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Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi

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GiNa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月3日 at 上午 05:50:44

Artist: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku
Title: Nakimushi Kareshi
Source: ChorisuP x FernandoP
Tags: Vocaloid Vocaloid2 Yomeiro HakuNoKaemi Honeyworks Crybaby Boyfriend
BPM: 105
Filesize: 18925kb
Play Time: 04:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.61 stars, 162 notes)
  2. Hard (4.39 stars, 496 notes)
  3. Normal (2.83 stars, 350 notes)
Download: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi
Download: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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1st Beatmap
Nico: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm13081249

【鏡音レン・初音ミク┗|∵|┓】 泣キ虫カレシ 【オリジナルPV】

Please Re-Download if you download this before 08/03/11 (GMT-8).


Done
[Easy] - 100% by Me & HakuNoKaemi
Parts
00:01:621 ~ 01:03:336 - Me
01:05:621 ~ 01:13:621 - Break
01:13:621 ~ 02:00:479 - Me
02:01:050 ~ 03:09:050 - HakuNoKaemi
03:09:050 ~ 03:11:907 - Short Break
03:11:907 ~ 03:34:193 - Everything after is by me
03:34:193 ~ 03:47:907 - Break
04:10:764 ~ 04:15:336 - Short Break
[Normal] - 100%
[Hard] - 100%

06/06/11 - Changed BG.
06/07/11 - Changed to HD video(without audio).
07/10/11 - Added pause-overlay image.
07/11/11 - Changed audio and offset.
07/16/11 - Added new custom hitosund, also changed pause-overlay image to .jpg.
07/30/11 - Reduced BG and pause-overlay images.
08/03/11 - Added SB for collab Easy, thanks to Wiinter ;3


Special Thanks:
littlecar3370's Timing
Selee's Timing recheck
Yomeiro's Hitsounds
HakuNoKaemi's HD video
Armin's New offset
And all the modders ;3.
loveFantasy
在我以標準的形式幫你做MOD前, 先請你做好以下的修正

  1. Easy中請改掉所有在藍線(1/4)和黃線(1/8)上的notes, Easy玩家絕對無法應付, 並且即使是專業到大家都耳熟能詳的程度的mapper也會避免用黃線(1/8).
  2. Easy的最後請插一條綠線把KIAI section結束
  3. Normal中你可以保留一些藍線(1/4), 要刪去的主要為 "為了去迎合vocal的唱點而不符合前後節奏" 的 (因為vocal可能唱滑, 故意去迎合只會影響gameflow - 例如03:04:698 (1,2,3) ), "孤單的" (例如 00:01:982 (1) <= 除了你沒有人知道為什麼要擺這裡, 01:23:126 (1)的結尾 <= 完全不合節奏), 適合保留的是能融入節奏又不會難讀的, 例如01:05:840 (1,2,3) 和 01:08:126 (1,2,3), 但請好好注意間距, 因為Easy/Normal是做給技巧較差或剛接觸遊戲的玩家, 比起依賴節奏他們還必須依賴眼睛, 01:08:555這個(2)就顯然擺壞了
  4. 稍微調整音量, 像是每個diff最開始清唱的部分, 和02:00:698開始這段顯然不適合100%音量呀 (即使只用normal和whistle)
  5. 讓combo間的節奏有關連性, 不要隨便亂下, 請看Hard中的00:11:412到00:29:126, 這段背景音樂很明顯是同一段, 但每次換個combo color你下的節奏就不同了, 會讓人覺得隨機.混亂.不和諧, 不用擔心單調性的問題, 譬如說00:12:126 (3,4,5) 到了下一段就可以變成一條reverse slider, 而00:12:698 (6)可以打碎成兩個circle等等, 自行做些不影響節奏但能擺脫單調性的配置, 好好跟著背景的鼓聲
  6. 徹底檢查一次spacing, 同時你可以選擇性的重擺一些notes, 這首歌不適合方方正正規矩的擺設, 像是Hard中00:47:555-00:51:555, 好吧這樣下音樂性可以接受, 但首先因為spacing小密度又高, 導致(6,7)都非常難讀, 再來又實在直來直往不怎麼好看, 就是適合你重擺的類型
  7. 規規矩矩的下combo color, (01:04:126 <= Orz, 01:13:126 <= ???, 01:30:412 <=顯然應該下在(2)..)
  8. 音效...大工程了, 主要是讓同一段的不同combo內有相同的音效格式, 如果需要的話我之前有兩個同樣是給做第一張圖的mapper看的音效建議你可以讀讀 link1 link2
等你認為準備好了請用forum PM找我, 不用回我的queue.

star for encouragement
Topic Starter
GiNa
你提出的我都修改好了
只剩音效orz
Thanks, here is your kd
Red_old
ξ( >◡・)▄︻▇▇〓
loveFantasy
ok, fight

[Easy]
- SV1.5 帶來的壞處, 第一是難度, 第二是擺圖 (你可以看到你有許多二拍三拍的slider佔據整個螢幕, 讓你只有那幾種擺法)
<00:03:840> (1) 建議下<00:04:126>, 不過如果你想跟歌詞並不強求
<00:08:698> 下note
<00:36:983> (6) 改停在白線上, 實際上我更建議移到00:36:698並做成1/2拍的slider並repeat一次
<00:42:983> (3) slider結尾unsnapped
<00:44:698> 下note
<01:06:983> 擺一條和(1)一樣的slider
<01:08:126> (2,3) 又是黃線!? 改成3/4拍的slider並repeat一次, 見圖
<01:09:840> 下note
<01:12:126> (2) 又是黃線? 改3/4拍
<01:13:841> (1) 又是黃線? 改1拍..喂真的好好改了嗎
<01:16:126> (3,4) 改成3/4拍的slider並repeat一次, 和<01:08:126>一樣
<01:17:555> (1) 移到<01:17:269>, 一樣改成3/4拍的slider並repeat一次
<01:18:983> (1,4) 結尾都還是在黃線上啊
<01:27:269> (5) 結尾移到白線上
<01:36:983> (1) ^
<01:39:555> (3,1,2) 改成如圖的配置 (不是擺設, 是note下的時間和slider長度, 位置你請自己擺)
<01:46:983> (1) 看結尾要在白線或紅線吧, 目前還是黃線
<01:49:269> (3) 多repeat一次或在<01:50:983>下note
<01:54:412> (4) 結尾移在白線上, <01:55:555> 下note

嗯..說實在, 我覺得我算好脾氣的modder了, 但是當我接著打開Normal快速的看一次後, 我真的很不滿意.

請你特別注意spacing, 你點擊任何note後右上角會出現 x,y座標和一個 prev: 1.07x. next: 1.07x. prev代表你點擊的note和前一個note的間距, next代表和下一個note的間距, 這個間距在沒有變速 (Timing Panel的綠線變速) 的情況下是不應該有大變化的, 你可以把右邊工具列的distance snap點亮, 按住alt鍵不放使用右上角的拉條調整你想要的間距倍數. 你現在的圖充滿了前一個0.25x 下一個2x 再下一個1.33x這種非常誇張的狀況, 我懷疑任何沒聽過這首歌的玩家有辦法好好的打你的圖.

請你瞭解, 看長度超過四分鐘的圖完全不是什麼令人享受的事 (事實上我的queue有其中一條規則是不看超過四分鐘的圖), 看新人的圖也一點都不好笑 (因為他們通常有四五倍多的錯誤), 所以我希望新人mapper能展現他們的熱誠和合作, 如果你下次請我回來再讓我看到任何非常明顯的spacing/藍線/黃線問題, 我可能會壞掉並且再也不想回來看的, 請你瞭解.
Topic Starter
GiNa
fixed all of them later
got busy these day, sorry ;3
Komeiji Yuki
Keep working~

加油 ;)
Topic Starter
GiNa

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Keep working~

加油 ;)

Red wrote:

ξ( >◡・)▄︻▇▇〓
Thank, guys ;3
loveFantasy

gina91189 wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?t=44488
Fixed...but not sure.

對了,請問一下,我這map的offset有錯嗎?
我朋友說節奏有點難抓 :(
Thank you :P
我不是timing專家, 不過基本上可以跟你保證你的offset誤差應該不超過20ms, 如果你要很精確的timing需要自行去論壇的timing queue找人幫忙.

