18:37 -Ran Yakumo-: instead of having this pattern as it is 00:59:317 (1,2,3,4) - why not delete 00:59:817 (3,4) - and make 00:59:317 (1,2) - symetric
18:38 -Ran Yakumo-: as for 01:00:317 (3) - CTRL + G with 01:00:650 (4) -
Changed. Actually gave this whole section a face-lift.
18:39 -Ran Yakumo-: 01:09:317 (1) - this could be better, it should be further away and should be kind of like, making flow
Done.
18:40 -Ran Yakumo-: CTRL + G ? 01:11:317 (2) -
Done.
18:41 -Ran Yakumo-: 01:20:650 (2) - CTRL + G too
Done.
18:41 -Ran Yakumo-: 01:25:317 (2,3) - CTRL + G
Done.
18:41 -Ran Yakumo-: 01:28:317 (3) - this could be a triplet that starts at 01:28:150 -
Done. How I didn't notice that is beyond me. Thanks for that.
18:42 -Ran Yakumo-: stacking 01:44:150 (6) - on top of 01:44:317 (1) - would be better but maybe thats just me
Kept. I feel it fits the rest of the segment better that way.
18:47 -Ran Yakumo-: these type of curves 02:00:816 (4,5) - are really not good
Changed. Changed placement and curvature.
18:50 -Ran Yakumo-: 02:19:318 (1,2,1,2,3) -
18:50 -Ran Yakumo-: should be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5130515
Done.
18:50 -Ran Yakumo-: 02:22:651 (2,1) - are way too close
18:50 -Ran Yakumo-: 02:22:984 (1) - should take 02:23:317 (2) - place
Done. I had the same Idea when I first made that pattern but I forgot about it ^^;;
18:51 -Ran Yakumo-: 02:32:650 (3) - move this so that 2's end and 3's end are the same
Done. That was actually not intentional, thanks for noticing it :3
18:52 -Ran Yakumo-: 02:45:983 (2,2,1) - CTRL + G
Changed. I don't know which ones you meant exactly, but I mixed them up a bit.
18:57 -Ran Yakumo-: delete 03:08:317 (3,4) -
18:57 -Ran Yakumo-: and replace them with a copy pasted 03:06:983 (1,2) -
18:57 -Ran Yakumo-: take the copy pasted 03:06:983 (1,2) - and do CTRL + H
Done.
18:58 -Ran Yakumo-: 03:53:983 (3,6) - CTRL + G
Done.
18:58 -Ran Yakumo-: 03:53:817 (2,5) - stack
18:59 -Ran Yakumo-: on the CTRL + G'd sliders
18:59 -Ran Yakumo-: 03:53:817 (2,5) - CTRL + G
Done. We'll see how it works.
18:59 -Ran Yakumo-: 04:11:984 (1,2,3,4) - CTRL + G
19:00 -Ran Yakumo-: then CTRL + G each one alone and not all of them at once
Done. Genius.
19:01 -Ran Yakumo-: 04:46:316 (3,4) - replace with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5130630
Done.
19:10 -Ran Yakumo-: this isn't snapped to the beat 00:02:984 (1) -
Kept......? I dunno, I'm pretty sure it is. I can't really move it around either without using shift or messing with the bpm offset.
19:11 -Ran Yakumo-: these are all the bpm's of the song
19:11 -Ran Yakumo-: here http://prnt.sc/b2vfki
I love you so much actually.

