Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here comes a mod for Kantan and Futsuu as requested, followed by a recheck for Muzukashii. (no kd)

[General]

You may shift the BG a bit downward using notepad for all difficulties so that the girls are more visible: I actually don't care as much about having the girls visible, I care moreso about the title being apparent. So instead of using 10, I used 5. Because if I were to make it so that "(tpz Despair Remix)" was visible, it would crop their faces very weirdly. So it's best that just "Tomorrow Perfume" is still in the center there.

• [Kantan]
  
  Maybe use OD3 instead ? The map would be harder after applying the suggestions below.

1. 00:09:139 - add d and add k at 00:10:551 and 00:10:904 - for a better spread with Futsuu ? Currently these spots sound empty. Added.
2. 00:23:963 - similar to ^ , you may add d here and add k at 00:30:315 - Added.
3. 00:36:315 (41) - maybe remove finish ? It sounds a bit unnecessary. Removed.
4. 00:38:080 (43) - consider changing this note to d to match the colour-changing strategy among 00:34:198 (39,40,41,42) - ? That's actually kind of why it wasn't d, because I felt that d k was getting a bit boring here. But this does work here.
5. 00:51:845 and 00:52:904 - add d for the increased song pace ? Added.
6. 00:58:551 - same as ^ Added as well.
7. 01:07:727 (84,85) - swapping these notes to K D would emphasize the vocal-like sound in a way better. Switched them.
8. 01:08:786 (86) - this note could be k for hitsound consistency as 00:57:492 (68) - Changed ti to k.
9. From 01:21:845 to 01:25:021 - consider making this part denser like this ? I agree with this pattern, aside from there being no note at 01:22:198 - because that's right where the tempo begins to speed up a bit more and feels rather empty without a hitable note there. (cursor at 01:23:257 - and 01:25:021 (112) - is D)
10. 01:25:727 - add d, move 01:27:845 (116) - to 01:27:492 - and add d at 01:27:845 - to reduce the gap with Futsuu ? Added, and moved.
11. 01:52:904 - you may add k here and change 01:53:257 (160) - to D to make the last finishes more intuitive to play. I actually was told many times having a note at 01:52:904 - would probably be too hard for a Kantan, but I, myself felt that there should be something there. So thank you of reassuring me of this.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:08:433 (8) - consider removing this note to make this part less monotonous ? Removed.
2. 00:10:022 (13) - this note could be deleted as consecutive 1/2 notes are rather hard for Futsuu. Removed.
3. 00:22:198 - I think you should add d here. It is weird to see that this part is sparser than Kantan. Added.
4. 00:25:374 (51) and 00:31:021 (69) - maybe remove these notes to crack the long pattern chains a bit ? Removed both. Albeit the second removal is in a kind of weird place, and I don't know if it sounds completely fine or not.
5. From 00:31:374 to 00:34:198 - you may reform this pattern a bit to give a better impact at the end of the kiai: Changed this pattern accordingly. (cursor at 00:32:786 - )
6. 00:37:551 (85,86) - swapping these notes to d k would result in a smoother flow. Swapped.
7. 00:39:139 (88,89) - delete and add K at 00:39:315 - to follow the way you mapped 00:36:492 (83) - ? Removed.
8. 00:48:668 (110) - remove and change 00:49:374 (112) - to k for a better flow ? Removed and changed.
9. 00:52:904 - same as Kantan I don't understand what you're telling me here. ;w;
10. 00:56:433 (127,128) - maybe K D to fit the stressed sounds more appropriately ? Changed.
11. 01:04:727 - add d and change 01:04:904 (152) - to k. I would expect this pattern constellation more. Changed.
12. 01:14:786 - consider adding k here for a better spread with Muzukashii ? I added a k here, but I also added a d at 01:14:610 - because otherwise you would have the same pattern as at 01:15:139 (181,182,183) - , but that pattern is more individualized.
13. 01:22:198 (199) - maybe remove finish ? It sounds a bit unnecessary. Why was that even there in the first place. lmao. Thanks tho.
14. 01:21:492 (196,197,198,199,200) - try d kkd k instead of kdk k d ? This could fit the music well imo. This fits well here.
15. 01:27:315 - similar to 00:10:022 (13) - , this note could be deleted as well. Removed this note.
16. 01:48:845 (270) - move to 01:48:668 - and change to k ? This 3/2 gap is in fact a bit tricky and does not represent the song well. Moved.

