5) - Maybe stack this, or stack 3 with 6
04:22:903 (7,2) - Maybe stack?
04:29:133 (7,1) - Stack
04:32:133 (2,3) - Stack
04:40:326 (3,4) - I think these two should be farther apart
04:40:672 (6) - Maybe lower this, so it makes a right angle with 7 and 8
04:52:672 (3,5) - Stack
04:55:787 (1,3) - Maybe stack?
05:05:249 (2,5) - stack the 2 on the 5, so you can get double the blanket >:D
05:07:903 (5,9) - STack
05:08:480 (8,4) - maybe stack?
05:11:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would kinda redo this jump pattern, the other jump patterns had a continuous flow, rather if it was clockwise motion or counterclockwise. Maybe if you want to change it up, you can do back and forths
05:21:633 (1) - Stack
05:28:903 (6,3) - Stack
05:29:364 (2,2) - Stack
05:32:364 (3,2) - Stack
05:43:326 (3,1,2,3,4) - Stack
There are a lot of blankets I left out, make sure to go through your map and fix each one! :D
If you fix any of the stack changes, make sure to redo all the distance snapping around those notes!
Nice map :D Kreygasm Song :O
Thanks for the mod, very helpful! Fixed all the blankets/stacks and did almost all the other things. Still don't know what to do with the streamy part, I'll try some patterns or wathever until I find something I like.
SnowNiNo_
M4M

  • [Memory]
  1. 00:16:844 (4) - NC here for consistent
  2. 00:24:844 (7) - NC
  3. 01:11:826 (2,3,4) - this part doest fit the music at all =w=
  4. 01:28:787 (1) - dont you think 1/1 slider should start at 01:29:018 - to fit the vocal?
  5. 01:40:556 - oki from this part, i think the stream is overmapped, there is no music to support these streams
  6. 02:32:076 (7) - should start at 02:32:133 - to follow the vocal
  7. 03:27:172 (11) - NC
  8. 03:44:249 - same thing here
  9. 04:30:864 (7) - NC
  10. 04:41:018 (9) - ^


GL~
Topic Starter
naliem

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

  • [Memory]
  1. 00:16:844 (4) - NC here for consistent done
  2. 00:24:844 (7) - NC done
  3. 01:11:826 (2,3,4) - this part doest fit the music at all =w= it follows the music in the background instead of vocals, it would play strange if mapped with vocals I think (at least this part)
  4. 01:28:787 (1) - dont you think 1/1 slider should start at 01:29:018 - to fit the vocal? right, will look into it later
  5. 01:40:556 - oki from this part, i think the stream is overmapped, there is no music to support these streams I think it plays well with the drums, but if someone else agrees with you will change!
  6. 02:32:076 (7) - should start at 02:32:133 - to follow the vocal nice catch
  7. 03:27:172 (11) - NC done
  8. 03:44:249 - same thing here done
  9. 04:30:864 (7) - NC done
  10. 04:41:018 (9) - ^ done


GL~
Ty for mod! Very useful :D
Yuthuil
16 day late m4m lets do this (srsly tho, im sorry :(

memory:

00:22:677 (3,5) - this is minor but i think that the tail of the slider is too close to 3, u can actually see it in game and it triggers my ocd...maybe pull the slider head downwards and adjust it somehow

00:27:510 (3) - imo this slider sounds better ending it on 00:28:510

00:37:210 (9) - a very heavy beat on the tail of this slider, i think it should be clickable; it would play better that way, how about making 00:37:096 (8) - into a slider and placing a circle at 00:37:326 instead?

00:38:480 (2,5) - maybe stack

00:50:133 (2,3) - ^

01:45:518 (1) - same problem as before, i believe that most huge white ticks should be clickable otherwise it slightly plays weird, how about replacing it with a circle and adding a slider where the end used to be

03:10:326 (1) - imo this part could be mapped with a different object, atm it skips out some potentially cool objects, ignore this if you like how it is atm :)

03:43:326 (1,2) - there may be a spacing error here

04:43:787 (7) - there is room for a really nice fancy unique hitsound here! :D


Im sorry if this mod seemed lacking but it was all i could find, u have the NCing fine etc.
god luck! good luck
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