15:06 J1NX1337: ey, I could take a look at your map now
15:06 TheBlaiZe: o/
15:06 TheBlaiZe: Thanks m8
15:10 J1NX1337: 01:10:817 (9,2) - the stack's off
15:10 J1NX1337: if it's meant to be one
15:10 J1NX1337: with the slider end
15:11 TheBlaiZe: oh right
15:11 TheBlaiZe: I might have missed things like this, was kinda tired by the time I was done
15:12 J1NX1337: right
15:12 J1NX1337: would be nice if these were a jump 01:14:817 (7,1) -
15:12 J1NX1337: because the vocals are different, a jump would emphasize the change well
15:13 J1NX1337: 01:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - would personally add more spacing for these
15:13 J1NX1337: since they're merely beat-separated
15:14 J1NX1337: maybe something like http://puu.sh/oSDyD/d75319be0e.jpg
15:15 J1NX1337: would also add more spacing for 01:17:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - since the previous section used more spacing as well
15:16 J1NX1337: for each section of the song it's usually a good idea to use an appropriate amount of spacing and so that they're not too inconsistent
15:17 J1NX1337: this means the most intense sections of the song, namely kiai sections, should be easy to tell apart in their intensity through spacing compared to calmer sections
15:18 TheBlaiZe: Yeah, the reason why I space the latter half of kiai sections was because by that time the initial rush would wear off
15:19 TheBlaiZe: and it picks up again in the second half of the last kiai
15:19 TheBlaiZe: since at the halfway point there's a calmer part
15:21 J1NX1337: sure, though it should still be done in moderation
15:21 J1NX1337: if there's a non-kiai section that's a lot more intense than that latter half, it doesn't really make sense
15:26 J1NX1337: 01:21:483 (6,1) - spacing between these seems pretty high compared to everything else
15:26 J1NX1337: also not sure why you have a silenced circle here 01:21:817 (2) -
15:26 J1NX1337: all hitsounds that are clickable (slider starts and circles) should be audible
15:26 TheBlaiZe: oh
15:27 TheBlaiZe: that must be a leftover
15:27 TheBlaiZe: from previous versions
15:27 J1NX1337: yeah take care when remaking sections so you don't run into stuff like this lol
15:28 J1NX1337: 01:21:650 (1,2,3,4) - also the flow you use here isn't very optimal
15:31 J1NX1337: when you think about flow, you think about how the player is supposed to move their cursor to hit the objects. In this case, it goes back from (2) to (3) like an average back and forth flow pattern would, however, (3) leads the player back towards the center of (1,2) and after that goes down to (4), all in all the flow here is quite messy and not very intuitive, it's sort of not advancing as much as it should
15:35 TheBlaiZe: right
15:36 J1NX1337: t/86329 here's this if you haven't read it before
15:41 TheBlaiZe: I feel like some of that is subjective and arbitrary, but who am I to argue xd
15:41 J1NX1337: yea it depends
15:42 J1NX1337: 01:23:817 (4,1) - these are also off if they're meant to stack
15:42 TheBlaiZe: oh lol
15:43 J1NX1337: 01:24:650 (2,3) - replacing these with a slider like 01:24:317 (1) - might work better for emphasis
15:43 J1NX1337: and then just increasing the spacing between all of 01:24:317 (1,2,3,4,5) -
15:43 J1NX1337: since I think it's too low
15:46 J1NX1337: 01:33:233 (4,1) - could add spacing between these
15:46 J1NX1337: since 01:33:233 (4) - is a kickslider, you don't need to click the sliderend, thus you can afford to make the next note a jump
15:46 J1NX1337: so for example http://puu.sh/oSF0b/00fd22ff74.jpg would work fine too
15:47 TheBlaiZe: yeah, that's sorta what I changed it to
15:47 J1NX1337: 01:34:983 (1,4) - would move these higher personally
15:48 J1NX1337: encourages more movement
15:48 J1NX1337: tbh
15:48 J1NX1337: 01:33:650 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - switching places between the sliders and circles would work better
15:48 J1NX1337: because then you could map to those instruments that play on 01:33:650 - etc.
15:49 J1NX1337: which would be better emphasized with 4 clickable circles for 4 sounds rather than 2 clickable sliders
15:50 J1NX1337: meanwhile for the part at 01:34:983 - sliders would work better since they don't have those 4 sounds on the beats, only kicks and snares
15:50 J1NX1337: but that's just me
15:51 J1NX1337: 01:42:983 (1,2,3,4,5) - star pattern could look a bit smoother
15:52 TheBlaiZe: oh yeah, that 5 is retarded >.>
15:53 J1NX1337: again 01:44:817 (3,4) - would sound better on the beats rather than offbeats