[Normal]
- AR -1, spacing倍數過小 (0.8x應該是個較適合的數字, 因為改這個要全部重排, 所以看你吧, 有心的話重排成大一點的spacing我認為gameflow會好很多的)
- Slider velocity在1.50x BPM區域可能對新手來說有點太快了
<00:10:412> (S) delete, 感覺不適合( 10:126-10:983會挺適合的, 只是這樣的spinner太短了, 不好擺在Normal )
<00:36:983> (6) 停00:37:269
<01:00:126> (5,6) 不要兩個都stack, 造成新手難讀
<01:05:841> (1,2,3) 在一個mapset最簡單的難度, 這種3/4, 2/4混合的節奏最好把3/4都變成slider (這裡的意思就是1,2,3變成一個3/4拍的repeat slider), 尤其是你的spacing倍數又很小, 眼睛可能看不出來有節奏變化; 整首有很多3/4+2/4, 不一一提出
<01:10:412> (4,1,2) 拍數不同怎麼會用一樣的spacing?
<01:27:269> (7) repeat 2次
<01:31:841> (7) 做成和01:27:269 (7)一樣
<02:34:983> (7) 做成1.5拍, repeat一次
<02:41:269> 下note
<02:45:840> 下note
<03:01:269> (2,3,4) 沒疊好
<03:08:983> 這個Breaktime要達到你的效果, 要也是應該把code改成 2,190983,190983 吧, 紅箭頭出來的時間不對啊
<03:21:269> (1,2) spacing..
<03:52:126> 下note
<03:56:698> 下note
<04:06:412> 擺轉盤到04:08:698, 這裡Break是打斷gameflow啊
<04:22:412> 下note

[Hard]
<00:10:412> (S) 這種很難轉的轉盤被叫做ninja spinner而且非常容易被挑刺, 建議弄成10:126-10:983的slider就好, 利用紅node做出配合節奏的slider, 見圖
<00:19:269> 這裡就下note了, 藍線開始很不直覺
<00:43:555> (2,3,4) 沒疊好
<00:47:555> (1,2,3,4) 擺成其他樣子吧, 結尾點沒疊好超不好看
<01:05:841> (1,2,3,4) 這是很糟的stack法, 因為(1,2)和(3,4)間格的拍數不同, 不是擺明坑人嗎, 後面還很多不一一舉出
<01:13:840> (1..) 這也太疊了吧, 另外請把1:15的節奏改下成圖上那樣 (位置請自行擺)
<01:17:983> (3) 1:18:126開始, 1:18:412結束
<01:32:412> 同0:19:269
<01:50:698> ^
<01:52:698> (3,5) 都repeat一次
<01:59:983> (2..) 由於(1), 這邊藍線開始就不會讓人覺得奇怪.
- 重複節奏的部分請對照著前面的mod自己檢查
<02:56:412> (4) 喂你怎麼還在黃線上啊
<02:59:840> (1) ^
<03:04:126> (6) ^
<03:12:126> (T) 這條綠線音量降到40%
Selee
Timing没问题哦 <_<
虽然开始的vocal会早一些 但按总体节奏无误
Topic Starter
GiNa

Selee wrote:

Timing没问题哦 <_<
虽然开始的vocal会早一些 但按总体节奏无误
謝謝 :)
Topic Starter
GiNa

loveFantasy wrote:

[Normal]
- AR -1, spacing倍數過小 (0.8x應該是個較適合的數字, 因為改這個要全部重排, 所以看你吧, 有心的話重排成大一點的spacing我認為gameflow會好很多的)
- Slider velocity在1.50x BPM區域可能對新手來說有點太快了
<00:10:412> (S) delete, 感覺不適合( 10:126-10:983會挺適合的, 只是這樣的spinner太短了, 不好擺在Normal )
<00:36:983> (6) 停00:37:269
<01:00:126> (5,6) 不要兩個都stack, 造成新手難讀
<01:05:841> (1,2,3) 在一個mapset最簡單的難度, 這種3/4, 2/4混合的節奏最好把3/4都變成slider (這裡的意思就是1,2,3變成一個3/4拍的repeat slider), 尤其是你的spacing倍數又很小, 眼睛可能看不出來有節奏變化; 整首有很多3/4+2/4, 不一一提出
<01:10:412> (4,1,2) 拍數不同怎麼會用一樣的spacing?
<01:27:269> (7) repeat 2次
<01:31:841> (7) 做成和01:27:269 (7)一樣
<02:34:983> (7) 做成1.5拍, repeat一次
<02:41:269> 下note
<02:45:840> 下note
<03:01:269> (2,3,4) 沒疊好
<03:08:983> 這個Breaktime要達到你的效果, 要也是應該把code改成 2,190983,190983 吧, 紅箭頭出來的時間不對啊
<03:21:269> (1,2) spacing..
<03:52:126> 下note
<03:56:698> 下note
<04:06:412> 擺轉盤到04:08:698, 這裡Break是打斷gameflow啊
<04:22:412> 下note

[Hard]
<00:10:412> (S) 這種很難轉的轉盤被叫做ninja spinner而且非常容易被挑刺, 建議弄成10:126-10:983的slider就好, 利用紅node做出配合節奏的slider, 見圖
<00:19:269> 這裡就下note了, 藍線開始很不直覺
<00:43:555> (2,3,4) 沒疊好
<00:47:555> (1,2,3,4) 擺成其他樣子吧, 結尾點沒疊好超不好看
<01:05:841> (1,2,3,4) 這是很糟的stack法, 因為(1,2)和(3,4)間格的拍數不同, 不是擺明坑人嗎, 後面還很多不一一舉出
<01:13:840> (1..) 這也太疊了吧, 另外請把1:15的節奏改下成圖上那樣 (位置請自行擺)
<01:17:983> (3) 1:18:126開始, 1:18:412結束
<01:32:412> 同0:19:269
<01:50:698> ^
<01:52:698> (3,5) 都repeat一次
<01:59:983> (2..) 由於(1), 這邊藍線開始就不會讓人覺得奇怪.
- 重複節奏的部分請對照著前面的mod自己檢查
<02:56:412> (4) 喂你怎麼還在黃線上啊
<02:59:840> (1) ^
<03:04:126> (6) ^
<03:12:126> (T) 這條綠線音量降到40%
Fixed, thanks ;3
Axey
Hii! mod time >w<!
just suggestions

[Easy]
00:47:555(1)-silder拉到00:49:269 ; 或者换silder加个折返 ; 或者最后白线上加个note
00:49:840(2,3)-^
01:02:412(2)-如果想和(1)-平行的话就往下一格
01:14:983(2)-silder拉到01:15:840-
01:21:840(4)-silder拉到01:22:983- 然后加一个折返去掉(1) (也可以不加折返 如果作此修改后 请别忘记调整后面的note间距
01:33:269(1)-add finish
01:36:983(1)-从这里往后加3个note 或者改成silder (1)-silder放到01:37:840-
01:41:840(1)-silder弯的再圆一点..
01:51:555(1)-add finish
01:53:840(3)-add whis
01:56:126(6)-add whis
01:57:840(8)-add note
01:58:412(1)-silder从这里开始拉

[Normal]
00:08:412(8)-可以换成silder 拉到00:08:983-
00:29:269(4)-add note
01:10:840(2)-silder到01:11:269-结束
01:11:840(3)-silder换成其他note排布
01:50:983(8)-add note
01:51:555(1)-add whis or finish(发现你是用whis的 不过感觉finish也不错啦^^
01:57:269(5)-remove whis ; silder加一个折返
02:08:698(3)-remove whis
02:41:269(9)-add finish
03:29:840(1)-silder拉到03:34:412-
03:51:840(7)-add note ; 或者拉silder到(8)
04:23:555(X)-感觉这歌的结尾在这里 所以前面可以再适当加点note..

[Hard]
00:15:555(1)-silder拉到00:15:840- ; 或者加一个折返
00:50:983(4)-换成silder拉到00:51:269-
01:59:276(4,1)-向下一格
02:32:126(1,2)-向右一格
02:43:698(3)-去掉一个折返
04:23:555(4)-add note

sorry for my long modding >.<

nice song~~ starr//
Topic Starter
GiNa

BakaHuang wrote:

Hii! mod time >w<!
just suggestions

[Easy]
00:47:555(1)-silder拉到00:49:269 ; 或者换silder加个折返 ; 或者最后白线上加个note Fixed
00:49:840(2,3)-^ Fixed
01:02:412(2)-如果想和(1)-平行的话就往下一格 Fixed
01:14:983(2)-silder拉到01:15:840- Fixed
01:21:840(4)-silder拉到01:22:983- 然后加一个折返去掉(1) (也可以不加折返 如果作此修改后 请别忘记调整后面的note间距 Fixed
01:33:269(1)-add finish Fixed
01:36:983(1)-从这里往后加3个note 或者改成silder (1)-silder放到01:37:840- Fixed
01:41:840(1)-silder弯的再圆一点.. Fixed
01:51:555(1)-add finish Fixed
01:53:840(3)-add whis Fixed
01:56:126(6)-add whis Fixed
01:57:840(8)-add note Fixed
01:58:412(1)-silder从这里开始拉 Fixed

[Normal]
00:08:412(8)-可以换成silder 拉到00:08:983-  Fixed
00:29:269(4)-add note Fixed
01:10:840(2)-silder到01:11:269-结束 Fixed
01:11:840(3)-silder换成其他note排布 Fixed
01:50:983(8)-add note Fixed
01:51:555(1)-add whis or finish(发现你是用whis的 不过感觉finish也不错啦^^ Fixed
01:57:269(5)-remove whis ; silder加一个折返 Fixed
02:08:698(3)-remove whis Fixed
02:41:269(9)-add finish Fixed
03:29:840(1)-silder拉到03:34:412- Fixed
03:51:840(7)-add note ; 或者拉silder到(8) Fixed
04:23:555(X)-感觉这歌的结尾在这里 所以前面可以再适当加点note.. Fixed

[Hard]
00:15:555(1)-silder拉到00:15:840- ; 或者加一个折返 Fixed
00:50:983(4)-换成silder拉到00:51:269- Fixed
01:59:276(4,1)-向下一格 Fixed
02:32:126(1,2)-向右一格 Fixed
02:43:698(3)-去掉一个折返 Fixed
04:23:555(4)-add note Fixed

sorry for my long modding >.<

nice song~~ starr//
Thank you so much ;3
MoodyRPG
[Easy]

00:29:269 (1) - Add whistle in the end of the slider
00:38:412 (1) - ^
01:24:698 (5) - New combo
01:55:555 (5) - ^

[Normal]

01:42:412 (2) - Remove whistle and add finish
02:37:269 (1) - Add finish

[Hard]

00:14:126 (4) - Add whistle
00:15:555 (1) - Add finish in the beginner of the slider
01:16:126 (1) - Remove new combo
02:02:983 (1) - ^
02:46:412 (9) - New combo
03:04:698 (7) - ^
03:06:126 (1) - ^
04:01:840 (4) - ^

Star~
Topic Starter
GiNa

MoodyRPG wrote:

[Easy]

