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Earth Star Dream - Yumeiro Toridori Parade

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Suimya
wow! it's much better, thanks so much Oko owo/

I'll update the map now =w=/
AmigoDoChroome
hi, simple mod

easy
perfect easy! congts

normal
00:04:043 (1) - x512 y248
00:32:521 (3) - x276 y168
00:34:695 (4) - x268 y276
00:37:956 (2) - x116 y144

hard
00:12:304 (4) - curved
00:17:086 (3) - x108 y140
00:17:086 (3,5,6) - curved
00:27:521 (3) - x80 y228
00:42:304 (5) - note here

mahou~
ar 8 please
00:21:217 (1) - wrong nc
00:22:956 (1) - ^^
00:31:651 (1) - ^^
00:33:391 (1) - ^^
00:35:130 (1) - ^^
BeatofIke
Sekaii so moe <3
Here's my random mod o3o


[Easy]
  1. 00:30:130 (3) - My only suggestion here is to replace this slider with two 1/2 sliders, since the vocals doesn't really match with the current slider.
[Karia's Normal]
  1. 00:09:260 (3) - To emphasize the key sound, I would suggest adding a soft-whistle here.
  2. 00:43:391 (2) - Why not add claps at this slider as well? The clap sounds goes well with the song at 00:42:521 (1) imo.
  3. 00:44:043 (3) - Maybe add a finish here just like the other difficulties.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:564 (4,5) - Maybe make a square pattern by stacking 4 with the end of 00:14:478 (1) and moving 00:15:782 (5) around 380|246. You could do this either blanketed or no blanket.
    with blanket

    252,332,14478,6,0,B|320:312|320:312|400:340,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    468,244,15130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    472,332,15347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    385,334,15564,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    380,246,15782,2,0,P|384:208|404:184,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    w/o blanket

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    468,244,15130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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[Mahou Shoujo]
  1. 00:00:565 - Red/Green timing sections have different hitsound volumes here:
  2. 00:39:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Optional suggestion, but I would make this stream a bit smoother/cleaner.
Good luck Sekai and Karia. You are free to call me back after a few more mods and once all the mods has been cleared. Have a star icon for now ^-^~
Doormat
hi hi, you messaged me via forum pm the other day- aaaaa cute song
i was going to mod this later during the weekend, but since ike starred it and it’s short, i figured i might as well mod it now
[Easy]
  1. similarly to what ike pointed out at 00:30:130 (3) - , i think 00:14:478 (1,2) – would be better off if you focused on the main beats (white ticks) instead of the offbeats (red ticks). for example, the vocals on 00:15:347 – are stronger than the vocals at 00:15:130, so maybe use a 2/1 slider followed by a circle instead of the reverse 3/2 slider you used at 00:14:478 (1) -. for 00:16:217 (2) -, the vocals at 00:16:651 and 00:17:086 are stronger than the vocals at 00:16:869, so i think using two 1/1 sliders here instead of the reverse 3/2 slider you used at 00:16:217 (2) – would be more effective. but honestly what you have is fine so feel free to ignore me
  2. 00:33:608 (3) – sort of a similar thing here with 00:14:478 (1) – where i think a 2/1 slider + circle would be more effective since the main beats have a bigger emphasis than the offbeat here
[Karia]
  1. 00:09:260 (3,1) – mmmm shouldn’t the NC here be reversed? It breaks the NC consistency with the rest of the map
  2. 00:43:173 (2) – mm it feels kind of empty here; maybe add a circle?
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:304 (1,2) – maybe you can blanket these for nicer aesthetics?
[Magical Girl]
  1. 00:44:043 (1) – this is the only diff where the final note is NCed, which makes it feel just a little inconsistent with the other diffs in my opinion. not sure if that was intentional so i’m just going to point that out just in case-
yeah not really much, sorry if this mod was a bit lacklustre. map looks ready to go in my eyes~
hope this helps! take a star c:
lolia

Naxess wrote:

[ Karia's Normal]
00:42:521 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems a bit off considering that you've been following vocal throughout the rest of the song.
Consider using this one, for example:
// I didn't follow only vocals in this song. Followed vocal when it's strong, and followed background sound when it's strong.

There seem to be a lot of sliders with excess control points.
00:38:825 (3,4) and 00:42:521 (1,2) - Here's some straight sliders with excess white points in their path, for example.
Even though they don't really matter, I'd still suggest removing them for the sake of professionalism.
// Just my taste, want to keep them.

00:11:869 (3) and 00:25:782 (3) or 00:35:347 (1) - Just a suggestion, but you could make these notes tight elbow sliders for variation.
Seems like tight elbows and sliderkinks work really well on sliders that have a loud sound on their tail...
// Generally I make a shape for aesthetic things except for some special vocal/sounds. Imo, they are no problem for now.

00:12:738 (1) and 00:26:651 (1) or 00:15:347 (2) and 00:29:260 (2) - Something similar could be done here, either using a tight elbow here as well (which gets repetitive imo if you've included the two others) or using a sliderkink.
// Same reason as above

Well, basically just suggestions.

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

normal
00:04:043 (1) - x512 y248
00:32:521 (3) - x276 y168
00:34:695 (4) - x268 y276
00:37:956 (2) - x116 y144
// I catched what those positions mean, but current positions are also good.

BeatofIke wrote:

[Karia's Normal]
  1. 00:09:260 (3) - To emphasize the key sound, I would suggest adding a soft-whistle here. Added
  2. 00:43:391 (2) - Why not add claps at this slider as well? The clap sounds goes well with the song at 00:42:521 (1) imo. Added
  3. 00:44:043 (3) - Maybe add a finish here just like the other difficulties. Want to keep this. Whistle is best on here because this is not too strong to me.

