00:05:844 (7,1) - blanket could be cleaner
00:08:844 (7,8) - maybe make a blanket here?
00:10:510 (1,2,3) - The way each circle overlaps the next doesn't match
00:16:510 (3,5) - stack the slider end to the start circle
00:22:677 (3,4,5) - make blanket cleaner
00:26:010 (11,1) - I think you can make the blanket cleaner? My eyes might be wrong
00:30:844 (1) - Maybe just two circles here instead of a slider, since the lyric starts on the red tick
00:32:844 (4,1) - Maybe make the spinner closer to the 4? It's the same note
00:37:210 (9) - maybe curve this more up so it flows with 00:36:633 (4,5,6,7,8) more
00:37:787 (1,3) - Stack this
00:44:364 (6,7) - doesn't have the same angle as 00:44:133 (4,5)
00:48:403 (1,2) - maybe make the blanket more apparent?
00:49:903 (1,2) - This could be cleaner maybe.. also stack the 2 with 00:49:441 (7)
00:54:287 (2,3) - blanket fix
01:01:095 (5,6) - Maybe move these two down so they stack with 01:00:749 (2,7)
01:11:249 (4) - Maybe ctrl+g this? So it can flow better, up to you.
01:14:249 (1,2,3,4) - Equal space
01:14:018 (8,4) - maybe stack these two?
01:21:980 (2,3,4) - Equal space
01:22:210 (3,6) - stack these?
01:27:633 (2,3,4) - Make it so the 2 is the same distance to 3 and 4, like this maybe ---
01:39:691 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Stack
01:41:480 (3,4,5) - Equal space
01:41:999 (6) - Starts at white tick
01:47:076 (8,9,10,11) - Wrong ticks
02:06:403 (5,3) - Stack
02:08:364 (6,7) - Maybe spread these apart?
02:10:210 (4,6) - Try to maybe blanket these?
02:10:210 (4,8) - If you blanket ^, then stack these
02:21:633 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nice flow! Maybe put 02:21:864 (3) lower and more tucked in, so maybe that the space between 2 and 3 is the same as 3 and 4.
02:27:056 (1,2,3) - Starts half a beat later
02:39:172 (1) - Ends on red tick
02:39:461 (2) - Starts at red tick
02:46:845 (2) - Starts on red tick
02:57:403 (2,1,2) - Fix blanket
02:57:980 (2,1) - Stack this or stack 02:58:556 (1,4)
03:10:903 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Maybe make this more of a jump pattern than a 'spaced stream'
03:13:787 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - not sure what you can do with this, it doesn't make sense to me
03:31:326 move the break to start at this white tick
03:34:556 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Do Ctrl+D and make a 5 point polygon, then Ctrl+G the points until you make a star
04:20:018 (3,5) - Maybe stack this, or stack 3 with 6
04:22:903 (7,2) - Maybe stack?
04:29:133 (7,1) - Stack
04:32:133 (2,3) - Stack
04:40:326 (3,4) - I think these two should be farther apart
04:40:672 (6) - Maybe lower this, so it makes a right angle with 7 and 8
04:52:672 (3,5) - Stack
04:55:787 (1,3) - Maybe stack?
05:05:249 (2,5) - stack the 2 on the 5, so you can get double the blanket >:D
05:07:903 (5,9) - STack
05:08:480 (8,4) - maybe stack?
05:11:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would kinda redo this jump pattern, the other jump patterns had a continuous flow, rather if it was clockwise motion or counterclockwise. Maybe if you want to change it up, you can do back and forths
05:21:633 (1) - Stack
05:28:903 (6,3) - Stack
05:29:364 (2,2) - Stack
05:32:364 (3,2) - Stack
05:43:326 (3,1,2,3,4) - Stack