00:29:269 (1) - Add whistle in the end of the slider Fixed
00:38:412 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:24:698 (5) - New combo Fixed
01:55:555 (5) - ^ Fixed

[Normal]

01:42:412 (2) - Remove whistle and add finish Fixed
02:37:269 (1) - Add finish Fixed

[Hard]

00:14:126 (4) - Add whistle Fixed
00:15:555 (1) - Add finish in the beginner of the slider Fixed
01:16:126 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
02:02:983 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:46:412 (9) - New combo
03:04:698 (7) - ^ Fixed
03:06:126 (1) - ^ Fixed
04:01:840 (4) - ^ Fixed

Star~
Thank you ;3
Yomeiro
Hi there~
Coming from my Riddle queue~ :3

Hard

So uhm let's start~

SPOILER
00:01:840 (1) - Make this slider end at 00:02:412, is better in my opinion~
00:02:983 (2) - ^, end at 00:03:555~
00:12:126 (3) - How about adding a whistle at the start of this one?
00:13:269 (1) - Maybe add a whistle here too then~
00:14:412 (5) - Whistle at the end then~
00:16:126 (2) - Add whistle? :3
00:17:269 (6) - ^
00:17:555: How about adding a note here? o.o
00:18:412 (1) - ^
00:19:555 (5,7) - ^
00:20:698 (1) - Add whistle? :3
00:20:983 (2) - Add whistle at 4th tick? :3
00:22:412 (3) - ^, here at 3rd tick though~
00:24:126 (5) - Add whistle again~
00:24:698 (1,2) - Make dem sliders one tick longer like this~, add whistle at the beginning of 2~
00:26:412 (5) - Add whistle~
00:27:555 (2) - ^
00:26:983 (1) - Same as 00:24:698, make this slider 1 tick longer~
00:28:698 (6,8) - Add whistles~
00:29:269 (1) - Add finish at the beginning~, whistle at the end...
00:30:412 (2,3) - Remove whistle from 2, add at 3...
00:31:555 (1,2,3,4) - Remove whistle from beginning and end of 1, add at beginning of 2 remove from 3... add at 4
00:33:840 (1) - Remove the whistle from this one but leave the one at the last tick..
00:38:412 (1) - Remove whistle from the end here~
00:40:698 (5) - ^
00:42:983 (1) - ^
00:44:126 (3,4) - Add whistle at 3 and remove it from 4~
00:47:555 (1) - Add finish at the beginning
00:48:126 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning
00:49:269 (4) - Add whistle
00:50:412 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning...
00:51:555 (5) - Add whistle
00:52:126 (1,2) - Add whistle at the end of those sliders
00:56:126 (5) - Add whistle
00:56:698 (1) - Remove whistle from beginning and add finish instead, remove whistle from the end too~
00:57:269 (2) - Add whistle at the beginning
00:57:840 (3) - Remove whistle from this slider completely~
00:58:412 (4) - Add whistle at the beginning
00:58:983 (5,6,7,8) - aAaA (a = no whistle... A = whistle)
01:01:269 (1,2,3,4) - Remove whistle from 1+3 completely, add them at 2+4 instead~
01:04:126 (6) - NC, and add whistle at the beginning of this one~ (I'm stopping the hitsound-mod at this point, its just to much for some reason...)
01:07:841 (1) - Make this slider shorter and place a note where it actually ended before (should look like this then~)
02:20:983 (1) - ^
01:25:841 (7) - Make this one end at 01:26:126.
01:30:412 (3) - Let this one end at 01:30:698.
03:01:983 (3) - Mhhh~, make this one one tick shorter and drag it to 03:02:126 then..., one grid to the right~
03:14:698 (3) - Add a break after this....
03:19:555 (3) - Remove this note, add a break after 03:18:698 (2) then....
03:25:269 (1,1,2) - Change this to a slider please....
03:27:555 (2) - Add a Break after this note...
03:29:840 (3) - Remove 3, drag spinner which comes after to this point, make the spinner last longer so it ends on 03:32:126 again.
03:44:126 (5) - Let this slider end at 03:44:412.
03:44:698 (1) - This one at 03:44:983.
03:45:555: Add a note here
03:56:269 (4) - Wrong.... drag this one too 03:56:412.
03:58:412 (3) - Let this one end at 03:58:698.
03:59:555 (5) - And this one at 03:59:840.

Oh gawd..... and this was just one diff....
I was thinking if this is actually your first beatmap, I looked at your first post and it really is....
Guess all those things are justified then where I am like "Why did he do it like this..." and that stuff.....
Maybe you get how I would continue with the Hitsounds. I pointed other things out which I didn't really like at your map (at least this diff for now...).
I guess it's pretty good for your first map, but still needs to be worked on.

I'm probably going to mod Normal and Easy later this day.... Hard was like a slap into the face for me ;_;

I'll give you my star later so bear with it please~
- Rche -
first map is difficult huh?

my post is ehhhhh...
actually quite similar to Yomeiro's post.
and you may learn how to put hitsounds on his post.

Yomeiro wrote:

Hard was like a slap into the face for me ;_;
me too.
if i'm not lazy enough and i make a complete hitsound mod it would be way too long...
and i would take a look on the other diffs...

well, i'm a lazy modder...
Yomeiro
So hi again.... here's part 2 of my mod then~

General

Change Lead-In-Track at all diffs by to 2 seconds~ (Press F4 --> Audio --> last point...~)

Hard

Seems like I missed some things.....
Was pretty tired when I modded the first part~ (slept like from 9pm to 1am, was up all night and had to take an exam from 9-12am... got home and first thing I did was modding your map lul~)
Well:

Could you increase the Slider-Tickrate to 1 maybe?

00:06:412 (2) - This is one thing I just noticed now too... Change this slider to a single note please (you can leave the whistle on that one~)
03:25:269 (4,1,2) - Oh lol, you got me wrong for this part...^^, should've showed you what I actually meant... basically I had something like this in mind, since the notes were totally fine as they were.... just those free spaces were a bit disturbing~
04:10:983 (4) - Remove every note you placed after this part and leave it as an outro~, better in my opinion~

If you want to leave it like it is...
04:20:126 (2) - Change this slider to a single note~
04:10:983 (4) - Add a Break after this note
04:15:555 (1,2) - Same as the first two sliders in the beginning which I already pointed out in my first part~, make them two ticks longer and they're fine.

So I'm moving on to Normal~

Normal

Mhh... Would you mind reducing the Slider-Velocity to 1?

00:08:412 (3) - Let this one end at 00:09:269.
00:28:698 (1) - Meh~ remove this one, it's a bit to early^^
00:36:126 (5,6,1) - How about something like this~?
00:38:983 (2) - SInce 1 is missing then, you need to add a NC here~
01:24:126 (1,2,3) - Would you change this to a slider? Like this here~
01:28:698 (1,2,3) - ^
01:33:269 (1,2,3) - ^
01:42:412 (2,3,4) - ^
01:46:983 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:269 (1,2,3) - ^
02:41:840 (1,2,3) - ^
02:46:412 (1,2,3) - ^
03:48:126 (1,2,3) - ^
03:52:698 (1,2,3) - ^
03:57:269 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:555 (1,2) - ^, just a tick shorter since it's not 3 notes but two this time.
01:46:412 : add a note here or make 01:45:841 (8) to a slider up to this point~
02:00:126 : ^
02:09:269 : Add a Note~
02:34:983 (7) - Make this one tick longer~
02:51:840 (5) - Make this one end at 02:52:412.
02:59:840 (1) - It's better like this in my opinion.
03:05:840 (3) - Better like this~
03:06:983 (1) - Should start at 03:06:698 and end at 03:08:983. Add a Break after this Spinner then.
03:14:698 (3) - Add Break after this note.
03:19:555 (3) - Remove, add break after 2~
03:25:269 (1,1,2) - Same as Hard~, Add a Break after this then~
04:02:412 : Add a Note here~
04:10:983 (4) - See Hard~

If you want to leave it like it is...
04:10:983 (4) - Add a Break after this note.

Easy

Slider-Velocity is to high on this one imo~.
Since I already suggested for normal a SV of 1.0, maybe change it to 0.75 or 0.5 here~

00:01:841 : Add a note here, turn 00:01:841 (1,2) then into a Slider (basically a slider starting at 1, ending at 2~)
00:06:412 (3,4) - No need to add a note here, but turn this one into a Slider as well like above~

Guess I'm fine with your Easy diff other than that, since it's pretty short, there wasn't much to point out.

When you change the Slider-Velocity on Normal and Easy, don't forget to check all your sliders if they're still correct.
You need to recheck your spacing to then, since a change in Slider-Velocity means a change in how the notes are spaced by Distance-Snap~

Call me back when you've gone through this and changed something.
I'm going to check your mapset again for hitsounds and maybe combos then~ (be surprised what will be waiting for you~)
Well, I guess I can leave this star here, except for hitsounds and combos it seems like a pretty decent map for your first one.
Just make sure you call me back via PM so that I will really check it~^^
Yomeiro
Tiiiiiiiime, for my little check after your fixes~
I'll add the files with them hitsounds to my liking at the end of this "check".

Other stuff I "fixed" while I was at it~

Hard

00:12:983: I added a note here~
01:27:840 (5) - I made this one tick longer for the hitsounding~
01:37:841 (3) -
01:38:698 (4) - ^
01:33:269 (1) - Change this one to be like 01:34:126 (2).
01:36:126 (6) - I made this one two ticks longer~
01:41:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - dragged those too 01:41:269, and 01:42:269 (1) to 01:42:126.
01:51:555 (1) - I let this slider end at 01:52:126 for hitsounding again~
01:54:983: added a note here for hitsounding~
01:59:555 (1) - I let this one end at 01:59:840
02:23:126 (6) - Dragged this one to 02:23:269.
02:31:126 (3) - Dragged this one to 02:31:269 and made it end on 02:31:556.
02:40:983 (8) - I made this one tick longer~
02:49:269 (3) - I made this one two ticks longer~
02:50:983 (3,4) - Removed 4 and made 3 two ticks longer~
03:32:412 (1) - I let this one end at 03:32:698
03:34:126: added a note here~
03:44:126 (5) - I let this one end at 03:44:412.
03:57:269 (1) - I let this one end at 03:58:039.

