Garven wrote:

Recheck~

[Easy]
00:37:816 (4) - Really really don't like stacks under slider ends for easy difficulties. It's hard to tell what the rhythm is.
01:11:566 (1) - Remove new combo
01:29:066 (3) - Same thing as earlier
01:30:316 (1) - Hrm, maybe something like this?

02:02:816 (1,3) - These would look better with two slider points. They are kind of sharp-angeled right now.
In general, I wish you put the notes after your spinners closer to the center of the map so allow for easier realignment from new players.

[Normal]
00:56:566 (3,1,2) - Spacing
01:30:316 (1,2,3) - Maybe this?


[gow's Hard]
Eeh, if you can tone this down a little bit or have Normal a little harder (though I think a little of both would be best), it would be appreciated. Right now, the difference between Normal and this is huuuge.
Normal: http://puu.sh/X3G Hard: http://puu.sh/X3H
Even the general techniques used for Hard are pretty tough with the fast-paced nature of how it was mapped. I hate to ask this of you two, but do you think you can strive for that more-balanced map set? If you need help, let me know.

Others are good. If you need help with the Normal/Hard thing (if you agree) then let me know.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
01:31:722 (2) - Okay - now that it is here, maybe add a clap on the end of the slider. Also, check your spacing between this and 01:32:503 (1) -
01:37:816 (3) - Eeeh, I really don't like this note much, since it's right after a short repeating slider AND underneath it. Maybe just extend the slider by one repeat, or do a simpler rhythm such as a note at 01:36:566 - 01:37:191 - and 01:37:816 - or a slider from 01:37:191 - to 01:37:659 -

[Normal]
The very beginning feels kind of empty with such sparse hit sound use compared to other parts of the map.
00:40:316 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - And these just have too many claps. ><
I think you should really give this a good listen and see if you can try and improve the hit sounds. They are mostly inconsistent and kind of spammy at parts. The rhythm is a little bland too considering the vast majority is just stuff on the beat. Try mixing things up a bit to make it more interesting to play and help the player feel like they are playing the music instead of just bashing away at the beat the entire time.

Work on the Normal a bit more to make it more interesting to play and nice to listen to.

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
01:34:066 (4,1) - Now this is too close.

[Normal]
00:34:691 (5,1) - Spacing
01:32:034 (4,1) - Spacing

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Insane]
01:05:316 (1,2,3) - These jumps are a bit too much imo, i dont mind if you dont change but i wont bubble it like this.
01:13:987 - I recommend you put this break somewhere else, it's weird to have a break in the middle of kiai.
02:05:316 (1,2,3) - These jumps are a bit too much as well.

[nachu]
Direct copy from the guidelines:

02:02:503 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This pattern is much to confusing imo, i dont mind if you dont change but i wont bubble it like this.
I would like to see more breaks, this maps plays for quite a while and is kinda crazy enough to suggest it would need some breaks.

[gow's Hard]
Audio lead-in 2 seconds
I recommend you increase the approach rate, the notes are getting too cramped up and it's hard to tell where half of the sliders are.

[Normal]
I think that break's kind of small to rest from the whole map, ironically less skilled players have less stamina, is logical that they should have more breaks.

[Easy]
This could use a break as well.

That's about it, good luck with your map

Lizbeth wrote:

Insane
01:05:316 (1,2,1,2,4,7) - all should be in same combo
Are you serious you dont wanna add a break ?? This map is exhausting, it have circles in all beats and half beats, I really thing it needs a break, doesn't need to be long.

nachu
Due to a bug spinners don't have new combo, please Add it manually to all spinners
same of the break in insane

Normal
01:32:034 (4) - remove note
01:38:128 (1) - end this in next white tick
there is a tiny break here 00:48:441 - you should insert break ~


gow's and easy are fine

sorry for the late recheck, been busy~ >.<

Sakura Hana wrote:

[nachu]
Direct copy from the guidelines:

Garven wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

[nachu]
Direct copy from the guidelines:

lol wut Children are now banned from the beach due to possible bikini use. No I didn't get that backwards~

Anyway, here's your recheck!

[Easy]
01:10:316 (1,2) - Hrm, maybe delete these two so you have more of a substantial break? If you do, extend 01:08:128 (1) - to 01:10:316 - Don't forget the kiai too.

[Normal]
00:48:753 - Eh, map through this or delete the break.
01:10:316 (1,2,3) - If you delete the notes from easy, do it here too to keep things consistent. Also, if you do delete these, extend the beginning of the break to 01:10:316 - You can do this by left clicking the break in the timeline and dragging it right. It should look like this when you're done:

01:51:878 (4,6) - Maybe rearrange to reduce overlap?

[nachu]
Raise stack leniency to at least here please:

Set the beat snap divisor to 1/4 too.

[Insane]
01:09:222 (1) - Extend this to 01:10:316 - Don't forget to resnap kiai.

regenz wrote:

エロゲー　☆。

Thunderstorm wrote:

ThunderMod

Some suggestions, that can be ignored as well

<<Overall>

Delete .osb file since it's unused, then do a full resubmit

<<Easy>>

Fine

<<Normal>>

00:37:816 - I'd suggest to remove 1 slider repeat and start this (00:38:128) spinner here
01:47:816 - I'd suggest to put a note here, and make spinner like that - 01:48:284-01:50:003

<<gow's hard>>

01:00:941 (3) - spacing (or if it's intended jump, start a new combo)
01:50:941 (3) - ^

<<nachu>>

01:22:347 (1,2,4) - I'd suggest to respace this part, or reduce stack leniecity by 1 tick to make it look's better
01:54:847 (9. 10) - minor spacing issue (don't change spacing multiplier mid-combo even on Insane diff's)

<<Insane>>

Seems fine

Katsuri wrote:

nachu
01:31:409(4) - add a kiai

SPOILER

[TimingPoints]
316,312.5,4,1,0,80,1,0
10316,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
10343,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
40316,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,80,0,0
45316,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
50316,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
69378,-100,4,1,0,29,0,1
69691,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
70003,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
70316,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
79843,-100,4,2,0,80,0,0
80265,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
90316,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,80,0,0
92191,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
100265,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,80,0,0
104952,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
110265,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
130265,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0

good map, starr'd

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:17:659 (1) - Start this at 00:17:816 - and end in the same place as it does now

[Normal]
00:31:566 (3,1) - Spacing
00:37:816 (1) - End this at 00:39:534 -
02:01:566 (3,1) - Spacing

Remapped Insane is a vast improvement from the previous design. Great job on it!

val0108 wrote:

gogo-!!