15:53 J1NX1337: same for the rest of this part
15:54 J1NX1337: 01:58:650 (1) - kind of random NC
15:54 TheBlaiZe: whoops
15:55 J1NX1337: 02:17:983 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - the huge amount of overlapping here looks kinda bad, might wanna remake it
15:57 J1NX1337: 03:21:608 (5,6) - should be on the beats
15:58 TheBlaiZe: also a leftover lol
15:59 J1NX1337: 04:10:983 (2) - your NCs are still inconsistent here
16:00 J1NX1337: they should be on the 1/4 downbeats aka the big white ticks
16:00 TheBlaiZe: gotcha
16:00 J1NX1337: 03:46:984 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is too low
16:01 J1NX1337: generally with sliders, you can afford much larger spacing since you only have to click on every beat and none of the half beats
16:01 J1NX1337: 03:49:650 (5) - should also be an NC
16:01 J1NX1337: could also NC 04:20:317 (3) -
16:02 J1NX1337: 04:26:649 (1,2) - also inconsistent here
16:02 J1NX1337: 04:24:317 (4) - this too, with 01:33:567 (3,1) -
16:02 TheBlaiZe: fixed
16:03 TheBlaiZe: oh that one
16:03 TheBlaiZe: yeah
16:03 TheBlaiZe: the reason why I left that is because I thought it looked ugly otherwise
16:03 TheBlaiZe: but I'll change it
16:04 J1NX1337: rhythm consistency is more important
16:04 J1NX1337: 04:49:317 - seemingly unnecessary BPM change
16:05 TheBlaiZe: Yeah, that note is meant to be snapped to the new bpm there
16:05 TheBlaiZe: overlooked that part
16:06 J1NX1337: I think it's fine where it currently is?
16:06 J1NX1337: also it doesn't make sense to first decrease BPM to 132 and then increase it to 150
16:07 J1NX1337: and the "52BPM" in the end is also wrong, and the last reverse slider is therefore incorrectly snapped
16:07 J1NX1337: you can hear it's off if you slow it down to 25% speed
16:07 TheBlaiZe: Someone linked the bpm list on the forums, thought I would include that
16:07 TheBlaiZe: And I still have no clue what to do with the last slider
16:07 TheBlaiZe: it's a cunt
16:08 J1NX1337: well first you need to remove the 52BPM timing point since it makes it impossible to snap the slider correctly
16:08 TheBlaiZe: the last bpm might be incorrect though
16:09 TheBlaiZe: yeah
16:09 J1NX1337: obviously a drop from 140 to 52 bpm is far too much
16:10 TheBlaiZe: if I just remove the last bpm change and elongate the slider, it fits perfectly >.>
16:10 TheBlaiZe: Weird
16:12 J1NX1337: yeah
16:12 J1NX1337: low BPM = less beats to snap on
16:12 J1NX1337: not as dense
16:13 J1NX1337: remember to snap the spinner stoo
16:14 TheBlaiZe: I might have to do something to make last spinner more visible tho
16:14 TheBlaiZe: should I
16:14 TheBlaiZe: snap it right after
16:14 TheBlaiZe: the first one?
16:16 J1NX1337: more visible?
16:16 TheBlaiZe: People might stop playing after the first one lol I watched my friend play it yesterday and he only noticed it halway in
16:17 J1NX1337: personally I don't think it's a fitting place for a spinner
16:18 J1NX1337: but I guess you'll be needing it if you want 5 minutes of drain
16:18 TheBlaiZe: yeah, that's why I have it
16:19 TheBlaiZe: I mean, if other songs got away with it, might as well, right?
16:22 J1NX1337: or you could map the jingles here 00:00:317 -
16:23 TheBlaiZe: I have no clue how I'd do that in a way that's not dumb though :/
16:26 J1NX1337: maybe a single, quite circle at 00:00:317 - xd
16:26 J1NX1337: quiet*
16:26 J1NX1337: if only they had made the song a couple seconds longer with something to map
16:27 TheBlaiZe: yeah :\
16:28 TheBlaiZe: I mean, the slider is passable I think. And even if it wasn't, I've seen ranked songs with 4:58 seconds of drain, so I don't think those few seconds would matter that much ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
16:28 TheBlaiZe: spinner*
16:28 TheBlaiZe: even
16:33 J1NX1337: those seconds of drain don't count the spinners
16:34 TheBlaiZe: they... dont? ... ok ... then.
16:35 TheBlaiZe: It's fine to remove the last spinner then, I suppose
16:35 J1NX1337: what I mean is that they're actually 5 mins or over in drain time
16:36 J1NX1337: but the system doesn't count the spinners as drain afaik
16:36 TheBlaiZe: So then what on earth am I supposed to do with it?
16:41 J1NX1337: leave the spinner for now
16:45 J1NX1337: if it's a problem for nominators then you'll have to think of something else
16:46 TheBlaiZe: will do
16:46 TheBlaiZe: That's just about everything done on my part again, except for an offbeat slider galore that I cba to change right now, update should be up in a few.
16:47 TheBlaiZe: Thanks yet again ^^
16:48 J1NX1337: no problem lol