Normal


00:56:126: I added a note here~
01:31:841 (5) - I made this slider one tick longer~
01:36:126 (4) - ^
01:54:412 (5) - ^
02:23:841 (2) - I let this one end at 02:24:698.

Note that I just "fixed" some notes and slider lenghts~
You would have to fix the spacing yourself if you'll use the files I attach~
You can use these "fixes" even if you don't use the files I attach...~
I guess that's my modding for your map then....
I hope I didn't miss anything out now...^^

Download: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi (gina91189) [Hard].osu

Download: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi (gina91189) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

Yomeiro wrote:

Tiiiiiiiime, for my little check after your fixes~
I'll add the files with them hitsounds to my liking at the end of this "check".

Other stuff I "fixed" while I was at it~

Hard

00:12:983: I added a note here~
01:27:840 (5) - I made this one tick longer for the hitsounding~
01:37:841 (3) -
01:38:698 (4) - ^
01:33:269 (1) - Change this one to be like 01:34:126 (2).
01:36:126 (6) - I made this one two ticks longer~
01:41:555 (1,2,3,4,5) - dragged those too 01:41:269, and 01:42:269 (1) to 01:42:126.
01:51:555 (1) - I let this slider end at 01:52:126 for hitsounding again~
01:54:983: added a note here for hitsounding~
01:59:555 (1) - I let this one end at 01:59:840
02:23:126 (6) - Dragged this one to 02:23:269.
02:31:126 (3) - Dragged this one to 02:31:269 and made it end on 02:31:556.
02:40:983 (8) - I made this one tick longer~
02:49:269 (3) - I made this one two ticks longer~
02:50:983 (3,4) - Removed 4 and made 3 two ticks longer~
03:32:412 (1) - I let this one end at 03:32:698
03:34:126: added a note here~
03:44:126 (5) - I let this one end at 03:44:412.
03:57:269 (1) - I let this one end at 03:58:039.

Normal


00:56:126: I added a note here~
01:31:841 (5) - I made this slider one tick longer~
01:36:126 (4) - ^
01:54:412 (5) - ^
02:23:841 (2) - I let this one end at 02:24:698.

Note that I just "fixed" some notes and slider lenghts~
You would have to fix the spacing yourself if you'll use the files I attach~
You can use these "fixes" even if you don't use the files I attach...~
I guess that's my modding for your map then....
I hope I didn't miss anything out now...^^

Fixed ;3
I love the Hitsounds, so I'll just use them
Dw, I fixed the spacings too.
Thank you SO MUCH >w<

Oh, btw, I wanna complaining something
"Why did he do it like this..."
Is SHE, not HE :)
S o r d a
thanks reqs~

[overall]:
  1. why you have two osb Delete Please
  2. 1st 01:24:126 - Kiai time start

[Hard]:
  1. 00:04:126 (4) - 1grid right
  2. 00:24:126 - make Slider? end 00:24:412 -
  3. 01:29:555 (2) - slider repeat hidden T_T move?
  4. 01:42:126 (1) - Remove Finish
  5. 02:17:841 (7) - stack funny Distance snap x0.0 grid snap off put
  6. 02:33:269 (4) - New combo
[Normal]:
  1. many spacing miss Please check
    Distance snap x0.8 note put better
[Easy]:
Fine

Fight~
star(ノ゚ω゚)ノ★
- Rche -
[Easy]
01:35:841 (1) - delete note. this kind of spacing + 1/2 notes = confusing, right?

[Normal]
i guess this OD is too high.
and the slider velocity is slightly too low.
00:08:412 (3) - make this slider curvy?
i failed to pick more.

[Hard]
shocked by the OD8.though i don't know if you should change that...
the hitsound is now okay but i think lower the volume slightly would be better.
01:44:698 (6,1) - put the new combo before the (1)
01:48:126 (3,1) - ^
02:18:269 (8,9,10) - sounds bad imo. try remove (8) and (10).
02:41:840 (1,2,3) - ehhhh...sounds bad(again)imo. try the way you used before.
02:44:412 (2) - just make the slider 1/2 and put a note at the end of the original slider would be better...
03:44:126 (5) - (nazi) why this slider is not upright?!

sorry for my laziness last time.
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:
  1. why you have two osb Delete Please
  2. 1st 01:24:126 - Kiai time start

[Hard]:
  1. 00:04:126 (4) - 1grid right
  2. 00:24:126 - make Slider? end 00:24:412 -
  3. 01:29:555 (2) - slider repeat hidden T_T move?
  4. 01:42:126 (1) - Remove Finish
  5. 02:17:841 (7) - stack funny Distance snap x0.0 grid snap off put
  6. 02:33:269 (4) - New combo
[Normal]:
  1. many spacing miss Please check
    Distance snap x0.8 note put better
[Easy]:
Fine

Fight~
star(ノ゚ω゚)ノ★
Fixed, thank you ;3
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

justnobody wrote:

[Easy]
01:35:841 (1) - delete note. this kind of spacing + 1/2 notes = confusing, right?

[Normal]
i guess this OD is too high.
and the slider velocity is slightly too low.
00:08:412 (3) - make this slider curvy?
i failed to pick more.

[Hard]
shocked by the OD8.though i don't know if you should change that...
the hitsound is now okay but i think lower the volume slightly would be better.
01:44:698 (6,1) - put the new combo before the (1)
01:48:126 (3,1) - ^
02:18:269 (8,9,10) - sounds bad imo. try remove (8) and (10).
02:41:840 (1,2,3) - ehhhh...sounds bad(again)imo. try the way you used before.
02:44:412 (2) - just make the slider 1/2 and put a note at the end of the original slider would be better...
03:44:126 (5) - (nazi) why this slider is not upright?!

sorry for my laziness last time.

Fixed most of them.
I don't want to change the SV for Normal, hope you won't mind about it.
I tried to change the OD, but not sure what to do about it.
So, I lower down Normal's by 2, and Hard's by 1.
Here's your kds :)
akrolsmir
Thanks for looking at my map! Here's a mod in return:

General:
The slider-roll sound is quite loud at some points when there's vocals but no music; consider silencing it or using a different sound. Feel free to ask me if you aren't sure how to do that.

Easy:
00:01:840 (1) - Not quite symmetrical, but good try. For perfect symmetry you want the last node to be pretty close to the center of the end circle. Read more about making perfect slider here, and here's a slightly better version:
256,192,1840,2,0,B|320:104|432:104|496:192,1,280
00:29:269 (1,2) - The repeat in (1) doesn't fit the music, try shifting it to be like:

00:45:269 (2) - Place with shift held down for exactly aligned to the slider
00:52:126 (3,1) - Make (3) a new combo and not (1)
01:16:126 (6,7) - These two might be too close for a beginner. Maybe.
01:26:412 (3) - Looks kind of scrunched, try:

01:56:983 (3,4) - Go to grid level 4 and move these left 1 grid

Normal:
First break- a 15 second break after 10 seconds of notes is kinda long, perhaps fill about half of it or something with notes.
01:45:269 (5) - Again, looks scrunched
01:46:983 (1) - Align to (7)?
01:56:126 (4) - Too angular, make with 4 nodes or so for a smoother curve.

Hard:
00:01:841 (1) - Not symmetric (again, look through that guide for delicious sliders)
00:08:698 (4) - Would look better if you used more nodes
00:16:126 (2) - Align to (1)?
00:20:983 (2,3) - Make one a copy of the other
00:31:555 (1,2,3) - Make more symmetric, also ^, then align 3 to the middle of the pattern.
00:40:698 (5,6) - Too scrunched/angular
01:02:412 (3) - Make this a copy of (1)?
01:10:698 (2,3,4) - Spacing
01:21:841 (7) - Symmetry
01:43:555 (4) - Too angular
01:59:983 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try moving like so:
02:16:698 (5,6) - Too scrunched/angular
02:26:126 (5) - Make this flat?
02:57:840 (3,4,5) - Move down and align the start of (3) to (2)?
04:15:555 (1) - Not symmetric (2 is better)
04:23:555 (4) - Too close to (3)

Nice first map, could still be polished more though. Starred!
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

akrolsmir wrote:

Thanks for looking at my map! Here's a mod in return:

General:
The slider-roll sound is quite loud at some points when there's vocals but no music; consider silencing it or using a different sound. Feel free to ask me if you aren't sure how to do that.