Doormat wrote:

[Karia]
  1. 00:09:260 (3,1) – mmmm shouldn’t the NC here be reversed? It breaks the NC consistency with the rest of the map For 00:09:695 - this vocal
  2. 00:43:173 (2) – mm it feels kind of empty here; maybe add a circle? Feels weird because vocal isn't strong at here.
Thanks for moddings!
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TitleUnicode:夢色トリドリパレード♫
Artist:Earth Star Dream
ArtistUnicode:Earth Star Dream
Creator:Sekaii
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Source:魔法少女なんてもういいですから。
Tags:Mahou Shoujo Nante Mou Iidesukara opening tvsize tv size Sekai-nyan Sekai Karia
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Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks guys for your mods, also thank you Ike-senpai for your star icon www

Fixed everything on them ></
DreaM117er
Support :)

Star~
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for the star and support Dream :3
Hollow Delta
Not much I have to say about this Beatmap, so I'll just give you a star!
Chyo-Kun
Requested in my modding queue !
[This mod has been done with both hitsounds and music volume set to 100%]

       General


  1. The song is really upbeat and happy, it's a shame there are no kiai times. The one in the GD is really good though, it starts right after the calm introduction. I suggest adding it to every difficulty!

    00:10:999 - Add green point with kiai time ON
    00:11:108 - Add green point with kiai time OFF

    Easy

     
  2. The difficulty is good as it is and doesn't NEED any change, but 00:37:086 (3,4,1,2) I don't really like this part, in my opinion a spinner fits better and adds a little variety to the diff, the slow sliders get boring after a while (you also get the added bonus of having a spinner in your easy, the top50 won't be a list of HDDTHRFL with the same exact score)
     
    00:37:086 (3,4,1,2) - Remove those objects
    Add a spinner that starts on 00:37:086 and ends on 00:39:695
     
  3. 00:41:434 (2) 00:43:173 (2) - Are these finishes really needed? They don't sound fitting to me

    Karia's Normal

  4. 00:04:043 (1) - Replace this whisle with a clap? Sounds better to me
  5. 00:43:391 (2) - Add a clap

    Hard

  6. 00:27:521 (3) - I really don't like this slider-triplet, it feels so unnecessary. My suggestion would be removing it and adding two beats 00:27:521 here and 00:27:738 here

    Insane

  7. I can't find anything to change, nice diff!

Best of luck in ranking this, nice little song that will be stuck in my head for the next 12 hours
I hope my mod was of help. :)
Janpai
don't forget me plis ;w;
Topic Starter
Suimya

Janpai wrote:

don't forget me plis ;w;
don't worry, i didn't really forget you =3=/
Arusamour
i have no idea how to mod this.. lemeow. sorry
BeatofIke
00:33:608 (3) - I would say, replace this slider with two 1/2 sliders on Easy difficulty. The rest are fine.
Call me back so I can eat you <3
Topic Starter
Suimya
I think i fixed it now, hopefully it's good enough =w=/

Thanks for the recheck Ike-senpai ><//
BeatofIke
I guess on Insane diff, you meant to put OD 6.5 instead of OD 6.6
Plz don't kill me -runs-
Topic Starter
Suimya

BeatofIke wrote:

I guess on Insane diff, you meant to put OD 6.5 instead of OD 6.6
Plz don't kill me -runs-
moe Ike-senpai =w=/

Done <3
BeatofIke
Looks good now. Good luck Sekaii ^-^~
Okoratu
hello, just as you didn't request here's a mod

[Mahou Shoujo]
AR 8.5 seems to be pushing it imo, it rarely shows more than 3 objects on the screen which isn't necessary at this density or bpm. tldr i think it's too high and 8 would work better.
00:00:565 (1) - 00:04:043 (1) - i think 1/3 reverse sliders do these sounds more justice
00:03:173 (6) - i think an 1/2 rhythm would fit better for an insane

[karia]
i think starting your map with an 1/1 slider is more player-friendly as they don't have any referencemusic before 00:00:565 - so 00:00:565 (1) - is harder to hit since they only have an approachcircle (im suggesting to start the map with an 1/1 slider instead)
00:15:130 - 00:29:043 - i think this kind of rhythm fits the vocals better http://puu.sh/oUgv7/abc1b57414.jpg
00:42:521 (1,2) - i think this rhythm would be more intuitive and overall more interesting: http://puu.sh/oUgAW/926a49cdf6.jpg

call me back, most of this should be done in about 10 mins lol
lolia

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Karia's Normal

  1. 00:04:043 (1) - Replace this whisle with a clap? Sounds better to me Imo, whistle is the best

Okorin wrote:

[karia]
00:15:130 - 00:29:043 - i think this kind of rhythm fits the vocals better http://puu.sh/oUgv7/abc1b57414.jpg I cut this rhythm intentionally cuz that rhythm feels too dense orz
Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for moddings!

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Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks for the sudden mod Oko =w=/

Fixed everything and updated Karia's diff o3o/
Okoratu
u can tag アース・スター ドリーム
according to the following logo:

your tags Mou Iidesukara should be merged to Mouiidesukara, you can also split them in each separate word if you care

thank
Topic Starter
Suimya
Sure, I added both and also kept the split ones, I still think it's also fine o3o/

Thanks for the recheck Oko www
Okoratu
ok
Topic Starter
Suimya
wow...that was fast! o.o/

Thanks Oko <3
Mekki
Gratz baka!
wajinshu
Congratz!
Andrea
Congrats baka c:
sahuang

Andrea wrote:

Congrats baka c:
BeatofIke
Congrats moe Sekai ^-^
Dino99
Congratz!! :3
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Oko, and everyone owo/

Also i'm not a baka orz ;w;
Winnie
God that avatar... Took cute for me
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