[General]

- add Source "天響ノ和樂2" . its from this page this page
- add tag "Tenkyou no Wagaku 2" this is a source converted to romaji, "初音ミク"
Done. Thanks for this, I've been looking for a source forever x)
- it is a better to add a comb color changed from default color
Kept......?I'm not sure what you mean here, should I tick "Enable Custom Colors?

[Beauty under the Moon]

- 00:17:650 (3) - delete clap. 00:16:317 (1,2,3,4) - it is strange a little for only (3) added clap
Done.
- 00:27:317 (3) - stack
Done.
- 00:27:817 (2) - ^
Done.
- 00:50:150 (6) - delete clap
Done.
- 01:06:983 (1) - delete clap and add finish
Done.
- 01:07:817 (5) - stack
Done.
- 01:15:983 (4) - ^
Done.
- 01:24:317 (1) - ^
Done.
- 01:59:150 (2) - add finish on sliderend
Done.
- 01:59:817 (4) - ^
Done.
- 02:16:651 (2) - stack
Done.
- 02:26:983 (1) - delete clap and add finish
Done.
- 02:43:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should make it more beautiful. for example copy 02:43:317 (1,2) - and ctrl +shift + R to change 60 degree angle
Done.
- 02:45:650 (1) - not same shape on 02:45:983 (2) -
Done.
- 03:33:650 (1) - delet clap and add finish
Done.
- 03:34:650 (6) - stack
Done.
- 03:35:483 (3) - ^
Done.
- 03:35:483 (3) - ^
Done.
- 03:37:983 (1) - ^
Done.
- 03:37:650 (8,1) - blanket
Done.
- 03:41:983 (1) - stack
Done.
- 03:55:150 (2) - ^
Done.
- 04:02:983 (1,2,3,4) - stack? this is your attention, keep okok :3
Done. That was bugging me so much, now that I actually know how to change stack leniency, it's a whole new world Thanks for that!
- 04:10:650 (7) - stack
Done.
- 04:41:650 (3) - I sound no single tap piano. maybe kick is better
- 04:44:317 (5) - ^.maybe kick
- 04:52:743 (4) - ^
Done.

Hey,so i would recommend some fixes on this map,i would call this a tiny mod
01:07:483 - 01:09:150 i find those "jumps" confusing,i would rather make a so called flower like you did on 01:19:650 - 01:10:317
Done.
02:14:483 and note after it-put a single note and remove slider and note after it,put slider so it lasts from 02:14:817 - 02:14:983
Kept. Since the notes are based on the beats rather than the vocals, moving these objects would mean breaking consistency, not to mention I'd have to replace the stream with something else.
from #modreq,and here you go i hope this helped you a bit

General
-Stack latency is 0, i think you should use 7, for example on this part 02:43:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks better with stacking imo
Done.

Beauty under the Moon
-00:21:650 (1,2,3,4) - map on the red ticks, theres a nice beat on those, try make the actual square 2 like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5473579 just ctrl+c and ctrl+v, and then ctrl+shift+r and rotate it 45º
Changed. Sliders can solve anything :3
-01:42:317 (2) - same as adove, theres strong 1/2 beats there
Done. ^
-04:32:983 (2) - ^
Done. ^
-01:42:983 (1,2,3,4,5) - make perfect that star, make it with ctrl+shift+d like: http://puu.sh/pG0Xj/4bedbad5c7.jpg and just move the circles in time making a star: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5473622
Done.
-00:56:067 - missing a stream(?
Changed. Whoops I actually have mixed feelings about this section, might change it later based on feedback.
-01:54:651 (4) - since theres a nice beat, here should be a bigger spacing between 3 and 4
Done.
-02:16:651 (2,4,6,1) - bad stacking in here
Done.
-02:27:484 (3,5) - ^
Done.
-02:36:317 (1,3) - ^
Done.
-02:28:483 (2,4) - fix stack here, and stack it with 02:29:650 (1,5) -
Done.
-02:50:983 (5) - this is a nazi suggestion but, what about make a spiner in here, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5473695
Done. Not nazi at all, it fits perfectly. I'll shorten it a bit though so that it matches the beat.
-03:26:483 (5,9) - i feel these 2 a bit off, probably cause theres no beat in there, move 5 in time to the middle of 6 and 7, and move 9 to the red tick after 8 like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5473738
Changed. Yep, it was off. Also added another note to the end of this section.
-03:30:983 (5) - this need to be a bigger jump than 03:30:317 (1,2,3,4) -
Done. Actually never noticed this...
-04:18:817 - a triple(?
Yes.
-04:44:317 (5) - NC
Done.
-04:52:743 (4) - ^
Done.
-04:55:207 (1,1) - make the first spiner end at 05:00:243 - and the second start at 05:00:350 - looks better imo
Done. It does, and the second spinner is much more noticable too.