• [Muzukashii]
  
  As mentioned in the previous post, SV changes are not necessary in Muzukashii since it is just an intermediate difficulty. Slider velocity changes may not be completely necessary here, but a Muzukashii is the between of a Normal and Hard. So I feel that having some SV changes adds some color to the overall difficulty.
  You should fix the base slider velocity error via notepad:

1. 00:34:021 (127) - according to your reply, I guess you have forgotten to remove this note ? Ah yes, I have. Thank you for pointing that out.
2. 00:52:727 (201) - then I would recommend moving this note to 00:52:815 - to follow the background music more accurately. Moved.
3. 01:31:551 (48) and 01:33:139 (56) - remove finish for a smoother flow. They do not have the strong sound like 01:31:021 (45,49) - Removed.

Nwolf wrote:

ew why version with sound effects ;_;

1. 01:10:021 (280) - Delete this note, then make 01:10:198 (281,282,283,284) - kkk k? Mainly because this part gets close to Oni due to the simplicity of the patterns.
2. 01:13:109 (296) - Delete? Since Oni doesn't have 1/4 here, you may as well not here as well.
3. 01:25:021 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - Fuck it, remove the 2 1/4s that are here.
4. 01:41:345 (99) - Deleting this will make it ever slightly less dense.
5. 01:45:052 (119) - Delete this note, so that we can make a nice pattern of 1/4, no 1/4, 1/4 among the patterns in this kiai.
6. 01:46:199 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - Make this k d k d kkk k, then delete 01:47:434 (132,133) - , since this doesn't really fit the song.
7. 01:47:610 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143) - Then, kind of remap this with different 1/2s, but make sure 01:49:021 doesn't have a note just because.

1. 01:10:904 (170) - k k k?
2. 01:17:610 - Add a k? Just since there's a bunch of empty space.
3. 01:31:021 - For this whole kiai you should add some more notes, as Muzu is a much higher step above, and Kantan is almost the same. Also, why are the big notes sometimes D and not K xd
4. 01:52:198 - May as well add notes here and 01:52:374 as a big ending.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:10:021 (280) - Delete this note, then make 01:10:198 (281,282,283,284) - kkk k? Mainly because this part gets close to Oni due to the simplicity of the patterns. Deleted, and changed.
2. 01:13:109 (296) - Delete? Since Oni doesn't have 1/4 here, you may as well not here as well. Removed.
3. 01:25:021 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - Fuck it, remove the 2 1/4s that are here. There's only one 1/4 note here, which is at 01:25:815 - so I removed that note.
4. 01:41:345 (99) - Deleting this will make it ever slightly less dense. Removed.
5. 01:45:052 (119) - Delete this note, so that we can make a nice pattern of 1/4, no 1/4, 1/4 among the patterns in this kiai. Removed.
6. 01:46:199 (125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - Make this k d k d kkk k, then delete 01:47:434 (132,133) - , since this doesn't really fit the song. Changed.
7. 01:47:610 (132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143) - Then, kind of remap this with different 1/2s, but make sure 01:49:021 doesn't have a note just because. The pattern here matches pretty well already, but I can see what you mean by that one note. The only change I made was chaning 01:49:374 - to k, since it has the same sound as at 01:49:198 -

[Futsuu]

1. 01:10:904 (170) - k k k? Changed.
2. 01:17:610 - Add a k? Just since there's a bunch of empty space. Added.
3. 01:31:021 - For this whole kiai you should add some more notes, as Muzu is a much higher step above, and Kantan is almost the same. Also, why are the big notes sometimes D and not K xd I added a couple more notes here, but the reason some are D and others are K becuase just having K K K or D D D like 2 or 3 times within this kiai would kind of make it a tad bit boring. As well as there being different notes beforehand which could play a factor in this.
4. 01:52:198 - May as well add notes here and 01:52:374 as a big ending. I added k's at both of those points.

MMzz wrote:

[Oni]
00:09:492 - Would add a note here because of the kicks being more consistent. Added
00:16:727 (63) - This note should be moved to 00:16:815 to follow the melody properly. Also adding a note at 00:17:080 would be a good idea since you are strictly following the melody in this section. Moved and added.
00:23:698 (100) - Move this to 00:23:521 and change it to a don. Then make 00:23:786 (101) - a kat. Follows the rhythm of the song a little better. Moved and changed.
00:24:315 (105) - This can work better as a don and make 00:24:668 (107) - a kat. If you follow it up with the kat I would change to kdk pattern to kkk, ddk or something. Changed both, and made 00:24:845 (110,111,112) - kkd since it's the same as 00:24:138 (105,106,107) -
01:09:315 (374) - Make this a kat? The long string of just dons doesn't help establish the rhythm very much here. Changed.