Easy:
00:01:840 (1) - Not quite symmetrical, but good try. For perfect symmetry you want the last node to be pretty close to the center of the end circle. Read more about making perfect slider here, and here's a slightly better version:
256,192,1840,2,0,B|320:104|432:104|496:192,1,280
 Fixed
00:29:269 (1,2) - The repeat in (1) doesn't fit the music, try shifting it to be like:
 Fixed
00:45:269 (2) - Place with shift held down for exactly aligned to the slider Fixed
00:52:126 (3,1) - Make (3) a new combo and not (1) Fixed
01:16:126 (6,7) - These two might be too close for a beginner. Maybe. Fixed
01:26:412 (3) - Looks kind of scrunched, try:
 Fixed
01:56:983 (3,4) - Go to grid level 4 and move these left 1 grid Maybe fixed Lol

Normal:
First break- a 15 second break after 10 seconds of notes is kinda long, perhaps fill about half of it or something with notes.  Fixed, I filled like a half.
01:45:269 (5) - Again, looks scrunched Fixed
01:46:983 (1) - Align to (7)? Fixed
01:56:126 (4) - Too angular, make with 4 nodes or so for a smoother curve. Fixed

Hard:
00:01:841 (1) - Not symmetric (again, look through that guide for delicious sliders) Fixed
00:08:698 (4) - Would look better if you used more nodes Fixed
00:16:126 (2) - Align to (1)? Fixed
00:20:983 (2,3) - Make one a copy of the other Fixed
00:31:555 (1,2,3) - Make more symmetric, also ^, then align 3 to the middle of the pattern. Fixed
00:40:698 (5,6) - Too scrunched/angular Fixed
01:02:412 (3) - Make this a copy of (1)? Fixed
01:10:698 (2,3,4) - Spacing Fixed
01:21:841 (7) - Symmetry Fixed
01:43:555 (4) - Too angular Fixed
01:59:983 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try moving like so: Fixed
02:16:698 (5,6) - Too scrunched/angular Fixed
02:26:126 (5) - Make this flat? Fixed
02:57:840 (3,4,5) - Move down and align the start of (3) to (2)? Fixed
04:15:555 (1) - Not symmetric (2 is better) Fixed
04:23:555 (4) - Too close to (3) Fixed

Nice first map, could still be polished more though. Starred! Thanks


Thanks ;P
I might PM you about the sound later on, but I'm tired right now x_x.
Your kds ;3
Vass_Bass
Hi~ Sry for long wait

General
Bad quality of BG, looks ugly
I suggest you to remove sound of the slider in aaaall map, i think ir will be looks better
And may be you will use normal hitsound in some places to highlight the drums

Easy
No need to use 0.8 spacing, use 1.0
01:13:840 (5) - new combo
01:24:698 (1) - add whistle
01:25:269 (2) - remove whistle from begining
01:26:412 (3) - remive whistle from begining and the end of the slider
01:36:983 (6) - new combo
Not good that one diff is not same longer as others

Normal
AR -1
And there use 1.0-1.1 spacing
00:03:840 (3) - don't stack it
00:19:269 (7) - meh, use circles instead of it
00:20:698 (8) - remove it, sounds ugly
01:09:841 (4) - my ears >< why it's too loud? remove all finish there
01:11:841 (3) - same problem with slider
02:05:269 (1) - remove new combo
02:22:983 (6) - like there 01:09:841 (4)
02:24:983 (3) - slider, yes
03:02:983 (4) - don't stack it
03:09:269 - short break, remove it
03:14:983 - ^
03:16:698 (1) - bad slider
03:19:555 - short break, remove it
03:27:983 - ^

Hard

00:17:841 (9) - add finish
00:20:126 (9) - add usual soft-finish
00:49:269 (4) - add whistle
01:14:983 (5) - finish in begin
01:17:269 (1) - remove clap, add finish
01:34:983 (3) - finish
01:37:555 (2) - remove finish
02:12:126 (4) - finish
02:14:412 (1) - finish in begin
02:18:412 (8) - finish
02:28:126 (5) - remove clap, add finish
02:44:412 (2) - finish in the end
03:14:983 - remove all these breaks!
04:11:269 - kiai оО remove it there

soft-hitfinish2 sounds bad, In my opinion..

Good luck, star
Topic Starter
GiNa
I changed the BG, hope this one is better than the one before.
And, sorry, I guess I won't touch any of the hitsounds in Normal and Hard, because they aren't not made by me.
(Since they are not made by me, I'll skip the hitsounds for now.)

SPOILER

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~ Sry for long wait

Easy
No need to use 0.8 spacing, use 1.0 I keep this like this since it's for beginner.
01:13:840 (5) - new combo Fixed
01:24:698 (1) - add whistle Fixed
01:25:269 (2) - remove whistle from begining Fixed
01:26:412 (3) - remive whistle from begining and the end of the slider Fixed
01:36:983 (6) - new combo Fixed
Not good that one diff is not same longer as others Well, I made this one like this because I think it's too long for a beginner to play an Easy for 4 minutes...


Normal
AR -1 Fixed
And there use 1.0-1.1 spacing Fixed
00:03:840 (3) - don't stack it Fixed
00:19:269 (7) - meh, use circles instead of it There will be too many circles then.
00:20:698 (8) - remove it, sounds ugly Fixed.(This one is added by me >_<)
01:11:841 (3) - same problem with slider Same as 00:19:269 (7)
02:05:269 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
02:24:983 (3) - slider, yes Same as 00:19:269 (7)
03:02:983 (4) - don't stack it Fixed
03:09:269 - short break, remove it
03:14:983 - ^
03:16:698 (1) - bad slider Same as 00:19:269 (7), and I think this slider fits with the vocal.
03:19:555 - short break, remove it
03:27:983 - ^ I think all the breaks are fine there.

Hard
03:14:983 - remove all these breaks! Same as Normal, but thanks for your suggestions though.
04:11:269 - kiai оО remove it there Fixed

soft-hitfinish2 sounds bad, In my opinion.. I think it's okay because it's kind of soft.

Good luck, star

And, here's the hitsound part (well...he(the person who did the hitsounds) said I can do anything with my own map):

SPOILER

Vass_Bass wrote:

Normal
I did nothing with the rest of your suggestions(about hitsound).

Hard
00:17:841 (9) - add finish Fixed
00:20:126 (9) - add usual soft-finish Fixed
00:49:269 (4) - add whistle Fixed
01:14:983 (5) - finish in begin Fixed
01:17:269 (1) - remove clap, add finish Nope
01:34:983 (3) - finish Fixed
01:37:555 (2) - remove finish Nope
02:12:126 (4) - finish Fixed
02:14:412 (1) - finish in begin Fixed
02:18:412 (8) - finish Fixed
02:28:126 (5) - remove clap, add finish Nope
02:44:412 (2) - finish in the end Fixed

Thanks for the star :)
HakuNoKaemi
[General]
If you want I can try to find some Combobursts
Remove Audio in the video, or wait my next post ( i will post a probably HD video with no audio )

[Easy]
With spacing this little it's better to use an higher CS (CS+1)
I mapped the 2nd part, to make it a bit more complete
Download: Kagamine Len & Hatsune Miku - Nakimushi Kareshi (gina91189) [Easy].osu
I've not founded anything major

[Normal]
Well, you have a very easy Easy ... why don't make this more diffcult?
-use 1/2 Triplets (for example, you can use it in 00:12:126 (2,3) - and 00:13:269 (4,5) - , just put a hit circle in between 2 and 3 , 4 and 5 and similiar... )
-try to not use long slider, some hit/slider pattern where you used them ( like the slider in 00:36:126 (5) - that you can substitute with this( Remove New Combo in 00:38:983 (1) - , if you use that ), another example is in 01:21:841 (7) - where you can do this)

Ah, use more Slider Shapes, as you're using Linear almost all time

00:13:269 (5) - Add New Combo
00:17:840 (7) - ^
00:20:698 (4) - You could map the pause after this
01:16:126 (1,2) - I don't like that overlap
03:00:126 (2) - Here you can use an Antijump :3 if you add a note to 03:00:126 (x) - and 03:01:269 (x) - ( With spacing 0.2x ) , give 0,2x spacing to 03:02:126 (4) - too, just try and see if you like... (i just don't like longer slider )

[Hard]
Some part where a bit confusive in placement
00:03:983 (x) - Add a Note ( just to make 00:03:840 (3,4) - a 1/4 Stream of 3 notes )
00:11:841 (2) - Move this in another place (it's covered by 00:10:126 (6) - )

Next Post will contain Video + Comboburst
01:50:698 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make this stream more curved?
Nymph
Request from Kanon's mod queue:

General:
请删除Vedio的声音 似乎是RANK有要求 最起码也能减小Vedio的大小吧 T T
Bg格式要求800 600或者1024 768.
Osb文件没有Storyboard的话记得删除后Full submit

Easy:
说实话我个人认为这简单的有点过分了 到了无聊的程度 其实Normal就已经很Easy了 这个Easy没什么大的必要 不过留着也无不可

Normal:
Hitsound有点混乱 个人建议一下
00:10:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比方说这里 我比较推荐234白线都加WHISTLE
00:15:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里跟前面加也无不可 如果需要点变化 那么先加34WHISTLE 5结尾 6 7结尾 8 也加WHISTLE. 可以稍微试一下看看怎么样.
01:04:983 (2) - 这个我建议开头WHISTLE 后面FINISH 似乎比2个FINISH要好听一些
01:31:840 (5) - 这个结尾加了FINISH就感觉很别扭 要不把SLIDER转折少一折放FINISH在结尾 要不干脆把FINISH放在下一个SLIDER的开头
03:06:698 (1) - 这个转盘我建议长白线结束 感觉更舒服一点
03:12:126 (1) - 这段音量建议再低再低点
03:14:698 (3) - 03:18:698 (2) - 去掉这两个地方后面的BREAK TIME吧 很碍眼
04:00:126 (3) - 这个建议还是拿出来吧
嗯主要是这些建议 当然我说的肯定不是正确的 不过可以参考一下 关于音量的设置 主要用了80和100的音量 我个人建议前面需要降低的音量可以再低点 普通的地方用60-70 前面的KIAI用80 后面有个清唱用40左右 然后最后的高潮用100 这样可以更加拥有层次感
排列是按照DISTANCE SPACING摆的 我没什么意见 这里就不吐槽了 可以试着学点漂亮的排列方法让图更有趣