-00:28:317 (1) - Reverse this slider, seems to fit the flow better
Done.
-00:50:317 (7) - Since you follow the vocals, remove this circle
Kept. It's actually following the drums if you listen closely.
-00:51:650 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This star may be pretty but doesn't really follow anything. I'd either change it or add a circle at 00:51:483 to make it follow the guitar
Done.
-01:48:317 (1) - It's too close to the previous slider, consider changing it to something like this instead
Done... sort of.
-02:43:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The jump distances vary pretty widely on this star
Done. Big f***ing whoops here. I changed the stack leniency recently and failed to notice that the jumps here were retarded as a result... I changed them up a bit, now. Should work and still looks ok I think.
-03:01:650 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - A bit undermapped - there are some kicks that you miss out on - also makes this slow part a bit more interesting
Done. Added some notes and moved some of the sliders a bit, it should be better now.
-03:10:650 (5) - Consider following the drums here, either by moving this circle to 03:10:817 or adding another one here
Done. Thanks for noticing this for me. Always slipped by. ^^;;
-04:52:293 (3,1) - these two objects need to be moved by about -50ms, seems like you need another red line in there
Done. 1/8 it is, then.

-00:07:317 (6) - You seriously need to changed this slider, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :/
Done.
-00:13:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a small build-up in spacing would make this great
Done. You're right, it feels much better ^^
-00:16:317 (1,2) - PLS HAVE THIS CLICKABE !!!! Its such a shame to let this go to waste under a slider end of a repeat slider D:
Done. Added some hitsound changes too, to fit better. Hope it's not too retarded now.
-00:35:817 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Well, i found stuff like this a bit questionable cuz the jump/flwbreak doesn't follow the music too well imo
Kept. For now. I might change it based on further reception.
-01:03:650 (1,2) - These could be paralleled better
Except they are literally mirrored with Ctrl+H ^^;;
-01:06:650 (5) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Either change up the angles a little bit or change the slider shape
Done.
02:37:650 (2) - ^
Done.
04:15:317 (3) - ^
Done.
04:18:983 (1) - ^
Done.
04:24:649 (2,3) - remove nc
Kept. Not sure which NC you meant.
04:33:983 (1,1,1) - Unnecessary NC
Kept. It's for the looks, man

1) In this section you made a jump with a circular flow 00:37:317 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , btw it looks really cool, however, really close to this section, here 00:39:150 (6,1,2,3) - you broke that flow out of the blue. Try using a reverse slider in this one 00:39:150 (6) - and than a hit circle here 00:39:983 (3) - so you can actually change the flow more gently.
Done.
2)In this point here 01:06:150 - there's a clear bass line unmapped, i believe it's up to you since this is really hard to map considering the structure of how you made this sections before the chorus, but consider trying to make a sound out of it
Done. Sliders for the rescue /o/ Nice hearing man, never actually noticed that.
3)You have been following the vocal for this entire section 01:10:983 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - , but as you can see there's no vocal here 01:14:483 - , I can't really hear what you mapped here, but considering that your intentions are to rank this I know why you mapped it . But still i think this stills works you just delete this one note 01:14:483 (5) - .
Kept. I'm actually mapping to the beats, and making sliders wherever I feel the vocals (or other elements) allow for them, and there's clearly a drum-beat there that i have to make clickable.
4)01:32:983 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nicely done stream. There's an issue that I'd like to point out as a player. This slider here 01:33:233 (7) - . First this slider is ending on a strong beat and the rest of the stream is starting in a blue tick, I don't think this is really natural to play. The second issue is the spacing. The sliderend and the next note are really far. You can at least in this one ctrol+shift+r it in "selection centre" and go for a 15º change to make it a bit more playable.
Done.
5)This feels weird, however it's totally inside the song. In the future if you think about another pattern that would also work here, consider changing this one 03:22:983 (1,1,1,1) -
Done. Yeah, I see what you mean. For now I'll just use regular reverse sliders, since I really don't have anything in mind. Even the ones you mentioned here were for snowflaking, if anything. I just got to the point where I'm using way too many patterns and I'm running out of ideas :/

