As per your request:
[Skin]
Did you get permission to use this hitcircle?
Add an approach circle, please.
[General]
There are different uninherited timing sections across all difficulties. Line them up.
I'm looking at 04:08:583 - in Condemned and Plus mostly, now that you got the rest of them
[SB]
You have SB playing after the mapping is complete for a lot of the difficulties... Make sure that they stop for the shorter difficulties.
[All difficulties]
00:57:897 - Start kiai here
02:27:897 - Start kiai here
[Lucifer's Normal]
00:25:709 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty - it's way off-center too. If you want one soon, at least put it near the center so it's easier to realign. I'd still say that you should give at least two beats at this BPM for a Normal after a spinner.
00:31:490 (1) - Kind of a short spinner for the easiest difficulty
00:32:897 (1) - ...and way too soon after a short spinner for the easiest difficulty.
00:41:490 (1) - Yeah, please don't use such short spinners for the easiest of the set.
00:49:459 (1) - ^
00:58:522 (3) - Um.
I'm not going to mention the short spinners anymore. They don't work for this level of difficulty.
01:12:897 (1,2,3) - Really didn't like playing this rhythm when you give the feeling of following the vocals.
01:17:272 (1,2,3) - Aaah, at least go with the vocal here. Just use a slider or something.
01:20:397 (1) - Too soon after spinner
01:55:709 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner
01:56:022 (2) - End at 01:56:490 -
01:57:272 (1,1) - A bit much of a jump for a Normal imo
01:58:522 (2) - End this at 01:58:990 -
02:06:022 (1,2) - Please don't use a stack like this in the easiest difficulty. New players aren't going to get this - especially when you're mostly just sticking to the beat for the majority of the map
02:08:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - Argh, this is so out of sync with the strong part of the music.
02:17:897 (1) - End at 02:18:365 -
02:27:897 (1) - Too soon after spinner... Just end the spinner at 02:27:272 -
02:29:147 (4) - What... is this mapped to?
02:39:459 (1) - Soon after spinner
02:47:272 (1,2,3) - Same as earlier
I think this map could be made much better than it is. The biggest issue beyond the spinner use is the rhythm work. Try to have it work with the music more instead of just doing the beat the majority of the time, and every once in awhile syncing with the vocals. It leads to a somewhat confusing play and doesn't play very well.
[Taiko]
This is way beyond me, haha.
Beyond the kiai time changes, there was this spot:
02:51:334 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - Some of these notes felt off.
[Imprecation]
00:07:740 - Add a note? Feels weird with the vocal starting, then hitting with the percussion.
01:15:397 (3) - This didn't feel right at half speed if it has a repeat on it. Maybe do a long slider in a circle shape?
01:21:178 (3,4,5) - These got a little hard to see with the red combo on red background.
01:27:428 (7) - Control + R this. Plays better to me.
01:33:834 (4,5,6,7,8) - This back and forth motion didn't feel right compared to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty up to here.
02:27:897 (2,3) - This part didn't feel right since you had followed the vocals fairly consistently up until here.
02:45:397 (1) - This worked much better. :3
02:50:084 - Volume 0% here would sound much better imo and ending that spinner with a soft finish would work great
[Condemned]
00:20:709 (3,4,5) - This rhythm feels soooo off compared to the rest of the song
00:23:209 (3,4,5) - ^
01:30:709 - Restarting the kiai here is just awkward. I'd remove it, or map through that break and find another spot for a break.
01:50:709 (3,4,5,6) - Aaah, here's that weird rhythm again, though this one played a lot better than the other two.
02:50:084 - Volume 0% here would sound much better imo and ending that slider with a soft finish would work great
[Plus]
00:16:334 (5,6) - Maybe this instead?
01:20:397 (1) - Argh. The first time is really disorienting and killed me outright. The other times I played through it, it was fine. Think you can try to work this in a bit more naturally so it isn't so jarring the first time through?
01:55:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Lower the spacing here. It doesn't make those .5x sliders read well at all.
01:58:834 (5) - Delete this. Doesn't fit during a slower part.
01:59:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hrm... how about this instead?
02:40:397 (1,2,1,2) - Kind of strange having a + pattern when there's a pentagram in the background...
02:49:928 (5) - I was surprised that this wasn't at .5x
02:50:553 (1) - This feels a little long. Maybe end it at 02:52:897 - instead?
03:19:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The jumps feel a lot better to me if they were jumping on 03:19:459 (2,4,6) - instead of 03:19:615 (3,5,7) - Also this was pretty crazy to read. Maybe do new combos on each jump, but it might have been because the jumps felt like they were on the wrong beat for me.
03:29:772 (2,3,4,5) - Can you do this without the overlapping? They're such a pain to read. ;_;
03:37:897 - Extend the break start to here
03:40:285 - Soft hitsound volume is way too loud here. ><
03:54:905 (6) - And that finish doesn't fit very well to me, though it might be because of the volume being so high
04:08:895 - Start kiai here
05:09:521 (2) - I didn't like this being a repeat slider. It removes the emphasis on the chord progression. Maybe do something like this?
05:18:739 (4,1) - Didn't like the overlap on these. Maybe flip these all so they're facing away.
05:26:396 (1) - Start this at 05:26:239 -
That last kiai section is huge. Maybe stop kiai at 04:46:396 - and reapply at 04:51:396 -
It may look like a crap-ton of mods, but the maps in general are pretty solid. I'm thinking that beyond the timing stuff and kiai, the Normal needs the most renovation. Imprecation and Plus were really fun! Great job~
Good luck!