Hard:
00:04:126 (4) - Spacing错误
00:08:412 (3) - 这里也是 请检查一下整张图的Spacing 这里就不再挑了
00:19:269 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里是想做一个音量的递进 很好的主意 但是按现在的音量 并不能很好的体现 试着每个NOTE以10递进 效果还是不错的
00:20:983 (2) - 这个建议跟前面一样 最后一折去掉吧 感觉去掉更好听 而且这里怎么没有HITSOUND了 00:20:983 (2) - 这个去掉最后一折之后结尾加个WHISTLE 00:24:126 (5) - 这个开头加个WHISTLE
01:27:840 (5) - 这个也是很别扭 白线结束掉 然后结尾加FINISH就好了
01:33:269 (1) - 这里加个普通的FINISH吧? 后面也有几个地方可以像这个地方一样加
02:40:983 (8) - 很别扭啊 FINISH加在下一个的开头 然后用WHISTLE替换原来的FINISH?
02:41:840 (1,2,3) - 节奏听的有点不舒服 前两个少一折 最后的多2折试试?
02:45:555 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 跟02:40:983 (8)一样 类似的不举例啦
02:54:983 (1) - 这里开始放低音量
03:14:698 (3) - 03:18:698 (2) - 同Normal的Breaktime问题
嗯基本就是这些建议 话说那个自定义的HITSOUND感觉你大部分是把它当成FINISH在用?我不觉得效果很好..本身的FINISH倒是很适合的..
SPACING问题可以更重视一下 该对齐的好好对齐 距离不正确的都改正确 SLIDER做的稍微好看一点~这些都能给图的印象加分数

嘛 先这么多了 加油吧~ 星星~
Topic Starter
GiNa
HakuNoKaemi's Mod

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
If you want I can try to find some Combobursts Sure ;P (Even though I turned off it long time ago.)
Remove Audio in the video, or wait my next post ( i will post a probably HD video with no audio ) I tried my best to remove it, but it doesn't work,so I'll wait for your next post ;3.

[Easy]
With spacing this little it's better to use an higher CS (CS+1) I guess +1 will make the circle too small, so I'll keep it.
I mapped the 2nd part, to make it a bit more complete Thanks a lot ;P.
I've not founded anything major

[Normal]
Well, you have a very easy Easy ... why don't make this more diffcult? I tired to, but the result ... seems bad.
-use 1/2 Triplets (for example, you can use it in 00:12:126 (2,3) - and 00:13:269 (4,5) - , just put a hit circle in between 2 and 3 , 4 and 5 and similiar... ) Fixed
-try to not use long slider, some hit/slider pattern where you used them ( like the slider in 00:36:126 (5) - that you can substitute with this( Remove New Combo in 00:38:983 (1) - , if you use that ), another example is in 01:21:841 (7) - where you can do this) Fixed

Ah, use more Slider Shapes, as you're using Linear almost all time I can't make a prefect slider, that's why. orz

00:13:269 (5) - Add New Combo Fixed
00:17:840 (7) - ^ Fixed
00:20:698 (4) - You could map the pause after this I don't get this.
01:16:126 (1,2) - I don't like that overlap Fixed
03:00:126 (2) - Here you can use an Antijump :3 if you add a note to 03:00:126 (x) - and 03:01:269 (x) - ( With spacing 0.2x ) , give 0,2x spacing to 03:02:126 (4) - too, just try and see if you like... (i just don't like longer slider ) I don't get this neither, you should give me an example >_<.

[Hard]
Some part where a bit confusive in placement I think I'll just keep them.
00:03:983 (x) - Add a Note ( just to make 00:03:840 (3,4) - a 1/4 Stream of 3 notes ) Fixed
00:11:841 (2) - Move this in another place (it's covered by 00:10:126 (6) - ) Fixed

Next Post will contain Video + Comboburst Thanksssss ;D
01:50:698 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make this stream more curved? Fixed, I was thinking of this too.

Nymph_'s Mod

Nymph_ wrote:

Request from Kanon's mod queue:

General:
请删除Vedio的声音 似乎是RANK有要求 最起码也能减小Vedio的大小吧 T T 我試著把聲音去掉,但是好像沒辦法fit在osu裡。

Bg格式要求800 600或者1024 768. 我試著弄到最好了 :o
Osb文件没有Storyboard的话记得删除后Full submit 刪了,之前是用來把BG那些改掉。

Easy:
说实话我个人认为这简单的有点过分了 到了无聊的程度 其实Normal就已经很Easy了 这个Easy没什么大的必要 不过留着也无不可 對不起,我開始後悔做EZ了OAQ。

Normal:
Hitsound有点混乱 个人建议一下 Normal跟Hard的Hitsound不是我做的,不過對方說我可以改。
00:10:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比方说这里 我比较推荐234白线都加WHISTLE 開始confused了,這裡我有照前一篇的Mod改,只是當時還未上傳(我一起床就開始改了,我也是後來才發現你的Mod,嘛,其實也是因為星星突然多一顆我才注意到的)。
00:15:555 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里跟前面加也无不可 如果需要点变化 那么先加34WHISTLE 5结尾 6 7结尾 8 也加WHISTLE. 可以稍微试一下看看怎么样. ^,抱歉,我可能會在PM你about這個部分。
01:04:983 (2) - 这个我建议开头WHISTLE 后面FINISH 似乎比2个FINISH要好听一些 Fixed
01:31:840 (5) - 这个结尾加了FINISH就感觉很别扭 要不把SLIDER转折少一折放FINISH在结尾 要不干脆把FINISH放在下一个SLIDER的开头 Fixed,我把他加在下一個的開頭了。
03:06:698 (1) - 这个转盘我建议长白线结束 感觉更舒服一点 Fixed
03:12:126 (1) - 这段音量建议再低再低点 Fixed,減了20。
03:14:698 (3) - 03:18:698 (2) - 去掉这两个地方后面的BREAK TIME吧 很碍眼 Fixed
04:00:126 (3) - 这个建议还是拿出来吧 拿出來,不太懂,我先keep it好了。
嗯主要是这些建议 当然我说的肯定不是正确的 不过可以参考一下 关于音量的设置 主要用了80和100的音量 我个人建议前面需要降低的音量可以再低点 普通的地方用60-70 前面的KIAI用80 后面有个清唱用40左右 然后最后的高潮用100 这样可以更加拥有层次感
排列是按照DISTANCE SPACING摆的 我没什么意见 这里就不吐槽了 可以试着学点漂亮的排列方法让图更有趣 對不起,我的排法都比較單調orz。

Hard:
00:04:126 (4) - Spacing错误
00:08:412 (3) - 这里也是 请检查一下整张图的Spacing 这里就不再挑了
00:19:269 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里是想做一个音量的递进 很好的主意 但是按现在的音量 并不能很好的体现 试着每个NOTE以10递进 效果还是不错的 3原本是75,每個增加10的話,6後面全都是100了,不過聽起來也不錯呢;D。
00:20:983 (2) - 这个建议跟前面一样 最后一折去掉吧 感觉去掉更好听 而且这里怎么没有HITSOUND了 00:20:983 (2) - 这个去掉最后一折之后结尾加个WHISTLE  Fixed
00:24:126 (5) - 这个开头加个WHISTLE Fixed
01:27:840 (5) - 这个也是很别扭 白线结束掉 然后结尾加FINISH就好了 Fixed
01:33:269 (1) - 这里加个普通的FINISH吧? 后面也有几个地方可以像这个地方一样加 Fixed
02:40:983 (8) - 很别扭啊 FINISH加在下一个的开头 然后用WHISTLE替换原来的FINISH? Fixed
02:41:840 (1,2,3) - 节奏听的有点不舒服 前两个少一折 最后的多2折试试? 我keep這個一樣好了,剛剛試了一下你說的,我覺得節奏聽起來也不太對。
02:45:555 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 跟02:40:983 (8)一样 类似的不举例啦 Fixed
02:54:983 (1) - 这里开始放低音量 Fixed,改成80%了
03:14:698 (3) - 03:18:698 (2) - 同Normal的Breaktime问题 Fixed
嗯基本就是这些建议 话说那个自定义的HITSOUND感觉你大部分是把它当成FINISH在用?我不觉得效果很好..本身的FINISH倒是很适合的.. 我是覺得原本有點吵所以才用的...x_x。
SPACING问题可以更重视一下 该对齐的好好对齐 距离不正确的都改正确 SLIDER做的稍微好看一点~这些都能给图的印象加分数 後來有人教我我才知道能按Shift來對齊,不過我只有改他指出的orz。

嘛 先这么多了 加油吧~ 星星~

Thanks for the star :)
HakuNoKaemi
[General]

[Normal]
Well, you have a very easy Easy ... why don't make this more diffcult? I tired to, but the result ... seems bad.
-use 1/2 Triplets (for example, you can use it in 00:12:126 (2,3) - and 00:13:269 (4,5) - , just put a hit circle in between 2 and 3 , 4 and 5 and similiar... ) Fixed
-try to not use long slider, some hit/slider pattern where you used them ( like the slider in 00:36:126 (5) - that you can substitute with this( Remove New Combo in 00:38:983 (1) - , if you use that ), another example is in 01:21:841 (7) - where you can do this) Fixed (those 2 were suggestions to make it difficultier, that can be applied in other places)

00:20:698 (4) - You could map the pause after this I don't get this. simply map that break (remove the break and map it like you done in the others diff)
03:00:126 (2) - Here you can use an Antijump :3 if you add a note to 03:00:126 (x) - and 03:01:269 (x) - ( With spacing 0.2x ) , give 0,2x spacing to 03:02:126 (4) - too, just try and see if you like... (i just don't like longer slider ) I don't get this neither, you should give me an example >_<. Remove this Slider and do this using the same spacing, this is called an Antijumps and should work well here

Well, i encoded the video Download it's a 0.4-0.8 VBR, it should give a decent quality for it's dimension

for the comboburst, i will do them tomorrow (not founded the set that inspired me )
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]

[Normal]
Well, you have a very easy Easy ... why don't make this more diffcult? I tired to, but the result ... seems bad.
-use 1/2 Triplets (for example, you can use it in 00:12:126 (2,3) - and 00:13:269 (4,5) - , just put a hit circle in between 2 and 3 , 4 and 5 and similiar... ) Fixed
-try to not use long slider, some hit/slider pattern where you used them ( like the slider in 00:36:126 (5) - that you can substitute with this( Remove New Combo in 00:38:983 (1) - , if you use that ), another example is in 01:21:841 (7) - where you can do this) Fixed (those 2 were suggestions to make it difficultier, that can be applied in other places)I'll look over the whole map soon. I just looked at it, and I fixed most of them(those I had seen).