-02:17:817 (2,3,4) - slider position feels weird with the flow, switching the positions of the first 2 sliders feels much better.
Done. You're right, I did the good old Ctrl+G , this one seems to flow better
-04:23:649 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - feel like this should just be a full stream or a jump stream, the slider doesnt feel necessary but its not the worst thing
Kept. I kept this since it's on beat and a similar pattern was used earlier in the map. Might change it based on further feedback.

Beauty under the mod
Why did I laugh at this as much as I did?

-00:18:649 (4) - check AiMod this is unsnapped
Done. Whoops ~
-00:11:650 (1) - remove nc its still 0.50 sv
Done.
-00:12:317 - inherit point is not snapped btw i suggest u stay with 0.50 sv for this slide 00:12:317 (1) - and change here 00:13:650 -
Done.
-00:13:650 (1) - dont think the slider shapes are appealing
Changed. Let's make a flower /o/
-00:34:483 (2,3) - maybe increas ds here as a bigger jump to emphasize the strong beat here 00:34:650 -
Done.
-01:27:150 (2,3) - blaket make the slider less curved
Done.
-01:32:567 (2,3,4) - imo looks confusing there is a beat here 01:32:650 - and u start a kick slider on blue tick its feels wrong imo and the spacing
Kept. Can't really do anything about the ticks, I'm mapping to the instruments : / Might change the spacing up at a later date.
-01:54:484 (3,4) - same here spacing bigger maybe
Done.
-02:25:650 - finish note here with the stream
Done. Also added a little jump, to the bass(?).
-02:37:317 (1) - move to x73 y317
Done.
-03:01:150 (1) - remove nc
Done.
-03:01:650 (2) - nc here
Done.
-03:10:983 (1,2) - swap nc
Done.
-03:26:983 (1,2) - ^
Done.

00:13:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - those slider look weird but that's just my opinion
Kept. Noted
00:26:650 - there is no sound here
Kept. There is though? >.>
00:29:483 (4) - maybe ctrl+g
Done. Notes moved accordingly
00:32:317 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - it's weird that this is not spaced and 00:34:317 (1,2,3) is since the notes on this are closer to each other
Kept Yeah, the reason behind this is the intensity of the song. Or well, a lack thereof.
00:34:317 (1,2,3) - add note here and make 00:34:317 (1,2,3) - into a square with the previous note
Changed. I added the note as you said, but instead of making a square, I decided to change the flow of this section a bit. It should be better now.
00:49:983 - NC here
Done.
00:51:483 - NC should start here not on 00:50:983
Done.
00:54:817 (4) - you can remove this and make the slider 00:54:483 (3) - longer
Done.
00:59:650 - add note here (you can clearly hear the bass there if you play it slower), unless you mapped it after voice
Done.
01:31:650 (5,6) - not sure about this, maybe try different slider placement
Done. These ones have curves now. I like curves. Also flows better.
01:54:150 - same as 00:34:317 (1,2,3)
Done.
02:10:317 - same as 00:59:650 even though here it seems quieter
Done.
02:14:483 (3,4) - same as 00:54:817 (4)
Done.
02:22:983 (1,2,1,2) - make this go in circle like 02:21:651 (1,2,1,2) goes but in the other direction it would emphasize the stream which goes in circles after that
Done. Yeah, you're right, it feels a lot smoother.
03:26:483 - add note
Done.
03:27:650 - ^^
Done.
03:42:983 (1) - maybe remove this and just add a note
Done.
04:26:983 (1,2) - those look kinda ugly
Done. Plastic surgery to the rescue.