00:20:698 (4) - You could map the pause after this I don't get this. simply map that break (remove the break and map it like you done in the others diff) Got you, I'll probably map this part later, just in case I need more ideas Lol. Fixed it.
03:00:126 (2) - Here you can use an Antijump :3 if you add a note to 03:00:126 (x) - and 03:01:269 (x) - ( With spacing 0.2x ) , give 0,2x spacing to 03:02:126 (4) - too, just try and see if you like... (i just don't like longer slider ) I don't get this neither, you should give me an example >_<. Remove this Slider and do this using the same spacing, this is called an Antijumps and should work well here I did this before, but someone told me to changed it to long slider x_x.

Well, i encoded the video Download it's a 0.4-0.8 VBR, it should give a decent quality for it's dimension Changed

for the comboburst, i will do them tomorrow (not founded the set that inspired me ) Sure, fight! ;3
Btw, thanks for the star :)
Astom
Hi hi~

[General]
-Reduce volume of hitsounds to 80-70%

[Easy]
-There are sliders with whistle on movement, it's on purpose? (don't sound too well to me)(same to others diff).
-02:48:983 (4) - repetition of this slider is a little hidden with 02:48:698 (3), maybe delete (3) and move (4) to 02:48:698 and add a repeat.

[Normal]
-Finish kiai here 04:10:983
-02:23:840 (2,3) - this looks bad...

[Hard]
-Finish kiai here 04:10:983
-01:08:555 add a circle with whistle maybe.
-01:14:840 add a circle.
-01:32:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - use normal hitsounds at 50 or 60% of volume and new combo in 01:32:555 (3).
-01:50:698 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - --^ same thing.
-03:56:412 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - --^
-01:41:412 (2) - delete this circle and add a circle here 01:41:983, use same change of hitsounds than before, remove new combo of this 01:42:126 (1) and remove finish of this 01:41:840 (5).
-01:42:412 (2) - new combo and finish at beginning
-01:45:841 (3) - new combo
-01:48:126 (1) - remove new combo
-01:50:412 (6) - new combo
-02:24:983 (3) - finish it in 02:25:555 and add a circle in 02:25:698
-02:28:126 (5,6,7,8) - delete them and do this; add a circle from 02:28:126 to 02:28:555 with repetition and add another slider from 02:29:269 to 02:29:698 with repetition, like this

sounds better to me.(add hitsounds too lol)
-02:30:269 add a circle
-02:46:269 add a circle and 02:45:698 (6,7,8,9,10) change them to normal hitsounds.
-02:54:126 (1) - remove new combo
-Replace this 03:06:983 (1) for a slider from 03:06:983 to 03:08:126? (add a circle in 03:08:698)

Sry I focused on your hard <.<
I think this need more work, principally on hitsounds.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

Astom wrote:

Hi hi~

[General]
-Reduce volume of hitsounds to 80-70% Fixed, but I keep some of them the same.

[Easy]
-There are sliders with whistle on movement, it's on purpose? (don't sound too well to me)(same to others diff). It's on purpose, so ...
-02:48:983 (4) - repetition of this slider is a little hidden with 02:48:698 (3), maybe delete (3) and move (4) to 02:48:698 and add a repeat. Fixed

[Normal]
-Finish kiai here 04:10:983 Fixed
-02:23:840 (2,3) - this looks bad... Fixed

[Hard]
-Finish kiai here 04:10:983 Fixed
-01:08:555 add a circle with whistle maybe. Fixed
-01:14:840 add a circle. Nope, but thanks for your suggestion.
-01:32:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - use normal hitsounds at 50 or 60% of volume and new combo in 01:32:555 (3). Fixed, I use 50%
-01:50:698 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - --^ same thing. ^
-03:56:412 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - --^ ^
-01:41:412 (2) - delete this circle and add a circle here 01:41:983, use same change of hitsounds than before, remove new combo of this 01:42:126 (1) and remove finish of this 01:41:840 (5). Fixed
-01:42:412 (2) - new combo and finish at beginning Fixed
-01:45:841 (3) - new combo Fixed
-01:48:126 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
-01:50:412 (6) - new combo Fixed
-02:24:983 (3) - finish it in 02:25:555 and add a circle in 02:25:698 Fixed
-02:28:126 (5,6,7,8) - delete them and do this; add a circle from 02:28:126 to 02:28:555 with repetition and add another slider from 02:29:269 to 02:29:698 with repetition, like this

sounds better to me.(add hitsounds too lol) Fixed
-02:30:269 add a circle Fixed
-02:46:269 add a circle and 02:45:698 (6,7,8,9,10) change them to normal hitsounds. Fixed
-02:54:126 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
-Replace this 03:06:983 (1) for a slider from 03:06:983 to 03:08:126? (add a circle in 03:08:698) Fixed

Sry I focused on your insane <.< That is actually just a Hard Lol.
I think this need more work, principally on hitsounds.
Good luck~
Thanks for the star :)
Astom
haha sry sry, hard :3
Topic Starter
GiNa

Astom wrote:

haha sry sry, hard :3
That's fine :)
I actually thought that my map is too easy XD
winber1
Sorry it took a while :(

General

--just wondering.. why is " Yomeiro HakuNoKaemi" in the tags? did they make some of the difficulties or something?

Hard

00:22:412 (3) - Add whistle to the third repeat and delete the fourth one?
01:06:269 (2) - you should unstack to make it easier to read at first. This is the first you have this type of rhythm so it might be better, but the other times the player should understand by then.
01:13:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't really like this that much D:.
01:18:983 (1) - remove combo
01:19:555 (3) - new combo
01:27:840 (5) - i would replace the finish with a clap
01:28:412 (x) - add note. feels better imo
01:32:412 (5) - new combo
01:32:555 (1) - remove combo
03:25:269 (1) - could you possible make the slider repeats a little softer? i think it may add to the music :3.
03:39:555 (x) - add note. the vocals don't play this note, but it flows better imo.
03:50:983 (7) - extend by 1 repeat
\

Normal

01:11:841 (3) - shorten repeat slider to01:12:698 and add a note at 01:13:269 (x) - fits a lot better imo.
01:21:269 (6,7) - fix spacing (when you slow down the slider velocity it makes the spacing a lot smaller too.)
02:28:555 (6,7) - i would not stack these.
03:01:269 (3,4) - i usually don't like using antispacing even if they are this far apart, but that's just my preference.
03:12:983 (1) - remove combo

Easy

--The rhythm at the end seems like it could be a bit confusing, and the spacing makes it even harder for a beginner to read the notes on red ticks. The song starts out a lot easier than the rest of the song too ._.

01:28:126 (x) - add note
01:28:698 (1,2,3,4) - seems a little confusing. I would suggest replacing 1,2,3 with a slider or something. you may think about doing the same for some of the other ones as well.

Nice map! :3

Star~~
Topic Starter
GiNa
SPOILER

winber1 wrote:

Sorry it took a while :(

General

--just wondering.. why is " Yomeiro HakuNoKaemi" in the tags? did they make some of the difficulties or something? Yomeiro did the hitsounds for me, and HakuNoKaemi did the second part of Easy (Easy's game time used to be 1:30 only), if they are not needed, I can take off too ;3.

Hard

00:22:412 (3) - Add whistle to the third repeat and delete the fourth one? Fixed
01:06:269 (2) - you should unstack to make it easier to read at first. This is the first you have this type of rhythm so it might be better, but the other times the player should understand by then. Fixed
01:13:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't really like this that much D:. Sorry ... but I keep this the same.
01:18:983 (1) - remove combo Fixed
01:19:555 (3) - new combo Fixed
01:27:840 (5) - i would replace the finish with a clap Fixed
01:28:412 (x) - add note. feels better imo Fixed
01:32:412 (5) - new combo Fixed
01:32:555 (1) - remove combo Fixed
03:25:269 (1) - could you possible make the slider repeats a little softer? i think it may add to the music :3. Fixed ... I guess, orz
03:39:555 (x) - add note. the vocals don't play this note, but it flows better imo.  Fixed
03:50:983 (7) - extend by 1 repeat Fixed


Normal

01:11:841 (3) - shorten repeat slider to01:12:698 and add a note at 01:13:269 (x) - fits a lot better imo. Fixed
01:21:269 (6,7) - fix spacing (when you slow down the slider velocity it makes the spacing a lot smaller too.) Fixed, I guess this one is my mistake, I changed the SV to 1 again.
02:28:555 (6,7) - i would not stack these. Fixed
03:01:269 (3,4) - i usually don't like using antispacing even if they are this far apart, but that's just my preference. I keep this the same too.
03:12:983 (1) - remove combo Fixed

Easy

--The rhythm at the end seems like it could be a bit confusing, and the spacing makes it even harder for a beginner to read the notes on red ticks. The song starts out a lot easier than the rest of the song too ._. Changed spacing to 1.0x

01:28:126 (x) - add note Fixed
01:28:698 (1,2,3,4) - seems a little confusing. I would suggest replacing 1,2,3 with a slider or something. you may think about doing the same for some of the other ones as well. I'll keep all of them the same.

Nice map! :3

Star~~

Thanks for the star, and here's your kds ;D.
LesTrucsRoses
No problems found on both diffs. Get ranked, son.
Topic Starter
GiNa

LesTrucsRose wrote:

No problems found on both diffs. Get ranked, son.
Thanks :)
OzzyOzrock
[General]
I would recommend that you convert the video, which is an .flv, to .avi, as that's what they should be.

Some people can't even run .flv.
[Easy]
I don't like the hitsounds in the 2nd kiai. The 'CASH' sounds seem to pop in randomly.

But it's good.
[Normal]
03:01:269 (3) - Move this higher, tricks like this don't belong in a normal diff anyways, especially with the AR.

But it's moe.
[Hard]
00:10:126 (6) - Not that visible. People probably won't be able to tell it's a crumple-go slider...

But it's T.T star~
Topic Starter
GiNa

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
I would recommend that you convert the video, which is an .flv, to .avi, as that's what they should be.

Some people can't even run .flv. Converting right now ;3.
[Easy]
I don't like the hitsounds in the 2nd kiai. The 'CASH' sounds seem to pop in randomly. I changed some of them. :o

But it's good.
[Normal]
03:01:269 (3) - Move this higher, tricks like this don't belong in a normal diff anyways, especially with the AR. Fixed

But it's moe.
[Hard]
00:10:126 (6) - Not that visible. People probably won't be able to tell it's a crumple-go slider... Fixed ... I guess, I can't make those prefect sliders ;( .

But it's T.T star~
Thanks for your mod & star :) .
Diasios
[Easy]

  • • 00:09:698 (green timing section) - Move this timing section at 00:09:840
    • 02:37:840 (green timing section) - Move this timing section at 02:37:269
[Normal]

  • • 01:09:841 (4 / end-slider) - Remove "finish"
Topic Starter
GiNa

xxheroxx wrote:

[Easy]

  • • 00:09:698 (green timing section) - Move this timing section at 00:09:840 Fixed
    • 02:37:840 (green timing section) - Move this timing section at 02:37:269 Nope, but thanks.
[Normal]

  • • 01:09:841 (4 / end-slider) - Remove "finish" Instead doing that, I removed finish and added whistle at the beginning of the slider.
Thanks for your mod :)
lovhin456
Hi! Here's the requested mod

General;
- Use these colors instead ?
Combo1 : 247,154,115
Combo2 : 255,235,117
Combo3 : 128,186,244
Combo4 : 250,180,169

Easy;
- 00:45:269 >> Remove whistle and add custom finish 2 ?
- 01:01:269 (1,2) >> Remove whistle from (1), add whistle to (2)
- 01:37:840 (1,2) >> I don't think stacking is a good idea
- 02:37:269 >> Kiai should start here
- 02:46:412 >> Start the new combo here instead ?

Normal;
- 01:24:126 >> Remove whistle and add finish at the start of the slider, also kiai time should start exactly here
- 02:18:983 >> The new combo should start here
- 02:50:126 >> Remove new combo and start the new combo at 02:50:983, remove the new combo at 02:52:698 too
- 02:54:412 >> Add a note here and end kiai here too, just to be consistent with Easy, because you end Easy at this point
- 03:18:698 >> Remove the slider's body whistle
- 03:25:269 >> Could you decrease the sound of this slider gradually ? Like Miku's voice
- 03:48:126 >> Remove whistle at start and add finish, also start kiai time exactly here
- 04:23:555 >> Replace this finish with the custom 2 one

Hard;
- 00:16:555 >> Add a note here ?
- 01:24:126 >> Remove whistle, add finish
- 01:42:126 >> Use grid level 4 to stack perfectly under (1)
- 02:54:983 >> End kiai here
- 03:25:269 >> Make this slider gradually lower volume
- 03:50:126 >> Stack better under (3)'s end
- 04:10:983 >> Change to custom finish 2 ?
- 04:22:126 >> I think 0.50x is better, fits better imo
- 04:23:555 >> Change to custom finish 2

* Star ~
Topic Starter
GiNa
lovhin456's Mod

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Here's the requested mod  Thanks C;

General;
- Use these colors instead ?
Combo1 : 247,154,115
Combo2 : 255,235,117
Combo3 : 128,186,244
Combo4 : 250,180,169
 Changed

Easy;
- 00:45:269 >> Remove whistle and add custom finish 2 ? Fixed
- 01:01:269 (1,2) >> Remove whistle from (1), add whistle to (2) Fixed
- 01:37:840 (1,2) >> I don't think stacking is a good idea Fixed
- 02:37:269 >> Kiai should start here Fixed
- 02:46:412 >> Start the new combo here instead ? Fixed

Normal;
- 01:24:126 >> Remove whistle and add finish at the start of the slider, also kiai time should start exactly here Fixed
- 02:18:983 >> The new combo should start here Fixed
- 02:50:126 >> Remove new combo and start the new combo at 02:50:983, remove the new combo at 02:52:698 too Fixed
- 02:54:412 >> Add a note here and end kiai here too, just to be consistent with Easy, because you end Easy at this point Fixed
- 03:18:698 >> Remove the slider's body whistle Fixed
- 03:25:269 >> Could you decrease the sound of this slider gradually ? Like Miku's voice Fixed
- 03:48:126 >> Remove whistle at start and add finish, also start kiai time exactly here Fixed
- 04:23:555 >> Replace this finish with the custom 2 one  Fixed

Hard;
- 00:16:555 >> Add a note here ? Nope, but thanks ;3
- 01:24:126 >> Remove whistle, add finish Fixed
- 01:42:126 >> Use grid level 4 to stack perfectly under (1) Fixed
- 02:54:983 >> End kiai here Fixed
- 03:25:269 >> Make this slider gradually lower volume Fixed
- 03:50:126 >> Stack better under (3)'s end Fixed
- 04:10:983 >> Change to custom finish 2 ? Nope
- 04:22:126 >> I think 0.50x is better, fits better imo Fixed
- 04:23:555 >> Change to custom finish 2 Fixed

* Star ~

Thanks for the mod and star :)
MDuh
[General]
-Suggesting those inherited points that change hitsounds to be moved a little bit before the hitsound for the hitsound to be applied everytime..
e.g. on Easy: 00:09:840 S:C2, to be moved 00:09:698 just like that
-I wish there's a better audio quality of this song

[Easy]
01:26:412 (3) - Start w/ Finish
01:28:698 (1) - Replace w/ Finish
01:30:983 (4) - Start w/ Finish
01:35:555 (4) - Finish
01:37:840 (2) - Start w/ Finish
01:46:983 (1) - ^
01:49:269 (2) - ^
01:56:126 (2) - Finish
02:30:126 (4) - Kinda Weird, Not asking to change, its just somewhat the odd one out, ticks me off
02:44:698 (4) - Remove End Finish
02:46:412 (1) - Start w/ Finish; Remove End Finish
02:48:698 (3) - Extend 1 more Repeat?
02:49:840 (4) - Move to 02:50:126 (4) - ?

[Normal]
00:27:555 (5) - NC?
01:30:983 (2,3,4) - Unstack?
02:30:412 (2) - You sure you don't want it to make the length like 02:29:269 (1) - ?
04:22:412 (4) - Remove?
04:22:698 (5) - Move to 04:22:412 then extend it to 04:23:269?

[Hard]
19698,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0
19840,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0
19983,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0
Redundant Points?
03:48:126 (1) - Sudden Slider velocity Change, maybe change that to a none repeating slider so the player can adjust for the VC change

Starred~
Topic Starter
GiNa
MDuh's Mod

MDuh wrote:

[General]
-Suggesting those inherited points that change hitsounds to be moved a little bit before the hitsound for the hitsound to be applied everytime..
e.g. on Easy: 00:09:840 S:C2, to be moved 00:09:698 just like that Fixed
-I wish there's a better audio quality of this song I couldn't find the better one :( .

[Easy]
01:26:412 (3) - Start w/ Finish Fixed
01:28:698 (1) - Replace w/ Finish Fixed
01:30:983 (4) - Start w/ Finish Fixed
01:35:555 (4) - Finish Fixed
01:37:840 (2) - Start w/ Finish Fixed
01:46:983 (1) - ^ Fixed
01:49:269 (2) - ^ Fixed
01:56:126 (2) - Finish Fixed
02:30:126 (4) - Kinda Weird, Not asking to change, its just somewhat the odd one out, ticks me off Changed
02:44:698 (4) - Remove End Finish Fixed
02:46:412 (1) - Start w/ Finish; Remove End Finish Fixed
02:48:698 (3) - Extend 1 more Repeat? Nope
02:49:840 (4) - Move to 02:50:126 (4) - ? ^

[Normal]
00:27:555 (5) - NC? Fixed
01:30:983 (2,3,4) - Unstack? I'll keep it like this
02:30:412 (2) - You sure you don't want it to make the length like 02:29:269 (1) - ? Changed
04:22:412 (4) - Remove? Fixed
04:22:698 (5) - Move to 04:22:412 then extend it to 04:23:269? Fixed

[Hard]
19698,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0 Deleted
19840,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0 ^
19983,-100,4,2,2,100,0,0 ^
Redundant Points? Yes, and I forgot to delete them lol.
03:48:126 (1) - Sudden Slider velocity Change, maybe change that to a none repeating slider so the player can adjust for the VC change I'll keep it like this for now.

Starred~
Thanks for the mod and star :)
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